Comments received on poems by Neville
In the End
L. B. Mek said:
Indeed!
if all fails: we of existence are aligned by the unfailing truth of our involuntary birth and the sobering reality of our unavoidable death...
November 28th, 2020 06:46
L. B. Mek said:
Indeed!
if all fails: we of existence are aligned by the unfailing truth of our involuntary birth and the sobering reality of our unavoidable death...
November 28th, 2020 06:46
In the End
Fay Slimm. said:
There is no escape from this bit of truth. as your three liner powerfully pinpoints dear friend so a mantra like \" try to love every moment\" makes good sense to an incurable romantic like me - - - wishing you stress-free house moving..........x.
November 28th, 2020 03:40
Fay Slimm. said:
There is no escape from this bit of truth. as your three liner powerfully pinpoints dear friend so a mantra like \" try to love every moment\" makes good sense to an incurable romantic like me - - - wishing you stress-free house moving..........x.
November 28th, 2020 03:40
In the End
orchidee said:
As one said - St Augustine I think - \'Give me patience, Lord - but not yet!\' Doh!
Another thing held in common by mankind - They don\'t like my singing! Awww. lol.
November 28th, 2020 03:02
orchidee said:
As one said - St Augustine I think - \'Give me patience, Lord - but not yet!\' Doh!
Another thing held in common by mankind - They don\'t like my singing! Awww. lol.
November 28th, 2020 03:02
In the End
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Morning Neville - Always up *Bright & Early* on a Saturday - No work til Monday ! Your SUPAHAIKU is very true - especially in these pandemical days. There is *A Time to be BORN & A Time to DIE* WE have no choice over the former - BUT - WE do - by our lifestyle influence the latter. Im 32 (An Essex Girl) so statistically Im only one-third through my Life ! And there is much I still want to do & places I want to go ! However should DEATH come today - Im ready & I have NO REGRETS - AMEN.
Love - Peace & Joy - to YOU & YOURS
Angela & Brian & Smokey Cat ! ! !
November 28th, 2020 01:58
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Morning Neville - Always up *Bright & Early* on a Saturday - No work til Monday ! Your SUPAHAIKU is very true - especially in these pandemical days. There is *A Time to be BORN & A Time to DIE* WE have no choice over the former - BUT - WE do - by our lifestyle influence the latter. Im 32 (An Essex Girl) so statistically Im only one-third through my Life ! And there is much I still want to do & places I want to go ! However should DEATH come today - Im ready & I have NO REGRETS - AMEN.
Love - Peace & Joy - to YOU & YOURS
Angela & Brian & Smokey Cat ! ! !
November 28th, 2020 01:58
My Lady Was a Poem
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Neville and words that I can very much empathise with.
Andy
November 28th, 2020 01:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Neville and words that I can very much empathise with.
Andy
November 28th, 2020 01:28
In the End
dusk arising said:
Grrr at arithmetic in poetry.
Let us be thankful that our deaths are to be individual happenings and not as the result advancing before machine gun fire or in the wrong kind of communal shower.
There but for the grace......
November 28th, 2020 00:34
dusk arising said:
Grrr at arithmetic in poetry.
Let us be thankful that our deaths are to be individual happenings and not as the result advancing before machine gun fire or in the wrong kind of communal shower.
There but for the grace......
November 28th, 2020 00:34
My Lady Was a Poem
PoeticBiscuit said:
Truly a breathtaking poem that I feel many could relate to. The way it flowed and radiated the love you two had was a pleasant touch. Very much enjoyed this write Neville, keep it up.
-PB
November 27th, 2020 16:16
PoeticBiscuit said:
Truly a breathtaking poem that I feel many could relate to. The way it flowed and radiated the love you two had was a pleasant touch. Very much enjoyed this write Neville, keep it up.
-PB
November 27th, 2020 16:16
My Lady Was a Poem
dusk arising said:
Your muse is showing.
What wonderful things love does to us ..... to leave us with reminiscences which mature into the finest emotions of love recalled. Coloured maybe with a touch more romance from these years of distance but non the less our finest hours shared with the most memorable beings.
A beautiful reminiscence from your mind today Neville.
November 27th, 2020 05:49
dusk arising said:
Your muse is showing.
What wonderful things love does to us ..... to leave us with reminiscences which mature into the finest emotions of love recalled. Coloured maybe with a touch more romance from these years of distance but non the less our finest hours shared with the most memorable beings.
