Comments received on poems by Neville
No Sweat
Goldfinch60 said:
If I wore less on hot sticky days like this I may get arrested!
Andy
July 28th, 2021 01:46
Goldfinch60 said:
If I wore less on hot sticky days like this I may get arrested!
Andy
July 28th, 2021 01:46
Its Shore Life
SureshG said:
The sea was calling you and you obliged, and now it offers awesome sights.
July 27th, 2021 12:47
SureshG said:
The sea was calling you and you obliged, and now it offers awesome sights.
July 27th, 2021 12:47
Its Shore Life
Accidental Poet said:
Oh the magnet pull towards the coastline. The air, gulls, the spray of crashing waves. I grew up on the coast also. \'Tis why I\'m such a lover of lighthouses. Great write N.
July 27th, 2021 08:39
Accidental Poet said:
Oh the magnet pull towards the coastline. The air, gulls, the spray of crashing waves. I grew up on the coast also. \'Tis why I\'m such a lover of lighthouses. Great write N.
July 27th, 2021 08:39
Its Shore Life
L. B. Mek said:
it comes with that glint of grey in our hair
and an extra second of delay, in our sighs
a nudge of awareness, announcing
that burgeoning arrival of perspective
graced by wisdoms, wide lensed scope
for nuanced: thought...
(such a vivid read
imbued with that melancholic romance
of life, by the sea)
another great shorty, my friend!
July 27th, 2021 05:25
L. B. Mek said:
it comes with that glint of grey in our hair
and an extra second of delay, in our sighs
a nudge of awareness, announcing
that burgeoning arrival of perspective
graced by wisdoms, wide lensed scope
for nuanced: thought...
(such a vivid read
imbued with that melancholic romance
of life, by the sea)
another great shorty, my friend!
July 27th, 2021 05:25
Its Shore Life
Goldfinch60 said:
So wonderful to share the sea shore with those wonderful birds Neville.
Andy
July 27th, 2021 04:42
Goldfinch60 said:
So wonderful to share the sea shore with those wonderful birds Neville.
Andy
July 27th, 2021 04:42
Its Shore Life
Doggerel Dave said:
Nothing but far too familiar gulls when I hit the seashore ....envious Neville.
July 27th, 2021 02:40
Doggerel Dave said:
Nothing but far too familiar gulls when I hit the seashore ....envious Neville.
July 27th, 2021 02:40
Its Shore Life
Saxon Crow said:
It shertainly is! One day the crabs will rise up
July 27th, 2021 02:37
Saxon Crow said:
It shertainly is! One day the crabs will rise up
July 27th, 2021 02:37
Its Shore Life
Fay Slimm. said:
Love your play on words - -- was with you there Nev watching those busy sanderlings - it is indeed a seabird\'s life around shores and great to stroll among the different sorts and am glad you have all that so near dear amigo.............x
July 27th, 2021 02:30
Fay Slimm. said:
Love your play on words - -- was with you there Nev watching those busy sanderlings - it is indeed a seabird\'s life around shores and great to stroll among the different sorts and am glad you have all that so near dear amigo.............x
July 27th, 2021 02:30
Beached Whale Blues
Goldfinch60 said:
It is such a shame to see those beached whales but there are many who help them get back to their safe environment.
Andy
July 27th, 2021 00:39
Goldfinch60 said:
It is such a shame to see those beached whales but there are many who help them get back to their safe environment.
Andy
July 27th, 2021 00:39
Beached Whale Blues
Saxon Crow said:
Yooooouuuu diiiiidd this weeeelllllllloooooo
July 26th, 2021 14:23
Saxon Crow said:
Yooooouuuu diiiiidd this weeeelllllllloooooo
July 26th, 2021 14:23
Beached Whale Blues
SureshG said:
Why do they get beached? Is it intentional or an accident - would be nice to learn.
Loved the haiku - I never learnt to compose.
July 26th, 2021 12:39
SureshG said:
Why do they get beached? Is it intentional or an accident - would be nice to learn.
Loved the haiku - I never learnt to compose.
July 26th, 2021 12:39
Beached Whale Blues
dusk arising said:
Such an event for many in parts of this wonderous world means a bounty of good food and wealth. Today in our climes it is a sad occasion beyond our understanding.
High tide to the rescue indeed but all to often the whale remains.
A puzzling poem for me to dance with possibilities.
July 26th, 2021 09:33
dusk arising said:
Such an event for many in parts of this wonderous world means a bounty of good food and wealth. Today in our climes it is a sad occasion beyond our understanding.
High tide to the rescue indeed but all to often the whale remains.
A puzzling poem for me to dance with possibilities.
July 26th, 2021 09:33
Beached Whale Blues
Accidental Poet said:
That one species should care and help that of another is the sign of compassion and love of life. Well penned N.
July 26th, 2021 08:53
Accidental Poet said:
That one species should care and help that of another is the sign of compassion and love of life. Well penned N.
July 26th, 2021 08:53
Beached Whale Blues
Jerry Reynolds said:
what mates we were then
spinnakers on the wind
July 26th, 2021 08:02
Jerry Reynolds said:
what mates we were then
spinnakers on the wind
July 26th, 2021 08:02
Upon the Tip of His Tongue
L. B. Mek said:
and how we regret
not realising it, at the time
and not insuring, we treasured
each lingered sip
and each lips, breathed-in scent
of all that she is, and will
remain - regretfully, meaningfully
in our lives
till that very last, blink
of our relenting: grip...
(simply: Brilliant my friend
what a poignant shorty)
July 26th, 2021 06:37
L. B. Mek said:
and how we regret
not realising it, at the time
and not insuring, we treasured
each lingered sip
and each lips, breathed-in scent
of all that she is, and will
remain - regretfully, meaningfully
in our lives
till that very last, blink
of our relenting: grip...
