Comments received on poems by Neville
The Duck Billed Platypus
Goldfinch60 said:
Into the shadowicus
went the platipus
hiding from othersicus
tile he was fedicus.
Andycus
May 21st, 2020 23:56
Goldfinch60 said:
Into the shadowicus
went the platipus
hiding from othersicus
tile he was fedicus.
Andycus
May 21st, 2020 23:56
The Duck Billed Platypus
Michael Edwards said:
Why did the duck bill the platypus?
couldn\'t he pay
has he gone away
do you miss him quite a loticus?
May 21st, 2020 16:33
Michael Edwards said:
Why did the duck bill the platypus?
couldn\'t he pay
has he gone away
do you miss him quite a loticus?
May 21st, 2020 16:33
The Duck Billed Platypus
Fay Slimm. said:
Am searching round now-a-cus for your missing platypus and should I access it will send it of courseicus by that fabulous quick-as-a-flashy
Red-Crossicus for to stem your unhappicus......stay in to rest and hoping you soon get well- - cos I wantaknow yu is smilin\' agen my funnypus friend..................x
May 21st, 2020 07:13
Fay Slimm. said:
Am searching round now-a-cus for your missing platypus and should I access it will send it of courseicus by that fabulous quick-as-a-flashy
Red-Crossicus for to stem your unhappicus......stay in to rest and hoping you soon get well- - cos I wantaknow yu is smilin\' agen my funnypus friend..................x
May 21st, 2020 07:13
More Words
Goldfinch60 said:
Great write and so very true, words can abound within you but as soon as the pen comes out they seem to disappear.
Andy
May 21st, 2020 00:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Great write and so very true, words can abound within you but as soon as the pen comes out they seem to disappear.
Andy
May 21st, 2020 00:27
More Words
orchidee said:
These words ain\'t stinging me, not hurting me. Well they would be, if they was in a wasp\'s nest, and I reached in to fetch them - as I do, of course!
May 20th, 2020 06:45
orchidee said:
These words ain\'t stinging me, not hurting me. Well they would be, if they was in a wasp\'s nest, and I reached in to fetch them - as I do, of course!
May 20th, 2020 06:45
More Words
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - I love the measured rhyme in these seductive lines describing the Muse who flippantly uses our minds -- a piece of introspection from your pen always takes me to another plane - great stuff again Nev.
May 20th, 2020 05:04
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - I love the measured rhyme in these seductive lines describing the Muse who flippantly uses our minds -- a piece of introspection from your pen always takes me to another plane - great stuff again Nev.
May 20th, 2020 05:04
Too Late in the Day
orchidee said:
Is it too late for me to sing? It\'s the next day now, after my first comment!
What\'s that you say? \'It\'s not too late; just don\'t let me hear it!\'
May 19th, 2020 01:52
orchidee said:
Is it too late for me to sing? It\'s the next day now, after my first comment!
What\'s that you say? \'It\'s not too late; just don\'t let me hear it!\'
May 19th, 2020 01:52
Too Late in the Day
Goldfinch60 said:
There is so much gratitude in our lives that was forgotten during the time of existence of some loved ones.
Andy
May 19th, 2020 00:15
Goldfinch60 said:
There is so much gratitude in our lives that was forgotten during the time of existence of some loved ones.
Andy
May 19th, 2020 00:15
Too Late in the Day
orchidee said:
Good write Neville. It was not too late in the day for me to read this, cos I read it in the morning! Did I? lol.
May 18th, 2020 13:59
orchidee said:
Good write Neville. It was not too late in the day for me to read this, cos I read it in the morning! Did I? lol.
May 18th, 2020 13:59
Too Late in the Day
Neville said:
Thank you Fay, much appreciated as always,
Neville
May 18th, 2020 13:13
Neville said:
Thank you Fay, much appreciated as always,
Neville
May 18th, 2020 13:13
Too Late in the Day
Fay Slimm. said:
A poetic lesson in becoming more caring and penned with regret that gratitude can come sometimes too late........ those who do menial work deserve sincere praise and I shall now more remember such fine contribution. A needed read Nev,, in these testing times.
May 18th, 2020 13:01
Fay Slimm. said:
A poetic lesson in becoming more caring and penned with regret that gratitude can come sometimes too late........ those who do menial work deserve sincere praise and I shall now more remember such fine contribution. A needed read Nev,, in these testing times.
May 18th, 2020 13:01
Three Guys Walked into a Bear
Christina8 said:
Very cute!! Enjoyed very much....C
May 18th, 2020 06:48
Christina8 said:
Very cute!! Enjoyed very much....C
May 18th, 2020 06:48
Three Guys Walked into a Bear
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes - well said Nev - never turn your bare backside to the sight of an on -coming bear........ bum-bum.
May 17th, 2020 04:01
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes - well said Nev - never turn your bare backside to the sight of an on -coming bear........ bum-bum.
May 17th, 2020 04:01
Three Guys Walked into a Bear
Goldfinch60 said:
The \'bear bones\' in words.
Andy
May 17th, 2020 03:00
Goldfinch60 said:
The \'bear bones\' in words.
Andy
May 17th, 2020 03:00
Leave the View Behind
Goldfinch60 said:
Perhaps it was for the best, as you have obviously moved on to are much better place in your life.
Andy
May 16th, 2020 15:07
Goldfinch60 said:
Perhaps it was for the best, as you have obviously moved on to are much better place in your life.
Andy
May 16th, 2020 15:07
Leave the View Behind
Bragee said:
Ice cold some women can be!
best forgotten in the process of finding brighter days and warmer weather.
May 16th, 2020 10:38
Bragee said:
Ice cold some women can be!
best forgotten in the process of finding brighter days and warmer weather.
May 16th, 2020 10:38
Leave the View Behind
Fay Slimm. said:
You pen the scene well my friend. A formidable female who points fingers is best left behind with the view methinks Nev.......... x
May 16th, 2020 10:13
Fay Slimm. said:
You pen the scene well my friend. A formidable female who points fingers is best left behind with the view methinks Nev.......... x
May 16th, 2020 10:13
Briefly
Goldfinch60 said:
That history will often be revisited as those wonderful memories will never leave you.
Andy
May 16th, 2020 00:34
Goldfinch60 said:
That history will often be revisited as those wonderful memories will never leave you.
Andy
May 16th, 2020 00:34
Briefly
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - - methinks a gentleman merely half-tells in this brief poem - --
May 15th, 2020 06:42
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - - methinks a gentleman merely half-tells in this brief poem - --
May 15th, 2020 06:42
Fading
Fay Slimm. said:
You poem the long-ago feeling so well Nev. and can relate to each line \'cos affection of that sort does not really die.
May 12th, 2020 07:12
Fay Slimm. said:
You poem the long-ago feeling so well Nev. and can relate to each line \'cos affection of that sort does not really die.
May 12th, 2020 07:12
Fading
dusk arising said:
I know the feelings you have so well expressed here Neville. It certainly touched places and took me places as good poetry always should.
Your sparsity of detail with just enough guidance hits home, as it has done many times for me. A credit to your writing skills.
May 12th, 2020 06:46
dusk arising said:
I know the feelings you have so well expressed here Neville. It certainly touched places and took me places as good poetry always should.
Your sparsity of detail with just enough guidance hits home, as it has done many times for me. A credit to your writing skills.
May 12th, 2020 06:46
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