Comments received on poems by Neville
No Gardener Required
Parisab said:
This poem is lush in language and succulent in capturing ones imagination. ‘Calling me with whispers so we’ll hidden’ I often feel that when I walk in my (actual) secret garden. People who actually garden develop a unique and sophisticated language. Thank you for sharing…
June 23rd, 2023 23:34
Parisab said:
This poem is lush in language and succulent in capturing ones imagination. ‘Calling me with whispers so we’ll hidden’ I often feel that when I walk in my (actual) secret garden. People who actually garden develop a unique and sophisticated language. Thank you for sharing…
June 23rd, 2023 23:34
No Gardener Required
orchidee said:
You manured that garden yet? Not that it\'s related to the \'unspeakable\' thing I can\'t mention in public. lol.
June 23rd, 2023 11:54
orchidee said:
You manured that garden yet? Not that it\'s related to the \'unspeakable\' thing I can\'t mention in public. lol.
June 23rd, 2023 11:54
No Gardener Required
L. B. Mek said:
so relatable, capturing that pure joy
and appreciation, we all recognise
for that steadfast presence
in our lives
such wonderful flow, dear Poet supreme
(be it a garden, a loved one or a cherished hobby
we all need those treasured anchors
to our everyday reality
those that take a subtly, entrenched
place in our hearts
and whisper, droplets of soothing
thoughts, when things
get a little rough, allowing us a fall-back
routine, to grip to
when, once more we\'re forced
to try and fix our shattered lives
one planted seed at a time..)
June 23rd, 2023 01:56
L. B. Mek said:
so relatable, capturing that pure joy
and appreciation, we all recognise
for that steadfast presence
in our lives
such wonderful flow, dear Poet supreme
(be it a garden, a loved one or a cherished hobby
we all need those treasured anchors
to our everyday reality
those that take a subtly, entrenched
place in our hearts
and whisper, droplets of soothing
thoughts, when things
get a little rough, allowing us a fall-back
routine, to grip to
when, once more we\'re forced
to try and fix our shattered lives
one planted seed at a time..)
June 23rd, 2023 01:56
No Gardener Required
orchidee said:
\'Garden\' can have some swoony connotations, which I cannot explain in public! lol.
June 23rd, 2023 01:47
orchidee said:
\'Garden\' can have some swoony connotations, which I cannot explain in public! lol.
June 23rd, 2023 01:47
What is it With Poetry
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'your talented fingertips
serenading
our Poesy\'s heartstrings\'
June 23rd, 2023 01:45
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'your talented fingertips
serenading
our Poesy\'s heartstrings\'
June 23rd, 2023 01:45
What is Wrong With This Tongue
L. B. Mek said:
\'And like that,
fall asleep, albeit
fitfully ..
Until dawn arrives,
to insult
and to taunt me\'
how intimately I know this scene
instantly, recognise
your subtle words of vivid Poetry..
\'the, Poet is back
all is well then, all is well\'
thank you! Hyung
June 23rd, 2023 01:42
L. B. Mek said:
\'And like that,
fall asleep, albeit
fitfully ..
Until dawn arrives,
to insult
and to taunt me\'
how intimately I know this scene
instantly, recognise
your subtle words of vivid Poetry..
\'the, Poet is back
all is well then, all is well\'
thank you! Hyung
June 23rd, 2023 01:42
What is it With Poetry
Doggerel Dave said:
I don\'t visit very often now, so I feel lucky to have caught you, Neville. \'Thought you were away, navigating the world with a white stick....
Glad you are not.
June 22nd, 2023 21:18
Doggerel Dave said:
I don\'t visit very often now, so I feel lucky to have caught you, Neville. \'Thought you were away, navigating the world with a white stick....
Glad you are not.
June 22nd, 2023 21:18
What is it With Poetry
Accidental Poet said:
Poetry... the language of the heart? 🤔
June 22nd, 2023 17:05
Accidental Poet said:
Poetry... the language of the heart? 🤔
June 22nd, 2023 17:05
What is it With Poetry
Caring dove said:
Poetry is a good way to express ourselves ))
A nice poem 🙂
June 22nd, 2023 06:29
Caring dove said:
Poetry is a good way to express ourselves ))
A nice poem 🙂
June 22nd, 2023 06:29
What is it With Poetry
Laura🌻 said:
Dear Neville,
A telescope of what is…
POETRY
Nicely executed!👏
I’m appreciating today’s writing from you very much.
Laura 🌻
June 22nd, 2023 06:23
Laura🌻 said:
Dear Neville,
A telescope of what is…
POETRY
Nicely executed!👏
I’m appreciating today’s writing from you very much.
Laura 🌻
June 22nd, 2023 06:23
What is it With Poetry
orchidee said:
In olden days ye poetic stirrings began, with thee and thou, and whoever else! lol.
June 22nd, 2023 05:13
orchidee said:
In olden days ye poetic stirrings began, with thee and thou, and whoever else! lol.
June 22nd, 2023 05:13
What is Wrong With This Tongue
jarcher54 said:
We are delighted to have this latest offering... you are sort of necessary to a proper day you know... now why you have to get us so worked up I haven\'t any idea!
June 22nd, 2023 02:18
jarcher54 said:
We are delighted to have this latest offering... you are sort of necessary to a proper day you know... now why you have to get us so worked up I haven\'t any idea!
