Comments received on poems by Neville
Father
orchidee said:
Ohhh, you praise me too much - a fine poem about me! heehee.
You have inspired me with a fantastically original title for one of me next poems: \'Mother\'. lol.
July 2nd, 2023 02:17
orchidee said:
Ohhh, you praise me too much - a fine poem about me! heehee.
You have inspired me with a fantastically original title for one of me next poems: \'Mother\'. lol.
July 2nd, 2023 02:17
Father
Christina8 said:
truly beautiful....what else can I say? I am jealous of this awe inspiring man, cannot say my experience was the same.....C
July 2nd, 2023 01:59
Christina8 said:
truly beautiful....what else can I say? I am jealous of this awe inspiring man, cannot say my experience was the same.....C
July 2nd, 2023 01:59
When the Limelight Sucks
Doggerel Dave said:
Oh so neat.
\'Got that right Neville; I like to travel incognito whenever possible...... get a smidgin of paranoia when the local café remembers my name.
Note to Teddy above: Nah - Kookas are good \'uns except that their laugh doesn\'t appear to be in response to my rapier wit, rather taking the piss. Lorikeets are much more delinquent...
July 1st, 2023 20:17
Doggerel Dave said:
Oh so neat.
\'Got that right Neville; I like to travel incognito whenever possible...... get a smidgin of paranoia when the local café remembers my name.
Note to Teddy above: Nah - Kookas are good \'uns except that their laugh doesn\'t appear to be in response to my rapier wit, rather taking the piss. Lorikeets are much more delinquent...
July 1st, 2023 20:17
When the Limelight Sucks
Teddy.15 said:
LOL I would never want to be a kookaburra, apparently they are very naughty. I do enjoy your love of birds dear Nev 🤗
July 1st, 2023 12:37
Teddy.15 said:
LOL I would never want to be a kookaburra, apparently they are very naughty. I do enjoy your love of birds dear Nev 🤗
July 1st, 2023 12:37
When the Limelight Sucks
Christina8 said:
I liked your authors note...that this was not entirely true. I bet you do love at least a hint of the limelight. Not a bad thing at all. I did enjoy your poem!
July 1st, 2023 07:42
Christina8 said:
I liked your authors note...that this was not entirely true. I bet you do love at least a hint of the limelight. Not a bad thing at all. I did enjoy your poem!
July 1st, 2023 07:42
When the Limelight Sucks
Caring dove said:
Nice writing )) I guess it can be difficult to have so much attention on you ..
Sparrows always look like friendly birds
July 1st, 2023 01:46
Caring dove said:
Nice writing )) I guess it can be difficult to have so much attention on you ..
Sparrows always look like friendly birds
July 1st, 2023 01:46
When the Limelight Sucks
Parisab said:
Are channeling Taylor Swift? I’m sure that she is lost cause for fame-or we’re talking about the other swift’s-either way I like the theme around the potency of the limelight
July 1st, 2023 01:04
Parisab said:
Are channeling Taylor Swift? I’m sure that she is lost cause for fame-or we’re talking about the other swift’s-either way I like the theme around the potency of the limelight
July 1st, 2023 01:04
Zilch Seeking Oblivion Surfers
Christina8 said:
Whatever it was, I hope it was good! Lovely poem, N!
June 30th, 2023 07:17
Christina8 said:
Whatever it was, I hope it was good! Lovely poem, N!
June 30th, 2023 07:17
Zilch Seeking Oblivion Surfers
L. B. Mek said:
a little like sleep
devoid of dreams
i can, but presume..
perhaps something, like
a graveyard devoid of names..
or maybe, it\'s where
memories we forget, congregate
to lament, their ill-fated
nothingness, despite being once
being so pivotal to our worth..
