Comments received on poems by Neville
Her Daddies Old Grey Chevrolet
Doggerel Dave said:
Reality encapsulated in one short (long) sentence ....I felt sure I was on the right track....Thanks Nev.
August 3rd, 2022 07:51
Doggerel Dave said:
Reality encapsulated in one short (long) sentence ....I felt sure I was on the right track....Thanks Nev.
August 3rd, 2022 07:51
Her Daddies Old Grey Chevrolet
Neville said:
even with full unequivocal mutual consent and a shared enthusiasm for the venture in point, there can be no guarantees that at no time in the future will there be any associated guilt or regret experienced by either or both parties .. but I do take your point you old dog .......................... Neville
August 3rd, 2022 07:41
Neville said:
even with full unequivocal mutual consent and a shared enthusiasm for the venture in point, there can be no guarantees that at no time in the future will there be any associated guilt or regret experienced by either or both parties .. but I do take your point you old dog .......................... Neville
August 3rd, 2022 07:41
Her Daddies Old Grey Chevrolet
Doggerel Dave said:
So long as there were no guilt or regrets.....Neville.
August 3rd, 2022 06:58
Doggerel Dave said:
So long as there were no guilt or regrets.....Neville.
August 3rd, 2022 06:58
Oh’ No .. Not Another Survivor
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes we are still here so we are all survivors.
Andy
August 3rd, 2022 01:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes we are still here so we are all survivors.
Andy
August 3rd, 2022 01:00
Whereupon His Tongue Did Serve to Please
dean langmuir said:
good write,take care
August 2nd, 2022 16:55
dean langmuir said:
good write,take care
August 2nd, 2022 16:55
Oh’ No .. Not Another Survivor
MendedFences27 said:
Or as Mel Brooks (age 96) once said,
\"I get up in the morning. I read the newspaper Obits, if my names not there, I have breakfast.\" He\'s a survivor.
So, thanks for giving me a new classification for myself, and a new outlook on life. - Phil A.
August 2nd, 2022 14:44
MendedFences27 said:
Or as Mel Brooks (age 96) once said,
\"I get up in the morning. I read the newspaper Obits, if my names not there, I have breakfast.\" He\'s a survivor.
So, thanks for giving me a new classification for myself, and a new outlook on life. - Phil A.
August 2nd, 2022 14:44
Oh’ No .. Not Another Survivor
Doggerel Dave said:
Found by design. and yes, still here...neat, Neville - thanks.
August 2nd, 2022 08:08
Doggerel Dave said:
Found by design. and yes, still here...neat, Neville - thanks.
August 2nd, 2022 08:08
Oh’ No .. Not Another Survivor
Fay Slimm. said:
I certainly not only admire your wise words but know without doubt you are that daily survivor mon ami - -as I try to be too - so here\'s smilin\' atcha this lovely mornin\'.............x
August 2nd, 2022 06:12
Fay Slimm. said:
I certainly not only admire your wise words but know without doubt you are that daily survivor mon ami - -as I try to be too - so here\'s smilin\' atcha this lovely mornin\'.............x
August 2nd, 2022 06:12
Oh’ No .. Not Another Survivor
L. B. Mek said:
I really enjoy poetry
where the voice, literally
jumps off the page and grabs the reader
to speak AT them directly, screaming
here
in this moment within this mirror
of ink, we\'re together
two sides, of a shared thought...
(a wonderful tool of poesy
I never get tired of;
for no other artistic medium, can make
such a bold reach for instantaneous
and intuitive, tangible connections)
just awesome! dear Poet
August 2nd, 2022 05:05
L. B. Mek said:
I really enjoy poetry
where the voice, literally
jumps off the page and grabs the reader
to speak AT them directly, screaming
here
in this moment within this mirror
of ink, we\'re together
two sides, of a shared thought...
(a wonderful tool of poesy
I never get tired of;
for no other artistic medium, can make
such a bold reach for instantaneous
and intuitive, tangible connections)
just awesome! dear Poet
August 2nd, 2022 05:05
Oh’ No .. Not Another Survivor
Neil Higgins said:
I have awoken.I am a survivor.
