Comments received on poems by Neville
Sans Echo’s
Goldfinch60 said:
That is so right \'back in the day\' but in my lfe all was wonderful.
Andy
May 19th, 2023 03:02
Goldfinch60 said:
That is so right \'back in the day\' but in my lfe all was wonderful.
Andy
May 19th, 2023 03:02
A Handful of Monsters
L. B. Mek said:
(so true wise Poet, thank you!)
soon, it will be a hard task
to find anyone, not exhibiting
narcissistic tendencies
in society, a legacy of modernity
consumed, by insular
mirage warped, selfhood fallacies
... far too, soon
for me to ink these words, without
sighing, a stunted mourning
for all that hope
humanity, once represented and
promised
oh how we love, to curate our own
cyclic, tragedies
May 19th, 2023 02:57
L. B. Mek said:
(so true wise Poet, thank you!)
soon, it will be a hard task
to find anyone, not exhibiting
narcissistic tendencies
in society, a legacy of modernity
consumed, by insular
mirage warped, selfhood fallacies
... far too, soon
for me to ink these words, without
sighing, a stunted mourning
for all that hope
humanity, once represented and
promised
oh how we love, to curate our own
cyclic, tragedies
May 19th, 2023 02:57
Celsius Rising
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(careful, as
in that volcano eruption
of instant
escapist, sensual gratification
is a promise
of lava, proximity decimation
if unprepared
we\'ll toil, in scolding consequence
best, maybe
to thread carefully, step carefully
never blind lunges
unless we are ready, to dissolve
that volcanic ash
as an ingredient, in our evolution\'s
fertilising experiences...)
May 19th, 2023 02:50
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(careful, as
in that volcano eruption
of instant
escapist, sensual gratification
is a promise
of lava, proximity decimation
if unprepared
we\'ll toil, in scolding consequence
best, maybe
to thread carefully, step carefully
never blind lunges
unless we are ready, to dissolve
that volcanic ash
as an ingredient, in our evolution\'s
fertilising experiences...)
May 19th, 2023 02:50
Sans Echo’s
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
\"Sans Echo\'s\" is a captivating poem that offers a critical commentary on the societal values and a bygone cultural climate of era.
May 18th, 2023 15:20
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
\"Sans Echo\'s\" is a captivating poem that offers a critical commentary on the societal values and a bygone cultural climate of era.
May 18th, 2023 15:20
Sans Echo’s
arqios said:
I could imagine lengthened and \'varnished\' lashes gluing themselves to the RayBan lenses... that would be ticklish.
May 18th, 2023 10:39
arqios said:
I could imagine lengthened and \'varnished\' lashes gluing themselves to the RayBan lenses... that would be ticklish.
May 18th, 2023 10:39
Sans Echo’s
MendedFences27 said:
One time, I dropped some \"acid\"....
and it burnt a hole in my bellbottoms.
I was busy at the time trying to \"foster grants\" to my college fund. Planned on attending UC - Santa Barbara, the best \"party school\" in America, but Nam got in the way, and I ended up in Montreal. Rented an old mini-van and drove with friends across to Aberta. That\'s when I heard \"Birds singing in the dark- Rainy dawn.\" Oh yeah, I stole that from Jack Kerouac. I don\'t know why, but who needs a reason. Live free or die!! - Phil A.
May 18th, 2023 08:29
MendedFences27 said:
One time, I dropped some \"acid\"....
and it burnt a hole in my bellbottoms.
I was busy at the time trying to \"foster grants\" to my college fund. Planned on attending UC - Santa Barbara, the best \"party school\" in America, but Nam got in the way, and I ended up in Montreal. Rented an old mini-van and drove with friends across to Aberta. That\'s when I heard \"Birds singing in the dark- Rainy dawn.\" Oh yeah, I stole that from Jack Kerouac. I don\'t know why, but who needs a reason. Live free or die!! - Phil A.
