Comments received on poems by Neville
Wasps
Goldfinch60 said:
Nearly all my long life I have never been stung bu a bee or a wasp but about four years ago I was getting the rotary clothesline in and there was a wasp sitting on top and it stung me as I reached up to get the line down. They hide from you and then get you.!
Andy
October 14th, 2020 04:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Nearly all my long life I have never been stung bu a bee or a wasp but about four years ago I was getting the rotary clothesline in and there was a wasp sitting on top and it stung me as I reached up to get the line down. They hide from you and then get you.!
Andy
October 14th, 2020 04:21
Wasps
Fay Slimm. said:
Loving this short and pithy opinion of stingers that prey on sweet flesh at this time of year - remembering earlier encounters I uttered loud Ouches when reading these words Nev...............x
October 14th, 2020 03:04
Fay Slimm. said:
Loving this short and pithy opinion of stingers that prey on sweet flesh at this time of year - remembering earlier encounters I uttered loud Ouches when reading these words Nev...............x
October 14th, 2020 03:04
Bring us More Liquor
orchidee said:
Well, there\'s the line, not that I subscribe to it....... He got rid of some human rubbish; it saved the tax-payer the cost of keeping them; why, we could save thousands today if it was brought back\'. But how much does rope cost? Do shut up Orchi. lol.
Erm, a materialsitic view there.
October 13th, 2020 07:28
orchidee said:
Well, there\'s the line, not that I subscribe to it....... He got rid of some human rubbish; it saved the tax-payer the cost of keeping them; why, we could save thousands today if it was brought back\'. But how much does rope cost? Do shut up Orchi. lol.
Erm, a materialsitic view there.
October 13th, 2020 07:28
Bring us More Liquor
Lorna said:
Suggestion: \"Pierrepoint’s Slippered Footstep\" - must have been the worst sound they could ever have heard!
October 13th, 2020 06:29
Lorna said:
Suggestion: \"Pierrepoint’s Slippered Footstep\" - must have been the worst sound they could ever have heard!
October 13th, 2020 06:29
Bring us More Liquor
dusk arising said:
I\'m gonna be a train driver when I grow up, what you gonna be Albert?
What\'s ya favourite card game Albert - SNAP?
I just read Goldfinch\'s comment about Pierrepoint not taking his work home with him and giggled, well neither does a sewerman.
A delightfully dark piece today yet full of respect for the man who\'s job none would vie for.
October 13th, 2020 05:58
dusk arising said:
I\'m gonna be a train driver when I grow up, what you gonna be Albert?
What\'s ya favourite card game Albert - SNAP?
I just read Goldfinch\'s comment about Pierrepoint not taking his work home with him and giggled, well neither does a sewerman.
A delightfully dark piece today yet full of respect for the man who\'s job none would vie for.
October 13th, 2020 05:58
Bring us More Liquor
Goldfinch60 said:
It is amazing that Pierrepoint could do his job, he obviously had the ability to put his work in a separate cupboard in his mind and only open it when he had to do his work.
Wonderful words Neville, and I am so glad the ‘long drop’ is no longer with us.
Andy
October 13th, 2020 04:34
Goldfinch60 said:
It is amazing that Pierrepoint could do his job, he obviously had the ability to put his work in a separate cupboard in his mind and only open it when he had to do his work.
Wonderful words Neville, and I am so glad the ‘long drop’ is no longer with us.
Andy
October 13th, 2020 04:34
Bring us More Liquor
Fay Slimm. said:
Have learnt a new name with a most gruesome calling from this sombre but well captured versing today Nev - - the title seems apt - but oh that number of long drops Albert had seen makes me shudder for his hapless family who could never have thought his official position was fun ......................x
October 13th, 2020 04:20
Fay Slimm. said:
Have learnt a new name with a most gruesome calling from this sombre but well captured versing today Nev - - the title seems apt - but oh that number of long drops Albert had seen makes me shudder for his hapless family who could never have thought his official position was fun ......................x
October 13th, 2020 04:20
Where do Dreams Go
Goldfinch60 said:
Those dreams will always be there and even if they are buried in the snow, snow melts and those dreams will rise once more.
