Comments received on poems by Neville
Childish Smiles
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write but do I detect further machinations to come.
September 30th, 2019 00:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write but do I detect further machinations to come.
September 30th, 2019 00:47
Childish Smiles
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
It\'s a kinda magic
Well captured Neville
September 29th, 2019 15:41
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
It\'s a kinda magic
Well captured Neville
September 29th, 2019 15:41
Childish Smiles
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
“Childish Smiles”
Endearing...
to say the least!
A wonderful write!
~Laura~
September 29th, 2019 08:20
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
“Childish Smiles”
Endearing...
to say the least!
A wonderful write!
~Laura~
September 29th, 2019 08:20
Childish Smiles
Fay Slimm. said:
Sweet memories run through these few lines giving a most appealing read. I can relate to the stealing of minds with short-lasting dreams my friend............................ Fay
September 29th, 2019 04:42
Fay Slimm. said:
Sweet memories run through these few lines giving a most appealing read. I can relate to the stealing of minds with short-lasting dreams my friend............................ Fay
September 29th, 2019 04:42
Yellow River
Goldfinch60 said:
A very sad emotive write, it is so sad that so many were killed in this way.
September 29th, 2019 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
A very sad emotive write, it is so sad that so many were killed in this way.
September 29th, 2019 01:49
Yellow River
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
This is a powerful sad write! Thank you for sharing and reminding us that there is cruelty in this world...unfortunately!
~Laura~
September 28th, 2019 15:33
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
This is a powerful sad write! Thank you for sharing and reminding us that there is cruelty in this world...unfortunately!
~Laura~
September 28th, 2019 15:33
Yellow River
Clara said:
Wow. I read this through a couple of times. I must admit and I don\'t know much about it but I am definitely going to look into this. Really well written and expressed considering the subject matter at hand. Greatly impressed N.
September 28th, 2019 13:45
Clara said:
Wow. I read this through a couple of times. I must admit and I don\'t know much about it but I am definitely going to look into this. Really well written and expressed considering the subject matter at hand. Greatly impressed N.
September 28th, 2019 13:45
Yellow River
kevin browne said:
I see you evolving with greatness everytime I get to read your work. This is a good fine and understandable piece...
September 28th, 2019 12:09
kevin browne said:
I see you evolving with greatness everytime I get to read your work. This is a good fine and understandable piece...
September 28th, 2019 12:09
Yellow River
Alta H Mabin said:
Incredibly emotional. Thank you for sharing this Neville. x
September 28th, 2019 11:53
Alta H Mabin said:
Incredibly emotional. Thank you for sharing this Neville. x
September 28th, 2019 11:53
Yellow River
Fay Slimm. said:
Reading this hitherto unknown and abominable method of female birth control has been a real learning curve for this poet Nev. - - - may guilt haunt the changes made in a culture that thought so little of human life..........clearly told this shock of a piece will linger long after the read................ tearfully Fay.
September 28th, 2019 10:49
Fay Slimm. said:
Reading this hitherto unknown and abominable method of female birth control has been a real learning curve for this poet Nev. - - - may guilt haunt the changes made in a culture that thought so little of human life..........clearly told this shock of a piece will linger long after the read................ tearfully Fay.
September 28th, 2019 10:49
When Does Trust Kick In
Poetic Dan said:
Oops. Never you just try not to feed the flame of doubt, even when it\'s right you just ask do we have to scream and shout ;)
Loved every moment of this and appreciate the thoughts it gave, I think I\'ve healed a trigger but only time will tell
September 27th, 2019 18:52
Poetic Dan said:
Oops. Never you just try not to feed the flame of doubt, even when it\'s right you just ask do we have to scream and shout ;)
Loved every moment of this and appreciate the thoughts it gave, I think I\'ve healed a trigger but only time will tell
September 27th, 2019 18:52
When Does Trust Kick In
Clara said:
Trust unless they provide a reason not to trust. Great poem!
