Comments received on poems by Neville
Beneath Her Pretty Dress
Fay Slimm. said:
Dear Sir Grandpop - - Meant to state that July is a proper girt month in which to be dropped - well at least that\'s what Cornish sages say.........x
April 12th, 2023 13:39
Fay Slimm. said:
Dear Sir Grandpop - - Meant to state that July is a proper girt month in which to be dropped - well at least that\'s what Cornish sages say.........x
April 12th, 2023 13:39
Beneath Her Pretty Dress
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
The poem\'s themes of hidden beauty and the complexity of human nature are conveyed through a conversational tone that creates an intimate connection between the poet and the reader.
April 12th, 2023 07:00
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
The poem\'s themes of hidden beauty and the complexity of human nature are conveyed through a conversational tone that creates an intimate connection between the poet and the reader.
April 12th, 2023 07:00
Beneath Her Pretty Dress
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a bundle of penned love for an as yet unborn but specially welcome new family member from a happy Grandad - -this is a write Nev. that your daughter will always treasure....x
April 12th, 2023 06:52
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a bundle of penned love for an as yet unborn but specially welcome new family member from a happy Grandad - -this is a write Nev. that your daughter will always treasure....x
April 12th, 2023 06:52
Beneath Her Pretty Dress
Lorna said:
All better now N? Congratulations and then some Granpappy........
April 12th, 2023 04:56
Lorna said:
All better now N? Congratulations and then some Granpappy........
April 12th, 2023 04:56
Beneath Her Pretty Dress
orchidee said:
Good write Neville.
If you had not explained this, I would comment a \'bright idea\' of....... I never go there with KP, it would bring on a swoon! lol.
April 12th, 2023 02:50
orchidee said:
Good write Neville.
If you had not explained this, I would comment a \'bright idea\' of....... I never go there with KP, it would bring on a swoon! lol.
April 12th, 2023 02:50
Suspended Between Mirrors
Goldfinch60 said:
May that love be a reality instead of images Neville.
Andy
April 12th, 2023 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
May that love be a reality instead of images Neville.
Andy
April 12th, 2023 01:26
Suspended Between Mirrors
Bella Shepard said:
Ah, be careful what you wish for. I can only assume that his heart\'s desire fulfilled, he died a happy man. Sad, but beautifully told dear friend.
April 11th, 2023 13:55
Bella Shepard said:
Ah, be careful what you wish for. I can only assume that his heart\'s desire fulfilled, he died a happy man. Sad, but beautifully told dear friend.
April 11th, 2023 13:55
Suspended Between Mirrors
Fay Slimm. said:
A hunger for romantic antics to catch beauty unclothed can lead to a finalé so tragic I almost wept and at the same time started to laugh at your ever fertile imagination so expertly scribed mon ami and as ever I loved every line ...........x
April 11th, 2023 11:47
Fay Slimm. said:
A hunger for romantic antics to catch beauty unclothed can lead to a finalé so tragic I almost wept and at the same time started to laugh at your ever fertile imagination so expertly scribed mon ami and as ever I loved every line ...........x
April 11th, 2023 11:47
Suspended Between Mirrors
orchidee said:
Yes, it happened to me - I did this, and fell in the river! Doh!
Not that I was spying on KP. That would be too ghastly.
I read of a couple who wanted a foursome with Ken Barlow and Lulu. I would never recover if I saw any videos of it!
April 11th, 2023 03:59
orchidee said:
Yes, it happened to me - I did this, and fell in the river! Doh!
Not that I was spying on KP. That would be too ghastly.
I read of a couple who wanted a foursome with Ken Barlow and Lulu. I would never recover if I saw any videos of it!
April 11th, 2023 03:59
Woodland Rendezvous
orchidee said:
I would never see it - I would swoon before it happened! lol.
April 10th, 2023 10:20
orchidee said:
I would never see it - I would swoon before it happened! lol.