Andy
October 13th, 2020 00:32
Goldfinch60 said:
Those dreams will always be there and even if they are buried in the snow, snow melts and those dreams will rise once more.
Andy
October 13th, 2020 00:32
Where do Dreams Go
Poetic Dan said:
Fantastic journey
Much appreciated my friend!
October 12th, 2020 14:03
Poetic Dan said:
Fantastic journey
Much appreciated my friend!
October 12th, 2020 14:03
Where do Dreams Go
Lorna said:
Everything seems to real and here and suddenly it\'s gone...... I loved
Somewhere lost
without wanting, or wishing
to be found, until they are dust
October 12th, 2020 05:48
Lorna said:
Everything seems to real and here and suddenly it\'s gone...... I loved
Somewhere lost
without wanting, or wishing
to be found, until they are dust
October 12th, 2020 05:48
Yellow Umbrella\'s
L. B. Mek said:
lol, what delightfully \'free\' partner(s) you have encountered, how lucky a gift - that imagination you utilise, expertly: to spice those delight\'s you squeeze out of life,
a daringly witty write
October 12th, 2020 05:45
L. B. Mek said:
lol, what delightfully \'free\' partner(s) you have encountered, how lucky a gift - that imagination you utilise, expertly: to spice those delight\'s you squeeze out of life,
a daringly witty write
October 12th, 2020 05:45
Where do Dreams Go
orchidee said:
Yes, I should get out more, I really should, cos it\'s all dreams to me too! Leather? Swoon! lol.
October 12th, 2020 05:06
orchidee said:
Yes, I should get out more, I really should, cos it\'s all dreams to me too! Leather? Swoon! lol.
October 12th, 2020 05:06
Where do Dreams Go
L. B. Mek said:
or maybe, just maybe if hindsight were to arrive early - for once, he would realise: those dreams are being realised, in each breath of flicked feather and her sultry shudder of pleasure, at his every whisper of surrender...
sorry my friend your words jolted my keyboard into life and I found myself scribbling away - yet again, I have lost count at the amount of times your writes have inspired instantaneous flow of unfiltered rhymes from me... what a gift you wield!
brilliant pacing in your wonderfully immersive lines this write
October 12th, 2020 04:10
L. B. Mek said:
or maybe, just maybe if hindsight were to arrive early - for once, he would realise: those dreams are being realised, in each breath of flicked feather and her sultry shudder of pleasure, at his every whisper of surrender...
sorry my friend your words jolted my keyboard into life and I found myself scribbling away - yet again, I have lost count at the amount of times your writes have inspired instantaneous flow of unfiltered rhymes from me... what a gift you wield!
brilliant pacing in your wonderfully immersive lines this write
October 12th, 2020 04:10
Where do Dreams Go
Fay Slimm. said:
Sensually potent this verse on what memory dreams before it melts into ether - - you nailed the longing real well here Nev..................x
October 12th, 2020 04:01
Fay Slimm. said:
Sensually potent this verse on what memory dreams before it melts into ether - - you nailed the longing real well here Nev..................x
October 12th, 2020 04:01
Yellow Umbrella\'s
Dove said:
Let’s hope the winds of lust
doesn’t blow
that umbrella away
But do enjoy if you must
The color of foreplay
Hello yellow
October 11th, 2020 13:26
Dove said:
Let’s hope the winds of lust
doesn’t blow
that umbrella away
But do enjoy if you must
The color of foreplay
Hello yellow
October 11th, 2020 13:26
Yellow Umbrella\'s
Fay Slimm. said:
Methinks that suggestion of love in a dim hallway takes precedence over any umbrella wherever it\'s placed - - - thanks for the smile your witty tale gave me today..................x
October 11th, 2020 02:48
Fay Slimm. said:
Methinks that suggestion of love in a dim hallway takes precedence over any umbrella wherever it\'s placed - - - thanks for the smile your witty tale gave me today..................x
October 11th, 2020 02:48
Yellow Umbrella\'s
orchidee said:
Hope those umbrellas don\'t talk, yellow or whatever colour, placed in the hallway, while......!
October 11th, 2020 02:08
orchidee said:
Hope those umbrellas don\'t talk, yellow or whatever colour, placed in the hallway, while......!
