Comments received on poems by Neville
You Would Not Care to See me Naked .. Surely
Fay Slimm. said:
Expertly penned this letter of longing and love that though seems forbidden still lives despite thrown stones. This little gem of a read goes into my list of faves for sure dear Nev..................x
July 20th, 2022 04:06
Fay Slimm. said:
Expertly penned this letter of longing and love that though seems forbidden still lives despite thrown stones. This little gem of a read goes into my list of faves for sure dear Nev..................x
July 20th, 2022 04:06
You Would Not Care to See me Naked .. Surely
orchidee said:
I might swoon! Fido will save me from falling. lol.
July 20th, 2022 02:59
orchidee said:
I might swoon! Fido will save me from falling. lol.
July 20th, 2022 02:59
It Only Takes One Little Thing
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories happen and bring such strange thoughts to use for writing down.
Andy
July 20th, 2022 01:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories happen and bring such strange thoughts to use for writing down.
Andy
July 20th, 2022 01:14
It Only Takes One Little Thing
Bella Shepard said:
Wow! From Elizabeth Barrett Browning to W.H. Auden in one fell swoop. Yes, memory has so many triggers. The trick is to prioritize.
July 19th, 2022 13:34
Bella Shepard said:
Wow! From Elizabeth Barrett Browning to W.H. Auden in one fell swoop. Yes, memory has so many triggers. The trick is to prioritize.
July 19th, 2022 13:34
It Only Takes One Little Thing
L. B. Mek said:
\'who let the dogs, out!\'
or, who\'s
\'outing themselves as the dogs
we all, are
warped
by that prism, of belated regret
grasping
at crude, objectification to ease
the ache
that\'s making it hard to breathe..\'
or
you know, its all just the heatwave
making us confess
our hellish thoughts...
lol
a great read! dear Poet supreme
July 19th, 2022 05:39
L. B. Mek said:
\'who let the dogs, out!\'
or, who\'s
\'outing themselves as the dogs
we all, are
warped
by that prism, of belated regret
grasping
at crude, objectification to ease
the ache
that\'s making it hard to breathe..\'
or
you know, its all just the heatwave
making us confess
our hellish thoughts...
lol
a great read! dear Poet supreme
July 19th, 2022 05:39
It Only Takes One Little Thing
Fay Slimm. said:
Things of mere insignificance can jog back to memory such intimate moments ---- --- and who but thee can pen honesty better with word-art to show she\'s still in your heart.
July 19th, 2022 04:26
Fay Slimm. said:
Things of mere insignificance can jog back to memory such intimate moments ---- --- and who but thee can pen honesty better with word-art to show she\'s still in your heart.
July 19th, 2022 04:26
It Only Takes One Little Thing
Thekkinkkattil said:
I sympathisr with all of you Teddy. Here we are bothered about the rains. A good write teddy enjoyed reading it.
July 19th, 2022 03:37
Thekkinkkattil said:
I sympathisr with all of you Teddy. Here we are bothered about the rains. A good write teddy enjoyed reading it.
July 19th, 2022 03:37
It Only Takes One Little Thing
orchidee said:
Woof! Fido spotted the F. You\'ve started him off again! lol. As I say, no excitement for me. Fido chucks buckets of cold water over me at first sign of any friskiness - he would!
July 19th, 2022 01:59
orchidee said:
Woof! Fido spotted the F. You\'ve started him off again! lol. As I say, no excitement for me. Fido chucks buckets of cold water over me at first sign of any friskiness - he would!
July 19th, 2022 01:59
Just Asking on Behalf of a Friend
Bella Shepard said:
Well, if it\'s for a friend I it\'s OK. So I guess this can both ways, physically and mentally. If it\'s physically, more power to you. If it\'s mentally, uh oh, you are really f....d. All blushes aside, a very provocative read.
July 18th, 2022 13:28
Bella Shepard said:
Well, if it\'s for a friend I it\'s OK. So I guess this can both ways, physically and mentally. If it\'s physically, more power to you. If it\'s mentally, uh oh, you are really f....d. All blushes aside, a very provocative read.
July 18th, 2022 13:28
Just Asking on Behalf of a Friend
orchidee said:
Woof, woof! You started Fido barking. Ohh, f, f, and f he says. Well, he don\'t actually say it! lol.
he says \'No excitement for you (meaning me) today\', he says, as he lays in the shade sipping drinks on a sun lounger!
