Comments received on poems by Neville
Nevafar
orchidee said:
Oooh, I gotta meet her - this French lass! Will it so me any good?
November 8th, 2020 10:17
orchidee said:
Oooh, I gotta meet her - this French lass! Will it so me any good?
November 8th, 2020 10:17
Nevafar
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah --- \"I will come back\" How compelling the sounds of those words from a lover - this emotive read smacks of long lonely waiting but with a lifting last line - hope can open doors long thought closed.
November 8th, 2020 09:05
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah --- \"I will come back\" How compelling the sounds of those words from a lover - this emotive read smacks of long lonely waiting but with a lifting last line - hope can open doors long thought closed.
November 8th, 2020 09:05
Nevafar
dusk arising said:
Somethings are said and linger. They tease hope when time should have erased it. Encourage the romance of daydreams until her indoors shouts at us in indignation.
Then along comes flippin schwarzenegger with his \"I\'ll be back\" and makes a nonsense of our romancing.
Lovely atmospheric romantic poem Neville. I wonder what/who she\'s doing now.
November 8th, 2020 09:02
dusk arising said:
Somethings are said and linger. They tease hope when time should have erased it. Encourage the romance of daydreams until her indoors shouts at us in indignation.
Then along comes flippin schwarzenegger with his \"I\'ll be back\" and makes a nonsense of our romancing.
Lovely atmospheric romantic poem Neville. I wonder what/who she\'s doing now.
November 8th, 2020 09:02
Unity of Opposites
dusk arising said:
Opposites are often closer than is apparent in the sphere of human affairs. Yet the ego strives to differ and succeed.
A tranquil peace comes with the compromise you suggest. So long as the genie (ego) is kept in the bottle.
November 7th, 2020 05:50
dusk arising said:
Opposites are often closer than is apparent in the sphere of human affairs. Yet the ego strives to differ and succeed.
A tranquil peace comes with the compromise you suggest. So long as the genie (ego) is kept in the bottle.
November 7th, 2020 05:50
Unity of Opposites
FineB said:
Hello Neville,
A good write.
Well opposites attract.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during lockdown.
FineB
November 7th, 2020 04:04
FineB said:
Hello Neville,
A good write.
Well opposites attract.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during lockdown.
FineB
November 7th, 2020 04:04
Unity of Opposites
Fay Slimm. said:
Relatable words on how easy co-existence can be achieved my friend and what it means to any relationship - - something to ponder in these times of quick opposition that the unity of opposites is a beautiful thing when realized ......... inspiring thoughts in this small nugget of wisdom - -here\'s wishing your good self a peaceful weekend...........x
November 7th, 2020 03:32
Fay Slimm. said:
Relatable words on how easy co-existence can be achieved my friend and what it means to any relationship - - something to ponder in these times of quick opposition that the unity of opposites is a beautiful thing when realized ......... inspiring thoughts in this small nugget of wisdom - -here\'s wishing your good self a peaceful weekend...........x
November 7th, 2020 03:32
Unity of Opposites
orchidee said:
Good write Neville.
No reason why I should get chalk and cheese mixed up, but I did.
That sandwich tasted chalky, and me snooker cue smelt cheesy!
November 7th, 2020 03:04
orchidee said:
Good write Neville.
No reason why I should get chalk and cheese mixed up, but I did.
That sandwich tasted chalky, and me snooker cue smelt cheesy!
November 7th, 2020 03:04
Unity of Opposites
Goldfinch60 said:
Co-existence should always be applied then the world would be a better place.
Andy
November 7th, 2020 01:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Co-existence should always be applied then the world would be a better place.
Andy
November 7th, 2020 01:54
Roosting
Dove said:
Awe! Cutenesses galore! and this little birdie needs a fur coat,
November 4th, 2020 20:52
Dove said:
Awe! Cutenesses galore! and this little birdie needs a fur coat,
November 4th, 2020 20:52
Roosting
Fay Slimm. said:
The voice of a she-bird calling from below the auditory level means the male is in for a winter treat - or so methinks........ or maybe tis a hen roosting and not wanting disturbance...........x
November 4th, 2020 13:46
Fay Slimm. said:
The voice of a she-bird calling from below the auditory level means the male is in for a winter treat - or so methinks........ or maybe tis a hen roosting and not wanting disturbance...........x
November 4th, 2020 13:46
Roosting
Michael Edwards said:
Another lock in - it\'s times like this that I wish I were a free range chicken.
love the write.
