Comments received on poems by Neville
En Route From A to B
Goldfinch60 said:
That route from A to B was an absolute nightmare for those who travelled it and lost their live in doing so.
Even today it is said that no birds sing at Belsen.
Andy
July 24th, 2021 00:33
Goldfinch60 said:
That route from A to B was an absolute nightmare for those who travelled it and lost their live in doing so.
Even today it is said that no birds sing at Belsen.
Andy
July 24th, 2021 00:33
En Route From A to B
Doggerel Dave said:
Forced to abandon this topic for a long time. Immediately after the war, it was informational overload - because not only British prisoner of war escape stories, which I read avidly and enjoyed (to the victor goes the spoils – and the propaganda) but accounts and news reels (covering the opening of the camps) were in abundance also. Nightmares as a kid.
Latterly, not so long ago, a fortnight spent in Berlin for the art galleries and modern architecture forced me to do the rounds covering this once more. And once more wished I had not.
In this context, I have to tell you Nev your writing is too good and bought this up too vividly for me.
Not a criticism – others may need to wake up.
July 23rd, 2021 20:05
Doggerel Dave said:
Forced to abandon this topic for a long time. Immediately after the war, it was informational overload - because not only British prisoner of war escape stories, which I read avidly and enjoyed (to the victor goes the spoils – and the propaganda) but accounts and news reels (covering the opening of the camps) were in abundance also. Nightmares as a kid.
Latterly, not so long ago, a fortnight spent in Berlin for the art galleries and modern architecture forced me to do the rounds covering this once more. And once more wished I had not.
In this context, I have to tell you Nev your writing is too good and bought this up too vividly for me.
Not a criticism – others may need to wake up.
July 23rd, 2021 20:05
En Route From A to B
Jerry Reynolds said:
A necessary write, Neville.
My mind still has a hard time getting around the scale of it all.
Your poem helps.
July 23rd, 2021 17:01
Jerry Reynolds said:
A necessary write, Neville.
My mind still has a hard time getting around the scale of it all.
Your poem helps.
July 23rd, 2021 17:01
En Route From A to B
Fay Slimm. said:
Every line in your exposure of such evil makes that route from A. to B etched indelibly on hearts and minds of all generations - - may that four day hellish journey never ever be relegated to history. A read to remember with bowed heads Nev.
July 23rd, 2021 15:39
Fay Slimm. said:
Every line in your exposure of such evil makes that route from A. to B etched indelibly on hearts and minds of all generations - - may that four day hellish journey never ever be relegated to history. A read to remember with bowed heads Nev.
July 23rd, 2021 15:39
En Route From A to B
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
The unspeakable atrocities committed against the helpless who never desired such a trip from A to B. Unfortunately,
‘almost a million innocents passed en-route from A to B’.
I became aware of these despicable facts when I read “The Diary of Anne Frank”.
Laura🌻
July 23rd, 2021 15:31
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
The unspeakable atrocities committed against the helpless who never desired such a trip from A to B. Unfortunately,
‘almost a million innocents passed en-route from A to B’.
I became aware of these despicable facts when I read “The Diary of Anne Frank”.
Laura🌻
July 23rd, 2021 15:31
The Essence of You
Goldfinch60 said:
Such wonderful words Neville, now in my memory.
Andy
July 23rd, 2021 00:39
Goldfinch60 said:
Such wonderful words Neville, now in my memory.
Andy
July 23rd, 2021 00:39
The Essence of You
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow a superb poem, romantic and charming esp the ending line. Kudos for this engaging muse!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
July 22nd, 2021 12:51
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow a superb poem, romantic and charming esp the ending line. Kudos for this engaging muse!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
July 22nd, 2021 12:51
The Essence of You
SureshG said:
He’s in deep, just as I am of this astounding composition.
July 22nd, 2021 12:22
SureshG said:
He’s in deep, just as I am of this astounding composition.
July 22nd, 2021 12:22
The Essence of You
Saxon Crow said:
He\'d be buggered if he had asthma.
Beautiful poem Nev
July 22nd, 2021 10:50
Saxon Crow said:
He\'d be buggered if he had asthma.
Beautiful poem Nev
July 22nd, 2021 10:50
The Essence of You
orchidee said:
Oopd, I nipped back to \'like\' this. Was I too busy \'liking\' my own poems? Was that why I was cut orf?!
July 22nd, 2021 05:29
orchidee said:
Oopd, I nipped back to \'like\' this. Was I too busy \'liking\' my own poems? Was that why I was cut orf?!
July 22nd, 2021 05:29
The Essence of You
orchidee said:
Good write N. Now, I don\'t want to breathe in any effects of KP\'s botox! She\'s gonna melt in this heat. She will turn into a plastic blob! lol.
July 22nd, 2021 05:27
orchidee said:
Good write N. Now, I don\'t want to breathe in any effects of KP\'s botox! She\'s gonna melt in this heat. She will turn into a plastic blob! lol.
July 22nd, 2021 05:27
The Essence of You
L. B. Mek said:
like I breathe, your subtle poetry-in
at every opportunity
He a fanatic of love and intoxicating chemistry
and, I
well just a fan, but a proud one - till the end
my friend,
(just can\'t get enough of your scene depicting write\'s
in each one, we just plunge straight into the nucleus
core, at the heart of its poetic plot)
July 22nd, 2021 04:05
L. B. Mek said:
like I breathe, your subtle poetry-in
at every opportunity
He a fanatic of love and intoxicating chemistry
and, I
well just a fan, but a proud one - till the end
my friend,
(just can\'t get enough of your scene depicting write\'s
in each one, we just plunge straight into the nucleus
core, at the heart of its poetic plot)
July 22nd, 2021 04:05
The Essence of You
Fay Slimm. said:
Nothing beats breathing love\'s essence like expressed in this tenderest of poetic confessions. A sigh of a read Nev..............x
July 22nd, 2021 03:47
Fay Slimm. said:
Nothing beats breathing love\'s essence like expressed in this tenderest of poetic confessions. A sigh of a read Nev..............x
July 22nd, 2021 03:47
Opus
Goldfinch60 said:
So many fond memories gathering dust in the corner Neville.
