Comments received on poems by Neville
Rokhsana
Fay Slimm. said:
What a terrible custom Nev. - and so widely used for eons by many cultures - - - being stoned often meant a very slow death -- merely alleged of a crime yet courageously out-spoken was young Rokhsana - hoping your caring post will rouse readers to ever remember with flagrant empathy that beautiful name.
May 27th, 2021 03:35
Fay Slimm. said:
What a terrible custom Nev. - and so widely used for eons by many cultures - - - being stoned often meant a very slow death -- merely alleged of a crime yet courageously out-spoken was young Rokhsana - hoping your caring post will rouse readers to ever remember with flagrant empathy that beautiful name.
May 27th, 2021 03:35
Scarce Blues
L. B. Mek said:
\'Was a portion of sky with
a small diagonal crease
and a tear ….
Overflowing it was
with a million or more
jigsaw shaped pieces of
delicate blue\'..
well, what can I say
I read and learn, dear poet..
what an awesome gift
you choose to share, my friend
thank you!
May 27th, 2021 03:20
L. B. Mek said:
\'Was a portion of sky with
a small diagonal crease
and a tear ….
Overflowing it was
with a million or more
jigsaw shaped pieces of
delicate blue\'..
well, what can I say
I read and learn, dear poet..
what an awesome gift
you choose to share, my friend
thank you!
May 27th, 2021 03:20
Rokhsana
orchidee said:
Only \'alleged\' and yet stoned - a terrible state.
I can\'t meet her, unfortunately :(
May 27th, 2021 02:54
orchidee said:
Only \'alleged\' and yet stoned - a terrible state.
I can\'t meet her, unfortunately :(
May 27th, 2021 02:54
Scarce Blues
MendedFences27 said:
In passing, the life of a butterfly is very short, seasonal to be exact. It seems that most things beautiful in nature are short lived. Sometimes human emotions are sensational only to be quick in passing. Maybe both share the same fragility.
Your remembrance of a fleeting moment, or was it more, and the symbolism of butterflies, and blue in particular, of luck, love, and hope become a very allegorical image and well structured poem. Truly a classical pairing. - Phil A.
May 26th, 2021 12:33
MendedFences27 said:
In passing, the life of a butterfly is very short, seasonal to be exact. It seems that most things beautiful in nature are short lived. Sometimes human emotions are sensational only to be quick in passing. Maybe both share the same fragility.
Your remembrance of a fleeting moment, or was it more, and the symbolism of butterflies, and blue in particular, of luck, love, and hope become a very allegorical image and well structured poem. Truly a classical pairing. - Phil A.
May 26th, 2021 12:33
Scarce Blues
Jerry Reynolds said:
Fondly remember the ones who loved you. Grateful for the one who stayed.
Really good write, Neville.
May 26th, 2021 09:20
Jerry Reynolds said:
Fondly remember the ones who loved you. Grateful for the one who stayed.
Really good write, Neville.
May 26th, 2021 09:20
Scarce Blues
Fay Slimm. said:
More than a tribute to butterfly-beauty in this clever exposure of memory\'s \"forget-me-not\" visions of long-ago love. A corker agen Nev........x
May 26th, 2021 03:14
Fay Slimm. said:
More than a tribute to butterfly-beauty in this clever exposure of memory\'s \"forget-me-not\" visions of long-ago love. A corker agen Nev........x
May 26th, 2021 03:14
Scarce Blues
dusk arising said:
In the ending of all things life rests as fragile as butterfly wings seeking shelter in a rainstorm.
Is it our life or the futility which passes thru ones mind on the point of passing.
May 26th, 2021 02:39
dusk arising said:
In the ending of all things life rests as fragile as butterfly wings seeking shelter in a rainstorm.
Is it our life or the futility which passes thru ones mind on the point of passing.
May 26th, 2021 02:39
Face-ination
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever words Neville that can bring profound thoughts within us.
Andy
May 26th, 2021 00:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever words Neville that can bring profound thoughts within us.
Andy
May 26th, 2021 00:49
Face-ination
L. B. Mek said:
\'how sobering
that, what endlessly inspires
is often
the very worst: within us...!\'
(what a poignant write my friend
so many narratives and images
flashed through my mind
trying to decipher wat inspired you;
and ain\'t that the beauty
of this poetry artform, we fight
to keep alive)
May 25th, 2021 05:41
L. B. Mek said:
\'how sobering
that, what endlessly inspires
is often
the very worst: within us...!\'
(what a poignant write my friend
so many narratives and images
flashed through my mind
trying to decipher wat inspired you;
and ain\'t that the beauty
of this poetry artform, we fight
to keep alive)
May 25th, 2021 05:41
Face-ination
Fay Slimm. said:
Love the coined word in the title Nev. and oh that clever and very telling metaphor - -- - I maybe completely up a gum-tree but judgemental pride comes to mind after reading a second time your bit of intrigue today mon ami.
May 25th, 2021 04:08
Fay Slimm. said:
Love the coined word in the title Nev. and oh that clever and very telling metaphor - -- - I maybe completely up a gum-tree but judgemental pride comes to mind after reading a second time your bit of intrigue today mon ami.
May 25th, 2021 04:08
Face-ination
dusk arising said:
Clouds - bringer of nourishing, rebirthing rain, as are the tears we all shed.
