Comments received on poems by Neville
Because it Got in the Way
Accidental Poet said:
Interesting play with words N. When I shoot, I shoot with a Canon. ; )
July 21st, 2021 18:22
Accidental Poet said:
Interesting play with words N. When I shoot, I shoot with a Canon. ; )
July 21st, 2021 18:22
Opus
Lauraš» said:
Neville,
A gripping read to say the leastā¦
especially with the final two words
āPlaza Trastevereā!
Your written words flooded my being with enchanted memories of the most enjoyable times I experienced in Trastevere a few decades agoā¦memories as unforgettable as you written piece .
Lauraš»
July 21st, 2021 15:17
Lauraš» said:
Neville,
A gripping read to say the leastā¦
especially with the final two words
āPlaza Trastevereā!
Your written words flooded my being with enchanted memories of the most enjoyable times I experienced in Trastevere a few decades agoā¦memories as unforgettable as you written piece .
Lauraš»
July 21st, 2021 15:17
Opus
Poetic Dan said:
Wow what a read, left me with not much to say.
That is a pleasant feeling I must say, so just thanks!
July 21st, 2021 10:47
Poetic Dan said:
Wow what a read, left me with not much to say.
That is a pleasant feeling I must say, so just thanks!
July 21st, 2021 10:47
Opus
Doggerel Dave said:
Neville ā thatās quite freaky... no, not freaky..disorienting ā drew me in and then spat me out again. Painter..lover/modelā¦perfect open woundā¦model gone, painting only left to gaze upon..
Wotāll you give me? Iāll settle for 5 out of 10ā¦.
July 21st, 2021 06:40
Doggerel Dave said:
Neville ā thatās quite freaky... no, not freaky..disorienting ā drew me in and then spat me out again. Painter..lover/modelā¦perfect open woundā¦model gone, painting only left to gaze upon..
Wotāll you give me? Iāll settle for 5 out of 10ā¦.
July 21st, 2021 06:40
Opus
Fay Slimm. said:
What a memory to store in a corner of experience and told with such painted tenderness - - - took me to the time I stood before genius and gazed on such portraits many years back..... x
July 21st, 2021 03:40
Fay Slimm. said:
What a memory to store in a corner of experience and told with such painted tenderness - - - took me to the time I stood before genius and gazed on such portraits many years back..... x
July 21st, 2021 03:40
Opus
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville.
Could be about me and KP, but I ain\'t done much gazing on her. She\'s 95% botox by now anyway! She will melt in the heat, be all of a heap, like an old sack. No change there then though. lol.
July 21st, 2021 02:18
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville.
Could be about me and KP, but I ain\'t done much gazing on her. She\'s 95% botox by now anyway! She will melt in the heat, be all of a heap, like an old sack. No change there then though. lol.
July 21st, 2021 02:18
Because it Got in the Way
Goldfinch60 said:
Those who shoot life for pleasure are totally despicable Neville.
Andy
July 21st, 2021 00:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Those who shoot life for pleasure are totally despicable Neville.
Andy
July 21st, 2021 00:26
Because it Got in the Way
myself and me said:
A funny reason for a silly shoot. If it move too fast, he will miss it.
July 20th, 2021 20:57
myself and me said:
A funny reason for a silly shoot. If it move too fast, he will miss it.
July 20th, 2021 20:57
Because it Got in the Way
SureshG said:
I looked straight at my nemesis and wondered - why!
Your words, exceptional
July 20th, 2021 13:20
SureshG said:
I looked straight at my nemesis and wondered - why!
Your words, exceptional
July 20th, 2021 13:20
Because it Got in the Way
jarcher54 said:
The riddle being one of the oldest genres of literature (poetry?), gratitude for continuing the spirit of that tradition.
July 20th, 2021 11:39
jarcher54 said:
The riddle being one of the oldest genres of literature (poetry?), gratitude for continuing the spirit of that tradition.
