Comments received on poems by Neville
Under No Misconception
L. B. Mek said:
dear Suzy, court case floodgates have began worldwide;
those political vultures, have yet again profiteered
now those who were caught up in that political activism
hashtag tidal-wave of collective ignorance
find themselves entrenched
in those quicksand\'s of consequence, only
now, no one cares about their regrets or pain..
there must be a place worse than fantasy hell
for people who capitalise on the vulnerable
there must be, an entre galaxy dedicated to it
just for humanity\'s vile vultures
still
I hope those who are truly suffering with their identity
can find avenues of healing and counselling
(an important write, dear Poetess)
April 14th, 2023 03:16
L. B. Mek said:
dear Suzy, court case floodgates have began worldwide;
those political vultures, have yet again profiteered
now those who were caught up in that political activism
hashtag tidal-wave of collective ignorance
find themselves entrenched
in those quicksand\'s of consequence, only
now, no one cares about their regrets or pain..
there must be a place worse than fantasy hell
for people who capitalise on the vulnerable
there must be, an entre galaxy dedicated to it
just for humanity\'s vile vultures
still
I hope those who are truly suffering with their identity
can find avenues of healing and counselling
(an important write, dear Poetess)
April 14th, 2023 03:16
Beneath Her Pretty Dress
L. B. Mek said:
such intimacy of worded warmth
many a grand parent \'to be\'
would recognise your sentiments
(I\'m keeping everything crossed
that all goes well, Hyung!
and a champagne on ice, you know
to help you celebrate
as the thoughtful friend i am, lol)
🙏😎🍾
April 14th, 2023 03:04
L. B. Mek said:
such intimacy of worded warmth
many a grand parent \'to be\'
would recognise your sentiments
(I\'m keeping everything crossed
that all goes well, Hyung!
and a champagne on ice, you know
to help you celebrate
as the thoughtful friend i am, lol)
🙏😎🍾
April 14th, 2023 03:04
Suspended Between Mirrors
L. B. Mek said:
my mythology mind, reaches for Echo and Narcissus
mirage, linkages
my love of Keats takes me to his Lamia verses
\'\'Fast by the springs where she to bathe was wont,
And in those meads where sometime she might haunt,
Were strewn rich gifts, unknown to any Muse,
Though Fancy\'s casket were unlock\'d to choose.
Ah, what a world of love was at her feet!\'\'
(yet, when all rapture of reactionary immediacy
finds in me a portal to serene, thought
I must take heed and realise, once more
dear Poet supreme
it be your words and poetry, alone
that stir me to realms of poetic ecstasy)
and thus I thank ye, with utmost sincerity
(lol
forgive my egotistical foolery Hyung
I just loved your poem)
April 14th, 2023 02:58
L. B. Mek said:
my mythology mind, reaches for Echo and Narcissus
mirage, linkages
my love of Keats takes me to his Lamia verses
\'\'Fast by the springs where she to bathe was wont,
And in those meads where sometime she might haunt,
Were strewn rich gifts, unknown to any Muse,
Though Fancy\'s casket were unlock\'d to choose.
Ah, what a world of love was at her feet!\'\'
(yet, when all rapture of reactionary immediacy
finds in me a portal to serene, thought
I must take heed and realise, once more
dear Poet supreme
it be your words and poetry, alone
that stir me to realms of poetic ecstasy)
and thus I thank ye, with utmost sincerity
(lol
forgive my egotistical foolery Hyung
I just loved your poem)
April 14th, 2023 02:58
Still Calm, Safe and Free
Fay Slimm. said:
A tender look back to a special year when, from your delicately chosen comparisons - - maybe -- - a much loved new born appeared -- -- well only my guess of course - -- but such a beautiful feel to this read my dear friend............x
April 14th, 2023 02:49
Fay Slimm. said:
A tender look back to a special year when, from your delicately chosen comparisons - - maybe -- - a much loved new born appeared -- -- well only my guess of course - -- but such a beautiful feel to this read my dear friend............x
April 14th, 2023 02:49
Still Calm, Safe and Free
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Was it \'67 that I married KP? I dunno. Seems like hundreds of years ago, as time is NOT going quickly, as I\'m NOT enjoying myself - to reverse that saying! lol.