Well thought out Nev,and so true.
August 2nd, 2022 03:46
Neil Higgins said:
I have awoken.I am a survivor.
Well thought out Nev,and so true.
August 2nd, 2022 03:46
Oh’ No .. Not Another Survivor
orchidee said:
You survived my singing? Who can?! lol.
August 2nd, 2022 01:45
orchidee said:
You survived my singing? Who can?! lol.
August 2nd, 2022 01:45
Whereupon His Tongue Did Serve to Please
Goldfinch60 said:
Super words Neville.
Andy
August 2nd, 2022 01:04
Goldfinch60 said:
Super words Neville.
Andy
August 2nd, 2022 01:04
Whereupon His Tongue Did Serve to Please
MendedFences27 said:
The sweet taste of love, when found, lingers. A great expression of lasting love, of \"angel tears\" \"drunk\" across time. Some great images hinted at and some exposed. A treat for my cloudy afternoon. - Phil A.
August 1st, 2022 14:58
MendedFences27 said:
The sweet taste of love, when found, lingers. A great expression of lasting love, of \"angel tears\" \"drunk\" across time. Some great images hinted at and some exposed. A treat for my cloudy afternoon. - Phil A.
August 1st, 2022 14:58
Whereupon His Tongue Did Serve to Please
Neil Higgins said:
North Somerset cider.Now your talking Nev.Cheers 🥳
August 1st, 2022 12:28
Neil Higgins said:
North Somerset cider.Now your talking Nev.Cheers 🥳
August 1st, 2022 12:28
Whereupon His Tongue Did Serve to Please
Fay Slimm. said:
Your imagery is as brill. as ever.........x
August 1st, 2022 06:56
Fay Slimm. said:
Your imagery is as brill. as ever.........x
August 1st, 2022 06:56
Whereupon His Tongue Did Serve to Please
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'of that nectar of life
your ink, drips
...ever sweet\'
August 1st, 2022 03:55
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'of that nectar of life
your ink, drips
...ever sweet\'
August 1st, 2022 03:55
Whereupon His Tongue Did Serve to Please
Doggerel Dave said:
Aah! Cunnilingus at the right time in the right place can have it\'s own rewards....
August 1st, 2022 03:50
Doggerel Dave said:
Aah! Cunnilingus at the right time in the right place can have it\'s own rewards....
August 1st, 2022 03:50
That Old Broken Dansette & Other Musings
MendedFences27 said:
Memories woven into a quilt of poetic
recollections; of \"cotton squares,\" \"501\'s,\" \"crosses,\" \'kisses,\" \"Sunday
mornings,\" \"Cohen, Dylan,\" \"a Dansette,\" and, Oh Yeah, that other thing. So well written, I need to save it. - Phil A.
July 31st, 2022 17:06
MendedFences27 said:
Memories woven into a quilt of poetic
recollections; of \"cotton squares,\" \"501\'s,\" \"crosses,\" \'kisses,\" \"Sunday
mornings,\" \"Cohen, Dylan,\" \"a Dansette,\" and, Oh Yeah, that other thing. So well written, I need to save it. - Phil A.
July 31st, 2022 17:06
That Old Broken Dansette & Other Musings
Neil Higgins said:
501,Dylan,Danzette.You make me feel old Nev.Oh.Wait a minute….
July 31st, 2022 12:12
Neil Higgins said:
501,Dylan,Danzette.You make me feel old Nev.Oh.Wait a minute….
July 31st, 2022 12:12
That Old Broken Dansette & Other Musings
Bella Shepard said:
Each line beautifully expressed! So often it is the little things in life that our brain tenderly stores away for us, that we may retrieve cherished memories and smile. I enjoyed every line.
July 31st, 2022 11:44
Bella Shepard said:
Each line beautifully expressed! So often it is the little things in life that our brain tenderly stores away for us, that we may retrieve cherished memories and smile. I enjoyed every line.
