Comments received on poems by Neville
Mark Well the Purpose of Night
Bella Shepard said:
Tis true that the brain is more busy durning the night when we sleep, than when we are awake, storing wonderful memories of our days, that we may retrieve and relive once again. This poem has such a gentle touch, I can almost hear Michael Crawford singing \"Music of Night\" in the background. Exquisite dear friend!
May 3rd, 2023 13:09
Bella Shepard said:
Tis true that the brain is more busy durning the night when we sleep, than when we are awake, storing wonderful memories of our days, that we may retrieve and relive once again. This poem has such a gentle touch, I can almost hear Michael Crawford singing \"Music of Night\" in the background. Exquisite dear friend!
May 3rd, 2023 13:09
Are We Nearly There Yet
Fay Slimm. said:
A telling question your title here highlights dear Sir - - methinks after romps in hotel rooms with maybe a dram or two before play no wonder they\'re not looking for constructive answers - another intriguingly canny read ............ x
May 3rd, 2023 09:52
Fay Slimm. said:
A telling question your title here highlights dear Sir - - methinks after romps in hotel rooms with maybe a dram or two before play no wonder they\'re not looking for constructive answers - another intriguingly canny read ............ x
May 3rd, 2023 09:52
Are We Nearly There Yet
orchidee said:
Dunno if we\'re nearly there yet. Where we going?! Do shut up Orchi. lol.
May 3rd, 2023 01:48
orchidee said:
Dunno if we\'re nearly there yet. Where we going?! Do shut up Orchi. lol.
May 3rd, 2023 01:48
Mark Well the Purpose of Night
MendedFences27 said:
Dreams of love as \"the purpose of the night.\" Could anything be more purposeful? A wonderful ode to the mystery of the night. Protected by the lack of light they are\" invisible\" \"ghosts\" \"dancing on water.\"
For all of the darkness the images are crystal clear and brought to fruition by your last line. Your poem is a dream come true. Beautiful! - Phil A.
May 2nd, 2023 21:30
MendedFences27 said:
Dreams of love as \"the purpose of the night.\" Could anything be more purposeful? A wonderful ode to the mystery of the night. Protected by the lack of light they are\" invisible\" \"ghosts\" \"dancing on water.\"
For all of the darkness the images are crystal clear and brought to fruition by your last line. Your poem is a dream come true. Beautiful! - Phil A.
May 2nd, 2023 21:30
Mark Well the Purpose of Night
arqios said:
To slumber whence sleep may be found is a use of night that should it be lost leaves lingering fright.
May 2nd, 2023 17:52
arqios said:
To slumber whence sleep may be found is a use of night that should it be lost leaves lingering fright.
May 2nd, 2023 17:52
Mark Well the Purpose of Night
Fay Slimm. said:
Nights of love dancing with happiness will always be times we look back on with pleasure - -- a beautiful reminder that dreamy memories are made from humour\'s consistent togetherness .......x
May 2nd, 2023 15:33
Fay Slimm. said:
Nights of love dancing with happiness will always be times we look back on with pleasure - -- a beautiful reminder that dreamy memories are made from humour\'s consistent togetherness .......x
May 2nd, 2023 15:33
Mark Well the Purpose of Night
orchidee said:
No F in this one. lol
So here\'s my poem today (steady on. says Fido!):
Ohh, F, f, f, f ,f and f
And furthermore f, f, f, f, and f!
May 2nd, 2023 02:03
orchidee said:
No F in this one. lol
So here\'s my poem today (steady on. says Fido!):
Ohh, F, f, f, f ,f and f
And furthermore f, f, f, f, and f!
May 2nd, 2023 02:03
Three Days in May Remembered
Goldfinch60 said:
Such fine memories Neville, those last three days i may will be back with you soon.
Andy
May 2nd, 2023 01:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Such fine memories Neville, those last three days i may will be back with you soon.
Andy
May 2nd, 2023 01:19
Mark Well the Purpose of Night
Goldfinch60 said:
May those dream be filled with love Neville.
Andy
May 2nd, 2023 01:06
Goldfinch60 said:
May those dream be filled with love Neville.
Andy
May 2nd, 2023 01:06
Three Days in May Remembered
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Doh! May, June, ..... every day\'s just as bad with KP! lol.
May 1st, 2023 07:47
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Doh! May, June, ..... every day\'s just as bad with KP! lol.
May 1st, 2023 07:47
Three Days in May Remembered
L. B. Mek said:
(love
memorial rhyme, inking\'s
to consummate
sensation\'s,
experiences
as our cherished memory\'s
engravings..)
\'Indeed, those gentlest of long
drawn out sighs ..\'
(flesh yearnings, as depraved lusting
yet, transmuted in eyes
of chemistry\'s sincere affections
we distil, droplets
of mementos, most cherished
beginnings
three days, to curate this scenes
yet a lifetime
to replay, reimagine and reflect
on that instant connection
immediacy, of need\'s urgency
of belonging
to a time, a vibe a Time stamp
of meaningless
maturation of irreplaceable, worth
hair tonality as our mirage, fallacy
remembering colour, scent
but not, that feel of you slipping
through my fingers of angst
escapism, in a rush of sensuality
intoxicated, lost
to three days, as accented heights
I may never, be able
to reach again without you, by my
side...)
