Comments received on poems by Neville
An Unfinished Summer
Fay Slimm. said:
The feel of the 60\'s jumps out of these lines Nev. - ah yes - I remember it well and its hippie-life that never seemed finished - -like your final line...........x
August 9th, 2021 05:50
Fay Slimm. said:
The feel of the 60\'s jumps out of these lines Nev. - ah yes - I remember it well and its hippie-life that never seemed finished - -like your final line...........x
August 9th, 2021 05:50
An Unfinished Summer
Doggerel Dave said:
A great portrait of a \'\'60\'s - \'70\'s \"Hero\" - certainly got the hippie girls in for a while (if he wanted them...........) but time moved on.....
Needless to say, I enjoyed that, Neville....
August 9th, 2021 04:25
Doggerel Dave said:
A great portrait of a \'\'60\'s - \'70\'s \"Hero\" - certainly got the hippie girls in for a while (if he wanted them...........) but time moved on.....
Needless to say, I enjoyed that, Neville....
August 9th, 2021 04:25
An Unfinished Summer
orchidee said:
Good write N.
You hoping the Summer is unfinished? Are we all hoping?!
Dis he look like Jesus? It depends, if he was of Middle Eastern appearance (Israel). He would not have been white or black or Chinese or whatever. But you mean the beard!
I\'m going to the Co-op. It\'s in the Mid-West. (do shut up now Orchi. lol)
August 9th, 2021 04:13
orchidee said:
Good write N.
You hoping the Summer is unfinished? Are we all hoping?!
Dis he look like Jesus? It depends, if he was of Middle Eastern appearance (Israel). He would not have been white or black or Chinese or whatever. But you mean the beard!
I\'m going to the Co-op. It\'s in the Mid-West. (do shut up now Orchi. lol)
August 9th, 2021 04:13
Calling Time
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Neville, just slipping away into a new life in a comfortable way.............. but not yet.
Andy
August 9th, 2021 00:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Neville, just slipping away into a new life in a comfortable way.............. but not yet.
Andy
August 9th, 2021 00:09
Calling Time
Accidental Poet said:
A very meaningful write N. As my own Dad nears closer and closer to his last days, I\'m seeing him in a new light that I never expected to. I\'ve learned to appreciate more and more. 🤔
August 8th, 2021 19:17
Accidental Poet said:
A very meaningful write N. As my own Dad nears closer and closer to his last days, I\'m seeing him in a new light that I never expected to. I\'ve learned to appreciate more and more. 🤔
August 8th, 2021 19:17
Calling Time
MendedFences27 said:
A truly exceptional write. Taking time to \"ease into a favorite chair\" gives the sense of a peaceful passing, and \"silvered notes\" lends musical association. 0f whom you speak would have enjoyed the sense of the moment. - Phil A.
August 8th, 2021 16:06
MendedFences27 said:
A truly exceptional write. Taking time to \"ease into a favorite chair\" gives the sense of a peaceful passing, and \"silvered notes\" lends musical association. 0f whom you speak would have enjoyed the sense of the moment. - Phil A.
August 8th, 2021 16:06
Calling Time
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
What a wonderful read.
I especially liked…
“dancing wild and blindly
within the silvered notes of his once
dark hair ..”
Laura🌻
August 8th, 2021 14:42
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
What a wonderful read.
I especially liked…
“dancing wild and blindly
within the silvered notes of his once
dark hair ..”
Laura🌻
August 8th, 2021 14:42
Upon the Arms of Favourite Chairs
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Aah the feeling of love, of safety, and of contentment once the arms of one chair are shared with your loved one.
I enjoyed this wonderful reminder of two hearts beating as one.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
Laura🌻
August 8th, 2021 14:35
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Aah the feeling of love, of safety, and of contentment once the arms of one chair are shared with your loved one.
