Comments received on poems by Neville
Elusive Blues
Poetic Dan said:
Felt every bit of this my friend, thanks for sharing
August 17th, 2021 06:32
Poetic Dan said:
Felt every bit of this my friend, thanks for sharing
August 17th, 2021 06:32
Elusive Blues
L. B. Mek said:
those blue flames of passion
once we squander them
so impossibly hard, to ignite it within another again
but what to do
some mistakes, try as we might, just can\'t avoid
and although our loyalty may have failed us once
we must still strive
to find a path, to that Phoenix pulse of our love...
(this is how your poetry, expressed itself to me my friend
love the subtlety, a joy to read
even if it brought back some unwanted memories)
August 17th, 2021 05:20
L. B. Mek said:
those blue flames of passion
once we squander them
so impossibly hard, to ignite it within another again
but what to do
some mistakes, try as we might, just can\'t avoid
and although our loyalty may have failed us once
we must still strive
to find a path, to that Phoenix pulse of our love...
(this is how your poetry, expressed itself to me my friend
love the subtlety, a joy to read
even if it brought back some unwanted memories)
August 17th, 2021 05:20
Elusive Blues
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m not a painter... so I think I would have to get closer to make my own private observations in order to verify the delicacy of her beauty.....
Got me going here, Nev.
August 17th, 2021 04:34
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m not a painter... so I think I would have to get closer to make my own private observations in order to verify the delicacy of her beauty.....
Got me going here, Nev.
August 17th, 2021 04:34
Elusive Blues
Fay Slimm. said:
Evocative and fizzing with intimate moments of search and find. Who would not welcome the joy of discovering blues as elusive as these words portray - - great stuff again Nev..........x
August 17th, 2021 04:09
Fay Slimm. said:
Evocative and fizzing with intimate moments of search and find. Who would not welcome the joy of discovering blues as elusive as these words portray - - great stuff again Nev..........x
August 17th, 2021 04:09
Elusive Blues
Goldfinch60 said:
Those blues will be there for him one day Neville.
Andy
August 17th, 2021 02:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Those blues will be there for him one day Neville.
Andy
August 17th, 2021 02:59
Elusive Blues
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
I\'m gonna take up studying a certain porcelain! Or should I stick to the ceramic sort? I might swoon otherwise. lol.
August 17th, 2021 01:51
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
I\'m gonna take up studying a certain porcelain! Or should I stick to the ceramic sort? I might swoon otherwise. lol.
August 17th, 2021 01:51
Thanks to Covid
Goldfinch60 said:
So true, corruption has always been there unless you see through it and move along a different pathway.
Andy
August 16th, 2021 23:44
Goldfinch60 said:
So true, corruption has always been there unless you see through it and move along a different pathway.
Andy
August 16th, 2021 23:44
Thanks to Covid
Dove said:
Covid is the thief, who steals life
from unsuspecting souls,
spreading corruption and strife
Oh yes , it has a strong hold
Not even masked men can conquer
Though try and trace
Oh, what we humans endure
With a Mask upon their face
Found in your blood stream
Searched in your pocket of privacy
Covid makes every soul scream
It came from you, not me
August 16th, 2021 09:41
Dove said:
Covid is the thief, who steals life
from unsuspecting souls,
spreading corruption and strife
Oh yes , it has a strong hold
Not even masked men can conquer
Though try and trace
Oh, what we humans endure
With a Mask upon their face
Found in your blood stream
Searched in your pocket of privacy
Covid makes every soul scream
It came from you, not me
August 16th, 2021 09:41
Thanks to Covid
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
But can we now rcognise the corrupt?... with their face masks on?
Great thought of the day Nev
Thank you Loved it
August 16th, 2021 05:34
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
But can we now rcognise the corrupt?... with their face masks on?
Great thought of the day Nev
Thank you Loved it
August 16th, 2021 05:34
Thanks to Covid
dusk arising said:
I blame that washing machine I bought in 2018 for being secretly made in China.
August 16th, 2021 05:18
dusk arising said:
I blame that washing machine I bought in 2018 for being secretly made in China.
August 16th, 2021 05:18
Thanks to Covid
L. B. Mek said:
yup,
just wait till history books
\'write it up\', all tidy
and retrospectively - tampered with, fact
who, to blame - blamed likely
survivors decreed, mere lucky
and for those in power, an opportunity
Missed-out or Capitalised upon
so just another dogmatic tale
to be worded and preached
for the lowly majority\'s
fearmongering attuned, manageability\'s ease
cyclical, isn\'t cynical enough
to do our capacity for pathetic
enough justice!
still, we got Big Brother\'s apps didn\'t we
all Orwell prophesised and everything...
August 16th, 2021 05:06
L. B. Mek said:
yup,
just wait till history books
\'write it up\', all tidy
and retrospectively - tampered with, fact
who, to blame - blamed likely
survivors decreed, mere lucky
and for those in power, an opportunity
Missed-out or Capitalised upon
so just another dogmatic tale
to be worded and preached
for the lowly majority\'s
fearmongering attuned, manageability\'s ease
cyclical, isn\'t cynical enough
to do our capacity for pathetic
enough justice!
still, we got Big Brother\'s apps didn\'t we
all Orwell prophesised and everything...
August 16th, 2021 05:06
Thanks to Covid
Lorna said:
I\'m dense and I\'m with Doggerel Dave Neville......... please let us know what you mean. Unless it\'s that Covid has exposed every single rotten politician that exists at the moment??
August 16th, 2021 04:42
Lorna said:
I\'m dense and I\'m with Doggerel Dave Neville......... please let us know what you mean. Unless it\'s that Covid has exposed every single rotten politician that exists at the moment??