April 10th, 2023 10:20
Woodland Rendezvous
Fay Slimm. said:
That moment of surrender to bewitchment where a ghostly woman appears to show naked temptation is methinks penned here with the need of a sequel dear Nev - - when lips are sipping from elf cups was he of the rendezvous only dreaming - - tell please did that magical scene end with him lusting for a grown woodland fairy or no - --- great stuff ........... x
April 10th, 2023 07:30
Fay Slimm. said:
That moment of surrender to bewitchment where a ghostly woman appears to show naked temptation is methinks penned here with the need of a sequel dear Nev - - when lips are sipping from elf cups was he of the rendezvous only dreaming - - tell please did that magical scene end with him lusting for a grown woodland fairy or no - --- great stuff ........... x
April 10th, 2023 07:30
Woodland Rendezvous
L. B. Mek said:
\'bathed, in a hollow
of sunly warmed dew ..\'
(this
that intoxication of worded eloquence
poetic elegance, imbued
in eroticism\'s, evergreen decadence)
mesmeric sensuality
in such a relatively short read
really well executed
I read and learn, Hyung
April 10th, 2023 06:13
L. B. Mek said:
\'bathed, in a hollow
of sunly warmed dew ..\'
(this
that intoxication of worded eloquence
poetic elegance, imbued
in eroticism\'s, evergreen decadence)
mesmeric sensuality
in such a relatively short read
really well executed
I read and learn, Hyung
April 10th, 2023 06:13
Upon Wanting to Die
L. B. Mek said:
(the amount of times
the writes we choose to share, feels in-sync
amazes me, Hyung
must be something in those grey clouds
we ponder beneath)
what is it about ending\'s, that intrigues
our imagination\'s muse, time n again
we ponder and boldly fantasize
yet
to glimpse our panicked faces, when merely
slipping, upon fate\'s banana skins
it makes one realise
that distance of theory, in aftermath
of our inevitable finite
is what really, entices us
running to escape
unwilling to comprehend, the weight
of our looming goodbyes:
\'I would surely
miss you, oh’ so very dearly ..
No doubt for the
eternity you think it offers ..\'
(your empathetic artistry
at its irresistible, subtle best)
April 10th, 2023 04:24
L. B. Mek said:
(the amount of times
the writes we choose to share, feels in-sync
amazes me, Hyung
must be something in those grey clouds
we ponder beneath)
what is it about ending\'s, that intrigues
our imagination\'s muse, time n again
we ponder and boldly fantasize
yet
to glimpse our panicked faces, when merely
slipping, upon fate\'s banana skins
it makes one realise
that distance of theory, in aftermath
of our inevitable finite
is what really, entices us
running to escape
unwilling to comprehend, the weight
of our looming goodbyes:
\'I would surely
miss you, oh’ so very dearly ..
No doubt for the
eternity you think it offers ..\'
(your empathetic artistry
at its irresistible, subtle best)
April 10th, 2023 04:24
Upon Wanting to Die
Bella Shepard said:
Such a difficult write dear friend, it is hard to understand a state of mind where life is so intolerable that death seems the answer to a prayer. The healthy brain cannot conceive of such a thing, and yet it does strike the vulnerable. You write so beautifully of the other, who will hold onto that person with compassion and understanding, until the dark cloud passes. Very powerful dear Nev!
April 8th, 2023 11:43
Bella Shepard said:
Such a difficult write dear friend, it is hard to understand a state of mind where life is so intolerable that death seems the answer to a prayer. The healthy brain cannot conceive of such a thing, and yet it does strike the vulnerable. You write so beautifully of the other, who will hold onto that person with compassion and understanding, until the dark cloud passes. Very powerful dear Nev!
April 8th, 2023 11:43
Upon Wanting to Die
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Its message of hope and love is a reminder that even in the darkest moments, there is always someone who cares and is willing to help.
April 8th, 2023 06:17
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Its message of hope and love is a reminder that even in the darkest moments, there is always someone who cares and is willing to help.
