Comments received on poems by Neville
Summer’s End
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
A definite full stop to summer meteor-logically yesterday Neville bu wonderfully captured emotionally here for very different reasons, we have all pined this moment
I keep the sunglasses on that way no-one sees the tears
Thanks for todays... stay safe
August 26th, 2020 01:17
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
A definite full stop to summer meteor-logically yesterday Neville bu wonderfully captured emotionally here for very different reasons, we have all pined this moment
I keep the sunglasses on that way no-one sees the tears
Thanks for todays... stay safe
August 26th, 2020 01:17
Summer’s End
jarcher54 said:
Well you\'ve gone and done it... you made me feel emotions. Damn you.
August 26th, 2020 00:32
jarcher54 said:
Well you\'ve gone and done it... you made me feel emotions. Damn you.
August 26th, 2020 00:32
Sun Shy
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Evening NEVILLE - Love the Poem ! Seems like although SHE was Shy of the Sun - the Lady liked *A Wee Drappy !* In my experience when a man is *LOADED* He doesnt need to be handsome too ! He had had a *Wee Drop too* Alcohol which *Maketh GLAD the Heart of Man* & *Available the Heart of Woman* ! So - It only took a wave & a smile & a nod & a wink ~ BINGO ~ C*est la Vie ! Thanks for Sharing
Love - Joy - Peace to You & Yours
Angela - Brian & Smokey Cat 🧡💙🤎
August 25th, 2020 15:11
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Evening NEVILLE - Love the Poem ! Seems like although SHE was Shy of the Sun - the Lady liked *A Wee Drappy !* In my experience when a man is *LOADED* He doesnt need to be handsome too ! He had had a *Wee Drop too* Alcohol which *Maketh GLAD the Heart of Man* & *Available the Heart of Woman* ! So - It only took a wave & a smile & a nod & a wink ~ BINGO ~ C*est la Vie ! Thanks for Sharing
Love - Joy - Peace to You & Yours
Angela - Brian & Smokey Cat 🧡💙🤎
August 25th, 2020 15:11
Drop Me off @ the Next Stop
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Neville, what happened to my youth?
Andy
August 25th, 2020 15:09
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Neville, what happened to my youth?
Andy
August 25th, 2020 15:09
Drop Me off @ the Next Stop
MendedFences27 said:
The Bus driver says Destiny stops for no man. Growing old means you have a seat closer to the exit.
A few words that explain my life, thanks. - Phil A.
August 25th, 2020 10:06
MendedFences27 said:
The Bus driver says Destiny stops for no man. Growing old means you have a seat closer to the exit.
A few words that explain my life, thanks. - Phil A.
August 25th, 2020 10:06
Why Do I Love Thee
L. B. Mek said:
so glad I skulked about long enough in your catalogue to find this gem,
for me my friend you are at your best, when the playful side makes way for the raw truths you have to share: words full of reality\'s warmth, a hot blooded existence - inked timeless for all to appreciate,
brilliant!
August 25th, 2020 03:38
L. B. Mek said:
so glad I skulked about long enough in your catalogue to find this gem,
for me my friend you are at your best, when the playful side makes way for the raw truths you have to share: words full of reality\'s warmth, a hot blooded existence - inked timeless for all to appreciate,
brilliant!
August 25th, 2020 03:38
Drop Me off @ the Next Stop
Michael Edwards said:
Perfect little shorty - the sort of poem that says so little in so few words - but then I\'m a minimalist.
August 25th, 2020 03:31
Michael Edwards said:
Perfect little shorty - the sort of poem that says so little in so few words - but then I\'m a minimalist.
August 25th, 2020 03:31
Drop Me off @ the Next Stop
dusk arising said:
OH BRILL! short and sweet... hits the spot BULLSEYE.
into my favs
August 25th, 2020 03:13
dusk arising said:
OH BRILL! short and sweet... hits the spot BULLSEYE.
into my favs
August 25th, 2020 03:13
Drop Me off @ the Next Stop
Fay Slimm. said:
Hearts grow not old though skin starts to wrinkle and hope keeps the love-spots alive -- that is my offer to these three solemn lines...............x
August 25th, 2020 03:09
Fay Slimm. said:
Hearts grow not old though skin starts to wrinkle and hope keeps the love-spots alive -- that is my offer to these three solemn lines...............x
August 25th, 2020 03:09
Drop Me off @ the Next Stop
L. B. Mek said:
like the play between the title and the poem itself,
sobering truths you penned
August 25th, 2020 02:57
L. B. Mek said:
like the play between the title and the poem itself,
sobering truths you penned
August 25th, 2020 02:57
Sun Shy
MendedFences27 said:
I wonder if she wandered and was tickled by the fella,
when he wondrously presented a baton that outstretched her umbrella.
