Comments received on poems by Neville
Every Now and Then Maybe
L. B. Mek said:
\'distance, makes the heart...\'
and then
a year after, getting together
\'we\'re breaking Olympic records
for packing bags...\'
lol
(a wonderful shorty
sorry I tilted the angle to humour
just in one of those moods, my friend)
May 9th, 2022 06:03
L. B. Mek said:
\'distance, makes the heart...\'
and then
a year after, getting together
\'we\'re breaking Olympic records
for packing bags...\'
lol
(a wonderful shorty
sorry I tilted the angle to humour
just in one of those moods, my friend)
May 9th, 2022 06:03
Every Now and Then Maybe
dusk arising said:
There are some things we miss in this life much much more than others. Like the sweetness of strawberries which you would never miss had not your tastebuds been excited so.
The one that got away - a sweet taste lingering in the buds which have known passion, love and the zest of fulfillment and crave, crave that taste.
May 9th, 2022 04:17
dusk arising said:
There are some things we miss in this life much much more than others. Like the sweetness of strawberries which you would never miss had not your tastebuds been excited so.
The one that got away - a sweet taste lingering in the buds which have known passion, love and the zest of fulfillment and crave, crave that taste.
May 9th, 2022 04:17
Miss. Lock Memories
LMTobin said:
This was just a joy to read! Those sweet crushes in our youth. You captured it so well!
May 8th, 2022 21:16
LMTobin said:
This was just a joy to read! Those sweet crushes in our youth. You captured it so well!
May 8th, 2022 21:16
Miss. Lock Memories
Fay Slimm. said:
First love is always one we remember and your look-back dazzles with what you at that tender age noticed so clearly - skirt lengths and hair styles took precedence over lollies etc when Miss Lock was spotted by young romantics like you.... bless ya for not growing out of that sentimental phase mon ami ...............x
May 7th, 2022 21:41
Fay Slimm. said:
First love is always one we remember and your look-back dazzles with what you at that tender age noticed so clearly - skirt lengths and hair styles took precedence over lollies etc when Miss Lock was spotted by young romantics like you.... bless ya for not growing out of that sentimental phase mon ami ...............x
May 7th, 2022 21:41
Miss. Lock Memories
SureshG said:
I had the most brutish BROTHERS, so no such frock, thus no such luck or Ms Lock.
Thoroughly enjoyed your post.
May 7th, 2022 19:09
SureshG said:
I had the most brutish BROTHERS, so no such frock, thus no such luck or Ms Lock.
Thoroughly enjoyed your post.
May 7th, 2022 19:09
Miss. Lock Memories
ChrisLynđź•Š said:
I loved the description, this poem is so raw and beautiful ♥️
May 7th, 2022 13:44
ChrisLynđź•Š said:
I loved the description, this poem is so raw and beautiful ♥️
May 7th, 2022 13:44
Miss. Lock Memories
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine read, Neville.
Memories are persistent, aren\'t they?
May 7th, 2022 13:39
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine read, Neville.
Memories are persistent, aren\'t they?
May 7th, 2022 13:39
Miss. Lock Memories
Bella Shepard said:
Bursting with the sweet experience of awakenings of the heart. No matter how long ago, it stays with you forever because it was perfect. Thank you for this lovely poem.
May 7th, 2022 13:09
Bella Shepard said:
Bursting with the sweet experience of awakenings of the heart. No matter how long ago, it stays with you forever because it was perfect. Thank you for this lovely poem.
May 7th, 2022 13:09
All the Words He Left Trapped in Her Throat
SureshG said:
It is undoubtedly an act, committed in the heat of passion, for what else may I conclude from these passionate words
May 7th, 2022 10:48
SureshG said:
It is undoubtedly an act, committed in the heat of passion, for what else may I conclude from these passionate words
May 7th, 2022 10:48
Upon Reflections Shattered
Dove said:
Beautiful…. That’s my problem, I already look back,
May 7th, 2022 10:28
Dove said:
Beautiful…. That’s my problem, I already look back,
May 7th, 2022 10:28
No Looking Back Again
Dove said:
Young love, leaves the door open , mature love doesn’t care. True love embraces the closure,
Excellent poem
May 7th, 2022 10:25
Dove said:
Young love, leaves the door open , mature love doesn’t care. True love embraces the closure,
Excellent poem
May 7th, 2022 10:25
All the Words He Left Trapped in Her Throat
Dove said:
A Whisper, a scream muffled no doubt by tears, “Frankly Scarlet, I don’t give a damn”
Oh Rhett, please don’t leave me, lol
May 7th, 2022 10:20
Dove said:
A Whisper, a scream muffled no doubt by tears, “Frankly Scarlet, I don’t give a damn”
Oh Rhett, please don’t leave me, lol
May 7th, 2022 10:20
All the Words He Left Trapped in Her Throat
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing words Neville.
Andy
May 7th, 2022 00:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing words Neville.
Andy
May 7th, 2022 00:53
All the Words He Left Trapped in Her Throat
Rozina said:
Wonder what she was going to say? What could she have said that would make you stay? Just curious as usual! A great write.
May 6th, 2022 18:12
Rozina said:
Wonder what she was going to say? What could she have said that would make you stay? Just curious as usual! A great write.
May 6th, 2022 18:12
All the Words He Left Trapped in Her Throat
MendedFences27 said:
Funny how one small moment in time, when actions speak louder than words, can change the trajectory of a developing relationship. When heartfelt sentiment shows the truth, words unheard must remain thus.