November 3rd, 2020 11:50
Michael Edwards said:
Another lock in - it\'s times like this that I wish I were a free range chicken.
love the write.
November 3rd, 2020 11:50
Roosting
L. B. Mek said:
what a welcome song to Winter,
even within frozen bitterness remains the remnant sweetness: of cherished existence...
good read
November 3rd, 2020 07:05
L. B. Mek said:
what a welcome song to Winter,
even within frozen bitterness remains the remnant sweetness: of cherished existence...
good read
November 3rd, 2020 07:05
Little Shepherdesses
L. B. Mek said:
good enough to make me look-up meaning of \'shepherdesses\',
a slide within words to classic literature time\'s,
some may argue its moral compass when choosing to view some aspects through modern day \'all knowing\' glasses of herd mentality, judicial PC morality indexes, maybe...
I though, read your write as a melancholic nod to those classic wordsmiths: who sang their reality with such wonderous creativity,
a unique demonstration of modern mindset\'s utilising Poetry\'s inherited tools and skills, to create works that celebrate its mesmeric legacy,
great write
November 2nd, 2020 05:52
L. B. Mek said:
good enough to make me look-up meaning of \'shepherdesses\',
a slide within words to classic literature time\'s,
some may argue its moral compass when choosing to view some aspects through modern day \'all knowing\' glasses of herd mentality, judicial PC morality indexes, maybe...
I though, read your write as a melancholic nod to those classic wordsmiths: who sang their reality with such wonderous creativity,
a unique demonstration of modern mindset\'s utilising Poetry\'s inherited tools and skills, to create works that celebrate its mesmeric legacy,
great write
November 2nd, 2020 05:52
Little Shepherdesses
Goldfinch60 said:
The innocence of childhood is shown in your words Neville, if only that innocence would progress into their older lives.
Andy
November 2nd, 2020 01:41
Goldfinch60 said:
The innocence of childhood is shown in your words Neville, if only that innocence would progress into their older lives.
Andy
November 2nd, 2020 01:41
Little Shepherdesses
Michael Edwards said:
All the paths I have walked through natures realm and I\'ve yet to see shepherdesses but I live in hope. Love the write Neville
November 1st, 2020 13:19
Michael Edwards said:
All the paths I have walked through natures realm and I\'ve yet to see shepherdesses but I live in hope. Love the write Neville
November 1st, 2020 13:19
Little Shepherdesses
FineB said:
Hi Neville,
Thank you for an enchanting write.
I might have bumped into your
shepherdesses last week on my travels last week.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
November 1st, 2020 13:11
FineB said:
Hi Neville,
Thank you for an enchanting write.
I might have bumped into your
shepherdesses last week on my travels last week.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
November 1st, 2020 13:11
Little Shepherdesses
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - - for some reason this write reminded me of the olde ballad - -\"Nyphs and Shepherds\" being told repeatedly to \"Come Away -\" - I admit though that those naughty shepherdesses were a bit tempting - -- a big smile raised after this read today Nev........ fank u ever so.......x
November 1st, 2020 06:40
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - - for some reason this write reminded me of the olde ballad - -\"Nyphs and Shepherds\" being told repeatedly to \"Come Away -\" - I admit though that those naughty shepherdesses were a bit tempting - -- a big smile raised after this read today Nev........ fank u ever so.......x
November 1st, 2020 06:40
Little Shepherdesses
dusk arising said:
What a lovely bright and dare i say \'jolly\' poem. Great light hearted spirit about it all which is refreshing in todays climate. Good length and uniformity.... to paraphrase you \'it sits on the page very well\'.
