Comments received on poems by Neville
Upon the Drift of Wimbleball Lake
dusk arising said:
Memories lay like a mist upon the landscapes of our mind yet blow in the face with sudden reminisce when we confront such places in the flesh.
Once again your poetry has a mystic haunted feel drawing your reader into the inevitable picturescape... a watercolours haze in my minds eye rests peacefully.
April 19th, 2022 06:30
dusk arising said:
Memories lay like a mist upon the landscapes of our mind yet blow in the face with sudden reminisce when we confront such places in the flesh.
Once again your poetry has a mystic haunted feel drawing your reader into the inevitable picturescape... a watercolours haze in my minds eye rests peacefully.
April 19th, 2022 06:30
Upon the Drift of Wimbleball Lake
L. B. Mek said:
just
ahhhhhh
like, just
ahhhhhhhhhhhhh
you know?!
just
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
how I cherish
those innate, subtle brushstrokes
in your bewitching, Poetry
thank you, Hyung
as-ever, I read
and learn, gratefully!
April 19th, 2022 06:09
L. B. Mek said:
just
ahhhhhh
like, just
ahhhhhhhhhhhhh
you know?!
just
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
how I cherish
those innate, subtle brushstrokes
in your bewitching, Poetry
thank you, Hyung
as-ever, I read
and learn, gratefully!
April 19th, 2022 06:09
Upon the Drift of Wimbleball Lake
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
a lovely writing ))
April 19th, 2022 03:00
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
a lovely writing ))
April 19th, 2022 03:00
Echo’s Just Don’t Lie
Rocky Lagou said:
Yooooooooo. Yoooooo. These metaphors, \"like a foundry,\" \"pools of golden light.\" I literally adore this poem. It\'s truly a bittersweet sense I get, like a move that hurts, but it\'s a change for the better. Great job dear poet!
April 18th, 2022 08:36
Rocky Lagou said:
Yooooooooo. Yoooooo. These metaphors, \"like a foundry,\" \"pools of golden light.\" I literally adore this poem. It\'s truly a bittersweet sense I get, like a move that hurts, but it\'s a change for the better. Great job dear poet!
April 18th, 2022 08:36
Echo’s Just Don’t Lie
Goldfinch60 said:
Those echoes can resound in your mind for eternity Neville.
Andy
April 18th, 2022 00:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Those echoes can resound in your mind for eternity Neville.
Andy
April 18th, 2022 00:44
Echo’s Just Don’t Lie
Rozina said:
Love this. I can see the house and hear your footsteps as you walk through the empty rooms and hear the sad echoes sighing.......
April 17th, 2022 17:42
Rozina said:
Love this. I can see the house and hear your footsteps as you walk through the empty rooms and hear the sad echoes sighing.......
April 17th, 2022 17:42
Golden Shadows
DestinysPerspectives said:
I love the line: \"some just sit in golden shadows\". Great poem!
April 17th, 2022 15:58
DestinysPerspectives said:
I love the line: \"some just sit in golden shadows\". Great poem!
April 17th, 2022 15:58
Echo’s Just Don’t Lie
dusk arising said:
The house of love is a haunted place with ghosts sudden shrieks causing us to shudder when entered alone but for the memories.
A haunting piece indeed.
April 17th, 2022 09:23
dusk arising said:
The house of love is a haunted place with ghosts sudden shrieks causing us to shudder when entered alone but for the memories.
A haunting piece indeed.
April 17th, 2022 09:23
Echo’s Just Don’t Lie
Paul Bell said:
You set the scene here.
The empty house tells a story, the flowers that once grew now withered and dead, followed by the memories as the door closes.
April 17th, 2022 07:32
Paul Bell said:
You set the scene here.
The empty house tells a story, the flowers that once grew now withered and dead, followed by the memories as the door closes.
April 17th, 2022 07:32
Echo’s Just Don’t Lie
Michael Edwards said:
Echos don\'t lie - they just repeat themselves but that\'s not always a bad thing where true love is concerned.
April 17th, 2022 06:18
Michael Edwards said:
Echos don\'t lie - they just repeat themselves but that\'s not always a bad thing where true love is concerned.
April 17th, 2022 06:18
Echo’s Just Don’t Lie
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I like the way you have expressed yourself in this . Love can be so beautiful but so sad when fading and disappearing .
A lovely writing )
April 17th, 2022 03:59
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I like the way you have expressed yourself in this . Love can be so beautiful but so sad when fading and disappearing .
A lovely writing )
April 17th, 2022 03:59
Golden Shadows
spilleronsheet said:
A wonderful poetry created
And a beautiful title to it
“Golden shadows”
But it’s Neville poetry hidden with emotions
Tale of many a lives
Some may complaint about their worries
While others celebrating their lives often hide their hardships of life
That’s how I feel like when reading your crisp poetry full of essence
Applaud Sir, for creating magic again
April 16th, 2022 15:13
spilleronsheet said:
A wonderful poetry created
And a beautiful title to it
“Golden shadows”
But it’s Neville poetry hidden with emotions
Tale of many a lives
Some may complaint about their worries
While others celebrating their lives often hide their hardships of life
That’s how I feel like when reading your crisp poetry full of essence
Applaud Sir, for creating magic again
April 16th, 2022 15:13
Golden Shadows
Jerry Reynolds said:
Great write, Neville.
beyond the shadows
true love awaits
April 16th, 2022 13:34
Jerry Reynolds said:
Great write, Neville.
beyond the shadows
true love awaits
April 16th, 2022 13:34
Golden Shadows
Bella Shepard said:
I guess for me \"Golden Shadows\" seems a respite, perhaps a place of cleansing, tears washing clean that which disappoints us. Penned briefly, a small but valuable gem.