Now me next poem - \'Each day an agony (with KP)!\'
April 14th, 2023 02:16
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Was it \'67 that I married KP? I dunno. Seems like hundreds of years ago, as time is NOT going quickly, as I\'m NOT enjoying myself - to reverse that saying! lol.
Now me next poem - \'Each day an agony (with KP)!\'
April 14th, 2023 02:16
Beneath Her Pretty Dress
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that grandchild will be showered with love Neville.
Andy
April 14th, 2023 00:53
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that grandchild will be showered with love Neville.
Andy
April 14th, 2023 00:53
Under No Misconception
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Suzy which I agree with, in all my long life I have always tried to treat everybody with respect no matter what sexual orientation they may or may not be.
Andy
April 14th, 2023 00:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Suzy which I agree with, in all my long life I have always tried to treat everybody with respect no matter what sexual orientation they may or may not be.
Andy
April 14th, 2023 00:41
Under No Misconception
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
\"Under No Misconception\" is a thought-provoking and well-crafted poem that invites the reader to reflect on the meaning and value of parenthood, family, and intentionality.
April 13th, 2023 16:41
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
\"Under No Misconception\" is a thought-provoking and well-crafted poem that invites the reader to reflect on the meaning and value of parenthood, family, and intentionality.
April 13th, 2023 16:41
Under No Misconception
orchidee said:
I never gets any \'excitement\' or any of its connotations anyway. And Fido certainly don\'t let me have any \'ardour\'. He says it\'s not good for me and KP to have ardour. lol.
April 13th, 2023 11:56
orchidee said:
I never gets any \'excitement\' or any of its connotations anyway. And Fido certainly don\'t let me have any \'ardour\'. He says it\'s not good for me and KP to have ardour. lol.
April 13th, 2023 11:56
Under No Misconception
arqios said:
Been thinking of late about generations and such. Our lines of succession will end within 2 more generations, that\'s including cousins and nieces.
April 13th, 2023 09:25
arqios said:
Been thinking of late about generations and such. Our lines of succession will end within 2 more generations, that\'s including cousins and nieces.
April 13th, 2023 09:25
Under No Misconception
Christina8 said:
Very good and thoughtful poem. Yes, we have that issue in the old US of A but now they are letting children decide what they want to be and not letting parents know....a topic that is hot right now. I also am not bigoted, have a lot of gay and bi friends and family but children is a whole nother issue...x
April 13th, 2023 06:34
Christina8 said:
Very good and thoughtful poem. Yes, we have that issue in the old US of A but now they are letting children decide what they want to be and not letting parents know....a topic that is hot right now. I also am not bigoted, have a lot of gay and bi friends and family but children is a whole nother issue...x
April 13th, 2023 06:34
Under No Misconception
Fay Slimm. said:
How busy in bed - or out- that old fella and his gal must have been -- Wow - eighteen is surely a record - --. the\" dont knows\" I agree are coming out in scores of late but like ee I know a few and have no probs. at all with fluid genders \'cept those switched on a whim. p.s. - - there sure is no Sue about you who will ever be Nev. to me...........x
April 13th, 2023 03:59
Fay Slimm. said:
How busy in bed - or out- that old fella and his gal must have been -- Wow - eighteen is surely a record - --. the\" dont knows\" I agree are coming out in scores of late but like ee I know a few and have no probs. at all with fluid genders \'cept those switched on a whim. p.s. - - there sure is no Sue about you who will ever be Nev. to me...........x
April 13th, 2023 03:59
Beneath Her Pretty Dress
Fay Slimm. said:
Dear Sir Grandpop - - Meant to state that July is a proper girt month in which to be dropped - well at least that\'s what Cornish sages say.........x
April 12th, 2023 13:39
Fay Slimm. said:
Dear Sir Grandpop - - Meant to state that July is a proper girt month in which to be dropped - well at least that\'s what Cornish sages say.........x
April 12th, 2023 13:39
Beneath Her Pretty Dress
Accidental Poet said:
Bright ideas grow into little bouncing bundle of joys. Congrats Grandad. 👼
April 12th, 2023 08:03
Accidental Poet said:
Bright ideas grow into little bouncing bundle of joys. Congrats Grandad. 👼
April 12th, 2023 08:03
Beneath Her Pretty Dress
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
The poem\'s themes of hidden beauty and the complexity of human nature are conveyed through a conversational tone that creates an intimate connection between the poet and the reader.
