Comments received on poems by Neville
Wanting to be Wanted
Christina8 said:
I think this is a wonderful rhyming poem yet a sad situation. Nonetheless, beautifully written. Glad you got out of this situation.---Christina
July 23rd, 2019 17:58
Christina8 said:
I think this is a wonderful rhyming poem yet a sad situation. Nonetheless, beautifully written. Glad you got out of this situation.---Christina
July 23rd, 2019 17:58
Marcella
Christina8 said:
Very sensual poem. I love it! Obviously more exciting than a Ferrari.....women always are! :-) Great tribute to Marcella!---Christina
July 23rd, 2019 17:50
Christina8 said:
Very sensual poem. I love it! Obviously more exciting than a Ferrari.....women always are! :-) Great tribute to Marcella!---Christina
July 23rd, 2019 17:50
Crimson Swathe
MendedFences27 said:
Hope the girl or Hope the longing? Matters naught. A field of poppies inspired your desire for both, but then... things happened.
Cheer up it\'s only poetry. - Phil A.
July 23rd, 2019 16:42
MendedFences27 said:
Hope the girl or Hope the longing? Matters naught. A field of poppies inspired your desire for both, but then... things happened.
Cheer up it\'s only poetry. - Phil A.
July 23rd, 2019 16:42
Head Rest
Christina8 said:
This was an exhilarating write! A somewhat erotic read. Enjoyed!
July 23rd, 2019 12:50
Christina8 said:
This was an exhilarating write! A somewhat erotic read. Enjoyed!
July 23rd, 2019 12:50
Tomorrow Lost
Christina8 said:
Very nice imagery! Yes, lets move on and lets not regret our past. Thanks for sharing this beautiful piece!--Christina
July 23rd, 2019 12:44
Christina8 said:
Very nice imagery! Yes, lets move on and lets not regret our past. Thanks for sharing this beautiful piece!--Christina
July 23rd, 2019 12:44
Crimson Swathe
Christina8 said:
I like this piece quite a bit! It would be romantic to make out in a field of poppies I think because I don\'t relate them to a wasteland.....I think they are beautiful!
July 23rd, 2019 12:41
Christina8 said:
I like this piece quite a bit! It would be romantic to make out in a field of poppies I think because I don\'t relate them to a wasteland.....I think they are beautiful!
July 23rd, 2019 12:41
Crimson Swathe
Suresh said:
Hope lies - hope died......
This poem begging the reader to know the poets mindset
So good tease
July 23rd, 2019 10:06
Suresh said:
Hope lies - hope died......
This poem begging the reader to know the poets mindset
So good tease
July 23rd, 2019 10:06
Crimson Swathe
Fay Slimm. said:
A hint of pathos made me change my mind on the comment I was about to make on these subtle words....... making out in a poppy field could feel good but for that last solemn line.... you did it again and left me wanting just a bit more............... x Fay
July 23rd, 2019 04:19
Fay Slimm. said:
A hint of pathos made me change my mind on the comment I was about to make on these subtle words....... making out in a poppy field could feel good but for that last solemn line.... you did it again and left me wanting just a bit more............... x Fay
July 23rd, 2019 04:19
Crimson Swathe
orchidee said:
A fine write again Neville.
Meanwhile - did hope die long before I sang?! Or was it the expectancy of me singing that caused everyone to \'abandon hope all ye that enter here?!\'\'
July 23rd, 2019 02:50
orchidee said:
A fine write again Neville.
Meanwhile - did hope die long before I sang?! Or was it the expectancy of me singing that caused everyone to \'abandon hope all ye that enter here?!\'\'
July 23rd, 2019 02:50
Crimson Swathe
dusk arising said:
Symbolic poppies always divert my mind to the great loss of warfare.
Poppies though are vibrant life and your words \'make out\' lead me along different thought paths..... tbh im not quite sure where.
July 23rd, 2019 02:27
dusk arising said:
Symbolic poppies always divert my mind to the great loss of warfare.
Poppies though are vibrant life and your words \'make out\' lead me along different thought paths..... tbh im not quite sure where.
July 23rd, 2019 02:27
She Sparkles
Suresh said:
Black widow spider in the true sense, for it was lust no doubt. You escaped, though bruised, to yet live and love
July 22nd, 2019 09:11
Suresh said:
Black widow spider in the true sense, for it was lust no doubt. You escaped, though bruised, to yet live and love
July 22nd, 2019 09:11
She Sparkles
Goldfinch60 said:
The danger that can be in the beauty of life. Good one Neville.
July 22nd, 2019 03:27
Goldfinch60 said:
The danger that can be in the beauty of life. Good one Neville.
July 22nd, 2019 03:27
She Sparkles
orchidee said:
Good write Neville. You got biscuits there?! heehee.
July 22nd, 2019 02:48
orchidee said:
Good write Neville. You got biscuits there?! heehee.
July 22nd, 2019 02:48
She Sparkles
Fay Slimm. said:
Simple and to the point this summary of pseudo sweetness and sparkle in
the planned moves of a manipulative female and bow to its tawdry truth- - tho\' hopefully you saw it in time and escaped such jaws my friend.......... Fay
July 22nd, 2019 02:25
Fay Slimm. said:
Simple and to the point this summary of pseudo sweetness and sparkle in
the planned moves of a manipulative female and bow to its tawdry truth- - tho\' hopefully you saw it in time and escaped such jaws my friend.......... Fay
July 22nd, 2019 02:25
One Day Maybe
Suresh said:
Better to hurt now, then to hurt forever.
Well penned, my friend
July 21st, 2019 14:12
Suresh said:
Better to hurt now, then to hurt forever.
Well penned, my friend
July 21st, 2019 14:12
One Day Maybe
dusk arising said:
There\'s an untold story and a well intentioned deed revealed here.
Together with the wonder - did she realise it was how it had to be resolved. The regret of hurting a loved one who may never see reason too.
So well compacted into your lines.
July 21st, 2019 10:04
dusk arising said:
There\'s an untold story and a well intentioned deed revealed here.
Together with the wonder - did she realise it was how it had to be resolved. The regret of hurting a loved one who may never see reason too.
So well compacted into your lines.
July 21st, 2019 10:04
One Day Maybe
orchidee said:
I never knew my singing caused all this trouble and upset! heehee. I\'m a pest though. Me singing goes on. lol.
July 21st, 2019 07:37
orchidee said:
I never knew my singing caused all this trouble and upset! heehee. I\'m a pest though. Me singing goes on. lol.
July 21st, 2019 07:37
One Day Maybe
Fay Slimm. said:
Poetic phrasing to sigh for in this gentle story of time spent as a duo and then ended with kindness - - your talent for tale-telling as always draws this reader for wanting more my friend....... Fay
July 21st, 2019 04:57
Fay Slimm. said:
Poetic phrasing to sigh for in this gentle story of time spent as a duo and then ended with kindness - - your talent for tale-telling as always draws this reader for wanting more my friend....... Fay
July 21st, 2019 04:57
One Day Maybe
Michael Edwards said:
Something so appealing about this simple piece - I did enjoy the read .
July 21st, 2019 04:42
Michael Edwards said:
Something so appealing about this simple piece - I did enjoy the read .
July 21st, 2019 04:42
No Hint of An End
Suresh said:
The conch shell, swirling within it the mesmerizing sound if the sea, and the smell and taste of salt, when blown has called many a lovers together.
Lovely write indeed.
July 19th, 2019 17:58
Suresh said:
The conch shell, swirling within it the mesmerizing sound if the sea, and the smell and taste of salt, when blown has called many a lovers together.
Lovely write indeed.
July 19th, 2019 17:58
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