Comments received on poems by Neville
True Colours
Fay Slimm. said:
Colours though hidden will change to show truth. The bleed of our real selves so poetically expressed Nev as exposure exudes from your accusative words - - with more than a nod of agreement from me............ :)
April 15th, 2020 09:58
Fay Slimm. said:
Colours though hidden will change to show truth. The bleed of our real selves so poetically expressed Nev as exposure exudes from your accusative words - - with more than a nod of agreement from me............ :)
April 15th, 2020 09:58
Strategic Goodbyes
orchidee said:
A thoughtful write Neville.
Erm, I not quite got the hang of it - I\'m placing strategic goodbyes - here a goodbye, there a goodbye. I sound like Old MacDonald on his farm! You seen Old Mac lately? I will shut up now! lol.
April 14th, 2020 01:44
orchidee said:
A thoughtful write Neville.
Erm, I not quite got the hang of it - I\'m placing strategic goodbyes - here a goodbye, there a goodbye. I sound like Old MacDonald on his farm! You seen Old Mac lately? I will shut up now! lol.
April 14th, 2020 01:44
Strategic Goodbyes
Goldfinch60 said:
That special place is there for us all and we will meet there one day.
Andy
April 14th, 2020 01:01
Goldfinch60 said:
That special place is there for us all and we will meet there one day.
Andy
April 14th, 2020 01:01
Strategic Goodbyes
Fay Slimm. said:
You create such scenes of emotive saga with this ballad of strategic goodbyes - - how many times fate draws curtains on previous endings as beaches cover poignant memories - - -slowly your lines sketch pictures of long ago helpless experience left as dead with no going back. So cleverly intriguing again Nev.
April 13th, 2020 17:06
Fay Slimm. said:
You create such scenes of emotive saga with this ballad of strategic goodbyes - - how many times fate draws curtains on previous endings as beaches cover poignant memories - - -slowly your lines sketch pictures of long ago helpless experience left as dead with no going back. So cleverly intriguing again Nev.
April 13th, 2020 17:06
Strategic Goodbyes
dusk arising said:
Not only do i hear that chill wind blowing through your words but i can feel it across my back and it brings a shudder to my easter monday evening.
I\'m unsure of what i have read and the meaning therein but it\'s effect was quite pronounced.
It is a dark piece and today i don\'t want to pry.
Once again your talent lifts off the page with effect. Could have done without the shudder.
April 13th, 2020 13:36
dusk arising said:
Not only do i hear that chill wind blowing through your words but i can feel it across my back and it brings a shudder to my easter monday evening.
I\'m unsure of what i have read and the meaning therein but it\'s effect was quite pronounced.
It is a dark piece and today i don\'t want to pry.
Once again your talent lifts off the page with effect. Could have done without the shudder.
April 13th, 2020 13:36
Ma Hal Khe Te
Fay Slimm. said:
The return makes up for all that unwanted distance my friend - waste well maybe - but time has its reasons methinks................ x
April 13th, 2020 06:00
Fay Slimm. said:
The return makes up for all that unwanted distance my friend - waste well maybe - but time has its reasons methinks................ x
April 13th, 2020 06:00
Ma Hal Khe Te
Goldfinch60 said:
You will certainly be with her one day Neville.
Andy
April 13th, 2020 01:08
Goldfinch60 said:
You will certainly be with her one day Neville.
Andy
April 13th, 2020 01:08
Ma Hal Khe Te
FineB said:
I promise I will kind Sir,
Stay fit, healthy and well during this pandemic.
FineB
April 12th, 2020 12:05
FineB said:
I promise I will kind Sir,
Stay fit, healthy and well during this pandemic.
FineB
April 12th, 2020 12:05
Ma Hal Khe Te
FineB said:
Hi Neville,
An enchanting and vivid write.
Keep writing FineB
April 12th, 2020 11:37
FineB said:
Hi Neville,
An enchanting and vivid write.
Keep writing FineB
April 12th, 2020 11:37
Ma Hal Khe Te
dusk arising said:
May you find purpose anew in the time left/allotted to you before that event.
I\'m sure there is much poetry within you.... may you one day move the world one step on.
April 12th, 2020 11:21
dusk arising said:
May you find purpose anew in the time left/allotted to you before that event.
I\'m sure there is much poetry within you.... may you one day move the world one step on.
April 12th, 2020 11:21
Not Quite Out of the Blue
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Making it up as we go along?
Great write very well captured moment in time Neville
April 12th, 2020 06:16
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Making it up as we go along?
Great write very well captured moment in time Neville
April 12th, 2020 06:16
Not Quite Out of the Blue
Goldfinch60 said:
There is an opinion that this virus was created deliberately to remove the weak and the old codgers like me from the world so somebody planned this.
The one thing that seems to be coming out of this is that many people are becoming more helpful towards others, I hope this continue and the world will be come a much better and friendlier place to live in.
Andy
April 12th, 2020 00:55
Goldfinch60 said:
There is an opinion that this virus was created deliberately to remove the weak and the old codgers like me from the world so somebody planned this.
The one thing that seems to be coming out of this is that many people are becoming more helpful towards others, I hope this continue and the world will be come a much better and friendlier place to live in.
Andy
April 12th, 2020 00:55
Not Quite Out of the Blue
SerenWise said:
Very relevant and truthful. Good work
April 11th, 2020 15:18
SerenWise said:
Very relevant and truthful. Good work
April 11th, 2020 15:18
Not Quite Out of the Blue
dusk arising said:
Strangely Dean Koontz in a 1980/90 novel predicted a virus eminating from wuhan in china would sweep the world with devastating effect in early 2020.... (google it)
I didnt see it coming but we have been tempting fate haven\'t we as the so called western educated world with our clever capitalist led ways of life. Each of us comfortably numb to certain realities.
