Comments received on poems by Neville



Watching
Michael Edwards said:

Bit like mmmm - why does it never happen to me ?
Bit like the life class - expecting a curvacious young lady and the model turned out to be an old boy in his eighties.

April 13th, 2019 05:49

Watching
dusk arising said:

Been there, done that, tripped over my tongue.

April 13th, 2019 04:53

Watching
orchidee said:

Should Fido bark?! He\'s a pest. That is his life, or a main part of it - barking at certain poems. And when did he learn to read?! And -- should I meet her?

April 13th, 2019 04:40

La Petit Mort
Goldfinch60 said:

Great sensuous poem Neville.

April 13th, 2019 00:15

La Petit Mort
Michael Edwards said:

I\'m just recovering from one - fine write N

April 12th, 2019 13:29

La Petit Mort
SerenWise said:

Lovely erotic piece, I\'ve always loved the term \'la petit mort\'

April 12th, 2019 11:44

La Petit Mort
Suresh said:

Such enevitability, with such ease implored.

April 12th, 2019 11:37

La Petit Mort
dusk arising said:

What wakes me from le petit mort... are we talking the flare or the afterglow..... the blissful afterglow for me..... do not wake me, do not disturb...let no doorbell sound... no amazon delivery of crayons for the grandchilds birthday demand my arising...no. Leave me in bliss....

See what you do? ... you\'re dangerous you are...

April 12th, 2019 11:09

Morning Coffee
JB said:

Interesting rhythm . I like it. :)

April 12th, 2019 09:17

La Petit Mort
orchidee said:

Oohh, should I try this?! Fido don\'t let me have any excitement, so if it\'s that category…..

April 12th, 2019 08:22

La Petit Mort
Fay Slimm. said:

A fantastic exposure of la petit mort Nev. and in such delicate language - a most sensuous read of which I take note....... must read it again so most breathlessly saved................

April 12th, 2019 05:18

La Petit Mort
Poetic Dan said:

Outstanding! I\'ve read it a few times now and every time I feel a bit more grounded as I\'m losing the plot this morning!

Thank you in so many ways

April 12th, 2019 05:07

Morning Coffee
dusk arising said:

Lucky sod! Most blokes have to suffer the earache of her indoors innit.

April 11th, 2019 16:12

Morning Coffee
Neville said:

Aye sir, you can beat an egg and you can beat a carpet, but you just can’t beat a good coffee... thanks for visiting this page GF60....always good to hear from you........ Neville

April 11th, 2019 15:39

Morning Coffee
Goldfinch60 said:

Very emotive write Neville, I enjoy good coffee.

April 11th, 2019 15:25

Morning Coffee
Suresh said:

Ohh! I forget my morning coffee, but then, I drink mostly very light tea.

Enjoy your coffee and croissants, I guess I won\'t be on your list of invitees

April 11th, 2019 12:44

Morning Coffee
orchidee said:

You had that coffee today? About 20 cups, as some people seem to have in a day?!

April 11th, 2019 12:14

Morning Coffee
SerenWise said:

Nice reflective piece, very emotive

April 11th, 2019 11:20

Morning Coffee
Laura🌻 said:

Neville,

I’ve enjoyed the read as much as I’m enjoying my drink of choice at this time of the morning...
Un caffé lungo!

Grazie!☕️

~Laura~



April 11th, 2019 04:47

Morning Coffee
Michael Edwards said:

An impelling read - much enjoyed.

April 11th, 2019 04:29

Morning Coffee
Fay Slimm. said:

A poignancy hangs over this small verse of reflection and penned with your usual gift for mystery the write takes on a life of its own - - settled but lonely that morning coffee tells such a story - - - - a compelling read and another winner methinks dear Nev...............

April 11th, 2019 03:44

Morning Coffee
orchidee said:

We could pop round for a cup of coffee with him! A nice slice of cake too. Or rather, tea for me. I would spit out black coffee, and most coffee! lol.
And did he have a wild evening the night before - needing black coffee now?

April 11th, 2019 03:36

Shadow Envy
SerenWise said:

Very poignant, nicely done

April 10th, 2019 15:05

Shadow Envy
Goldfinch60 said:

Matey those shadows intertwine into one.

April 10th, 2019 15:05

Shadow Envy
Michael Edwards said:

It has a gentle punch in its simplicity - great write Neville.

April 10th, 2019 11:06

Shadow Envy
Suresh said:

Let the shadows be intertwined forever.

Says it all

April 10th, 2019 10:59

Shadow Envy
orchidee said:

A fine write Neville. My singing gets in the way. lol.

April 10th, 2019 09:30

Shadow Envy
dusk arising said:

Now thats clever and contains such wisdom.
Short and sweet (thus powerful).
Definitely one for my favourites.
Thank you.

April 10th, 2019 08:38

Shadow Envy
Fay Slimm. said:

Shadows of love never impeach on the other to spoil its simplicity-- such a poignant appeal to these honest wishes in today\'s read Nev........

April 10th, 2019 03:49

Canvas
Michael Edwards said:

Short, simple and quite inspirational.Great work.

April 9th, 2019 16:23



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