Comments received on poems by Neville
When the Walls Were Magnolia
orchidee said:
Ahh, dear poets - some don\'t understand my nuttiness! They would if they were married to KP. lol.
February 24th, 2023 06:49
orchidee said:
Ahh, dear poets - some don\'t understand my nuttiness! They would if they were married to KP. lol.
February 24th, 2023 06:49
When the Walls Were Magnolia
Christina8 said:
A beautiful remembrance so full of detail I can see it in my mind. Thanks for sharing it with us! Christina
February 24th, 2023 06:28
Christina8 said:
A beautiful remembrance so full of detail I can see it in my mind. Thanks for sharing it with us! Christina
February 24th, 2023 06:28
When the Walls Were Magnolia
L. B. Mek said:
(Hyung, have you read Possession by A. S. Bryatt?
these Poem resonates with that tale..)
\'stood formal proud ..\'
wonderful imagery, a reflection
of not just the scenery
but a window into the poetic voice\'s
perspective, in that Time
when all was bright field, horizons
and rooms, echoed life\'s
enamouring zest flor laughter\'s gifts
(a great write, dear cherished Poet
rich in nuanced detail
I was immersed in a time n place
from first syllable to last line)
February 24th, 2023 04:21
L. B. Mek said:
(Hyung, have you read Possession by A. S. Bryatt?
these Poem resonates with that tale..)
\'stood formal proud ..\'
wonderful imagery, a reflection
of not just the scenery
but a window into the poetic voice\'s
perspective, in that Time
when all was bright field, horizons
and rooms, echoed life\'s
enamouring zest flor laughter\'s gifts
(a great write, dear cherished Poet
rich in nuanced detail
I was immersed in a time n place
from first syllable to last line)
February 24th, 2023 04:21
Checking In
L. B. Mek said:
reads like a dotting father
watching that inevitable, distance
sprouting between him
and that precious gift, in his life..
(such a lovely tone to your wording and rhythm
an echo of life\'s, unfortunate inevitable)
thank you Hyung, a subtly poignant read
(sorry if I interpreted it wrong my friend)
February 24th, 2023 04:12
L. B. Mek said:
reads like a dotting father
watching that inevitable, distance
sprouting between him
and that precious gift, in his life..
(such a lovely tone to your wording and rhythm
an echo of life\'s, unfortunate inevitable)
thank you Hyung, a subtly poignant read
(sorry if I interpreted it wrong my friend)
February 24th, 2023 04:12
Taken From a Diary Found
L. B. Mek said:
a sobering read, Hyung
a bleak tale
that brings up memories
we all have repressed, far
far
in our cupboards of ashamed regret...
(youth\'s vigour, as unashamed ignorance
transmuted
by life\'s bruises, as old age\'s haunting mirrors of shame..
funny
we demand to be treated with respect
yet seldom do we recognise how easily
cruelty, comes to us so naturally innate
devil\'s in those stains, we fail to witness
as our very own, handiwork of callous
indifference)
February 24th, 2023 04:06
L. B. Mek said:
a sobering read, Hyung
a bleak tale
that brings up memories
we all have repressed, far
far
in our cupboards of ashamed regret...
(youth\'s vigour, as unashamed ignorance
transmuted
by life\'s bruises, as old age\'s haunting mirrors of shame..
funny
we demand to be treated with respect
yet seldom do we recognise how easily
cruelty, comes to us so naturally innate
devil\'s in those stains, we fail to witness
as our very own, handiwork of callous
indifference)
February 24th, 2023 04:06
When the Walls Were Magnolia
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville.
Folk write \'I love you\' letters.
I write \'I hate ya\' letters to KP. I\'m horrible to her. lol.
When I\'m on holiday alone, I send her postcards saying \'Glad you\'re not here: I won\'t hurry back!\' heehee.
February 24th, 2023 03:22
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville.
Folk write \'I love you\' letters.
I write \'I hate ya\' letters to KP. I\'m horrible to her. lol.