(lol
how I do go-on eh my friend
but alas what do i know
still a lovely, thought provoking
read, thank you! Hyung)
June 30th, 2023 04:13
L. B. Mek said:
a little like sleep
devoid of dreams
i can, but presume..
perhaps something, like
a graveyard devoid of names..
or maybe, it\'s where
memories we forget, congregate
to lament, their ill-fated
nothingness, despite being once
being so pivotal to our worth..
(lol
how I do go-on eh my friend
but alas what do i know
still a lovely, thought provoking
read, thank you! Hyung)
June 30th, 2023 04:13
Psithurism Interludes
L. B. Mek said:
whispering to my poetic fate
I summon what courage i have
to express these feelings I cherish
symmetry, in that ideal I seek
between your steps within grace
and my ambition to become
that person in your life, entrusted
with your joy and satisfaction,
I won\'t be so bold as to guarantee
I\'ll just invite you
to share this dream with me
and pray you\'ll afford me
the opportunity to showcase
this love for you, i carry
encased in all the hope i can
manifest, my dear
June 30th, 2023 04:00
L. B. Mek said:
whispering to my poetic fate
I summon what courage i have
to express these feelings I cherish
symmetry, in that ideal I seek
between your steps within grace
and my ambition to become
that person in your life, entrusted
with your joy and satisfaction,
I won\'t be so bold as to guarantee
I\'ll just invite you
to share this dream with me
and pray you\'ll afford me
the opportunity to showcase
this love for you, i carry
encased in all the hope i can
manifest, my dear
June 30th, 2023 04:00
Where No Mirrors Are Required
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(when love triumphs over
those guaranteed losses
as longevity\'s, curse)
June 30th, 2023 03:52
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(when love triumphs over
those guaranteed losses
as longevity\'s, curse)
June 30th, 2023 03:52
When Thinking Upon a Lemon Tree
L. B. Mek said:
that lemon tinged, risqué
of poetry\'s sensuality... lol
(somehow
bright colours and enticing scents
tend to anchor us to our memories)
wonderfully executed Hyung
I relate (although maybe not
the lemon tree part, my life\'s
never been that idyllic.. lol)
June 30th, 2023 03:50
L. B. Mek said:
that lemon tinged, risqué
of poetry\'s sensuality... lol
(somehow
bright colours and enticing scents
tend to anchor us to our memories)
wonderfully executed Hyung
I relate (although maybe not
the lemon tree part, my life\'s
never been that idyllic.. lol)
June 30th, 2023 03:50
Zilch Seeking Oblivion Surfers
orchidee said:
Oh woe, I don\'t exist hardly at all now, having married KP! It\'s all \'me, me, me\'. That\'s all she ever says - not to me, but to herself lol. I reply to her \'old trout!\'.
June 30th, 2023 02:13
orchidee said:
Oh woe, I don\'t exist hardly at all now, having married KP! It\'s all \'me, me, me\'. That\'s all she ever says - not to me, but to herself lol. I reply to her \'old trout!\'.
June 30th, 2023 02:13
Someplace Where There Are Whales
Caring dove said:
Nice writing )) never seen a dolphin .. or been near to one .. they are lovely tho
June 30th, 2023 00:51
Caring dove said:
Nice writing )) never seen a dolphin .. or been near to one .. they are lovely tho
June 30th, 2023 00:51
The Simple Art of Wondering
Caring dove said:
A nice writing like your words ))
Couldn’t imagine missing the sky or the sea .. nature is too beautiful
I think we’d be lost confused and very sad without that
June 30th, 2023 00:48
Caring dove said:
A nice writing like your words ))
Couldn’t imagine missing the sky or the sea .. nature is too beautiful
I think we’d be lost confused and very sad without that
June 30th, 2023 00:48
Zilch Seeking Oblivion Surfers
Bobby O said:
That’s a good way to describe total bewilderment. I imagine most visit that state on occasion but to extend that to a nothingness drives that kerfluffle into a spiritual realm , which of course can be argued as pure logic. But, as an aside, would that have provided insight, in that momentary glimpse , as to what’s the next station? The next subway stop? Could you hint if there’s gonna be lots of beautiful women,? Just asking for a friend v
June 30th, 2023 00:48
Bobby O said:
That’s a good way to describe total bewilderment. I imagine most visit that state on occasion but to extend that to a nothingness drives that kerfluffle into a spiritual realm , which of course can be argued as pure logic. But, as an aside, would that have provided insight, in that momentary glimpse , as to what’s the next station? The next subway stop? Could you hint if there’s gonna be lots of beautiful women,? Just asking for a friend v
June 30th, 2023 00:48
Where No Mirrors Are Required
Garth Rakumakoe said:
I love the open ended finishing... it does not always have to be the full story, a flash at times is good enough to let the mind finish its own... Totally taken by the title as well. Your poetic outlook is remarkable, N. Beautiful one!
