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Echoes Seldom Lie These Days
arqios said:
P\'raps echoes are reflections sounding off in our hearing.
May 5th, 2023 08:30
arqios said:
P\'raps echoes are reflections sounding off in our hearing.
May 5th, 2023 08:30
Echoes Seldom Lie These Days
Fay Slimm. said:
Long-lasting relationships deserve a tribute and this is surely one of the best penned reminders to listen to nought but the heart - --Great stuff my friend - reminds me of that long-ago song - \"They tried to tell us we were too young\"
May 5th, 2023 04:39
Fay Slimm. said:
Long-lasting relationships deserve a tribute and this is surely one of the best penned reminders to listen to nought but the heart - --Great stuff my friend - reminds me of that long-ago song - \"They tried to tell us we were too young\"
May 5th, 2023 04:39
Echoes Seldom Lie These Days
L. B. Mek said:
so glad you\'re on the right side
of that capricious echo, dear Poet
(this, that cruelty of callous fate
what\'s granted to one, is echoed
rarely
to those majority, who spend
an eternity trying to remember
\'the colour of that dress\'
\'from that one Time\'
when for a brief, teasing shadow
it felt like, this moment would
foreshadow future nights, where
we would replay this scene
again n again, till forevermore
was a fact
we had realised and cherished
as part of life...)
May 5th, 2023 03:29
L. B. Mek said:
so glad you\'re on the right side
of that capricious echo, dear Poet
(this, that cruelty of callous fate
what\'s granted to one, is echoed
rarely
to those majority, who spend
an eternity trying to remember
\'the colour of that dress\'
\'from that one Time\'
when for a brief, teasing shadow
it felt like, this moment would
foreshadow future nights, where
we would replay this scene
again n again, till forevermore
was a fact
we had realised and cherished
as part of life...)
May 5th, 2023 03:29
Five Seconds Into An Encounter
L. B. Mek said:
lol
that \'matter of fact\' veracity
as accent to a child\'s, as yet
untainted sincerity
is a life rejuvenating, delight
to witness..
(well, unless you\'re at the end
of their prickling observations)
😌
a wonderful slice of life, dear Poet
thank you for the chuckle
May 5th, 2023 03:19
L. B. Mek said:
lol
that \'matter of fact\' veracity
as accent to a child\'s, as yet
untainted sincerity
is a life rejuvenating, delight
to witness..
(well, unless you\'re at the end
of their prickling observations)
😌
a wonderful slice of life, dear Poet
thank you for the chuckle
May 5th, 2023 03:19
Are We Nearly There Yet
L. B. Mek said:
so relatable Hyung
\'thought provoking\' to say the least
a lovely read
(distance, is ever a conundrum
of our anxiety, status
yearning to know our limitations
we strive to measure
knowing, we never want to realise
those ending credits
instead, by trying to concentrate
on destination, we
approximate the time we have left
to cherish
mementos of our life\'s effervescent
sensations..)
the films were fun as well, lol
May 5th, 2023 03:15
L. B. Mek said:
so relatable Hyung
\'thought provoking\' to say the least
a lovely read
(distance, is ever a conundrum
of our anxiety, status
yearning to know our limitations
we strive to measure
knowing, we never want to realise
those ending credits
instead, by trying to concentrate
on destination, we
approximate the time we have left
to cherish
mementos of our life\'s effervescent
sensations..)
the films were fun as well, lol
May 5th, 2023 03:15
Mark Well the Purpose of Night
L. B. Mek said:
\'ten times more
invisible
to the naked eye\'
(and so, that much more
preciously, tattooed
within our heart\'s, walls...)
Brilliant!
dear Poet supreme
May 5th, 2023 03:03
L. B. Mek said:
\'ten times more
invisible
to the naked eye\'
(and so, that much more
preciously, tattooed
within our heart\'s, walls...)
Brilliant!
dear Poet supreme
May 5th, 2023 03:03
Echoes Seldom Lie These Days
Bobby O said:
Though perhaps written under guise as a cautionary tale , it didn’t fool me, the splendor of this optimistic Tome shone bright and made me glad. Plus I learned about echoes and reaffirmed my long love of Robin’s Eggs.
May 5th, 2023 02:57
Bobby O said:
Though perhaps written under guise as a cautionary tale , it didn’t fool me, the splendor of this optimistic Tome shone bright and made me glad. Plus I learned about echoes and reaffirmed my long love of Robin’s Eggs.
May 5th, 2023 02:57
Echoes Seldom Lie These Days
orchidee said:
Good write N,
You know I\'m gonna say this - I never got past the first verse with KP. I fainted at the removal of her dress. lol.
May 5th, 2023 02:06
orchidee said:
Good write N,
You know I\'m gonna say this - I never got past the first verse with KP. I fainted at the removal of her dress. lol.
May 5th, 2023 02:06
Five Seconds Into An Encounter
arqios said:
When we care for others with a fullness of attention juggling melting ice cream can become unwieldy.