When I\'m on holiday alone, I send her postcards saying \'Glad you\'re not here: I won\'t hurry back!\' heehee.
February 24th, 2023 03:22
When the Walls Were Magnolia
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotion laden words Neville.
Andy
February 24th, 2023 03:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotion laden words Neville.
Andy
February 24th, 2023 03:14
A Brief Inconvenience
Bella Shepard said:
I guess if you\'re going to let him down, don\'t waste your ammo, get \'im with the first shot. This is an \"Ouchie\", and painful as it is, a really good write my friend. May your days be sunnier, you deserve much better.
February 23rd, 2023 12:05
Bella Shepard said:
I guess if you\'re going to let him down, don\'t waste your ammo, get \'im with the first shot. This is an \"Ouchie\", and painful as it is, a really good write my friend. May your days be sunnier, you deserve much better.
February 23rd, 2023 12:05
A Brief Inconvenience
Laura🌻 said:
Dear Neville,
Wow…this one took my breath away for multiple reasons.
Laura 🌻
February 23rd, 2023 10:11
Laura🌻 said:
Dear Neville,
Wow…this one took my breath away for multiple reasons.
Laura 🌻
February 23rd, 2023 10:11
A Brief Inconvenience
Christina8 said:
Oh that\'s terrible! I saw your note and sheesh!!! i bet that is a day you\'ll not soon forget! C
February 23rd, 2023 09:18
Christina8 said:
Oh that\'s terrible! I saw your note and sheesh!!! i bet that is a day you\'ll not soon forget! C
February 23rd, 2023 09:18
A Brief Inconvenience
Doggerel Dave said:
Really? He took the subtle hint?
Wot a sensitive soul......
Thanks, Nev for exposing such frankness, in all probability resulting in much trauma and numerous visits to a psychiatrist.....
February 23rd, 2023 03:33
Doggerel Dave said:
Really? He took the subtle hint?
Wot a sensitive soul......
Thanks, Nev for exposing such frankness, in all probability resulting in much trauma and numerous visits to a psychiatrist.....
February 23rd, 2023 03:33
Checking In
Fay Slimm. said:
Indeed let departures be brief for those who checking in find love waiting again for exchanges. An insightfully gentle write our Nev......x
February 22nd, 2023 05:35
Fay Slimm. said:
Indeed let departures be brief for those who checking in find love waiting again for exchanges. An insightfully gentle write our Nev......x
February 22nd, 2023 05:35
Checking In
Christina8 said:
Very detailed, I enjoyed it! Those words she left there at the table were yours to devour.....how sweet!
February 22nd, 2023 05:19
Christina8 said:
Very detailed, I enjoyed it! Those words she left there at the table were yours to devour.....how sweet!
February 22nd, 2023 05:19
Checking In
orchidee said:
Words? I never say anything to KP. I can never get a word in! lol.
February 22nd, 2023 02:56
orchidee said:
Words? I never say anything to KP. I can never get a word in! lol.
February 22nd, 2023 02:56
It Should Never Happen To a VetÂ
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotive words Neville and so very true, they get forgotten in life after they have given all for the country.
Andy
February 22nd, 2023 01:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotive words Neville and so very true, they get forgotten in life after they have given all for the country.
Andy
February 22nd, 2023 01:57
Taken From a Diary Found
Goldfinch60 said:
A lady the you will always remember Neville.
Andy
February 22nd, 2023 01:52
Goldfinch60 said:
A lady the you will always remember Neville.
Andy
February 22nd, 2023 01:52
Taken From a Diary Found
orchidee said:
Or - you found my old dairy? I thought I binned it! lol.
February 21st, 2023 05:31
orchidee said:
Or - you found my old dairy? I thought I binned it! lol.
February 21st, 2023 05:31
Taken From a Diary Found
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah yes - - she be the one to remember as writ in a time back when and now resurrected versed so appealingly fresh................x.
February 21st, 2023 03:47
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah yes - - she be the one to remember as writ in a time back when and now resurrected versed so appealingly fresh................x.