July 20th, 2021 11:39
Because it Got in the Way
jarcher54 said:
Yikes... I once spoke to a sniper who said they were sort of taught to do that, assuming they spotted a \"legitimate\" target. If you miss with one shot, the target may hope you stop trying!
July 20th, 2021 11:38
jarcher54 said:
Yikes... I once spoke to a sniper who said they were sort of taught to do that, assuming they spotted a \"legitimate\" target. If you miss with one shot, the target may hope you stop trying!
July 20th, 2021 11:38
Because it Got in the Way
Poetic Dan said:
What do you mean it won\'t move, then take two! Ha ha, if everything is nothing then play on. It takes time to know it comes around.
Got do what ya gotta do...interesting like you say, how different we all see
Have a wonderful day
July 20th, 2021 09:00
Poetic Dan said:
What do you mean it won\'t move, then take two! Ha ha, if everything is nothing then play on. It takes time to know it comes around.
Got do what ya gotta do...interesting like you say, how different we all see
Have a wonderful day
July 20th, 2021 09:00
Because it Got in the Way
Fay Slimm. said:
Vital points made in this three liner my friend. The fate of most \"game\" in a nutshell - shame on those who make a sport of killing................x
July 20th, 2021 07:04
Fay Slimm. said:
Vital points made in this three liner my friend. The fate of most \"game\" in a nutshell - shame on those who make a sport of killing................x
July 20th, 2021 07:04
What Matters Most
L. B. Mek said:
sometimes, we all need a friend
to whisper this hard truth\'s to us
for, if let to our own devices
we would neve claim, or accept
such a vulnerable state, instead
we would just withdraw, into ourselves
even more and refute, that needling thought
asking, maybe:
\'What really matters most
is surely
That you know
*they\'re somewhere near
And the very
simple fact, despite yourself
it seems,
You really do, still care ā¦ā¦ x\'
(just another subtle gem of a write, my friend
again, wonderfully paced and effortlessly worded
so instinctively relatable)
July 20th, 2021 03:32
L. B. Mek said:
sometimes, we all need a friend
to whisper this hard truth\'s to us
for, if let to our own devices
we would neve claim, or accept
such a vulnerable state, instead
we would just withdraw, into ourselves
even more and refute, that needling thought
asking, maybe:
\'What really matters most
is surely
That you know
*they\'re somewhere near
And the very
simple fact, despite yourself
it seems,
You really do, still care ā¦ā¦ x\'
(just another subtle gem of a write, my friend
again, wonderfully paced and effortlessly worded
so instinctively relatable)
July 20th, 2021 03:32
What Matters Most
Lauraš» said:
Neville,
Yes I do know
āheās somewhere nearāā¦
and ādespiteā myself,
I āreally do, still careā¦ā
No matter how much time has passed and whatever has happened in the past, a special love will always be there never to be forgotten.
Thank you for sharing your penned thoughts.
Lauraš»
July 20th, 2021 02:32
Lauraš» said:
Neville,
Yes I do know
āheās somewhere nearāā¦
and ādespiteā myself,
I āreally do, still careā¦ā
No matter how much time has passed and whatever has happened in the past, a special love will always be there never to be forgotten.
Thank you for sharing your penned thoughts.
Lauraš»
July 20th, 2021 02:32
What Matters Most
orchidee said:
Coooeee, good write N.
This about me and , and a gal? She knows I\'m somewhere near, an she cares about me.
I been meeting those gals while I was cut orf here. Sshh, don\'t tell! lol.
July 20th, 2021 02:04
orchidee said:
Coooeee, good write N.
This about me and , and a gal? She knows I\'m somewhere near, an she cares about me.
I been meeting those gals while I was cut orf here. Sshh, don\'t tell! lol.
July 20th, 2021 02:04
What Matters Most
Goldfinch60 said:
That caring will always be there Neville.
Andy
July 20th, 2021 01:08
Goldfinch60 said:
That caring will always be there Neville.
