Comments received on poems by Neville
Taking in Water
Lauraš» said:
Neville,
Loved reading this finely penned poem. That Captain and lad certainly deserve all the āale and salt brisketā that ātuppence can buyā...and perhaps more!
Lauraš»
June 25th, 2020 11:07
Lauraš» said:
Neville,
Loved reading this finely penned poem. That Captain and lad certainly deserve all the āale and salt brisketā that ātuppence can buyā...and perhaps more!
Lauraš»
June 25th, 2020 11:07
Taking in Water
Fay Slimm. said:
A scary adventure at sea which demands another installment methinks - - - - your ability with stories is shown to perfection here with a smatter of archaic language to boot - -\'ere\'s wishin\' a safe landing and tavern\'s hot viands for that Cap\'n an\' lad thanks to \'ee me \'Earty
June 25th, 2020 05:51
Fay Slimm. said:
A scary adventure at sea which demands another installment methinks - - - - your ability with stories is shown to perfection here with a smatter of archaic language to boot - -\'ere\'s wishin\' a safe landing and tavern\'s hot viands for that Cap\'n an\' lad thanks to \'ee me \'Earty
June 25th, 2020 05:51
Tabitha Tootle
Goldfinch60 said:
Protection of children is so important so I am grateful for Tabitha looking after them.
Good fun write Neville.
Andy
June 25th, 2020 00:07
Goldfinch60 said:
Protection of children is so important so I am grateful for Tabitha looking after them.
Good fun write Neville.
Andy
June 25th, 2020 00:07
Tabitha Tootle
Suresh said:
Tabitha Tootle are the ones that make the best of friends.
Nicely penned my friend - publish it
June 24th, 2020 22:27
Suresh said:
Tabitha Tootle are the ones that make the best of friends.
Nicely penned my friend - publish it
June 24th, 2020 22:27
Tabitha Tootle
Lauraš» said:
Neville,
I say a big hooray and I applaud āTabitha Tootleā! Blessed are they who have a āTabitha Tootleā to keep
āthe streets clean From bad boys and bulliesā...
and YES, I do know what you mean!
Happy belated Fatherās Day!
Lauraš»
June 24th, 2020 10:43
Lauraš» said:
Neville,
I say a big hooray and I applaud āTabitha Tootleā! Blessed are they who have a āTabitha Tootleā to keep
āthe streets clean From bad boys and bulliesā...
and YES, I do know what you mean!
Happy belated Fatherās Day!
Lauraš»
June 24th, 2020 10:43
Tabitha Tootle
orchidee said:
Should I meet her, now she\'s grown up?! lol. Will she scweam and scweam, or is that someone else?
June 24th, 2020 10:09
orchidee said:
Should I meet her, now she\'s grown up?! lol. Will she scweam and scweam, or is that someone else?
June 24th, 2020 10:09
Tabitha Tootle
Fay Slimm. said:
A veritable hero that little Tabitha - should imagine this poem brought great grins to your listening daughter back then Nev. - it certainly did it for me.
June 24th, 2020 04:05
Fay Slimm. said:
A veritable hero that little Tabitha - should imagine this poem brought great grins to your listening daughter back then Nev. - it certainly did it for me.
June 24th, 2020 04:05
Nob Hill Hotel Ca
Suresh said:
I too have enjoyed the Fairmont several times, and the regality and pageantry is once represented.
Thanks for the memories.
June 13th, 2020 21:13
Suresh said:
I too have enjoyed the Fairmont several times, and the regality and pageantry is once represented.
Thanks for the memories.
June 13th, 2020 21:13
Kanreki
Suresh said:
I thoroughly enjoyed reading your words, but I also wanted to understand the depth behind them. I looked up the meaning behind all the Japanese words and symbolisims, and that only made the poem that much more interesting.
June 11th, 2020 18:50
Suresh said:
I thoroughly enjoyed reading your words, but I also wanted to understand the depth behind them. I looked up the meaning behind all the Japanese words and symbolisims, and that only made the poem that much more interesting.
June 11th, 2020 18:50
Climax
Suresh said:
See how all that smoking has aged me...
I forget what came before that....
AHHHH!!!! YES, lighting of the match.
June 10th, 2020 15:51
Suresh said:
See how all that smoking has aged me...
I forget what came before that....
AHHHH!!!! YES, lighting of the match.
June 10th, 2020 15:51
Climax
MendedFences27 said:
This kind of behavior will kill you! You also know it\'s habit forming or addictive. There will be life-altering consequences, not to mention the cost. So if you have to chose which to lose, just keep on smoking.
A great big chuckle from me. - Phil A.
June 9th, 2020 22:10
MendedFences27 said:
This kind of behavior will kill you! You also know it\'s habit forming or addictive. There will be life-altering consequences, not to mention the cost. So if you have to chose which to lose, just keep on smoking.
A great big chuckle from me. - Phil A.
June 9th, 2020 22:10
Climax
peto said:
Yep
Just how it usually works for me
And over as quickly
Good fun
June 9th, 2020 09:46
peto said:
Yep
Just how it usually works for me
And over as quickly
Good fun
June 9th, 2020 09:46
Climax
orchidee said:
If I read more into this, it will bring on a hefty swoon. Fido will chuck buckets of cold water on me! lol.
Did ya know Mary (Hopkin)? Not personally of course - you know her songs?! \'Twas about the time I stopped watching \'Top of the Pops\' I reckon.
June 9th, 2020 01:49
orchidee said:
If I read more into this, it will bring on a hefty swoon. Fido will chuck buckets of cold water on me! lol.
