Comments received on poems by Neville
Not Wanting to be Famous
Rozina said:
Famous, rich, seem to have everything (in our eyes), and then news about their suicides. Incomprehensible to many of us. Masks on hiding their real anguish. Sad one.
March 5th, 2022 23:00
Rozina said:
Famous, rich, seem to have everything (in our eyes), and then news about their suicides. Incomprehensible to many of us. Masks on hiding their real anguish. Sad one.
March 5th, 2022 23:00
Not Wanting to be Famous
Christina8 said:
Very sad write but well written....It is true that not everyone is cut out to be famous....no privacy! Poignant ending.....C
March 5th, 2022 14:27
Christina8 said:
Very sad write but well written....It is true that not everyone is cut out to be famous....no privacy! Poignant ending.....C
March 5th, 2022 14:27
Not Wanting to be Famous
Dove said:
Famous is like being naked... They can see all your private stuff. 😎
March 5th, 2022 06:10
Dove said:
Famous is like being naked... They can see all your private stuff. 😎
March 5th, 2022 06:10
Not Wanting to be Famous
Fay Slimm. said:
Fame can be dangerous to talented souls who need no glory - - there are many come to mind who ended it by choosing suicide through anguish - - you poem their lives with more than compassion here Nev.........................x
March 5th, 2022 04:47
Fay Slimm. said:
Fame can be dangerous to talented souls who need no glory - - there are many come to mind who ended it by choosing suicide through anguish - - you poem their lives with more than compassion here Nev.........................x
March 5th, 2022 04:47
Not Wanting to be Famous
Michael Edwards said:
But he died in peace - such an emotive write - great stuff Neville.
March 5th, 2022 04:20
Michael Edwards said:
But he died in peace - such an emotive write - great stuff Neville.
March 5th, 2022 04:20
Not Wanting to be Famous
Caring dove said:
Sad writing . Sometimes we want things in life that are not what we truly want .. and it just makes us miserable . So why reach for things that just leave us hurting .
March 5th, 2022 03:53
Caring dove said:
Sad writing . Sometimes we want things in life that are not what we truly want .. and it just makes us miserable . So why reach for things that just leave us hurting .
March 5th, 2022 03:53
The Sound, the Taste and Feel of Her Tongue
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Neville.
Andy
March 5th, 2022 02:05
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Neville.
Andy
March 5th, 2022 02:05
The Sound, the Taste and Feel of Her Tongue
Rozina said:
Hot!! In the beginning I thought it was a continuation of your dog story! (The rudder and I got it wrong till the end).
March 4th, 2022 22:52
Rozina said:
Hot!! In the beginning I thought it was a continuation of your dog story! (The rudder and I got it wrong till the end).
March 4th, 2022 22:52
The Sound, the Taste and Feel of Her Tongue
Rocky Lagou said:
They say you should trace your name with your tongue when kissing someone. So I\'m guessing she must have like 10 middle names in order to have her kiss so memorable! 😅 Well done!
March 4th, 2022 09:34
Rocky Lagou said:
They say you should trace your name with your tongue when kissing someone. So I\'m guessing she must have like 10 middle names in order to have her kiss so memorable! 😅 Well done!
March 4th, 2022 09:34
The Sound, the Taste and Feel of Her Tongue
Christina8 said:
You\'ve well captured the taste and the feel of a lovers tongue..I really enjoyed myself with this poem...C
March 4th, 2022 09:06
Christina8 said:
You\'ve well captured the taste and the feel of a lovers tongue..I really enjoyed myself with this poem...C
March 4th, 2022 09:06
The Sound, the Taste and Feel of Her Tongue
Dove said:
I guess, we are on the same theme , but
yours are so much more juicy! Lol
I meant the poem. 😀😍
March 4th, 2022 08:59
Dove said:
I guess, we are on the same theme , but
yours are so much more juicy! Lol
I meant the poem. 😀😍
March 4th, 2022 08:59
The Sound, the Taste and Feel of Her Tongue
L. B. Mek said:
\'it’s never the same
But unique and refreshing
thirst quenching
And otherwise welcome
given free\'..
what a poetic escape, gift
of a read
after such a gruelling week
of negativity
and dispiriting, reality..