May 18th, 2023 08:29
Sans Echo’s
Fay Slimm. said:
Living it up on someone else\'s offer of getting high on acid was the rage but events can leave echoes - - for though heavy mascara has paled we still get throw backs looked at by those who have their personal reasons for hiding behind shades - -- Whoo ! -- am glad that\'s off my chest before today\'s chores .........x
May 18th, 2023 02:53
Fay Slimm. said:
Living it up on someone else\'s offer of getting high on acid was the rage but events can leave echoes - - for though heavy mascara has paled we still get throw backs looked at by those who have their personal reasons for hiding behind shades - -- Whoo ! -- am glad that\'s off my chest before today\'s chores .........x
May 18th, 2023 02:53
Sans Echo’s
orchidee said:
All I know from this, is that KP flutters her false eyelashes at me, but it don\'t get her very far.... lol.
I will never unravel the meaning of some poems. Doh!
May 18th, 2023 01:48
orchidee said:
All I know from this, is that KP flutters her false eyelashes at me, but it don\'t get her very far.... lol.
I will never unravel the meaning of some poems. Doh!
May 18th, 2023 01:48
A Handful of Monsters
MendedFences27 said:
True!! One solution to the problem is a world government, but I don\'t think we\'re ready for that yet. Maybe some sort of declaration of world democracy (with enforcement) may work until we are ready.
Your poem has started me to dreaming of the possibilities that would then follow. Global democracy (Enforced) would raise a lot of mistrust. We must also be well aware of the effects of AI. Anyways, thanks for bringing up this subject. My mind is now rambling. - Phil A.
May 17th, 2023 11:51
MendedFences27 said:
True!! One solution to the problem is a world government, but I don\'t think we\'re ready for that yet. Maybe some sort of declaration of world democracy (with enforcement) may work until we are ready.
Your poem has started me to dreaming of the possibilities that would then follow. Global democracy (Enforced) would raise a lot of mistrust. We must also be well aware of the effects of AI. Anyways, thanks for bringing up this subject. My mind is now rambling. - Phil A.
May 17th, 2023 11:51
A Handful of Monsters
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
… “sadly, it only
takes just one, to fuck all of us ..”
Only if we leave an open door for that “just one”!
Guilty…but only for a short period of time!
Laura 🌻
May 17th, 2023 08:51
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
… “sadly, it only
takes just one, to fuck all of us ..”
Only if we leave an open door for that “just one”!
Guilty…but only for a short period of time!
Laura 🌻
May 17th, 2023 08:51
A Handful of Monsters
Bobby O said:
In Chicago , certain guys would plan to take that one guy on a tour of a dark alley try to “influence” him to behave better.
May 17th, 2023 02:34
Bobby O said:
In Chicago , certain guys would plan to take that one guy on a tour of a dark alley try to “influence” him to behave better.
May 17th, 2023 02:34
A Handful of Monsters
orchidee said:
Yes, a bad apple in the bunch.
Same with nature, conservation, etc. Along come man (men/women) and f..... it all up (the F word, says Fido!).
KP gave me a bad apple literally. lol.
May 17th, 2023 01:51
orchidee said:
Yes, a bad apple in the bunch.
Same with nature, conservation, etc. Along come man (men/women) and f..... it all up (the F word, says Fido!).
KP gave me a bad apple literally. lol.
May 17th, 2023 01:51
Celsius Rising
Goldfinch60 said:
May that light shine and the shadow move onto a new life.
Andy
May 17th, 2023 01:27
Goldfinch60 said:
May that light shine and the shadow move onto a new life.
Andy
May 17th, 2023 01:27
A Handful of Monsters
Goldfinch60 said:
Strong words Neville and so true, it only takes one to mess everything up.
Andy
May 17th, 2023 01:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Strong words Neville and so true, it only takes one to mess everything up.
Andy
May 17th, 2023 01:17
Celsius Rising
Bella Shepard said:
The cloak of invisibility can sometimes be a blessing, perhaps a bullit dodged? One never knows. Intriguing write dear friend, I guess I took a little interpretive license here.
May 16th, 2023 14:38
Bella Shepard said:
The cloak of invisibility can sometimes be a blessing, perhaps a bullit dodged? One never knows. Intriguing write dear friend, I guess I took a little interpretive license here.