Okay, I quit. There\'s no humor like the original. Yes, your rhyme had me laughing. Thanks for that. - Phil A.
August 24th, 2020 12:31
MendedFences27 said:
I wonder if she wandered and was tickled by the fella,
when he wondrously presented a baton that outstretched her umbrella.
Okay, I quit. There\'s no humor like the original. Yes, your rhyme had me laughing. Thanks for that. - Phil A.
August 24th, 2020 12:31
Sun Shy
dusk arising said:
Must have been drunk to tickle her **** in a matter of a moment.
Nicely put together with easy flow and a big smiling finale.
August 24th, 2020 06:48
dusk arising said:
Must have been drunk to tickle her **** in a matter of a moment.
Nicely put together with easy flow and a big smiling finale.
August 24th, 2020 06:48
Sun Shy
orchidee said:
That\'s me and her then. Notices subtle ending - I got me tickling-stick! Swoon! lol.
August 24th, 2020 05:27
orchidee said:
That\'s me and her then. Notices subtle ending - I got me tickling-stick! Swoon! lol.
August 24th, 2020 05:27
Bridges
L. B. Mek said:
oh my talented friend how deftly you capture those wishful winds of young lover\'s, vehemently clinging to the all or nothing, of the now
that often fails us and sails-on-by, till we are left wondering at what we purpled ourselves: grasping, as if our very breaths, were fuelled by it
brilliant!
August 24th, 2020 05:18
L. B. Mek said:
oh my talented friend how deftly you capture those wishful winds of young lover\'s, vehemently clinging to the all or nothing, of the now
that often fails us and sails-on-by, till we are left wondering at what we purpled ourselves: grasping, as if our very breaths, were fuelled by it
brilliant!
August 24th, 2020 05:18
Sun Shy
L. B. Mek said:
entertainingly witty,
a skip - back to days
of eager pulses, with naught - but hunting season\'s blinkered vision
for banishing, lonesome evenings
August 24th, 2020 04:35
L. B. Mek said:
entertainingly witty,
a skip - back to days
of eager pulses, with naught - but hunting season\'s blinkered vision
for banishing, lonesome evenings
August 24th, 2020 04:35
Sun Shy
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow the speed of that beautifully rhymed romantic happening leaves me quite wordless Nev - - your pen paints such on-going scenes with a finesse that makes me naughtily wanting more....................x
August 24th, 2020 03:58
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow the speed of that beautifully rhymed romantic happening leaves me quite wordless Nev - - your pen paints such on-going scenes with a finesse that makes me naughtily wanting more....................x
August 24th, 2020 03:58
Bridges
dusk arising said:
A bridge - a way to overcome a problem/where two purposes meet.
Life and death to some but easy life for others.
A bridge, a beginning, a step into the unknown for lifers.
So much to read into your piece today. Pictures, opportunities, failures and sadness are but a few. Though sadness prevails.
August 23rd, 2020 13:17
dusk arising said:
A bridge - a way to overcome a problem/where two purposes meet.
Life and death to some but easy life for others.
A bridge, a beginning, a step into the unknown for lifers.
So much to read into your piece today. Pictures, opportunities, failures and sadness are but a few. Though sadness prevails.
August 23rd, 2020 13:17
Bridges
Michael Edwards said:
Not sure if it\'s intentional or not but I can read into this. great bit of penmanship .
August 23rd, 2020 03:27
Michael Edwards said:
Not sure if it\'s intentional or not but I can read into this. great bit of penmanship .
