Comments received on poems by Neville
Through a Tangle of Shadows
FineB said:
Hello Neville
A good write!
Certainly unforgettable.
I hope you were gentle with your lady friend.
Keep writing FineB
August 16th, 2019 12:00
FineB said:
Hello Neville
A good write!
Certainly unforgettable.
I hope you were gentle with your lady friend.
Keep writing FineB
August 16th, 2019 12:00
Through a Tangle of Shadows
Fay Slimm. said:
Shadows veer imagination toward the forbidden at times and these beguiling lines have a touch of hidden erotic that leaves a tangle of what, where and why in my curious mind - - - you conjour excitement with veritable ease mon ami.................
August 16th, 2019 06:54
Fay Slimm. said:
Shadows veer imagination toward the forbidden at times and these beguiling lines have a touch of hidden erotic that leaves a tangle of what, where and why in my curious mind - - - you conjour excitement with veritable ease mon ami.................
August 16th, 2019 06:54
Through a Tangle of Shadows
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Out there Neville...
Out There
August 16th, 2019 06:15
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Out there Neville...
Out There
August 16th, 2019 06:15
Through a Tangle of Shadows
orchidee said:
What\'s going on there?! Oohh. And should I try it?! lol.
August 16th, 2019 01:46
orchidee said:
What\'s going on there?! Oohh. And should I try it?! lol.
August 16th, 2019 01:46
Singular I’s
Suresh said:
In reality it\'s always been only an \"I\", the we and the us was are imposed relationships.
No regrets
August 15th, 2019 23:32
Suresh said:
In reality it\'s always been only an \"I\", the we and the us was are imposed relationships.
No regrets
August 15th, 2019 23:32
War a Senryu
sylviasearcher said:
A more true observation I could not have made myself
August 15th, 2019 02:20
sylviasearcher said:
A more true observation I could not have made myself
August 15th, 2019 02:20
War a Senryu
Poetic Dan said:
Wiser than the enemy will ever be!
Poetry will set us all free
August 15th, 2019 01:57
Poetic Dan said:
Wiser than the enemy will ever be!
Poetry will set us all free
August 15th, 2019 01:57
War a Senryu
Fay Slimm. said:
Enlightening senryu dear Nev and so very true. Hate and war indeed beget outcry from poets which rings with experience we cannot forget.
August 15th, 2019 01:55
Fay Slimm. said:
Enlightening senryu dear Nev and so very true. Hate and war indeed beget outcry from poets which rings with experience we cannot forget.
August 15th, 2019 01:55
War a Senryu
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks NEVILLE ~ Our MANTRA has always been *Make Love not War !* Ever since CAIN killed ABEL ~ mankind has been at WAR ! Since 1945 (74 years ~ a lifetime !) there has not been another World War. However in the last 74 years there has always been a *WAR* somewhere on Earth. Millions have been killed - most of them innocent Civilians !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
August 15th, 2019 01:53
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks NEVILLE ~ Our MANTRA has always been *Make Love not War !* Ever since CAIN killed ABEL ~ mankind has been at WAR ! Since 1945 (74 years ~ a lifetime !) there has not been another World War. However in the last 74 years there has always been a *WAR* somewhere on Earth. Millions have been killed - most of them innocent Civilians !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
August 15th, 2019 01:53
War a Senryu
Michael Edwards said:
And so it always will be - great little \'un.
August 15th, 2019 01:37
Michael Edwards said:
And so it always will be - great little \'un.
August 15th, 2019 01:37
War a Senryu
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true.
Poem by Spike Milligan:
\"If I die in war,
You will remember me.
If I live in peace,
You won\'t\"
August 15th, 2019 01:20
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true.
Poem by Spike Milligan:
\"If I die in war,
You will remember me.
If I live in peace,
You won\'t\"
August 15th, 2019 01:20
Singular I’s
PoeticBiscuit said:
I very much enjoy the formatting of your poems, they’re always so appealing to the eyes.
August 14th, 2019 14:06
PoeticBiscuit said:
I very much enjoy the formatting of your poems, they’re always so appealing to the eyes.
August 14th, 2019 14:06
Talk Me Poetry
Fay Slimm. said:
My eyes fell on this resurrected piece of bold story-telling again and had just as much thrill reading it the second time Nev....... your gift for the atmospheric never fails ........ great read.
August 14th, 2019 10:31
Fay Slimm. said:
My eyes fell on this resurrected piece of bold story-telling again and had just as much thrill reading it the second time Nev....... your gift for the atmospheric never fails ........ great read.
August 14th, 2019 10:31
Singular I’s
Christina8 said:
A bit of a sad write for today but very well penned.
August 14th, 2019 09:57
Christina8 said:
A bit of a sad write for today but very well penned.
August 14th, 2019 09:57
Singular I’s
FineB said:
Hi Neville,
A wonderful, imaginative write.
Keep writing FineB
August 14th, 2019 04:15
FineB said:
Hi Neville,
A wonderful, imaginative write.
Keep writing FineB
August 14th, 2019 04:15
Singular I’s
sylviasearcher said:
You know you just snapped my attention with the formatting.
The lonely page
My favourite line 😊
August 14th, 2019 04:10
sylviasearcher said:
You know you just snapped my attention with the formatting.
The lonely page
My favourite line 😊
August 14th, 2019 04:10
Singular I’s
orchidee said:
Doh! I\'m all in a tizzy.
Am I \'I\', \'Me\'. \'or \'Myself\'? Or am I \'You\'?
Nope, I can\'t be you, cos you are you!
I\'m digging this hole deeper, and I\'m in it.... lol.
(Take a purple pill or two, Orchi).
August 14th, 2019 02:58
orchidee said:
Doh! I\'m all in a tizzy.
Am I \'I\', \'Me\'. \'or \'Myself\'? Or am I \'You\'?
Nope, I can\'t be you, cos you are you!
I\'m digging this hole deeper, and I\'m in it.... lol.
(Take a purple pill or two, Orchi).
August 14th, 2019 02:58
Singular I’s
Fay Slimm. said:
Sad but inevitable the procession from nearness to singular when love gets forgotten and lonely wings in.......... a telling write Nev and penned with your usual short-line style it has such a poignant feel....................... Fay
August 14th, 2019 02:49
Fay Slimm. said:
Sad but inevitable the procession from nearness to singular when love gets forgotten and lonely wings in.......... a telling write Nev and penned with your usual short-line style it has such a poignant feel....................... Fay
August 14th, 2019 02:49
The Long Drop
Fay Slimm. said:
The final stanza changed my mind about all the foregoing - - it is a love-song and appeal to that special one whom you need to understand how close you really are........... I love this one Nev....... x
August 12th, 2019 03:48
Fay Slimm. said:
The final stanza changed my mind about all the foregoing - - it is a love-song and appeal to that special one whom you need to understand how close you really are........... I love this one Nev....... x
August 12th, 2019 03:48
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