Did ya know Mary (Hopkin)? Not personally of course - you know her songs?! \'Twas about the time I stopped watching \'Top of the Pops\' I reckon.
June 9th, 2020 01:49
Falling for Icarus
SerenWise said:
I like the abstraction in this poem, well done
June 8th, 2020 20:37
SerenWise said:
I like the abstraction in this poem, well done
June 8th, 2020 20:37
Climax
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - - what a striking description of reaching the climax before lighting up.......smilin\' big here ..........x
June 8th, 2020 16:01
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - - what a striking description of reaching the climax before lighting up.......smilin\' big here ..........x
June 8th, 2020 16:01
Climax
Neville said:
I am more than honoured by your late evening visit sir... thank you for stopping by...... š·. cheers
Neville
June 8th, 2020 15:28
Neville said:
I am more than honoured by your late evening visit sir... thank you for stopping by...... š·. cheers
Neville
June 8th, 2020 15:28
Climax
dusk arising said:
A wonderful description of striking a match on a well worn matchbox\'s sandpaper strip.
It takes such insight to see the poetry such a mundane task, now another fragment of the past. Similar to my sex life really.
June 8th, 2020 15:19
dusk arising said:
A wonderful description of striking a match on a well worn matchbox\'s sandpaper strip.
It takes such insight to see the poetry such a mundane task, now another fragment of the past. Similar to my sex life really.
June 8th, 2020 15:19
Kanreki
orchidee said:
I not seen many Kanrekis about. I dunno what I\'m talking about today. No change there then?!
June 7th, 2020 05:55
orchidee said:
I not seen many Kanrekis about. I dunno what I\'m talking about today. No change there then?!
June 7th, 2020 05:55
Kanreki
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Neville, when I hit sixty I did start over again in a newer life where my work was arranged so that I only worked two days per week, so yes sixty is a special age, (64 was better when I retired completely!)
May you brother live his new life to the full.
Andy
June 7th, 2020 04:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Neville, when I hit sixty I did start over again in a newer life where my work was arranged so that I only worked two days per week, so yes sixty is a special age, (64 was better when I retired completely!)
May you brother live his new life to the full.
Andy
June 7th, 2020 04:19
Kanreki
dusk arising said:
ohayou gozaimasu
And the crowd wandered off looking for McDonalds.
June 7th, 2020 03:54
dusk arising said:
ohayou gozaimasu
And the crowd wandered off looking for McDonalds.
June 7th, 2020 03:54
Kanreki
Fay Slimm. said:
Amid happy feasting and celebration your write provided yet one further learning curve for this humble reader -- Japanese custom when reaching 60 means lots of ritual before yummy rice cake so I believe - - words learnt add to the intrigue penned into the rest of the interesting verse - - DOMO ARIGATOU to you mi amigo...... x
June 7th, 2020 03:31
Fay Slimm. said:
Amid happy feasting and celebration your write provided yet one further learning curve for this humble reader -- Japanese custom when reaching 60 means lots of ritual before yummy rice cake so I believe - - words learnt add to the intrigue penned into the rest of the interesting verse - - DOMO ARIGATOU to you mi amigo...... x
June 7th, 2020 03:31
Falling for Icarus
Goldfinch60 said:
May you fly together in love and happiness Neville.
Andy
June 7th, 2020 00:40
Goldfinch60 said:
May you fly together in love and happiness Neville.
Andy
June 7th, 2020 00:40
Upon the Morrow
MendedFences27 said:
Though subtle, I find this sad, but with a sense of hope. If that hope is for an afterlife reunion. \"Bunting \" makes me think of a wartime loss . Perhaps they will be together in some spiritual way.
I enjoyed this poem and the way you\'ve subtly described the passing and the sorrow felt by those left behind. Very descriptive and yet not ponderous. I liked it.- Phil A.
June 6th, 2020 17:21
MendedFences27 said:
Though subtle, I find this sad, but with a sense of hope. If that hope is for an afterlife reunion. \"Bunting \" makes me think of a wartime loss . Perhaps they will be together in some spiritual way.
I enjoyed this poem and the way you\'ve subtly described the passing and the sorrow felt by those left behind. Very descriptive and yet not ponderous. I liked it.- Phil A.
June 6th, 2020 17:21
Falling for Icarus
orchidee said:
I told him to stay about 93 million miles away from that sun (distance Earth to Sun) but he never listened! lol.
June 6th, 2020 07:07
orchidee said:
I told him to stay about 93 million miles away from that sun (distance Earth to Sun) but he never listened! lol.
June 6th, 2020 07:07
Falling for Icarus
Fay Slimm. said:
Flying too near the sun whatever the reason results in melt-down where love drowns -- a comforting last line shows someone has reached out with understanding. This write touches the heart Nev.
June 6th, 2020 05:15
Fay Slimm. said:
Flying too near the sun whatever the reason results in melt-down where love drowns -- a comforting last line shows someone has reached out with understanding. This write touches the heart Nev.
June 6th, 2020 05:15
Falling for Icarus
dusk arising said:
Like the racing driver who swerved to avoid a child and fell out of bed i sense someone flying too close to a son here.
June 6th, 2020 04:09
dusk arising said:
Like the racing driver who swerved to avoid a child and fell out of bed i sense someone flying too close to a son here.
June 6th, 2020 04:09
Free Fall
Goldfinch60 said:
Reaching for the stars is the way to go Neville, friends and family are there ready to reach down for us.
Andy
June 6th, 2020 00:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Reaching for the stars is the way to go Neville, friends and family are there ready to reach down for us.
Andy
June 6th, 2020 00:50
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