Comments received on poems by Neville
Carbonito de Sophie
L. B. Mek said:
Beautifully worded, almost as simplistic in wording as those child fairy tales you mention,
though even at a mere glance these reads so deep, sadly without context I can only guess, but for some reason, I imagine someone like the late Princess Diana, will relate with your words (may she R.I.P. - that\'s if \'they\' would ever let her, to begin with)...
December 7th, 2020 06:01
L. B. Mek said:
Beautifully worded, almost as simplistic in wording as those child fairy tales you mention,
though even at a mere glance these reads so deep, sadly without context I can only guess, but for some reason, I imagine someone like the late Princess Diana, will relate with your words (may she R.I.P. - that\'s if \'they\' would ever let her, to begin with)...
December 7th, 2020 06:01
Carbonito de Sophie
Christina8 said:
What a sweet little poem....loved it ! x
December 6th, 2020 21:37
Christina8 said:
What a sweet little poem....loved it ! x
December 6th, 2020 21:37
Carbonito de Sophie
Michael Edwards said:
A beautiful little bird done justice here - a member of the bullshit - err sory - bushtit family.
December 6th, 2020 14:46
Michael Edwards said:
A beautiful little bird done justice here - a member of the bullshit - err sory - bushtit family.
December 6th, 2020 14:46
Carbonito de Sophie
dusk arising said:
Well if ever there were a short poem to muse upon.....
........ flights of fancy take me.....
December 6th, 2020 06:32
dusk arising said:
Well if ever there were a short poem to muse upon.....
........ flights of fancy take me.....
December 6th, 2020 06:32
Carbonito de Sophie
Fay Slimm. said:
A sagaciously delicate verse with such clever usage of word-definitions ........... and methinks Bulgaria has a really good publicity agent in you my dear Nev. - - -great stuff...........x
December 6th, 2020 03:53
Fay Slimm. said:
A sagaciously delicate verse with such clever usage of word-definitions ........... and methinks Bulgaria has a really good publicity agent in you my dear Nev. - - -great stuff...........x
December 6th, 2020 03:53
Carbonito de Sophie
orchidee said:
Good write Neville. A cute little birdie - probably friends with my cute furry piggies.
December 6th, 2020 03:23
orchidee said:
Good write Neville. A cute little birdie - probably friends with my cute furry piggies.
December 6th, 2020 03:23
Carbonito de Sophie
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful bird Neville matched only by your words.
Andy
December 6th, 2020 03:01
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful bird Neville matched only by your words.
Andy
December 6th, 2020 03:01
Groundhog Day
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories are with you Neville and they will be with her as well, she may well feel the same.
Andy
December 6th, 2020 01:31
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories are with you Neville and they will be with her as well, she may well feel the same.
Andy
December 6th, 2020 01:31
Groundhog Day
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'d rather not comment on how closely I identify with that work of yours - including, but definitely not only, the early lines relating to ageing...
Thanks for for being so succinct there . Any more and this post might have been very different....
Regards Dave
December 5th, 2020 22:34
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'d rather not comment on how closely I identify with that work of yours - including, but definitely not only, the early lines relating to ageing...
Thanks for for being so succinct there . Any more and this post might have been very different....
Regards Dave
December 5th, 2020 22:34
Groundhog Day
Fay Slimm. said:
The passing of things and of those held so dear makes love and togetherness even more needed as this tribute to seeing the truth of comings and goings artfully discloses my friend. Feelings of Déja Vu become clearer when moments of \"pulsing and probing\" are virtually over - - maybe. Another depth here of your avid perception and so impressively well expressed.........x
December 5th, 2020 16:59
Fay Slimm. said:
The passing of things and of those held so dear makes love and togetherness even more needed as this tribute to seeing the truth of comings and goings artfully discloses my friend. Feelings of Déja Vu become clearer when moments of \"pulsing and probing\" are virtually over - - maybe. Another depth here of your avid perception and so impressively well expressed.........x
December 5th, 2020 16:59
Groundhog Day
Michael Edwards said:
If she doesn\'t remember then she\'s not worthy - but I bet she does.
December 5th, 2020 16:14
Michael Edwards said:
If she doesn\'t remember then she\'s not worthy - but I bet she does.
December 5th, 2020 16:14
Groundhog Day
Suresh said:
If she\'s still there, then she dost remember for she has similar experiences to share with you.
