Comments received on poems by Neville
A Ladies Man
Suresh said:
......ain\'t it so that in the end there\'s always the one for whom we will even choose death.....
September 4th, 2019 09:49
Suresh said:
......ain\'t it so that in the end there\'s always the one for whom we will even choose death.....
September 4th, 2019 09:49
A Ladies Man
Christina8 said:
Great cadence to this...and who wants to be single?? This is a superb write!!
September 4th, 2019 09:46
Christina8 said:
Great cadence to this...and who wants to be single?? This is a superb write!!
September 4th, 2019 09:46
A Ladies Man
Clara said:
N,
There\'s such a rhythm to these words that I enjoy! Thank you for sharing!
CLARA X
September 4th, 2019 08:33
Clara said:
N,
There\'s such a rhythm to these words that I enjoy! Thank you for sharing!
CLARA X
September 4th, 2019 08:33
A Ladies Man
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Wow...
An extraordinary write which I enjoyed reading!
~Laura~
September 4th, 2019 04:16
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Wow...
An extraordinary write which I enjoyed reading!
~Laura~
September 4th, 2019 04:16
A Ladies Man
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Neville. Once you have found the right person the \' Ladies man\' need not exist anymore.
September 4th, 2019 01:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Neville. Once you have found the right person the \' Ladies man\' need not exist anymore.
September 4th, 2019 01:43
A Ladies Man
dusk arising said:
Singleton lifestyle is freedom to do exactly as u like..... and retain that roaming eye (convinced of course one still has those ladykiller looks).
On the other hand, a good cook and bottlewasher?
September 4th, 2019 01:37
dusk arising said:
Singleton lifestyle is freedom to do exactly as u like..... and retain that roaming eye (convinced of course one still has those ladykiller looks).
On the other hand, a good cook and bottlewasher?
September 4th, 2019 01:37
A Ladies Man
orchidee said:
Some of these poems on this site will be the death of me - or the swoon of me! lol.
September 4th, 2019 01:35
orchidee said:
Some of these poems on this site will be the death of me - or the swoon of me! lol.
September 4th, 2019 01:35
For The Sake of Poetry
Goldfinch60 said:
The thoughts of the past are ever intriguing.
September 4th, 2019 01:07
Goldfinch60 said:
The thoughts of the past are ever intriguing.
September 4th, 2019 01:07
For The Sake of Poetry
FineB said:
Hello Neville,
A good write
Good.
Keep writing FineB
September 3rd, 2019 10:12
FineB said:
Hello Neville,
A good write
Good.
Keep writing FineB
September 3rd, 2019 10:12
For The Sake of Poetry
Poetic Dan said:
What a great ending!
Much appreciated
September 3rd, 2019 09:47
Poetic Dan said:
What a great ending!
Much appreciated
September 3rd, 2019 09:47
For The Sake of Poetry
Christina8 said:
Great write, Nev..wonderful dangling ending I must say...
September 3rd, 2019 07:07
Christina8 said:
Great write, Nev..wonderful dangling ending I must say...
September 3rd, 2019 07:07
For The Sake of Poetry
Michael Edwards said:
Great write and I love the dangling ending.
September 3rd, 2019 03:26
Michael Edwards said:
Great write and I love the dangling ending.
September 3rd, 2019 03:26
For The Sake of Poetry
Fay Slimm. said:
A smile for this beguiling end again Nev --- you are a master at leaving mystery in your tale-endings.
September 3rd, 2019 03:12
Fay Slimm. said:
A smile for this beguiling end again Nev --- you are a master at leaving mystery in your tale-endings.
September 3rd, 2019 03:12
For The Sake of Poetry
orchidee said:
A fine write Nev. I was gonna write a poem: \'Oh, for the sake of...\' or \'Oh for the love of...\'
Aww, why did they suggest \'For the love of God, or for the love of me ear-drums, no more singing from me\'?! heehee.
Where\'s the purple tablets?
September 3rd, 2019 01:52
orchidee said:
A fine write Nev. I was gonna write a poem: \'Oh, for the sake of...\' or \'Oh for the love of...\'
Aww, why did they suggest \'For the love of God, or for the love of me ear-drums, no more singing from me\'?! heehee.
