Comments received on poems by Neville
Something Else Entirely
spilleronsheet said:
“ Remembering those passing times
Cherishing the meets we held that time
Flashes as you chose to leave behind
Me and the memories buried deep inside “
A very emotive write dear Neville
Certainly felt a past which maybe heart never left behind
March 12th, 2022 19:29
spilleronsheet said:
“ Remembering those passing times
Cherishing the meets we held that time
Flashes as you chose to leave behind
Me and the memories buried deep inside “
A very emotive write dear Neville
Certainly felt a past which maybe heart never left behind
March 12th, 2022 19:29
Something Else Entirely
Neville said:
Yes, I understand he had a bad altitude 😎
March 12th, 2022 13:23
Neville said:
Yes, I understand he had a bad altitude 😎
March 12th, 2022 13:23
A Bowl Full of Nothing
myself and me said:
It must be a huge bowl to dive in. At least, he won\'t get drowned.
March 12th, 2022 13:11
myself and me said:
It must be a huge bowl to dive in. At least, he won\'t get drowned.
March 12th, 2022 13:11
Something Else Entirely
myself and me said:
He must have fallen from a very high altitude.
March 12th, 2022 13:04
myself and me said:
He must have fallen from a very high altitude.
March 12th, 2022 13:04
Something Else Entirely
Christina8 said:
A wonderful love poem...perfect and uncomplicated lives are hard to come by!
March 12th, 2022 10:56
Christina8 said:
A wonderful love poem...perfect and uncomplicated lives are hard to come by!
March 12th, 2022 10:56
Something Else Entirely
Doggerel Dave said:
If he managed to notch up, in the course of a life at least one uncomplicated (close to) perfect relationship, then he (they) could feel justification for their existence.
Interesting enigmatic write, Nev.
March 12th, 2022 07:27
Doggerel Dave said:
If he managed to notch up, in the course of a life at least one uncomplicated (close to) perfect relationship, then he (they) could feel justification for their existence.
Interesting enigmatic write, Nev.
March 12th, 2022 07:27
Something Else Entirely
Fay Slimm. said:
Well asked in your verse Nev but not to be answered is what flashes before eyes due to close soon in death......... love if experience I am sure would be forefront in all final thought - - -- such an arresting subject and so adeptly crafted my compassionate friend..................x
March 12th, 2022 04:21
Fay Slimm. said:
Well asked in your verse Nev but not to be answered is what flashes before eyes due to close soon in death......... love if experience I am sure would be forefront in all final thought - - -- such an arresting subject and so adeptly crafted my compassionate friend..................x
March 12th, 2022 04:21
Something Else Entirely
Goldfinch60 said:
Love can be so strong at all times Neville.
Andy
March 12th, 2022 01:31
Goldfinch60 said:
Love can be so strong at all times Neville.
Andy
March 12th, 2022 01:31
A Bowl Full of Nothing
Rozina said:
A clever portrayal of when it all goes wrong, when they don\'t belong, together, forever.......
March 11th, 2022 22:51
Rozina said:
A clever portrayal of when it all goes wrong, when they don\'t belong, together, forever.......
March 11th, 2022 22:51
A Bowl Full of Nothing
SureshG said:
When he strikes the bottom, if he ever does, will his noggin remind him of his undeserving loss, that you can so poetize
March 11th, 2022 09:02
SureshG said:
When he strikes the bottom, if he ever does, will his noggin remind him of his undeserving loss, that you can so poetize
March 11th, 2022 09:02
A Bowl Full of Nothing
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah your pen sets the scene well Nev. - - when love affairs fall to an end a long way down lie those empty feelings of all-out rejection.
March 11th, 2022 06:03
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah your pen sets the scene well Nev. - - when love affairs fall to an end a long way down lie those empty feelings of all-out rejection.
March 11th, 2022 06:03
A Bowl Full of Nothing
L. B. Mek said:
depicting, without a word of mention
that \'hot air\', disparity
in ill-fated romances, opposing timing
and trajectories...
(those who\'ve experienced
something similar
may shirk at the unnervingly
surgical, accuracy
of your measured depiction
but I choose to celebrate
your poetic mastery and brave expression
of sincerity
words, penned with the ink
of love\'s ashen remains...)
March 11th, 2022 05:58
L. B. Mek said:
depicting, without a word of mention
that \'hot air\', disparity
in ill-fated romances, opposing timing
and trajectories...
(those who\'ve experienced
something similar
may shirk at the unnervingly
surgical, accuracy
of your measured depiction
but I choose to celebrate
your poetic mastery and brave expression
of sincerity
words, penned with the ink
of love\'s ashen remains...)
March 11th, 2022 05:58
A Bowl Full of Nothing
orchidee said:
Good write N. Did I meet her, or was a=she too busy knitting?!
March 11th, 2022 04:41
orchidee said:
Good write N. Did I meet her, or was a=she too busy knitting?!
March 11th, 2022 04:41
Oedipus
dusk arising said:
Oh that awful day when I bent to kiss granny goodbye and she stuck her tongue in my mouth. It tasted of humbugs by the way.