August 23rd, 2020 03:27
Bridges
Fay Slimm. said:
The lure of bridges worldwide must provide a sad how for the unbalanced to say their goodbyes and your words lock this fact clearly into a shock-of-a-read Nev. with final lines sounding down so well the hopeless whys of such tragic endings to young lives.......
August 23rd, 2020 02:32
Fay Slimm. said:
The lure of bridges worldwide must provide a sad how for the unbalanced to say their goodbyes and your words lock this fact clearly into a shock-of-a-read Nev. with final lines sounding down so well the hopeless whys of such tragic endings to young lives.......
August 23rd, 2020 02:32
Bridges
orchidee said:
Good write Neville.
I know such a bridge. It\'s to keep people off private land.
August 23rd, 2020 01:40
orchidee said:
Good write Neville.
I know such a bridge. It\'s to keep people off private land.
August 23rd, 2020 01:40
Bridges
Goldfinch60 said:
But bridges are also the way to join each other and walk together along that pathway of happiness.
Andy
August 23rd, 2020 00:56
Goldfinch60 said:
But bridges are also the way to join each other and walk together along that pathway of happiness.
Andy
August 23rd, 2020 00:56
Beautiful Contradictions
Goldfinch60 said:
May those beautiful contradictions within her keep you forever enamoured by her.
Andy
August 23rd, 2020 00:04
Goldfinch60 said:
May those beautiful contradictions within her keep you forever enamoured by her.
Andy
August 23rd, 2020 00:04
Beautiful Contradictions
orchidee said:
Morning Puss! lol. A fine write Neville.
August 22nd, 2020 10:02
orchidee said:
Morning Puss! lol. A fine write Neville.
August 22nd, 2020 10:02
Beautiful Contradictions
dusk arising said:
Over the last coupe of days the mere mention of a cat/kitten has brought a wide grin to me due to a comment Goldfinch made calling cats \"arrogant little creatures\".
Your kitten though one supposes to be entirely of a more sleek variety..... like poetry themselves they hold you and take your imagination into their game. As did you, here, today.
August 22nd, 2020 06:09
dusk arising said:
Over the last coupe of days the mere mention of a cat/kitten has brought a wide grin to me due to a comment Goldfinch made calling cats \"arrogant little creatures\".
Your kitten though one supposes to be entirely of a more sleek variety..... like poetry themselves they hold you and take your imagination into their game. As did you, here, today.
August 22nd, 2020 06:09
Beautiful Contradictions
L. B. Mek said:
I really like this style/form of delivery you\'ve used lately,
engaging, thought provoking but never demanding, as always subtly nudging your readers to a more contemplative state
August 22nd, 2020 03:44
L. B. Mek said:
I really like this style/form of delivery you\'ve used lately,
engaging, thought provoking but never demanding, as always subtly nudging your readers to a more contemplative state
August 22nd, 2020 03:44
Beautiful Contradictions
Fay Slimm. said:
Never knew contradictions could be termed beautiful but that\'s what love sees when waking to an adored kitten - -- a warm sense of caring makes this read very special mon ami............x
August 22nd, 2020 03:36
Fay Slimm. said:
Never knew contradictions could be termed beautiful but that\'s what love sees when waking to an adored kitten - -- a warm sense of caring makes this read very special mon ami............x
August 22nd, 2020 03:36
Sky Hungry
MendedFences27 said:
I was airborne with you on this one.
\"hanging on the very edge of infinite circles,\" a great description of Harrier flight. A p;air of hawks lived in a tree just beyond our old backyard and we would watch them often as they circled. Of course your title says it all \"Sky hungry\" the desire to fly. It has motivated mankind for eternity. Although would I want to be a bird, or just able to fly like one. Basically it\'s a form of freedom we desire but cannot have. Loved your poem. - Phil A.
August 21st, 2020 14:50
MendedFences27 said:
I was airborne with you on this one.
\"hanging on the very edge of infinite circles,\" a great description of Harrier flight. A p;air of hawks lived in a tree just beyond our old backyard and we would watch them often as they circled. Of course your title says it all \"Sky hungry\" the desire to fly. It has motivated mankind for eternity. Although would I want to be a bird, or just able to fly like one. Basically it\'s a form of freedom we desire but cannot have. Loved your poem. - Phil A.
August 21st, 2020 14:50
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