(had my mind, skipping back
to
those now, cobwebbed
teenage years of spontaneous, crushes
where the slightest detail
was enough, fuel
for us to daydream, free
of life\'s bruises, as safety wheel
limitations...)
March 4th, 2022 06:39
L. B. Mek said:
\'it’s never the same
But unique and refreshing
thirst quenching
And otherwise welcome
given free\'..
what a poetic escape, gift
of a read
after such a gruelling week
of negativity
and dispiriting, reality..
(had my mind, skipping back
to
those now, cobwebbed
teenage years of spontaneous, crushes
where the slightest detail
was enough, fuel
for us to daydream, free
of life\'s bruises, as safety wheel
limitations...)
March 4th, 2022 06:39
The Sound, the Taste and Feel of Her Tongue
Fay Slimm. said:
So seriously sensual I could sip and savour each line - - so smoothly mmmmmmorish ..................x
March 4th, 2022 04:51
Fay Slimm. said:
So seriously sensual I could sip and savour each line - - so smoothly mmmmmmorish ..................x
March 4th, 2022 04:51
The Sound, the Taste and Feel of Her Tongue
dusk arising said:
the torrid tingling of touching tongue tips tenderly mmmmm ...... rather near the top of my list in sensual matters.
Dammit my windows have steamed up.
March 4th, 2022 03:34
dusk arising said:
the torrid tingling of touching tongue tips tenderly mmmmm ...... rather near the top of my list in sensual matters.
Dammit my windows have steamed up.
March 4th, 2022 03:34
The Sound, the Taste and Feel of Her Tongue
orchidee said:
Should I meet her?! lol.
March 4th, 2022 03:18
orchidee said:
Should I meet her?! lol.
March 4th, 2022 03:18
The Tale of Brulee
spilleronsheet said:
What a lovely description of one of man’s best friend…most loyal at heart….felt nostalgic about my old friend who grew up with me and my cousins…it was a German shepherd…very well crafted dear Neville and thanks for sharing and you reignited my forgotten memories
March 3rd, 2022 19:43
spilleronsheet said:
What a lovely description of one of man’s best friend…most loyal at heart….felt nostalgic about my old friend who grew up with me and my cousins…it was a German shepherd…very well crafted dear Neville and thanks for sharing and you reignited my forgotten memories
March 3rd, 2022 19:43
The Tale of Brulee
Rozina said:
Hehehe I had no idea! Until I read your comment about your dog. Very entertaining Neville.
March 3rd, 2022 18:30
Rozina said:
Hehehe I had no idea! Until I read your comment about your dog. Very entertaining Neville.
March 3rd, 2022 18:30
The Tale of Brulee
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
…and I thought you’d be writing about a
crème brûlée you’d be enjoying after your walk with your dog.😉
Enjoyed the read.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
March 3rd, 2022 16:21
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
…and I thought you’d be writing about a
crème brûlée you’d be enjoying after your walk with your dog.😉
Enjoyed the read.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
March 3rd, 2022 16:21
The Tale of Brulee
Dove said:
Awe , and I thought it was a Golden Cocker Spaniel-
Lovely imagery, sun-kissed
March 3rd, 2022 10:47
Dove said:
Awe , and I thought it was a Golden Cocker Spaniel-
Lovely imagery, sun-kissed
March 3rd, 2022 10:47
The Tale of Brulee
Rocky Lagou said:
What an image portrayed so finely! I almost saw the dog\'s tail just wagging back and forth. Very well done! ✨
March 3rd, 2022 10:14
Rocky Lagou said:
What an image portrayed so finely! I almost saw the dog\'s tail just wagging back and forth. Very well done! ✨
March 3rd, 2022 10:14
The Tale of Brulee
Poetic Dan said:
Lmao... this was brilliant!