Where\'s the purple tablets?
September 3rd, 2019 01:52
For The Sake of Poetry
kevin browne said:
In the sprin of justifying a love bound attraction to this kilted girly sounding so beautiful and rare. Graet write, Nev and you never let us down with the pen you hold. Nice work...
September 3rd, 2019 01:43
kevin browne said:
In the sprin of justifying a love bound attraction to this kilted girly sounding so beautiful and rare. Graet write, Nev and you never let us down with the pen you hold. Nice work...
September 3rd, 2019 01:43
Bedroom Walls & Borrowers
dusk arising said:
In my trade i have lifted many a floorboard Put my hand into dark unknown places which have not seen the light of day for years - thank goodness for navy blue knickers and linoleum.
Your bedroom walls must have witnessed many a romp compared to my woodchip surrounds.
Great entertaining writing, romancing the stone walls.
August 29th, 2019 11:39
dusk arising said:
In my trade i have lifted many a floorboard Put my hand into dark unknown places which have not seen the light of day for years - thank goodness for navy blue knickers and linoleum.
Your bedroom walls must have witnessed many a romp compared to my woodchip surrounds.
Great entertaining writing, romancing the stone walls.
August 29th, 2019 11:39
Bedroom Walls & Borrowers
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing NEVILLE ~ Something which I (Brian) can relate to ! I love rooms with *Old Stone Walls* and have stayed in several in my time. We all leave some of our DNA (Destination Note Alert !) wherever we lay our Heads. We leave Our Presence for them to sense and they in their turn leave theirs ! My experience is that when I sleep in an Antique Room in my slumber I always hear voices and see spectres moving through the Walls ~ the reminder of previous occupants. However they are never tangible always ephemeral ~ SPOOKY. Warner Hotels (UK) have some excellent old Bedrooms one can stay in ~ at your own risk !
Thanks for scaring !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours B & A 💙🧡💙🧡💙
August 29th, 2019 10:21
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing NEVILLE ~ Something which I (Brian) can relate to ! I love rooms with *Old Stone Walls* and have stayed in several in my time. We all leave some of our DNA (Destination Note Alert !) wherever we lay our Heads. We leave Our Presence for them to sense and they in their turn leave theirs ! My experience is that when I sleep in an Antique Room in my slumber I always hear voices and see spectres moving through the Walls ~ the reminder of previous occupants. However they are never tangible always ephemeral ~ SPOOKY. Warner Hotels (UK) have some excellent old Bedrooms one can stay in ~ at your own risk !
Thanks for scaring !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours B & A 💙🧡💙🧡💙
August 29th, 2019 10:21
Bedroom Walls & Borrowers
Suresh said:
\"If walls could only talk\"
well, you just made them sing
August 29th, 2019 09:11
Suresh said:
\"If walls could only talk\"
well, you just made them sing
August 29th, 2019 09:11
Bedroom Walls & Borrowers
Christina8 said:
It\'s fascinating, the history of your bedroom walls....read so perfectly! A wonderful read Neville.
August 29th, 2019 06:33
Christina8 said:
It\'s fascinating, the history of your bedroom walls....read so perfectly! A wonderful read Neville.
August 29th, 2019 06:33
Bedroom Walls & Borrowers
Fay Slimm. said:
A poet\'s look at the residue left by many a happening between old stone walls and versed to perfection I saw those frolics and leave-takings so clearly - a fantastic read Nev. and thank you.
August 29th, 2019 03:02
Fay Slimm. said:
A poet\'s look at the residue left by many a happening between old stone walls and versed to perfection I saw those frolics and leave-takings so clearly - a fantastic read Nev. and thank you.
August 29th, 2019 03:02
Bedroom Walls & Borrowers
orchidee said:
A fine write N. I don\'t know any wenches, whores, or milk maids. Should I get to know some? I said - I only popped in for a pint of milk - that\'s my \'excuse\' (or should I go back to sleep?! lol).
