Comments received on poems by Neville
A Permanent Embrace
Dove said:
Awesome! I wrote a tale, poem much like this, but they were in a mountain and had their clothes on! Mucho Caliente your naked love story! Loved it! If ever I find my story I’ll post it!
August 29th, 2021 07:39
Dove said:
Awesome! I wrote a tale, poem much like this, but they were in a mountain and had their clothes on! Mucho Caliente your naked love story! Loved it! If ever I find my story I’ll post it!
August 29th, 2021 07:39
A Permanent Embrace
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
I knew he would kiss her ankle! heehee.
Woof, steady you don\'t swoon, says Fido.
August 29th, 2021 06:56
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
I knew he would kiss her ankle! heehee.
Woof, steady you don\'t swoon, says Fido.
August 29th, 2021 06:56
A Permanent Embrace
dusk arising said:
Reads as a tale of forbidden love. A fairy tale of old which still haunts the hedgerow and gives pleasure to all with blossoms and perpetuates the eternity of love with berries of continuence.
August 29th, 2021 04:47
dusk arising said:
Reads as a tale of forbidden love. A fairy tale of old which still haunts the hedgerow and gives pleasure to all with blossoms and perpetuates the eternity of love with berries of continuence.
August 29th, 2021 04:47
A Permanent Embrace
Fay Slimm. said:
Locked indeed those errant but happy lovers melded together in frozen embrace -- what a tale with a wintery end but oh such a pleasure to read my dear romantic friend.
August 29th, 2021 04:29
Fay Slimm. said:
Locked indeed those errant but happy lovers melded together in frozen embrace -- what a tale with a wintery end but oh such a pleasure to read my dear romantic friend.
August 29th, 2021 04:29
An Old Promise Well Kept
Goldfinch60 said:
Super words Neville, I was taken there by your words.
Andy
August 29th, 2021 01:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Super words Neville, I was taken there by your words.
Andy
August 29th, 2021 01:11
She Calls Them Tears
Dove said:
Interesting Poem, Dear One!
Well, I can cry me a
River of crystal tears,
and let them drift to the sea
I can let these salty drops
Paint my manly cheeks
For all to see
But you can’t take
Away , my pride
Nor my dignity
August 28th, 2021 20:01
Dove said:
Interesting Poem, Dear One!
Well, I can cry me a
River of crystal tears,
and let them drift to the sea
I can let these salty drops
Paint my manly cheeks
For all to see
But you can’t take
Away , my pride
Nor my dignity
August 28th, 2021 20:01
An Old Promise Well Kept
Dove said:
Alliteration swept through you words, but heartfelt feelings overcame me!
Loved the story
Poor old chap, shoes tattered and worn
But his heart, was battered and torn
Them clucking old hens, better be warned
I\'m gonna chase them with blasting horn
Making them wish they were nevah born
promises are better, than being scorned
August 28th, 2021 19:49
Dove said:
Alliteration swept through you words, but heartfelt feelings overcame me!
Loved the story
Poor old chap, shoes tattered and worn
But his heart, was battered and torn
Them clucking old hens, better be warned
I\'m gonna chase them with blasting horn
Making them wish they were nevah born
promises are better, than being scorned
August 28th, 2021 19:49
An Old Promise Well Kept
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
I really, really like this writing of yours…heartwarming and heartbreaking in concert. I can feel and sense the warmth and affection ‘he’ has for that special someone.
Definitely one of my favorites!
Thank you for sharing my dear friend.
Laura🌻
August 28th, 2021 17:39
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
I really, really like this writing of yours…heartwarming and heartbreaking in concert. I can feel and sense the warmth and affection ‘he’ has for that special someone.
Definitely one of my favorites!
Thank you for sharing my dear friend.
Laura🌻
August 28th, 2021 17:39
An Old Promise Well Kept
myself and me said:
Hope his waiting won\'t end in vain. Heck, it hurts.
August 28th, 2021 15:56
myself and me said:
Hope his waiting won\'t end in vain. Heck, it hurts.