April 12th, 2023 07:00
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
The poem\'s themes of hidden beauty and the complexity of human nature are conveyed through a conversational tone that creates an intimate connection between the poet and the reader.
April 12th, 2023 07:00
Beneath Her Pretty Dress
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a bundle of penned love for an as yet unborn but specially welcome new family member from a happy Grandad - -this is a write Nev. that your daughter will always treasure....x
April 12th, 2023 06:52
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a bundle of penned love for an as yet unborn but specially welcome new family member from a happy Grandad - -this is a write Nev. that your daughter will always treasure....x
April 12th, 2023 06:52
Beneath Her Pretty Dress
Lorna said:
All better now N? Congratulations and then some Granpappy........
April 12th, 2023 04:56
Lorna said:
All better now N? Congratulations and then some Granpappy........
April 12th, 2023 04:56
Beneath Her Pretty Dress
orchidee said:
Good write Neville.
If you had not explained this, I would comment a \'bright idea\' of....... I never go there with KP, it would bring on a swoon! lol.
April 12th, 2023 02:50
orchidee said:
Good write Neville.
If you had not explained this, I would comment a \'bright idea\' of....... I never go there with KP, it would bring on a swoon! lol.
April 12th, 2023 02:50
Suspended Between Mirrors
Goldfinch60 said:
May that love be a reality instead of images Neville.
Andy
April 12th, 2023 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
May that love be a reality instead of images Neville.
Andy
April 12th, 2023 01:26
Suspended Between Mirrors
Bella Shepard said:
Ah, be careful what you wish for. I can only assume that his heart\'s desire fulfilled, he died a happy man. Sad, but beautifully told dear friend.
April 11th, 2023 13:55
Bella Shepard said:
Ah, be careful what you wish for. I can only assume that his heart\'s desire fulfilled, he died a happy man. Sad, but beautifully told dear friend.
April 11th, 2023 13:55
Suspended Between Mirrors
Fay Slimm. said:
A hunger for romantic antics to catch beauty unclothed can lead to a finalé so tragic I almost wept and at the same time started to laugh at your ever fertile imagination so expertly scribed mon ami and as ever I loved every line ...........x
April 11th, 2023 11:47
Fay Slimm. said:
A hunger for romantic antics to catch beauty unclothed can lead to a finalé so tragic I almost wept and at the same time started to laugh at your ever fertile imagination so expertly scribed mon ami and as ever I loved every line ...........x
April 11th, 2023 11:47
Suspended Between Mirrors
Accidental Poet said:
I believe that\'s called, \"falling in love\". 🙂
April 11th, 2023 06:54
Accidental Poet said:
I believe that\'s called, \"falling in love\". 🙂
April 11th, 2023 06:54
Suspended Between Mirrors
orchidee said:
Yes, it happened to me - I did this, and fell in the river! Doh!
Not that I was spying on KP. That would be too ghastly.
I read of a couple who wanted a foursome with Ken Barlow and Lulu. I would never recover if I saw any videos of it!
April 11th, 2023 03:59
orchidee said:
Yes, it happened to me - I did this, and fell in the river! Doh!
Not that I was spying on KP. That would be too ghastly.
I read of a couple who wanted a foursome with Ken Barlow and Lulu. I would never recover if I saw any videos of it!
April 11th, 2023 03:59
Woodland Rendezvous
orchidee said:
I would never see it - I would swoon before it happened! lol.
April 10th, 2023 10:20
orchidee said:
I would never see it - I would swoon before it happened! lol.