August 29th, 2019 01:30
orchidee said:
A fine write N. I don\'t know any wenches, whores, or milk maids. Should I get to know some? I said - I only popped in for a pint of milk - that\'s my \'excuse\' (or should I go back to sleep?! lol).
August 29th, 2019 01:30
Trapped
Goldfinch60 said:
A strong write Neville. I too cannot understand why it happens to the young. When I was Chaplain to the Sea Cadets one of the young ladies self harmed but she would not talk about it with me.
August 29th, 2019 00:49
Goldfinch60 said:
A strong write Neville. I too cannot understand why it happens to the young. When I was Chaplain to the Sea Cadets one of the young ladies self harmed but she would not talk about it with me.
August 29th, 2019 00:49
Trapped
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing NEVILLE for many (often Teens) Self-harm is their only way of gaining attention ~ a *cri de coeur !* Alas often it is *The most unkindest cut of all* often with tragic results ! I (BRIAN) teach mostly 16\'s to 25\'s the Age group in which self-harm peaks ! In 1 to 1 councelling (I am aqualified Councellor ~ as is Angela) they say *I just wanted someone to listen to ME* ! Fortunately (so far) I have never lost a Student ~ and they see me as a Neutral Listening Ear ! We don\'t have Parents Evenings in College ! We treat all our Students as *Responsible Adults*. You have opened Pandoras Famous Box !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA 💙🧡💙🧡💙
August 28th, 2019 11:30
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing NEVILLE for many (often Teens) Self-harm is their only way of gaining attention ~ a *cri de coeur !* Alas often it is *The most unkindest cut of all* often with tragic results ! I (BRIAN) teach mostly 16\'s to 25\'s the Age group in which self-harm peaks ! In 1 to 1 councelling (I am aqualified Councellor ~ as is Angela) they say *I just wanted someone to listen to ME* ! Fortunately (so far) I have never lost a Student ~ and they see me as a Neutral Listening Ear ! We don\'t have Parents Evenings in College ! We treat all our Students as *Responsible Adults*. You have opened Pandoras Famous Box !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA 💙🧡💙🧡💙
August 28th, 2019 11:30
Trapped
sylviasearcher said:
This was written with an acceptance that only those with experience directly or indirectly could understand the necessity of.
August 28th, 2019 08:26
sylviasearcher said:
This was written with an acceptance that only those with experience directly or indirectly could understand the necessity of.
August 28th, 2019 08:26
Trapped
kevin browne said:
This brought home to the sentiments of my Bi-polar brother who has attemted suicide on many occassions. I pray for him everyday that the next day he stays with us. You have written some reality which a lot of peple are troubled with. This dis-order needs more attention and suggestions of how to make these types of people look on the brighter side to life. You brought tears to my eyes reading this poem...
August 28th, 2019 08:17
kevin browne said:
This brought home to the sentiments of my Bi-polar brother who has attemted suicide on many occassions. I pray for him everyday that the next day he stays with us. You have written some reality which a lot of peple are troubled with. This dis-order needs more attention and suggestions of how to make these types of people look on the brighter side to life. You brought tears to my eyes reading this poem...
August 28th, 2019 08:17
Trapped
Fay Slimm. said:
Sad but familiar - harming of self in some measure seems to come from too hasty an entrapment to love or lust............ a powerful piece of writing Neville.
August 28th, 2019 03:25
Fay Slimm. said:
Sad but familiar - harming of self in some measure seems to come from too hasty an entrapment to love or lust............ a powerful piece of writing Neville.
August 28th, 2019 03:25
Trapped
orchidee said:
OOhh, I\'m all faint now. I\'ve heard some horror stories. \'Cutting up\' happens, but I would rather cut up a joint of meat.
I\'m all of a shudder now. I hate the theme really - hate hearing details, that is.
A cry for help? Yet desperately so.
August 28th, 2019 02:54
orchidee said:
OOhh, I\'m all faint now. I\'ve heard some horror stories. \'Cutting up\' happens, but I would rather cut up a joint of meat.
I\'m all of a shudder now. I hate the theme really - hate hearing details, that is.
A cry for help? Yet desperately so.
August 28th, 2019 02:54
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