Comments received on poems by Neville



The Whimbrel
Goldfinch60 said:

Brilliant write Neville, I have been bird watching all my life and have Knott yet seen a Whimbrel but have seen the others that you mentioned.

July 16th, 2019 01:06

No Hint of An End
Fay Slimm. said:

A roundelay of tender vibrations follow this read - - wordless but there all the same - the magic of poetry oozes from this simple verse with no hint of an end showing your gift for laying down intriguing words my friend......x Fay - - - - stay safe in your journey to Serbia.

July 16th, 2019 00:54

The Whimbrel
Christina8 said:

A funny and brilliant write Neville! ---Christina

July 15th, 2019 22:26

The Whimbrel
Poetic Dan said:

I shall read again tomorrow as I kept losing my place, the comments helped alot ;) and was fun to read.
Thank you

July 15th, 2019 16:40

The Whimbrel
Michael Edwards said:

I\'m a mixed-heritage Shag-Knott - it\'s these darn knees. Enjoyed this Neville.

July 15th, 2019 09:28

The Whimbrel
Suresh said:

A birdwatchers delight. All males, and I mean us, like Knotts would like to be Shags

July 15th, 2019 08:51

The Whimbrel
Fay Slimm. said:

This treatise on waders runs to its end by producing the giggles in my hitherto serious take on sorting out bird-names - -ha - - you did it again in describing the Shag !! - -- oh by the way the pretty Whimbrel has a continuous call at times of mating - not a lot of people though know about that.................. x Fay

July 15th, 2019 04:50

The Whimbrel
orchidee said:

A fine write Neville.

July 15th, 2019 04:34

Miss Me Hard
Goldfinch60 said:

Ships that keep passing in the night.

July 15th, 2019 00:25

Miss Me Hard
Christina8 said:

I really liked this! I don\'t know....sometimes even a quick kiss one is able to love. Well, I certainly did think hard about this! LOL

July 14th, 2019 16:40

Miss Me Hard
Michael Edwards said:

I\'ll decline on this occasion - super little penning.

July 14th, 2019 14:40

Miss Me Hard
Suresh said:

Lets stay FWB, how often does it work.
Thnx N

July 14th, 2019 09:34

Miss Me Hard
orchidee said:

A fine write N.

July 14th, 2019 07:56

Miss Me Hard
Fay Slimm. said:

These few discreetly penned lines gave me my first smile of the day Nev - - read quickly they seemed to put loose assignations in their right place....... without love an affair of the heart is hardly missed. Clever stuff.

July 14th, 2019 03:53

Sunflowers
Suresh said:

A field of sunflowers is really a memorable sight.


July 14th, 2019 00:53

Sunflowers
Goldfinch60 said:

Such a wonderful sight to see and equally wonderful words to accompany it.

July 14th, 2019 00:47

Looking Just to See
Call me S said:

I loved gliding through this poem Neville, it was lovely 😊

July 13th, 2019 08:17

Sunflowers
orchidee said:

A fine write N. Upload a clip of me singing then, if you\'re having problems - there\'s about 10 million clips to choose from! lol.

July 13th, 2019 07:47

Sunflowers
Michael Edwards said:

Sounds like a patch of heaven - great observational write.

July 13th, 2019 05:39

Sunflowers
Poetic Dan said:

Great morning read in the sunshine

July 13th, 2019 03:37

Sunflowers
Fay Slimm. said:

You succeeded with getting the picture of countless sunflower faces on your doorstep dear Nev. - - what a magnificent sight and a precious harvest indeed.

July 13th, 2019 03:31

Sunflowers
Fay Slimm. said:

Wow what a beautiful sight to behold - - the sunflower is high in my list of favourite flowers . and so will be forever - a thrilling read and so well versed I felt I was there by those fields of yellowy-gold my friend. Great to have caught your posting today......... Fay

July 13th, 2019 03:18

Looking Just to See
Poetic Dan said:

You do what you do so very well and make glad to be under a poetic spell

July 7th, 2019 04:58

Tomorrow Lost
Poetic Dan said:

Thank you! I had only one pint yesterday and with thoughts like this running through my mind. I felt at peace one more time.

Great work

July 7th, 2019 04:53

Tomorrow Lost
SerenWise said:

Lovely write, moving and emotive. I particularly like the third stanza... very vivid imagery

July 4th, 2019 21:41

Looking Just to See
dusk arising said:

I\'m sure Orchidee will be really pleased with this piece about his singing.

July 3rd, 2019 05:15

Looking Just to See
orchidee said:

A fine write Neville. I\'m not a blue-eyed boy for nothing ya know. Did what he saw make him swoon?! lol.

July 3rd, 2019 01:50

Looking Just to See
Michael Edwards said:

Beautiful - a gentle read and my eyes (hazel) just floated across the words

July 3rd, 2019 01:22

Looking Just to See
Fay Slimm. said:

This verse leads us into a memory with the expertise of a true wordsmith dear Nev.. Bluest of eyes encounter an experience that etches itself indelibly in the heart\'s eyesight as a moment of poetry which your pen now shares with compelling intrigue - applause for a true masterclass in writing my friend...................... x Fay

July 3rd, 2019 01:15

Looking Just to See
Suresh said:

To recall with the minds eye, that which has been filed away as memories, that is so well recorded by words that form this poetry

July 3rd, 2019 01:14



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