Comments received on poems by Neville
A Diamond in The Making
Fay Slimm. said:
Good advice for a growing heart is this wise three liner. Diamonds are best when looking for value in making relationships..........x
October 22nd, 2021 03:34
Fay Slimm. said:
Good advice for a growing heart is this wise three liner. Diamonds are best when looking for value in making relationships..........x
October 22nd, 2021 03:34
A Diamond in The Making
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Beautifully stated my dear friend.
Laura🌻
October 22nd, 2021 03:12
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Beautifully stated my dear friend.
Laura🌻
October 22nd, 2021 03:12
A Diamond in The Making
dusk arising said:
Nice one Neville. I hate to think what my gallstones will turn out to be now that I\'ve invested in a ULEZ car.
October 22nd, 2021 03:10
dusk arising said:
Nice one Neville. I hate to think what my gallstones will turn out to be now that I\'ve invested in a ULEZ car.
October 22nd, 2021 03:10
Two Days into Autumn
dusk arising said:
I came home from a stay in hospital to a wonderful autumnal display on my tulip tree yesterday.
Kinda squared my wheel.... how the erstwhile taken for granted suddenly enlightens life.
October 21st, 2021 06:27
dusk arising said:
I came home from a stay in hospital to a wonderful autumnal display on my tulip tree yesterday.
Kinda squared my wheel.... how the erstwhile taken for granted suddenly enlightens life.
October 21st, 2021 06:27
Two Days into Autumn
L. B. Mek said:
lmao!
yeah, ain\'t nothing like life
to get in the way
of our appreciation for nature\'s majesty,
wonderfully fun! bottled
all that aggression and unleashed it
in your furious showcasing of obsidian-sharp, wit
(\'Autumn just has to be up there
among the top four
of my most favest of seasons\') 🤣
unleash the cynic within! be free
ah, man you\'re just so funny!
October 21st, 2021 05:42
L. B. Mek said:
lmao!
yeah, ain\'t nothing like life
to get in the way
of our appreciation for nature\'s majesty,
wonderfully fun! bottled
all that aggression and unleashed it
in your furious showcasing of obsidian-sharp, wit
(\'Autumn just has to be up there
among the top four
of my most favest of seasons\') 🤣
unleash the cynic within! be free
ah, man you\'re just so funny!
October 21st, 2021 05:42
Two Days into Autumn
Fay Slimm. said:
I know just what you mean -- autumn appears of a sudden and magics shades into her choosing.- - love that last line..............x
October 21st, 2021 04:00
Fay Slimm. said:
I know just what you mean -- autumn appears of a sudden and magics shades into her choosing.- - love that last line..............x
October 21st, 2021 04:00
Two Days into Autumn
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Me diary says we\'re one month and two days into Autumn!
October 21st, 2021 02:22
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Me diary says we\'re one month and two days into Autumn!
October 21st, 2021 02:22
Two Days into Autumn
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Neville, Autumn is with us.
Andy
October 21st, 2021 01:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Neville, Autumn is with us.
Andy
October 21st, 2021 01:20
Ithaca
Goldfinch60 said:
Did you meet Odysseus there this time Neville?
Andy
October 21st, 2021 00:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Did you meet Odysseus there this time Neville?
Andy
October 21st, 2021 00:46
Ithaca
Fay Slimm. said:
Sounds like a paradise waiting for exploration - -- must go there one day and look for his footsteps - or may be for yours mon ami......x
October 20th, 2021 09:22
Fay Slimm. said:
Sounds like a paradise waiting for exploration - -- must go there one day and look for his footsteps - or may be for yours mon ami......x
October 20th, 2021 09:22
Ithaca
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Should I meet here? Ohh, it\'s an island! lol.
Now me next poem \'E\'ermore my friends.......\' I dunno the next lines! heehee.
Do shut up now Orchi.
October 20th, 2021 04:27
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Should I meet here? Ohh, it\'s an island! lol.
Now me next poem \'E\'ermore my friends.......\' I dunno the next lines! heehee.
Do shut up now Orchi.
October 20th, 2021 04:27
Ithaca
Poetic Dan said:
Thanks for the morning Google as I was not sure and now I\'ve seen its all in your head, can I come on board!
Fantastic stuff my friend
October 20th, 2021 03:34
Poetic Dan said:
Thanks for the morning Google as I was not sure and now I\'ve seen its all in your head, can I come on board!
Fantastic stuff my friend
October 20th, 2021 03:34
Dirty Laugh
Goldfinch60 said:
That laugh has been in my world in the past Neville, but a very long time ago.
Andy
October 20th, 2021 00:31
Goldfinch60 said:
That laugh has been in my world in the past Neville, but a very long time ago.
Andy
October 20th, 2021 00:31
Dirty Laugh
MendedFences27 said:
The difference between a \"laugh\" and a \"dirty laugh\" is that the latter is accepted with pleasure. To find so willing a \"laugh\" charmer is most fortunate. To reveal it here in such a poetic form is very skillful and shows how tiny things can make a moment into a memory. - Phil A.
October 19th, 2021 18:18
MendedFences27 said:
The difference between a \"laugh\" and a \"dirty laugh\" is that the latter is accepted with pleasure. To find so willing a \"laugh\" charmer is most fortunate. To reveal it here in such a poetic form is very skillful and shows how tiny things can make a moment into a memory. - Phil A.
October 19th, 2021 18:18
Dirty Laugh
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville.
Was hers a \'tee hee\' or a \'hee hee\' or a \'lol\' laugh?
And why am I talking rubbish?! (lol).