July 18th, 2022 06:22
orchidee said:
Woof, woof! You started Fido barking. Ohh, f, f, and f he says. Well, he don\'t actually say it! lol.
he says \'No excitement for you (meaning me) today\', he says, as he lays in the shade sipping drinks on a sun lounger!
July 18th, 2022 06:22
Just Asking on Behalf of a Friend
Paul Bell said:
A friend in need, is usually a friend who indeed is fucking someone else, but who might phone you for a loan just to really piss you off.
July 18th, 2022 05:31
Paul Bell said:
A friend in need, is usually a friend who indeed is fucking someone else, but who might phone you for a loan just to really piss you off.
July 18th, 2022 05:31
Just Asking on Behalf of a Friend
Fay Slimm. said:
A raw read today Nev. The \"petite mort\" is still called making love in this quarter - - wow - it takes a true friend to ask such orgasmic questions and must say methinks a female never would need all and sundry revealed..................... x
July 18th, 2022 05:16
Fay Slimm. said:
A raw read today Nev. The \"petite mort\" is still called making love in this quarter - - wow - it takes a true friend to ask such orgasmic questions and must say methinks a female never would need all and sundry revealed..................... x
July 18th, 2022 05:16
Just Asking on Behalf of a Friend
L. B. Mek said:
that cherished rarity
of true friendship
is wasted, while consumed
in that fog of youthful lust;
some, choices
we can live with, but some
instinctive
surrenders, to intoxicating chemistry
thieve us
of a kin, that would have shared
everything with us, but for parents
if only
we had the strength, to fight off
alcoholic lust\'s, venomous whispers
and we kept our lines, uncrossed..
I have a few
connections, lost
to nights of passion
although
I must admit, I regret nothing
just that:
\'I wonder if you ever think of me,
fucking you,
or you, fucking me, these days ..
After all,
that my friend, is precisely\'
\'the closest thing to heaven I have
ever been or
known to date ..\'
Brilliant!
(so unapologetically raw
and thus, reads
that much more sincere
for beings so)
while I rave, over your poetry\'s subtlety
this too, is a trait
of your poetic genius, I revel in
that ability
to say it like it is
unashamed but humbled
simultaneously..
(I read and learn
Hyung!)
July 18th, 2022 04:44
L. B. Mek said:
that cherished rarity
of true friendship
is wasted, while consumed
in that fog of youthful lust;
some, choices
we can live with, but some
instinctive
surrenders, to intoxicating chemistry
thieve us
of a kin, that would have shared
everything with us, but for parents
if only
we had the strength, to fight off
alcoholic lust\'s, venomous whispers
and we kept our lines, uncrossed..
I have a few
connections, lost
to nights of passion
although
I must admit, I regret nothing
just that:
\'I wonder if you ever think of me,
fucking you,
or you, fucking me, these days ..
After all,
that my friend, is precisely\'
\'the closest thing to heaven I have
ever been or
known to date ..\'
Brilliant!
(so unapologetically raw
and thus, reads
that much more sincere
for beings so)
while I rave, over your poetry\'s subtlety
this too, is a trait
of your poetic genius, I revel in
that ability
to say it like it is
unashamed but humbled
simultaneously..
(I read and learn
Hyung!)
July 18th, 2022 04:44
Just Asking on Behalf of a Friend
Doggerel Dave said:
Unlikely - I believe in confidentiality in such situations, Neville.
I do wonder, however occasionally but rarely if I exist in the memories of anyone at all...
July 18th, 2022 04:28
Doggerel Dave said:
Unlikely - I believe in confidentiality in such situations, Neville.
I do wonder, however occasionally but rarely if I exist in the memories of anyone at all...
July 18th, 2022 04:28
Etna
arqios said:
She was a prime example of the Socratic tenet: \"Know thyself!\" That provided her with promising pragmatism.
July 17th, 2022 23:01
arqios said:
She was a prime example of the Socratic tenet: \"Know thyself!\" That provided her with promising pragmatism.
July 17th, 2022 23:01
Once Upon a Downing Street
Dove said:
I wish the best for the Country.. All over the World there is such things .. You penned it so well.
Out I say…
July 17th, 2022 15:07
Dove said:
I wish the best for the Country.. All over the World there is such things .. You penned it so well.
Out I say…
July 17th, 2022 15:07
When the Shit First Hit the Fan
Bella Shepard said:
What was, was. What is, is. What will be, will be our responsibility. Choice and responsibility should go hand in hand, can we get it back? A very truthful and insightful write my friend.
July 17th, 2022 11:48
Bella Shepard said:
What was, was. What is, is. What will be, will be our responsibility. Choice and responsibility should go hand in hand, can we get it back? A very truthful and insightful write my friend.
