Comments received on poems by Neville
Another Golden Dawn
Doggerel Dave said:
Metaphor or plain hard boiled reality? Keeps flipping for me... Can appreciate both, so thanks.
Regards Dave
November 22nd, 2020 18:41
Doggerel Dave said:
Metaphor or plain hard boiled reality? Keeps flipping for me... Can appreciate both, so thanks.
Regards Dave
November 22nd, 2020 18:41
Another Golden Dawn
Fay Slimm. said:
Much food for thought in this little gem. After the light is gone unclear may follow yet a window opens for those who gather to face another morrow, to welcome its treasure and wait for what they do not know - - needing no more than to watch for that glowing smile. Positivity in a poetic nutshell my friend.
November 22nd, 2020 18:02
Fay Slimm. said:
Much food for thought in this little gem. After the light is gone unclear may follow yet a window opens for those who gather to face another morrow, to welcome its treasure and wait for what they do not know - - needing no more than to watch for that glowing smile. Positivity in a poetic nutshell my friend.
November 22nd, 2020 18:02
Another Golden Dawn
Christina8 said:
Beautiful reflection.....love this poem!..C
November 22nd, 2020 14:11
Christina8 said:
Beautiful reflection.....love this poem!..C
November 22nd, 2020 14:11
Another Golden Dawn
dusk arising said:
There will always be a beacon light for eyes which see a future.
A light which those who turn, looking back and dwell upon yesterdays storm, cannot yet see.
Though reflection, within the light of tomorrow, gains us wisdom.
There you see, your pieces often make me dwell, and look beyond the words, to seek a pearl of wisdom condensed therein.
November 22nd, 2020 13:32
dusk arising said:
There will always be a beacon light for eyes which see a future.
A light which those who turn, looking back and dwell upon yesterdays storm, cannot yet see.
Though reflection, within the light of tomorrow, gains us wisdom.
There you see, your pieces often make me dwell, and look beyond the words, to seek a pearl of wisdom condensed therein.
November 22nd, 2020 13:32
Aperitif
Goldfinch60 said:
May that taste be forever with you Neville, she is very special.
Andy
November 22nd, 2020 01:14
Goldfinch60 said:
May that taste be forever with you Neville, she is very special.
Andy
November 22nd, 2020 01:14
Aperitif
FineB said:
A good write ✍ Neville.
Peppermint. Lovely
Keep writing ✍ and safe during lockdown.
FineB
November 21st, 2020 21:09
FineB said:
A good write ✍ Neville.
Peppermint. Lovely
Keep writing ✍ and safe during lockdown.
FineB
November 21st, 2020 21:09
Aperitif
Clara said:
I\'m with Micheal here, I also let out a sigh...
She still
tastes of sunlight rising
Wow. I mean, you just unlocked next level romance my friend.
November 21st, 2020 17:03
Clara said:
I\'m with Micheal here, I also let out a sigh...
She still
tastes of sunlight rising
Wow. I mean, you just unlocked next level romance my friend.
November 21st, 2020 17:03
Aperitif
Christina8 said:
Wonderful poem!! I had to look up \"Aperitif\" lol!! A refreshing read.....
November 21st, 2020 16:08
Christina8 said:
Wonderful poem!! I had to look up \"Aperitif\" lol!! A refreshing read.....
November 21st, 2020 16:08
Aperitif
RDS said:
I absolutely love the sensory synaesthesia you create with invite with lines like:
\"She still
tastes of sunlight rising\"
Pure and delightful thank you Neville one of my favourites.
November 21st, 2020 14:31
RDS said:
I absolutely love the sensory synaesthesia you create with invite with lines like:
\"She still
tastes of sunlight rising\"
Pure and delightful thank you Neville one of my favourites.
November 21st, 2020 14:31
Aperitif
Michael Edwards said:
And I let out a sigh - honest - super write N.
November 21st, 2020 13:45
Michael Edwards said:
And I let out a sigh - honest - super write N.
November 21st, 2020 13:45
Aperitif
Fay Slimm. said:
What a fortunate she to be receiving such mouth-watering reminders that she is deeply loved - -- another example of tenderest versing my friend ................x
November 21st, 2020 09:27
Fay Slimm. said:
What a fortunate she to be receiving such mouth-watering reminders that she is deeply loved - -- another example of tenderest versing my friend ................x
November 21st, 2020 09:27
Aperitif
dusk arising said:
These are words of the richness of maturity. Reassuring closeness of familiarity and rewarding warmth of mutual pairing.
Your well chosen words bring forth the sensual with a grace.
November 21st, 2020 09:06
dusk arising said:
These are words of the richness of maturity. Reassuring closeness of familiarity and rewarding warmth of mutual pairing.
Your well chosen words bring forth the sensual with a grace.
November 21st, 2020 09:06
Aperitif
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville.
All this about a pair of teeth?! lol.
November 21st, 2020 06:58
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville.
All this about a pair of teeth?! lol.
November 21st, 2020 06:58
Windfallen
Christina8 said:
Such beautiful poetry....I loved the last stanza about the windfallen apples, so eloquently written!...C
November 20th, 2020 19:16
Christina8 said:
Such beautiful poetry....I loved the last stanza about the windfallen apples, so eloquently written!...C
November 20th, 2020 19:16
Windfallen
Dove said:
Such beauty your words, here I have windfallen oranges,
mostly half eaten oranges that Squirrels drop upon the ground
Tiny little peels strewn all over the place
Yet your vision almost romantic feel,
Loved it
November 20th, 2020 11:17
Dove said:
Such beauty your words, here I have windfallen oranges,
mostly half eaten oranges that Squirrels drop upon the ground
Tiny little peels strewn all over the place
Yet your vision almost romantic feel,
Loved it
November 20th, 2020 11:17
Windfallen
Michael Edwards said:
Reads like a sultry autumn day in sun ripe pleasureness.
