Comments received on poems by Neville



Same Old Blue Jeans
Doggerel Dave said:

Wot flares? Do try to hang onto them just a little longer.... they will be back... not that I\'ll be wearing them ...as impractical as those tight ankle jobs that are still around now....
Thanks Nev - I\'ve been wanting to get my frustration re changing fashion for some (a very) long time...

March 8th, 2022 18:09

Same Old Blue Jeans
Christina8 said:

Spent beauty sucks for everyone but hey. if you can still get in your old favorite pair of blue jeans....thats epic! A great write dear N!

March 8th, 2022 17:09

Same Old Blue Jeans
dusk arising said:

Time was back in the sixties when we all wore denim jeans and denim jackets, faded of course. A look I still admire and have the clobber to prove it though, just as you suggest, one doesnt strike the same presence as all those years ago. now where did I park my Lambretta.

March 8th, 2022 13:06

Same Old Blue Jeans
orchidee said:

Now, did I meet any gals in blue jeans?!
I wish I would shut up a while sometimes. lol.

March 8th, 2022 11:30

Same Old Blue Jeans
Fay Slimm. said:

Once in those jeans time becomes ageless life becomes high again and hair grows overnight - - so sages say - - - - and mirrors cant show us that love is forever - - a reflective verse Nev..............x

March 8th, 2022 11:30

How Well Will You Remember Me
Rozina said:

Someone will without doubt. A family member, a friend, a colleague, admin, MPS poets for sure! Yes, don\'t go anywhere yet!

March 7th, 2022 22:47

How Well Will You Remember Me
SureshG said:

I fear I know too well, so I dare not even ask -

but knowing the poet in you, you shall be remembered well

March 7th, 2022 17:23

How Well Will You Remember Me
Laura🌻 said:

Neville,

Your caring, your good deeds, (🕯), your six poetry books, etc. will not allow for you to be forgotten … you’ll be remembered well and……….fondly! ☺️

Laura🌻

March 7th, 2022 17:22

No Ordinary Woman
Alexander Pope III said:

Neville , fewer words but with lots of power.

March 7th, 2022 10:11

How Well Will You Remember Me
Christina8 said:

I actually feel such feelings too as my mother died somewhat young. You shall be remembered fondly, I\'m sure. Those around you that love you will be changed forever. Don\'t go anywhere soon, we\'re sure to miss your wonderful poetry!...C

March 7th, 2022 09:43

How Well Will You Remember Me
Rocky Lagou said:

Very forceful poem and I feel like this all the time. The feeling of being forgotten!

March 7th, 2022 09:16

How Well Will You Remember Me
Poetic Dan said:

I know what I\'ll remember and it\'s not between the sheets!

A tip top poetic sailor, I even had the pleasure to meet. Sharing a love for a scruffy tail, carry our hearts for all to see!

Just saying..... that is..
Great work

March 7th, 2022 09:13

No Ordinary Woman
Rocky Lagou said:

Wow what a message so true. We\'re all atypical beings!

March 7th, 2022 09:13

How Well Will You Remember Me
dusk arising said:

Yes I wonder these things too, but it must be so if true love was involved.

Indeed I\'m reminded of the time when I discovered that the young lady singing in a group i was playing with disclosed to me that she was the daughter of one of my old flames and had heard such wonderful stories about me as only a mother would share with her daughter. My head swelled - and I wrote poetry.

March 7th, 2022 07:40

How Well Will You Remember Me
L. B. Mek said:

in one of my older scribbles
I remember writing
\'I shall keep that promise
I broke, while at your side\'
(or something like that)
and that\'s what essence you imbue
in these words, I think
a yearning
for us not, to become
yet another source
of hurt
to the ones, we once
loved, so earnestly
with all our heart...
(as-ever your subtlety
just drips between my defenceless cracks
and bleeds my bruises anew
staining my scars, a little darker
while reminding me of my fallibility
and reaffirming my choices
to become, that better me
I strive to find..)
simply beautiful honesty and bravery
being showcased in your poetry, dear empathetic Poet

March 7th, 2022 07:15

How Well Will You Remember Me
Fay Slimm. said:

An understandable plea from one whose warm heart needs that bit of something to combat aging - - The fine traits and the good times with others will surely leave marks coated with love and stored for remembering. Thank you dear Nev for wording what most of us question yet cannot express.........x

March 7th, 2022 05:50

How Well Will You Remember Me
orchidee said:

I remember when... I met a lass....!
oh no, not one in your \'I remember when\' series of about 10 million Orchi. Argghh! lol.

March 7th, 2022 02:35

How Well Will You Remember Me
Goldfinch60 said:

I am sure those fondest terms of remembering will always be there Neville.

Andy

March 7th, 2022 02:30

No Ordinary Woman
Crowns4Christ said:

What is ordinary anyway,each one of us, sparkles like a precious gem, even if we\'re a diamond in the rough.
And there sure isn\'t an ordinary man either, each one of you are special to us women, I\'m partial to my husband Dion of course,the most important man in my life, other than God and Christ Jesus.good piece Neville

March 6th, 2022 17:05

No Ordinary Woman
Laura🌻 said:

Neville,

From a man’s point of view, what is an ordinary woman, anyway?!………

Laura🌻

March 6th, 2022 16:09

No Ordinary Woman
SureshG said:

ordinary woman
an oxymoron

a poem well penned

March 6th, 2022 13:39

No Ordinary Woman
Christina8 said:

I think most women are extraordinary holding together households and men alike.....This is a beautiful write and it\'s going in my fav\'s...C

March 6th, 2022 10:28

No Ordinary Woman
Thekkinkkattil said:

So very true, only a women can hold a broken man with glue.May it be your mother sis or wife

March 6th, 2022 07:43

Not Wanting to be Famous
Doggerel Dave said:

Nearly missed this one, Neville -sorry.
Today no time to be famous when Social Media so rampant.
There\'s appalling damage done to people via that medium where anonymity is assured

March 6th, 2022 06:35

Not Wanting to be Famous
Paul Bell said:

Sort of reminds me of Captain Tom. Just wanted to raise a few quid for charity, which he did. Now the fallout has happened, the charity\'s being investigated, the family are getting abuse, and it just goes on.

March 6th, 2022 06:14

No Ordinary Woman
Fay Slimm. said:

Ah - - truly agreed Nev. - the word ordinary can never be applied to the female gender or in fact for any of your unique versing dear friend........x

March 6th, 2022 05:32

No Ordinary Woman
orchidee said:

Good write N.
I can\'t recall if I met her or not. lol.

March 6th, 2022 03:03

No Ordinary Woman
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true Neville.

Andy

March 6th, 2022 02:53

No Ordinary Woman
Michael Edwards said:

And long may that be the case, mine shore aint no ordinary woman - bless her.

March 6th, 2022 02:45

No Ordinary Woman
dusk arising said:

Deffo no such thing as an ordinary woman exists.... i can show you the scars to prove it.

March 6th, 2022 02:10



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