Comments received on poems by Neville
The Angle of Her Lay
Dove said:
Exquisite! What a wonderful description, and dare I say I am jealous of the gorgeous profile
August 22nd, 2021 09:14
Dove said:
Exquisite! What a wonderful description, and dare I say I am jealous of the gorgeous profile
August 22nd, 2021 09:14
Limerence
Dove said:
Oh my , you musta been a hottie! Oh, I hope you had an escape patch , lol
August 21st, 2021 11:41
Dove said:
Oh my , you musta been a hottie! Oh, I hope you had an escape patch , lol
August 21st, 2021 11:41
Limerence
Doggerel Dave said:
Been there, both sides at different times…..did not enjoy either: inability to concentrate on study and exams on one side, a terrifying responsibility on the other – both, thankfully a long time ago…Who says age doesn’t have its merits….?
One side at least beautifully encapsulated there, Nev.
August 21st, 2021 05:08
Doggerel Dave said:
Been there, both sides at different times…..did not enjoy either: inability to concentrate on study and exams on one side, a terrifying responsibility on the other – both, thankfully a long time ago…Who says age doesn’t have its merits….?
One side at least beautifully encapsulated there, Nev.
August 21st, 2021 05:08
Limerence
Fay Slimm. said:
And that\'s obsessive infatuation to an absolute tee Nev - - choosing obscurity however is a bit drastic methinks. Another impressive three-liner............x
August 21st, 2021 03:47
Fay Slimm. said:
And that\'s obsessive infatuation to an absolute tee Nev - - choosing obscurity however is a bit drastic methinks. Another impressive three-liner............x
August 21st, 2021 03:47
Love like a Song
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely poem ) nice choice of words
August 21st, 2021 01:04
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely poem ) nice choice of words
August 21st, 2021 01:04
Limerence
Goldfinch60 said:
That obscurity will arise in due time Neville.
Andy
August 21st, 2021 00:56
Goldfinch60 said:
That obscurity will arise in due time Neville.
Andy
August 21st, 2021 00:56
Untitled #2
Goldfinch60 said:
So true in some cases Neville, some people do not deserve a second thought.
Andy
August 21st, 2021 00:27
Goldfinch60 said:
So true in some cases Neville, some people do not deserve a second thought.
Andy
August 21st, 2021 00:27
Untitled #2
Trenz Pruca said:
Another great one Neville. Thank you for improving my day..
August 20th, 2021 16:07
Trenz Pruca said:
Another great one Neville. Thank you for improving my day..
August 20th, 2021 16:07
The Angle of Her Lay
myself and me said:
Now I know who to blame for the hot summer night.
August 20th, 2021 13:44
myself and me said:
Now I know who to blame for the hot summer night.
August 20th, 2021 13:44
Untitled #2
Fay Slimm. said:
There comes a time when either gender is tested too much my friend - I guess then appears an untitled and flagrant dismissal which I understand - the She in the waste bin needs to see insults don\'t always bring hasty answers by pacification to most often planned manipulation - - Oooh now look what this read has brought out in me.......... x
August 20th, 2021 08:00
Fay Slimm. said:
There comes a time when either gender is tested too much my friend - I guess then appears an untitled and flagrant dismissal which I understand - the She in the waste bin needs to see insults don\'t always bring hasty answers by pacification to most often planned manipulation - - Oooh now look what this read has brought out in me.......... x
August 20th, 2021 08:00
Untitled #2
Lorna said:
Phew - this was tough on her.... I would have been on the shelf a few times if my husband hadn\'t been so forgiving. But you got it down to a tee!
August 20th, 2021 07:50
Lorna said:
Phew - this was tough on her.... I would have been on the shelf a few times if my husband hadn\'t been so forgiving. But you got it down to a tee!
August 20th, 2021 07:50
Untitled #2
dusk arising said:
Lol at shame or guilt memories.... no such thing, just another few footsteps of the learning stroll through life. The contents of that wastebin serve to thicken the walking boot soles of life\'s journeyman.
August 20th, 2021 06:19
dusk arising said:
Lol at shame or guilt memories.... no such thing, just another few footsteps of the learning stroll through life. The contents of that wastebin serve to thicken the walking boot soles of life\'s journeyman.
August 20th, 2021 06:19
Untitled #2
L. B. Mek said:
\'without even a shelf to sit on
She was deemed unworthy\'..
Oft, passion is deemed a quality
yet
in that moment, of blinding pain
we
far too often, choose to abuse our cherished
weaponising
that same passion, into a reactionary tool
designed
to inflict, such disproportionate levels of heartless
suffering...
(mirror, is a little harder - to look in-to
those, morning after\'s
still, fallible as we are - our conscious
if allowed to, can guide us back
to a realm, where forgiveness
is no longer, such an impossible
dream...)
