Comments received on poems by Neville
My Lotus and Me
Doggerel Dave said:
Well I suppose if you are a tree and not a hand and don’t have another tree not to clap with (if yer know wot I mean) then you best just lie down and hope no one heard…
The only thing which buggered the whole scene up was the British Racing Green Lotus, which we will have to excuse because it was only seventeen and really hadn’t had the chance , since it was always racing around, to sit, contemplate, then koan find out......
September 8th, 2021 20:53
Doggerel Dave said:
Well I suppose if you are a tree and not a hand and don’t have another tree not to clap with (if yer know wot I mean) then you best just lie down and hope no one heard…
The only thing which buggered the whole scene up was the British Racing Green Lotus, which we will have to excuse because it was only seventeen and really hadn’t had the chance , since it was always racing around, to sit, contemplate, then koan find out......
September 8th, 2021 20:53
My Lotus and Me
Dove said:
Oh my did you bend the tree! Timber’s away! Hope you both stick around, least you both weren’t bumps on a log! Racing sounds like fun! Of course trees don’t cry, they just weep sap
September 8th, 2021 09:06
Dove said:
Oh my did you bend the tree! Timber’s away! Hope you both stick around, least you both weren’t bumps on a log! Racing sounds like fun! Of course trees don’t cry, they just weep sap
September 8th, 2021 09:06
My Lotus and Me
dusk arising said:
The wheel came off mine on a nasty bend....... on another occasion i swerved to avoid a child and fell out of bed!
There were tree fellers there but not an axe between em bejabers.
Do trees make a sound whilist falling or just when they stop falling... maybe its just the wind.
September 8th, 2021 05:57
dusk arising said:
The wheel came off mine on a nasty bend....... on another occasion i swerved to avoid a child and fell out of bed!
There were tree fellers there but not an axe between em bejabers.
Do trees make a sound whilist falling or just when they stop falling... maybe its just the wind.
September 8th, 2021 05:57
My Lotus and Me
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
Anyone I should meet in this poem?!
September 8th, 2021 04:22
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
Anyone I should meet in this poem?!
September 8th, 2021 04:22
My Lotus and Me
Fay Slimm. said:
Not being race-trained I ask did this Lotus have a tragic accident when a tree fell silently and so suddenly down to crush its hope of winning. - - but hope you were not in it me luverly..........x
September 8th, 2021 03:31
Fay Slimm. said:
Not being race-trained I ask did this Lotus have a tragic accident when a tree fell silently and so suddenly down to crush its hope of winning. - - but hope you were not in it me luverly..........x
September 8th, 2021 03:31
My Lotus and Me
Goldfinch60 said:
But if it did not make a sound did it really fall?
Andy
September 8th, 2021 03:29
Goldfinch60 said:
But if it did not make a sound did it really fall?
Andy
September 8th, 2021 03:29
When the Sea Fret Hit
Goldfinch60 said:
That sea fog can be so enthralling and so frightening Neville.
Andy
September 8th, 2021 00:12
Goldfinch60 said:
That sea fog can be so enthralling and so frightening Neville.
Andy
September 8th, 2021 00:12
Listen Through the Breeze
myself and me said:
What a piece! The sound of that mandolin lingering in my mind, stirred up all the yesterdays\' memories.
September 7th, 2021 19:33
myself and me said:
What a piece! The sound of that mandolin lingering in my mind, stirred up all the yesterdays\' memories.
September 7th, 2021 19:33
Wryneck
myself and me said:
I did google it. Lucky you to catch one in your sight.
September 7th, 2021 19:30
myself and me said:
I did google it. Lucky you to catch one in your sight.
September 7th, 2021 19:30
When the Sea Fret Hit
Doggerel Dave said:
Despite the atmosphere and atmospherics (are they different?) your piece evokes, all this is a wee bit hard for me, Nev – so I’m afraid I will have to play the antipodean absentee card once more…. As I sus it , two ideas form:
- Hoar has an association with frost, yet according to my calculation, arrived at after standing on my head (puts myself more in your position and improves circulation to half defunct gray matter), you should by now be in Autumn –
- Which brings me to a “Season of mists and mellow fruitfulness”
So how come?
