Comments received on poems by Neville
Haiku #1 Maybe
Goldfinch60 said:
The Hippies had it right \"Make Love, Not War.\"
Andy
February 24th, 2022 01:39
Goldfinch60 said:
The Hippies had it right \"Make Love, Not War.\"
Andy
February 24th, 2022 01:39
Haiku #1 Maybe
spilleronsheet said:
I hope its the pandemics end
Many trips on halt
Thanks to awful Covid
February 23rd, 2022 13:10
spilleronsheet said:
I hope its the pandemics end
Many trips on halt
Thanks to awful Covid
February 23rd, 2022 13:10
Haiku #1 Maybe
Rocky Lagou said:
Okay, apart from finding it a little funny that we both decided to post haikus today this was really good (we were connected 😅) This is really the best \"way to go!\" 💖
February 23rd, 2022 10:51
Rocky Lagou said:
Okay, apart from finding it a little funny that we both decided to post haikus today this was really good (we were connected 😅) This is really the best \"way to go!\" 💖
February 23rd, 2022 10:51
Haiku #1 Maybe
Dove said:
Let’s party hardy
A Horizontal mambo
Warm flesh upon flesh
February 23rd, 2022 09:35
Dove said:
Let’s party hardy
A Horizontal mambo
Warm flesh upon flesh
February 23rd, 2022 09:35
Haiku #1 Maybe
Christina8 said:
Well the pandemic may not be over but what a fun way to go indeed! Wonderful haiku!
February 23rd, 2022 09:27
Christina8 said:
Well the pandemic may not be over but what a fun way to go indeed! Wonderful haiku!
February 23rd, 2022 09:27
Haiku #1 Maybe
orchidee said:
They think it\'s all over - is it now?!
Still Bozo, Coco, Thicko, etc?
February 23rd, 2022 05:45
orchidee said:
They think it\'s all over - is it now?!
Still Bozo, Coco, Thicko, etc?
February 23rd, 2022 05:45
Haiku #1 Maybe
Fay Slimm. said:
Over or not that way to go sounds real good to me - - so let\'s start a cult eh - - -- - maybe....................x
February 23rd, 2022 04:49
Fay Slimm. said:
Over or not that way to go sounds real good to me - - so let\'s start a cult eh - - -- - maybe....................x
February 23rd, 2022 04:49
Just a Series of Thoughts
Goldfinch60 said:
Neville your words must surely be worth a guinea.
Andy
February 23rd, 2022 02:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Neville your words must surely be worth a guinea.
Andy
February 23rd, 2022 02:46
Just a Series of Thoughts
Doggerel Dave said:
Time passing....the florin, as it nears the horizon, becomes a half crown.................. (I hope that\'s right - I\'m mostly asleep then. Extrapolating from sunny experience)
February 22nd, 2022 22:06
Doggerel Dave said:
Time passing....the florin, as it nears the horizon, becomes a half crown.................. (I hope that\'s right - I\'m mostly asleep then. Extrapolating from sunny experience)
February 22nd, 2022 22:06
Just a Series of Thoughts
Rozina said:
The beautiful moon - loved your metaphor.
February 22nd, 2022 21:06
Rozina said:
The beautiful moon - loved your metaphor.
February 22nd, 2022 21:06
Just a Series of Thoughts
Dove said:
Well, I had to word search florin.. But after reading its meaning, I had a huge smile! Definitely great metaphor for the moon...
February 22nd, 2022 11:25
Dove said:
Well, I had to word search florin.. But after reading its meaning, I had a huge smile! Definitely great metaphor for the moon...
February 22nd, 2022 11:25
Just a Series of Thoughts
orchidee said:
I heard some jokes about nine-bob notes, and four pound notes. Sounds dodgy to me, that coinage! lol.
Was decimalisation about 5 million years ago now?
You appreciating my visits too?
What \'they\' saying? - Do shut up a while Orchi. lol.
February 22nd, 2022 09:40
orchidee said:
I heard some jokes about nine-bob notes, and four pound notes. Sounds dodgy to me, that coinage! lol.
Was decimalisation about 5 million years ago now?
You appreciating my visits too?
What \'they\' saying? - Do shut up a while Orchi. lol.
February 22nd, 2022 09:40
Five Beatles and a Groupie
Rocky Lagou said:
This poem reminded me of Lana Del Rey\'s song \"Groupie Love\" and I totally recommend it. This poem is reminiscent to the whole \"fanatic scene\" that the song talks about. Great job! ✨💖
February 22nd, 2022 09:15
Rocky Lagou said:
This poem reminded me of Lana Del Rey\'s song \"Groupie Love\" and I totally recommend it. This poem is reminiscent to the whole \"fanatic scene\" that the song talks about. Great job! ✨💖
February 22nd, 2022 09:15
Just a Series of Thoughts
Christina8 said:
Beautiful metaphors my friend. I like this poem very much!
February 22nd, 2022 08:30
Christina8 said:
Beautiful metaphors my friend. I like this poem very much!