I have to take screenshot of my photos or they won\'t load ;)
Keep up the write my friend
March 3rd, 2022 09:41
Poetic Dan said:
Lmao... this was brilliant!
I have to take screenshot of my photos or they won\'t load ;)
Keep up the write my friend
March 3rd, 2022 09:41
The Tale of Brulee
Christina8 said:
A beautiful poem about your dog, very descriptive. Loved it!
March 3rd, 2022 08:09
Christina8 said:
A beautiful poem about your dog, very descriptive. Loved it!
March 3rd, 2022 08:09
The Tale of Brulee
Fay Slimm. said:
Your pen paints her beauty so well Nev - -- a lovely read.............x
March 3rd, 2022 06:58
Fay Slimm. said:
Your pen paints her beauty so well Nev - -- a lovely read.............x
March 3rd, 2022 06:58
The Tale of Brulee
L. B. Mek said:
love the image of that last line
\'rudder\' is such an apt wording..
I remember as a child
we had a huge Dane, dense black in colour
so black, it glowed
like a moonless night sky
and every evening, when my father
commuting back home
would turn the car
on to our street, half a mile
from our door
the barking would begin
so energetic, every night
as-if
trying to pull the car along those last few yards, a little quicker..
(if you\'re not some monster of a human
and love dogs
I consider you kin..
I\'m simple minded, like that
unashamedly so!) lol
March 3rd, 2022 06:41
L. B. Mek said:
love the image of that last line
\'rudder\' is such an apt wording..
I remember as a child
we had a huge Dane, dense black in colour
so black, it glowed
like a moonless night sky
and every evening, when my father
commuting back home
would turn the car
on to our street, half a mile
from our door
the barking would begin
so energetic, every night
as-if
trying to pull the car along those last few yards, a little quicker..
(if you\'re not some monster of a human
and love dogs
I consider you kin..
I\'m simple minded, like that
unashamedly so!) lol
March 3rd, 2022 06:41
The Tale of Brulee
Doggerel Dave said:
And as the truck moved off, there would be no more laying around. The joy of a dog in a moving vehicle......
March 3rd, 2022 06:30
Doggerel Dave said:
And as the truck moved off, there would be no more laying around. The joy of a dog in a moving vehicle......
March 3rd, 2022 06:30
The Tale of Brulee
Paul Bell said:
Dogs know how to enjoy themselves, as the thirst for life shows. I just tell mines he\'s chipped, so he can take himself out and get lost and then found. lol
March 3rd, 2022 05:46
Paul Bell said:
Dogs know how to enjoy themselves, as the thirst for life shows. I just tell mines he\'s chipped, so he can take himself out and get lost and then found. lol
March 3rd, 2022 05:46
The Tale of Brulee
dusk arising said:
Is it a dog?.... is it a plane?...... is it a bird?...... It\'s Batgirl..... no.... I digress......
Well Neville once again an engmatic challenge... I\'ve read it three times and I can\'t get the image of a golden retriever laid on the back seat out of my mind. Wagging it\'s rudder of a tail.
A dog\'s tail can be the most destructive article known to mankind in the wrong circumstances.
March 3rd, 2022 04:53
dusk arising said:
Is it a dog?.... is it a plane?...... is it a bird?...... It\'s Batgirl..... no.... I digress......
Well Neville once again an engmatic challenge... I\'ve read it three times and I can\'t get the image of a golden retriever laid on the back seat out of my mind. Wagging it\'s rudder of a tail.
A dog\'s tail can be the most destructive article known to mankind in the wrong circumstances.
March 3rd, 2022 04:53
A Scatter of Moments
Goldfinch60 said:
May those moments of love come together Neville and give you total fulfilment.
Andy
March 3rd, 2022 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
May those moments of love come together Neville and give you total fulfilment.
Andy
March 3rd, 2022 01:47
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