Heed
Fay Slimm. said:

Am listening avidly to these few wise words mon ami and agree wholeheartedly that reasons for tears teach us a lot if we see them as lessons. Shall try better now to remember this when the next hard knocks appear..............x

January 11th, 2023 05:10

A Sure Sign of His Passing
Fay Slimm. said:

To have passed and no body cared or grieved must surely be the result of being feared -- -- he was better off the scene methinks mon ami.

January 10th, 2023 04:40

Atarashī Kodō ga Hajimaru Shunken
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words Neville, new life is so special.

Andy

January 10th, 2023 01:55

Atarashī Kodō ga Hajimaru Shunken
Fay Slimm. said:

Nothing like the first flutter felt inside of a new life forming and once experienced whatever the language used one never forgets. A lovely read on this blustery day mon dear Sir.

January 9th, 2023 07:02

Atarashī Kodō ga Hajimaru Shunken
orchidee said:

KP placed her hand..... I can\'t go on - swoon! heehee.

January 9th, 2023 03:20

Something More Than Just Skin Deep
Bella Shepard said:

This is a poem to truly dive into head first, and be immersed in the richness of sensuous words. There can be no doubt but that it is personal and dear. Thank you for sharing the fervor.

January 8th, 2023 11:04

Something More Than Just Skin Deep
Fay Slimm. said:

The senses of love used by a romantic and told with such energy in line after line makes this an exciting read mon dear ami - - top marks again for making me sigh that I did not write this ...........x

January 8th, 2023 06:22

Something More Than Just Skin Deep
Poetic Dan said:

Wow... Happy new year my friend and what a powerful read for me. As today I struggle with my body just falling apart, you reminded me at least I can still touch, feel and laugh.

Thank you again and many the rest of our year\'s be as wonderful as your great big heart.
Much peace and respect

January 8th, 2023 04:31

When I am Forgot
Fay Slimm. said:

A slice of regret comes over from this sad reflection on life and cleverly drawn out in the final lines Reminds me of the old saying that \"Rusting maybe but when once really loved never is one forgotten\" ...... x

January 7th, 2023 06:14

When I am Forgot
Goldfinch60 said:

You will not be forgotten Neville, after all I have one of your books.

Andy

January 7th, 2023 03:14

Marina Girls
Bella Shepard said:

The olfactory is such a powerful sense, how with just the hint of a scent we can be transported, without even realizing it, to another place, another time. A sweet poem of reminiscence with the smell of love in the air. Lovely my friend!

January 6th, 2023 14:15

Marina Girls
L. B. Mek said:

(if Poesy, had a physical form
I too think it would be in the guise
of effervescent mermaids:
\'beguilingly, illusive and endlessly
imbued with beatific sincerity
seeped, deep
in intensely, intuitive sensuality
that wisdom of feminine grace
and humane, empathy\')
Brilliant!
dear Poet supreme
I\'m just lucky you don\'t charge me
for endlessly inspiring
these humble scribbles of mine, Hyung
thank you!

January 6th, 2023 07:34

New Wine From Old Vines
L. B. Mek said:

\'indeed
we must first survive our winter\'s, to earn
those comforting sips
of our life\'s warming mulled wine, mementos\'
(so relatable and worded accessible
a great write, Hyung
loved that subtle smooth jazz tonality
to your pacing and rhythm)

January 6th, 2023 05:20

The Most Perfect Love
L. B. Mek said:

\'manipulate
undulating
bespoke
template\'
just wonderfully worded
(if they ever write a tell-all guideline to romance
they\'ve got to include these lived-in words of wisdom)
lol
thanks for sharing Hyung


January 6th, 2023 05:05

New Wine From Old Vines
Goldfinch60 said:

Mine is a glass of Rioja please Neville. 🍷🍷🍷

Andy

January 6th, 2023 02:33