December 5th, 2020 12:50
Suresh said:
If she\'s still there, then she dost remember for she has similar experiences to share with you.
December 5th, 2020 12:50
Groundhog Day
orchidee said:
I expect she does remember. And should I meet her? lol.
December 5th, 2020 12:30
orchidee said:
I expect she does remember. And should I meet her? lol.
December 5th, 2020 12:30
Groundhog Day
dusk arising said:
If she has as much about her, character wise, as you do sir then... daft question.... and from me a ridiculous comment for she, would have to have as much depth as your good self otherwise there would be no \'she\'.
... I don\'t care!! I know what i meant. LOL
December 5th, 2020 11:46
dusk arising said:
If she has as much about her, character wise, as you do sir then... daft question.... and from me a ridiculous comment for she, would have to have as much depth as your good self otherwise there would be no \'she\'.
... I don\'t care!! I know what i meant. LOL
December 5th, 2020 11:46
In the End
Dove said:
Amen! Blessings to you and yours!
May you journey many more miles
December 4th, 2020 13:29
Dove said:
Amen! Blessings to you and yours!
May you journey many more miles
December 4th, 2020 13:29
My Lady Was a Poem
Dove said:
Beautiful!!! Love every word! Best wishes to u
December 4th, 2020 13:28
Dove said:
Beautiful!!! Love every word! Best wishes to u
December 4th, 2020 13:28
Some Words Are Too Heavy
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully simple but exponentially insightful, I imagine one could return to these words at different landmark\'s of a life and find them equally: an avenue of solace, or a heart wrenching incision - unfurling, those nightmare\'s kept bubbling just beneath the veneer of our clown smiles
December 3rd, 2020 06:42
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully simple but exponentially insightful, I imagine one could return to these words at different landmark\'s of a life and find them equally: an avenue of solace, or a heart wrenching incision - unfurling, those nightmare\'s kept bubbling just beneath the veneer of our clown smiles
December 3rd, 2020 06:42
In the End
Suresh said:
..as do we have birth,
which is sure to follow,
so let\'s celebrate life.......
November 30th, 2020 05:37
Suresh said:
..as do we have birth,
which is sure to follow,
so let\'s celebrate life.......
November 30th, 2020 05:37
In the End
Fay Slimm. said:
Back for a second read of your 757 on shared truth of humanity\'s common endings Nev. which has revealed even deeper the need for struggling humanity to grasp awareness and feel more oneness -- - it inspired me to post a piece yesterday on nature\'s lessons with its continual changes from dark to light every day - - maybe death brings the same chance of renewal for humans to enjoy living in other dimensions. Your words certainly compel an on-going ponder..........x
November 29th, 2020 03:58
Fay Slimm. said:
Back for a second read of your 757 on shared truth of humanity\'s common endings Nev. which has revealed even deeper the need for struggling humanity to grasp awareness and feel more oneness -- - it inspired me to post a piece yesterday on nature\'s lessons with its continual changes from dark to light every day - - maybe death brings the same chance of renewal for humans to enjoy living in other dimensions. Your words certainly compel an on-going ponder..........x
November 29th, 2020 03:58
In the End
PoeticBiscuit said:
Yet if we spend too much time thinking of the end, do we ever truly allow our life to begin?
-PB
November 29th, 2020 02:27
PoeticBiscuit said:
Yet if we spend too much time thinking of the end, do we ever truly allow our life to begin?
-PB
November 29th, 2020 02:27
My Lady Was a Poem
RDS said:
A warm embrace of love through life. Nicely woven sentiments of memory and immediacy bringing the tender intimacy you shared to great realisation. Thanks for sharing Neville.
J
November 28th, 2020 15:52
RDS said:
A warm embrace of love through life. Nicely woven sentiments of memory and immediacy bringing the tender intimacy you shared to great realisation. Thanks for sharing Neville.
J
November 28th, 2020 15:52
In the End
RDS said:
Pithy.
Only that spectre at the end of the road is given immortal existence.
J
November 28th, 2020 15:40
RDS said:
Pithy.
Only that spectre at the end of the road is given immortal existence.
J
November 28th, 2020 15:40
In the End
orchidee said:
If it was a less serious theme - all ya gotta be afraid of is my guinea pigs. They are very fierce - probably.