June 22nd, 2023 02:18
What is Wrong With This Tongue
Garth Rakumakoe said:
An offering with a tongue and a life of its own. Wonderfully expressed, dear Neville. 👌🏼
June 21st, 2023 12:28
Garth Rakumakoe said:
An offering with a tongue and a life of its own. Wonderfully expressed, dear Neville. 👌🏼
June 21st, 2023 12:28
Blame It On the Fall
Garth Rakumakoe said:
She is quite a charming lady sir. A well justified blame assigned. 🙏🏼😇
June 21st, 2023 12:25
Garth Rakumakoe said:
She is quite a charming lady sir. A well justified blame assigned. 🙏🏼😇
June 21st, 2023 12:25
What is Wrong With This Tongue
orchidee said:
Did ya hurry back for more Mad Adventures of Me, KP, and Fido?! lol.
June 21st, 2023 12:23
orchidee said:
Did ya hurry back for more Mad Adventures of Me, KP, and Fido?! lol.
June 21st, 2023 12:23
No More Blues for These Tired Eyes
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Poignant, endearing, blue. A craftwork sir. May all be with your sight.
June 21st, 2023 12:23
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Poignant, endearing, blue. A craftwork sir. May all be with your sight.
June 21st, 2023 12:23
What is Wrong With This Tongue
orchidee said:
Nowt wrong with ya tongue in spouting some good lines again - welcome back! lol.
June 21st, 2023 10:34
orchidee said:
Nowt wrong with ya tongue in spouting some good lines again - welcome back! lol.
June 21st, 2023 10:34
What is Wrong With This Tongue
Jeffrey Weese said:
This poem is a skillful testament to the power of desire and the tangible emptiness left by an absent loved one, creating a deeply affecting and intensely intimate experience for the reader.
June 21st, 2023 07:36
Jeffrey Weese said:
This poem is a skillful testament to the power of desire and the tangible emptiness left by an absent loved one, creating a deeply affecting and intensely intimate experience for the reader.
June 21st, 2023 07:36
What is Wrong With This Tongue
Laura🌻 said:
Dear Neville,
Welcome back.
A wonderful surprise.
I’m wondering if you’re asking yourself,
“What about my poem?”
There’s a lot to unravel…
Laura🌻
June 21st, 2023 06:37
Laura🌻 said:
Dear Neville,
Welcome back.
A wonderful surprise.
I’m wondering if you’re asking yourself,
“What about my poem?”
There’s a lot to unravel…
Laura🌻
June 21st, 2023 06:37
Back in the Day
L. B. Mek said:
(our senses, may be
the most loyal thing about us
how
even after memory, begins to forget
a smell, can have us swimming
in scenes, reliving
that which we thought was lost to us
forever...)
simply Brilliant Hyung
dripping with melancholic realism
such a relatable read
June 19th, 2023 01:17
L. B. Mek said:
(our senses, may be
the most loyal thing about us
how
even after memory, begins to forget
a smell, can have us swimming
in scenes, reliving
that which we thought was lost to us
forever...)
simply Brilliant Hyung
dripping with melancholic realism
such a relatable read
June 19th, 2023 01:17
Himawari - Sunflower
L. B. Mek said:
\'He shone
and brightly so ..\'
indeed you do, oh graceful wordsmith
Beautiful imagery, such brevity
a deep, meaningful write
thank you! Hyung
June 12th, 2023 02:41
L. B. Mek said:
\'He shone
and brightly so ..\'
indeed you do, oh graceful wordsmith
Beautiful imagery, such brevity
a deep, meaningful write
thank you! Hyung
June 12th, 2023 02:41
No More Blues for These Tired Eyes
jarcher54 said:
We all need our occasional Neville fix... I\'m already getting the shakes. Love you man.
June 9th, 2023 02:05
jarcher54 said:
We all need our occasional Neville fix... I\'m already getting the shakes. Love you man.
June 9th, 2023 02:05
Uber Brides
Bella Shepard said:
I suppose the journey can determine the destination, whatever it may hold in store. A lovely, touching write my friend.
June 3rd, 2023 12:17
Bella Shepard said:
I suppose the journey can determine the destination, whatever it may hold in store. A lovely, touching write my friend.
June 3rd, 2023 12:17
No More Blues for These Tired Eyes
Parisab said:
Your words have the gift of sight,
May all your senses be right.
June 3rd, 2023 00:02
Parisab said:
Your words have the gift of sight,
May all your senses be right.
June 3rd, 2023 00:02
No More Blues for These Tired Eyes
L. B. Mek said:
dear Hope,
I write to renew my subscription
I tried shopping in-person, but the market stalls
are empty...
(your insights
are my introspection\'s
guiding mantra)
absolutely love this Hyung
beautiful in tone
and empathetic eloquence
May 29th, 2023 02:11
L. B. Mek said:
dear Hope,
I write to renew my subscription
I tried shopping in-person, but the market stalls
are empty...
(your insights
are my introspection\'s
guiding mantra)
absolutely love this Hyung
beautiful in tone
and empathetic eloquence
May 29th, 2023 02:11
Blame It On the Fall
rhmn_7 said:
Autumn is the most colorful time of the year and it does so by killing nature, so it deserves to be blamed :)
May 28th, 2023 15:54
rhmn_7 said:
Autumn is the most colorful time of the year and it does so by killing nature, so it deserves to be blamed :)
May 28th, 2023 15:54
No More Blues for These Tired Eyes
Bella Shepard said:
I googled NAAOIN, a condition I was not aware of, and am saddened to think that this has afflicted you. While your vision may be affected, your words are always strong and vibrant. God bless dear friend, hoping for the very best for you.
May 27th, 2023 13:47
Bella Shepard said:
I googled NAAOIN, a condition I was not aware of, and am saddened to think that this has afflicted you. While your vision may be affected, your words are always strong and vibrant. God bless dear friend, hoping for the very best for you.
May 27th, 2023 13:47
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