Comments received on poems by Neville
Mr. Mediocre
Lorna said:
Oh oh....... the rain is definitely getting to you......... go read Kites because you are the inspiration for that..... I think you soar!
October 4th, 2020 08:22
Lorna said:
Oh oh....... the rain is definitely getting to you......... go read Kites because you are the inspiration for that..... I think you soar!
October 4th, 2020 08:22
Mr. Mediocre
dusk arising said:
I\'m always embarrassed when you write about me.
Do you think i should get out more?
A very entertaining and head scratching piece... i\'m still thinking about it...
October 4th, 2020 07:57
dusk arising said:
I\'m always embarrassed when you write about me.
Do you think i should get out more?
A very entertaining and head scratching piece... i\'m still thinking about it...
October 4th, 2020 07:57
Mr. Mediocre
Fay Slimm. said:
Hurt and feelin\' alone \"Mediocre\" this man is certainly not - for with love in his heart he is a hero
- so before I rush out here is the shout and hoping he hears................x
October 4th, 2020 05:37
Fay Slimm. said:
Hurt and feelin\' alone \"Mediocre\" this man is certainly not - for with love in his heart he is a hero
- so before I rush out here is the shout and hoping he hears................x
October 4th, 2020 05:37
Mr. Mediocre
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Hello friend!
Old or new, a hurt is a hurt when we ‘have been wronged’.
Nicely penned poem...no mediocrity there.
Have a wonderful Sunday.
Laura🌻
October 4th, 2020 05:12
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Hello friend!
Old or new, a hurt is a hurt when we ‘have been wronged’.
Nicely penned poem...no mediocrity there.
Have a wonderful Sunday.
Laura🌻
October 4th, 2020 05:12
Some Words are not Just Words
Dove said:
Ha well , I love 💕 you, however beautiful gets caught in the throat, not out of malice, but of fear!
But harsh words are best swallowed in silence , Amen
October 3rd, 2020 11:53
Dove said:
Ha well , I love 💕 you, however beautiful gets caught in the throat, not out of malice, but of fear!
But harsh words are best swallowed in silence , Amen
October 3rd, 2020 11:53
Some Words are not Just Words
Lorna said:
Let\'s start with your words! And don\'t you love that on a wet and windy Saturday morning you don\'t have to go anywhere if you don\'t want to! Tea, toast and lovely jam.......
October 3rd, 2020 04:22
Lorna said:
Let\'s start with your words! And don\'t you love that on a wet and windy Saturday morning you don\'t have to go anywhere if you don\'t want to! Tea, toast and lovely jam.......
October 3rd, 2020 04:22
Some Words are not Just Words
Michael Edwards said:
Some words stand alone but other words need other words and ... not sure where I\'m going with this - run out of words.
October 3rd, 2020 03:55
Michael Edwards said:
Some words stand alone but other words need other words and ... not sure where I\'m going with this - run out of words.
October 3rd, 2020 03:55
Some Words are not Just Words
Fay Slimm. said:
What a compelling title and a truly endearing thought about words Nev. - am sending leather-bound specials to thank you for the added awareness your posting has birthed in my respect for certain worthily read-aloud words..............x
October 3rd, 2020 02:58
Fay Slimm. said:
What a compelling title and a truly endearing thought about words Nev. - am sending leather-bound specials to thank you for the added awareness your posting has birthed in my respect for certain worthily read-aloud words..............x
October 3rd, 2020 02:58
Some Words are not Just Words
orchidee said:
Good write Neville - but I just got me notepad out to do another poem! lol.
October 3rd, 2020 02:08
orchidee said:
Good write Neville - but I just got me notepad out to do another poem! lol.
October 3rd, 2020 02:08
Some Words are not Just Words
dusk arising said:
Looks like Ive lost last week again..i dunno where ive put it either....
There are words and there are words.... and theres that learning stuff too..... when youve found those kind of words that get stuck in the throat..... well .. next time around youll be reluctant to let them get as far as the throat....
But i never learn.... so i gave up!
October 3rd, 2020 01:49
dusk arising said:
Looks like Ive lost last week again..i dunno where ive put it either....
There are words and there are words.... and theres that learning stuff too..... when youve found those kind of words that get stuck in the throat..... well .. next time around youll be reluctant to let them get as far as the throat....
But i never learn.... so i gave up!
October 3rd, 2020 01:49
Some Words are not Just Words
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true, there are some wonderful words out there that need to be saved for eternity.
Andy
October 3rd, 2020 01:16
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true, there are some wonderful words out there that need to be saved for eternity.
Andy
October 3rd, 2020 01:16
Prepped
Goldfinch60 said:
May the Yin always be with us all Neville and maybe the world will find peace.
Andy
October 3rd, 2020 00:16
Goldfinch60 said:
May the Yin always be with us all Neville and maybe the world will find peace.
Andy
October 3rd, 2020 00:16
Prepped
Dove said:
Bare and fragrant , soothing and concealed, till the wondrous reveal,
Awesome dear Neville! Peace to you
October 2nd, 2020 23:47
Dove said:
Bare and fragrant , soothing and concealed, till the wondrous reveal,
Awesome dear Neville! Peace to you
October 2nd, 2020 23:47
Prepped
MendedFences27 said:
Never knew \"Paisley\" could be so much fun. Always considered it overly intricate, but on Indecently prepped skin, well, it\'s a whole other ballgame.
\"Let\'s,\" not \"focus on the yin,\" let\'s get right to the Sin.- Phil A.
October 2nd, 2020 14:13
MendedFences27 said:
Never knew \"Paisley\" could be so much fun. Always considered it overly intricate, but on Indecently prepped skin, well, it\'s a whole other ballgame.