August 28th, 2021 15:56
An Old Promise Well Kept
dusk arising said:
A haunting tale well written in a beguiling way where your readers mind searches out for clues in every line.
I love writings like this. Suspenseful and exciting. Complete and incomplete... masterful.
August 28th, 2021 08:28
dusk arising said:
A haunting tale well written in a beguiling way where your readers mind searches out for clues in every line.
I love writings like this. Suspenseful and exciting. Complete and incomplete... masterful.
August 28th, 2021 08:28
An Old Promise Well Kept
Fay Slimm. said:
The scene as always implacably penned clearly has a wise message hid in its lines of keeping a word once made..... such a tender feel to this quite intriguing read Nev.
August 28th, 2021 05:32
Fay Slimm. said:
The scene as always implacably penned clearly has a wise message hid in its lines of keeping a word once made..... such a tender feel to this quite intriguing read Nev.
August 28th, 2021 05:32
Negative in Blue
Caring dove said:
Good choice of words , ) I liked how this flowed with ease . Very well expressed
August 28th, 2021 05:25
Caring dove said:
Good choice of words , ) I liked how this flowed with ease . Very well expressed
August 28th, 2021 05:25
An Old Promise Well Kept
Doggerel Dave said:
A bond, broken by circumstance, but his side of the contract never rescinded.
A rich picture, Nev - more long \'uns please.
August 28th, 2021 05:22
Doggerel Dave said:
A bond, broken by circumstance, but his side of the contract never rescinded.
A rich picture, Nev - more long \'uns please.
August 28th, 2021 05:22
She Calls Them Tears
Doggerel Dave said:
Ah Neville, such loss…such unspoken grief… that salt can still be felt in a wound not yet healed – and there’s the rub………
August 27th, 2021 18:37
Doggerel Dave said:
Ah Neville, such loss…such unspoken grief… that salt can still be felt in a wound not yet healed – and there’s the rub………
August 27th, 2021 18:37
She Calls Them Tears
myself and me said:
Holy salt. Next time when I cook, I will add a handful of tears into the dish, not for taste but for the sadness\'s sake.
August 27th, 2021 12:47
myself and me said:
Holy salt. Next time when I cook, I will add a handful of tears into the dish, not for taste but for the sadness\'s sake.
August 27th, 2021 12:47
She Calls Them Tears
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Reading your wonderful intriguing poem this morning has stirred my senses. I can almost taste and visualize those ‘salt crystals’.
Reading between the lines is a mystery in itself. You’re a pro at letting the reader interpret your writings and come to their own conclusion.
Laura🌻
August 27th, 2021 09:23
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Reading your wonderful intriguing poem this morning has stirred my senses. I can almost taste and visualize those ‘salt crystals’.
Reading between the lines is a mystery in itself. You’re a pro at letting the reader interpret your writings and come to their own conclusion.
Laura🌻
August 27th, 2021 09:23
She Calls Them Tears
Caring dove said:
Interesting read ... I like your words )
August 27th, 2021 07:06
Caring dove said:
Interesting read ... I like your words )
August 27th, 2021 07:06
She Calls Them Tears
dusk arising said:
What better divide than an ocean when a divide protects a refuge. Or in years to come, interplanetary space.... nice, she can\'t call space her tears.
But are tears a convenience, a mask, wondered the police officer faced with a flood of them from a speeding driver.
August 27th, 2021 05:03
dusk arising said:
What better divide than an ocean when a divide protects a refuge. Or in years to come, interplanetary space.... nice, she can\'t call space her tears.
But are tears a convenience, a mask, wondered the police officer faced with a flood of them from a speeding driver.
August 27th, 2021 05:03
She Calls Them Tears
L. B. Mek said:
\'salt crystals\'..
let us hope, for her sake
and for his redemptive need
to shed and phoenix, his regretful heart
that those crystals undergo a transfiguration
into, her life\'s serendipitous: \'diamond pearls\'..
that will shimmer
in the brightness of a forgiving day
and help attract, a healing presence
\'back\', in-to her life...
