Comments received on poems by Neville
Still Time
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Great Neville another piece that can be read in so many ways
At my age this says \"Get On With It while there IS Still Time\"
Stay safe mt friend
June 27th, 2020 05:38
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Great Neville another piece that can be read in so many ways
At my age this says \"Get On With It while there IS Still Time\"
Stay safe mt friend
June 27th, 2020 05:38
Still Time
orchidee said:
Good write Neville.
As I\'ve said, I spent so long one day finding out what \'Carpe Diem\' meant, that by the time I found out, there was no day left to seize.
Well, ya can\'t win \'em all, can ya?! Doh!
If they had said \'Seize The Day\' to start with, I would have known what they were on about!
June 27th, 2020 01:58
orchidee said:
Good write Neville.
As I\'ve said, I spent so long one day finding out what \'Carpe Diem\' meant, that by the time I found out, there was no day left to seize.
Well, ya can\'t win \'em all, can ya?! Doh!
If they had said \'Seize The Day\' to start with, I would have known what they were on about!
June 27th, 2020 01:58
Still Time
Goldfinch60 said:
Time is full of moments and every moment is special grab every one with your heart.
Andy
June 27th, 2020 00:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Time is full of moments and every moment is special grab every one with your heart.
Andy
June 27th, 2020 00:26
Still Time
Bragee said:
Insightful writing that inspires thinkers like myself to live!
June 26th, 2020 15:10
Bragee said:
Insightful writing that inspires thinkers like myself to live!
June 26th, 2020 15:10
Still Time
Fay Slimm. said:
How wise this reminder that to make changes takes action as your verse proposes over and again. Taming the moment surely makes love-time run slower - -- so lets. Who could resist the invite.......x
June 26th, 2020 14:11
Fay Slimm. said:
How wise this reminder that to make changes takes action as your verse proposes over and again. Taming the moment surely makes love-time run slower - -- so lets. Who could resist the invite.......x
June 26th, 2020 14:11
Still Time
dusk arising said:
OK I\'m game, lets build a still. I\'m not doing anything for a few days so lets contemplate.... what sort of liquor shall we create?
Of course the quality of water is really important as has been proven by the scotch distillers so i think these hot weather days are a good time to be wading into some of our freshwater streams for sampling. Or should we be creating a heavenly liquor created from the hailstones which we are promised will be arriving shortly.
Don\'t wince like that, i said hailstones not gallstones!
Enjoyed your everso encouraging write today.
June 26th, 2020 14:02
dusk arising said:
OK I\'m game, lets build a still. I\'m not doing anything for a few days so lets contemplate.... what sort of liquor shall we create?
Of course the quality of water is really important as has been proven by the scotch distillers so i think these hot weather days are a good time to be wading into some of our freshwater streams for sampling. Or should we be creating a heavenly liquor created from the hailstones which we are promised will be arriving shortly.
Don\'t wince like that, i said hailstones not gallstones!
Enjoyed your everso encouraging write today.
June 26th, 2020 14:02
Tabitha Tootle
dusk arising said:
aha dear young Tabitha Tootle whack, the stalwart from Bootle.
No fear of yer heartstrings being twanged on departings.
Just a sigh of \'ooh neck\' as she throttles ya neck.
Love to read a bit of well composed fun.
June 26th, 2020 09:28
dusk arising said:
aha dear young Tabitha Tootle whack, the stalwart from Bootle.
No fear of yer heartstrings being twanged on departings.
Just a sigh of \'ooh neck\' as she throttles ya neck.
Love to read a bit of well composed fun.
June 26th, 2020 09:28
Taking in Water
dusk arising said:
Well i\'ll be a drowning weevil in a ships biscuit if i didn\'t enjoy this piece sir Neville. And all for the price of a tuppenny dreadful too.
Enchanting.
June 26th, 2020 09:25
dusk arising said:
Well i\'ll be a drowning weevil in a ships biscuit if i didn\'t enjoy this piece sir Neville. And all for the price of a tuppenny dreadful too.
