Comments received on poems by Neville
A Scatter of Moments
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Love the title…
the ending words lend themselves to the cohesiveness of your entire poem.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
March 2nd, 2022 16:17
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Love the title…
the ending words lend themselves to the cohesiveness of your entire poem.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
March 2nd, 2022 16:17
A Scatter of Moments
Rocky Lagou said:
Lovely! A little memory pocket full of joy! Hope you have a great day!
March 2nd, 2022 10:25
Rocky Lagou said:
Lovely! A little memory pocket full of joy! Hope you have a great day!
March 2nd, 2022 10:25
A Scatter of Moments
Christina8 said:
So glad to know you are on the mend and writing...A beautiful tribute to someone special and so eloquently written indeed......C
March 2nd, 2022 09:25
Christina8 said:
So glad to know you are on the mend and writing...A beautiful tribute to someone special and so eloquently written indeed......C
March 2nd, 2022 09:25
A Scatter of Moments
Rozina said:
A lovely tribute with great lines. Hope you’re recovering well.
March 2nd, 2022 09:12
Rozina said:
A lovely tribute with great lines. Hope you’re recovering well.
March 2nd, 2022 09:12
A Scatter of Moments
orchidee said:
Can ya beat those moments? Which ones? Answer: any of them ya wish to recall!
What am I waffling on about?! lol.
March 2nd, 2022 08:15
orchidee said:
Can ya beat those moments? Which ones? Answer: any of them ya wish to recall!
What am I waffling on about?! lol.
March 2nd, 2022 08:15
A Scatter of Moments
Michael Edwards said:
What a great write - tears in my eyes as I know my wife of so many years is suffering and all we have is hope. Keep writing dear friend.
March 2nd, 2022 05:55
Michael Edwards said:
What a great write - tears in my eyes as I know my wife of so many years is suffering and all we have is hope. Keep writing dear friend.
March 2nd, 2022 05:55
A Scatter of Moments
dusk arising said:
Ah yes, those opioid induced hospital bed dreams....... LOL .... It\'s so good to get home though.... hope you didn\'t pick up any horrible hospital infections (I\'m still suffering from one i picked up last Oct).
Wishing you a speedy recovery.
March 2nd, 2022 05:31
dusk arising said:
Ah yes, those opioid induced hospital bed dreams....... LOL .... It\'s so good to get home though.... hope you didn\'t pick up any horrible hospital infections (I\'m still suffering from one i picked up last Oct).
Wishing you a speedy recovery.
March 2nd, 2022 05:31
A Scatter of Moments
Fay Slimm. said:
beautifully put this tribute to a special someone dear nev --- glad to know you\'re back home again and writing romance....................x
March 2nd, 2022 05:01
Fay Slimm. said:
beautifully put this tribute to a special someone dear nev --- glad to know you\'re back home again and writing romance....................x
March 2nd, 2022 05:01
Between Squalls
spilleronsheet said:
A nostalgia of beach
Yearning for the breeze
That tells a song
Beautiful dear Neville
And heal faster friend
Spring back soon
And thanks to dear Nurse
See you soon
March 2nd, 2022 00:31
spilleronsheet said:
A nostalgia of beach
Yearning for the breeze
That tells a song
Beautiful dear Neville
And heal faster friend
Spring back soon
And thanks to dear Nurse
See you soon
March 2nd, 2022 00:31
Between Squalls
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
By now, you must be home. Ignore ‘those flocking angry gulls..’ rest up and let your special person pamper you.
Laura🌻
March 1st, 2022 11:26
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
By now, you must be home. Ignore ‘those flocking angry gulls..’ rest up and let your special person pamper you.
Laura🌻
March 1st, 2022 11:26
Between Squalls
Christina8 said:
This reminds me of summer. A very descriptive poem. Hope you got the well deserved rest you needed!
March 1st, 2022 09:34
Christina8 said:
This reminds me of summer. A very descriptive poem. Hope you got the well deserved rest you needed!
March 1st, 2022 09:34
Between Squalls
L. B. Mek said:
oooh lala, less than a week back
and you\'re all over the Nurses, lol
hope you get well soon, dear Poet
and yes,
\'the degenerate babble
do make such a ruckus
with
their hackling and squabbling\'
March 1st, 2022 05:02
L. B. Mek said:
oooh lala, less than a week back
and you\'re all over the Nurses, lol
hope you get well soon, dear Poet
and yes,
\'the degenerate babble
do make such a ruckus
with
their hackling and squabbling\'
March 1st, 2022 05:02
Between Squalls
Fay Slimm. said:
Ignore they squalls Nev and get yaself home, warm an better agen soon.....................x......x
March 1st, 2022 04:26
Fay Slimm. said:
Ignore they squalls Nev and get yaself home, warm an better agen soon.....................x......x
March 1st, 2022 04:26
Between Squalls
Doggerel Dave said:
This is a shock, Nev - obviously more than tonsillitis. Intend to share more?
Forget the gulls for the moment - Nurse Deacon had no need to threaten sedation; There\'s not much sleep in hospital no matter how s/he wanted to frame it.
March 1st, 2022 04:03
Doggerel Dave said:
This is a shock, Nev - obviously more than tonsillitis. Intend to share more?
Forget the gulls for the moment - Nurse Deacon had no need to threaten sedation; There\'s not much sleep in hospital no matter how s/he wanted to frame it.
March 1st, 2022 04:03
Between Squalls
Michael Edwards said:
I\'ve heard them and suffered their air raids - little devils - hope you\'re recovering well but don\'t shout back at them - recovery comes first.
