Comments received on poems by Neville
Mark these Words
Fay Slimm. said:
A gentle poetic plea for reason when love sinks into trouble and your heart fills every line with true expertise. Brilliant writing again amigo..........x
July 15th, 2021 03:16
Fay Slimm. said:
A gentle poetic plea for reason when love sinks into trouble and your heart fills every line with true expertise. Brilliant writing again amigo..........x
July 15th, 2021 03:16
Mark these Words
dusk arising said:
Why not indeed, for the oils of hindsight poured across the waters of yesterday can indeed bring understanding and forgiveness.
July 15th, 2021 02:22
dusk arising said:
Why not indeed, for the oils of hindsight poured across the waters of yesterday can indeed bring understanding and forgiveness.
July 15th, 2021 02:22
Upon a Small White Feather
Caring dove said:
White feathers are a sign of angels . Nice poem 🙂
July 15th, 2021 02:02
Caring dove said:
White feathers are a sign of angels . Nice poem 🙂
July 15th, 2021 02:02
Upon a Small White Feather
myself and me said:
You must be in a very delightful mood recently. Everything is floating. The leaf, now the feather. I am standing on the ground watching all these happening. Just brilliant.
July 14th, 2021 19:39
myself and me said:
You must be in a very delightful mood recently. Everything is floating. The leaf, now the feather. I am standing on the ground watching all these happening. Just brilliant.
July 14th, 2021 19:39
Upon a Small White Feather
Accidental Poet said:
Yes N, smiles for everyone. ; )
July 14th, 2021 05:23
Accidental Poet said:
Yes N, smiles for everyone. ; )
July 14th, 2021 05:23
Upon a Small White Feather
Doggerel Dave said:
Do you wish to rehabilitate the white feather, Neville?
Can\'t avoid the image of ladies presenting white feathers to \'cowards\' during WW1.
Angels perhaps? I\'ll settle for that.....
July 14th, 2021 04:28
Doggerel Dave said:
Do you wish to rehabilitate the white feather, Neville?
Can\'t avoid the image of ladies presenting white feathers to \'cowards\' during WW1.
Angels perhaps? I\'ll settle for that.....
July 14th, 2021 04:28
Upon a Small White Feather
Fay Slimm. said:
A comforting read and no doubt about it my luverly friend........x
July 14th, 2021 04:04
Fay Slimm. said:
A comforting read and no doubt about it my luverly friend........x
July 14th, 2021 04:04
Upon a Small White Feather
dusk arising said:
Ah those little white feathers, the tell tale evidence of a missed loved one looking down on us.
Nicely worded joyful reminder of a missed person.
July 14th, 2021 03:34
dusk arising said:
Ah those little white feathers, the tell tale evidence of a missed loved one looking down on us.
Nicely worded joyful reminder of a missed person.
July 14th, 2021 03:34
Magnificently Different
myself and me said:
Wow, you must have a magnificent pen.
July 13th, 2021 21:29
myself and me said:
Wow, you must have a magnificent pen.
July 13th, 2021 21:29
Magnificently Different
MendedFences27 said:
Stopped and fell into this trove of memories, though without the mandolin. I must say I loved the metaphor, though. And as always a dream come true. - Phil A.
July 13th, 2021 16:24
MendedFences27 said:
Stopped and fell into this trove of memories, though without the mandolin. I must say I loved the metaphor, though. And as always a dream come true. - Phil A.
July 13th, 2021 16:24
Magnificently Different
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a very long time ago but I remember them so well.
Andy
July 13th, 2021 14:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a very long time ago but I remember them so well.
Andy
July 13th, 2021 14:41
Magnificently Different
SureshG said:
the trouble of being a late arrival is that all ones thoughts have already been expressed and thus shy away from repeating, so -
‘magnificently poemed’ is all that’s left.
July 13th, 2021 12:49
SureshG said:
the trouble of being a late arrival is that all ones thoughts have already been expressed and thus shy away from repeating, so -
‘magnificently poemed’ is all that’s left.
July 13th, 2021 12:49
Magnificently Different
L. B. Mek said:
\'and ain\'t that: the Dream
we\'re all striving to achieve...
if only, we could fast-track
our evolutionary self-growth, in time
for us to possess something, better
to offer: when that \'next time\'
comes around, in that blink
of an enticingly mesmeric, wink...\'
(another subtly woven write
tugging at those tether\'s, we buried deep
just so that we can survive
each elongated sigh of regretted, breath)
Brilliant, such an immersive read!
and as always, I thank you
for continuously inspiring
my little scribbled replies, dear poet
July 13th, 2021 05:59
L. B. Mek said:
\'and ain\'t that: the Dream
we\'re all striving to achieve...
if only, we could fast-track
our evolutionary self-growth, in time
for us to possess something, better
to offer: when that \'next time\'
comes around, in that blink
of an enticingly mesmeric, wink...\'
(another subtly woven write
tugging at those tether\'s, we buried deep
just so that we can survive
each elongated sigh of regretted, breath)
Brilliant, such an immersive read!
and as always, I thank you
for continuously inspiring
my little scribbled replies, dear poet
July 13th, 2021 05:59
Magnificently Different
Doggerel Dave said:
Frustrating, Neville......my pedestrian mind wants to know what happened next.... That because the initial piece was very vivid and engaged my curiosity...never having been in that position myself.
