Comments received on poems by Neville



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Goldfinch60 said:

Good one Neville, we can always find an adhesive remover so that lives can move forward into the good times again.

March 26th, 2019 10:11

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sylviasearcher said:

I definitely loved this one.

March 26th, 2019 06:48

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Neville said:

The sons of Lazarus sounds good to me Nicholas

March 26th, 2019 05:40

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Fay Slimm. said:

An aptitude for taking three little words and using them for mysterious back-up to poetic attraction comes from a talented mind and my friend you have that for sure. - - -

March 26th, 2019 05:27

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Nicholas Browning said:

A solemn read, in a sense.
I enjoyed it, Nev.


March 26th, 2019 05:20

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orchidee said:

You been using super glue?!

March 26th, 2019 05:13

Hey Lazarus
Goldfinch60 said:

Some people just cannot hack it themselves and steal others work.


Good strong write Neville.

March 25th, 2019 13:39

Hey Lazarus
Suresh said:

--------- is the best form of flattery

I find this whole piece comical
It\'s what we all want to SHOUT OUT


March 25th, 2019 10:41

Hey Lazarus
sylviasearcher said:

I had not read this as about plagerism until I read your note and comment. I had read it about the Lazarus in my head a little, plagerising life. Or perhaps even a take on the same notions and ideas recurring through time and literature.

So when I read all the comments I got more confused!

March 25th, 2019 07:58

Hey Lazarus
Michael Edwards said:

Intrigued to know who it is but with you all way in condemnation. Message well put.

March 25th, 2019 07:00

Hey Lazarus
Nicholas Browning said:

I must admit that I\'m a tad bit confused. Does this have anything to do with Osiris?

March 25th, 2019 05:05

Hey Lazarus
Fay Slimm. said:

Today\'s need for recognition smears itself over unscrupulous word-thieves who feel the world owes them - - this compelling outcry puts plagiarists where they belong - well said Nev. and I for one second this artistic exposure.

March 25th, 2019 04:56

Hey Lazarus
orchidee said:

Nothing seems to incur the wrath of poets quite as much as plagiarizing. There was a blatant poet, nicked other\'s works, palmed them off on another site, complete with his photo. The cad, the bounder, the..... Woof! Fido stopped me saying unspeakable things!

March 25th, 2019 04:48

Birds on the Wire
sylviasearcher said:

Like they had never been there at all

Perfect.

March 25th, 2019 02:56

Birds on the Wire
Goldfinch60 said:

Super write, watching birds (feathered) is something I have been doing all my life.

March 25th, 2019 02:15

Birds on the Wire
Nicholas Browning said:

A nice read, Nev.

March 24th, 2019 19:50

Birds on the Wire
Michael Edwards said:

A real uplifting write in more ways than one - somehow put me in mind of that super song All God\'s Creatures. Now I can\'t get it out of my head. And I still don\'t know the Pink Floyd song. lol

March 24th, 2019 16:13

Birds on the Wire
Fay Slimm. said:

Nev - after another close look at your birds with the wire a vision of how they all got it to sing blew my mind - Spring fever inside them they agreed to show females some feathered libido so using telepathy they rose to the occasion and baited the game with a quick serenade .... Eurika !! that is, in bird-speak, one way to please mates.. ha x

March 24th, 2019 13:04

Birds on the Wire
orchidee said:

I can\'t see what all the fuss is about. I mean, think of all the air it would save if none of us breathed for 24 hours. Sounds like a good plan to me, but Fido doesn\'t like it!

March 24th, 2019 12:23

Birds on the Wire
orchidee said:

You gonna try it - not breathing for 24 hours? It\'ll save using the air - in some cases, hot ait that\'s spouted, speaking for meself. lol

March 24th, 2019 08:05

Birds on the Wire
Fay Slimm. said:

Making life more fun from collective effort needs telepathy - and this I feel we all have if only we use it.... wow what a deep subject this write raised on a Sunday morn Nev....... great stuff. x

March 24th, 2019 02:59

Birds on the Wire
Neville said:

probably dreaming

March 24th, 2019 02:51

Birds on the Wire
orchidee said:

A fine write Neville. If we get out of bed of a morning the wrong side, we might not know if we\'re living or dead - there ya go!

March 24th, 2019 02:40

Victims of Truth
whisperingquill said:

Superb beyond measure Sir. πŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ’«πŸ’«

March 24th, 2019 02:20

Victims of Truth
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good Neville, may you ocean be full of love.

March 24th, 2019 01:17

Victims of Truth
Nicholas Browning said:

I thought I knew how big the world was. Thank you for letting me know that I was getting ahead of myself.
Best regards.

March 23rd, 2019 18:13

Victims of Truth
Neville said:

I reckon we all get that feeling.. there is something about the lay of words and of course our imaginings.... and the ocean and the sky and of life and love and butterflies..... x

March 23rd, 2019 14:10

Victims of Truth
Michael Edwards said:

And be my dolphin
in a sea of dreams.
- this drew me in and makes me want to write a take on some of the ideas you have used so well.

March 23rd, 2019 13:56

Victims of Truth
orchidee said:

Cooeeee, Sir N. Should I put Fido out the back yard a while?

March 23rd, 2019 11:51

Victims of Truth
Laura🌻 said:

Neville,

I enjoyed reading your poem! Your penned words that can be interpreted in many ways...depending on the reader! I’d call it a smorgasbord of interpretations!

~Laura~


March 23rd, 2019 11:42



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