Comments received on poems by Neville
Flying on the Back of a Guilt Trip
Christina8 said:
Guilt is a tragic emotion---I have felt it many a time and it\'s destructive. Glad I don\'t deal with it anymore but many folks do. This is a wonderful descriptive write, N! C
February 9th, 2023 06:59
Christina8 said:
Guilt is a tragic emotion---I have felt it many a time and it\'s destructive. Glad I don\'t deal with it anymore but many folks do. This is a wonderful descriptive write, N! C
February 9th, 2023 06:59
Flying on the Back of a Guilt Trip
Fay Slimm. said:
Tragic indeed is the end of some unhappy souls where their end is just waiting to happen - told with clear and precise honesty and highlighting guilt as the reason for yet another sad \"accident\" maybe - -- a heart-tugger and no doubt about it mon ami...........x.
February 9th, 2023 06:08
Fay Slimm. said:
Tragic indeed is the end of some unhappy souls where their end is just waiting to happen - told with clear and precise honesty and highlighting guilt as the reason for yet another sad \"accident\" maybe - -- a heart-tugger and no doubt about it mon ami...........x.
February 9th, 2023 06:08
Flying on the Back of a Guilt Trip
Doggerel Dave said:
A tragic suicide pact....why must you continue to traumatize us like this, Nev?!
February 9th, 2023 05:17
Doggerel Dave said:
A tragic suicide pact....why must you continue to traumatize us like this, Nev?!
February 9th, 2023 05:17
Come Late July
Goldfinch60 said:
Being a grandfather is so wonderful Neville, may you enjoy the journey with your grandchild.
Andy
February 9th, 2023 02:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Being a grandfather is so wonderful Neville, may you enjoy the journey with your grandchild.
Andy
February 9th, 2023 02:51
Flying on the Back of a Guilt Trip
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Neville.
Andy
February 9th, 2023 02:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Neville.
Andy
February 9th, 2023 02:35
Flying on the Back of a Guilt Trip
orchidee said:
A fine poem N.
KP\'s always been an accident waiting to happen - and it\'s always happened! lol.
February 9th, 2023 02:30
orchidee said:
A fine poem N.
KP\'s always been an accident waiting to happen - and it\'s always happened! lol.
February 9th, 2023 02:30
Come Late July
Doggerel Dave said:
No marriage, no issue (happy with that) but I\'ve seen it in other new grandparent\'s eyes...only remains to say good luck to all involved and all the best, Nev.
February 8th, 2023 20:18
Doggerel Dave said:
No marriage, no issue (happy with that) but I\'ve seen it in other new grandparent\'s eyes...only remains to say good luck to all involved and all the best, Nev.
February 8th, 2023 20:18
Come Late July
Christina8 said:
What a beautiful poem about your arriving grandchild in July. I really liked \"I cannot stop my eyes from leaking diamonds\". This is truly a grand write!
February 8th, 2023 06:13
Christina8 said:
What a beautiful poem about your arriving grandchild in July. I really liked \"I cannot stop my eyes from leaking diamonds\". This is truly a grand write!
February 8th, 2023 06:13
Come Late July
arqios said:
Diamonds indeed! And 3 generations of joy. Can\'t hardly wait til July for that gracing moment and the poems that would come from that time.
February 8th, 2023 05:45
arqios said:
Diamonds indeed! And 3 generations of joy. Can\'t hardly wait til July for that gracing moment and the poems that would come from that time.
February 8th, 2023 05:45
Come Late July
Fay Slimm. said:
No news could beat that news dear Nev. and all good wishes for that exciting time in July when your life will be changed and charged with Grandfather love.............x
February 8th, 2023 04:17
Fay Slimm. said:
No news could beat that news dear Nev. and all good wishes for that exciting time in July when your life will be changed and charged with Grandfather love.............x
February 8th, 2023 04:17
Come Late July
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing
Especially like this line
I cannot stop
my eyes
from leaking
diamonds ..
Beautiful words there )
Nice for you , to become a grandfather
February 8th, 2023 03:51
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing
Especially like this line
I cannot stop
my eyes
from leaking
diamonds ..