(Long after you\'ve forgotten me
I\'ll be your fan, my friend
keep that mighty pen, weaving and sharing
your masterfully subtle, Poetry!)
thank you!
August 27th, 2021 04:50
L. B. Mek said:
\'salt crystals\'..
let us hope, for her sake
and for his redemptive need
to shed and phoenix, his regretful heart
that those crystals undergo a transfiguration
into, her life\'s serendipitous: \'diamond pearls\'..
that will shimmer
in the brightness of a forgiving day
and help attract, a healing presence
\'back\', in-to her life...
(Long after you\'ve forgotten me
I\'ll be your fan, my friend
keep that mighty pen, weaving and sharing
your masterfully subtle, Poetry!)
thank you!
August 27th, 2021 04:50
She Calls Them Tears
Fay Slimm. said:
You have mastered the art of written inference so blinkin\' well Nev. - - your art of confidential half-exposed situations astounds -
with intrigue that could not be bettered The feeling of almost hearing your whispers makes for mystery and you nail it for me each time - - inspiringly good this one goes into my fave-list dear friend.
August 27th, 2021 02:26
Fay Slimm. said:
You have mastered the art of written inference so blinkin\' well Nev. - - your art of confidential half-exposed situations astounds -
with intrigue that could not be bettered The feeling of almost hearing your whispers makes for mystery and you nail it for me each time - - inspiringly good this one goes into my fave-list dear friend.
August 27th, 2021 02:26
An Unexpected Chaos
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories are within us all Neville.
Andy
August 26th, 2021 00:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories are within us all Neville.
Andy
August 26th, 2021 00:53
An Unexpected Chaos
myself and me said:
An unexpected chaos, but good to have.
August 25th, 2021 13:29
myself and me said:
An unexpected chaos, but good to have.
August 25th, 2021 13:29
The Fullest of Moons
Dove said:
Artistically written , I just love stained glass decor In sunlight, but the blue moon just zipped by, and by golly you created a lovely poem, now no need to be hurt by those shards of beauty
August 25th, 2021 10:17
Dove said:
Artistically written , I just love stained glass decor In sunlight, but the blue moon just zipped by, and by golly you created a lovely poem, now no need to be hurt by those shards of beauty
August 25th, 2021 10:17
When Nothing is a Sound Too Loud
Dove said:
A troubled mind, can’t listen to anything, not even the beauty of nature! Well written Dear One
August 25th, 2021 10:12
Dove said:
A troubled mind, can’t listen to anything, not even the beauty of nature! Well written Dear One
August 25th, 2021 10:12
An Unexpected Chaos
Dove said:
And so you met again, the passion, the thrill , and maybe the chaos
Of yesteryear’s departure! Profound thoughts, with giddy pleasures
August 25th, 2021 10:07
Dove said:
And so you met again, the passion, the thrill , and maybe the chaos
Of yesteryear’s departure! Profound thoughts, with giddy pleasures
August 25th, 2021 10:07
An Unexpected Chaos
dusk arising said:
Such are the memories of a tempestuous love.
August 25th, 2021 08:27
dusk arising said:
Such are the memories of a tempestuous love.
August 25th, 2021 08:27
An Unexpected Chaos
Doggerel Dave said:
Nobody\'s perfect, Nev.
I\'m not, but I aspire to create an environment which makes that easy....
August 25th, 2021 04:23
Doggerel Dave said:
Nobody\'s perfect, Nev.
I\'m not, but I aspire to create an environment which makes that easy....
August 25th, 2021 04:23
An Unexpected Chaos
Fay Slimm. said:
Sublimely addictive he was methinks but maybe on finding chaos would she secretly want to go back again to being lost ? I say -- - - nay........x.
August 25th, 2021 04:20
Fay Slimm. said:
Sublimely addictive he was methinks but maybe on finding chaos would she secretly want to go back again to being lost ? I say -- - - nay........x.
August 25th, 2021 04:20
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