I enjoyed this wonderful reminder of two hearts beating as one.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
Laura🌻
August 8th, 2021 14:35
Calling Time
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow and what a way to call closing on life that ends in easy-chaired smiles with cosy acceptance. Hey and good to go too when dreams are still on the wild side mon ami.............x
August 8th, 2021 05:24
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow and what a way to call closing on life that ends in easy-chaired smiles with cosy acceptance. Hey and good to go too when dreams are still on the wild side mon ami.............x
August 8th, 2021 05:24
Calling Time
Doggerel Dave said:
\' Way to go, Nev. Smooth and easy.... Great portrait.
Now for a reviver (he wouldn\'t want you to stay sad forever) why not try (word association inspired) Closing Time (LC) One of my many faves in his catalogue.
August 8th, 2021 04:15
Doggerel Dave said:
\' Way to go, Nev. Smooth and easy.... Great portrait.
Now for a reviver (he wouldn\'t want you to stay sad forever) why not try (word association inspired) Closing Time (LC) One of my many faves in his catalogue.
August 8th, 2021 04:15
Upon the Arms of Favourite Chairs
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Neville that comfort is always with me as Joyce looks down on me.
Andy
August 8th, 2021 00:54
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Neville that comfort is always with me as Joyce looks down on me.
Andy
August 8th, 2021 00:54
Upon the Arms of Favourite Chairs
Accidental Poet said:
For love to embrace two hearts within the arms of one chair is beautiful. Great write N. 👍
August 7th, 2021 09:00
Accidental Poet said:
For love to embrace two hearts within the arms of one chair is beautiful. Great write N. 👍
August 7th, 2021 09:00
Magic Bead
Dove said:
Mystery beads, satin curtains, such elegant objects to behold, but the real beauty is how you spin words, or rather weave them ! More so like a gem , she hid her valuables until she deemed him worthy of discovery
August 7th, 2021 08:49
Dove said:
Mystery beads, satin curtains, such elegant objects to behold, but the real beauty is how you spin words, or rather weave them ! More so like a gem , she hid her valuables until she deemed him worthy of discovery
August 7th, 2021 08:49
When You Find These Words
Dove said:
I found them interesting, ignore them I shall until I resurface again , like
Sunshine on a rainy day! ❤️
August 7th, 2021 08:25
Dove said:
I found them interesting, ignore them I shall until I resurface again , like
Sunshine on a rainy day! ❤️
August 7th, 2021 08:25
Upon the Arms of Favourite Chairs
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes – the rough was tolerable when I was young, but wondered why it had to be: the later years and the smooth, comfortable is something I’ll always be grateful for, as I no longer have the energy….
August 7th, 2021 07:06
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes – the rough was tolerable when I was young, but wondered why it had to be: the later years and the smooth, comfortable is something I’ll always be grateful for, as I no longer have the energy….
August 7th, 2021 07:06
Upon the Arms of Favourite Chairs
orchidee said:
Good write Neville.
I though you lost the \'u\' on ya keyboard. I look out for \'pon\'. You can look out for \'e\'er\' or even \'e\'ermore\'. I lost the \'v\'. lol.
I\'m deeply depressed now I\'ve not seen a \'pon\' today! heehee.
August 7th, 2021 06:17
orchidee said:
Good write Neville.
I though you lost the \'u\' on ya keyboard. I look out for \'pon\'. You can look out for \'e\'er\' or even \'e\'ermore\'. I lost the \'v\'. lol.
I\'m deeply depressed now I\'ve not seen a \'pon\' today! heehee.
August 7th, 2021 06:17
Upon the Arms of Favourite Chairs
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely words )
August 7th, 2021 04:21
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely words )
August 7th, 2021 04:21
Upon the Arms of Favourite Chairs
Fay Slimm. said:
Long-time relationships can get that way where comfort comes first -- but passion that never fades to boredom makes use of worn steps, worn chairs and all manner of exciting positions methinks. Am smiling at this weekend bit of deep whimsy on which to ponder and imagine some more................x
August 7th, 2021 04:09
Fay Slimm. said:
Long-time relationships can get that way where comfort comes first -- but passion that never fades to boredom makes use of worn steps, worn chairs and all manner of exciting positions methinks. Am smiling at this weekend bit of deep whimsy on which to ponder and imagine some more................x
August 7th, 2021 04:09
When You Find These Words
Goldfinch60 said:
I will never ignore any of your words Neville.
