Comments received on poems by Neville
Free Fall
Saxon Crow said:
Because the stars are really hot. So not only am i going to crush my body to death when i land i will also have a burnt hand!
June 5th, 2020 09:53
Saxon Crow said:
Because the stars are really hot. So not only am i going to crush my body to death when i land i will also have a burnt hand!
June 5th, 2020 09:53
Free Fall
Fay Slimm. said:
Why not indeed - - reaching for light can divert the fall. Good advice in these lined my friend.
June 5th, 2020 04:32
Fay Slimm. said:
Why not indeed - - reaching for light can divert the fall. Good advice in these lined my friend.
June 5th, 2020 04:32
Free Fall
orchidee said:
Oohh, I know, I clutched at a tree branch. It was rotten. It did not break my faaaaalllllll! Good acting there, innit?! lol.
June 5th, 2020 03:59
orchidee said:
Oohh, I know, I clutched at a tree branch. It was rotten. It did not break my faaaaalllllll! Good acting there, innit?! lol.
June 5th, 2020 03:59
The Sorriest of Words
Goldfinch60 said:
It can be such a sad word when more should be said and done.
Andy
June 5th, 2020 01:03
Goldfinch60 said:
It can be such a sad word when more should be said and done.
Andy
June 5th, 2020 01:03
The Sorriest of Words
MendedFences27 said:
\"Sorry\" is just another word, but so are \"sincere\" and \"disingenuous.\" Sometimes your \"sorriest of words\" falls off lips like a lead balloon, and less frequently it delivers at least some solace. It\'s when nothing is said that causes the greatest concern.
A self-written poem with the weight of empathy clinging to its intent. Perhaps your words will cause many to pause and consider.
Well done, Neville - Phil A.
June 4th, 2020 18:58
MendedFences27 said:
\"Sorry\" is just another word, but so are \"sincere\" and \"disingenuous.\" Sometimes your \"sorriest of words\" falls off lips like a lead balloon, and less frequently it delivers at least some solace. It\'s when nothing is said that causes the greatest concern.
A self-written poem with the weight of empathy clinging to its intent. Perhaps your words will cause many to pause and consider.
Well done, Neville - Phil A.
June 4th, 2020 18:58
The Sorriest of Words
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville.
\'E\'ermore\' is another sorry word - well, a \'sad\' word in the sense of boring! lol.
June 4th, 2020 09:02
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville.
\'E\'ermore\' is another sorry word - well, a \'sad\' word in the sense of boring! lol.
June 4th, 2020 09:02
The Sorriest of Words
Poetic Dan said:
Bam and ain\'t that the truth when we forget that action speak louder that words! Our Internet feels like a burden of a curse, when they can\'t cope force remains the first...
Great work my friend!
Much peace and respect
June 4th, 2020 08:11
Poetic Dan said:
Bam and ain\'t that the truth when we forget that action speak louder that words! Our Internet feels like a burden of a curse, when they can\'t cope force remains the first...
Great work my friend!
Much peace and respect
June 4th, 2020 08:11
The Sorriest of Words
Fay Slimm. said:
Times like you so aptly describe are etched in the heart and mind where sorry seems so inadequate. A haunt of a read...............x
June 4th, 2020 08:07
Fay Slimm. said:
Times like you so aptly describe are etched in the heart and mind where sorry seems so inadequate. A haunt of a read...............x
June 4th, 2020 08:07
Remote
Goldfinch60 said:
Let it be indeed, that chapter in your life is over and the new one will be wonderful.
Good Senryu.
Andy
June 4th, 2020 00:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Let it be indeed, that chapter in your life is over and the new one will be wonderful.
Good Senryu.
Andy
June 4th, 2020 00:23
Remote
dusk arising said:
Life is so awkward and those television controls so distant and clumsy when you lose the remote.
I agree with the light hearted attitude though. For both ebay and amazon offer a calmer tomorrow.
