Comments received on poems by Neville



Cathedral Bells
Doggerel Dave said:

Yep - Cathedrals, symbols of power and wealth.... me Atheist/Agnostic, love \'em though when they are not too crowded with other bloody tourists....just my take, Neville.

July 18th, 2021 02:55

Cathedral Bells
Saxon Crow said:

Bless you for such a fine write

July 18th, 2021 02:43

One More Four Letter Word
Goldfinch60 said:

Trust is so important in our lives and if that trust is broken it can lead to a very bitter ending.

Andy

July 18th, 2021 00:43

One More Four Letter Word
Doggerel Dave said:

With all the shifting sands of a relationship, the lie becomes a deep trench between you. A 180 degree turn your only recourse, wasn\'t it, Neville.

July 17th, 2021 21:55

One More Four Letter Word
myself and me said:

\"Four letter word\", that was very thrift of you.

July 17th, 2021 20:28

Just a Kiss Goodbye
Laura🌻 said:

Neville,

A very sensitive and delicate subject matter you’ve succinctly and masterfully expressed with your poetic pen.

Powerful my dear poet.

Thank you for sharing.

Laura🌻


July 17th, 2021 18:55

One More Four Letter Word
dusk arising said:

Betrayal by lies is the pits. Marching orders follow.

July 17th, 2021 11:56

One More Four Letter Word
Fay Slimm. said:

Ugh - --betrayed by lies is one of the worst things to cope with --phrasing with \"the very last time\" looks like the start of an ending methinks for that four lettered name...........x

July 17th, 2021 11:17

Just a Kiss Goodbye
myself and me said:

They are not looking at the same sky, or are they?

July 16th, 2021 22:11

Just a Kiss Goodbye
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good write, Neville.
We seem to be better at hellos and good buys, than that space in-between.

July 16th, 2021 15:13

Just a Kiss Goodbye
Poetic Dan said:

Can you say that\'s a beautiful rhyme to many times, not if each one can bring a tear to your eye!

Always a pleasure to fly in your sky, keep floating my friend



July 16th, 2021 14:41

Just a Kiss Goodbye
Saxon Crow said:

Very nicely played Nev. Great poem

July 16th, 2021 14:20

Just a Kiss Goodbye
Michael Edwards said:

I\'m a lover of the short verse and this is yop notch.

July 16th, 2021 13:36

Just a Kiss Goodbye
SureshG said:

Brilliant!

July 16th, 2021 13:01

Just a Kiss Goodbye
Trenz Pruca said:

Wow!

July 16th, 2021 12:05

Just a Kiss Goodbye
L. B. Mek said:

this is deep, nudges forgotten bruises
on a lot of levels...
such a thought provoking read, my friend
(hope you have a clear sky - weekend) 😎

July 16th, 2021 06:07

Just a Kiss Goodbye
dusk arising said:

That kiss of goodbye is always lurking over us when emotionally coupled to another.
I\'m not letting near me. Living in isolation. BT,DT, got the T-shirt.

July 16th, 2021 05:12

Just a Kiss Goodbye
Fay Slimm. said:

Very emotive these few words can apply to so many losses that rip families apart. A skillful write again Nev...............x

July 16th, 2021 03:06

Just a Kiss Goodbye
Goldfinch60 said:

So few words, so full of emotion.

Andy

July 16th, 2021 02:29

Mark these Words
Laura🌻 said:

Neville,

You’ve aptly scribed
“Two sides to every argument and story”…
and then there’s the truth.
It is worthwhile to have an honest conversation.

Laura🌻


July 16th, 2021 01:22

Mark these Words
Goldfinch60 said:

Very true, we can all help each other in this world.

Andy

July 16th, 2021 00:03

Mark these Words
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good write, Neville.
If she won\'t, her loss, but I will.
Love you dearly.

July 15th, 2021 12:36

Mark these Words
SureshG said:

I’ve heard this argument before, and can tell with surety, that it is right…

July 15th, 2021 10:37

Mark these Words
L. B. Mek said:

ok so we need this printed, as car bumper stickers
as doorbell signage and everything else...
how many disagreements, fallouts
have we all experienced in life, caused by someone
misunderstanding us/our actions
then doubling-down on that and getting all defensive
and refusing to \'see reason\'...!
(this felt like a long awaited: exhale
of a read, somewhat cathartic I must admit) lol
thank you for wording it: so accessible, dear poet

July 15th, 2021 06:00

Mark these Words
Doggerel Dave said:

Oh who are you kidding, Neville? - everyone does - look above, and below and sideways if you must......
I certainly do and will - you will have to try harder to get rid of me 😊

July 15th, 2021 05:19

Mark these Words
Fay Slimm. said:

A gentle poetic plea for reason when love sinks into trouble and your heart fills every line with true expertise. Brilliant writing again amigo..........x

July 15th, 2021 03:16

Mark these Words
dusk arising said:

Why not indeed, for the oils of hindsight poured across the waters of yesterday can indeed bring understanding and forgiveness.

July 15th, 2021 02:22

Upon a Small White Feather
Caring dove said:

White feathers are a sign of angels . Nice poem 🙂

July 15th, 2021 02:02

Upon a Small White Feather
Goldfinch60 said:

He certainly is Neville.

Andy

July 15th, 2021 00:36

Upon a Small White Feather
myself and me said:

You must be in a very delightful mood recently. Everything is floating. The leaf, now the feather. I am standing on the ground watching all these happening. Just brilliant.

July 14th, 2021 19:39



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