Comments received on poems by Neville
Woke
L. B. Mek said:
from title, I was thinking a sociopolitical commentary poem
and then I was pleasantly surprised
to find a scene from a stage play
and then, after contemplation
realised your wordplay
and that this actually is
insightful, commentary
but, a deep - deep reading
of those core, root causes
showcasing
how invaded we feel, in our own beds..
a complex write, I can barely scratch
thank you! Hyung
May 22nd, 2023 03:20
L. B. Mek said:
from title, I was thinking a sociopolitical commentary poem
and then I was pleasantly surprised
to find a scene from a stage play
and then, after contemplation
realised your wordplay
and that this actually is
insightful, commentary
but, a deep - deep reading
of those core, root causes
showcasing
how invaded we feel, in our own beds..
a complex write, I can barely scratch
thank you! Hyung
May 22nd, 2023 03:20
The Simple Art of Wondering
Goldfinch60 said:
The mystery of life is there for us all to explore and enjoy Neville.
Andy
May 22nd, 2023 02:25
Goldfinch60 said:
The mystery of life is there for us all to explore and enjoy Neville.
Andy
May 22nd, 2023 02:25
The Simple Art of Wondering
orchidee said:
Good write N.
You know I\'m gonna say this - it\'s a mystery why I married KP! lol.
May 22nd, 2023 01:55
orchidee said:
Good write N.
You know I\'m gonna say this - it\'s a mystery why I married KP! lol.
May 22nd, 2023 01:55
All Good Things
arqios said:
Good to all that good may bring goodness birthing like Spring eternally.
May 22nd, 2023 00:41
arqios said:
Good to all that good may bring goodness birthing like Spring eternally.
May 22nd, 2023 00:41
All Good Things
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Whether influenced by the Bible or Alexander Pope, this is a good one.
…”hope
itself, shall always spring eternal ..”
Thank you for brightening my Sunday. ☀️
Laura🌻
May 21st, 2023 09:24
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Whether influenced by the Bible or Alexander Pope, this is a good one.
…”hope
itself, shall always spring eternal ..”
Thank you for brightening my Sunday. ☀️
Laura🌻
May 21st, 2023 09:24
All Good Things
orchidee said:
I don;t quite get the hang of it. I followed the rainbow to its end, then fell off the edge of the world. Aiiieeeeee! Do ya hear me falling off?! heehee.
What\'s that? You wish a black hole would swallow me up?
May 21st, 2023 02:24
orchidee said:
I don;t quite get the hang of it. I followed the rainbow to its end, then fell off the edge of the world. Aiiieeeeee! Do ya hear me falling off?! heehee.
What\'s that? You wish a black hole would swallow me up?
May 21st, 2023 02:24
All Good Things
orchidee said:
Your title and poem here have inspired me for my next poem \'All Bad Things\' subtitled \'Life with KP\' (of course). lol.
May 21st, 2023 02:22
orchidee said:
Your title and poem here have inspired me for my next poem \'All Bad Things\' subtitled \'Life with KP\' (of course). lol.
May 21st, 2023 02:22
Undeniably Piqued
Goldfinch60 said:
Some are like that in not letting go but I am sure the one for you is out there and you would not let her go.
Andy
May 21st, 2023 01:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Some are like that in not letting go but I am sure the one for you is out there and you would not let her go.
Andy
May 21st, 2023 01:22
Woke
Goldfinch60 said:
May those snowflakes melt and turn into warmth once more Neville.
Andy
May 21st, 2023 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
May those snowflakes melt and turn into warmth once more Neville.
Andy
May 21st, 2023 01:13
All Good Things
Bobby O said:
On sea on land in the air. It’s like a continuum , a rainbow if not exactly a dream ( and it might be) is at least a stand in gif one type, or a metaphor for all types, or the grandest of all?, the ultimate promise of all we could ask and at it end we look to the realms where a more humble wish lives?
Anyway, I liked it. You are too cool and that is true very often. Dig!!! Miles Davis also gets that same review. Hallowed ground.
May 21st, 2023 00:50
Bobby O said:
On sea on land in the air. It’s like a continuum , a rainbow if not exactly a dream ( and it might be) is at least a stand in gif one type, or a metaphor for all types, or the grandest of all?, the ultimate promise of all we could ask and at it end we look to the realms where a more humble wish lives?
Anyway, I liked it. You are too cool and that is true very often. Dig!!! Miles Davis also gets that same review. Hallowed ground.
May 21st, 2023 00:50
Woke
Parisab said:
The poem was engaging and I actually wished for the sun coming out in the morning. Alas “the snow flakes”…
May 20th, 2023 17:48
Parisab said:
The poem was engaging and I actually wished for the sun coming out in the morning. Alas “the snow flakes”…
May 20th, 2023 17:48
Undeniably Piqued
MendedFences27 said:
Oh, to climb to the mountaintop and find there is no way down. Stuck there forever.