April 16th, 2022 12:36
Bella Shepard said:
I guess for me \"Golden Shadows\" seems a respite, perhaps a place of cleansing, tears washing clean that which disappoints us. Penned briefly, a small but valuable gem.
April 16th, 2022 12:36
Golden Shadows
Accidental Poet said:
Everyone needs a little time alone N. Time to recharge emotional batteries. 😔
April 16th, 2022 08:46
Accidental Poet said:
Everyone needs a little time alone N. Time to recharge emotional batteries. 😔
April 16th, 2022 08:46
Golden Shadows
orchidee said:
I keep telling KP the first line of this, but she don\'t listen. I don\'t see here in person 99% of the time now - only in newspapers, photo shoot, botox treatment adverts... lol.
April 16th, 2022 05:06
orchidee said:
I keep telling KP the first line of this, but she don\'t listen. I don\'t see here in person 99% of the time now - only in newspapers, photo shoot, botox treatment adverts... lol.
April 16th, 2022 05:06
Golden Shadows
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Golden shadows ‘ love those words . Like your poem . I think good people deserve comfort in times of sadness never to feel alone . Golden shadows makes me think of someone filled with so much good but in the background maybe and not always seen as they should be
April 16th, 2022 03:54
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Golden shadows ‘ love those words . Like your poem . I think good people deserve comfort in times of sadness never to feel alone . Golden shadows makes me think of someone filled with so much good but in the background maybe and not always seen as they should be
April 16th, 2022 03:54
Golden Shadows
Paul Bell said:
Some just like to play it all to anyone who will listen, and let\'s face it, social media has given them the platform to do it. All falls down in the end, mind you.
April 16th, 2022 03:52
Paul Bell said:
Some just like to play it all to anyone who will listen, and let\'s face it, social media has given them the platform to do it. All falls down in the end, mind you.
April 16th, 2022 03:52
Just for us Lemons
Rozina said:
So much truth here. We are always learning from our mistakes and moving on, until we make them again, sometimes! Clever lines.
April 15th, 2022 18:08
Rozina said:
So much truth here. We are always learning from our mistakes and moving on, until we make them again, sometimes! Clever lines.
April 15th, 2022 18:08
Just for us Lemons
Bella Shepard said:
I\'d say that when life hands you lemons, make lemonade. That\'s if you like lemonade. On the other hand, there\'s a lot to be said for fruit punch, you get a little bit of everything. Good write!
April 15th, 2022 15:11
Bella Shepard said:
I\'d say that when life hands you lemons, make lemonade. That\'s if you like lemonade. On the other hand, there\'s a lot to be said for fruit punch, you get a little bit of everything. Good write!
April 15th, 2022 15:11
Just for us Lemons
dusk arising said:
Oh the wisdom in these words. WE used to say \"taste and try, before you buy\".
I can\'t understand why so many have to part with bitterness unless lies and deciet have played a major role. Logic says most pairings will not work out. But, there again logic and love is a pairing bound to fail LOL.
April 15th, 2022 10:18
dusk arising said:
Oh the wisdom in these words. WE used to say \"taste and try, before you buy\".
I can\'t understand why so many have to part with bitterness unless lies and deciet have played a major role. Logic says most pairings will not work out. But, there again logic and love is a pairing bound to fail LOL.
April 15th, 2022 10:18
Spare a Moment for These Words
Accidental Poet said:
aah, but to dwell in the words of a broken man is to tempt reinvention upon new paths. Inspiring words N. Thank you for what I needed to see. 😉👍
April 15th, 2022 07:01
Accidental Poet said:
aah, but to dwell in the words of a broken man is to tempt reinvention upon new paths. Inspiring words N. Thank you for what I needed to see. 😉👍
April 15th, 2022 07:01
Just for us Lemons
L. B. Mek said:
I like lemons
could eat one, like an apple
skin and all..
that\'s what a taste of life, has gifted me
now bitterness, is my ideal
of sweet...
(wise words, dear Poet
and yes the key word, is bitterness
we can\'t afford to make our hurdles, in life
warp our perceptions
into thinking, all is bitter and grim..
we move on, survive
with our lemonades, in hand)
lol
April 15th, 2022 05:04
L. B. Mek said:
I like lemons
could eat one, like an apple
skin and all..
that\'s what a taste of life, has gifted me
now bitterness, is my ideal
of sweet...
(wise words, dear Poet
and yes the key word, is bitterness
we can\'t afford to make our hurdles, in life
warp our perceptions
into thinking, all is bitter and grim..
we move on, survive
with our lemonades, in hand)
lol
April 15th, 2022 05:04
Just for us Lemons
Paul Bell said:
This is why they tell you to put sugar on your lemons. On the plus side, some other guy is now getting the lemon effect.
April 15th, 2022 04:55
Paul Bell said:
This is why they tell you to put sugar on your lemons. On the plus side, some other guy is now getting the lemon effect.
April 15th, 2022 04:55
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