Comments received on poems by Neville
Resting Light on a Wing and Prayer
Doggerel Dave said:
My very literal (no, not literary) mind was none the less provoked by this piece of yours, Nev.
Visions of a view or two in the Blue Mountains (behind Sydney)
November 26th, 2021 16:47
Doggerel Dave said:
My very literal (no, not literary) mind was none the less provoked by this piece of yours, Nev.
Visions of a view or two in the Blue Mountains (behind Sydney)
November 26th, 2021 16:47
Resting Light on a Wing and Prayer
Nicholas Browning said:
This is a marvelous piece of literature. I enjoyed the way you spaced out the rhymes and the playful, perhaps innovative, word choice. Well done sir.
November 26th, 2021 12:01
Nicholas Browning said:
This is a marvelous piece of literature. I enjoyed the way you spaced out the rhymes and the playful, perhaps innovative, word choice. Well done sir.
November 26th, 2021 12:01
Resting Light on a Wing and Prayer
dusk arising said:
That special place all spiritual folk have found deep within our soul. A place we retire to in times of need and our batteries are recharged.
November 26th, 2021 11:05
dusk arising said:
That special place all spiritual folk have found deep within our soul. A place we retire to in times of need and our batteries are recharged.
November 26th, 2021 11:05
Resting Light on a Wing and Prayer
Fay Slimm. said:
Such an irresistible invitation to climb for a while to places where angels have satisfied hunger in gentle loving arms - -- a gem of a verse Nev to keep and read again when needing a ledge................x
November 26th, 2021 03:51
Fay Slimm. said:
Such an irresistible invitation to climb for a while to places where angels have satisfied hunger in gentle loving arms - -- a gem of a verse Nev to keep and read again when needing a ledge................x
November 26th, 2021 03:51
Resting Light on a Wing and Prayer
Neville said:
...... then I\'m gonna double thank you .. hope you like the more recently tweaked version too ..... N
November 26th, 2021 03:48
Neville said:
...... then I\'m gonna double thank you .. hope you like the more recently tweaked version too ..... N
November 26th, 2021 03:48
Resting Light on a Wing and Prayer
spilleronsheet said:
Those ambitions setup high
Doesn’t allow me to rest for a while
A great one dear poet
A rest is surely needed
The slice of sky what a great expression
Aren’t we all birds of paradise
November 26th, 2021 03:28
spilleronsheet said:
Those ambitions setup high
Doesn’t allow me to rest for a while
A great one dear poet
A rest is surely needed
The slice of sky what a great expression
Aren’t we all birds of paradise
November 26th, 2021 03:28
Resting Light on a Wing and Prayer
orchidee said:
Good write Neville.
I had a prayer, but me wings fell off. Well, I was trying to be \'The Birdman\'! heehee.
November 26th, 2021 02:31
orchidee said:
Good write Neville.
I had a prayer, but me wings fell off. Well, I was trying to be \'The Birdman\'! heehee.
November 26th, 2021 02:31
An Unmistakable She
Doggerel Dave said:
Beautifully paced , Nev, no - really.
But did Granny know you cared, though?
November 25th, 2021 21:49
Doggerel Dave said:
Beautifully paced , Nev, no - really.
But did Granny know you cared, though?
November 25th, 2021 21:49
An Unmistakable She
spilleronsheet said:
How romantic
Those words of yours
The lady in context keeps high in curiosity
For the words in praise so charming to eyes
November 25th, 2021 14:57
spilleronsheet said:
How romantic
Those words of yours
The lady in context keeps high in curiosity
For the words in praise so charming to eyes
November 25th, 2021 14:57
An Unmistakable She
L. B. Mek said:
lol
the poor lady, in her
eyes
you\'re enamoured
by her, daintily quirks..
where as
your thought\'s
are mapping, murderous
intentions...
(ahh, those tinted eyes
of romance)
a fun read, thanks for sharing
dear Poet
November 25th, 2021 05:44
L. B. Mek said:
lol
the poor lady, in her
eyes
you\'re enamoured
by her, daintily quirks..
where as
your thought\'s
are mapping, murderous
intentions...
(ahh, those tinted eyes
of romance)
a fun read, thanks for sharing
dear Poet
November 25th, 2021 05:44
An Unmistakable She
Fay Slimm. said:
Methinks your She\'s are found wanting if R\'s rolling is all they can offer amigo - am offering big thank yous though Nev. for the smile this clever write leaves..............x
November 25th, 2021 05:17
Fay Slimm. said:
Methinks your She\'s are found wanting if R\'s rolling is all they can offer amigo - am offering big thank yous though Nev. for the smile this clever write leaves..............x
November 25th, 2021 05:17
An Unmistakable She
Garth Rakumakoe said:
A thing of splendor. Magnetic, even. Well written sir.
November 25th, 2021 05:13
Garth Rakumakoe said:
A thing of splendor. Magnetic, even. Well written sir.
November 25th, 2021 05:13
An Unmistakable She
dusk arising said:
There\'s many a rolling R\'s to be observed on the high street too. And other feminine whiles are seen in the coffee shop and around the ballroom.... (sighs)
Your poetry creates visions to stir the morning into life.
November 25th, 2021 03:49
dusk arising said:
There\'s many a rolling R\'s to be observed on the high street too. And other feminine whiles are seen in the coffee shop and around the ballroom.... (sighs)
Your poetry creates visions to stir the morning into life.
November 25th, 2021 03:49
An Unmistakable She
Caring dove said:
Nice writing Neville 🙂 some people just have such lovely personalities ,
I like how you have worded your poem
November 25th, 2021 02:36
Caring dove said:
Nice writing Neville 🙂 some people just have such lovely personalities ,
I like how you have worded your poem
November 25th, 2021 02:36
An Unmistakable She
orchidee said:
Good write N. Is that she who must be obeyed? That might be KP! lol.