September 27th, 2019 08:41
Clara said:
Trust unless they provide a reason not to trust. Great poem!
September 27th, 2019 08:41
When Does Trust Kick In
Christina8 said:
I think trust takes some time to kick in but trust me when I say I love this poem!!
September 27th, 2019 06:20
Christina8 said:
I think trust takes some time to kick in but trust me when I say I love this poem!!
September 27th, 2019 06:20
When Does Trust Kick In
orchidee said:
Trust will never kick in, if anyone is hoping to trust me not to add water to their whisky/gin/whatever tipple....!
September 27th, 2019 01:46
orchidee said:
Trust will never kick in, if anyone is hoping to trust me not to add water to their whisky/gin/whatever tipple....!
September 27th, 2019 01:46
When Does Trust Kick In
Fay Slimm. said:
Trust kicks in from that single moment when eyes first meet and lock methinks Nev.......... otherwise none of the other could follow - much thanks for another delicious piece of gentle erotica - digested with a sigh and a nostalgic smile ............... Fay
September 27th, 2019 01:10
Fay Slimm. said:
Trust kicks in from that single moment when eyes first meet and lock methinks Nev.......... otherwise none of the other could follow - much thanks for another delicious piece of gentle erotica - digested with a sigh and a nostalgic smile ............... Fay
September 27th, 2019 01:10
When Does Trust Kick In
Goldfinch60 said:
Trust takes time to \'kick in\' but once there it is wonderful but the smallest thing in life can cause that trust to be annulled.
September 27th, 2019 01:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Trust takes time to \'kick in\' but once there it is wonderful but the smallest thing in life can cause that trust to be annulled.
September 27th, 2019 01:08
Poppies
Suresh said:
A winter wonderland, that\'s what wild poppies create in the hills of Southern California, just as your words wonderfully brought them to life.
September 27th, 2019 00:23
Suresh said:
A winter wonderland, that\'s what wild poppies create in the hills of Southern California, just as your words wonderfully brought them to life.
September 27th, 2019 00:23
Poppies
Michael Edwards said:
But not all poppy species are red. Fine write neville
September 26th, 2019 15:14
Michael Edwards said:
But not all poppy species are red. Fine write neville
September 26th, 2019 15:14
Poppies
Clara said:
I like the conflict here, what the red could signify, like post boxes and childrens\' toys and what the red in the poppy signifies...
Wonderful write.
September 26th, 2019 05:51
Clara said:
I like the conflict here, what the red could signify, like post boxes and childrens\' toys and what the red in the poppy signifies...
Wonderful write.
September 26th, 2019 05:51
Poppies
Fay Slimm. said:
A reverent but light-hearted look at poppy-red and all it pertains to and then a heart-wrenching reflection on poppy- memorial to lives lost in war - much more to your verse than comes from one read Nev - so into my favourites goes this poetic gem - thanking you too for the reminder.
September 26th, 2019 03:48
Fay Slimm. said:
A reverent but light-hearted look at poppy-red and all it pertains to and then a heart-wrenching reflection on poppy- memorial to lives lost in war - much more to your verse than comes from one read Nev - so into my favourites goes this poetic gem - thanking you too for the reminder.
September 26th, 2019 03:48
Poppies
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
It\'s not a fine day for me though. But why? well, I forgot my purple pills, and tuned in to \'Lorraine\' on telly. Why did I bore myself to death?! As in \'boredom\'. lol
September 26th, 2019 03:25
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
It\'s not a fine day for me though. But why? well, I forgot my purple pills, and tuned in to \'Lorraine\' on telly. Why did I bore myself to death?! As in \'boredom\'. lol
September 26th, 2019 03:25
Deciduous
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write Neville, the conversations that go on within forests and woods can be startling.
September 26th, 2019 00:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write Neville, the conversations that go on within forests and woods can be startling.
September 26th, 2019 00:20
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