September 7th, 2021 19:24
Doggerel Dave said:
Despite the atmosphere and atmospherics (are they different?) your piece evokes, all this is a wee bit hard for me, Nev – so I’m afraid I will have to play the antipodean absentee card once more…. As I sus it , two ideas form:
- Hoar has an association with frost, yet according to my calculation, arrived at after standing on my head (puts myself more in your position and improves circulation to half defunct gray matter), you should by now be in Autumn –
- Which brings me to a “Season of mists and mellow fruitfulness”
So how come?
September 7th, 2021 19:24
When the Sea Fret Hit
myself and me said:
I lost myself in this mystery sea fret.
September 7th, 2021 19:00
myself and me said:
I lost myself in this mystery sea fret.
September 7th, 2021 19:00
When the Sea Fret Hit
Dove said:
The sea fog can be mysterious, or it can lead a sailor astray without a compass! Me thinks yours weaved tall tales of woes! Just like a dame 🌝
September 7th, 2021 13:14
Dove said:
The sea fog can be mysterious, or it can lead a sailor astray without a compass! Me thinks yours weaved tall tales of woes! Just like a dame 🌝
September 7th, 2021 13:14
Listen Through the Breeze
Dove said:
Music to my soul! Fairy lights they always sprinkle love dust! Great poem dear Neville
September 7th, 2021 13:09
Dove said:
Music to my soul! Fairy lights they always sprinkle love dust! Great poem dear Neville
September 7th, 2021 13:09
When the Sea Fret Hit
orchidee said:
Haar (I\'ll) be saying it\'s a fine write N.
September 7th, 2021 11:05
orchidee said:
Haar (I\'ll) be saying it\'s a fine write N.
September 7th, 2021 11:05
When the Sea Fret Hit
L. B. Mek said:
sounds rough
but hey, sailor\'s getting lucky with that peck, so can\'t complain really, lol
(I think this is my 10th \'lol\' this morning...
too much coffee, in my coffee
me thinks)
especially since Nature be a wondrous mistress...
(forgive me, I tried to relate best I could, but not really got me sea legs, let alone the lingo)
still, thanks for the informatively fun read, dear Poet
September 7th, 2021 06:14
L. B. Mek said:
sounds rough
but hey, sailor\'s getting lucky with that peck, so can\'t complain really, lol
(I think this is my 10th \'lol\' this morning...
too much coffee, in my coffee
me thinks)
especially since Nature be a wondrous mistress...
(forgive me, I tried to relate best I could, but not really got me sea legs, let alone the lingo)
still, thanks for the informatively fun read, dear Poet
September 7th, 2021 06:14
When the Sea Fret Hit
Fay Slimm. said:
This special sea-fog is prevalent here often but Nev you gave it a personality that only a poet can - i smiled at where it kissed that sailor I did........... ha another great nature read.........x
September 7th, 2021 04:55
Fay Slimm. said:
This special sea-fog is prevalent here often but Nev you gave it a personality that only a poet can - i smiled at where it kissed that sailor I did........... ha another great nature read.........x
September 7th, 2021 04:55
Wryneck
Goldfinch60 said:
In all my years birdwatching I have never seen one, maybe one day?
Andy
September 7th, 2021 00:19
Goldfinch60 said:
In all my years birdwatching I have never seen one, maybe one day?
Andy
September 7th, 2021 00:19
Wryneck
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Today I learned something new, thanks to you my dear friend.
A very interesting bird to behold.
Lucky you.☺️
Laura🌻
September 6th, 2021 16:08
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Today I learned something new, thanks to you my dear friend.
A very interesting bird to behold.
Lucky you.☺️
Laura🌻
September 6th, 2021 16:08
Listen Through the Breeze
L. B. Mek said:
\'I never
want you: choreographed
For that would be, too much
to ask\'..
without spontaneity, dear Poet
where would we hang our hopeful hats
that hide, those ever regressing hairlines
of our regretted, shouda - woulda\'s of life..
(subtly, incisive: poetic brilliance
uniquely
at your very best, my friend)
September 6th, 2021 07:53
L. B. Mek said:
\'I never
want you: choreographed
For that would be, too much
to ask\'..
without spontaneity, dear Poet
where would we hang our hopeful hats
that hide, those ever regressing hairlines
of our regretted, shouda - woulda\'s of life..