Enchanting.
June 26th, 2020 09:25
Taking in Water
Michael Edwards said:
Mines a red wine or a ton and ginic - what a great piece of penmanship.
June 26th, 2020 07:08
Michael Edwards said:
Mines a red wine or a ton and ginic - what a great piece of penmanship.
June 26th, 2020 07:08
Taking in Water
Goldfinch60 said:
Aah me \'earty, Davy Jones not calling you today, with that tuppence can you by a rum for the old sailor in t\'corner, that\'s me. Andy Tar is t\'name.
June 26th, 2020 00:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Aah me \'earty, Davy Jones not calling you today, with that tuppence can you by a rum for the old sailor in t\'corner, that\'s me. Andy Tar is t\'name.
June 26th, 2020 00:59
Taking in Water
Suresh said:
Ale\'ll give you courage on land and courage at sea
Courage when dry, and courage when drowning
...ask any pirate, me lad!
June 25th, 2020 18:43
Suresh said:
Ale\'ll give you courage on land and courage at sea
Courage when dry, and courage when drowning
...ask any pirate, me lad!
June 25th, 2020 18:43
Taking in Water
orchidee said:
What year will that be - or approximately? When tuppence was about 50 quid\'s worth today?
I would be a pirate, but I got this parrot on me shoulder, name of Polly; a relative of Fido\'s, never lets me have much \'excitement\'! lol.
June 25th, 2020 11:11
orchidee said:
What year will that be - or approximately? When tuppence was about 50 quid\'s worth today?
I would be a pirate, but I got this parrot on me shoulder, name of Polly; a relative of Fido\'s, never lets me have much \'excitement\'! lol.
June 25th, 2020 11:11
Taking in Water
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Loved reading this finely penned poem. That Captain and lad certainly deserve all the ‘ale and salt brisket‘ that ‘tuppence can buy’...and perhaps more!
Laura🌻
June 25th, 2020 11:07
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Loved reading this finely penned poem. That Captain and lad certainly deserve all the ‘ale and salt brisket‘ that ‘tuppence can buy’...and perhaps more!
Laura🌻
June 25th, 2020 11:07
Taking in Water
Fay Slimm. said:
A scary adventure at sea which demands another installment methinks - - - - your ability with stories is shown to perfection here with a smatter of archaic language to boot - -\'ere\'s wishin\' a safe landing and tavern\'s hot viands for that Cap\'n an\' lad thanks to \'ee me \'Earty
June 25th, 2020 05:51
Fay Slimm. said:
A scary adventure at sea which demands another installment methinks - - - - your ability with stories is shown to perfection here with a smatter of archaic language to boot - -\'ere\'s wishin\' a safe landing and tavern\'s hot viands for that Cap\'n an\' lad thanks to \'ee me \'Earty
June 25th, 2020 05:51
Tabitha Tootle
Goldfinch60 said:
Protection of children is so important so I am grateful for Tabitha looking after them.
Good fun write Neville.
Andy
June 25th, 2020 00:07
Goldfinch60 said:
Protection of children is so important so I am grateful for Tabitha looking after them.
Good fun write Neville.
Andy
June 25th, 2020 00:07
Tabitha Tootle
Suresh said:
Tabitha Tootle are the ones that make the best of friends.
Nicely penned my friend - publish it
June 24th, 2020 22:27
Suresh said:
Tabitha Tootle are the ones that make the best of friends.
Nicely penned my friend - publish it
June 24th, 2020 22:27
Tabitha Tootle
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
I say a big hooray and I applaud ‘Tabitha Tootle’! Blessed are they who have a ‘Tabitha Tootle’ to keep
‘the streets clean From bad boys and bullies’...
and YES, I do know what you mean!
Happy belated Father’s Day!
Laura🌻
June 24th, 2020 10:43
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
I say a big hooray and I applaud ‘Tabitha Tootle’! Blessed are they who have a ‘Tabitha Tootle’ to keep
‘the streets clean From bad boys and bullies’...
and YES, I do know what you mean!