Andy
July 20th, 2021 01:08
What Matters Most
Doggerel Dave said:
Relationship sans communication -
Crappy causation
Aināt no privation ā
Onward to salvationā¦
July 19th, 2021 19:56
Doggerel Dave said:
Relationship sans communication -
Crappy causation
Aināt no privation ā
Onward to salvationā¦
July 19th, 2021 19:56
What Matters Most
Accidental Poet said:
Relationships are rarely so perfect that doubt doesn\'t come into play at some point especially for the young at heart. But like Fay mentioned, a change of heart is always possible. Awesome write N. ; )
July 19th, 2021 18:48
Accidental Poet said:
Relationships are rarely so perfect that doubt doesn\'t come into play at some point especially for the young at heart. But like Fay mentioned, a change of heart is always possible. Awesome write N. ; )
July 19th, 2021 18:48
What Matters Most
Fay Slimm. said:
Filled with care this write sounds to my mind like good parental advice to a youngster who chooses to end a relationship but then despite all odds is apt to change mind mid-way between today and tomorrow - - - -- scribed with your usual skilled attention to word and line-length it becomes so beguiling that I always want to know a little bit extra.............x
July 19th, 2021 13:50
Fay Slimm. said:
Filled with care this write sounds to my mind like good parental advice to a youngster who chooses to end a relationship but then despite all odds is apt to change mind mid-way between today and tomorrow - - - -- scribed with your usual skilled attention to word and line-length it becomes so beguiling that I always want to know a little bit extra.............x
July 19th, 2021 13:50
Cathedral Bells
L. B. Mek said:
\'a token Gregorian chant
was plainly heard
While a single cello strained
to the fragile rhythm
and hypocrisy\'..
your words, today
remind me of a poem, I quote a lot
for its bravely universal and timelessly unerring: accuracy
a reflection of your words - effect, on me:
\'those who preach god, need god
those who preach peace do not have peace
those who preach peace do not have love
beware the preachers
beware the knowers\'
from \'the genius of the crowd\' by charles bukowski\'
( https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-4332 )
July 19th, 2021 07:23
L. B. Mek said:
\'a token Gregorian chant
was plainly heard
While a single cello strained
to the fragile rhythm
and hypocrisy\'..
your words, today
remind me of a poem, I quote a lot
for its bravely universal and timelessly unerring: accuracy
a reflection of your words - effect, on me:
\'those who preach god, need god
those who preach peace do not have peace
those who preach peace do not have love
beware the preachers
beware the knowers\'
from \'the genius of the crowd\' by charles bukowski\'
( https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-4332 )
July 19th, 2021 07:23
Cathedral Bells
Goldfinch60 said:
That hypocrisy can be seen in all organised religion Neville.
Andy
July 19th, 2021 01:04
Goldfinch60 said:
That hypocrisy can be seen in all organised religion Neville.
Andy
July 19th, 2021 01:04
Cathedral Bells
MendedFences27 said:
One of religion\'s only good qualities is the art that it has inspired, music sculpture, paint, architecture etc. Otherwise it\'s been an evil source of death, war, torture, and abuse. A dismal track record.
Your poem has called out the \"hypocrisy\" of it all, yet sometimes the beauty of its art remains. - Phil A.
July 18th, 2021 21:58
MendedFences27 said:
One of religion\'s only good qualities is the art that it has inspired, music sculpture, paint, architecture etc. Otherwise it\'s been an evil source of death, war, torture, and abuse. A dismal track record.
Your poem has called out the \"hypocrisy\" of it all, yet sometimes the beauty of its art remains. - Phil A.
July 18th, 2021 21:58
Cathedral Bells
Fay Slimm. said:
Everyone fall short of the mark yet repetition gives sinners the urge to keep praying cos they think their many words will get them Heaven bound - - - - -- well at least for many centuries has religion been keenly teaching them that - - yet I love hearing bells in the distance........x
July 18th, 2021 07:42
Fay Slimm. said:
Everyone fall short of the mark yet repetition gives sinners the urge to keep praying cos they think their many words will get them Heaven bound - - - - -- well at least for many centuries has religion been keenly teaching them that - - yet I love hearing bells in the distance........x
July 18th, 2021 07:42
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