Comments received on poems by Neville



Some things are Just Not Right
Fay Slimm. said:

That list is significantly versed as an implicit warning that so much recorded evil needs always to be in the front of our minds .. An explosive reminder that such actions and attitudes are no way to gain love and peace - - - thanks a load for this write my friend.

April 26th, 2022 07:21

Some things are Just Not Right
L. B. Mek said:

an important write, dear Poet!
this
a listing of murderous
intent
and divisive, hate\'s
sinister, roots..
no
we must never forget and pretend
that they\'re all some nightmare
form a past
far removed
from our daily reality..
like
how the world press, pretend
Ukraine, is the only active war
on our planet
when in reality, its just the one
that\'s most profitable
to report about...!
yes, we must never
forget
and deny those harsh realities
of life..

April 26th, 2022 06:12

Some things are Just Not Right
Distant View said:

No, some things are not right at all, but they are still with us. Danger lurks. Some dangers we can avoid, others, sometimes, we cannot.

April 26th, 2022 06:04

Some things are Just Not Right
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

So confusing .. the things that happen in this world .. when they shouldn’t

April 26th, 2022 04:32

Some things are Just Not Right
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Their not right .. a good writing .. if only things were different and such things didn’t exist .

April 26th, 2022 04:31

Wind Dancer .. a Haiku
Goldfinch60 said:

Kites are so wonderful to see, they fly over our croquet lawn quite regularly.

Andy

April 26th, 2022 00:21

Wind Dancer .. a Haiku
MendedFences27 said:

Dancing in the wind. Somewhere off a cliff I imagine. Free to be \"wild.\" A scene you described poetically. Nice one. - Phil A.

April 25th, 2022 19:29

Wind Dancer .. a Haiku
dusk arising said:

Take me away from this cruel and battering torment of modern life and float me high on natures chariot wind that i may know again elemental joy anf freedom.

Those simple things hold such meaningful reward.


April 25th, 2022 12:49

Wind Dancer .. a Haiku
Rocky Lagou said:

\"Without a care,\" ahh. What a blessing it is to be problem-free, no stress or worries, loving your imagery!


April 25th, 2022 10:16

Wind Dancer .. a Haiku
L. B. Mek said:

reminds me of one of keats\', letters
only distilled and concentrated
to its true poetic, eloquent form..
\'a tipsy Haiku, like those dancing
kites
lost, in those winds of life..\'..
such an immersive read, thank you!
dear Poet supreme

April 25th, 2022 07:00

Wind Dancer .. a Haiku
Christina8 said:

Very nicely written! Ah...those primrose banks......if only spring would spring up where I live!

April 25th, 2022 06:08

Wind Dancer .. a Haiku
spilleronsheet said:

A majestic scene cheering my heart inside…and all praises to capture in a haiku…its too difficult to compose one…wonderful dear Neville….

April 25th, 2022 05:51

Wind Dancer .. a Haiku
Draven said:

Whimsical and nicely written. I love a good haiku.

April 25th, 2022 05:43

Wind Dancer .. a Haiku
Accidental Poet said:

A very lifting write today N. 😎

April 25th, 2022 05:10

Wind Dancer .. a Haiku
Rozina said:

A spring vision Neville? Nice.

April 25th, 2022 04:26

Wind Dancer .. a Haiku
Fay Slimm. said:

To see on a clear day those dancing sky-surfers fills poetic hearts with words that writers like yourself bring easy to life - - a breath of fresh air Nev. to this reader\'s return. Thanking you muchly.

April 25th, 2022 04:20

Wind Dancer .. a Haiku
orchidee said:

A fine write N.

April 25th, 2022 03:07

Inside Her Pants #2
Goldfinch60 said:

Good fun write Neville.

Andy

April 25th, 2022 00:39

Inside Her Pants #2
MendedFences27 said:

A funny place to be keeping your pets
even if one is Man\'s Best Friend. But since you\'re in \"heaven\" I guess I\'ll be leaving you now. Had a good chuckle though. - Phil A.


April 24th, 2022 20:19

Inside Her Pants #2
Rozina said:

Haha my goodness!

April 24th, 2022 17:39

Inside Her Pants #2
Fay Slimm. said:

What a picture of sheer delight to intrigue my eyes on returning to this pleasant site where pants and purrs make pups and kits sound like music from heaven - - was fooled at first by the clever usage of duel meanings but am smiling very big here mon ami..............x

April 24th, 2022 15:57

Inside Her Pants #2
SureshG said:

a puppy here, a pussy there
no wonder you find pleasure, everywhere

April 24th, 2022 10:49

What the Drunken Farmer Said
Accidental Poet said:

Believe, and you shall see. 😉

April 24th, 2022 09:08

Inside Her Pants #2
dusk arising said:

There\'s something about these small furry animals - ya just can\'t leave \'em alone can ya.

April 24th, 2022 06:44

Inside Her Pants #2
spilleronsheet said:

Hahaaa…lol


April 24th, 2022 04:42

Inside Her Pants #2
Paul Bell said:

Sounds like my kind of girl, only spoiled by her shotgun father.

April 24th, 2022 04:32

Inside Her Pants #2
ChrisLyn🕊 said:

Funny 😄

April 24th, 2022 03:48

Inside Her Pants #2
reidster said:

Ha, I loved this. Nice

April 24th, 2022 03:45

Inside Her Pants #2
orchidee said:

It was not Fido! oohh lol.

April 24th, 2022 02:51

What the Drunken Farmer Said
Goldfinch60 said:

But she may be there......

Andy

April 24th, 2022 00:41



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