May 16th, 2023 14:38
Celsius Rising
MendedFences27 said:
Somehow, I felt sorry for the yellow man of her artwork, short-lived from the heat of the experience. Yet. we know that it happens.
Your poem draws a picture of a romance that burned with an overpowering heat. The now, \"Invisible Man\" must gather the strength to move on, and avoid \"crayon\" artists. - Phil A.
May 16th, 2023 11:03
MendedFences27 said:
Somehow, I felt sorry for the yellow man of her artwork, short-lived from the heat of the experience. Yet. we know that it happens.
Your poem draws a picture of a romance that burned with an overpowering heat. The now, \"Invisible Man\" must gather the strength to move on, and avoid \"crayon\" artists. - Phil A.
May 16th, 2023 11:03
Celsius Rising
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
\"Celsius Rising\" is a brief yet intriguing poem that captures the initial fascination and subsequent disillusionment experienced by the speaker towards an individual.
May 16th, 2023 10:51
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
\"Celsius Rising\" is a brief yet intriguing poem that captures the initial fascination and subsequent disillusionment experienced by the speaker towards an individual.
May 16th, 2023 10:51
Celsius Rising
Fay Slimm. said:
Gurt stuff agen Nev. -Am feeling the boiling point of this short-lived affair - - Made my temperature rise to think of that golden haired Adonis being crayon portrayed in the sun before he made himself scarcer than scarce............x
May 16th, 2023 07:43
Fay Slimm. said:
Gurt stuff agen Nev. -Am feeling the boiling point of this short-lived affair - - Made my temperature rise to think of that golden haired Adonis being crayon portrayed in the sun before he made himself scarcer than scarce............x
May 16th, 2023 07:43
Celsius Rising
orchidee said:
The temperature never rises for KP and I. It\'s always sub-zero! heehee.
May 16th, 2023 05:17
orchidee said:
The temperature never rises for KP and I. It\'s always sub-zero! heehee.
May 16th, 2023 05:17
Celsius Rising
Bobby O said:
I’m still mulling the “invisible “ but as I always I love the sashay of the phrase
May 16th, 2023 04:02
Bobby O said:
I’m still mulling the “invisible “ but as I always I love the sashay of the phrase
May 16th, 2023 04:02
Mantis Praying
Goldfinch60 said:
Sometimes things do not appear as we would hope they would.
Andy
May 16th, 2023 03:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Sometimes things do not appear as we would hope they would.
Andy
May 16th, 2023 03:11
Mantis Praying
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Neville.
To never experience afterglow is not pretty indeed.
May 15th, 2023 14:18
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Neville.
To never experience afterglow is not pretty indeed.
May 15th, 2023 14:18
Mantis Praying
orchidee said:
Did KP eat me, as female preying mantis does after.........?. swoon! I read they may behead their male mate even before........
Nope is the answer, cos we never have any \'excitement\' Fido says it\'s not good for KP and I. lol.
May 15th, 2023 10:18
orchidee said:
Did KP eat me, as female preying mantis does after.........?. swoon! I read they may behead their male mate even before........
Nope is the answer, cos we never have any \'excitement\' Fido says it\'s not good for KP and I. lol.
May 15th, 2023 10:18
Mantis Praying
arqios said:
Oh wow cold hearted with a bit of jam sparkling in the corner vertex of poker smiling puckering lips. Perhaps even flicking a lone rose petal on that rapidly cooling corpse while she walks off unhurriedly, the clacking of her heels ringing with the cadence of the Reaper\'s march.
May 15th, 2023 05:54
arqios said:
Oh wow cold hearted with a bit of jam sparkling in the corner vertex of poker smiling puckering lips. Perhaps even flicking a lone rose petal on that rapidly cooling corpse while she walks off unhurriedly, the clacking of her heels ringing with the cadence of the Reaper\'s march.