November 1st, 2020 06:29
dusk arising said:
What a lovely bright and dare i say \'jolly\' poem. Great light hearted spirit about it all which is refreshing in todays climate. Good length and uniformity.... to paraphrase you \'it sits on the page very well\'.
November 1st, 2020 06:29
Little Shepherdesses
orchidee said:
They having fun?! A roll in the hay? Glad some people are! Fido won\'t let me \'frolic\'. He\'s a sheepdog in disguise today, gone to spy on them! heehee.
November 1st, 2020 05:33
orchidee said:
They having fun?! A roll in the hay? Glad some people are! Fido won\'t let me \'frolic\'. He\'s a sheepdog in disguise today, gone to spy on them! heehee.
November 1st, 2020 05:33
Innerness
Dove said:
Pretty cool write! Wilderness within
sounds like fun to explore!
Are your gates open?
I Think your shades are pretty cool!
Me thinks you need sun tan lotion
October 29th, 2020 22:04
Dove said:
Pretty cool write! Wilderness within
sounds like fun to explore!
Are your gates open?
I Think your shades are pretty cool!
Me thinks you need sun tan lotion
October 29th, 2020 22:04
Innerness
L. B. Mek said:
\'Where you would have boundaries
there is a burn mark on my skin\'
Brilliant!
October 29th, 2020 04:45
L. B. Mek said:
\'Where you would have boundaries
there is a burn mark on my skin\'
Brilliant!
October 29th, 2020 04:45
Innerness
Goldfinch60 said:
Within ourselves is a vast wilderness and wildness that can take us to such wonderful places in our minds and hearts.
Andy
October 29th, 2020 01:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Within ourselves is a vast wilderness and wildness that can take us to such wonderful places in our minds and hearts.
Andy
October 29th, 2020 01:54
Innerness
orchidee said:
Could I meet her, or is she all yours? I barge in without asking sometimes, it seems. lol.
October 28th, 2020 05:17
orchidee said:
Could I meet her, or is she all yours? I barge in without asking sometimes, it seems. lol.
October 28th, 2020 05:17
Innerness
dusk arising said:
In my case the world within would be more aptly described as a thicket. Overgrown with the weeds of lost causes seeded by the fallen fruits of past desire.... but enough of me.
Tell her not to mark her would be boundaries with poured candle wax upon your tortured flesh sir. For your body is a temple, fallen to ruin maybe, but still deserving of respect.
Oh the games you play with my mind, capable of such perverse yet simple thought. Another intriguing write.
October 28th, 2020 05:02
dusk arising said:
In my case the world within would be more aptly described as a thicket. Overgrown with the weeds of lost causes seeded by the fallen fruits of past desire.... but enough of me.
Tell her not to mark her would be boundaries with poured candle wax upon your tortured flesh sir. For your body is a temple, fallen to ruin maybe, but still deserving of respect.
Oh the games you play with my mind, capable of such perverse yet simple thought. Another intriguing write.
October 28th, 2020 05:02
Innerness
Fay Slimm. said:
Wildness inside - that holds a truth when boundaries are shattered by boundless passion......... what an invite when all outside feels confined to tame................. brilliant write again Nev.
October 28th, 2020 04:49
Fay Slimm. said:
Wildness inside - that holds a truth when boundaries are shattered by boundless passion......... what an invite when all outside feels confined to tame................. brilliant write again Nev.
October 28th, 2020 04:49
Hiding Behind New Dust
Goldfinch60 said:
When we remove the dust from our lives we always see what beauty we had during that life.
Andy
October 28th, 2020 01:46
Goldfinch60 said:
When we remove the dust from our lives we always see what beauty we had during that life.
Andy
October 28th, 2020 01:46
Hiding Behind New Dust
Fay Slimm. said:
Beauty tho\' dust-trapped finds ways through to let shine its attraction and to whomsoever - as does this write dear Nev. with such a spark of beguile behind every line.
October 27th, 2020 11:02
Fay Slimm. said:
Beauty tho\' dust-trapped finds ways through to let shine its attraction and to whomsoever - as does this write dear Nev. with such a spark of beguile behind every line.
October 27th, 2020 11:02
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