A beautiful reminiscence from your mind today Neville.
November 27th, 2020 05:49
My Lady Was a Poem
Fay Slimm. said:
Once a minion of written memory and although now aged this lady will live as a whisperer of treasured nostalgia to one who saw what her essence reflected - - another peep into your masterful use of words Nev.that compel every reader to look deeper and perceive extra meanings - - - surely the mark of an exceptional story teller..........x
November 27th, 2020 05:40
Fay Slimm. said:
Once a minion of written memory and although now aged this lady will live as a whisperer of treasured nostalgia to one who saw what her essence reflected - - another peep into your masterful use of words Nev.that compel every reader to look deeper and perceive extra meanings - - - surely the mark of an exceptional story teller..........x
November 27th, 2020 05:40
Me & my Singing Bowl
L. B. Mek said:
you have a seemingly innate ability to tease at the risqué borderline while maintaining a decorum of respect and humility, not an easy feat my friend, lol
as ever, a good read
November 27th, 2020 03:04
L. B. Mek said:
you have a seemingly innate ability to tease at the risqué borderline while maintaining a decorum of respect and humility, not an easy feat my friend, lol
as ever, a good read
November 27th, 2020 03:04
Me & my Singing Bowl
Goldfinch60 said:
Singing and dancing for you shows love forever.
As for \'stroking the rim\'
https://youtu.be/iXcaQm6Tn6I
Andy
November 27th, 2020 01:39
Goldfinch60 said:
Singing and dancing for you shows love forever.
As for \'stroking the rim\'
https://youtu.be/iXcaQm6Tn6I
Andy
November 27th, 2020 01:39
Me & my Singing Bowl
Michael Edwards said:
Aaaaah. And now it\'s Dawn. Does Dawn sing and dance?
November 27th, 2020 00:33
Michael Edwards said:
Aaaaah. And now it\'s Dawn. Does Dawn sing and dance?
November 27th, 2020 00:33
Me & my Singing Bowl
Christina8 said:
Sounds fun....I really enjoyed this sensuous poem!!...C
November 26th, 2020 19:11
Christina8 said:
Sounds fun....I really enjoyed this sensuous poem!!...C
November 26th, 2020 19:11
Me & my Singing Bowl
dusk arising said:
There\'s a sweet-spot on their \'rim\' and dance they surely will but..... it\'s the singing gets to you isn\'t it. It\'s a music which once heard you just can\'t live without.
Well that\'s what my imagination tells these deaf ears anyway.
November 26th, 2020 15:27
dusk arising said:
There\'s a sweet-spot on their \'rim\' and dance they surely will but..... it\'s the singing gets to you isn\'t it. It\'s a music which once heard you just can\'t live without.
Well that\'s what my imagination tells these deaf ears anyway.
November 26th, 2020 15:27
Me & my Singing Bowl
Fay Slimm. said:
The gender of this graceful but potent relationship makes the singing-bowl ode semi sensuous to my immediate thinking mi amigo - or is it my mind becoming too wayward with today\'s warm and mellow sunshine - - a spicy read nevertheless and all with your impressive know-how of when and where to put emphasis this is so clever and very engaging...............x
November 26th, 2020 12:10
Fay Slimm. said:
The gender of this graceful but potent relationship makes the singing-bowl ode semi sensuous to my immediate thinking mi amigo - or is it my mind becoming too wayward with today\'s warm and mellow sunshine - - a spicy read nevertheless and all with your impressive know-how of when and where to put emphasis this is so clever and very engaging...............x
November 26th, 2020 12:10
Me & my Singing Bowl
orchidee said:
Glad some ones are singing - better than me?! lol.
November 26th, 2020 06:59
orchidee said:
Glad some ones are singing - better than me?! lol.
November 26th, 2020 06:59
Those Who Would Love Light
Dove said:
Oh love light be true, Tis heaven to inspire such beauty, Tis glory to have a Poet , love you
and be inspired to create such great poetry!
I’ll just live in the light beams refracted from your sweet poetry !
November 25th, 2020 23:32
Dove said:
Oh love light be true, Tis heaven to inspire such beauty, Tis glory to have a Poet , love you
and be inspired to create such great poetry!
I’ll just live in the light beams refracted from your sweet poetry !