May 15th, 2023 05:54
Mantis Praying
L. B. Mek said:
(meh
not that deep, me thinks
just going price for good
sex,
nowadays, for those
so desperate, to smile
away
their chosen drug of demise...)
lol
forgive my horribly warped
sense of humour, and
thanks for putting up with me
😌
(hope you n yours have a great week)
May 15th, 2023 03:39
L. B. Mek said:
(meh
not that deep, me thinks
just going price for good
sex,
nowadays, for those
so desperate, to smile
away
their chosen drug of demise...)
lol
forgive my horribly warped
sense of humour, and
thanks for putting up with me
😌
(hope you n yours have a great week)
May 15th, 2023 03:39
They Were Nothing But Fools
L. B. Mek said:
(showcasing great skill, dear Poet
worded, open to interpretation
yet, directing our flow to that
same river of poetic, introspection)
I seem to know these fool\'s innately
those who weave patterns, beyond
logic or consideration\'s
capacity, to comprehend
their zeal for cyclic, idiocy..
\'as i ask, every morning
mirror mirror, whose the fool
you know better than most
in reply, my face looks back
eyes clueless, to life\'s lessons...\'
May 15th, 2023 03:31
L. B. Mek said:
(showcasing great skill, dear Poet
worded, open to interpretation
yet, directing our flow to that
same river of poetic, introspection)
I seem to know these fool\'s innately
those who weave patterns, beyond
logic or consideration\'s
capacity, to comprehend
their zeal for cyclic, idiocy..
\'as i ask, every morning
mirror mirror, whose the fool
you know better than most
in reply, my face looks back
eyes clueless, to life\'s lessons...\'
May 15th, 2023 03:31
The Tears of a Crowd Forming
L. B. Mek said:
\'of our tears
forming and falling, in some
kind of obscene
and collective defeat ..
Indeed ..
What began as a trickle,
now rages
outrageously, like a swift
flowing river\'
(so true, worded so acute)
\'So fight it, come closer
stand directly
behind me and hold fast
to my skirts
Oh’ and pray, keep both
your eyes tightly shut ..\'
(Ha! You lead I\'ll try n keep-up
dear wise Kilt loving, exhibitionist
😉)
\'Bouncing off
yellow stained cloth stars
haphazardly set
against a backdrop of hate ..
Just ripe for pinning
come morning, to writhing
grey mountains
piled high with blue striped
pyjamas ..\'
(We, MUST NEVER FORGET!
how it all started, with those
\'yellow stained cloth stars\'
to identify and BRAND
those, deemed inhuman
and hated, because
\'some\'
dogmatic text, millenniums ago
blamed them
for the murder of a character
labelled
as a deity creator, and \'Father\'
to all of existence
including, those very same Jews!
\'some\'
try to forget, by the logic of that
\'same\'
lore, they worship
how these very same Jews
are also \'HIS\' children...
yeah, what \'Father\' wouldn\'t appreciate
the MASS, attempted Genocide
of \'HIS children\'..
yeah, stuff that up your
self righteous, \'GOOD BOOK\'
you brainwashed zealot morons)
May 15th, 2023 03:22
L. B. Mek said:
\'of our tears
forming and falling, in some
kind of obscene
and collective defeat ..
Indeed ..
What began as a trickle,
now rages
outrageously, like a swift
flowing river\'
(so true, worded so acute)
\'So fight it, come closer
stand directly
behind me and hold fast
to my skirts
Oh’ and pray, keep both
your eyes tightly shut ..\'
(Ha! You lead I\'ll try n keep-up
dear wise Kilt loving, exhibitionist
😉)
\'Bouncing off
yellow stained cloth stars
haphazardly set
against a backdrop of hate ..
Just ripe for pinning
come morning, to writhing
grey mountains
piled high with blue striped
pyjamas ..\'
(We, MUST NEVER FORGET!
how it all started, with those
\'yellow stained cloth stars\'
to identify and BRAND
those, deemed inhuman
and hated, because
\'some\'
dogmatic text, millenniums ago
blamed them
for the murder of a character
labelled
as a deity creator, and \'Father\'
to all of existence
including, those very same Jews!
\'some\'
try to forget, by the logic of that
\'same\'
lore, they worship
how these very same Jews
are also \'HIS\' children...
yeah, what \'Father\' wouldn\'t appreciate
the MASS, attempted Genocide
of \'HIS children\'..
yeah, stuff that up your
self righteous, \'GOOD BOOK\'
you brainwashed zealot morons)
May 15th, 2023 03:22
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