May 5th, 2023 01:33
arqios said:
When we care for others with a fullness of attention juggling melting ice cream can become unwieldy.
May 5th, 2023 01:33
Five Seconds Into An Encounter
Christina8 said:
What a wonderful write! I was so engaged at the beginning...who knew she would be a toddler? Full of description, loved it!
May 4th, 2023 07:10
Christina8 said:
What a wonderful write! I was so engaged at the beginning...who knew she would be a toddler? Full of description, loved it!
May 4th, 2023 07:10
Five Seconds Into An Encounter
Fay Slimm. said:
What an engaging opener that sets the mind rolling - The start of a novel without a doubt as I can see a sensitive story unfolding from that precocious encounter mon ami........x
May 4th, 2023 06:41
Fay Slimm. said:
What an engaging opener that sets the mind rolling - The start of a novel without a doubt as I can see a sensitive story unfolding from that precocious encounter mon ami........x
May 4th, 2023 06:41
Five Seconds Into An Encounter
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
Would she recognise KP as a member of the Old Trout Club? lol.
May 4th, 2023 01:44
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
Would she recognise KP as a member of the Old Trout Club? lol.
May 4th, 2023 01:44
Are We Nearly There Yet
Bella Shepard said:
There are those journeys that you wish would never end, and it\'s always the anticipation of the next one that sparks desire. Simply delicious dear friend!
May 3rd, 2023 13:16
Bella Shepard said:
There are those journeys that you wish would never end, and it\'s always the anticipation of the next one that sparks desire. Simply delicious dear friend!
May 3rd, 2023 13:16
Are We Nearly There Yet
Christina8 said:
Loved this write! Reminds me of long road trips and adventure. x
May 3rd, 2023 13:09
Christina8 said:
Loved this write! Reminds me of long road trips and adventure. x
May 3rd, 2023 13:09
Mark Well the Purpose of Night
Bella Shepard said:
Tis true that the brain is more busy durning the night when we sleep, than when we are awake, storing wonderful memories of our days, that we may retrieve and relive once again. This poem has such a gentle touch, I can almost hear Michael Crawford singing \"Music of Night\" in the background. Exquisite dear friend!
May 3rd, 2023 13:09
Bella Shepard said:
Tis true that the brain is more busy durning the night when we sleep, than when we are awake, storing wonderful memories of our days, that we may retrieve and relive once again. This poem has such a gentle touch, I can almost hear Michael Crawford singing \"Music of Night\" in the background. Exquisite dear friend!
May 3rd, 2023 13:09
Are We Nearly There Yet
Fay Slimm. said:
A telling question your title here highlights dear Sir - - methinks after romps in hotel rooms with maybe a dram or two before play no wonder they\'re not looking for constructive answers - another intriguingly canny read ............ x
May 3rd, 2023 09:52
Fay Slimm. said:
A telling question your title here highlights dear Sir - - methinks after romps in hotel rooms with maybe a dram or two before play no wonder they\'re not looking for constructive answers - another intriguingly canny read ............ x
May 3rd, 2023 09:52
Are We Nearly There Yet
orchidee said:
Dunno if we\'re nearly there yet. Where we going?! Do shut up Orchi. lol.
May 3rd, 2023 01:48
orchidee said:
Dunno if we\'re nearly there yet. Where we going?! Do shut up Orchi. lol.
May 3rd, 2023 01:48
Mark Well the Purpose of Night
MendedFences27 said:
Dreams of love as \"the purpose of the night.\" Could anything be more purposeful? A wonderful ode to the mystery of the night. Protected by the lack of light they are\" invisible\" \"ghosts\" \"dancing on water.\"
For all of the darkness the images are crystal clear and brought to fruition by your last line. Your poem is a dream come true. Beautiful! - Phil A.
May 2nd, 2023 21:30
MendedFences27 said:
Dreams of love as \"the purpose of the night.\" Could anything be more purposeful? A wonderful ode to the mystery of the night. Protected by the lack of light they are\" invisible\" \"ghosts\" \"dancing on water.\"
For all of the darkness the images are crystal clear and brought to fruition by your last line. Your poem is a dream come true. Beautiful! - Phil A.
May 2nd, 2023 21:30
Mark Well the Purpose of Night
arqios said:
To slumber whence sleep may be found is a use of night that should it be lost leaves lingering fright.
May 2nd, 2023 17:52
arqios said:
To slumber whence sleep may be found is a use of night that should it be lost leaves lingering fright.
May 2nd, 2023 17:52
Mark Well the Purpose of Night
Fay Slimm. said:
Nights of love dancing with happiness will always be times we look back on with pleasure - -- a beautiful reminder that dreamy memories are made from humour\'s consistent togetherness .......x
May 2nd, 2023 15:33
Fay Slimm. said:
Nights of love dancing with happiness will always be times we look back on with pleasure - -- a beautiful reminder that dreamy memories are made from humour\'s consistent togetherness .......x
May 2nd, 2023 15:33
Mark Well the Purpose of Night
orchidee said:
No F in this one. lol
So here\'s my poem today (steady on. says Fido!):
Ohh, F, f, f, f ,f and f
And furthermore f, f, f, f, and f!
