Comments received on poems by Neville
Sky Hungry
Fay Slimm. said:
I love this impressive flight of fancy where \"sky lay-bys\" give hours of aloneness with someone you love - --what a notion eh - that potent finalé will stay long after the read in the mind of this reader.
August 21st, 2020 02:14
Fay Slimm. said:
I love this impressive flight of fancy where \"sky lay-bys\" give hours of aloneness with someone you love - --what a notion eh - that potent finalé will stay long after the read in the mind of this reader.
August 21st, 2020 02:14
Sky Hungry
dusk arising said:
Speaks of out admiration for the birds and the desire to fly.... fly free and away from material ties.
You took me to my dream worlds of long ago here Neville and yes, who better than a dream lover to accompany.
August 21st, 2020 02:06
dusk arising said:
Speaks of out admiration for the birds and the desire to fly.... fly free and away from material ties.
You took me to my dream worlds of long ago here Neville and yes, who better than a dream lover to accompany.
August 21st, 2020 02:06
Sky Hungry
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Friday Neville - Love the Metaphors & Fantasies ! Yes I do envy BIRDS their 3D existance and *Birds Eye View* of things. Fish as well but they do miss *The Beauty of the Earth* I have parachuted (to raise money for a scanner) but *Hang Gliding* is on My list ! When GOD created us *A Litte Lower than the Angels* He forgot the Wings. I have been down the Grand Canyon in the front seat of a Helicopter - Next best thing ! Thanks for Sharing - Please check *BRIDGES* Thanks A & B !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela - Brian - Smokey ! ! !
August 21st, 2020 00:49
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Friday Neville - Love the Metaphors & Fantasies ! Yes I do envy BIRDS their 3D existance and *Birds Eye View* of things. Fish as well but they do miss *The Beauty of the Earth* I have parachuted (to raise money for a scanner) but *Hang Gliding* is on My list ! When GOD created us *A Litte Lower than the Angels* He forgot the Wings. I have been down the Grand Canyon in the front seat of a Helicopter - Next best thing ! Thanks for Sharing - Please check *BRIDGES* Thanks A & B !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela - Brian - Smokey ! ! !
August 21st, 2020 00:49
Sky Hungry
Goldfinch60 said:
I can associate with this Neville as i have always said that when I come back I want to be a buzzard, just hanging in the sky looking down on the world.
Andy
August 21st, 2020 00:16
Goldfinch60 said:
I can associate with this Neville as i have always said that when I come back I want to be a buzzard, just hanging in the sky looking down on the world.
Andy
August 21st, 2020 00:16
Crimson Ribbon
L. B. Mek said:
subtle, ever so subtle in delivery but, thunderously poignant!
indeed a message that is timely in bringing awareness to something that most urgently needs it,
these self isolation conditions have truly created more and more unbearable conditions for some of the most vulnerable in our society
August 20th, 2020 05:00
L. B. Mek said:
subtle, ever so subtle in delivery but, thunderously poignant!
indeed a message that is timely in bringing awareness to something that most urgently needs it,
these self isolation conditions have truly created more and more unbearable conditions for some of the most vulnerable in our society
August 20th, 2020 05:00
Pretty as a Pin
Fay Slimm. said:
Rag-tied cotton-capped hair would put any male off methinks but maybe Horatio must have looking at that sheepish grin - - - - laughin\' I am thinkin\' o\' that pretty scene all the way to me sinless breakfast............x
August 20th, 2020 04:32
Fay Slimm. said:
Rag-tied cotton-capped hair would put any male off methinks but maybe Horatio must have looking at that sheepish grin - - - - laughin\' I am thinkin\' o\' that pretty scene all the way to me sinless breakfast............x
August 20th, 2020 04:32
Pretty as a Pin
L. B. Mek said:
my friend have you been reading Harry Flashman\'s tales - again...
\'whey hey\' indeed, a fun start to my day, thank you
August 20th, 2020 03:44
L. B. Mek said:
my friend have you been reading Harry Flashman\'s tales - again...
\'whey hey\' indeed, a fun start to my day, thank you
August 20th, 2020 03:44
Pretty as a Pin
dusk arising said:
All at sea over this little matelot\'s dream.... another mermaid? no way... with legs like those who wants fishtail soup anyway.
Kismet Hardy?... Or are ya firing broadsides someplace.....
A most stimulating read, Nelsons column could take yer eye out. You shouldn\'t be doing this to the ageing red blooded males in the mornings Neville.
August 20th, 2020 01:58
dusk arising said:
All at sea over this little matelot\'s dream.... another mermaid? no way... with legs like those who wants fishtail soup anyway.