Happy belated Father’s Day!
Laura🌻
June 24th, 2020 10:43
Tabitha Tootle
orchidee said:
Should I meet her, now she\'s grown up?! lol. Will she scweam and scweam, or is that someone else?
June 24th, 2020 10:09
orchidee said:
Should I meet her, now she\'s grown up?! lol. Will she scweam and scweam, or is that someone else?
June 24th, 2020 10:09
Tabitha Tootle
Fay Slimm. said:
A veritable hero that little Tabitha - should imagine this poem brought great grins to your listening daughter back then Nev. - it certainly did it for me.
June 24th, 2020 04:05
Fay Slimm. said:
A veritable hero that little Tabitha - should imagine this poem brought great grins to your listening daughter back then Nev. - it certainly did it for me.
June 24th, 2020 04:05
Nob Hill Hotel Ca
Suresh said:
I too have enjoyed the Fairmont several times, and the regality and pageantry is once represented.
Thanks for the memories.
June 13th, 2020 21:13
Suresh said:
I too have enjoyed the Fairmont several times, and the regality and pageantry is once represented.
Thanks for the memories.
June 13th, 2020 21:13
Kanreki
Suresh said:
I thoroughly enjoyed reading your words, but I also wanted to understand the depth behind them. I looked up the meaning behind all the Japanese words and symbolisims, and that only made the poem that much more interesting.
June 11th, 2020 18:50
Suresh said:
I thoroughly enjoyed reading your words, but I also wanted to understand the depth behind them. I looked up the meaning behind all the Japanese words and symbolisims, and that only made the poem that much more interesting.
June 11th, 2020 18:50
Climax
Suresh said:
See how all that smoking has aged me...
I forget what came before that....
AHHHH!!!! YES, lighting of the match.
June 10th, 2020 15:51
Suresh said:
See how all that smoking has aged me...
I forget what came before that....
AHHHH!!!! YES, lighting of the match.
June 10th, 2020 15:51
Climax
MendedFences27 said:
This kind of behavior will kill you! You also know it\'s habit forming or addictive. There will be life-altering consequences, not to mention the cost. So if you have to chose which to lose, just keep on smoking.
A great big chuckle from me. - Phil A.
June 9th, 2020 22:10
MendedFences27 said:
This kind of behavior will kill you! You also know it\'s habit forming or addictive. There will be life-altering consequences, not to mention the cost. So if you have to chose which to lose, just keep on smoking.
A great big chuckle from me. - Phil A.
June 9th, 2020 22:10
Climax
peto said:
Yep
Just how it usually works for me
And over as quickly
Good fun
June 9th, 2020 09:46
peto said:
Yep
Just how it usually works for me
And over as quickly
Good fun
June 9th, 2020 09:46
Climax
orchidee said:
If I read more into this, it will bring on a hefty swoon. Fido will chuck buckets of cold water on me! lol.
Did ya know Mary (Hopkin)? Not personally of course - you know her songs?! \'Twas about the time I stopped watching \'Top of the Pops\' I reckon.
June 9th, 2020 01:49
orchidee said:
If I read more into this, it will bring on a hefty swoon. Fido will chuck buckets of cold water on me! lol.
Did ya know Mary (Hopkin)? Not personally of course - you know her songs?! \'Twas about the time I stopped watching \'Top of the Pops\' I reckon.
June 9th, 2020 01:49
Falling for Icarus
SerenWise said:
I like the abstraction in this poem, well done
June 8th, 2020 20:37
SerenWise said:
I like the abstraction in this poem, well done
June 8th, 2020 20:37
Climax
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - - what a striking description of reaching the climax before lighting up.......smilin\' big here ..........x
June 8th, 2020 16:01
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - - what a striking description of reaching the climax before lighting up.......smilin\' big here ..........x
June 8th, 2020 16:01
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