May 1st, 2023 04:00
L. B. Mek said:
(love
memorial rhyme, inking\'s
to consummate
sensation\'s,
experiences
as our cherished memory\'s
engravings..)
\'Indeed, those gentlest of long
drawn out sighs ..\'
(flesh yearnings, as depraved lusting
yet, transmuted in eyes
of chemistry\'s sincere affections
we distil, droplets
of mementos, most cherished
beginnings
three days, to curate this scenes
yet a lifetime
to replay, reimagine and reflect
on that instant connection
immediacy, of need\'s urgency
of belonging
to a time, a vibe a Time stamp
of meaningless
maturation of irreplaceable, worth
hair tonality as our mirage, fallacy
remembering colour, scent
but not, that feel of you slipping
through my fingers of angst
escapism, in a rush of sensuality
intoxicated, lost
to three days, as accented heights
I may never, be able
to reach again without you, by my
side...)
May 1st, 2023 04:00
The Perceived Necessity For Three Precise Approximations
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant! Brilliant! Brilliant!
You at your subtle Best, Hyung
love this, wow so much depth
(I read and aspire to learn)
May 1st, 2023 03:44
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant! Brilliant! Brilliant!
You at your subtle Best, Hyung
love this, wow so much depth
(I read and aspire to learn)
May 1st, 2023 03:44
Take a Look at What You Could Be Missing
L. B. Mek said:
(Yeah! you\'re damn right
her loss
\'but why is it, my burden...\')
lol
another great shorty Hyung
(sorry for my skewed, take
thanks for putting up with me)
May 1st, 2023 03:41
L. B. Mek said:
(Yeah! you\'re damn right
her loss
\'but why is it, my burden...\')
lol
another great shorty Hyung
(sorry for my skewed, take
thanks for putting up with me)
May 1st, 2023 03:41
The Perceived Necessity For Three Precise Approximations
Bella Shepard said:
Such difficult questions you pose dear poet. How do we quantiafy Life\'s experiences? Does it go by day, week, month, year, lifetime? You have here a trifecta that is a feast for the eyes, a superb study of human nature in three acts. Love it, love it!
April 30th, 2023 11:27
Bella Shepard said:
Such difficult questions you pose dear poet. How do we quantiafy Life\'s experiences? Does it go by day, week, month, year, lifetime? You have here a trifecta that is a feast for the eyes, a superb study of human nature in three acts. Love it, love it!
April 30th, 2023 11:27
The Perceived Necessity For Three Precise Approximations
Christina8 said:
OMG these 3 short writes are fantastic!! I especially like the middle one....It feels so deep and relatable. Great poems!!
April 30th, 2023 09:14
Christina8 said:
OMG these 3 short writes are fantastic!! I especially like the middle one....It feels so deep and relatable. Great poems!!
April 30th, 2023 09:14
Take a Look at What You Could Be Missing
orchidee said:
Aghh! This is what KP said to me. it made me run a mile - well, 20 miles away! lol.
April 30th, 2023 01:48
orchidee said:
Aghh! This is what KP said to me. it made me run a mile - well, 20 miles away! lol.
April 30th, 2023 01:48
Take a Look at What You Could Be Missing
Goldfinch60 said:
If only ........
Andy
April 30th, 2023 01:45
Goldfinch60 said:
If only ........
Andy
April 30th, 2023 01:45
Take a Look at What You Could Be Missing
Bobby O said:
If you gotta tell them it’s usually too late.
April 29th, 2023 14:19
Bobby O said:
If you gotta tell them it’s usually too late.
April 29th, 2023 14:19
Love is ..
Christina8 said:
Love this poem about the simplicities and yet complexities of love. Great shorty!
April 29th, 2023 05:47
Christina8 said:
Love this poem about the simplicities and yet complexities of love. Great shorty!
April 29th, 2023 05:47
The Ghost of My Self That Was
Christina8 said:
What a beautiful piece, and a beautiful home may I add? I get how you might feel an unwelcomed guest at your home after it was sold. Felt every word of this Neville...x
April 29th, 2023 05:37
Christina8 said:
What a beautiful piece, and a beautiful home may I add? I get how you might feel an unwelcomed guest at your home after it was sold. Felt every word of this Neville...x
April 29th, 2023 05:37
In So Few Words Gone
Doggerel Dave said:
My great grandmothers tall cheval mirror has just informed me it will have nothing to do with your travels in these uncertain times, accepts no liability for any misadventure which may befall....... However since you a have returned, I suppose I should add that it was an intriguing write, Sir, and be assured I was not disturbed.........
April 29th, 2023 02:29
Doggerel Dave said:
My great grandmothers tall cheval mirror has just informed me it will have nothing to do with your travels in these uncertain times, accepts no liability for any misadventure which may befall....... However since you a have returned, I suppose I should add that it was an intriguing write, Sir, and be assured I was not disturbed.........
April 29th, 2023 02:29
The Ghost of My Self That Was
Goldfinch60 said:
Such sad words Neville but you will have the memories of those wonderful times in the past.