May 25th, 2021 02:32
dusk arising said:
Clouds - bringer of nourishing, rebirthing rain, as are the tears we all shed.
May 25th, 2021 02:32
Journey of Tears
Dove said:
Oh my some people magically work tears to manipulate
Others, and others though heartfelt turn into works of art
Ultimately fake tears or not, lose their meaning If
lies and tantrums are infused!
Always deeply meaningful words infused in your works
May 21st, 2021 08:50
Dove said:
Oh my some people magically work tears to manipulate
Others, and others though heartfelt turn into works of art
Ultimately fake tears or not, lose their meaning If
lies and tantrums are infused!
Always deeply meaningful words infused in your works
May 21st, 2021 08:50
Paper Cups
L. B. Mek said:
this be those kinda whispered \'messages, in a bottle\'
that had the Helen\'s of this world - abandon
their loyalties: for a heart\'s vehement desires
and wars that launch timeless tales
upon that unconquerable sea, of poetic ink..
A great write my friend, wonderfully executed pacing and flow
May 21st, 2021 02:29
L. B. Mek said:
this be those kinda whispered \'messages, in a bottle\'
that had the Helen\'s of this world - abandon
their loyalties: for a heart\'s vehement desires
and wars that launch timeless tales
upon that unconquerable sea, of poetic ink..
A great write my friend, wonderfully executed pacing and flow
May 21st, 2021 02:29
Paper Cups
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that she will remember Neville, such wonderful memories shared with us all and maybe her.
Andy
May 21st, 2021 00:22
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that she will remember Neville, such wonderful memories shared with us all and maybe her.
Andy
May 21st, 2021 00:22
Paper Cups
Doggerel Dave said:
No thought for the past, no thought for the future, our energies combined in the glorious present – which will last forever…..And it has – in memory….
Thanks Neville.
May 20th, 2021 20:44
Doggerel Dave said:
No thought for the past, no thought for the future, our energies combined in the glorious present – which will last forever…..And it has – in memory….
Thanks Neville.
May 20th, 2021 20:44
Paper Cups
MendedFences27 said:
Ah, yes. the hurried emotions of youth. Surely, she would remember the wine and the frenzy. A small snip of lost emotions that are recalled with a passion that sweetens the recollection and perhaps, the taste of the wine. Loved it. - Phil A.
May 20th, 2021 10:45
MendedFences27 said:
Ah, yes. the hurried emotions of youth. Surely, she would remember the wine and the frenzy. A small snip of lost emotions that are recalled with a passion that sweetens the recollection and perhaps, the taste of the wine. Loved it. - Phil A.
May 20th, 2021 10:45
Paper Cups
dusk arising said:
With a scene addressed so well I\'m sure she will have quite a coloured memory of it.
Love the way you create with a pastiche of the actual scene.
May 20th, 2021 09:31
dusk arising said:
With a scene addressed so well I\'m sure she will have quite a coloured memory of it.
Love the way you create with a pastiche of the actual scene.
May 20th, 2021 09:31
Not Never in a Month of Sundays
Dove said:
There’s only one true love
which kisses ones soul
One true heart that flutters
as memories lovingly unfolds
knowing there’s no others
Where affections gently holds
Love it Neville!,
May 20th, 2021 09:14
Dove said:
There’s only one true love
which kisses ones soul
One true heart that flutters
as memories lovingly unfolds
knowing there’s no others
Where affections gently holds
Love it Neville!,
May 20th, 2021 09:14
Paper Cups
Dove said:
Woo Hoo, a blank page of Love ! I imagine all the beautiful colors you added to the mental loving without a night’s pause! Nicely done as always
May 20th, 2021 08:54
Dove said:
Woo Hoo, a blank page of Love ! I imagine all the beautiful colors you added to the mental loving without a night’s pause! Nicely done as always
May 20th, 2021 08:54
Paper Cups
Fay Slimm. said:
So rich with imagery this write - it cleverly takes events in back- then and romantically stirs such sweet memories - - oh yes Nev. that lady in question having read this would well remember - methinks..........x
May 20th, 2021 04:05
Fay Slimm. said:
So rich with imagery this write - it cleverly takes events in back- then and romantically stirs such sweet memories - - oh yes Nev. that lady in question having read this would well remember - methinks..........x
May 20th, 2021 04:05
Fletched
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Bit late to ask now methinks \'specially as everyone else seems to have got a grip ..... so is it OK if I just put ....Good write, Neville?
May 19th, 2021 23:23
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Bit late to ask now methinks \'specially as everyone else seems to have got a grip ..... so is it OK if I just put ....Good write, Neville?
May 19th, 2021 23:23
Not Never in a Month of Sundays
L. B. Mek said:
of that one
of those one\'s
that mean: the most
and shall do
and we insure, will do
till
our
ink
runs, dry: on its last
blink
lingered
treasured
as, the very best
of all
that we\'ve been: blessed...
May 19th, 2021 06:31
L. B. Mek said:
of that one
of those one\'s
that mean: the most
and shall do
and we insure, will do
till
our
ink
runs, dry: on its last
blink
lingered
treasured
as, the very best
of all
that we\'ve been: blessed...
May 19th, 2021 06:31
Not Never in a Month of Sundays
Fay Slimm. said:
A confession which must make your lady know such love is forever..........x
May 16th, 2021 04:14
Fay Slimm. said:
A confession which must make your lady know such love is forever..........x
May 16th, 2021 04:14
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