Comments received on poems by Neville
Don\'t You Dare Stop Now
kevin browne said:
I\'ve sent you a message, Neville, because yours hasn\'t come through to me. Try to message me again...
September 9th, 2019 12:08
kevin browne said:
I\'ve sent you a message, Neville, because yours hasn\'t come through to me. Try to message me again...
September 9th, 2019 12:08
Don\'t You Dare Stop Now
kevin browne said:
You can\'t get even with this aching pain so don\'t dare stop writing trying to express it. You captured this moment from your pen and therefore you have reached for the need to be on point. Graet stuff, Neville....
September 9th, 2019 09:26
kevin browne said:
You can\'t get even with this aching pain so don\'t dare stop writing trying to express it. You captured this moment from your pen and therefore you have reached for the need to be on point. Graet stuff, Neville....
September 9th, 2019 09:26
Don\'t You Dare Stop Now
Alta H Mabin said:
Exquisite write, just enough detail to almost \"feel\" that ache.
September 9th, 2019 08:15
Alta H Mabin said:
Exquisite write, just enough detail to almost \"feel\" that ache.
September 9th, 2019 08:15
Don\'t You Dare Stop Now
Christina8 said:
A wonderful write.....an ache so poetically described!
September 9th, 2019 06:14
Christina8 said:
A wonderful write.....an ache so poetically described!
September 9th, 2019 06:14
Don\'t You Dare Stop Now
dusk arising said:
Well at first i had a picture of you two riding a tandem up a hill, she at the front, looking forward to freewheeling down the other side with you the powerhouse peddler resting your head on her arched back.... but, somehow i cant quite see u on a tandem.
Then theres the story of the dog who saw a couple on a tandem and threw a bucket of water over them.
This really is a fine piece Neville, it speaks of that unwritten tryst where lovers truly meet.
September 9th, 2019 03:29
dusk arising said:
Well at first i had a picture of you two riding a tandem up a hill, she at the front, looking forward to freewheeling down the other side with you the powerhouse peddler resting your head on her arched back.... but, somehow i cant quite see u on a tandem.
Then theres the story of the dog who saw a couple on a tandem and threw a bucket of water over them.
This really is a fine piece Neville, it speaks of that unwritten tryst where lovers truly meet.
September 9th, 2019 03:29
Don\'t You Dare Stop Now
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha -- Big Little Fay - - hhhmmm that\'s a new name - -- I\'m not very big but I know what you mean dear amigo ............. an smilin\' big here though.
September 9th, 2019 02:57
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha -- Big Little Fay - - hhhmmm that\'s a new name - -- I\'m not very big but I know what you mean dear amigo ............. an smilin\' big here though.
September 9th, 2019 02:57
Don\'t You Dare Stop Now
orchidee said:
Fido would have barked if not marked 18+. He\'s a watchdog, but a pest at times!
Glad some ones are having fun. lol.
September 9th, 2019 02:51
orchidee said:
Fido would have barked if not marked 18+. He\'s a watchdog, but a pest at times!
Glad some ones are having fun. lol.
September 9th, 2019 02:51
Don\'t You Dare Stop Now
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - - this write reaches its climax so poetically perfect - - - - - - a sigh of a read...........................
September 9th, 2019 02:04
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - - this write reaches its climax so poetically perfect - - - - - - a sigh of a read...........................
September 9th, 2019 02:04
Double Jeopardy
Fay Slimm. said:
Returned for a second helping of this punchy 7-5 -7 and still find it bloomin tres bon............................ x
September 8th, 2019 23:57
Fay Slimm. said:
Returned for a second helping of this punchy 7-5 -7 and still find it bloomin tres bon............................ x
September 8th, 2019 23:57
Double Jeopardy
orchidee said:
I got me armour on, in case anyone takes a swing at me. Ya know - at church, as I said! (You\'ll know what I\'m on about).
September 8th, 2019 07:44
orchidee said:
I got me armour on, in case anyone takes a swing at me. Ya know - at church, as I said! (You\'ll know what I\'m on about).
September 8th, 2019 07:44
Double Jeopardy
dusk arising said:
Ha ha ha ha now this really made me laugh. So many people came to mind.
Thank you.
On re-reading decided this should be in my favourites.
September 8th, 2019 05:32
dusk arising said:
Ha ha ha ha now this really made me laugh. So many people came to mind.
Thank you.
On re-reading decided this should be in my favourites.
September 8th, 2019 05:32
Double Jeopardy
kevin browne said:
There, too, brings about the subject of not being able to punch and fight back. Uncertaintly is the fear in your poem here. Yes, most people would fight back after being degraded down on the floor, These inflictions of physical damage changes the outlook upon ones own life and the strength to control it through either the physical or the mental ability to control it. When blood is spilt then the suffering begins. For few such lines to read, yet they reveal a thousand words. Powerfully done, my friendd...
September 8th, 2019 04:24
kevin browne said:
There, too, brings about the subject of not being able to punch and fight back. Uncertaintly is the fear in your poem here. Yes, most people would fight back after being degraded down on the floor, These inflictions of physical damage changes the outlook upon ones own life and the strength to control it through either the physical or the mental ability to control it. When blood is spilt then the suffering begins. For few such lines to read, yet they reveal a thousand words. Powerfully done, my friendd...