July 17th, 2022 11:48
Once Upon a Downing Street
Bella Shepard said:
Do you think we can find a spot in that filthy gutter for an ex-president that I know? He and Boris seem to get along well, but then they\'re cut from the same cloth. Come to think of it, a vast number of them seem to appeal to the same tailor. Maybe this guy should start investigating who is clientele is. Great write my friend!
July 17th, 2022 11:21
Bella Shepard said:
Do you think we can find a spot in that filthy gutter for an ex-president that I know? He and Boris seem to get along well, but then they\'re cut from the same cloth. Come to think of it, a vast number of them seem to appeal to the same tailor. Maybe this guy should start investigating who is clientele is. Great write my friend!
July 17th, 2022 11:21
Once Upon a Downing Street
Paul Bell said:
Boris will be partying to those words. Actually, Boris could start a war in his last weeks and days in office. In saying that, the replacements don\'t inspire much either.
July 17th, 2022 07:44
Paul Bell said:
Boris will be partying to those words. Actually, Boris could start a war in his last weeks and days in office. In saying that, the replacements don\'t inspire much either.
July 17th, 2022 07:44
Once Upon a Downing Street
Fay Slimm. said:
YES WHOLLY AGREED -- - seemingly everywhere governmental care is non-existent and deserves no better -than being revealed and brought to public shame.............x
July 17th, 2022 07:42
Fay Slimm. said:
YES WHOLLY AGREED -- - seemingly everywhere governmental care is non-existent and deserves no better -than being revealed and brought to public shame.............x
July 17th, 2022 07:42
Once Upon a Downing Street
orchidee said:
Bozo, Coco, Thicko, etc, as some papers say?! Are we f****.? Fido won\'t let me say it, of course.
Teddy and I are starting The Cabbage Party. Cabbages rule OK! You joining us?! lol.
Not related to those poor people who live a vegetable-life existence.
July 17th, 2022 07:22
orchidee said:
Bozo, Coco, Thicko, etc, as some papers say?! Are we f****.? Fido won\'t let me say it, of course.
Teddy and I are starting The Cabbage Party. Cabbages rule OK! You joining us?! lol.
Not related to those poor people who live a vegetable-life existence.
July 17th, 2022 07:22
Once Upon a Downing Street
Doggerel Dave said:
I hope you don\'t think (I\'m sure you don\'t) politicians are better elsewhere, Neville. I can assure you... and furthermore, he may rightfully reside in that gutter, but will he? The likes of them have plenty of property and dosh hidden away somewhere.....
Your write, however feels right, and I\'m pretty sure you will get much empathy and support.
July 17th, 2022 06:41
Doggerel Dave said:
I hope you don\'t think (I\'m sure you don\'t) politicians are better elsewhere, Neville. I can assure you... and furthermore, he may rightfully reside in that gutter, but will he? The likes of them have plenty of property and dosh hidden away somewhere.....
Your write, however feels right, and I\'m pretty sure you will get much empathy and support.
July 17th, 2022 06:41
Just a Few Significant Ponderings
Dove said:
OMG , that made me laugh.. if such creatures exist, which I sure there may be a few.. the name sure fits…
July 16th, 2022 16:48
Dove said:
OMG , that made me laugh.. if such creatures exist, which I sure there may be a few.. the name sure fits…
July 16th, 2022 16:48
No Mercy on Mean Street
Dove said:
Oh dearest Mean Street, exist in modern society! So many crazies in life, the human mind Is fragile and so is life. You pen an example so well.
July 16th, 2022 16:46
Dove said:
Oh dearest Mean Street, exist in modern society! So many crazies in life, the human mind Is fragile and so is life. You pen an example so well.
July 16th, 2022 16:46
Etna
Fay Slimm. said:
She knew her potential did your gal Etna - explosively eruptive this read but oh what a way to let off steam eh mon ami ?. ....................x
July 16th, 2022 14:08
Fay Slimm. said:
She knew her potential did your gal Etna - explosively eruptive this read but oh what a way to let off steam eh mon ami ?. ....................x
July 16th, 2022 14:08
Etna
Bella Shepard said:
Alluring, steamy, seductive, powerful, she is the quintessential female, and still has \"it\" at her age. Such a fun write my friend!
July 16th, 2022 13:04
Bella Shepard said:
Alluring, steamy, seductive, powerful, she is the quintessential female, and still has \"it\" at her age. Such a fun write my friend!
July 16th, 2022 13:04
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