November 19th, 2020 14:51
Michael Edwards said:
Reads like a sultry autumn day in sun ripe pleasureness.
November 19th, 2020 14:51
Windfallen
Clara said:
Your work is definitely something to be admired... Poetry in its most poetic form. Pleases all of the senses.
November 19th, 2020 14:22
Clara said:
Your work is definitely something to be admired... Poetry in its most poetic form. Pleases all of the senses.
November 19th, 2020 14:22
Windfallen
dusk arising said:
Fallen fruit indeed. For our fields have not seen the fruit of our youth fallen for many centuries but an orchard strewn with fallers will always bring to mind the disgraceful deathly export of our fruit to flanders field and the like.
Beauty is a reflection of the souls sorrow.... amplified in me with your fine words today.
November 19th, 2020 07:23
dusk arising said:
Fallen fruit indeed. For our fields have not seen the fruit of our youth fallen for many centuries but an orchard strewn with fallers will always bring to mind the disgraceful deathly export of our fruit to flanders field and the like.
Beauty is a reflection of the souls sorrow.... amplified in me with your fine words today.
November 19th, 2020 07:23
Windfallen
L. B. Mek said:
really like your last stanza and the \'feel - tone\' of the voice in this write, has a sense of \'mellowed despair\': an apt description of 2020 as a whole I think
November 19th, 2020 04:58
L. B. Mek said:
really like your last stanza and the \'feel - tone\' of the voice in this write, has a sense of \'mellowed despair\': an apt description of 2020 as a whole I think
November 19th, 2020 04:58
Windfallen
Fay Slimm. said:
Drowning in your fruitiest description of apple harvest reminds me of times I did just that and found troubles melted away with the glorious scent of fallen lushness.......... a great first read of my morning dear Nev.........x
November 19th, 2020 04:56
Fay Slimm. said:
Drowning in your fruitiest description of apple harvest reminds me of times I did just that and found troubles melted away with the glorious scent of fallen lushness.......... a great first read of my morning dear Nev.........x
November 19th, 2020 04:56
Trench Life
L. B. Mek said:
a moving and dispiritingly vivid tribute, good write
& may we never forget!
November 19th, 2020 04:14
L. B. Mek said:
a moving and dispiritingly vivid tribute, good write
& may we never forget!
November 19th, 2020 04:14
Windfallen
orchidee said:
Cooeee, I\'m fairly early too! lol. Good write Neville.
November 19th, 2020 02:48
orchidee said:
Cooeee, I\'m fairly early too! lol. Good write Neville.
November 19th, 2020 02:48
Windfallen
Goldfinch60 said:
The glory of Nature\'s wonder and bounty in your words Neville.
Andy
November 19th, 2020 02:13
Goldfinch60 said:
The glory of Nature\'s wonder and bounty in your words Neville.
Andy
November 19th, 2020 02:13
Trench Life
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words about an horrendous situation where so many innocents died, if only we had learned from that time.
WE WILL REMEMBER THEM.
Andy
November 19th, 2020 01:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words about an horrendous situation where so many innocents died, if only we had learned from that time.
WE WILL REMEMBER THEM.
Andy
November 19th, 2020 01:20
Trench Life
Clara said:
This is such a cinematic portrayal of what we can only assume to be the horrific realities of war. You\'ve done a wonderful job with this. Very impactful.
November 18th, 2020 19:06
Clara said:
This is such a cinematic portrayal of what we can only assume to be the horrific realities of war. You\'ve done a wonderful job with this. Very impactful.
November 18th, 2020 19:06
Trench Life
dusk arising said:
Madness isn\'t. And had they not been mown down by machine gun fire what mayhem had they been induced to afflict upon reaching enemy lines.
Other nations were motivated by bygone despots, dictators and kings..... they too mourn their losses.
And of course the innocents, victims of genocide and war.
All we need is love.
These thoughts produced by reading your moving piece. All the more moving for the beauty above in your quiet, still and starless night.
November 18th, 2020 09:43
dusk arising said:
Madness isn\'t. And had they not been mown down by machine gun fire what mayhem had they been induced to afflict upon reaching enemy lines.
Other nations were motivated by bygone despots, dictators and kings..... they too mourn their losses.
And of course the innocents, victims of genocide and war.
All we need is love.
These thoughts produced by reading your moving piece. All the more moving for the beauty above in your quiet, still and starless night.
November 18th, 2020 09:43
Trench Life
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville.
Meanwhile - I remember it well, from The Boer Wars - I was in them, being very old!
I never took part though. I thought they were in Australia, so I headed there. Doh!
November 18th, 2020 05:54
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville.
Meanwhile - I remember it well, from The Boer Wars - I was in them, being very old!
I never took part though. I thought they were in Australia, so I headed there. Doh!
November 18th, 2020 05:54
Trench Life
Fay Slimm. said:
Razor-sharp versing of nightly horrors when war blocked all quiet - your ink paints scenes we should never forget of men whose lives or senses never returned again to a homeland. Shame on those conniving such sacrifice and thanks my friend for this needed reminder.
November 18th, 2020 05:28
Fay Slimm. said:
Razor-sharp versing of nightly horrors when war blocked all quiet - your ink paints scenes we should never forget of men whose lives or senses never returned again to a homeland. Shame on those conniving such sacrifice and thanks my friend for this needed reminder.
November 18th, 2020 05:28
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