July 13th, 2021 04:22
Doggerel Dave said:
Frustrating, Neville......my pedestrian mind wants to know what happened next.... That because the initial piece was very vivid and engaged my curiosity...never having been in that position myself.
July 13th, 2021 04:22
Magnificently Different
Fay Slimm. said:
The scene shows results of first-time involvement with mirrored clarity yet only dreams now remain in memory\'s coffers. Sweet intrigue as always but still very telling...............x
July 13th, 2021 03:31
Fay Slimm. said:
The scene shows results of first-time involvement with mirrored clarity yet only dreams now remain in memory\'s coffers. Sweet intrigue as always but still very telling...............x
July 13th, 2021 03:31
Magnificently Different
dusk arising said:
Memories, full of the pregnancy of \'if onlys\'
July 13th, 2021 02:26
dusk arising said:
Memories, full of the pregnancy of \'if onlys\'
July 13th, 2021 02:26
Freefallen
myself and me said:
Holly wind! You blow me away.
What a brilliant piece to hold and enjoy.
July 12th, 2021 22:14
myself and me said:
Holly wind! You blow me away.
What a brilliant piece to hold and enjoy.
July 12th, 2021 22:14
Freefallen
Accidental Poet said:
It\'s the quiet ones who love the deepest. Wonderful write N. ; )
July 12th, 2021 18:44
Accidental Poet said:
It\'s the quiet ones who love the deepest. Wonderful write N. ; )
July 12th, 2021 18:44
Freefallen
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
‘yet quietly…’
I breathed a sigh of relief
when he fell off the face of the earth.
I enjoyed this short write.
Laura🌻
July 12th, 2021 16:35
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
‘yet quietly…’
I breathed a sigh of relief
when he fell off the face of the earth.
I enjoyed this short write.
Laura🌻
July 12th, 2021 16:35
Freefallen
Jerry Reynolds said:
Beautiful, Neville.
Totally relatable. I can fall in love in a crosswalk or across an ocean and yes I do it \"quietly.\"
July 12th, 2021 09:06
Jerry Reynolds said:
Beautiful, Neville.
Totally relatable. I can fall in love in a crosswalk or across an ocean and yes I do it \"quietly.\"
July 12th, 2021 09:06
Freefallen
L. B. Mek said:
these words, I find - acutely depict
our fear-warped interpretation of innocent romance
when our blinkered perceptions, could only see
this one and only - dramatic, opportunity in life
to attain, that love we recognise
but can\'t quite - distinguish, its likeness
to our youthful naïvetés: overt fascination
in our shameless - lust-addled, puberty mind\'s
lost, in those blissful years of \'curvature idolisation...\'
lol
July 12th, 2021 06:13
L. B. Mek said:
these words, I find - acutely depict
our fear-warped interpretation of innocent romance
when our blinkered perceptions, could only see
this one and only - dramatic, opportunity in life
to attain, that love we recognise
but can\'t quite - distinguish, its likeness
to our youthful naïvetés: overt fascination
in our shameless - lust-addled, puberty mind\'s
lost, in those blissful years of \'curvature idolisation...\'
lol
July 12th, 2021 06:13
Briefly
L. B. Mek said:
\'of those illusive gifts, in our lives
you subtly pen, my wise friend;
where, we seldom take the \'brief\' moment
required, to realise: just how much of life
we miss-out - on, while waiting
for that unattainable, Hollywood
of miraged - something, anything
deemed important, by other\'s
simply, because they refuse to admit
the resplendent majesty of existence
we experience, in our everyday lives...!\'
another brilliant shorty, dear poet
showcasing the epitome of worded, Brevity!
July 12th, 2021 05:58
L. B. Mek said:
\'of those illusive gifts, in our lives
you subtly pen, my wise friend;
where, we seldom take the \'brief\' moment
required, to realise: just how much of life
we miss-out - on, while waiting
for that unattainable, Hollywood
of miraged - something, anything
deemed important, by other\'s
simply, because they refuse to admit
the resplendent majesty of existence
we experience, in our everyday lives...!\'
another brilliant shorty, dear poet
showcasing the epitome of worded, Brevity!
July 12th, 2021 05:58
Banished
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
I think so many
who are fighting with their perception of faith
whether it be: in love, in belief - or in life, itself
can so easily, relate to your words;
just another sublime gem you\'ve weaved
from your mind\'s endless pool
of empathetic ink, dear Poet
thank you
July 12th, 2021 05:46
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
I think so many
who are fighting with their perception of faith
whether it be: in love, in belief - or in life, itself
can so easily, relate to your words;
just another sublime gem you\'ve weaved
from your mind\'s endless pool
of empathetic ink, dear Poet
thank you
July 12th, 2021 05:46
Freefallen
Fay Slimm. said:
Heart-touching this little three liner --
-- and so very telling. Brilliant scribing again my friend............x
July 12th, 2021 02:59
Fay Slimm. said:
Heart-touching this little three liner --
-- and so very telling. Brilliant scribing again my friend............x
July 12th, 2021 02:59
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