October 19th, 2021 10:28
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville.
Was hers a \'tee hee\' or a \'hee hee\' or a \'lol\' laugh?
And why am I talking rubbish?! (lol).
October 19th, 2021 10:28
Dirty Laugh
L. B. Mek said:
I fell for a stunner in Amsterdam
she chased/followed me across the pond to dear old London,
but then she found the jazz bars and that alluringly gltizy, night scene
and I was left daydreaming
of could-have-been\'s
back, waiting
at the empty fishing hooks, of Amsterdam\'s: bricked-in
aesthetic rivers - of ill-fate...
(yeah, I think
we might have a common experience in our past, dear Poet
and I thank you for inspiring my little scribbled reply) lol
this plagued gift, titled Poetry
where we have to dredge-up, all our repressed - unseemly
in the name of Art...
October 19th, 2021 06:04
L. B. Mek said:
I fell for a stunner in Amsterdam
she chased/followed me across the pond to dear old London,
but then she found the jazz bars and that alluringly gltizy, night scene
and I was left daydreaming
of could-have-been\'s
back, waiting
at the empty fishing hooks, of Amsterdam\'s: bricked-in
aesthetic rivers - of ill-fate...
(yeah, I think
we might have a common experience in our past, dear Poet
and I thank you for inspiring my little scribbled reply) lol
this plagued gift, titled Poetry
where we have to dredge-up, all our repressed - unseemly
in the name of Art...
October 19th, 2021 06:04
Dirty Laugh
Fay Slimm. said:
Part of the magic in these tantalizing lines is your uncanny ability to bring to life your chosen characters. I almost heard that special laugh which reminded of someone summers back..........x
October 19th, 2021 02:50
Fay Slimm. said:
Part of the magic in these tantalizing lines is your uncanny ability to bring to life your chosen characters. I almost heard that special laugh which reminded of someone summers back..........x
October 19th, 2021 02:50
Breathe
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
by the end, I feel like reading your poem
is like a car ride, and all I need to do
to connect with all those nuances you subtly weave,
is just roll down the window and stick my arm out
dip and sway with the wind, like I too can exist
flowing within the syllables of your memories
and arrive, at the recollections of similar scenes - yearning\'s, I once took for granted in my own life...
(ah, I simply bow to your poetic supremacy!
write\'s like this, is why I consider myself a fan of your poetry)
thank you! my friend
October 18th, 2021 07:19
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
by the end, I feel like reading your poem
is like a car ride, and all I need to do
to connect with all those nuances you subtly weave,
is just roll down the window and stick my arm out
dip and sway with the wind, like I too can exist
flowing within the syllables of your memories
and arrive, at the recollections of similar scenes - yearning\'s, I once took for granted in my own life...
(ah, I simply bow to your poetic supremacy!
write\'s like this, is why I consider myself a fan of your poetry)
thank you! my friend
October 18th, 2021 07:19
Breathe
Fay Slimm. said:
Breathlessly tasting that oh so romantic scene so sensuously scribed mon ami - and am giving it best place in my list of faves.....x
October 18th, 2021 05:43
Fay Slimm. said:
Breathlessly tasting that oh so romantic scene so sensuously scribed mon ami - and am giving it best place in my list of faves.....x
October 18th, 2021 05:43
Breathe
Caring dove said:
I like this poem , especially the last few lines about the sparrows )
October 18th, 2021 03:45
Caring dove said:
I like this poem , especially the last few lines about the sparrows )
October 18th, 2021 03:45
A Formal Study of Her Knees
Fay Slimm. said:
Back for a second read and may I suggest next time a look at the elbows - they have more dimples than knees !! Ha - Love the picture of sun-cream to fore and aft of those amazing patellas..........x
October 16th, 2021 10:38
Fay Slimm. said:
Back for a second read and may I suggest next time a look at the elbows - they have more dimples than knees !! Ha - Love the picture of sun-cream to fore and aft of those amazing patellas..........x
October 16th, 2021 10:38
A Formal Study of Her Knees
Goldfinch60 said:
May those knees be forever there for you Neville.
Andy
October 16th, 2021 03:35
Goldfinch60 said:
May those knees be forever there for you Neville.
Andy
October 16th, 2021 03:35
A Formal Study of Her Knees
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - well I guess that never before have knees been so poetically reviewed and found beautiful. Big smiles at what love can inspire mon romantic ami.
October 16th, 2021 03:06
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - well I guess that never before have knees been so poetically reviewed and found beautiful. Big smiles at what love can inspire mon romantic ami.
October 16th, 2021 03:06
A Formal Study of Her Knees
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Did he swoon?! heehee.
October 16th, 2021 02:10
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Did he swoon?! heehee.
October 16th, 2021 02:10
Ah-Weh-Eyu - Pretty Flower
Fay Slimm. said:
The long-time abuse of such pretty flowers is etched with perfection in these lines of empathy my friend - historical treatment of nations like Seneca is outed with words that will move caring hearts - a very warm welcome-back Nev. ......x
October 15th, 2021 06:33
Fay Slimm. said:
The long-time abuse of such pretty flowers is etched with perfection in these lines of empathy my friend - historical treatment of nations like Seneca is outed with words that will move caring hearts - a very warm welcome-back Nev. ......x
October 15th, 2021 06:33
Ah-Weh-Eyu - Pretty Flower
L. B. Mek said:
ah, \'The\': Poet
is back..
all is well, then
all is well..
October 15th, 2021 05:22
L. B. Mek said:
ah, \'The\': Poet
is back..
all is well, then
all is well..
October 15th, 2021 05:22
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