June 29th, 2023 08:16
Garth Rakumakoe said:
I love the open ended finishing... it does not always have to be the full story, a flash at times is good enough to let the mind finish its own... Totally taken by the title as well. Your poetic outlook is remarkable, N. Beautiful one!
June 29th, 2023 08:16
Psithurism Interludes
orchidee said:
It\'s all right for some folks having psithurisms! lol
I\'ve gone nutty - a course said - maybe people should be called \'person-technology hybrids\'.
Then it got dafter: \'This sofa could have its own personality\'.
They\'ll put me in padded cell soon, reading that rubbish!
June 29th, 2023 03:59
orchidee said:
It\'s all right for some folks having psithurisms! lol
I\'ve gone nutty - a course said - maybe people should be called \'person-technology hybrids\'.
Then it got dafter: \'This sofa could have its own personality\'.
They\'ll put me in padded cell soon, reading that rubbish!
June 29th, 2023 03:59
Psithurism Interludes
Teddy.15 said:
And this my friend is a really beautiful poem. ❤️
June 29th, 2023 03:39
Teddy.15 said:
And this my friend is a really beautiful poem. ❤️
June 29th, 2023 03:39
Where No Mirrors Are Required
Christina8 said:
They never noticed the mirrors...loved that....very well written poem!
June 28th, 2023 11:37
Christina8 said:
They never noticed the mirrors...loved that....very well written poem!
June 28th, 2023 11:37
Where No Mirrors Are Required
orchidee said:
A slightly swoony poem here?! heehee.
June 28th, 2023 06:41
orchidee said:
A slightly swoony poem here?! heehee.
June 28th, 2023 06:41
Where No Mirrors Are Required
Neville said:
made me smile bigly so ya did miss VB 🌷🌹🌺thank you :)
June 28th, 2023 02:35
Neville said:
made me smile bigly so ya did miss VB 🌷🌹🌺thank you :)
June 28th, 2023 02:35
Where No Mirrors Are Required
Caring dove said:
The idea of a table ‘ feeling ‘empty .. your writing makes me think of those things being in the background , being ‘ invisible ‘ and uncared for .. they are so intent on each other that nothing else matters to them
Liked your writing )
June 28th, 2023 02:34
Caring dove said:
The idea of a table ‘ feeling ‘empty .. your writing makes me think of those things being in the background , being ‘ invisible ‘ and uncared for .. they are so intent on each other that nothing else matters to them
Liked your writing )
June 28th, 2023 02:34
When Thinking Upon a Lemon Tree
Kinsey Peterson said:
lemon has always been a word that inspires memory for me- why? absolutely no idea, but your poem has me reminiscing. love it as usual
June 27th, 2023 13:21
Kinsey Peterson said:
lemon has always been a word that inspires memory for me- why? absolutely no idea, but your poem has me reminiscing. love it as usual
June 27th, 2023 13:21
When Thinking Upon a Lemon Tree
Teddy.15 said:
Reminds me of the south of italy, lemons galore 🤗
June 27th, 2023 12:16
Teddy.15 said:
Reminds me of the south of italy, lemons galore 🤗
June 27th, 2023 12:16
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