August 16th, 2021 04:42
Thanks to Covid
Fay Slimm. said:
Smiling real big at this bit of tongue-in-cheek Covid exposure - your wit mon ami is easily tracked, traced and found by the likes of me.
August 16th, 2021 04:29
Fay Slimm. said:
Smiling real big at this bit of tongue-in-cheek Covid exposure - your wit mon ami is easily tracked, traced and found by the likes of me.
August 16th, 2021 04:29
Thanks to Covid
Doggerel Dave said:
Just a teeny bit enigmatic, Nev.
‘Like to elucidate?
‘t’s not as if I don’t like poetry where more is left unsaid than said, but mystery and inexplicability bring on a certain nervous condition (the details of which I will not disclose here)….
No? You are going to hold your fire until other poets have..... ain\'t you?
August 16th, 2021 04:14
Doggerel Dave said:
Just a teeny bit enigmatic, Nev.
‘Like to elucidate?
‘t’s not as if I don’t like poetry where more is left unsaid than said, but mystery and inexplicability bring on a certain nervous condition (the details of which I will not disclose here)….
No? You are going to hold your fire until other poets have..... ain\'t you?
August 16th, 2021 04:14
Black Candles
Goldfinch60 said:
Those black candles will still produce the light to show us the way forward into love.
Andy
August 16th, 2021 00:34
Goldfinch60 said:
Those black candles will still produce the light to show us the way forward into love.
Andy
August 16th, 2021 00:34
Black Candles
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
…and dream she did!!
Your poem may be brief,
but your penned words say a lot…
a lot for your readers’ to unravel.
Thank you for sharing your mighty pen.
Laura🌻
August 15th, 2021 16:10
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
…and dream she did!!
Your poem may be brief,
but your penned words say a lot…
a lot for your readers’ to unravel.
Thank you for sharing your mighty pen.
Laura🌻
August 15th, 2021 16:10
Black Candles
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Neville.
Black candles and Tansy a warlock\'s brew a ripe apple and the beauty sleeps.
August 15th, 2021 07:34
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Neville.
Black candles and Tansy a warlock\'s brew a ripe apple and the beauty sleeps.
August 15th, 2021 07:34
Black Candles
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Scuse me Doc - Tansy, samphire and dried peppermint: you sure your licence and registration are still in good order....?
Atmosphere in plenty there though.....
August 15th, 2021 06:27
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Scuse me Doc - Tansy, samphire and dried peppermint: you sure your licence and registration are still in good order....?
Atmosphere in plenty there though.....
August 15th, 2021 06:27
Black Candles
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - that\'s what love often does to a sufferer - that is if samphire is available -- - - and I know cos I bin there too ..............x
August 15th, 2021 06:23
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - that\'s what love often does to a sufferer - that is if samphire is available -- - - and I know cos I bin there too ..............x
August 15th, 2021 06:23
Covertly Covid
Dove said:
Definitely it’s a battle field and it does maneuver covertly! My only weapon is immunization, mask up, and cleansing! Best to u and yours
August 14th, 2021 18:13
Dove said:
Definitely it’s a battle field and it does maneuver covertly! My only weapon is immunization, mask up, and cleansing! Best to u and yours
August 14th, 2021 18:13
Covertly Covid
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing question Neville, most do though.
Andy
August 14th, 2021 11:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing question Neville, most do though.
Andy
August 14th, 2021 11:47
Covertly Covid
Doggerel Dave said:
\"If you did I did....but our too close company during lock down -......\"
August 14th, 2021 04:08
Doggerel Dave said:
\"If you did I did....but our too close company during lock down -......\"
August 14th, 2021 04:08
Covertly Covid
Fay Slimm. said:
Covert is one of my favourite terms to describe Covid - how did you know that I wonder ! --- your penned question Nev. has more than one answer but one in the eye for cunning Covid is to be known as a determined survivor - - methinks - - maybe .............x
August 14th, 2021 03:41
Fay Slimm. said:
Covert is one of my favourite terms to describe Covid - how did you know that I wonder ! --- your penned question Nev. has more than one answer but one in the eye for cunning Covid is to be known as a determined survivor - - methinks - - maybe .............x
August 14th, 2021 03:41
Covertly Covid
dusk arising said:
There are many survivors of terrible episodes in their lives. All too readily we can think of the terrible loss of life in WW2 and extermination camps.
How does lockdown/shielding compare, are we heroic survivors. No. Though a dramatic episode in history it does not compare to history\'s disasters for us survivors.
But it ain\'t quite over yet.
Sorry to go off subject Neville but the above are thoughts which came to mind reading your words my friend.
August 14th, 2021 03:34
dusk arising said:
There are many survivors of terrible episodes in their lives. All too readily we can think of the terrible loss of life in WW2 and extermination camps.
How does lockdown/shielding compare, are we heroic survivors. No. Though a dramatic episode in history it does not compare to history\'s disasters for us survivors.
But it ain\'t quite over yet.
Sorry to go off subject Neville but the above are thoughts which came to mind reading your words my friend.
August 14th, 2021 03:34
Covertly Covid
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Hope you both survived. My singing survives, but that can\'t be helped!
August 14th, 2021 01:53
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Hope you both survived. My singing survives, but that can\'t be helped!
August 14th, 2021 01:53
Calling Time
Dove said:
Serenity of time, and such heartfelt painting! Them dust motes, always annoy me, but alas time shall catch me too! Excellent writing Sir Neville
August 13th, 2021 21:24
Dove said:
Serenity of time, and such heartfelt painting! Them dust motes, always annoy me, but alas time shall catch me too! Excellent writing Sir Neville
August 13th, 2021 21:24
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