Comments received on poems by Neville
Lockdown
Fay Slimm. said:
Dotted with love-names this view of lockdown sounds like the perfect romantic answer to boredom of isolation - -- applause for the love- name-assonance my gentle amigo.
May 22nd, 2020 04:44
Fay Slimm. said:
Dotted with love-names this view of lockdown sounds like the perfect romantic answer to boredom of isolation - -- applause for the love- name-assonance my gentle amigo.
May 22nd, 2020 04:44
The Duck Billed Platypus
Neville said:
Ya got me laughing and cussin all the way to the breakfastsicus table, which is andycus that’s where I was aiming for...
Cheers my friend,
Neville
May 22nd, 2020 02:43
Neville said:
Ya got me laughing and cussin all the way to the breakfastsicus table, which is andycus that’s where I was aiming for...
Cheers my friend,
Neville
May 22nd, 2020 02:43
The Duck Billed Platypus
Goldfinch60 said:
Into the shadowicus
went the platipus
hiding from othersicus
tile he was fedicus.
Andycus
May 21st, 2020 23:56
Goldfinch60 said:
Into the shadowicus
went the platipus
hiding from othersicus
tile he was fedicus.
Andycus
May 21st, 2020 23:56
The Duck Billed Platypus
Michael Edwards said:
Why did the duck bill the platypus?
couldn\'t he pay
has he gone away
do you miss him quite a loticus?
May 21st, 2020 16:33
Michael Edwards said:
Why did the duck bill the platypus?
couldn\'t he pay
has he gone away
do you miss him quite a loticus?
May 21st, 2020 16:33
The Duck Billed Platypus
Fay Slimm. said:
Am searching round now-a-cus for your missing platypus and should I access it will send it of courseicus by that fabulous quick-as-a-flashy
Red-Crossicus for to stem your unhappicus......stay in to rest and hoping you soon get well- - cos I wantaknow yu is smilin\' agen my funnypus friend..................x
May 21st, 2020 07:13
Fay Slimm. said:
Am searching round now-a-cus for your missing platypus and should I access it will send it of courseicus by that fabulous quick-as-a-flashy
Red-Crossicus for to stem your unhappicus......stay in to rest and hoping you soon get well- - cos I wantaknow yu is smilin\' agen my funnypus friend..................x
May 21st, 2020 07:13
More Words
Goldfinch60 said:
Great write and so very true, words can abound within you but as soon as the pen comes out they seem to disappear.
Andy
May 21st, 2020 00:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Great write and so very true, words can abound within you but as soon as the pen comes out they seem to disappear.
Andy
May 21st, 2020 00:27
More Words
orchidee said:
These words ain\'t stinging me, not hurting me. Well they would be, if they was in a wasp\'s nest, and I reached in to fetch them - as I do, of course!
May 20th, 2020 06:45
orchidee said:
These words ain\'t stinging me, not hurting me. Well they would be, if they was in a wasp\'s nest, and I reached in to fetch them - as I do, of course!
May 20th, 2020 06:45
More Words
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - I love the measured rhyme in these seductive lines describing the Muse who flippantly uses our minds -- a piece of introspection from your pen always takes me to another plane - great stuff again Nev.
May 20th, 2020 05:04
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - I love the measured rhyme in these seductive lines describing the Muse who flippantly uses our minds -- a piece of introspection from your pen always takes me to another plane - great stuff again Nev.
May 20th, 2020 05:04
Too Late in the Day
orchidee said:
Is it too late for me to sing? It\'s the next day now, after my first comment!
What\'s that you say? \'It\'s not too late; just don\'t let me hear it!\'
May 19th, 2020 01:52
orchidee said:
Is it too late for me to sing? It\'s the next day now, after my first comment!
What\'s that you say? \'It\'s not too late; just don\'t let me hear it!\'
May 19th, 2020 01:52
Too Late in the Day
Goldfinch60 said:
There is so much gratitude in our lives that was forgotten during the time of existence of some loved ones.
Andy
May 19th, 2020 00:15
Goldfinch60 said:
There is so much gratitude in our lives that was forgotten during the time of existence of some loved ones.
Andy
May 19th, 2020 00:15
Too Late in the Day
orchidee said:
Good write Neville. It was not too late in the day for me to read this, cos I read it in the morning! Did I? lol.
May 18th, 2020 13:59
orchidee said:
Good write Neville. It was not too late in the day for me to read this, cos I read it in the morning! Did I? lol.
May 18th, 2020 13:59
Too Late in the Day
Neville said:
Thank you Fay, much appreciated as always,
Neville
May 18th, 2020 13:13
Neville said:
Thank you Fay, much appreciated as always,
Neville
May 18th, 2020 13:13
Too Late in the Day
Fay Slimm. said:
A poetic lesson in becoming more caring and penned with regret that gratitude can come sometimes too late........ those who do menial work deserve sincere praise and I shall now more remember such fine contribution. A needed read Nev,, in these testing times.
May 18th, 2020 13:01
Fay Slimm. said:
A poetic lesson in becoming more caring and penned with regret that gratitude can come sometimes too late........ those who do menial work deserve sincere praise and I shall now more remember such fine contribution. A needed read Nev,, in these testing times.
May 18th, 2020 13:01
Three Guys Walked into a Bear
Christina8 said:
Very cute!! Enjoyed very much....C
May 18th, 2020 06:48
Christina8 said:
Very cute!! Enjoyed very much....C
May 18th, 2020 06:48
Three Guys Walked into a Bear
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes - well said Nev - never turn your bare backside to the sight of an on -coming bear........ bum-bum.
May 17th, 2020 04:01
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes - well said Nev - never turn your bare backside to the sight of an on -coming bear........ bum-bum.
May 17th, 2020 04:01
Three Guys Walked into a Bear
Goldfinch60 said:
The \'bear bones\' in words.
Andy
May 17th, 2020 03:00
Goldfinch60 said:
The \'bear bones\' in words.
Andy
May 17th, 2020 03:00
Leave the View Behind
Goldfinch60 said:
Perhaps it was for the best, as you have obviously moved on to are much better place in your life.
Andy
May 16th, 2020 15:07
Goldfinch60 said:
Perhaps it was for the best, as you have obviously moved on to are much better place in your life.
Andy
May 16th, 2020 15:07
Leave the View Behind
Bragee said:
Ice cold some women can be!
best forgotten in the process of finding brighter days and warmer weather.
May 16th, 2020 10:38
Bragee said:
Ice cold some women can be!
best forgotten in the process of finding brighter days and warmer weather.
May 16th, 2020 10:38
Leave the View Behind
Fay Slimm. said:
You pen the scene well my friend. A formidable female who points fingers is best left behind with the view methinks Nev.......... x
May 16th, 2020 10:13
Fay Slimm. said:
You pen the scene well my friend. A formidable female who points fingers is best left behind with the view methinks Nev.......... x
May 16th, 2020 10:13
Briefly
Goldfinch60 said:
That history will often be revisited as those wonderful memories will never leave you.
Andy
May 16th, 2020 00:34
Goldfinch60 said:
That history will often be revisited as those wonderful memories will never leave you.
Andy
May 16th, 2020 00:34
Briefly
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - - methinks a gentleman merely half-tells in this brief poem - --
May 15th, 2020 06:42
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - - methinks a gentleman merely half-tells in this brief poem - --
May 15th, 2020 06:42
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