June 3rd, 2020 13:44
dusk arising said:
Life is so awkward and those television controls so distant and clumsy when you lose the remote.
I agree with the light hearted attitude though. For both ebay and amazon offer a calmer tomorrow.
June 3rd, 2020 13:44
Remote
Fay Slimm. said:
A sensible way to end a fading affair - - letting it be and enjoying the memories is the better conclusion - a well honed three liner mi amigo.
June 3rd, 2020 07:05
Fay Slimm. said:
A sensible way to end a fading affair - - letting it be and enjoying the memories is the better conclusion - a well honed three liner mi amigo.
June 3rd, 2020 07:05
Just Another Murmeration
Goldfinch60 said:
Those murmerations can be so swift that sometimes you have to wonder if your flying in your love but they suddenly disappear as you fall to the ground - spent for the day.
Andy
June 3rd, 2020 00:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Those murmerations can be so swift that sometimes you have to wonder if your flying in your love but they suddenly disappear as you fall to the ground - spent for the day.
Andy
June 3rd, 2020 00:35
Just Another Murmeration
dusk arising said:
I wasn\'t sure what to make of your piece today so i decided i would regard it as an overtly sexual romance with the english ...erm languish.
Those feet never touching the ground, the flurry of ups and downs ... i\'m beginning to feel a little feint now as i reminisce .... ha! no smiles.... it\'s definitely marriage ooopss i mean love...
Fantasy takes to the wing and a wonderful pattern emerges and is GONE!
June 2nd, 2020 06:26
dusk arising said:
I wasn\'t sure what to make of your piece today so i decided i would regard it as an overtly sexual romance with the english ...erm languish.
Those feet never touching the ground, the flurry of ups and downs ... i\'m beginning to feel a little feint now as i reminisce .... ha! no smiles.... it\'s definitely marriage ooopss i mean love...
Fantasy takes to the wing and a wonderful pattern emerges and is GONE!
June 2nd, 2020 06:26
Just Another Murmeration
Fay Slimm. said:
Flying high and surrounded with feelings of love must be a kind of murmeration and couched in your words is very inviting my dear friend.
June 2nd, 2020 06:07
Fay Slimm. said:
Flying high and surrounded with feelings of love must be a kind of murmeration and couched in your words is very inviting my dear friend.
June 2nd, 2020 06:07
Just Another Murmeration
orchidee said:
It\'s all right for some folk, having murmerations! I\'m looking for the Lesser-Spotted E\'ermore. I wish I would shut up! lol.
June 2nd, 2020 05:40
orchidee said:
It\'s all right for some folk, having murmerations! I\'m looking for the Lesser-Spotted E\'ermore. I wish I would shut up! lol.
June 2nd, 2020 05:40
Nob Hill Hotel Ca
Goldfinch60 said:
Some places will never change as some people cannot afford to get to them.
Andy
June 2nd, 2020 00:34
Goldfinch60 said:
Some places will never change as some people cannot afford to get to them.
Andy
June 2nd, 2020 00:34
Nob Hill Hotel Ca
dusk arising said:
Memories of standing room only on a street car named disgusting. Drawn alongside chauffer driven Mrs Drippen-Gold. It must be sunday, the conductors gum languishes by the bell push.
Atmospheric stuff revealing your pampered past luxury hotel living? Or a stark contrast to reality?
June 1st, 2020 06:23
dusk arising said:
Memories of standing room only on a street car named disgusting. Drawn alongside chauffer driven Mrs Drippen-Gold. It must be sunday, the conductors gum languishes by the bell push.
Atmospheric stuff revealing your pampered past luxury hotel living? Or a stark contrast to reality?
June 1st, 2020 06:23
Nob Hill Hotel Ca
Fay Slimm. said:
Book me a ticket on the first plane then - Nob Hill eh ? - ah - this I must see............ I love the disguised wit in these few lines Nev.
June 1st, 2020 05:30
Fay Slimm. said:
Book me a ticket on the first plane then - Nob Hill eh ? - ah - this I must see............ I love the disguised wit in these few lines Nev.