Beautiful words there )
Nice for you , to become a grandfather
February 8th, 2023 03:51
Come Late July
orchidee said:
A lovely write N.
Meanwhile, there\'ll be no children for KP and I. It would be too horrific, too scary, to have any little KP\'s. lol. Fido never lets me have any \'ardour\' anyway. He says it only makes me swoon. lol.
I must \'get out more\' in me sheltered life!
February 8th, 2023 03:31
orchidee said:
A lovely write N.
Meanwhile, there\'ll be no children for KP and I. It would be too horrific, too scary, to have any little KP\'s. lol. Fido never lets me have any \'ardour\' anyway. He says it only makes me swoon. lol.
I must \'get out more\' in me sheltered life!
February 8th, 2023 03:31
Come Late July
Neville said:
Upon hearing from my daughter that I was to become a grandfather in the summer .. ❤️
February 8th, 2023 03:27
Neville said:
Upon hearing from my daughter that I was to become a grandfather in the summer .. ❤️
February 8th, 2023 03:27
Someplace Where There Are Whales
Doggerel Dave said:
Going to be overcrowded, I fear as in a few masterly lines, you\'ve stirred the interest of the masses, Nev.... Still, put me on the priority list or the wait list... Not going to see much of her at this rate... or have you already made a reservation away from the madding crowds...?🙂
February 7th, 2023 04:22
Doggerel Dave said:
Going to be overcrowded, I fear as in a few masterly lines, you\'ve stirred the interest of the masses, Nev.... Still, put me on the priority list or the wait list... Not going to see much of her at this rate... or have you already made a reservation away from the madding crowds...?🙂
February 7th, 2023 04:22
Someplace Where There Are Whales
Christina8 said:
My sentiments exactly....great write and I want to go on that picnic too! :-)
February 7th, 2023 03:39
Christina8 said:
My sentiments exactly....great write and I want to go on that picnic too! :-)
February 7th, 2023 03:39
Someplace Where There Are Whales
orchidee said:
Good write N.
KP is a beached whale - or beached trout! lol.
February 7th, 2023 03:10
orchidee said:
Good write N.
KP is a beached whale - or beached trout! lol.
February 7th, 2023 03:10
Someplace Where There Are Whales
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow - Nev. What an example of a five-line lesson of exposing much in few words. An intriguing nature-tale with a clever flip in its tail - - - or so I believe.................x
February 7th, 2023 02:43
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow - Nev. What an example of a five-line lesson of exposing much in few words. An intriguing nature-tale with a clever flip in its tail - - - or so I believe.................x
February 7th, 2023 02:43
Pre-date-Her
Doggerel Dave said:
I have a feeling for the folks in the latter half of your write, Nev: them as can mind their own business.....
February 6th, 2023 21:15
Doggerel Dave said:
I have a feeling for the folks in the latter half of your write, Nev: them as can mind their own business.....
February 6th, 2023 21:15
Pre-date-Her
Bella Shepard said:
Your analogy to a predator waiting patiently, stimulated by movement of it\'s prey is most engaging. Little do we know what lurks when we do not observe. Such a good write my friend.
February 6th, 2023 16:44
Bella Shepard said:
Your analogy to a predator waiting patiently, stimulated by movement of it\'s prey is most engaging. Little do we know what lurks when we do not observe. Such a good write my friend.
February 6th, 2023 16:44
Let’s Talk About the Weather For Once
Rocky Lagou said:
I adore this!
The way in which you breathe something special into each of your poems is amazing.
I feel like at the heart of small talk is always the weather. It\'s what comes most natural to us. But sometimes those small conversations can lead to a lifetime of love and admiration for one another. A seemingly trivial interaction can hold the key to a rich and intimate bond.
February 6th, 2023 10:49
Rocky Lagou said:
I adore this!
The way in which you breathe something special into each of your poems is amazing.
I feel like at the heart of small talk is always the weather. It\'s what comes most natural to us. But sometimes those small conversations can lead to a lifetime of love and admiration for one another. A seemingly trivial interaction can hold the key to a rich and intimate bond.