April 10th, 2023 10:20
Woodland Rendezvous
Accidental Poet said:
aah yes, how the fires within a man roar to life. Keep the fire extinguisher handy when writing scribblings such as this my friend. 😉
April 10th, 2023 10:13
Accidental Poet said:
aah yes, how the fires within a man roar to life. Keep the fire extinguisher handy when writing scribblings such as this my friend. 😉
April 10th, 2023 10:13
Woodland Rendezvous
Fay Slimm. said:
That moment of surrender to bewitchment where a ghostly woman appears to show naked temptation is methinks penned here with the need of a sequel dear Nev - - when lips are sipping from elf cups was he of the rendezvous only dreaming - - tell please did that magical scene end with him lusting for a grown woodland fairy or no - --- great stuff ........... x
April 10th, 2023 07:30
Fay Slimm. said:
That moment of surrender to bewitchment where a ghostly woman appears to show naked temptation is methinks penned here with the need of a sequel dear Nev - - when lips are sipping from elf cups was he of the rendezvous only dreaming - - tell please did that magical scene end with him lusting for a grown woodland fairy or no - --- great stuff ........... x
April 10th, 2023 07:30
Woodland Rendezvous
L. B. Mek said:
\'bathed, in a hollow
of sunly warmed dew ..\'
(this
that intoxication of worded eloquence
poetic elegance, imbued
in eroticism\'s, evergreen decadence)
mesmeric sensuality
in such a relatively short read
really well executed
I read and learn, Hyung
April 10th, 2023 06:13
L. B. Mek said:
\'bathed, in a hollow
of sunly warmed dew ..\'
(this
that intoxication of worded eloquence
poetic elegance, imbued
in eroticism\'s, evergreen decadence)
mesmeric sensuality
in such a relatively short read
really well executed
I read and learn, Hyung
April 10th, 2023 06:13
Upon Wanting to Die
L. B. Mek said:
(the amount of times
the writes we choose to share, feels in-sync
amazes me, Hyung
must be something in those grey clouds
we ponder beneath)
what is it about ending\'s, that intrigues
our imagination\'s muse, time n again
we ponder and boldly fantasize
yet
to glimpse our panicked faces, when merely
slipping, upon fate\'s banana skins
it makes one realise
that distance of theory, in aftermath
of our inevitable finite
is what really, entices us
running to escape
unwilling to comprehend, the weight
of our looming goodbyes:
\'I would surely
miss you, oh’ so very dearly ..
No doubt for the
eternity you think it offers ..\'
(your empathetic artistry
at its irresistible, subtle best)
April 10th, 2023 04:24
L. B. Mek said:
(the amount of times
the writes we choose to share, feels in-sync
amazes me, Hyung
must be something in those grey clouds
we ponder beneath)
what is it about ending\'s, that intrigues
our imagination\'s muse, time n again
we ponder and boldly fantasize
yet
to glimpse our panicked faces, when merely
slipping, upon fate\'s banana skins
it makes one realise
that distance of theory, in aftermath
of our inevitable finite
is what really, entices us
running to escape
unwilling to comprehend, the weight
of our looming goodbyes:
\'I would surely
miss you, oh’ so very dearly ..
No doubt for the
eternity you think it offers ..\'
(your empathetic artistry
at its irresistible, subtle best)
April 10th, 2023 04:24
Upon Wanting to Die
Bella Shepard said:
Such a difficult write dear friend, it is hard to understand a state of mind where life is so intolerable that death seems the answer to a prayer. The healthy brain cannot conceive of such a thing, and yet it does strike the vulnerable. You write so beautifully of the other, who will hold onto that person with compassion and understanding, until the dark cloud passes. Very powerful dear Nev!
April 8th, 2023 11:43
Bella Shepard said:
Such a difficult write dear friend, it is hard to understand a state of mind where life is so intolerable that death seems the answer to a prayer. The healthy brain cannot conceive of such a thing, and yet it does strike the vulnerable. You write so beautifully of the other, who will hold onto that person with compassion and understanding, until the dark cloud passes. Very powerful dear Nev!
April 8th, 2023 11:43
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