Comments received on poems by Neville
Life Before Bar-codes
orchidee said:
Good write Neville. Yes, I was in a supermarket then. We had price-label \'guns\'. We were like children hiding our toys, as there were not enough guns to go round. Ridiculous! I hid mine the night before in the pet food section of the store\'s basement.
And yes - was there life before my singing?!
June 20th, 2019 02:59
orchidee said:
Good write Neville. Yes, I was in a supermarket then. We had price-label \'guns\'. We were like children hiding our toys, as there were not enough guns to go round. Ridiculous! I hid mine the night before in the pet food section of the store\'s basement.
And yes - was there life before my singing?!
June 20th, 2019 02:59
Erigeron
Suresh said:
I am sure I just saw a painting from Michael that\'s well described by your poetic words.
June 19th, 2019 16:29
Suresh said:
I am sure I just saw a painting from Michael that\'s well described by your poetic words.
June 19th, 2019 16:29
Erigeron
dusk arising said:
Hardy little bloomers - it still feels like winter here.
June 19th, 2019 14:13
dusk arising said:
Hardy little bloomers - it still feels like winter here.
June 19th, 2019 14:13
Erigeron
Goldfinch60 said:
That love can fill all the cracks that come with nature and the natural world.
June 19th, 2019 03:04
Goldfinch60 said:
That love can fill all the cracks that come with nature and the natural world.
June 19th, 2019 03:04
Erigeron
orchidee said:
I thought you meant Fleabag! heehee. A fine write Neville.
June 19th, 2019 02:07
orchidee said:
I thought you meant Fleabag! heehee. A fine write Neville.
June 19th, 2019 02:07
Let’s Call That Day a Week
dusk arising said:
All those things we\'ve talked about in our lives with so many. The more we talked, the more we learned. Do we have to be young to talk about them. Or do we need to be wise and listen to the reason people talk about the things they say. But... oh to be young and talking them through, and doing, and loving, and living... oh forget about learning and wisdom.... lets get laid!
June 18th, 2019 12:40
dusk arising said:
All those things we\'ve talked about in our lives with so many. The more we talked, the more we learned. Do we have to be young to talk about them. Or do we need to be wise and listen to the reason people talk about the things they say. But... oh to be young and talking them through, and doing, and loving, and living... oh forget about learning and wisdom.... lets get laid!
June 18th, 2019 12:40
Let’s Call That Day a Week
Suresh said:
What\'s the point!!!!!!!!
Let\'s just enjoy each other\'s company... no taking please
June 18th, 2019 10:55
Suresh said:
What\'s the point!!!!!!!!
Let\'s just enjoy each other\'s company... no taking please
June 18th, 2019 10:55
Let’s Call That Day a Week
orchidee said:
If you\'re gonna talk about those things, I\'m gonna swoon! heehee.
June 18th, 2019 01:49
orchidee said:
If you\'re gonna talk about those things, I\'m gonna swoon! heehee.
June 18th, 2019 01:49
Let’s Call That Day a Week
Goldfinch60 said:
May that one more day be willed with wonder joy and love.
June 18th, 2019 01:28
Goldfinch60 said:
May that one more day be willed with wonder joy and love.
June 18th, 2019 01:28
Let’s Call That Day a Week
Michael Edwards said:
Just keep talking - if only our politicians would just do that - better still if only they only would set aside all self-denial. Keep talking but more importantly keep listening.
June 18th, 2019 01:05
Michael Edwards said:
Just keep talking - if only our politicians would just do that - better still if only they only would set aside all self-denial. Keep talking but more importantly keep listening.
June 18th, 2019 01:05
Out of Sight
Suresh said:
Those words composed are out of sight
Those words composed are true delight
You have been doing this for quite some time.
June 17th, 2019 14:44
Suresh said:
Those words composed are out of sight
Those words composed are true delight
You have been doing this for quite some time.
