Comments received on poems by Neville
When You Find These Words
Fay Slimm. said:
Good enough yes - but ignoring never - -- a plea that your readers will not adhere to of that I am sure mon dear ami..........x
August 6th, 2021 05:00
Fay Slimm. said:
Good enough yes - but ignoring never - -- a plea that your readers will not adhere to of that I am sure mon dear ami..........x
August 6th, 2021 05:00
Magic Bead
SureshG said:
I sense her tease, just as your words tease our senses
August 5th, 2021 13:45
SureshG said:
I sense her tease, just as your words tease our senses
August 5th, 2021 13:45
Magic Bead
L. B. Mek said:
A great shorty, my friend!
purity of genuine sensuality
is fast becoming, as archaic
as integrity
in a modern couples: sincerity of intimacy...
(In fantastical Oriental folk-lore
there are stories, surrounding
Fox\'s, pure white and empowered
with multiple tails;
each tail, representing - equivalence
to a Cat\'s nine lives
in Western society folk-lore,
and in most of the stories
however diverse the details,
the Fox usually ends-up sharing
its Bead - of Life
with a lucky human,
Trusting: its very existence
with another)
ain\'t it all, just beautiful
when written down in Poetic
black n white...
(thank you, for sharing
your Subtle - unassuming, Brilliance
with us dear Poet!)
August 3rd, 2021 03:42
L. B. Mek said:
A great shorty, my friend!
purity of genuine sensuality
is fast becoming, as archaic
as integrity
in a modern couples: sincerity of intimacy...
(In fantastical Oriental folk-lore
there are stories, surrounding
Fox\'s, pure white and empowered
with multiple tails;
each tail, representing - equivalence
to a Cat\'s nine lives
in Western society folk-lore,
and in most of the stories
however diverse the details,
the Fox usually ends-up sharing
its Bead - of Life
with a lucky human,
Trusting: its very existence
with another)
ain\'t it all, just beautiful
when written down in Poetic
black n white...
(thank you, for sharing
your Subtle - unassuming, Brilliance
with us dear Poet!)
August 3rd, 2021 03:42
Magic Bead
Doggerel Dave said:
When magic bead found and appropriately revered, the energy released.........
August 2nd, 2021 22:05
Doggerel Dave said:
When magic bead found and appropriately revered, the energy released.........
August 2nd, 2021 22:05
Magic Bead
Accidental Poet said:
Nothing so naughty can be so wrong. Hit the mark here N. 😉
August 2nd, 2021 20:43
Accidental Poet said:
Nothing so naughty can be so wrong. Hit the mark here N. 😉
August 2nd, 2021 20:43
Magic Bead
Fay Slimm. said:
The finding would bring about a magical change to one who made curtains stay so tightly drawn - - methinks - - well maybe..........x
August 2nd, 2021 15:44
Fay Slimm. said:
The finding would bring about a magical change to one who made curtains stay so tightly drawn - - methinks - - well maybe..........x
August 2nd, 2021 15:44
Magic Bead
Jerry Reynolds said:
A lot to pierce the imagination here, Neville.
August 2nd, 2021 14:41
Jerry Reynolds said:
A lot to pierce the imagination here, Neville.
August 2nd, 2021 14:41
A Nameless Craft
Goldfinch60 said:
May that kiss pon her stern show her the feelings that the skipper has for her.
Andy
July 31st, 2021 00:33
Goldfinch60 said:
May that kiss pon her stern show her the feelings that the skipper has for her.
Andy
July 31st, 2021 00:33
A Nameless Craft
Accidental Poet said:
Sounds like some mischief going on here N. But I saw nothing. Well, nothing I\'ll admit to. 😉
July 30th, 2021 21:29
Accidental Poet said:
Sounds like some mischief going on here N. But I saw nothing. Well, nothing I\'ll admit to. 😉
July 30th, 2021 21:29
A Nameless Craft
Jerry Reynolds said:
Oh yes, Neville at his best.
Take your time, Ladies first.
July 30th, 2021 08:02
Jerry Reynolds said:
Oh yes, Neville at his best.
Take your time, Ladies first.
July 30th, 2021 08:02
A Nameless Craft
L. B. Mek said:
\'giggity\', Quagmire\'s already on board: I hear.. ahem! lol
(have a great weekend my friend)
July 30th, 2021 05:21
L. B. Mek said:
\'giggity\', Quagmire\'s already on board: I hear.. ahem! lol
(have a great weekend my friend)
July 30th, 2021 05:21
A Nameless Craft
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - - Well who would want a skipper around when they are being kissed on the stern - -- am glad they are still abobbing today Nev. --- I hear that storm ravaged a lot in heavy seas...............x
July 30th, 2021 02:55
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - - Well who would want a skipper around when they are being kissed on the stern - -- am glad they are still abobbing today Nev. --- I hear that storm ravaged a lot in heavy seas...............x
July 30th, 2021 02:55
A Nameless Craft
orchidee said:
Will I swoon if I unravel the meaning of this too much?! heehee.
July 30th, 2021 02:02
orchidee said:
Will I swoon if I unravel the meaning of this too much?! heehee.
