Comments received on poems by Neville



Like Some Old Discarded Stocking
Accidental Poet said:

Well if OCD has any say in the matter, a matching pair is worth a salt. Or CDO as it should be. šŸ˜†

April 30th, 2022 10:17

Like Some Old Discarded Stocking
SureshG said:

That would surely be trendy, and not a stare, stir or commotion as she passes byā€¦..
Delightfully light and amusingā€¦.

April 30th, 2022 08:17

Like Some Old Discarded Stocking
Fay Slimm. said:

Ha ha -- - you got me there at the finish with that singularly clever plural ---- - - but point taken Nev. re. the old dear who like a holed stocking sits in all weathers and is almost invisible to those who don\'t want to see.

April 30th, 2022 08:16

Like Some Old Discarded Stocking
orchidee said:

Should I meet her? lol.

April 30th, 2022 08:11

Like Some Old Discarded Stocking
Paul Bell said:

Like some old discarded sock.
Is that not a great saying.
Mind you, the hole in it speaks volumes.

April 30th, 2022 06:41

Like Some Old Discarded Stocking
Distant View said:

A quaint and amusing poem - and a delight to read!

April 30th, 2022 06:15

Taking in the Seeds come Harvest
SureshG said:

There is nothing more thrilling then to see a seed germinate, and to nourish the fruits of wonderful words.

April 29th, 2022 17:51

Gooder than Good Even
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

by a mile and a smile even ..ā€˜ love that line ! ))

Some connections are so nice .. and so too are some memories .

Nicely expressed poem

April 29th, 2022 01:08

Taking in the Seeds come Harvest
Goldfinch60 said:

Every day is a good day Neville, they must be as we got up in the morning.

Andy

April 29th, 2022 00:57

Taking in the Seeds come Harvest
Rozina said:

A positive scene of a good harvest written so nicely in just a few lines.

April 28th, 2022 18:09

Taking in the Seeds come Harvest
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Dear Neville,

Your beautifully scripted poem reminded me of harvest time at my great grandmotherā€™s farm. As a young child, I found the whole experience fascinating. Everyone had funā€¦from the youngest to the eldest.

Thank you for sharing your basketful of meaningful words.

LaurašŸŒ»

April 28th, 2022 16:38

Taking in the Seeds come Harvest
Bella Shepard said:

We need more positive in this world, and you have reaffirmed this so well with these simple lines. Be grateful for each good day!

April 28th, 2022 15:05

Taking in the Seeds come Harvest
dusk arising said:

HEY said the landlord, what about rejoicing down the pub?

Brought back childhood memories when I lived on the edge of a mining village in Notts and we would go help with the harvest and making haystacks. We were a good community and the farmer had no quibbles about us sleigh riding in his fields come winter.
Fond memories - thank you.

April 28th, 2022 09:45

Taking in the Seeds come Harvest
Christina8 said:

Very nice one N! Flows with optimism.....C

April 28th, 2022 09:20

Taking in the Seeds come Harvest
Rocky Lagou said:

A positive affirmation. This feels so optimistic and ripe, I just want to take a bite off my computer screen and engulf your words.

April 28th, 2022 08:44

Taking in the Seeds come Harvest
orchidee said:

You started me off singing (argghh!)
\'Ohhh, Bringing in the sheaves,,.....\'
(on you tube - that\'s the chorus bit)

April 28th, 2022 07:57

Taking in the Seeds come Harvest
Fay Slimm. said:

Seeing the intake clearly as I rejoice in your gift for intrigue so effortlessly - -- telling words and loved every line.

April 28th, 2022 07:01

Taking in the Seeds come Harvest
spilleronsheet said:

And those are lines of optimism, overflowing with celebration of successā€¦ really enjoyed dear Nevilleā€¦

April 28th, 2022 05:36

Taking in the Seeds come Harvest
L. B. Mek said:

I gotta get out to the Dales again soon
been too long...
Have you been staying at the \'Country Harvest\', dear poet
is this poem how you paid for your bill?
(They got the better end of that deal!)
lol
thank you! loved this
pure nourishment for our poetic imaginations:
read, close eyes
and traverse, lush countryside\'s
at harvest
merely, within words...!
therapeutic to say the least

April 28th, 2022 04:46

Taking in the Seeds come Harvest
Anny said:

Such a poem, love it!

April 28th, 2022 04:08


Some things are Just Not Right
Rozina said:

You are SO RIGHT Neville. It got me thinking about many wrong things in life. A great thought provoking write.

April 26th, 2022 18:00

Some things are Just Not Right
spilleronsheet said:

Totally resonating on those linesā€¦somethingā€™s totally not rightā€¦from drugs, explosives, violence and war, corrupt bureaucracy to hypocrisy, opportunists to greedy politiciansā€¦ so well said dear Nevilleā€¦hope they extinguish fasterā€¦

April 26th, 2022 17:57

Some things are Just Not Right
Michael Edwards said:

And can I add cancer - - and yet there is so much good in the world - another poem?

April 26th, 2022 14:23

Some things are Just Not Right
MR.apocalypse said:

the words of someone who wishes not just to gain wisdom but teach the wisdom they\'ve learned

April 26th, 2022 09:36

Some things are Just Not Right
Christina8 said:

That was a fantastic write by you dear N.....I can\'t think of what isn\'t right most....probably when people just look the other way and live their lives like things aren\'t happening when they could do something about it, like child poverty, or anything to do with children for that matter! Good solid write!

April 26th, 2022 09:09

Some things are Just Not Right
Rocky Lagou said:

I admire the way you sculpted this poem. It\'s like one long thin line of things that are \"just not right.\" The morally and wickedly corrupt. The terrorists and the evil in the world. You summed it up wonderfully.


April 26th, 2022 08:48

Some things are Just Not Right
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Dear Neville,

Youā€™re so spot on with your thoughts that youā€™ve inked for your readers. Much to ponder uponā€¦

Thank you for sharing.

LaurašŸŒ»

April 26th, 2022 08:41

Some things are Just Not Right
dusk arising said:

No, not right at all. The list could go on and on.
I feel we must srtive for the positives whilst dealing with the negatives and heap praise upon the do gooders in life.
It would be nice to think we learn from history\'s \'not rights\' but sadly we see repetition taking place.

April 26th, 2022 08:28

Some things are Just Not Right
orchidee said:

A fine write N.
An extra line needed? \'Orchi\'s singing will never be right!\' heehee.

April 26th, 2022 08:06



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