November 25th, 2020 23:32
Those Who Would Love Light
Christina8 said:
A stunning ode to your lady.....thanks for another wonderful poem, n! x
November 25th, 2020 11:27
Christina8 said:
A stunning ode to your lady.....thanks for another wonderful poem, n! x
November 25th, 2020 11:27
Those Who Would Love Light
RDS said:
It\'s in the eye and the ear what a beautiful reminder that love is always here. Even in dust and shifting beams of sunlight. Thanks for a lovely read Neville.
November 25th, 2020 05:28
RDS said:
It\'s in the eye and the ear what a beautiful reminder that love is always here. Even in dust and shifting beams of sunlight. Thanks for a lovely read Neville.
November 25th, 2020 05:28
Those Who Would Love Light
Fay Slimm. said:
This bouquet of exquisite medley carries the scent of true poetic talent which catches my breath and warms my heart-felt confession that this must be one your best mon ami - a real and true favourite and already heading my list to read yet again................x
November 24th, 2020 12:16
Fay Slimm. said:
This bouquet of exquisite medley carries the scent of true poetic talent which catches my breath and warms my heart-felt confession that this must be one your best mon ami - a real and true favourite and already heading my list to read yet again................x
November 24th, 2020 12:16
Those Who Would Love Light
L. B. Mek said:
well Sir, this here be testimony to resulting fruition of poetry dipped in elegance of mesmeric transcendence, when we witness the marriage of talent with its inspiringly majestic muse...
\'Dancing
with dust motes
in an arc before falling
Like light
refracted and traced
upon a glorious chapter
Prismed
and flawless\'
how wondrously you decipher the rainbow gift\'s of life, from the dreary of reality,
a great write my friend!
November 24th, 2020 05:05
L. B. Mek said:
well Sir, this here be testimony to resulting fruition of poetry dipped in elegance of mesmeric transcendence, when we witness the marriage of talent with its inspiringly majestic muse...
\'Dancing
with dust motes
in an arc before falling
Like light
refracted and traced
upon a glorious chapter
Prismed
and flawless\'
how wondrously you decipher the rainbow gift\'s of life, from the dreary of reality,
a great write my friend!
November 24th, 2020 05:05
Those Who Would Love Light
dusk arising said:
The bringing together of love\'s desire and fantasy with the tangible presence of love realised sund in your fine words today.
November 24th, 2020 04:04
dusk arising said:
The bringing together of love\'s desire and fantasy with the tangible presence of love realised sund in your fine words today.
November 24th, 2020 04:04
Those Who Would Love Light
orchidee said:
Good write Neville.
I\'m a disaster waiting to happen - well, If I say \'I\'m about to sing\', that is! lol.
November 24th, 2020 02:56
orchidee said:
Good write Neville.
I\'m a disaster waiting to happen - well, If I say \'I\'m about to sing\', that is! lol.
November 24th, 2020 02:56
Those Who Would Love Light
Goldfinch60 said:
May the reading of her be love forever.
Andy
November 24th, 2020 01:51
Goldfinch60 said:
May the reading of her be love forever.
Andy
November 24th, 2020 01:51
Another Golden Dawn
L. B. Mek said:
well, that\'s one memorable morning - Eos gifted you my friend, though having come to understand you a little through your writes, I\'ll tender a tentative bet - that your words were inspired more: by your nocturnal triumph(s), than that Sunshine you immortalise with such eloquence,
great read
November 23rd, 2020 04:40
L. B. Mek said:
well, that\'s one memorable morning - Eos gifted you my friend, though having come to understand you a little through your writes, I\'ll tender a tentative bet - that your words were inspired more: by your nocturnal triumph(s), than that Sunshine you immortalise with such eloquence,
great read
November 23rd, 2020 04:40
Another Golden Dawn
orchidee said:
Good write Neville.
I thought you meant Dawn. I was about to meet the lass! I never seem to meet \'em though. Will it be too much for me? lol
November 23rd, 2020 02:52
orchidee said:
Good write Neville.
I thought you meant Dawn. I was about to meet the lass! I never seem to meet \'em though. Will it be too much for me? lol
November 23rd, 2020 02:52
Another Golden Dawn
Goldfinch60 said:
Each day that is raised from the dark shows us a new life. We have that new life in each new day.
Andy
November 23rd, 2020 01:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Each day that is raised from the dark shows us a new life. We have that new life in each new day.
Andy
November 23rd, 2020 01:22
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