Comments received on poems by Neville
Ithaca
Goldfinch60 said:
Did you meet Odysseus there this time Neville?
Andy
October 21st, 2021 00:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Did you meet Odysseus there this time Neville?
Andy
October 21st, 2021 00:46
Ithaca
Fay Slimm. said:
Sounds like a paradise waiting for exploration - -- must go there one day and look for his footsteps - or may be for yours mon ami......x
October 20th, 2021 09:22
Fay Slimm. said:
Sounds like a paradise waiting for exploration - -- must go there one day and look for his footsteps - or may be for yours mon ami......x
October 20th, 2021 09:22
Ithaca
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Should I meet here? Ohh, it\'s an island! lol.
Now me next poem \'E\'ermore my friends.......\' I dunno the next lines! heehee.
Do shut up now Orchi.
October 20th, 2021 04:27
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Should I meet here? Ohh, it\'s an island! lol.
Now me next poem \'E\'ermore my friends.......\' I dunno the next lines! heehee.
Do shut up now Orchi.
October 20th, 2021 04:27
Ithaca
Poetic Dan said:
Thanks for the morning Google as I was not sure and now I\'ve seen its all in your head, can I come on board!
Fantastic stuff my friend
October 20th, 2021 03:34
Poetic Dan said:
Thanks for the morning Google as I was not sure and now I\'ve seen its all in your head, can I come on board!
Fantastic stuff my friend
October 20th, 2021 03:34
Dirty Laugh
Goldfinch60 said:
That laugh has been in my world in the past Neville, but a very long time ago.
Andy
October 20th, 2021 00:31
Goldfinch60 said:
That laugh has been in my world in the past Neville, but a very long time ago.
Andy
October 20th, 2021 00:31
Dirty Laugh
MendedFences27 said:
The difference between a \"laugh\" and a \"dirty laugh\" is that the latter is accepted with pleasure. To find so willing a \"laugh\" charmer is most fortunate. To reveal it here in such a poetic form is very skillful and shows how tiny things can make a moment into a memory. - Phil A.
October 19th, 2021 18:18
MendedFences27 said:
The difference between a \"laugh\" and a \"dirty laugh\" is that the latter is accepted with pleasure. To find so willing a \"laugh\" charmer is most fortunate. To reveal it here in such a poetic form is very skillful and shows how tiny things can make a moment into a memory. - Phil A.
October 19th, 2021 18:18
Dirty Laugh
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville.
Was hers a \'tee hee\' or a \'hee hee\' or a \'lol\' laugh?
And why am I talking rubbish?! (lol).
October 19th, 2021 10:28
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville.
Was hers a \'tee hee\' or a \'hee hee\' or a \'lol\' laugh?
And why am I talking rubbish?! (lol).
October 19th, 2021 10:28
Dirty Laugh
L. B. Mek said:
I fell for a stunner in Amsterdam
she chased/followed me across the pond to dear old London,
but then she found the jazz bars and that alluringly gltizy, night scene
and I was left daydreaming
of could-have-been\'s
back, waiting
at the empty fishing hooks, of Amsterdam\'s: bricked-in
aesthetic rivers - of ill-fate...
(yeah, I think
we might have a common experience in our past, dear Poet
and I thank you for inspiring my little scribbled reply) lol
this plagued gift, titled Poetry
where we have to dredge-up, all our repressed - unseemly
in the name of Art...
October 19th, 2021 06:04
L. B. Mek said:
I fell for a stunner in Amsterdam
she chased/followed me across the pond to dear old London,
but then she found the jazz bars and that alluringly gltizy, night scene
and I was left daydreaming
of could-have-been\'s
back, waiting
at the empty fishing hooks, of Amsterdam\'s: bricked-in
aesthetic rivers - of ill-fate...
(yeah, I think
we might have a common experience in our past, dear Poet
and I thank you for inspiring my little scribbled reply) lol
this plagued gift, titled Poetry
where we have to dredge-up, all our repressed - unseemly
in the name of Art...
October 19th, 2021 06:04
Dirty Laugh
Fay Slimm. said:
Part of the magic in these tantalizing lines is your uncanny ability to bring to life your chosen characters. I almost heard that special laugh which reminded of someone summers back..........x
October 19th, 2021 02:50
Fay Slimm. said:
Part of the magic in these tantalizing lines is your uncanny ability to bring to life your chosen characters. I almost heard that special laugh which reminded of someone summers back..........x
October 19th, 2021 02:50
Breathe
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
by the end, I feel like reading your poem
is like a car ride, and all I need to do
to connect with all those nuances you subtly weave,
is just roll down the window and stick my arm out
dip and sway with the wind, like I too can exist
flowing within the syllables of your memories
and arrive, at the recollections of similar scenes - yearning\'s, I once took for granted in my own life...
(ah, I simply bow to your poetic supremacy!
write\'s like this, is why I consider myself a fan of your poetry)
thank you! my friend
October 18th, 2021 07:19
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
by the end, I feel like reading your poem
is like a car ride, and all I need to do
to connect with all those nuances you subtly weave,
is just roll down the window and stick my arm out
dip and sway with the wind, like I too can exist
flowing within the syllables of your memories
and arrive, at the recollections of similar scenes - yearning\'s, I once took for granted in my own life...