April 8th, 2023 06:17
Upon Wanting to Die
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh Nev - a title to ponder and then read on. - -If ever seeing a similar need. exploring the \"wilderness\" of life would surely catch the curiosity of one wanting death - an example of true care put into tender poetic language that touches the heart - the phrase \" Death would not become you\" brought this reader near tears........x
April 8th, 2023 04:41
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh Nev - a title to ponder and then read on. - -If ever seeing a similar need. exploring the \"wilderness\" of life would surely catch the curiosity of one wanting death - an example of true care put into tender poetic language that touches the heart - the phrase \" Death would not become you\" brought this reader near tears........x
April 8th, 2023 04:41
Upon Wanting to Die
Lorna said:
I\'ve given pragmatic thought to suicide many times but haven\'t done (obviously) .... saving for a true emergency like fatal cancer or an asteroid coming our way but your words would surely stop the most convinced among us. It would take the thought of someone else\'s pain ........... this was masterful.......
April 8th, 2023 04:16
Lorna said:
I\'ve given pragmatic thought to suicide many times but haven\'t done (obviously) .... saving for a true emergency like fatal cancer or an asteroid coming our way but your words would surely stop the most convinced among us. It would take the thought of someone else\'s pain ........... this was masterful.......
April 8th, 2023 04:16
Upon Wanting to Die
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
Now KP does not want to die, but she looks like an old \'death warmed up\' trout! lol.
April 8th, 2023 02:28
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
Now KP does not want to die, but she looks like an old \'death warmed up\' trout! lol.
April 8th, 2023 02:28
When They Would Lose Their Shadows
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words about the intimacy of love Neville.
Andy
April 8th, 2023 01:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words about the intimacy of love Neville.
Andy
April 8th, 2023 01:54
When a Fine Line Might Just Make it Okay
spilleronsheet said:
In moments of absence
Coming back
To words of wisdom
Is truly therapeutic
April 8th, 2023 00:09
spilleronsheet said:
In moments of absence
Coming back
To words of wisdom
Is truly therapeutic
April 8th, 2023 00:09
When They Would Lose Their Shadows
jarcher54 said:
You brought that figure to life... a true gift my friend. This is moving and playful and memorable. Bravo.
April 7th, 2023 18:16
jarcher54 said:
You brought that figure to life... a true gift my friend. This is moving and playful and memorable. Bravo.
April 7th, 2023 18:16
When They Would Lose Their Shadows
Fay Slimm. said:
Some of those statues have a lot to answer for mi amigo - - love the way you pen the suspense ahead with comparative personification. Great read............x
April 7th, 2023 06:18
Fay Slimm. said:
Some of those statues have a lot to answer for mi amigo - - love the way you pen the suspense ahead with comparative personification. Great read............x
April 7th, 2023 06:18
When They Would Lose Their Shadows
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
This poem, \"When They Would Lose Their Shadows\", captures the sensuality and intimacy of a relationship through vivid imagery and subtle language.
April 7th, 2023 04:36
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
This poem, \"When They Would Lose Their Shadows\", captures the sensuality and intimacy of a relationship through vivid imagery and subtle language.
April 7th, 2023 04:36
When They Would Lose Their Shadows
orchidee said:
Good write Neville.
KP has a certain whiff - of a sewage farm! lol.
When will you stop being horrible to her? says Fido.
April 7th, 2023 04:29
orchidee said:
Good write Neville.
KP has a certain whiff - of a sewage farm! lol.
When will you stop being horrible to her? says Fido.
April 7th, 2023 04:29
When They Would Lose Their Shadows
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(Unearthed
we delve free of restraint
a touch, a glimpse
a shared intimacy devoid of reason
seeking, that which fantasy fails to imagine
I remember, warmth
in cold eyes, daring me to dream
my fingers
trembling, and ice dancing cacophonous
as I approached
a glass in each hand, a stutter in every step
wordless, knowing
she was already sipping on wine
I offered her a glass
statuesque, we stared
life pressed play, around us
she and i, lost
to existence\'s influence
only that winking moon, teased us
it all felt like it lasted a lifetime
.. then she took my glass
emptied her wine, right there on the grass
by my shoes, some dropped on the leather
I looked down, tagged by her scent
and I smiled, wide as a gaping cloud
and offered my glass, to toast
a new chapter in our life
she, merely blinked
in-time, with our shared pulsating beat
...
that night, we hardly moved
all night
merely spoke till silence, rudely interrupted
by alerting us
to the absence of everyone else
that night
our shadows, danced naked
as that knowing moon, serenaded us
...)