\"Let\'s,\" not \"focus on the yin,\" let\'s get right to the Sin.- Phil A.
October 2nd, 2020 14:13
Prepped
Lorna said:
Oh Paisley! Think Ingrid Bergman\'s blouse in Casablanca......... Now that takes me to a lot of other lovely mind pictures....... All Yin........
October 2nd, 2020 08:29
Lorna said:
Oh Paisley! Think Ingrid Bergman\'s blouse in Casablanca......... Now that takes me to a lot of other lovely mind pictures....... All Yin........
October 2nd, 2020 08:29
Prepped
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh yes - Agreed that yang is for those who are angry but yieldingly yin and perfectly ready is a lady\'s prepped skin for the feel of Paisley- tracing - - thanks for the fun read to lighten this stormily Cornish day mon ami..............x
October 2nd, 2020 07:49
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh yes - Agreed that yang is for those who are angry but yieldingly yin and perfectly ready is a lady\'s prepped skin for the feel of Paisley- tracing - - thanks for the fun read to lighten this stormily Cornish day mon ami..............x
October 2nd, 2020 07:49
Oblivious
MendedFences27 said:
\"No need or reason to pretend,\" that she knew. Why would she? It is now obvious and out in the open. Perhaps her eyes would have told on her if not covered by a pair of \"Ray Bans.\"
The passion felt comes through in this poem, in the last two stanzas. The first three set up the powerful ending. They are whimsical observations, to contrast the rougher ending. Sweetness followed by unabridged passion. Thoroughly enjoyed. - Phil A
October 1st, 2020 21:24
MendedFences27 said:
\"No need or reason to pretend,\" that she knew. Why would she? It is now obvious and out in the open. Perhaps her eyes would have told on her if not covered by a pair of \"Ray Bans.\"
The passion felt comes through in this poem, in the last two stanzas. The first three set up the powerful ending. They are whimsical observations, to contrast the rougher ending. Sweetness followed by unabridged passion. Thoroughly enjoyed. - Phil A
October 1st, 2020 21:24
Oblivious
Dove said:
Behind sunlit ray ban Glasses and beautiful curves, is a heart of gold ! I hope she knew
October 1st, 2020 12:26
Dove said:
Behind sunlit ray ban Glasses and beautiful curves, is a heart of gold ! I hope she knew
October 1st, 2020 12:26
Oblivious
Michael Edwards said:
Fay say\'s it so well and love the idea of word-painting which describes your work to a \'T\'
October 1st, 2020 09:39
Michael Edwards said:
Fay say\'s it so well and love the idea of word-painting which describes your work to a \'T\'
October 1st, 2020 09:39
A Patchwork of Ashes
L. B. Mek said:
liked the form, alternating the two voices added another layer to both perspective\'s,
brilliant imagery, relatability and a captivating title!
October 1st, 2020 03:45
L. B. Mek said:
liked the form, alternating the two voices added another layer to both perspective\'s,
brilliant imagery, relatability and a captivating title!
October 1st, 2020 03:45
Oblivious
L. B. Mek said:
smooth with it - who needs pickup lines, they just don\'t have a chance once you set your aim, lol
great job keeping the gloom of heartbreak somewhat light-hearted through your Ray Bans perspective, makes for a poignant yet fun read
October 1st, 2020 03:03
L. B. Mek said:
smooth with it - who needs pickup lines, they just don\'t have a chance once you set your aim, lol
great job keeping the gloom of heartbreak somewhat light-hearted through your Ray Bans perspective, makes for a poignant yet fun read
October 1st, 2020 03:03
Oblivious
Fay Slimm. said:
Your write so cleverly roused this reader\'s attention to the past tense you use for the word Love in this poignant poem Nev - showing time gone when present meant even the sight of a lover could induce avid desire......... sad when that passes as the last lines infer.......... another tale told with your special talent for word-painting.
October 1st, 2020 02:34
Fay Slimm. said:
Your write so cleverly roused this reader\'s attention to the past tense you use for the word Love in this poignant poem Nev - showing time gone when present meant even the sight of a lover could induce avid desire......... sad when that passes as the last lines infer.......... another tale told with your special talent for word-painting.
October 1st, 2020 02:34
Oblivious
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a strong love portrayed in your words Neville.
Andy
October 1st, 2020 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a strong love portrayed in your words Neville.
Andy
October 1st, 2020 01:25
A Patchwork of Ashes
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful emotive words Neville.
Andy
September 30th, 2020 23:56
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful emotive words Neville.
Andy
September 30th, 2020 23:56
A Patchwork of Ashes
MendedFences27 said:
Like a wild fire leaving behind fields of ash, she burned through his heart and then as her nature required kept moving on to drier fields.;
When all that\'s left are embers
of sweet moments fondly remembered
the ashes keep him warm
throughout the raging storm
as love becomes his reason to condemn her.
Once a love is gone, we cling to memories until we find a way to cope and then find a new love. Maybe that\'s why it\'s called a bed of ashes. Then again some folks are just not meant to be together .i.e. the wild filly and the church mouse. - Phil A.
September 30th, 2020 16:40
MendedFences27 said:
Like a wild fire leaving behind fields of ash, she burned through his heart and then as her nature required kept moving on to drier fields.;
When all that\'s left are embers
of sweet moments fondly remembered
the ashes keep him warm
throughout the raging storm
as love becomes his reason to condemn her.
Once a love is gone, we cling to memories until we find a way to cope and then find a new love. Maybe that\'s why it\'s called a bed of ashes. Then again some folks are just not meant to be together .i.e. the wild filly and the church mouse. - Phil A.
September 30th, 2020 16:40
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