Kismet Hardy?... Or are ya firing broadsides someplace.....
A most stimulating read, Nelsons column could take yer eye out. You shouldn\'t be doing this to the ageing red blooded males in the mornings Neville.
August 20th, 2020 01:58
Pretty as a Pin
orchidee said:
A bit of \'whey hey\' that early in the day?! Swoon! lol. A \'Carry on\' film I think, says: \'I\'m not against slap, but I object to a bit of tickle!\'
August 20th, 2020 01:50
orchidee said:
A bit of \'whey hey\' that early in the day?! Swoon! lol. A \'Carry on\' film I think, says: \'I\'m not against slap, but I object to a bit of tickle!\'
August 20th, 2020 01:50
Crimson Ribbon
orchidee said:
I gotta meet these gals. I\'m sure it\'s not the same gal each time. I dunno what I\'m missing! Back in 6 months, when I\'ve met them all. lol.
August 19th, 2020 11:31
orchidee said:
I gotta meet these gals. I\'m sure it\'s not the same gal each time. I dunno what I\'m missing! Back in 6 months, when I\'ve met them all. lol.
August 19th, 2020 11:31
Crimson Ribbon
Michael Edwards said:
You never fail to succeed - you have a style of your own and your choice of subject matter is inspired.
August 19th, 2020 11:24
Michael Edwards said:
You never fail to succeed - you have a style of your own and your choice of subject matter is inspired.
August 19th, 2020 11:24
Crimson Ribbon
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Angela here - Good afternoon Neville - Thnaks for a verry challenging comment in suppoert of Broken Women ! In my PHYSIO Clinic I get Clients from ORTHPEDIC whose limbs have been literally broken by violent & abusive MEN ! Often they are *Scared of & scarred by MEN* and prefer a Female Physio with lots of TLC. They need a lot of LOVE to help them HEAL Physically & Mentally. Because I am Catholic I wear a Cross and we have a Nun in the Hospital Chaplaincy - who will pray with them !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian & Smokey 💛💛💛
August 19th, 2020 08:44
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Angela here - Good afternoon Neville - Thnaks for a verry challenging comment in suppoert of Broken Women ! In my PHYSIO Clinic I get Clients from ORTHPEDIC whose limbs have been literally broken by violent & abusive MEN ! Often they are *Scared of & scarred by MEN* and prefer a Female Physio with lots of TLC. They need a lot of LOVE to help them HEAL Physically & Mentally. Because I am Catholic I wear a Cross and we have a Nun in the Hospital Chaplaincy - who will pray with them !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian & Smokey 💛💛💛
August 19th, 2020 08:44
Crimson Ribbon
Fay Slimm. said:
The fate of some females is frayed just like your tender verse says like ribbon and oft-times from birth they have abuse to crimson the colour of sadness - a truly moving write on a growing section of modern community - thanks for the caring reminder Nev.
August 19th, 2020 04:35
Fay Slimm. said:
The fate of some females is frayed just like your tender verse says like ribbon and oft-times from birth they have abuse to crimson the colour of sadness - a truly moving write on a growing section of modern community - thanks for the caring reminder Nev.
August 19th, 2020 04:35
Crimson Ribbon
Neville said:
..Thanks Andy ... much appreciated sir .. I had one of them heads on today ..
.. Neville
August 19th, 2020 04:19
Neville said:
..Thanks Andy ... much appreciated sir .. I had one of them heads on today ..
.. Neville
August 19th, 2020 04:19
A Mermaids Tale
MendedFences27 said:
A tail of fantasy, breaking through the waves, instilling flight ambitions, and disappearing with the return of reality.
Brief and colorful descriptions, just enough to wet the readers appetite,
a bit of sadness at the end \"a sigh on the wind.\" and acceptance of the impossible, \" I just knew I could fly.\" altogether a great tale superbly rendered. Thanks for a brief moment of fantasy. - Phil A.
August 18th, 2020 13:56
MendedFences27 said:
A tail of fantasy, breaking through the waves, instilling flight ambitions, and disappearing with the return of reality.
Brief and colorful descriptions, just enough to wet the readers appetite,
a bit of sadness at the end \"a sigh on the wind.\" and acceptance of the impossible, \" I just knew I could fly.\" altogether a great tale superbly rendered. Thanks for a brief moment of fantasy. - Phil A.
August 18th, 2020 13:56
A Mermaids Tale
dusk arising said:
We all fly in our dreams and see the jewelry of our minds imagination - here the light reflects off the shimmering of mermaid incantation and then.... as if waking.... we are momentarily the bird but..... oh, here is reality again.