Difficult to compare a woman to a mountain, but you have done it beautifully. Introduce a few clouds to add to her reticence and the picture clears. Hope you were able to climb off of this one. - Phil A.
May 20th, 2023 16:20
MendedFences27 said:
Oh, to climb to the mountaintop and find there is no way down. Stuck there forever.
Difficult to compare a woman to a mountain, but you have done it beautifully. Introduce a few clouds to add to her reticence and the picture clears. Hope you were able to climb off of this one. - Phil A.
May 20th, 2023 16:20
Undeniably Piqued
Bella Shepard said:
Perhaps everyone has a facade that hides their true nature. It\'s only when a relationship becomes really comfortable that we find the good or the bad behind it. The question then is how to disentangle from the disagreeable. I think you captured it perfectly.
May 20th, 2023 14:30
Bella Shepard said:
Perhaps everyone has a facade that hides their true nature. It\'s only when a relationship becomes really comfortable that we find the good or the bad behind it. The question then is how to disentangle from the disagreeable. I think you captured it perfectly.
May 20th, 2023 14:30
Woke
MendedFences27 said:
I found words in this that have a political connotation, here in the U.S. \"Woke, walls, snowflakes,\" and to a lesser degree, \"complaints and lawsuits.\" I think its stronger sense though is that of a final breakup between lovers. The two could be merged here, in the most skillful way. Duality is always a plus , poetically. At any rate a truly gritty poem, and most enjoyed by me. - Phil A.
May 20th, 2023 11:22
MendedFences27 said:
I found words in this that have a political connotation, here in the U.S. \"Woke, walls, snowflakes,\" and to a lesser degree, \"complaints and lawsuits.\" I think its stronger sense though is that of a final breakup between lovers. The two could be merged here, in the most skillful way. Duality is always a plus , poetically. At any rate a truly gritty poem, and most enjoyed by me. - Phil A.
May 20th, 2023 11:22
Woke
Jerry Reynolds said:
The wrath of their Xs with their legal teams. Good one, Neville.
May 20th, 2023 09:51
Jerry Reynolds said:
The wrath of their Xs with their legal teams. Good one, Neville.
May 20th, 2023 09:51
Undeniably Piqued
Fay Slimm. said:
Hard to be strangled by one thought to be shy - -- am glad she appeared only in the lines of your vivid fancy for females who cling to sinking ships.....x
May 19th, 2023 13:42
Fay Slimm. said:
Hard to be strangled by one thought to be shy - -- am glad she appeared only in the lines of your vivid fancy for females who cling to sinking ships.....x
May 19th, 2023 13:42
Undeniably Piqued
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Neville.
The clinging vine tender in spring by fall you are struggling for air.
May 19th, 2023 08:00
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Neville.
The clinging vine tender in spring by fall you are struggling for air.
May 19th, 2023 08:00
Undeniably Piqued
Christina8 said:
Love this write...yes, there are some women that will refuse to let go.. hope this is not a true story. Fantastic work, N! x
May 19th, 2023 07:15
Christina8 said:
Love this write...yes, there are some women that will refuse to let go.. hope this is not a true story. Fantastic work, N! x
May 19th, 2023 07:15
Undeniably Piqued
orchidee said:
How come you know all these details about KP?! lol.
May 19th, 2023 04:02
orchidee said:
How come you know all these details about KP?! lol.
May 19th, 2023 04:02
Undeniably Piqued
L. B. Mek said:
\'Pandora\'
as our our Poetic, dreamed
ideal...
(another exemplar work
as legacy
of your poetic subtlety\'s
efficacy)
what variety you\'ve offered us this week, Hyung
thank you!
May 19th, 2023 03:13
L. B. Mek said:
\'Pandora\'
as our our Poetic, dreamed
ideal...
(another exemplar work
as legacy
of your poetic subtlety\'s
efficacy)
what variety you\'ve offered us this week, Hyung
thank you!
May 19th, 2023 03:13
Sans Echo’s
L. B. Mek said:
\'But those were the Rayban days\'
shades of mercy, granted
by societal restraint
and a willingness, to offer
a consideration
to alternate perspectives
back, when
Shakespeare\'s poetic genius
represented, an echo
of that greatness, humanity
still dared, to dream
and aspire towards, bravely
magnificently!
(love these worded prayer
and cry for a call to arms
for that we witness dissipating
within each, sensationalised
blinking bulleting of pseudo
relevance)
May 19th, 2023 03:07
L. B. Mek said:
\'But those were the Rayban days\'
shades of mercy, granted
by societal restraint
and a willingness, to offer
a consideration
to alternate perspectives
back, when
Shakespeare\'s poetic genius
represented, an echo
of that greatness, humanity
still dared, to dream
and aspire towards, bravely
magnificently!
(love these worded prayer
and cry for a call to arms
for that we witness dissipating
within each, sensationalised
blinking bulleting of pseudo
relevance)
May 19th, 2023 03:07
Sans Echo’s
Goldfinch60 said:
That is so right \'back in the day\' but in my lfe all was wonderful.