Fear is now an everyday experience for us all... we do not know where we are going with this in our relaxed society. We can hardly look to a neat and tidy end to this as appears to be happening in china for we are far from comparable to their authoritarian regeime.
April 11th, 2020 13:07
dusk arising said:
Strangely Dean Koontz in a 1980/90 novel predicted a virus eminating from wuhan in china would sweep the world with devastating effect in early 2020.... (google it)
I didnt see it coming but we have been tempting fate haven\'t we as the so called western educated world with our clever capitalist led ways of life. Each of us comfortably numb to certain realities.
Fear is now an everyday experience for us all... we do not know where we are going with this in our relaxed society. We can hardly look to a neat and tidy end to this as appears to be happening in china for we are far from comparable to their authoritarian regeime.
April 11th, 2020 13:07
Not Quite Out of the Blue
orchidee said:
We (all of us?) are going to require even more of the PM and Co., when he recovers, I suspect - going through his own crisis at present.
I don\'t have much opinion of the political side.
Do your daughter and partner have \'temporary\' PPE? Thinking of you all.
April 11th, 2020 12:12
orchidee said:
We (all of us?) are going to require even more of the PM and Co., when he recovers, I suspect - going through his own crisis at present.
I don\'t have much opinion of the political side.
Do your daughter and partner have \'temporary\' PPE? Thinking of you all.
April 11th, 2020 12:12
Not Quite Out of the Blue
Michael Edwards said:
It sure wasn\'t out of the blue - all the signs were there. Much enjoyed this in as much as one can about this horrible issue.
April 11th, 2020 10:34
Michael Edwards said:
It sure wasn\'t out of the blue - all the signs were there. Much enjoyed this in as much as one can about this horrible issue.
April 11th, 2020 10:34
The Eleventh Hour
Fay Slimm. said:
Many eleventh hours make escapees quake with what appears next and you hit the nail firmly with the last couplet my friend. A beguiling read to be read again.......... hence into my list of faves this goes.
April 10th, 2020 07:38
Fay Slimm. said:
Many eleventh hours make escapees quake with what appears next and you hit the nail firmly with the last couplet my friend. A beguiling read to be read again.......... hence into my list of faves this goes.
April 10th, 2020 07:38
The Eleventh Hour
dusk arising said:
Now look here Noah, I told you that bloody boat would get stuck in the lock.
You sure know how to write intriguing pieces.... a sure recipe to get me re-reading several times.
I\'m left feeling i just skimmed the plot of six wonderful novels. I take my hat off to ya.
April 10th, 2020 07:28
dusk arising said:
Now look here Noah, I told you that bloody boat would get stuck in the lock.
You sure know how to write intriguing pieces.... a sure recipe to get me re-reading several times.
I\'m left feeling i just skimmed the plot of six wonderful novels. I take my hat off to ya.
April 10th, 2020 07:28
The Eleventh Hour
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville.
I was not rescued. It\'s my own fault. I thought it was the eleventh hour, but it was the day the clocks changed. lol.
April 10th, 2020 06:11
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville.
I was not rescued. It\'s my own fault. I thought it was the eleventh hour, but it was the day the clocks changed. lol.
April 10th, 2020 06:11
Birdsong
Goldfinch60 said:
So true, the violin section in Nature\'s Orchestra.
Andy
April 10th, 2020 01:08
Goldfinch60 said:
So true, the violin section in Nature\'s Orchestra.
Andy
April 10th, 2020 01:08
Birdsong
Michael Edwards said:
One of the aural joys of this world so simply expressed.
April 9th, 2020 16:14
Michael Edwards said:
One of the aural joys of this world so simply expressed.
April 9th, 2020 16:14
Birdsong
dusk arising said:
And then she bit me!
For me the blackbirds evening song takes some beating.
As i have said before, i\'m a sucker for the short punchy meaningful pieces. This one ticks all the boxes. Delightful.
April 9th, 2020 13:43
dusk arising said:
And then she bit me!
For me the blackbirds evening song takes some beating.
As i have said before, i\'m a sucker for the short punchy meaningful pieces. This one ticks all the boxes. Delightful.
April 9th, 2020 13:43
Birdsong
thisismyidentity said:
So simply brings joy and warmth to the heart. Thank you for sharing.
April 9th, 2020 08:07
thisismyidentity said:
So simply brings joy and warmth to the heart. Thank you for sharing.
April 9th, 2020 08:07
Birdsong
orchidee said:
A lovely write Neville.
My poem is: \'The Awful Horror - Orville The Duck!\' lol.
April 9th, 2020 07:29
orchidee said:
A lovely write Neville.
My poem is: \'The Awful Horror - Orville The Duck!\' lol.
April 9th, 2020 07:29
Birdsong
Fay Slimm. said:
Naturally simple but beautifully expressed in these few lines Nev. ...and this I relate to each time I am working outside.... .. what better I ask.
April 9th, 2020 07:06
Fay Slimm. said:
Naturally simple but beautifully expressed in these few lines Nev. ...and this I relate to each time I am working outside.... .. what better I ask.
April 9th, 2020 07:06
Dont Kid Yourself
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Neville, just look at what Churchill did BEFORE WW2.
Andy
April 9th, 2020 01:36
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Neville, just look at what Churchill did BEFORE WW2.
Andy
April 9th, 2020 01:36
Dont Kid Yourself
Fay Slimm. said:
These words have been true for many a century - - - - making moves on behalf of others whether lives may be lost or not - politics controls whatever the country - - the point well made Neville........
April 8th, 2020 13:58
Fay Slimm. said:
These words have been true for many a century - - - - making moves on behalf of others whether lives may be lost or not - politics controls whatever the country - - the point well made Neville........
April 8th, 2020 13:58
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