Andy
April 29th, 2023 00:39
Goldfinch60 said:
Such sad words Neville but you will have the memories of those wonderful times in the past.
Andy
April 29th, 2023 00:39
The Ghost of My Self That Was
Kinsey Peterson said:
I love this piece quite a bit, although I do have a question for you. The use of a double as opposed to a triple ellipses... is that still used for showing omission or is it a simply a reminder to slow our read, contemplate the way that you do as an author?
April 28th, 2023 15:21
Kinsey Peterson said:
I love this piece quite a bit, although I do have a question for you. The use of a double as opposed to a triple ellipses... is that still used for showing omission or is it a simply a reminder to slow our read, contemplate the way that you do as an author?
April 28th, 2023 15:21
The Ghost of My Self That Was
Bella Shepard said:
Sitting on the balconet in the pouring rain, in stark contrast to the beautiful pic of sunshine, blue sky and white clouds. With the stroke of the keys you paint this bittersweet picture of loss remembered, but never fully forgotten. I could feel the nuance of every line. Exquisitely done dear friend.
April 28th, 2023 10:54
Bella Shepard said:
Sitting on the balconet in the pouring rain, in stark contrast to the beautiful pic of sunshine, blue sky and white clouds. With the stroke of the keys you paint this bittersweet picture of loss remembered, but never fully forgotten. I could feel the nuance of every line. Exquisitely done dear friend.
April 28th, 2023 10:54
The Ghost of My Self That Was
arqios said:
That ghost is like a shadow that follows us around quite diligently at times.
April 28th, 2023 09:00
arqios said:
That ghost is like a shadow that follows us around quite diligently at times.
April 28th, 2023 09:00
In So Few Words Gone
Bobby O said:
Well and truly gone. I’m still mulling that end but can report w glee the cadence and motion of the piece was excellent and compelling bc and shall remain forever so not withstanding my recognition that is slow to digest that one moment.
April 28th, 2023 05:17
Bobby O said:
Well and truly gone. I’m still mulling that end but can report w glee the cadence and motion of the piece was excellent and compelling bc and shall remain forever so not withstanding my recognition that is slow to digest that one moment.
April 28th, 2023 05:17
The Ghost of My Self That Was
L. B. Mek said:
the vista seems otherworldly
even with the pictures limitations
seems
today is a day for sharing personal pics
lol
congrats on the successful sale, Hyung
onwards to that next perfect-fit vista
or appearance
on \'A place in the Sun\'
April 28th, 2023 04:53
L. B. Mek said:
the vista seems otherworldly
even with the pictures limitations
seems
today is a day for sharing personal pics
lol
congrats on the successful sale, Hyung
onwards to that next perfect-fit vista
or appearance
on \'A place in the Sun\'
April 28th, 2023 04:53
Love is ..
L. B. Mek said:
ha! so true dear Poet
a new relationship, or even
a new day, of a relationship
is never
a new chapter of a book
more like a new, movie
or song, or picture book
that has us trying to rewind
Time, since
minute we think we\'ve got it
sussed
that left hook comes, to greet
without deigning to inform us
our romance, dance
has now evolved in-to that
battlefield of love
lol
April 28th, 2023 04:47
L. B. Mek said:
ha! so true dear Poet
a new relationship, or even
a new day, of a relationship
is never
a new chapter of a book
more like a new, movie
or song, or picture book
that has us trying to rewind
Time, since
minute we think we\'ve got it
sussed
that left hook comes, to greet
without deigning to inform us
our romance, dance
has now evolved in-to that
battlefield of love
lol
April 28th, 2023 04:47
Girl With a Blue Vase
L. B. Mek said:
who needs, immersion software
when poetry can offer
such vivid tangibility, in but a few
choice lines:
\'the scorching
red sand and occasional
contrasting
patches, of respite cool,
crisp, fallen leaves ..
She might find on her
way back again ..\'
the Poet supreme, is back
with a resounding, bang
Brilliant!
(I read and learn, Hyung)
thank you
April 28th, 2023 04:42
L. B. Mek said:
who needs, immersion software
when poetry can offer
such vivid tangibility, in but a few
choice lines:
\'the scorching
red sand and occasional
contrasting
patches, of respite cool,
crisp, fallen leaves ..
She might find on her
way back again ..\'
the Poet supreme, is back
with a resounding, bang
Brilliant!
(I read and learn, Hyung)
thank you
April 28th, 2023 04:42
Girl With a Blue Vase
Bobby O said:
Sunlight caught, played, the silver buckles, descriptive style stays within the story never gratuitous and I’m certain the amount of punctuating phrase that describe is certain to be guilty in most hands of extra and muddied nut never in how you write. I hope to be that accomplished one day. Many props.
April 28th, 2023 04:35
Bobby O said:
Sunlight caught, played, the silver buckles, descriptive style stays within the story never gratuitous and I’m certain the amount of punctuating phrase that describe is certain to be guilty in most hands of extra and muddied nut never in how you write. I hope to be that accomplished one day. Many props.
April 28th, 2023 04:35
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