Andy
July 22nd, 2021 00:27
Goldfinch60 said:
So many fond memories gathering dust in the corner Neville.
Andy
July 22nd, 2021 00:27
Opus
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
A gripping read to say the least…
especially with the final two words
“Plaza Trastevere”!
Your written words flooded my being with enchanted memories of the most enjoyable times I experienced in Trastevere a few decades ago…memories as unforgettable as you written piece .
Laura🌻
July 21st, 2021 15:17
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
A gripping read to say the least…
especially with the final two words
“Plaza Trastevere”!
Your written words flooded my being with enchanted memories of the most enjoyable times I experienced in Trastevere a few decades ago…memories as unforgettable as you written piece .
Laura🌻
July 21st, 2021 15:17
Opus
Poetic Dan said:
Wow what a read, left me with not much to say.
That is a pleasant feeling I must say, so just thanks!
July 21st, 2021 10:47
Poetic Dan said:
Wow what a read, left me with not much to say.
That is a pleasant feeling I must say, so just thanks!
July 21st, 2021 10:47
Opus
Doggerel Dave said:
Neville – that’s quite freaky... no, not freaky..disorienting – drew me in and then spat me out again. Painter..lover/model…perfect open wound…model gone, painting only left to gaze upon..
Wot’ll you give me? I’ll settle for 5 out of 10….
July 21st, 2021 06:40
Doggerel Dave said:
Neville – that’s quite freaky... no, not freaky..disorienting – drew me in and then spat me out again. Painter..lover/model…perfect open wound…model gone, painting only left to gaze upon..
Wot’ll you give me? I’ll settle for 5 out of 10….
July 21st, 2021 06:40
Opus
Fay Slimm. said:
What a memory to store in a corner of experience and told with such painted tenderness - - - took me to the time I stood before genius and gazed on such portraits many years back..... x
July 21st, 2021 03:40
Fay Slimm. said:
What a memory to store in a corner of experience and told with such painted tenderness - - - took me to the time I stood before genius and gazed on such portraits many years back..... x
July 21st, 2021 03:40
Opus
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville.
Could be about me and KP, but I ain\'t done much gazing on her. She\'s 95% botox by now anyway! She will melt in the heat, be all of a heap, like an old sack. No change there then though. lol.
July 21st, 2021 02:18
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville.
Could be about me and KP, but I ain\'t done much gazing on her. She\'s 95% botox by now anyway! She will melt in the heat, be all of a heap, like an old sack. No change there then though. lol.
July 21st, 2021 02:18
Because it Got in the Way
Goldfinch60 said:
Those who shoot life for pleasure are totally despicable Neville.
Andy
July 21st, 2021 00:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Those who shoot life for pleasure are totally despicable Neville.
Andy
July 21st, 2021 00:26
Because it Got in the Way
myself and me said:
A funny reason for a silly shoot. If it move too fast, he will miss it.
July 20th, 2021 20:57
myself and me said:
A funny reason for a silly shoot. If it move too fast, he will miss it.
July 20th, 2021 20:57
Because it Got in the Way
SureshG said:
I looked straight at my nemesis and wondered - why!
Your words, exceptional
July 20th, 2021 13:20
SureshG said:
I looked straight at my nemesis and wondered - why!
Your words, exceptional
July 20th, 2021 13:20
Because it Got in the Way
jarcher54 said:
The riddle being one of the oldest genres of literature (poetry?), gratitude for continuing the spirit of that tradition.
July 20th, 2021 11:39
jarcher54 said:
The riddle being one of the oldest genres of literature (poetry?), gratitude for continuing the spirit of that tradition.
July 20th, 2021 11:39
Because it Got in the Way
jarcher54 said:
Yikes... I once spoke to a sniper who said they were sort of taught to do that, assuming they spotted a \"legitimate\" target. If you miss with one shot, the target may hope you stop trying!
July 20th, 2021 11:38
jarcher54 said:
Yikes... I once spoke to a sniper who said they were sort of taught to do that, assuming they spotted a \"legitimate\" target. If you miss with one shot, the target may hope you stop trying!
July 20th, 2021 11:38
Because it Got in the Way
Poetic Dan said:
What do you mean it won\'t move, then take two! Ha ha, if everything is nothing then play on. It takes time to know it comes around.
Got do what ya gotta do...interesting like you say, how different we all see
Have a wonderful day
July 20th, 2021 09:00
Poetic Dan said:
What do you mean it won\'t move, then take two! Ha ha, if everything is nothing then play on. It takes time to know it comes around.
Got do what ya gotta do...interesting like you say, how different we all see
Have a wonderful day
July 20th, 2021 09:00
Because it Got in the Way
Fay Slimm. said:
Vital points made in this three liner my friend. The fate of most \"game\" in a nutshell - shame on those who make a sport of killing................x
July 20th, 2021 07:04
Fay Slimm. said:
Vital points made in this three liner my friend. The fate of most \"game\" in a nutshell - shame on those who make a sport of killing................x
July 20th, 2021 07:04
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