May 2nd, 2023 02:03
orchidee said:
No F in this one. lol
So here\'s my poem today (steady on. says Fido!):
Ohh, F, f, f, f ,f and f
And furthermore f, f, f, f, and f!
May 2nd, 2023 02:03
Three Days in May Remembered
Goldfinch60 said:
Such fine memories Neville, those last three days i may will be back with you soon.
Andy
May 2nd, 2023 01:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Such fine memories Neville, those last three days i may will be back with you soon.
Andy
May 2nd, 2023 01:19
Mark Well the Purpose of Night
Goldfinch60 said:
May those dream be filled with love Neville.
Andy
May 2nd, 2023 01:06
Goldfinch60 said:
May those dream be filled with love Neville.
Andy
May 2nd, 2023 01:06
Three Days in May Remembered
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Doh! May, June, ..... every day\'s just as bad with KP! lol.
May 1st, 2023 07:47
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Doh! May, June, ..... every day\'s just as bad with KP! lol.
May 1st, 2023 07:47
Three Days in May Remembered
L. B. Mek said:
(love
memorial rhyme, inking\'s
to consummate
sensation\'s,
experiences
as our cherished memory\'s
engravings..)
\'Indeed, those gentlest of long
drawn out sighs ..\'
(flesh yearnings, as depraved lusting
yet, transmuted in eyes
of chemistry\'s sincere affections
we distil, droplets
of mementos, most cherished
beginnings
three days, to curate this scenes
yet a lifetime
to replay, reimagine and reflect
on that instant connection
immediacy, of need\'s urgency
of belonging
to a time, a vibe a Time stamp
of meaningless
maturation of irreplaceable, worth
hair tonality as our mirage, fallacy
remembering colour, scent
but not, that feel of you slipping
through my fingers of angst
escapism, in a rush of sensuality
intoxicated, lost
to three days, as accented heights
I may never, be able
to reach again without you, by my
side...)
May 1st, 2023 04:00
L. B. Mek said:
(love
memorial rhyme, inking\'s
to consummate
sensation\'s,
experiences
as our cherished memory\'s
engravings..)
\'Indeed, those gentlest of long
drawn out sighs ..\'
(flesh yearnings, as depraved lusting
yet, transmuted in eyes
of chemistry\'s sincere affections
we distil, droplets
of mementos, most cherished
beginnings
three days, to curate this scenes
yet a lifetime
to replay, reimagine and reflect
on that instant connection
immediacy, of need\'s urgency
of belonging
to a time, a vibe a Time stamp
of meaningless
maturation of irreplaceable, worth
hair tonality as our mirage, fallacy
remembering colour, scent
but not, that feel of you slipping
through my fingers of angst
escapism, in a rush of sensuality
intoxicated, lost
to three days, as accented heights
I may never, be able
to reach again without you, by my
side...)
May 1st, 2023 04:00
The Perceived Necessity For Three Precise Approximations
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant! Brilliant! Brilliant!
You at your subtle Best, Hyung
love this, wow so much depth
(I read and aspire to learn)
May 1st, 2023 03:44
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant! Brilliant! Brilliant!
You at your subtle Best, Hyung
love this, wow so much depth
(I read and aspire to learn)
May 1st, 2023 03:44
Take a Look at What You Could Be Missing
L. B. Mek said:
(Yeah! you\'re damn right
her loss
\'but why is it, my burden...\')
lol
another great shorty Hyung
(sorry for my skewed, take
thanks for putting up with me)
May 1st, 2023 03:41
L. B. Mek said:
(Yeah! you\'re damn right
her loss
\'but why is it, my burden...\')
lol
another great shorty Hyung
(sorry for my skewed, take
thanks for putting up with me)
May 1st, 2023 03:41
The Perceived Necessity For Three Precise Approximations
Bella Shepard said:
Such difficult questions you pose dear poet. How do we quantiafy Life\'s experiences? Does it go by day, week, month, year, lifetime? You have here a trifecta that is a feast for the eyes, a superb study of human nature in three acts. Love it, love it!
April 30th, 2023 11:27
Bella Shepard said:
Such difficult questions you pose dear poet. How do we quantiafy Life\'s experiences? Does it go by day, week, month, year, lifetime? You have here a trifecta that is a feast for the eyes, a superb study of human nature in three acts. Love it, love it!
April 30th, 2023 11:27
The Perceived Necessity For Three Precise Approximations
Christina8 said:
OMG these 3 short writes are fantastic!! I especially like the middle one....It feels so deep and relatable. Great poems!!
April 30th, 2023 09:14
Christina8 said:
OMG these 3 short writes are fantastic!! I especially like the middle one....It feels so deep and relatable. Great poems!!
April 30th, 2023 09:14
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