March 1st, 2022 03:04
Michael Edwards said:
I\'ve heard them and suffered their air raids - little devils - hope you\'re recovering well but don\'t shout back at them - recovery comes first.
March 1st, 2022 03:04
Between Squalls
orchidee said:
Best wishes N.
At our local pond it\'s a competition between seagulls (in chillier weather - we\'re not near the coast), ducks, moorhens, coots, and even a goose turned up. A crane did not come very close for food.
March 1st, 2022 02:48
orchidee said:
Best wishes N.
At our local pond it\'s a competition between seagulls (in chillier weather - we\'re not near the coast), ducks, moorhens, coots, and even a goose turned up. A crane did not come very close for food.
March 1st, 2022 02:48
Between Squalls
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Neville, thank Nurse Deacon for me and I hope you soon get well.
Andy
March 1st, 2022 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Neville, thank Nurse Deacon for me and I hope you soon get well.
Andy
March 1st, 2022 01:49
Between Squalls
Rozina said:
Those seagulls! Once we were holding ice cream cones and a seagull swooped and took one away from my hand before I had a taste. Yes I can hear them yelling!
Best wishes.
March 1st, 2022 01:26
Rozina said:
Those seagulls! Once we were holding ice cream cones and a seagull swooped and took one away from my hand before I had a taste. Yes I can hear them yelling!
Best wishes.
March 1st, 2022 01:26
There Are No Snowmen in Mexico
L. B. Mek said:
\'there are no
vacant brass beds anywhere\'..
(or Bob Dylan fans in Minnesota
or Snowmen, that haven\'t wilted
in the Brass face of global warming...)
such a brilliant write!
(cutting commentary of self
and the world and Time\'s around us
and the hollow, meaning-\'less\' bleakness
of the future we\'re walking towards)
February 28th, 2022 06:00
L. B. Mek said:
\'there are no
vacant brass beds anywhere\'..
(or Bob Dylan fans in Minnesota
or Snowmen, that haven\'t wilted
in the Brass face of global warming...)
such a brilliant write!
(cutting commentary of self
and the world and Time\'s around us
and the hollow, meaning-\'less\' bleakness
of the future we\'re walking towards)
February 28th, 2022 06:00
There Are No Snowmen in Mexico
spilleronsheet said:
Well for him it was true
Who knows what played in her mind
Was it true or just a fantasy of a kind
A thought provoking poetry dear Neville
Some relationships built over frozen sheets of ice
February 28th, 2022 03:47
spilleronsheet said:
Well for him it was true
Who knows what played in her mind
Was it true or just a fantasy of a kind
A thought provoking poetry dear Neville
Some relationships built over frozen sheets of ice
February 28th, 2022 03:47
There Are No Snowmen in Mexico
dusk arising said:
I have it on good authority from Pedro who is \'brake\' in the Yucatan 2nd bob-slay fives team that easter is wet-sand \'snowman\' building season.
February 28th, 2022 03:14
dusk arising said:
I have it on good authority from Pedro who is \'brake\' in the Yucatan 2nd bob-slay fives team that easter is wet-sand \'snowman\' building season.
February 28th, 2022 03:14
There Are No Snowmen in Mexico
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing words Neville.
Andy
February 28th, 2022 02:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing words Neville.
Andy
February 28th, 2022 02:54
The Passing of Hermione
Goldfinch60 said:
Such emotions can be felt by others when drug abuse takes away a person who you know.
Sad words Neville.
Andy
February 28th, 2022 02:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Such emotions can be felt by others when drug abuse takes away a person who you know.
Sad words Neville.
Andy
February 28th, 2022 02:20
The Passing of Hermione
spilleronsheet said:
A tragic read
A dreadful end
Common in so many around
A news which keeping popping in surround
How much grief one holds
That only dope could cure
Alas the months left so small
And sad for those who are left alone after their passing
And hats off to those workers who try their best in rehab centres
I have always felt, this situation is immensely difficult for the friends, family and the warriors who try their best not to lose hope
A wonderfully penned essential poetry dear Neville
February 27th, 2022 13:42
spilleronsheet said:
A tragic read
A dreadful end
Common in so many around
A news which keeping popping in surround
How much grief one holds
That only dope could cure
Alas the months left so small
And sad for those who are left alone after their passing
And hats off to those workers who try their best in rehab centres
I have always felt, this situation is immensely difficult for the friends, family and the warriors who try their best not to lose hope
A wonderfully penned essential poetry dear Neville
February 27th, 2022 13:42
The Passing of Hermione
Christina8 said:
You told quite the story with this one although so sad it\'s not a story at all. The last 4 lines are terribly tragic. Great write!
February 27th, 2022 09:36
Christina8 said:
You told quite the story with this one although so sad it\'s not a story at all. The last 4 lines are terribly tragic. Great write!
February 27th, 2022 09:36
The Passing of Hermione
dusk arising said:
I have known addicts in my years. The one\'s I knew were not terrible people at all. Their habit caused them to do horrible things and i would keep a respectful distance to avoid being taken advantage of. All too often tragic ends make local news. All too often addicts are wrongly identified as being the dregs of society. So misunderstood, they are victims in many ways of crimes lurking in our society.
A very moving piece today.
February 27th, 2022 09:35
dusk arising said:
I have known addicts in my years. The one\'s I knew were not terrible people at all. Their habit caused them to do horrible things and i would keep a respectful distance to avoid being taken advantage of. All too often tragic ends make local news. All too often addicts are wrongly identified as being the dregs of society. So misunderstood, they are victims in many ways of crimes lurking in our society.
A very moving piece today.
February 27th, 2022 09:35
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