\'How do you know a guinea pig is well?\' Answer: \'It is eating!\' (always nearly!).
November 28th, 2020 14:38
orchidee said:
If it was a less serious theme - all ya gotta be afraid of is my guinea pigs. They are very fierce - probably.
\'How do you know a guinea pig is well?\' Answer: \'It is eating!\' (always nearly!).
November 28th, 2020 14:38
In the End
Christina8 said:
I like this little tidbit....Some people are so afraid of death I often wonder, whats the greatest cause of death nowadays? Life! I\'ve shared that with them with a puzzled look.....C
November 28th, 2020 10:32
Christina8 said:
I like this little tidbit....Some people are so afraid of death I often wonder, whats the greatest cause of death nowadays? Life! I\'ve shared that with them with a puzzled look.....C
November 28th, 2020 10:32
My Lady Was a Poem
L. B. Mek said:
\'My lady
was a poem
just waiting to happen
On the lips of her lovers
and in the
prayers of disciples
She was
a flurry of words
unhurried, yet spoken\'
well I have long since proclaimed my biased opinions of your write\'s, my oh so talented Poet: I\'m a fan, but when you deliver such write\'s of simplistic mastery, who can blame me,
Brilliant!
November 28th, 2020 07:00
L. B. Mek said:
\'My lady
was a poem
just waiting to happen
On the lips of her lovers
and in the
prayers of disciples
She was
a flurry of words
unhurried, yet spoken\'
well I have long since proclaimed my biased opinions of your write\'s, my oh so talented Poet: I\'m a fan, but when you deliver such write\'s of simplistic mastery, who can blame me,
Brilliant!
November 28th, 2020 07:00
In the End
L. B. Mek said:
Indeed!
if all fails: we of existence are aligned by the unfailing truth of our involuntary birth and the sobering reality of our unavoidable death...
November 28th, 2020 06:46
L. B. Mek said:
Indeed!
if all fails: we of existence are aligned by the unfailing truth of our involuntary birth and the sobering reality of our unavoidable death...
November 28th, 2020 06:46
In the End
Fay Slimm. said:
There is no escape from this bit of truth. as your three liner powerfully pinpoints dear friend so a mantra like \" try to love every moment\" makes good sense to an incurable romantic like me - - - wishing you stress-free house moving..........x.
November 28th, 2020 03:40
Fay Slimm. said:
There is no escape from this bit of truth. as your three liner powerfully pinpoints dear friend so a mantra like \" try to love every moment\" makes good sense to an incurable romantic like me - - - wishing you stress-free house moving..........x.
November 28th, 2020 03:40
In the End
orchidee said:
As one said - St Augustine I think - \'Give me patience, Lord - but not yet!\' Doh!
Another thing held in common by mankind - They don\'t like my singing! Awww. lol.
November 28th, 2020 03:02
orchidee said:
As one said - St Augustine I think - \'Give me patience, Lord - but not yet!\' Doh!
Another thing held in common by mankind - They don\'t like my singing! Awww. lol.
November 28th, 2020 03:02
In the End
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Morning Neville - Always up *Bright & Early* on a Saturday - No work til Monday ! Your SUPAHAIKU is very true - especially in these pandemical days. There is *A Time to be BORN & A Time to DIE* WE have no choice over the former - BUT - WE do - by our lifestyle influence the latter. Im 32 (An Essex Girl) so statistically Im only one-third through my Life ! And there is much I still want to do & places I want to go ! However should DEATH come today - Im ready & I have NO REGRETS - AMEN.
Love - Peace & Joy - to YOU & YOURS
Angela & Brian & Smokey Cat ! ! !
November 28th, 2020 01:58
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Morning Neville - Always up *Bright & Early* on a Saturday - No work til Monday ! Your SUPAHAIKU is very true - especially in these pandemical days. There is *A Time to be BORN & A Time to DIE* WE have no choice over the former - BUT - WE do - by our lifestyle influence the latter. Im 32 (An Essex Girl) so statistically Im only one-third through my Life ! And there is much I still want to do & places I want to go ! However should DEATH come today - Im ready & I have NO REGRETS - AMEN.
Love - Peace & Joy - to YOU & YOURS
Angela & Brian & Smokey Cat ! ! !
November 28th, 2020 01:58
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