June 17th, 2019 14:44
Out of Sight
dusk arising said:
Were we all able to read each others thoughts then your writing would be other worldly.
Sadly your words carry the truth.
Oh the joys of springtime.
June 17th, 2019 05:50
dusk arising said:
Were we all able to read each others thoughts then your writing would be other worldly.
Sadly your words carry the truth.
Oh the joys of springtime.
June 17th, 2019 05:50
Out of Sight
orchidee said:
You can write to me! I\'ll even pay for the stamp. You can think of me too. Just don\'t think of my singing! lol.
June 17th, 2019 05:02
orchidee said:
You can write to me! I\'ll even pay for the stamp. You can think of me too. Just don\'t think of my singing! lol.
June 17th, 2019 05:02
Out of the Blue
Goldfinch60 said:
In life you need to let go of that which has hurt you as the good in life will always outweigh the bad.
June 17th, 2019 00:07
Goldfinch60 said:
In life you need to let go of that which has hurt you as the good in life will always outweigh the bad.
June 17th, 2019 00:07
Out of the Blue
dusk arising said:
I\'ll quote some famous words to respond to your fine sweet and sour words today:-
“When you are joyous, look deep into your heart and you shall find it is only that which has given you sorrow that is giving you joy.”
― Kahlil Gibran, The Prophet
June 16th, 2019 08:59
dusk arising said:
I\'ll quote some famous words to respond to your fine sweet and sour words today:-
“When you are joyous, look deep into your heart and you shall find it is only that which has given you sorrow that is giving you joy.”
― Kahlil Gibran, The Prophet
June 16th, 2019 08:59
On Being Human
FineB said:
Hello Neville,
An awesome poem and incredibly vivid.
Being human is a complicated aspect of life itself.
Keep on writing
FineB
June 16th, 2019 03:02
FineB said:
Hello Neville,
An awesome poem and incredibly vivid.
Being human is a complicated aspect of life itself.
Keep on writing
FineB
June 16th, 2019 03:02
Old Poets
Goldfinch60 said:
Those words of poets live for ever in the minds of those who read them. Reading your words Neville consigns them to the glory of history, never to be forgotten.
June 16th, 2019 00:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Those words of poets live for ever in the minds of those who read them. Reading your words Neville consigns them to the glory of history, never to be forgotten.
June 16th, 2019 00:28
Versal Law
Suresh said:
Eroticism requires no translation,
whether written, spoken or acted,
where two bodies are entangled,
silence is its own composition
June 15th, 2019 15:46
Suresh said:
Eroticism requires no translation,
whether written, spoken or acted,
where two bodies are entangled,
silence is its own composition
June 15th, 2019 15:46
Old Poets
Suresh said:
So now we shall read you in publications only - though we graduated in the same year, agewise, I have a long way to go before even be called a poet
June 15th, 2019 12:31
Suresh said:
So now we shall read you in publications only - though we graduated in the same year, agewise, I have a long way to go before even be called a poet
June 15th, 2019 12:31
Old Poets
dusk arising said:
Life - a history lesson.
Without a history, whats to write about.
Long may you make more history Neville.
June 15th, 2019 10:56
dusk arising said:
Life - a history lesson.
Without a history, whats to write about.
Long may you make more history Neville.
June 15th, 2019 10:56
Old Poets
kevin browne said:
I\'ll have to agree with Michael, your poetry is quite exciting. I pretend to be a poet, but up against the immortals I am just a whisperer with a pen.
June 15th, 2019 08:51
kevin browne said:
I\'ll have to agree with Michael, your poetry is quite exciting. I pretend to be a poet, but up against the immortals I am just a whisperer with a pen.
June 15th, 2019 08:51
Before I Go Blind
Goldfinch60 said:
Very intriguing write, may they all come within you sight but be careful of seizing the sun it is a little warm.
June 14th, 2019 23:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Very intriguing write, may they all come within you sight but be careful of seizing the sun it is a little warm.
June 14th, 2019 23:55
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