October 11th, 2020 02:08
Yellow Umbrella\'s
Goldfinch60 said:
I have never encountered a yellow umbrella but in one session of my working days I had a black umbrella as defender on my walk to work (Blimey! that was a long time ago!)
Andy
October 11th, 2020 01:29
Goldfinch60 said:
I have never encountered a yellow umbrella but in one session of my working days I had a black umbrella as defender on my walk to work (Blimey! that was a long time ago!)
Andy
October 11th, 2020 01:29
Spit it Out
Goldfinch60 said:
Forgiveness is the way to be in this life but many just do not see it that way.
Andy
October 11th, 2020 00:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Forgiveness is the way to be in this life but many just do not see it that way.
Andy
October 11th, 2020 00:24
Mile High
Dove said:
I’d like to join the mile high club,
But I’ll settle for the bunk bed on top!
May your wings fly high
But never reach the sun
Or you’ll have to sigh
When you fall down on your bum
October 10th, 2020 17:50
Dove said:
I’d like to join the mile high club,
But I’ll settle for the bunk bed on top!
May your wings fly high
But never reach the sun
Or you’ll have to sigh
When you fall down on your bum
October 10th, 2020 17:50
Spit it Out
Dove said:
Oh such truths one speaks!
Forgiveness is an assets
It’s the forgetting, not so easy
October 10th, 2020 17:31
Dove said:
Oh such truths one speaks!
Forgiveness is an assets
It’s the forgetting, not so easy
October 10th, 2020 17:31
Spit it Out
orchidee said:
Oohh, who can forgive me for singing? Is it possible?! (lol).
October 10th, 2020 09:41
orchidee said:
Oohh, who can forgive me for singing? Is it possible?! (lol).
October 10th, 2020 09:41
Spit it Out
dusk arising said:
Some become so enraged by the hurt they experience that they are unable to forgive.... i had the experience of being with one for a while.
Forgiveness is the lubricant of life really.
A really stirring, deep piece from you today.
October 10th, 2020 08:55
dusk arising said:
Some become so enraged by the hurt they experience that they are unable to forgive.... i had the experience of being with one for a while.
Forgiveness is the lubricant of life really.
A really stirring, deep piece from you today.
October 10th, 2020 08:55
Spit it Out
Fay Slimm. said:
With an appeal like this how could anyone refuse to let sleeping dogs lie and start over again -- your words end in the state folk need to cultivate more Nev - -- that of forgiveness. -- oh and I would insert the last word as BABE.......... dont ask me why but I think it may fit the previous rhyming ....................x
October 10th, 2020 07:42
Fay Slimm. said:
With an appeal like this how could anyone refuse to let sleeping dogs lie and start over again -- your words end in the state folk need to cultivate more Nev - -- that of forgiveness. -- oh and I would insert the last word as BABE.......... dont ask me why but I think it may fit the previous rhyming ....................x
October 10th, 2020 07:42
Mile High
dusk arising said:
On the occasions when i flew to close to the sun which lit a lovers bed I too felt the melt of wax and a tumble from high.
She was disallusioned when i recounted this for she was of the opinion the sun shone from her arse.
October 9th, 2020 11:25
dusk arising said:
On the occasions when i flew to close to the sun which lit a lovers bed I too felt the melt of wax and a tumble from high.
She was disallusioned when i recounted this for she was of the opinion the sun shone from her arse.
October 9th, 2020 11:25
Mile High
orchidee said:
Yes, I got the wrong plane once. I got on the Mile High trip - and swooned! lol. I only wanted to go to the Co-op, so why did I go by plane?
October 9th, 2020 09:42
orchidee said:
Yes, I got the wrong plane once. I got on the Mile High trip - and swooned! lol. I only wanted to go to the Co-op, so why did I go by plane?
October 9th, 2020 09:42
Mile High
Fay Slimm. said:
Icarus would surely agree that the flight with a lover feels mile high wherever it is. - - bootiful thought though above their bed.............. x.
October 9th, 2020 09:24
Fay Slimm. said:
Icarus would surely agree that the flight with a lover feels mile high wherever it is. - - bootiful thought though above their bed.............. x.
October 9th, 2020 09:24
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