(ah, I simply bow to your poetic supremacy!
write\'s like this, is why I consider myself a fan of your poetry)
thank you! my friend
October 18th, 2021 07:19
Breathe
Fay Slimm. said:
Breathlessly tasting that oh so romantic scene so sensuously scribed mon ami - and am giving it best place in my list of faves.....x
October 18th, 2021 05:43
Fay Slimm. said:
Breathlessly tasting that oh so romantic scene so sensuously scribed mon ami - and am giving it best place in my list of faves.....x
October 18th, 2021 05:43
Breathe
Caring dove said:
I like this poem , especially the last few lines about the sparrows )
October 18th, 2021 03:45
Caring dove said:
I like this poem , especially the last few lines about the sparrows )
October 18th, 2021 03:45
A Formal Study of Her Knees
Fay Slimm. said:
Back for a second read and may I suggest next time a look at the elbows - they have more dimples than knees !! Ha - Love the picture of sun-cream to fore and aft of those amazing patellas..........x
October 16th, 2021 10:38
Fay Slimm. said:
Back for a second read and may I suggest next time a look at the elbows - they have more dimples than knees !! Ha - Love the picture of sun-cream to fore and aft of those amazing patellas..........x
October 16th, 2021 10:38
A Formal Study of Her Knees
Goldfinch60 said:
May those knees be forever there for you Neville.
Andy
October 16th, 2021 03:35
Goldfinch60 said:
May those knees be forever there for you Neville.
Andy
October 16th, 2021 03:35
A Formal Study of Her Knees
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - well I guess that never before have knees been so poetically reviewed and found beautiful. Big smiles at what love can inspire mon romantic ami.
October 16th, 2021 03:06
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - well I guess that never before have knees been so poetically reviewed and found beautiful. Big smiles at what love can inspire mon romantic ami.
October 16th, 2021 03:06
A Formal Study of Her Knees
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Did he swoon?! heehee.
October 16th, 2021 02:10
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Did he swoon?! heehee.
October 16th, 2021 02:10
Ah-Weh-Eyu - Pretty Flower
Fay Slimm. said:
The long-time abuse of such pretty flowers is etched with perfection in these lines of empathy my friend - historical treatment of nations like Seneca is outed with words that will move caring hearts - a very warm welcome-back Nev. ......x
October 15th, 2021 06:33
Fay Slimm. said:
The long-time abuse of such pretty flowers is etched with perfection in these lines of empathy my friend - historical treatment of nations like Seneca is outed with words that will move caring hearts - a very warm welcome-back Nev. ......x
October 15th, 2021 06:33
Ah-Weh-Eyu - Pretty Flower
L. B. Mek said:
ah, \'The\': Poet
is back..
all is well, then
all is well..
October 15th, 2021 05:22
L. B. Mek said:
ah, \'The\': Poet
is back..
all is well, then
all is well..
October 15th, 2021 05:22
Ah-Weh-Eyu - Pretty Flower
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
Now my poem about E\'ermore!
(Do shut up now Orchi. lol).
October 15th, 2021 04:29
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
Now my poem about E\'ermore!
(Do shut up now Orchi. lol).
October 15th, 2021 04:29
Ah-Weh-Eyu - Pretty Flower
Caring dove said:
Great poem , Neville )
I like your words
October 15th, 2021 03:58
Caring dove said:
Great poem , Neville )
I like your words
October 15th, 2021 03:58
The Tease
Dove said:
I’ll never look at cheesecloth the same! As always a great story
September 26th, 2021 10:30
Dove said:
I’ll never look at cheesecloth the same! As always a great story
September 26th, 2021 10:30
The Tease
Goldfinch60 said:
This can be so true in many circumstances Neville and can be hard to avoid.
Andy
September 26th, 2021 00:43
Goldfinch60 said:
This can be so true in many circumstances Neville and can be hard to avoid.
Andy
September 26th, 2021 00:43
The Tease
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Teasing can be a very dangerous undertaking that can lead to an undertaker. My great grandmother recounted a story to my grandmother about a neighbor of hers that was drowned by her teaser.
Her motto:
(in Italian, of course)
—proceed with caution
(procedi con cautela)!
Thank you for sharing this noteworthy write.
Laura 🌻
September 25th, 2021 18:26
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Teasing can be a very dangerous undertaking that can lead to an undertaker. My great grandmother recounted a story to my grandmother about a neighbor of hers that was drowned by her teaser.
Her motto:
(in Italian, of course)
—proceed with caution
(procedi con cautela)!
Thank you for sharing this noteworthy write.
Laura 🌻
September 25th, 2021 18:26
The Tease
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Neville.
Met this goddess in many disguises. Am a sucker for the tease.
September 25th, 2021 09:27
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Neville.
Met this goddess in many disguises. Am a sucker for the tease.
September 25th, 2021 09:27
The Tease
orchidee said:
Should I meet her? Will she be too much for me?! lol.
September 25th, 2021 06:56
orchidee said:
Should I meet her? Will she be too much for me?! lol.
September 25th, 2021 06:56
The Tease
Fay Slimm. said:
What a linguistic and valid complaint about one so enticingly false to the name of vincibility yet so deserving of being called tease. - - - great stuff agen Nev.................x
September 25th, 2021 05:04
Fay Slimm. said:
What a linguistic and valid complaint about one so enticingly false to the name of vincibility yet so deserving of being called tease. - - - great stuff agen Nev.................x
September 25th, 2021 05:04
Nothing to Lose
Goldfinch60 said:
That feeling is so wonderful in knowing that all was fine in their world.
Andy
September 25th, 2021 00:12
Goldfinch60 said:
That feeling is so wonderful in knowing that all was fine in their world.
Andy
September 25th, 2021 00:12
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