September 8th, 2019 04:24
Double Jeopardy
Clara said:
Oh wow. This says so much in such few words.... I read it as following a physical beating, that person will take over with an emotional beating against themselves... As if blaming themselves...
Thank you for sharing this one. Definitely stayed awhile to ponder.
CLARA X
September 8th, 2019 03:14
Clara said:
Oh wow. This says so much in such few words.... I read it as following a physical beating, that person will take over with an emotional beating against themselves... As if blaming themselves...
Thank you for sharing this one. Definitely stayed awhile to ponder.
CLARA X
September 8th, 2019 03:14
Double Jeopardy
Fay Slimm. said:
An ouch of a Sen. my friend....... am feeling the force of your interpretive punch. Clever indeed is your play on words.................. Fay
September 8th, 2019 02:44
Fay Slimm. said:
An ouch of a Sen. my friend....... am feeling the force of your interpretive punch. Clever indeed is your play on words.................. Fay
September 8th, 2019 02:44
Double Jeopardy
Michael Edwards said:
Oh what a great write - it had me smiling and yet there is an underlying here - not sure what it is but it\'s there.
September 8th, 2019 01:46
Michael Edwards said:
Oh what a great write - it had me smiling and yet there is an underlying here - not sure what it is but it\'s there.
September 8th, 2019 01:46
Double Jeopardy
orchidee said:
What\'s going on there? Will I swoon? Probably?!
September 8th, 2019 01:27
orchidee said:
What\'s going on there? Will I swoon? Probably?!
September 8th, 2019 01:27
An Autumn Harvest
Suresh said:
I was transported to thy orchard, seeing the flurry of movement of lasses and lads, young at heart,
September 7th, 2019 13:27
Suresh said:
I was transported to thy orchard, seeing the flurry of movement of lasses and lads, young at heart,
September 7th, 2019 13:27
An Autumn Harvest
Christina8 said:
A refreshing read...reminds me of apple cider which I no doubt will enjoy soon...Loved your poem!!
September 7th, 2019 12:05
Christina8 said:
A refreshing read...reminds me of apple cider which I no doubt will enjoy soon...Loved your poem!!
September 7th, 2019 12:05
An Autumn Harvest
kevin browne said:
Then come hither and tarry is just a brilliant, flowing, at ease and collect throughout the fallen apples...
September 7th, 2019 08:36
kevin browne said:
Then come hither and tarry is just a brilliant, flowing, at ease and collect throughout the fallen apples...
September 7th, 2019 08:36
An Autumn Harvest
Michael Edwards said:
Such a vivid picture painted in the real gem of a write - into the favs.
September 7th, 2019 04:35
Michael Edwards said:
Such a vivid picture painted in the real gem of a write - into the favs.
September 7th, 2019 04:35
An Autumn Harvest
Clara said:
Oh this piece tells such a story. The imagery created by your words are strong. Wonderful piece.... Lovely tribute to autumn and apple picking. Enjoyed this one.
CLARA X
September 7th, 2019 02:37
Clara said:
Oh this piece tells such a story. The imagery created by your words are strong. Wonderful piece.... Lovely tribute to autumn and apple picking. Enjoyed this one.
CLARA X
September 7th, 2019 02:37
An Autumn Harvest
dusk arising said:
Reads like a traditional folk / workers song and has great rythmn.
On re-reading i\'m hearing the instruments, pipe/whistle, violin, accordian/squeeze box and drum.
I\'m also of a mind that soon i shall gather the black berries of autumn and yes those beloved Bramleys.
Really inspiring and a treat to read.
September 7th, 2019 01:34
dusk arising said:
Reads like a traditional folk / workers song and has great rythmn.
On re-reading i\'m hearing the instruments, pipe/whistle, violin, accordian/squeeze box and drum.
I\'m also of a mind that soon i shall gather the black berries of autumn and yes those beloved Bramleys.
Really inspiring and a treat to read.
September 7th, 2019 01:34
An Autumn Harvest
Goldfinch60 said:
I was there as will and had a wheel barrow in which I gently laid the apples ready to eat and convert into apple juice and cider.
Wonderful write Neville.
September 7th, 2019 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
I was there as will and had a wheel barrow in which I gently laid the apples ready to eat and convert into apple juice and cider.
Wonderful write Neville.
September 7th, 2019 01:21
An Autumn Harvest
orchidee said:
A fine write N. Is she your servant? She\'s a busy gal there, picking all them apples!
September 7th, 2019 01:10
orchidee said:
A fine write N. Is she your servant? She\'s a busy gal there, picking all them apples!
September 7th, 2019 01:10
An Autumn Harvest
Fay Slimm. said:
I was there in that orchard so clear was your picture of autumn long past Nev. A fresh morning read of times when living was simple - - and I loved every line.
September 7th, 2019 00:58
Fay Slimm. said:
I was there in that orchard so clear was your picture of autumn long past Nev. A fresh morning read of times when living was simple - - and I loved every line.
September 7th, 2019 00:58
Infinity
Alta H Mabin said:
Beautifully respectful write. Extremely well written, Neville.
September 6th, 2019 11:55
Alta H Mabin said:
Beautifully respectful write. Extremely well written, Neville.
September 6th, 2019 11:55
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