March 10th, 2022 12:09
dusk arising said:
Oh that awful day when I bent to kiss granny goodbye and she stuck her tongue in my mouth. It tasted of humbugs by the way.
March 10th, 2022 12:09
Oedipus
Fay Slimm. said:
Oedipus would never prosper by taking up that odious offer - at least in my Chronicles - - mind you I like a bit of poetic history delivered thy way mine clever Sir Neville.
March 10th, 2022 09:52
Fay Slimm. said:
Oedipus would never prosper by taking up that odious offer - at least in my Chronicles - - mind you I like a bit of poetic history delivered thy way mine clever Sir Neville.
March 10th, 2022 09:52
Oedipus
Christina8 said:
Excellent write dear Neville...It gave me a giggle but you can never go wrong with the classics!
March 10th, 2022 09:30
Christina8 said:
Excellent write dear Neville...It gave me a giggle but you can never go wrong with the classics!
March 10th, 2022 09:30
Oedipus
L. B. Mek said:
\'but don\'t try this at home folks ..\'
(if only Freud, had heeded these words
how much of psychology\'s
mind fckery
he could have saved us, literally...)
lmao
\'blame it all, on that oracle at Delphi
and those inheritors of life\'s, guessing games
questing Poet\'s and and philosophical sages\'
(loved the humour, you squeezed
out of this morose tragedy, inking of poetic ill-fate)
March 10th, 2022 05:40
L. B. Mek said:
\'but don\'t try this at home folks ..\'
(if only Freud, had heeded these words
how much of psychology\'s
mind fckery
he could have saved us, literally...)
lmao
\'blame it all, on that oracle at Delphi
and those inheritors of life\'s, guessing games
questing Poet\'s and and philosophical sages\'
(loved the humour, you squeezed
out of this morose tragedy, inking of poetic ill-fate)
March 10th, 2022 05:40
Oedipus
Rozina said:
But this complex is a crucial stage in normal development - you’ve just destroyed it! Hehe!
March 10th, 2022 04:38
Rozina said:
But this complex is a crucial stage in normal development - you’ve just destroyed it! Hehe!
March 10th, 2022 04:38
Oedipus
Doggerel Dave said:
Hey Neville - wot about a video? Why not go to yusporn or ask one of orchi\'s hamsters?
March 10th, 2022 03:28
Doggerel Dave said:
Hey Neville - wot about a video? Why not go to yusporn or ask one of orchi\'s hamsters?
March 10th, 2022 03:28
Oedipus
Goldfinch60 said:
No won’t try that, my mother has been dead for ten years.
Andy
March 10th, 2022 02:57
Goldfinch60 said:
No won’t try that, my mother has been dead for ten years.
Andy
March 10th, 2022 02:57
Fore and Aft
spilleronsheet said:
Felt to me it was the horizon
Where the sky loves the earth below
Don’t know but why it felt so heavenly sweet
Good one dear Neville
March 9th, 2022 14:32
spilleronsheet said:
Felt to me it was the horizon
Where the sky loves the earth below
Don’t know but why it felt so heavenly sweet
Good one dear Neville
March 9th, 2022 14:32
Fore and Aft
Christina8 said:
Sounds to me like a perfect relationship, N! Great write!
March 9th, 2022 08:35
Christina8 said:
Sounds to me like a perfect relationship, N! Great write!
March 9th, 2022 08:35
Fore and Aft
Fay Slimm. said:
Naught like those spicey ups and downs to keep life afloat - that\'s what I say ............. x
March 9th, 2022 06:35
Fay Slimm. said:
Naught like those spicey ups and downs to keep life afloat - that\'s what I say ............. x
March 9th, 2022 06:35
Same Old Blue Jeans
Rozina said:
Spent beauty.... sigh! Hair dropping, wrinkles appearing, age spots increasing, muscle tone losing, new dentures, height falling, but can still fit into those old blue jeans!
March 9th, 2022 05:02
Rozina said:
Spent beauty.... sigh! Hair dropping, wrinkles appearing, age spots increasing, muscle tone losing, new dentures, height falling, but can still fit into those old blue jeans!
March 9th, 2022 05:02
Fore and Aft
dusk arising said:
All those ups and downs.... like a country road in fine weather.... a time to relax and enjoy the ride.
Fore and aft with nothing more than a surface ripple to tease and such rich picking beneath the surface. How she loves to be in his keep net when he has his tackle out.
March 9th, 2022 02:29
dusk arising said:
All those ups and downs.... like a country road in fine weather.... a time to relax and enjoy the ride.
Fore and aft with nothing more than a surface ripple to tease and such rich picking beneath the surface. How she loves to be in his keep net when he has his tackle out.
March 9th, 2022 02:29
Same Old Blue Jeans
Goldfinch60 said:
Acceptance of what we have become is so important in our lives as it takes us into a place of peace within ourselves.
Andy
March 9th, 2022 02:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Acceptance of what we have become is so important in our lives as it takes us into a place of peace within ourselves.
Andy
March 9th, 2022 02:06
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