Andy
May 19th, 2023 03:02
Goldfinch60 said:
That is so right \'back in the day\' but in my lfe all was wonderful.
Andy
May 19th, 2023 03:02
A Handful of Monsters
L. B. Mek said:
(so true wise Poet, thank you!)
soon, it will be a hard task
to find anyone, not exhibiting
narcissistic tendencies
in society, a legacy of modernity
consumed, by insular
mirage warped, selfhood fallacies
... far too, soon
for me to ink these words, without
sighing, a stunted mourning
for all that hope
humanity, once represented and
promised
oh how we love, to curate our own
cyclic, tragedies
May 19th, 2023 02:57
L. B. Mek said:
(so true wise Poet, thank you!)
soon, it will be a hard task
to find anyone, not exhibiting
narcissistic tendencies
in society, a legacy of modernity
consumed, by insular
mirage warped, selfhood fallacies
... far too, soon
for me to ink these words, without
sighing, a stunted mourning
for all that hope
humanity, once represented and
promised
oh how we love, to curate our own
cyclic, tragedies
May 19th, 2023 02:57
Celsius Rising
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(careful, as
in that volcano eruption
of instant
escapist, sensual gratification
is a promise
of lava, proximity decimation
if unprepared
we\'ll toil, in scolding consequence
best, maybe
to thread carefully, step carefully
never blind lunges
unless we are ready, to dissolve
that volcanic ash
as an ingredient, in our evolution\'s
fertilising experiences...)
May 19th, 2023 02:50
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(careful, as
in that volcano eruption
of instant
escapist, sensual gratification
is a promise
of lava, proximity decimation
if unprepared
we\'ll toil, in scolding consequence
best, maybe
to thread carefully, step carefully
never blind lunges
unless we are ready, to dissolve
that volcanic ash
as an ingredient, in our evolution\'s
fertilising experiences...)
May 19th, 2023 02:50
Sans Echo’s
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
\"Sans Echo\'s\" is a captivating poem that offers a critical commentary on the societal values and a bygone cultural climate of era.
May 18th, 2023 15:20
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
\"Sans Echo\'s\" is a captivating poem that offers a critical commentary on the societal values and a bygone cultural climate of era.
May 18th, 2023 15:20
Sans Echo’s
arqios said:
I could imagine lengthened and \'varnished\' lashes gluing themselves to the RayBan lenses... that would be ticklish.
May 18th, 2023 10:39
arqios said:
I could imagine lengthened and \'varnished\' lashes gluing themselves to the RayBan lenses... that would be ticklish.
May 18th, 2023 10:39
Sans Echo’s
MendedFences27 said:
One time, I dropped some \"acid\"....
and it burnt a hole in my bellbottoms.
I was busy at the time trying to \"foster grants\" to my college fund. Planned on attending UC - Santa Barbara, the best \"party school\" in America, but Nam got in the way, and I ended up in Montreal. Rented an old mini-van and drove with friends across to Aberta. That\'s when I heard \"Birds singing in the dark- Rainy dawn.\" Oh yeah, I stole that from Jack Kerouac. I don\'t know why, but who needs a reason. Live free or die!! - Phil A.
May 18th, 2023 08:29
MendedFences27 said:
One time, I dropped some \"acid\"....
and it burnt a hole in my bellbottoms.
I was busy at the time trying to \"foster grants\" to my college fund. Planned on attending UC - Santa Barbara, the best \"party school\" in America, but Nam got in the way, and I ended up in Montreal. Rented an old mini-van and drove with friends across to Aberta. That\'s when I heard \"Birds singing in the dark- Rainy dawn.\" Oh yeah, I stole that from Jack Kerouac. I don\'t know why, but who needs a reason. Live free or die!! - Phil A.
May 18th, 2023 08:29
Sans Echo’s
Fay Slimm. said:
Living it up on someone else\'s offer of getting high on acid was the rage but events can leave echoes - - for though heavy mascara has paled we still get throw backs looked at by those who have their personal reasons for hiding behind shades - -- Whoo ! -- am glad that\'s off my chest before today\'s chores .........x
May 18th, 2023 02:53
Fay Slimm. said:
Living it up on someone else\'s offer of getting high on acid was the rage but events can leave echoes - - for though heavy mascara has paled we still get throw backs looked at by those who have their personal reasons for hiding behind shades - -- Whoo ! -- am glad that\'s off my chest before today\'s chores .........x
May 18th, 2023 02:53
Sans Echo’s
orchidee said:
All I know from this, is that KP flutters her false eyelashes at me, but it don\'t get her very far.... lol.
I will never unravel the meaning of some poems. Doh!
May 18th, 2023 01:48
orchidee said:
All I know from this, is that KP flutters her false eyelashes at me, but it don\'t get her very far.... lol.
I will never unravel the meaning of some poems. Doh!
May 18th, 2023 01:48
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