Andy
August 7th, 2021 00:08
Goldfinch60 said:
I will never ignore any of your words Neville.
Andy
August 7th, 2021 00:08
When You Find These Words
Saxon Crow said:
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August 7th, 2021 00:01
Saxon Crow said:
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August 7th, 2021 00:01
When You Find These Words
Accidental Poet said:
Good enough to explore, yes N. For poets are we, and poets leave no stone unturned is search of truth. 👍
August 6th, 2021 23:19
Accidental Poet said:
Good enough to explore, yes N. For poets are we, and poets leave no stone unturned is search of truth. 👍
August 6th, 2021 23:19
When You Find These Words
MendedFences27 said:
I have found them and they speak to me. - Phil A.
August 6th, 2021 17:43
MendedFences27 said:
I have found them and they speak to me. - Phil A.
August 6th, 2021 17:43
When You Find These Words
Trenz Pruca said:
One should never ignore what one stumbles over. I enjoyed your trip. Forgive me.
August 6th, 2021 17:04
Trenz Pruca said:
One should never ignore what one stumbles over. I enjoyed your trip. Forgive me.
August 6th, 2021 17:04
When You Find These Words
orchidee said:
\'Tis what they say too, when they stumble upon my singing! heehee.
Insanity? A notice said \'This is a Private Notice - Please do not read\'. Doh!
August 6th, 2021 11:00
orchidee said:
\'Tis what they say too, when they stumble upon my singing! heehee.
Insanity? A notice said \'This is a Private Notice - Please do not read\'. Doh!
August 6th, 2021 11:00
When You Find These Words
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Your poem’s title is intriguing. It piqued my curiosity to give it a read. Glad to have done so. I found your words too good to ignore. An ingeniously thought-out brief poem that will last a long time in this reader’s mind.
Laura🌻
August 6th, 2021 07:33
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Your poem’s title is intriguing. It piqued my curiosity to give it a read. Glad to have done so. I found your words too good to ignore. An ingeniously thought-out brief poem that will last a long time in this reader’s mind.
Laura🌻
August 6th, 2021 07:33
When You Find These Words
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
\'what is brevity, in poetry
they - task, wrongly\'
Here - read, and realise
how you can weave
a million dreams
to be imagined, differently
by what each reader: gleans...
(your subtle brilliance
at its unassumingly, penetrative
Best! my friend)
when you can execute poetry\'s
transformative artistry with such
humble - accessible words, why bother
writing extra pages of explanatory lines
for those, too: ignorant
to read, what\'s been outlined
so accessible and emphatically: transparent!
August 6th, 2021 05:54
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
\'what is brevity, in poetry
they - task, wrongly\'
Here - read, and realise
how you can weave
a million dreams
to be imagined, differently
by what each reader: gleans...
(your subtle brilliance
at its unassumingly, penetrative
Best! my friend)
when you can execute poetry\'s
transformative artistry with such
humble - accessible words, why bother
writing extra pages of explanatory lines
for those, too: ignorant
to read, what\'s been outlined
so accessible and emphatically: transparent!
August 6th, 2021 05:54
When You Find These Words
Doggerel Dave said:
Yep - so shall I do....
PS: Neville - why do you always give us shorties here?
Couldn\'t you one day present something longer? \"Laid bare & Waiting\" would be good....
August 6th, 2021 05:13
Doggerel Dave said:
Yep - so shall I do....
PS: Neville - why do you always give us shorties here?
Couldn\'t you one day present something longer? \"Laid bare & Waiting\" would be good....
August 6th, 2021 05:13
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