An absorbing, enchanting read which took me places which \\i enjoyed very much.... going to re-read now.
August 18th, 2020 12:23
dusk arising said:
We all fly in our dreams and see the jewelry of our minds imagination - here the light reflects off the shimmering of mermaid incantation and then.... as if waking.... we are momentarily the bird but..... oh, here is reality again.
An absorbing, enchanting read which took me places which \\i enjoyed very much.... going to re-read now.
August 18th, 2020 12:23
A Mermaids Tale
Fay Slimm. said:
The essence of mermaid tales are so well enfolded in this colourful read Nev. - - just imagine the magic of flying above the sightings of these legendary sea-maids - - great read.
August 18th, 2020 03:46
Fay Slimm. said:
The essence of mermaid tales are so well enfolded in this colourful read Nev. - - just imagine the magic of flying above the sightings of these legendary sea-maids - - great read.
August 18th, 2020 03:46
A Mermaids Tale
L. B. Mek said:
a fairy tale grounded in the reality of intricate details, wonderfully dreamy - immersive writing.
has that semblance of the child we carry within us, to our very end
August 18th, 2020 02:36
L. B. Mek said:
a fairy tale grounded in the reality of intricate details, wonderfully dreamy - immersive writing.
has that semblance of the child we carry within us, to our very end
August 18th, 2020 02:36
Wax Butterflies
orchidee said:
Note to self: If I got nothing sensible to say, don\'t say anything at all!
But then - I may not make any comments at all! lol.
How\'s that lass today?
August 18th, 2020 01:55
orchidee said:
Note to self: If I got nothing sensible to say, don\'t say anything at all!
But then - I may not make any comments at all! lol.
How\'s that lass today?
August 18th, 2020 01:55
Wax Butterflies
Goldfinch60 said:
Your words show how special she was in life and still is in your memories, those memories will be forever with you.
Andy
August 18th, 2020 00:04
Goldfinch60 said:
Your words show how special she was in life and still is in your memories, those memories will be forever with you.
Andy
August 18th, 2020 00:04
Wax Butterflies
MendedFences27 said:
Wax or otherwise, the life of a \"butterfly\" is short, and I read that this was a short relationship, \"appeared to me then to be drowning,\" \"yes this is me and I\'m free,\" but one well remembered, \" I do still miss her.\"
Fond memories arising on occasion, along with a melancholy of \'maybe,\' \'what if?\' A sesual recall that ends on, \"they both disappeared and were gone.\" I especially liked the casual tone of this poem. It brings the images into focus as a casual occurrence, but now remains with a powerful draw. Loved it. - Phil A.
August 17th, 2020 16:45
MendedFences27 said:
Wax or otherwise, the life of a \"butterfly\" is short, and I read that this was a short relationship, \"appeared to me then to be drowning,\" \"yes this is me and I\'m free,\" but one well remembered, \" I do still miss her.\"
Fond memories arising on occasion, along with a melancholy of \'maybe,\' \'what if?\' A sesual recall that ends on, \"they both disappeared and were gone.\" I especially liked the casual tone of this poem. It brings the images into focus as a casual occurrence, but now remains with a powerful draw. Loved it. - Phil A.
August 17th, 2020 16:45
Wax Butterflies
dusk arising said:
A beautiful story told as if through a mist of mystery itself, memories, desire, regret, acceptance, a pleasure passed but not lost. Recounted as only true memories are, a collection of detail and emotion.
Another masterpiece in your style.
August 17th, 2020 06:43
dusk arising said:
A beautiful story told as if through a mist of mystery itself, memories, desire, regret, acceptance, a pleasure passed but not lost. Recounted as only true memories are, a collection of detail and emotion.
Another masterpiece in your style.
August 17th, 2020 06:43
Wax Butterflies
L. B. Mek said:
how easy your words flow, tripping us from one stanza to the next, simple lines - morphing to deeply contemplative metaphorical imagery:
\'Much like that wax butterfly
she once took from the window
to protect
and keep out of the sun ..\'
liked the intrigue element as well
August 17th, 2020 03:45
L. B. Mek said:
how easy your words flow, tripping us from one stanza to the next, simple lines - morphing to deeply contemplative metaphorical imagery:
\'Much like that wax butterfly
she once took from the window
to protect
and keep out of the sun ..\'
liked the intrigue element as well
August 17th, 2020 03:45
Wax Butterflies
orchidee said:
Good write Neville.
Did she run off with me when she disappeared? Probably! lol.
August 17th, 2020 02:09
orchidee said:
Good write Neville.
Did she run off with me when she disappeared? Probably! lol.
August 17th, 2020 02:09
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