(subtly, incisive: poetic brilliance
uniquely
at your very best, my friend)
September 6th, 2021 07:53
Wryneck
Doggerel Dave said:
Well If you keep looking over your shoulder for them dicky birds they for some unaccountable reason are twittering on about just above me, and end up with a sore neck, it\'s no wonder them chiropractors make a lot of dosh, dull jewelled............... don\'t look at me - you recommended Google....
September 6th, 2021 07:49
Doggerel Dave said:
Well If you keep looking over your shoulder for them dicky birds they for some unaccountable reason are twittering on about just above me, and end up with a sore neck, it\'s no wonder them chiropractors make a lot of dosh, dull jewelled............... don\'t look at me - you recommended Google....
September 6th, 2021 07:49
Wryneck
L. B. Mek said:
never seen one, although
I doubt I would recognise it
but, on a somewhat similar note
they say, fritillary butterflies were spotted
in Kent this year
and while all butterfly numbers continue to decline
its warming to think
theirs a chance of a tepid re-emergence, of sorts
personally, I have seen so many this year
nature\'s fluttering: comforter\'s supreme
(in my humble \'city boi\' opinion\' lol
September 6th, 2021 07:47
L. B. Mek said:
never seen one, although
I doubt I would recognise it
but, on a somewhat similar note
they say, fritillary butterflies were spotted
in Kent this year
and while all butterfly numbers continue to decline
its warming to think
theirs a chance of a tepid re-emergence, of sorts
personally, I have seen so many this year
nature\'s fluttering: comforter\'s supreme
(in my humble \'city boi\' opinion\' lol
September 6th, 2021 07:47
Wryneck
Accidental Poet said:
Not seen this little fellow in my neck of the woods. But a handsome fellow he is. Well penned N. 👍
September 6th, 2021 06:53
Accidental Poet said:
Not seen this little fellow in my neck of the woods. But a handsome fellow he is. Well penned N. 👍
September 6th, 2021 06:53
Wryneck
Fay Slimm. said:
Beautiful sheen on the bird I have never seen Nev - they can be spotted on southern coasts but I have not been lucky - as you certainly were to see Wrynecks three days running - a bit envious so I be.............x
September 6th, 2021 05:21
Fay Slimm. said:
Beautiful sheen on the bird I have never seen Nev - they can be spotted on southern coasts but I have not been lucky - as you certainly were to see Wrynecks three days running - a bit envious so I be.............x
September 6th, 2021 05:21
Listen Through the Breeze
Caring dove said:
“ turquoise triangles “ .. I really like this poem .. I like your choice of words ... you even mention fairies !
)
September 6th, 2021 02:24
Caring dove said:
“ turquoise triangles “ .. I really like this poem .. I like your choice of words ... you even mention fairies !
)
September 6th, 2021 02:24
Listen Through the Breeze
Thekkinkkattil said:
With things gone terribly wrong you have been able to make it a pleasant poem . Kudos to you
September 6th, 2021 01:00
Thekkinkkattil said:
With things gone terribly wrong you have been able to make it a pleasant poem . Kudos to you
September 6th, 2021 01:00
Listen Through the Breeze
Goldfinch60 said:
Those times passed can be so wonderful but also so sad Neville.
Andy
September 6th, 2021 00:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Those times passed can be so wonderful but also so sad Neville.
Andy
September 6th, 2021 00:20
Listen Through the Breeze
Doggerel Dave said:
Did you get it together again or not, Nev?
Great flow with some depth - I\'m not quite sure just how it was resolved with all that baggage.....
September 5th, 2021 05:30
Doggerel Dave said:
Did you get it together again or not, Nev?
Great flow with some depth - I\'m not quite sure just how it was resolved with all that baggage.....
September 5th, 2021 05:30
Listen Through the Breeze
Fay Slimm. said:
Am listening hard after reading this bit of familiar intrigue and thinking I can hear - maybe - - that romantic mandolin - I love this legacy of a remembered yesterday Nev - - now left for readers to unfold their own ending.......... x
September 5th, 2021 02:52
Fay Slimm. said:
Am listening hard after reading this bit of familiar intrigue and thinking I can hear - maybe - - that romantic mandolin - I love this legacy of a remembered yesterday Nev - - now left for readers to unfold their own ending.......... x
September 5th, 2021 02:52
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