February 21st, 2023 03:47
Taken From a Diary Found
mvvenkataraman said:
A woman can transform a man\'s life,
Or cause severe harm to give strife,
She can make him forever rejoice
By having at his side equipoise,
Or she can make him have displeasure,
With agony that God even can\'t measure!
February 21st, 2023 03:35
mvvenkataraman said:
A woman can transform a man\'s life,
Or cause severe harm to give strife,
She can make him forever rejoice
By having at his side equipoise,
Or she can make him have displeasure,
With agony that God even can\'t measure!
February 21st, 2023 03:35
Taken From a Diary Found
Doggerel Dave said:
Get away with it in the stiff canteen....?
Better than the mile high rub....?
The stuff risqué fantasies are made of, Nev (risqué as in risky......).🙂
February 21st, 2023 03:24
Doggerel Dave said:
Get away with it in the stiff canteen....?
Better than the mile high rub....?
The stuff risqué fantasies are made of, Nev (risqué as in risky......).🙂
February 21st, 2023 03:24
Taken From a Diary Found
orchidee said:
I\'m gonna dash to meet her! Though it will cause me several swoons. I can\'t take Fido along with me. He will quench any ardour, dampen any excitement, etc. lol.
February 21st, 2023 03:06
orchidee said:
I\'m gonna dash to meet her! Though it will cause me several swoons. I can\'t take Fido along with me. He will quench any ardour, dampen any excitement, etc. lol.
February 21st, 2023 03:06
It Should Never Happen To a VetÂ
Christina8 said:
Vets are often forgotten here in america as well. There is a charity to stop veteran suicides. Sad poem but well done!
February 20th, 2023 08:42
Christina8 said:
Vets are often forgotten here in america as well. There is a charity to stop veteran suicides. Sad poem but well done!
February 20th, 2023 08:42
It Should Never Happen To a VetÂ
Fay Slimm. said:
Vets of any war are often forgotten - -- shame on the system that uses and then refuses responsibility - -- makes your heart cry out for justice dont it mon ami. ?
February 20th, 2023 04:59
Fay Slimm. said:
Vets of any war are often forgotten - -- shame on the system that uses and then refuses responsibility - -- makes your heart cry out for justice dont it mon ami. ?
February 20th, 2023 04:59
It Should Never Happen To a VetÂ
L. B. Mek said:
reality\'s sobering, unpoetic
essential Poesy
as exemplary, conduit
spotlighting our ugly, that
we so try to pretend and hide
in our convolutedly bankrupt
society...
thank you! dear Poet
for not letting us get away with it
February 20th, 2023 04:13
L. B. Mek said:
reality\'s sobering, unpoetic
essential Poesy
as exemplary, conduit
spotlighting our ugly, that
we so try to pretend and hide
in our convolutedly bankrupt
society...
thank you! dear Poet
for not letting us get away with it
February 20th, 2023 04:13
Two Odd Numbers
L. B. Mek said:
Heinz and Kama Sutra
what a cocktail of sensuality
to word, with such vividity
our \'messy\' in love
lovemaking, to be more precise
beyond the physical, even
such a fun read, Hyung
and indeed, opposites
do magnetise
our pulsating, attractions..
February 20th, 2023 04:09
L. B. Mek said:
Heinz and Kama Sutra
what a cocktail of sensuality
to word, with such vividity
our \'messy\' in love
lovemaking, to be more precise
beyond the physical, even
such a fun read, Hyung
and indeed, opposites
do magnetise
our pulsating, attractions..
February 20th, 2023 04:09
Redundant Crows
L. B. Mek said:
\'murmerations\'
that\'s such refined imagery
a word anchoring an entire poem
I bow to your mastery, Hyung
I read and learn
February 20th, 2023 04:04
L. B. Mek said:
\'murmerations\'
that\'s such refined imagery
a word anchoring an entire poem
I bow to your mastery, Hyung
I read and learn
February 20th, 2023 04:04
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