Human nature is one of poetry\'s greatest subjects and carries with it the danger for the poet offending readers. Such is the fallibility of mankind.
Your poem is direct in painting the scene, with the reader judging on their own the value of its portrayal. I personally felt you hit the nail on the head. The un-described characters in your poem are there only to bring out the message. The scene is humanity at its nadir and ends as it should with exposure of his failings. A very intense and forthright portrayal of humankind. Loved it - Phil A.
May 6th, 2022 14:45
MendedFences27 said:
Funny how one small moment in time, when actions speak louder than words, can change the trajectory of a developing relationship. When heartfelt sentiment shows the truth, words unheard must remain thus.
Human nature is one of poetry\'s greatest subjects and carries with it the danger for the poet offending readers. Such is the fallibility of mankind.
Your poem is direct in painting the scene, with the reader judging on their own the value of its portrayal. I personally felt you hit the nail on the head. The un-described characters in your poem are there only to bring out the message. The scene is humanity at its nadir and ends as it should with exposure of his failings. A very intense and forthright portrayal of humankind. Loved it - Phil A.
May 6th, 2022 14:45
All the Words He Left Trapped in Her Throat
Christina8 said:
Haunting, which leaves me to wonder, what did she say? Well, Bullet, you\'ve gone and done it again----excellent write!!!
May 6th, 2022 08:27
Christina8 said:
Haunting, which leaves me to wonder, what did she say? Well, Bullet, you\'ve gone and done it again----excellent write!!!
May 6th, 2022 08:27
Dun a Runna
Rocky Lagou said:
Hehe! This actually made me laugh then made me think, \"gosh, c\'mon can\'t we just go at least one day without heartbreak?\" I see you wrote this a while ago though, we\'re all immature during our younger years.
May 6th, 2022 08:15
Rocky Lagou said:
Hehe! This actually made me laugh then made me think, \"gosh, c\'mon can\'t we just go at least one day without heartbreak?\" I see you wrote this a while ago though, we\'re all immature during our younger years.
May 6th, 2022 08:15
All the Words He Left Trapped in Her Throat
L. B. Mek said:
ha! that\'s crazy
how our offerings sync-up
in theme, so often
Hyung..
\'our callous indifference
in the choices we make\'...
plus
this subtly, inconsequential
(at initial appearance)
poem
is one of your deepest write\'s
\'in my humble opinion\'..
(when we leave
and they\'re left, to choke
on the unsaid
we left in place, untouched
when at a fingertips
distance, choosing to ignore
that opportunity
to salvage their shattered, hopes
from evolving, in-to
a decimated heart\'s, irreversible
scar
are we, selfish perpetrators
or merely: survivors
escaping from that inevitable
tertiary blast
of a broken romance\'s, consequences...?)
sorry
if I read your poetry differently
than your intent, dear Poet
May 6th, 2022 05:57
L. B. Mek said:
ha! that\'s crazy
how our offerings sync-up
in theme, so often
Hyung..
\'our callous indifference
in the choices we make\'...
plus
this subtly, inconsequential
(at initial appearance)
poem
is one of your deepest write\'s
\'in my humble opinion\'..
(when we leave
and they\'re left, to choke
on the unsaid
we left in place, untouched
when at a fingertips
distance, choosing to ignore
that opportunity
to salvage their shattered, hopes
from evolving, in-to
a decimated heart\'s, irreversible
scar
are we, selfish perpetrators
or merely: survivors
escaping from that inevitable
tertiary blast
of a broken romance\'s, consequences...?)
sorry
if I read your poetry differently
than your intent, dear Poet
May 6th, 2022 05:57
All the Words He Left Trapped in Her Throat
Fay Slimm. said:
A haunt of a read which describes so aptly a runaway guy blind to his actions..............x
May 6th, 2022 03:12
Fay Slimm. said:
A haunt of a read which describes so aptly a runaway guy blind to his actions..............x
May 6th, 2022 03:12
Dun a Runna
Christina8 said:
This is really funny, Bullet! A naughty boy indeed!! This is a great little write!! C
May 5th, 2022 08:24
Christina8 said:
This is really funny, Bullet! A naughty boy indeed!! This is a great little write!! C
May 5th, 2022 08:24
Dun a Runna
L. B. Mek said:
lol
everything in life, needs
practise
to gain, endurance
when we learn that
we have a chance
at establishing relationships
that exist, in our blink-n-miss
reality..
than linger, longer
in our regret\'s, rear
view, warped-by-Time
reverie mirrors..
(btw Hyung
how\'s the book coming along?)
May 5th, 2022 06:14
L. B. Mek said:
lol
everything in life, needs
practise
to gain, endurance
when we learn that
we have a chance
at establishing relationships
that exist, in our blink-n-miss
reality..
than linger, longer
in our regret\'s, rear
view, warped-by-Time
reverie mirrors..
(btw Hyung
how\'s the book coming along?)
May 5th, 2022 06:14
Dun a Runna
orchidee said:
I wouldn\'t know - Bullet? - swoon!
Shall I meet her now then, if you\'ve dashed off?! lol.
I loves \'em and leaves \'em - well, I leaves KP anyway. lol.
May 5th, 2022 06:03
orchidee said:
I wouldn\'t know - Bullet? - swoon!
Shall I meet her now then, if you\'ve dashed off?! lol.
I loves \'em and leaves \'em - well, I leaves KP anyway. lol.
May 5th, 2022 06:03
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