(simply: Brilliant my friend
what a poignant shorty)
July 26th, 2021 06:37
From a Safe Distance Only
L. B. Mek said:
\'he would admit ..
Indeed it was those subtle
strokes and gentle prompts
That reminded
him so very much of lovers
long since passed\'..
reads like lyrics to a well written country music song
that comes-on between, 4th and 5th drink messy slurps
and has you swimming in yearned-for, memories
till mercifully, by that lost shot of double Sambuca
you bow - out, cold
hoping, memory wipes are invented: by morning...
Just such a great set of lines, my friend
they hit home - arrowed
as if I inked the words myself...
(what greater quality can we expect
from a cherished poem)
thank you!
July 26th, 2021 06:32
L. B. Mek said:
\'he would admit ..
Indeed it was those subtle
strokes and gentle prompts
That reminded
him so very much of lovers
long since passed\'..
reads like lyrics to a well written country music song
that comes-on between, 4th and 5th drink messy slurps
and has you swimming in yearned-for, memories
till mercifully, by that lost shot of double Sambuca
you bow - out, cold
hoping, memory wipes are invented: by morning...
Just such a great set of lines, my friend
they hit home - arrowed
as if I inked the words myself...
(what greater quality can we expect
from a cherished poem)
thank you!
July 26th, 2021 06:32
Beached Whale Blues
Doggerel Dave said:
Much of that rescue activity you relate occurs also in Australia, Nev. Dedication required - kudos.Such a turnaround from the old days.
Whale watching now big business - Humpbacks breaching is a spectacular sight - if a little mysterious.
July 26th, 2021 04:58
Doggerel Dave said:
Much of that rescue activity you relate occurs also in Australia, Nev. Dedication required - kudos.Such a turnaround from the old days.
Whale watching now big business - Humpbacks breaching is a spectacular sight - if a little mysterious.
July 26th, 2021 04:58
Beached Whale Blues
Fay Slimm. said:
Strange the beaching of whales Nev.
-- your descriptive haiku reminds us of high tide rescue for some while others are the unfortunate ones. Sad eh - - and I am beginning to blubber now...........x
July 26th, 2021 03:32
Fay Slimm. said:
Strange the beaching of whales Nev.
-- your descriptive haiku reminds us of high tide rescue for some while others are the unfortunate ones. Sad eh - - and I am beginning to blubber now...........x
July 26th, 2021 03:32
Upon the Tip of His Tongue
Goldfinch60 said:
Or hopefully both will be together.
Andy
July 26th, 2021 00:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Or hopefully both will be together.
Andy
July 26th, 2021 00:43
Upon the Tip of His Tongue
MendedFences27 said:
Frivolous affairs, some long remembered, some forgotten straight away. You dove deep into the essence of both. Well structured, succinct. and pointed. Short, but complex. - Phil A.
July 25th, 2021 22:25
MendedFences27 said:
Frivolous affairs, some long remembered, some forgotten straight away. You dove deep into the essence of both. Well structured, succinct. and pointed. Short, but complex. - Phil A.
July 25th, 2021 22:25
Upon the Tip of His Tongue
dusk arising said:
Many a new taste can reach one\'s tongue tip. Foul tastes are best replaced with something sweet.... a sweet taste should be savoured for as long as it lingers and should an aftertaste arise... look for something to remove it.... something sweet maybe?
Nice wordplay to get the word jugglers juggling.
July 25th, 2021 11:05
dusk arising said:
Many a new taste can reach one\'s tongue tip. Foul tastes are best replaced with something sweet.... a sweet taste should be savoured for as long as it lingers and should an aftertaste arise... look for something to remove it.... something sweet maybe?
Nice wordplay to get the word jugglers juggling.
July 25th, 2021 11:05
Upon the Tip of His Tongue
Poetic Dan said:
Not if I know how to use it for more than just words and song.... To much for Sunday morning, well you wrote the fantastic poem lol
Cheers my man
July 25th, 2021 04:07
Poetic Dan said:
Not if I know how to use it for more than just words and song.... To much for Sunday morning, well you wrote the fantastic poem lol
Cheers my man
July 25th, 2021 04:07
Upon the Tip of His Tongue
Fay Slimm. said:
Maybe or not - however the taste of these beguiling four lines will remain in readers\' minds of that I am sure - -- -have a great Sunday my friend.......x
July 25th, 2021 02:25
Fay Slimm. said:
Maybe or not - however the taste of these beguiling four lines will remain in readers\' minds of that I am sure - -- -have a great Sunday my friend.......x
July 25th, 2021 02:25
Upon the Tip of His Tongue
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville.
KP\'s name was on the tip of my tongue - so I spat it out, like a bad apple! lol.
July 25th, 2021 02:13
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville.
KP\'s name was on the tip of my tongue - so I spat it out, like a bad apple! lol.
July 25th, 2021 02:13
From a Safe Distance Only
Goldfinch60 said:
Silences can be so informative and so wonderful within our lives Neville.
Andy
July 25th, 2021 00:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Silences can be so informative and so wonderful within our lives Neville.
Andy
July 25th, 2021 00:28
From a Safe Distance Only
Doggerel Dave said:
Darn! (or something) - Fay\'s solved your riddle, and I woz a going to tell you it woz too hard to solve....
July 24th, 2021 19:53
Doggerel Dave said:
Darn! (or something) - Fay\'s solved your riddle, and I woz a going to tell you it woz too hard to solve....
July 24th, 2021 19:53
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