July 31st, 2022 11:44
That Old Broken Dansette & Other Musings
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - what intimate memories of long gone relationships brought to this most readable romantic poem by your expert know-how - -- - the stiches on those patched 501\'s did it for me - - your take on making reality from musings is simply amazing mon ami.................x
July 31st, 2022 03:01
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - what intimate memories of long gone relationships brought to this most readable romantic poem by your expert know-how - -- - the stiches on those patched 501\'s did it for me - - your take on making reality from musings is simply amazing mon ami.................x
July 31st, 2022 03:01
The Shame of Yesterday’s News
MendedFences27 said:
Shameful! The way children across the Globe get treated these days. Mankind has gone insane. News outlets only report what people will tune in to see.
A small waif of a life gets annihilated, and stupid people get more attention. Glad you showed them for what they are. - Phil A.
July 30th, 2022 21:52
MendedFences27 said:
Shameful! The way children across the Globe get treated these days. Mankind has gone insane. News outlets only report what people will tune in to see.
A small waif of a life gets annihilated, and stupid people get more attention. Glad you showed them for what they are. - Phil A.
July 30th, 2022 21:52
The Shame of Yesterday’s News
Bella Shepard said:
I\'ve not heard or seen news the past couple of days, and this truly sickens my heart. I googled and found Lilia Valutyte, a beautiful name of the beautiful little girl I saw pictured. The murder of an innocent child always leaves me in a place where I can make sense of absolutely nothing, especially when it simply becomes a footnote in today\'s news. Her life goes unlived, all that she might have been and done lost through a senseless and cowardly act. Good for you my friend, addressing this. We all need to shout!
July 30th, 2022 13:21
Bella Shepard said:
I\'ve not heard or seen news the past couple of days, and this truly sickens my heart. I googled and found Lilia Valutyte, a beautiful name of the beautiful little girl I saw pictured. The murder of an innocent child always leaves me in a place where I can make sense of absolutely nothing, especially when it simply becomes a footnote in today\'s news. Her life goes unlived, all that she might have been and done lost through a senseless and cowardly act. Good for you my friend, addressing this. We all need to shout!
July 30th, 2022 13:21
The Shame of Yesterday’s News
KRWonder said:
So sad, and your words ring so true. Thanks for sharing this and honoring a lost life through your words.
July 30th, 2022 11:59
KRWonder said:
So sad, and your words ring so true. Thanks for sharing this and honoring a lost life through your words.
July 30th, 2022 11:59
The Shame of Yesterday’s News
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes what was important has radically changed in these uncaring days my friend. \'We have no inkling of what that little girl felt before her last breath.......................x
July 30th, 2022 03:48
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes what was important has radically changed in these uncaring days my friend. \'We have no inkling of what that little girl felt before her last breath.......................x
July 30th, 2022 03:48
The Lovers of Modena Disturbed
MendedFences27 said:
Two people in one grave is unusual, today, but I can\'t say about the fifth century. Lovers buried together perhaps was a common thing, but to die together at the same moment raises questions of murder or assassination. Surely, they would have clung to one another if killed at the same time.
An interesting and quizzical piece. Why were they uprooted in the first place? Were they murdered? From what has been said, we\'ll never know. - Phil A.
July 29th, 2022 15:11
MendedFences27 said:
Two people in one grave is unusual, today, but I can\'t say about the fifth century. Lovers buried together perhaps was a common thing, but to die together at the same moment raises questions of murder or assassination. Surely, they would have clung to one another if killed at the same time.
An interesting and quizzical piece. Why were they uprooted in the first place? Were they murdered? From what has been said, we\'ll never know. - Phil A.
July 29th, 2022 15:11
The Lovers of Modena Disturbed
orchidee said:
Seems like you\'re describing when I first started singing. The shock of it psychologically brought delayed screams for as long as 1600 years! heehee.
July 29th, 2022 13:17
orchidee said:
Seems like you\'re describing when I first started singing. The shock of it psychologically brought delayed screams for as long as 1600 years! heehee.
July 29th, 2022 13:17
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