August 20th, 2021 05:35
L. B. Mek said:
\'without even a shelf to sit on
She was deemed unworthy\'..
Oft, passion is deemed a quality
yet
in that moment, of blinding pain
we
far too often, choose to abuse our cherished
weaponising
that same passion, into a reactionary tool
designed
to inflict, such disproportionate levels of heartless
suffering...
(mirror, is a little harder - to look in-to
those, morning after\'s
still, fallible as we are - our conscious
if allowed to, can guide us back
to a realm, where forgiveness
is no longer, such an impossible
dream...)
August 20th, 2021 05:35
The Angle of Her Lay
L. B. Mek said:
crazy, how with hindsight
all that we couldn\'t fathom
becomes so glaringly understandable,
its just a little unfair
how it often arrives, a little too late
for those willing to hold-on and fight...
another wonderful poetic treat, dear poet
captured the poetic voice with such sincerity
August 20th, 2021 05:23
L. B. Mek said:
crazy, how with hindsight
all that we couldn\'t fathom
becomes so glaringly understandable,
its just a little unfair
how it often arrives, a little too late
for those willing to hold-on and fight...
another wonderful poetic treat, dear poet
captured the poetic voice with such sincerity
August 20th, 2021 05:23
Untitled #2
orchidee said:
Aww, why he chuck her in the bin?! He could send her to me - to recycle? Call the poem \'Recycling Rita\' or summat like that.
Any more info on this from me might be swoony. lol.
August 20th, 2021 04:32
orchidee said:
Aww, why he chuck her in the bin?! He could send her to me - to recycle? Call the poem \'Recycling Rita\' or summat like that.
Any more info on this from me might be swoony. lol.
August 20th, 2021 04:32
Untitled #2
Doggerel Dave said:
Yeh ... not a bad idea, really.. gotta meet fire with fire.... Thanks Nev...
PS: Perhaps second \'fire\' should be \'a hose\'...
August 20th, 2021 04:16
Doggerel Dave said:
Yeh ... not a bad idea, really.. gotta meet fire with fire.... Thanks Nev...
PS: Perhaps second \'fire\' should be \'a hose\'...
August 20th, 2021 04:16
The Angle of Her Lay
Doggerel Dave said:
A leisurely ride over some interesting cuntry, Nev. (As Hamlet might have said....)
August 20th, 2021 01:54
Doggerel Dave said:
A leisurely ride over some interesting cuntry, Nev. (As Hamlet might have said....)
August 20th, 2021 01:54
The Angle of Her Lay
Accidental Poet said:
A very sensuous pen under your command N. 👍
August 19th, 2021 19:20
Accidental Poet said:
A very sensuous pen under your command N. 👍
August 19th, 2021 19:20
The Angle of Her Lay
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Hopefully her wish
is his command.
A wonderfully penned poem.
Thank you for sharing my dear Poet.
Laura🌻
August 19th, 2021 16:43
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Hopefully her wish
is his command.
A wonderfully penned poem.
Thank you for sharing my dear Poet.
Laura🌻
August 19th, 2021 16:43
The Angle of Her Lay
dusk arising said:
Wimmin, I\'ll never understand them... and you dont help, now i\'m bluddy confused too.
August 19th, 2021 13:10
dusk arising said:
Wimmin, I\'ll never understand them... and you dont help, now i\'m bluddy confused too.
August 19th, 2021 13:10
The Angle of Her Lay
orchidee said:
Might have to swoon at this! And should I meet her?! lol.
August 19th, 2021 10:28
orchidee said:
Might have to swoon at this! And should I meet her?! lol.
August 19th, 2021 10:28
The Angle of Her Lay
Fay Slimm. said:
A romantically intimate moment to sigh for and versed to perfection by your expertise mon ami......... I truly admire the inter-rhyming that brings it alive even more..............x
August 19th, 2021 09:34
Fay Slimm. said:
A romantically intimate moment to sigh for and versed to perfection by your expertise mon ami......... I truly admire the inter-rhyming that brings it alive even more..............x
August 19th, 2021 09:34
Elusive Blues
dusk arising said:
Ah that delicacy which elevates female flesh to the desireable artistic heights of sculpture.... and then she moves.... rapture.
August 17th, 2021 09:36
dusk arising said:
Ah that delicacy which elevates female flesh to the desireable artistic heights of sculpture.... and then she moves.... rapture.
August 17th, 2021 09:36
Elusive Blues
Thekkinkkattil said:
Beautifully penned. Hope you find the blues
August 17th, 2021 07:12
Thekkinkkattil said:
Beautifully penned. Hope you find the blues
August 17th, 2021 07:12
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