April 7th, 2023 04:00
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(Unearthed
we delve free of restraint
a touch, a glimpse
a shared intimacy devoid of reason
seeking, that which fantasy fails to imagine
I remember, warmth
in cold eyes, daring me to dream
my fingers
trembling, and ice dancing cacophonous
as I approached
a glass in each hand, a stutter in every step
wordless, knowing
she was already sipping on wine
I offered her a glass
statuesque, we stared
life pressed play, around us
she and i, lost
to existence\'s influence
only that winking moon, teased us
it all felt like it lasted a lifetime
.. then she took my glass
emptied her wine, right there on the grass
by my shoes, some dropped on the leather
I looked down, tagged by her scent
and I smiled, wide as a gaping cloud
and offered my glass, to toast
a new chapter in our life
she, merely blinked
in-time, with our shared pulsating beat
...
that night, we hardly moved
all night
merely spoke till silence, rudely interrupted
by alerting us
to the absence of everyone else
that night
our shadows, danced naked
as that knowing moon, serenaded us
...)
April 7th, 2023 04:00
When a Fine Line Might Just Make it Okay
L. B. Mek said:
(progression, without assimilation
is that \'folly\' of youthful verve
quick, to look for that next
move-on, move past n forget..
we, older souls
tend to take our time, consolidate
whatever we may have gleaned
before we set our mind, to cauterising
that hurt, we\'re so eager to shed...)
Hyung, I feel your words need to be shared
once a month
again n again
like prescription poetic therapy for all of humanity..
thank you!, dear Poet supreme
April 7th, 2023 02:01
L. B. Mek said:
(progression, without assimilation
is that \'folly\' of youthful verve
quick, to look for that next
move-on, move past n forget..
we, older souls
tend to take our time, consolidate
whatever we may have gleaned
before we set our mind, to cauterising
that hurt, we\'re so eager to shed...)
Hyung, I feel your words need to be shared
once a month
again n again
like prescription poetic therapy for all of humanity..
thank you!, dear Poet supreme
April 7th, 2023 02:01
Dance of The Wind Children
L. B. Mek said:
Beautiful!!!
I shall come back to these words time n again
dear cherished friend
April 7th, 2023 01:55
L. B. Mek said:
Beautiful!!!
I shall come back to these words time n again
dear cherished friend
April 7th, 2023 01:55
Folly
L. B. Mek said:
such an enigma
these words, that convey
a link to experiences n feelings
we though we\'d long forgotten..
wonderful flow Hyung
I really like your conversational tone
(half-truth\'s, do so entice
distance, as life\'s enamouring guile
folly as fallibility\'s, cousin
we wink at one
so as to decimate, regret
with our wilful, smiles
and on
till that next folly, reveals herself
we only know two gears in life
\'D\' for \'dive-in heart first\'
and
\'L\' for \'learning from our mistakes\')
April 7th, 2023 01:53
L. B. Mek said:
such an enigma
these words, that convey
a link to experiences n feelings
we though we\'d long forgotten..
wonderful flow Hyung
I really like your conversational tone
(half-truth\'s, do so entice
distance, as life\'s enamouring guile
folly as fallibility\'s, cousin
we wink at one
so as to decimate, regret
with our wilful, smiles
and on
till that next folly, reveals herself
we only know two gears in life
\'D\' for \'dive-in heart first\'
and
\'L\' for \'learning from our mistakes\')
April 7th, 2023 01:53
When a Fine Line Might Just Make it Okay
MendedFences27 said:
There is not a line long enough. You have exposed a great human trait. We all keep our secrets deeply hidden in our souls. Oh well, we\'ll just have to live with them. - Phil A.
April 6th, 2023 13:24
MendedFences27 said:
There is not a line long enough. You have exposed a great human trait. We all keep our secrets deeply hidden in our souls. Oh well, we\'ll just have to live with them. - Phil A.
April 6th, 2023 13:24
When a Fine Line Might Just Make it Okay
MysteryGhost said:
Wonderful poem with a nice deep meaning
April 6th, 2023 08:21
MysteryGhost said:
Wonderful poem with a nice deep meaning
April 6th, 2023 08:21
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