July 30th, 2021 02:02
Almost a Very Nearly
Goldfinch60 said:
The wonder of the sea can intrigue us all Neville.
Andy
July 30th, 2021 00:11
Goldfinch60 said:
The wonder of the sea can intrigue us all Neville.
Andy
July 30th, 2021 00:11
Almost a Very Nearly
Jerry Reynolds said:
impudent butterfly
sits on kings crown
July 29th, 2021 09:04
Jerry Reynolds said:
impudent butterfly
sits on kings crown
July 29th, 2021 09:04
Almost a Very Nearly
Accidental Poet said:
aah yes, the sea. A moody las she can be N. But source of many a story told. 😉
July 29th, 2021 07:47
Accidental Poet said:
aah yes, the sea. A moody las she can be N. But source of many a story told. 😉
July 29th, 2021 07:47
Almost a Very Nearly
dusk arising said:
Waves tickling at the bow, she\'ll have her way, making way when that tides floats her.
July 29th, 2021 05:45
dusk arising said:
Waves tickling at the bow, she\'ll have her way, making way when that tides floats her.
July 29th, 2021 05:45
Almost a Very Nearly
L. B. Mek said:
been out in choppy rivers have we?
almost, can be a wonderful word of relief
or a lifetime\'s nightmare of regret,
guess it all, rests
on a flip of luck\'s - temperamental tide
if you will..
another fun shorty, my friend
thank you
July 29th, 2021 04:52
L. B. Mek said:
been out in choppy rivers have we?
almost, can be a wonderful word of relief
or a lifetime\'s nightmare of regret,
guess it all, rests
on a flip of luck\'s - temperamental tide
if you will..
another fun shorty, my friend
thank you
July 29th, 2021 04:52
No Sweat
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, I\'ve got me a few cultural keepsakes
best described
as Men\'s \'lengthy shirts\' - ahem
from my travels, and I almost
booked a flight to middle east, once
just so I could add
one of their, rather - \'Airy\', ensembles
to my collection..
there\'s no shame, when your home
is turned into a sweat bucket - for days
no Sir, no shame at all, just survival
in all its \'pretty coloured guises\'... ahem! lol
what great fun, dear poet
thank you
July 29th, 2021 04:49
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, I\'ve got me a few cultural keepsakes
best described
as Men\'s \'lengthy shirts\' - ahem
from my travels, and I almost
booked a flight to middle east, once
just so I could add
one of their, rather - \'Airy\', ensembles
to my collection..
there\'s no shame, when your home
is turned into a sweat bucket - for days
no Sir, no shame at all, just survival
in all its \'pretty coloured guises\'... ahem! lol
what great fun, dear poet
thank you
July 29th, 2021 04:49
Almost a Very Nearly
Fay Slimm. said:
Intriguing yet describing a timid bather methinks -- did you make it in and really get wet ?...............x
July 29th, 2021 03:48
Fay Slimm. said:
Intriguing yet describing a timid bather methinks -- did you make it in and really get wet ?...............x
July 29th, 2021 03:48
No Sweat
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fun read, Neville.
The image of you in a dress.
Just can\'t un-see it.
July 28th, 2021 14:17
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fun read, Neville.
The image of you in a dress.
Just can\'t un-see it.
July 28th, 2021 14:17
No Sweat
Accidental Poet said:
I bet Orchi has a thong he\'ll let you borrow. 🤣
July 28th, 2021 07:50
Accidental Poet said:
I bet Orchi has a thong he\'ll let you borrow. 🤣
July 28th, 2021 07:50
No Sweat
Saxon Crow said:
A dress is nice as long as it\'s long
But you just can\'t beat a colourful sarong
July 28th, 2021 05:45
Saxon Crow said:
A dress is nice as long as it\'s long
But you just can\'t beat a colourful sarong
July 28th, 2021 05:45
No Sweat
dusk arising said:
I wore my sisters dress as a nine year old for a school project. It was very funny back then, but I don\'t think i could live with the stigma if I were seen doing similar again unless on stage.
Hot, sweaty and sticky though my stage performances became i think it may have been more comfortable in a loose fitting dress.
Cant really picture you in a dress... have you a nice wig and heels?
July 28th, 2021 05:03
dusk arising said:
I wore my sisters dress as a nine year old for a school project. It was very funny back then, but I don\'t think i could live with the stigma if I were seen doing similar again unless on stage.
Hot, sweaty and sticky though my stage performances became i think it may have been more comfortable in a loose fitting dress.
Cant really picture you in a dress... have you a nice wig and heels?
July 28th, 2021 05:03
No Sweat
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha - Why not a strapless to tan ya bare shoulders and maybe a see-thru\' or one of those minis ? Heat makes us mardy and dizzy with sweat - so go on - I dare ya - - but keep away from the harbour for pity\'s sake Nev...........x
July 28th, 2021 03:07
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha - Why not a strapless to tan ya bare shoulders and maybe a see-thru\' or one of those minis ? Heat makes us mardy and dizzy with sweat - so go on - I dare ya - - but keep away from the harbour for pity\'s sake Nev...........x
July 28th, 2021 03:07
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