Comments received on poems by Neville



Cathedral Bells
Jerry Reynolds said:

After millions of years of flight. The earth provided a Buddhist with material enough for a very fine poem to write.

July 18th, 2021 07:22

Cathedral Bells
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Neville,

Such a timely writeā€¦
I hear the basilicaā€™s bells calling its parishioners.
Many will heed the callā€¦
while others will not!
Itā€™s their choice to make.
Let our free will guide us.

Have a wonderful Sunday.

LaurašŸŒ»

July 18th, 2021 06:27

Cathedral Bells
Poetic Dan said:

Trust human to make a mockery of being human, many truths die with us.

But we\'ll set ourselves free, see you sometime in those 7 seas my friend.

Much peace and respect

July 18th, 2021 04:29

Cathedral Bells
dusk arising said:

I\'m probably the wrong one to comment on this being so anti the established church with it\'s wealth, finery and hypocracy.
For me your words tell of how far removed from true spirituality those churches have become.

July 18th, 2021 04:24

Cathedral Bells
Doggerel Dave said:

Yep - Cathedrals, symbols of power and wealth.... me Atheist/Agnostic, love \'em though when they are not too crowded with other bloody tourists....just my take, Neville.

July 18th, 2021 02:55

Cathedral Bells
Saxon Crow said:

Bless you for such a fine write

July 18th, 2021 02:43

One More Four Letter Word
Goldfinch60 said:

Trust is so important in our lives and if that trust is broken it can lead to a very bitter ending.

Andy

July 18th, 2021 00:43

One More Four Letter Word
Doggerel Dave said:

With all the shifting sands of a relationship, the lie becomes a deep trench between you. A 180 degree turn your only recourse, wasn\'t it, Neville.

July 17th, 2021 21:55

One More Four Letter Word
myself and me said:

\"Four letter word\", that was very thrift of you.

July 17th, 2021 20:28

Just a Kiss Goodbye
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Neville,

A very sensitive and delicate subject matter youā€™ve succinctly and masterfully expressed with your poetic pen.

Powerful my dear poet.

Thank you for sharing.

LaurašŸŒ»


July 17th, 2021 18:55

One More Four Letter Word
dusk arising said:

Betrayal by lies is the pits. Marching orders follow.

July 17th, 2021 11:56

One More Four Letter Word
Fay Slimm. said:

Ugh - --betrayed by lies is one of the worst things to cope with --phrasing with \"the very last time\" looks like the start of an ending methinks for that four lettered name...........x

July 17th, 2021 11:17

Just a Kiss Goodbye
myself and me said:

They are not looking at the same sky, or are they?

July 16th, 2021 22:11

Just a Kiss Goodbye
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good write, Neville.
We seem to be better at hellos and good buys, than that space in-between.

July 16th, 2021 15:13

Just a Kiss Goodbye
Poetic Dan said:

Can you say that\'s a beautiful rhyme to many times, not if each one can bring a tear to your eye!

Always a pleasure to fly in your sky, keep floating my friend



July 16th, 2021 14:41

Just a Kiss Goodbye
Saxon Crow said:

Very nicely played Nev. Great poem

July 16th, 2021 14:20

Just a Kiss Goodbye
Michael Edwards said:

I\'m a lover of the short verse and this is yop notch.

July 16th, 2021 13:36

Just a Kiss Goodbye
SureshG said:

Brilliant!

July 16th, 2021 13:01

Just a Kiss Goodbye
Trenz Pruca said:

Wow!

July 16th, 2021 12:05

Just a Kiss Goodbye
L. B. Mek said:

this is deep, nudges forgotten bruises
on a lot of levels...
such a thought provoking read, my friend
(hope you have a clear sky - weekend) šŸ˜Ž

July 16th, 2021 06:07

Just a Kiss Goodbye
dusk arising said:

That kiss of goodbye is always lurking over us when emotionally coupled to another.
I\'m not letting near me. Living in isolation. BT,DT, got the T-shirt.

July 16th, 2021 05:12

Just a Kiss Goodbye
Fay Slimm. said:

Very emotive these few words can apply to so many losses that rip families apart. A skillful write again Nev...............x

July 16th, 2021 03:06

Just a Kiss Goodbye
Goldfinch60 said:

So few words, so full of emotion.

Andy

July 16th, 2021 02:29

Mark these Words
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Neville,

Youā€™ve aptly scribed
ā€œTwo sides to every argument and storyā€ā€¦
and then thereā€™s the truth.
It is worthwhile to have an honest conversation.

LaurašŸŒ»


July 16th, 2021 01:22

Mark these Words
Goldfinch60 said:

Very true, we can all help each other in this world.

Andy

July 16th, 2021 00:03

Mark these Words
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good write, Neville.
If she won\'t, her loss, but I will.
Love you dearly.

July 15th, 2021 12:36

Mark these Words
SureshG said:

Iā€™ve heard this argument before, and can tell with surety, that it is rightā€¦

July 15th, 2021 10:37

Mark these Words
L. B. Mek said:

ok so we need this printed, as car bumper stickers
as doorbell signage and everything else...
how many disagreements, fallouts
have we all experienced in life, caused by someone
misunderstanding us/our actions
then doubling-down on that and getting all defensive
and refusing to \'see reason\'...!
(this felt like a long awaited: exhale
of a read, somewhat cathartic I must admit) lol
thank you for wording it: so accessible, dear poet

July 15th, 2021 06:00

Mark these Words
Doggerel Dave said:

Oh who are you kidding, Neville? - everyone does - look above, and below and sideways if you must......
I certainly do and will - you will have to try harder to get rid of me šŸ˜Š

July 15th, 2021 05:19

Mark these Words
Accidental Poet said:

Mark these words as so true N. ; )

July 15th, 2021 05:12



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