February 22nd, 2022 08:30
Just a Series of Thoughts
L. B. Mek said:
we do think ourselves fake
when digging deep
in-to those truth\'s, we keep
for
we get to see, too clearly
just how many faces
we adorn, to survive
this incessant hurricane
of chaotic, absurdity
we call, life..
(love how you worded this poem
especially poignant
in our current stormy season)
\'The, Poet\' is back
all is well then
all is well
February 22nd, 2022 06:16
L. B. Mek said:
we do think ourselves fake
when digging deep
in-to those truth\'s, we keep
for
we get to see, too clearly
just how many faces
we adorn, to survive
this incessant hurricane
of chaotic, absurdity
we call, life..
(love how you worded this poem
especially poignant
in our current stormy season)
\'The, Poet\' is back
all is well then
all is well
February 22nd, 2022 06:16
Just a Series of Thoughts
spilleronsheet said:
Even the series of thoughts could be so deep
He turned into a romantic actor
That moon shining amidst the grey clouds
Carrying the hearts of lovers around
Good one dear Neville
Enjoyed a lot while reading it
February 22nd, 2022 06:13
spilleronsheet said:
Even the series of thoughts could be so deep
He turned into a romantic actor
That moon shining amidst the grey clouds
Carrying the hearts of lovers around
Good one dear Neville
Enjoyed a lot while reading it
February 22nd, 2022 06:13
Just a Series of Thoughts
Fay Slimm. said:
Two views from observing luna appearance and thinking in metaphor - - I love your musings amigo.....x
February 22nd, 2022 05:58
Fay Slimm. said:
Two views from observing luna appearance and thinking in metaphor - - I love your musings amigo.....x
February 22nd, 2022 05:58
Five Beatles and a Groupie
Doggerel Dave said:
Aah - but who got their end away........in the end?
😊😊😊
February 21st, 2022 21:57
Doggerel Dave said:
Aah - but who got their end away........in the end?
😊😊😊
February 21st, 2022 21:57
Five Beatles and a Groupie
Rozina said:
My favourite band of all time. Paul McCartney was my favourite, my husband’s was John Lennon. George and Ringo not as popular amongst our group of friends. Thank you for bringing up this memory.
February 21st, 2022 21:48
Rozina said:
My favourite band of all time. Paul McCartney was my favourite, my husband’s was John Lennon. George and Ringo not as popular amongst our group of friends. Thank you for bringing up this memory.
February 21st, 2022 21:48
Five Beatles and a Groupie
Paul Bell said:
Poor Pete, did he make any money out of the Beatles.
February 21st, 2022 14:02
Paul Bell said:
Poor Pete, did he make any money out of the Beatles.
February 21st, 2022 14:02
A Long Pretence
Christina8 said:
Brilliant writing as always but I think we have all felt this way with someone possibly when we were younger. Love this!
February 21st, 2022 12:33
Christina8 said:
Brilliant writing as always but I think we have all felt this way with someone possibly when we were younger. Love this!
February 21st, 2022 12:33
Five Beatles and a Groupie
Christina8 said:
A fine write indeed! I am not as familiar with the beatles as I\'d like to be but I get the gist..x
February 21st, 2022 09:19
Christina8 said:
A fine write indeed! I am not as familiar with the beatles as I\'d like to be but I get the gist..x
February 21st, 2022 09:19
Five Beatles and a Groupie
L. B. Mek said:
Beatles of fun....
...
..
.
no, no one else? pffttt
fine then
I\'ll keep my wannabe
Liverpudlian humour
to myself!
(well for a day at least) 😁
February 21st, 2022 07:05
L. B. Mek said:
Beatles of fun....
...
..
.
no, no one else? pffttt
fine then
I\'ll keep my wannabe
Liverpudlian humour
to myself!
(well for a day at least) 😁
February 21st, 2022 07:05
A Long Pretence
spilleronsheet said:
A sad poetic ode of heart singing melancholy
I hope it’s just words
Not true, but if it is, good time shall be soon coming around with a beautiful maiden wrapped around…
February 21st, 2022 05:32
spilleronsheet said:
A sad poetic ode of heart singing melancholy
I hope it’s just words
Not true, but if it is, good time shall be soon coming around with a beautiful maiden wrapped around…
February 21st, 2022 05:32
Five Beatles and a Groupie
spilleronsheet said:
Wow
Now I can hear the band in my mind
Nice poetry dear Neville
To some stars no one can replace…
February 21st, 2022 05:29
spilleronsheet said:
Wow
Now I can hear the band in my mind
Nice poetry dear Neville
To some stars no one can replace…
February 21st, 2022 05:29
Five Beatles and a Groupie
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Now my \'I remember when.....\'. series of poems. It covers 5 million years! lol.
February 21st, 2022 04:04
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Now my \'I remember when.....\'. series of poems. It covers 5 million years! lol.
February 21st, 2022 04:04
Five Beatles and a Groupie
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write Neville. I was there.
Andy
February 21st, 2022 03:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write Neville. I was there.
Andy
February 21st, 2022 03:57
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