November 25th, 2021 02:23
orchidee said:
Good write N. Is that she who must be obeyed? That might be KP! lol.
November 25th, 2021 02:23
An Unmistakable She
Goldfinch60 said:
Love is obviously in the air Neville.
Andy
November 25th, 2021 02:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Love is obviously in the air Neville.
Andy
November 25th, 2021 02:20
Ma Petit Serviette
Goldfinch60 said:
So you met her as well Neville, I shall say no more........
Andy
November 25th, 2021 02:09
Goldfinch60 said:
So you met her as well Neville, I shall say no more........
Andy
November 25th, 2021 02:09
Ma Petit Serviette
Garth Rakumakoe said:
He was a man with secrets of his own, parading as views hidden in plain sight. Everybody saw them, but only he knew about them.
November 24th, 2021 09:45
Garth Rakumakoe said:
He was a man with secrets of his own, parading as views hidden in plain sight. Everybody saw them, but only he knew about them.
November 24th, 2021 09:45
Ma Petit Serviette
orchidee said:
Best not tell me what she served without any argument. I will only swoon. Fido says it will be too much for me! lol.
November 24th, 2021 07:01
orchidee said:
Best not tell me what she served without any argument. I will only swoon. Fido says it will be too much for me! lol.
November 24th, 2021 07:01
Ma Petit Serviette
Fay Slimm. said:
Well shiver me timbers me hearty - no question about what she served without any argument - - like your verse that petit waitress deserves a gurt \"merci \" for stripping to tease then to please ..........x
November 24th, 2021 06:57
Fay Slimm. said:
Well shiver me timbers me hearty - no question about what she served without any argument - - like your verse that petit waitress deserves a gurt \"merci \" for stripping to tease then to please ..........x
November 24th, 2021 06:57
Ma Petit Serviette
Doggerel Dave said:
Monogrammed, laundered and ironed to perfection (No innuendo intended). Symmetrical perfection, Nev.
November 24th, 2021 06:41
Doggerel Dave said:
Monogrammed, laundered and ironed to perfection (No innuendo intended). Symmetrical perfection, Nev.
November 24th, 2021 06:41
Linger
Garth Rakumakoe said:
It is poignant in its own way, Neville, and as usual its emotion is quite well carved out. You have a brilliant pen and mind sir.
November 24th, 2021 06:00
Garth Rakumakoe said:
It is poignant in its own way, Neville, and as usual its emotion is quite well carved out. You have a brilliant pen and mind sir.
November 24th, 2021 06:00
Ma Petit Serviette
dusk arising said:
I like the way you tease my mind in your recent poetry..... did they, were they.... what was he being served other than breakfast....
November 24th, 2021 03:49
dusk arising said:
I like the way you tease my mind in your recent poetry..... did they, were they.... what was he being served other than breakfast....
November 24th, 2021 03:49
Linger
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Neville and so true in life.
Andy
November 24th, 2021 02:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Neville and so true in life.
Andy
November 24th, 2021 02:10
Linger
Doggerel Dave said:
First Nev, I have to state that I like the piece but am unable to put my rational spin on it. Further, I see some connection to the poem immediately preceding.......
November 23rd, 2021 19:51
Doggerel Dave said:
First Nev, I have to state that I like the piece but am unable to put my rational spin on it. Further, I see some connection to the poem immediately preceding.......
November 23rd, 2021 19:51
Linger
spilleronsheet said:
So emotional and so poignant
The words brought tears
And so many memories lingered beside
To those whom I lost
I wonder whether they are happy where they are
I wonder if they are watching me
Such a mourning
I remember my grand parents
With whom most of my childhood memories are embed in my mind
I am pretty sure they are watching me
Well penned dear Neville
The poetry felt so personal to me
Thank you for sharing
November 23rd, 2021 14:52
spilleronsheet said:
So emotional and so poignant
The words brought tears
And so many memories lingered beside
To those whom I lost
I wonder whether they are happy where they are
I wonder if they are watching me
Such a mourning
I remember my grand parents
With whom most of my childhood memories are embed in my mind
I am pretty sure they are watching me
Well penned dear Neville
The poetry felt so personal to me
Thank you for sharing
November 23rd, 2021 14:52
Linger
orchidee said:
Good write N. Yes, I meat a gal. She can\'t decide whether to stay or go. I wish KP would go! lol.
November 23rd, 2021 09:43
orchidee said:
Good write N. Yes, I meat a gal. She can\'t decide whether to stay or go. I wish KP would go! lol.
November 23rd, 2021 09:43
An All Too Certain Falsity
Garth Rakumakoe said:
How at times you say so much about a theme or subject without saying much is something I admire in your writing style Neville. You do minimalism so well and and so revealingly. This is another such piece. It\'s a rare quality, and a form of craft to marvel at. Thank you for gracing us yet again.
November 23rd, 2021 06:13
Garth Rakumakoe said:
How at times you say so much about a theme or subject without saying much is something I admire in your writing style Neville. You do minimalism so well and and so revealingly. This is another such piece. It\'s a rare quality, and a form of craft to marvel at. Thank you for gracing us yet again.
November 23rd, 2021 06:13
Linger
dusk arising said:
Beautifully told, of emotions contortions as we endure trying times in \'togetherness\'.
November 23rd, 2021 06:10
dusk arising said:
Beautifully told, of emotions contortions as we endure trying times in \'togetherness\'.
November 23rd, 2021 06:10
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