February 6th, 2023 10:49
Pre-date-Her
arqios said:
...\"pre-date\" that is quite an intriguing concept. That sounds almost quite like a functional screening process.
February 6th, 2023 07:54
arqios said:
...\"pre-date\" that is quite an intriguing concept. That sounds almost quite like a functional screening process.
February 6th, 2023 07:54
Pre-date-Her
orchidee said:
All I know is, KP waits like an old trout!
Bet you knew I was gonna say that. lol. It\'s the botox, you see.
February 6th, 2023 06:42
orchidee said:
All I know is, KP waits like an old trout!
Bet you knew I was gonna say that. lol. It\'s the botox, you see.
February 6th, 2023 06:42
Pre-date-Her
L. B. Mek said:
a beautifully picturesque scene
love the playful elements
couldn\'t help but be inspired to try
and scribble a feeble poetic reply
thank you Hyung, yet again
cheque\'s in da post
(vivid memento\'s burdened
with a twinning paradoxical
reservoir
of pooling significance..
see
those scenic recalling, reverie\'s
however idyllic, come served
aside a biting, searing
afterglow, resonance of that longing
to experience it all, afresh
anew
again n again, in a loop
of rewardingly effervescent
cyclicality..
\'once more, dear fate
take us back, once more...\')
February 6th, 2023 04:36
L. B. Mek said:
a beautifully picturesque scene
love the playful elements
couldn\'t help but be inspired to try
and scribble a feeble poetic reply
thank you Hyung, yet again
cheque\'s in da post
(vivid memento\'s burdened
with a twinning paradoxical
reservoir
of pooling significance..
see
those scenic recalling, reverie\'s
however idyllic, come served
aside a biting, searing
afterglow, resonance of that longing
to experience it all, afresh
anew
again n again, in a loop
of rewardingly effervescent
cyclicality..
\'once more, dear fate
take us back, once more...\')
February 6th, 2023 04:36
Pre-date-Her
Fay Slimm. said:
A wee peep into group excitement remembered and recounted with expert ability in just a few intriguing lines. Fantastic word-play again dear Sir N............x
February 6th, 2023 04:36
Fay Slimm. said:
A wee peep into group excitement remembered and recounted with expert ability in just a few intriguing lines. Fantastic word-play again dear Sir N............x
February 6th, 2023 04:36
Let’s Talk About the Weather For Once
L. B. Mek said:
\'and smiling vaguely\'
that smile, blossoming
from a heart, in a most
contemplatively melancholic
frame
of remembrance and appreciation
..
for those who know, Hyung
these words will hit home
deeper, than any love song...
(Brilliant!)
February 6th, 2023 04:24
L. B. Mek said:
\'and smiling vaguely\'
that smile, blossoming
from a heart, in a most
contemplatively melancholic
frame
of remembrance and appreciation
..
for those who know, Hyung
these words will hit home
deeper, than any love song...
(Brilliant!)
February 6th, 2023 04:24
Her Thing About Blue Eyes
L. B. Mek said:
\'she
was a poem
broken\'
I\'m sorry, but this line by itself
is a complete poem
what arrangement of wording
so many of us wannabees
would have rushed it as \'broken poem\'
and render it a meaningless line...
as-ever, dear Poet supreme
I so gratefully, read and learn
thank you! Hyung
(oh and yes, I read the whole
of this wonderfully poignant poem
lol)
February 6th, 2023 04:19
L. B. Mek said:
\'she
was a poem
broken\'
I\'m sorry, but this line by itself
is a complete poem
what arrangement of wording
so many of us wannabees
would have rushed it as \'broken poem\'
and render it a meaningless line...
as-ever, dear Poet supreme
I so gratefully, read and learn
thank you! Hyung
(oh and yes, I read the whole
of this wonderfully poignant poem
lol)
February 6th, 2023 04:19
Let’s Talk About the Weather For Once
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Neville, when I got up before dawn this morning the moon was shining brightly starting my day with wonder.
Andy
February 6th, 2023 03:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Neville, when I got up before dawn this morning the moon was shining brightly starting my day with wonder.
Andy
February 6th, 2023 03:14
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