June 1st, 2020 05:30
Skien
MendedFences27 said:
Well, technically it\'s still Spring, or maybe for some unknown reason they had to change locales.
You paint a vivid picture here, and the metaphor of scarring works well. And for sure it can disorient the observer, but please I hope you forecast is incorrect. Seeing them when their wings flap in unison can be inspiring. This piece of poetry is for sure a Fav. - Phil A.
May 31st, 2020 18:01
MendedFences27 said:
Well, technically it\'s still Spring, or maybe for some unknown reason they had to change locales.
You paint a vivid picture here, and the metaphor of scarring works well. And for sure it can disorient the observer, but please I hope you forecast is incorrect. Seeing them when their wings flap in unison can be inspiring. This piece of poetry is for sure a Fav. - Phil A.
May 31st, 2020 18:01
Skien
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes coming or going has often foxed me -- but just to recall that murmur of perfect formation is enough to light up the strings of my heart..... have just posted a heart-warming oldie - just cos I felt like it this sunny Sunday. Keep staying safe my friend.
May 31st, 2020 04:22
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes coming or going has often foxed me -- but just to recall that murmur of perfect formation is enough to light up the strings of my heart..... have just posted a heart-warming oldie - just cos I felt like it this sunny Sunday. Keep staying safe my friend.
May 31st, 2020 04:22
Skien
Fay Slimm. said:
Ooooh I too love to stand and watch this special performance - -Introspective and intriguing these migratory lines describing the perfect formation of skeining birds and the \"scar\" left in their wake.
A mystery we shall never unravel is the sight of such co-ordination in the wild........ glad I caught this piece of keen observation Nev and thank you for reminding us readers to look forward for more of such awesome signatures in our skies.
May 31st, 2020 03:35
Fay Slimm. said:
Ooooh I too love to stand and watch this special performance - -Introspective and intriguing these migratory lines describing the perfect formation of skeining birds and the \"scar\" left in their wake.
A mystery we shall never unravel is the sight of such co-ordination in the wild........ glad I caught this piece of keen observation Nev and thank you for reminding us readers to look forward for more of such awesome signatures in our skies.
May 31st, 2020 03:35
Skien
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing write Neville, that purpose is within you though, just keep looking.
Andy
May 31st, 2020 00:30
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing write Neville, that purpose is within you though, just keep looking.
Andy
May 31st, 2020 00:30
Skien
Neville said:
You just put a smile on this face of mine, thank you DA...
Stay safe & well my friend,
Neville
May 30th, 2020 14:45
Neville said:
You just put a smile on this face of mine, thank you DA...
Stay safe & well my friend,
Neville
May 30th, 2020 14:45
Skien
dusk arising said:
They shall come again and winter descend upon these lands.
But a motherly dose of syrup of figs shall clear the way for more of the same old and we shall persevere.
Love the drama and mystery within your work today. Worthy of the several re-reads before i glibly placed a comment.
May 30th, 2020 14:39
dusk arising said:
They shall come again and winter descend upon these lands.
But a motherly dose of syrup of figs shall clear the way for more of the same old and we shall persevere.
Love the drama and mystery within your work today. Worthy of the several re-reads before i glibly placed a comment.
May 30th, 2020 14:39
Skien
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville.
Erm, wishing the year away too quickly? Autumn?!
May 30th, 2020 11:50
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville.
Erm, wishing the year away too quickly? Autumn?!
May 30th, 2020 11:50
Badgers
Neville said:
Aye, no grey areas except for on my head.... Thank you Andy
Neville
May 30th, 2020 01:21
Neville said:
Aye, no grey areas except for on my head.... Thank you Andy
Neville
May 30th, 2020 01:21
Badgers
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true Neville, there is so much between in our world so badgers are only seen in two ways.
Andy
May 30th, 2020 00:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true Neville, there is so much between in our world so badgers are only seen in two ways.
Andy
May 30th, 2020 00:55
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