Remember Me She Said
Rozina said:

Lovely lines. A beautiful picture.

May 18th, 2022 17:56

Remember Me She Said
Bella Shepard said:

Gentle and flowing as I read it aloud. Lovely imagery of the sunflower against the backdrop of tumbleweed, such a wonderful visual. Beautiful words, beautiful poem!

May 18th, 2022 13:33

Remember Me She Said
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Lovely writing ))

May 18th, 2022 12:10

For Ever Aint Never That Far Away
Goldfinch60 said:

We must always do the best we can in life Neville and life will do its best for us.

Andy

May 17th, 2022 00:33

For Ever Aint Never That Far Away
orchidee said:

Good write N.

May 16th, 2022 10:12

Fingers Crossed
Goldfinch60 said:

May that good luck be with us forever Neville.

Andy

May 16th, 2022 00:23

Fingers Crossed
orchidee said:

But not one magpie on its own? \'One for sorrow, two for joy.....\'
Erm good wishes, maybe luck too, but I don\'t believe in it. lol.
You seen our black cat? Or the tabby one? We have two cats. Ahhh!
The black one said to me: \'Never mind if I cross your path or not for luck where\'s me grub?\' A talking cat now! lol

May 15th, 2022 09:41

Fingers Crossed
Accidental Poet said:

Here\'s hoping the cat and magpies survive the shaking. Best wishes to you too N. 😊

May 15th, 2022 07:19

Fingers Crossed
Saxon Crow said:

Or blood, feathers and a lot of swearing!

May 15th, 2022 02:29

Its All in the Way that She Eddies and Flows
L. B. Mek said:

\'look what you did
for the millionth time..
wrote down a few lines
and shared it, on-line
so now, you have me
going-off
surpassing my puny talents
limitations
making me dream
of that wannabe poet
I search for
with every coming, tide
of inspiration,
gifting me, a few more words
of scribbled, poesy\'s
presence, in my life..
thank you! Hyung
for reaffirming my status
as your loyal, Fan
what a corker of a write
dear Poet, supreme!\'
(wading
through our sea of despair
we realise
in that callous face of life\'s, strife
bravado
lacks meaningful spice
and so, all we\'re left with
is the veracity
of our yearning
and that despair
in our hopeless, reaching..
\'\'Lighthouse, shine
ever-bright
fend my journeys, path
to those arms of warmth
I dream of, between
every blink
and mourn for, in each
wishful, breath
of unrepented: surrender\'\')

May 13th, 2022 05:33

Its All in the Way that She Eddies and Flows
MendedFences27 said:

Time to raise the sails and head for the open seas. Sometimes you\'re sailing along, but at other times you\'re wrecked by storms, reefs, or worse a dreaded iceberg. Eddies will send you spinning.
You are the boat and she is the river, metaphors for a relation(ship). Just keep her steady and find the open water. Thoroughly enjoyed by me. - Phil A

May 12th, 2022 21:56

Its All in the Way that She Eddies and Flows
orchidee said:

Good write N.

May 12th, 2022 13:45

Its All in the Way that She Eddies and Flows
Distant View said:

Poetically expressed, Neville. The joys of love are a constant delight!

May 12th, 2022 11:13

Its All in the Way that She Eddies and Flows
Rocky Lagou said:

Wow, great job Neville! I love this metaphor. I feel this is about relationships that can be quite hectic like tumultuous waters until they become \"floods.\" But you do the right thing, walk away before it worsens. Marvelous!


May 12th, 2022 10:07

Every Now and Then Maybe
Goldfinch60 said:

Such memories are so important in our lives Neville.

Andy

May 10th, 2022 00:49