Blink
dusk arising said:

You\'re just taking the piss cos someones told you my telly\'s gone on the blink.
Life passes in the blink of an eye...well no it doesn\'t but looking back on life.... parts of it do pass in a blink or so it seems.
I wrote something similar last year using the click of a camera \'click - he caught her\' not one of my best tho.
OK so you been looking thru some of my old stuff, try July 11th 2018 \'promise\'.

February 1st, 2019 13:58

Waiting for Cancer
Caleb.A said:

The trials of waiting each have their own story throughout a journey. You have illustrated various emotions throughout each stanza, and have shown that the waiting game - as masterful as it is, sings a different tune each an every time. Patience has a character of its own, that character depends on the time and situation.

February 1st, 2019 06:34

Blink
orchidee said:

You ticked the 18+ box? Woof! He will be quiet with the bone.

February 1st, 2019 04:38

Blink
orchidee said:

A fine write N. Might start me watchdog Fido barking, with F and B in it. Ooh!

February 1st, 2019 02:57

Many Things to Many Men
dusk arising said:

And there are those who say the story of events at calvary were invented to enable a certain type of person gain power over the masses, getting them to part with great deals of ill afforded monies and build cathederals within which to make the gullible pay homage.

January 31st, 2019 16:16

Many Things to Many Men
Michael Edwards said:

A great write which just flows.

January 31st, 2019 13:01

Many Things to Many Men
Fay Slimm. said:

Powerful imagery to help with grief - - your friend in his loss will no doubt treasure these lines of tribute and comfort Neville.

January 31st, 2019 10:27

Many Things to Many Men
Neville said:

thanks my friend.. will give you a shout if I need ya... Neville

January 31st, 2019 04:53

Countless Indiscretions
sylviasearcher said:

I made my mind up. Don\'t ask though.

It flowed like you were trying to gently persuade.

January 31st, 2019 02:35

Countless Indiscretions
psychofemale said:

nice one :) thank you for sharing

January 30th, 2019 17:57

Countless Indiscretions
orchidee said:

Is this a poem about flying lessons? I dunno these things. I\'ve lost the plot of the poem I reckon! lol.

January 30th, 2019 12:45

Countless Indiscretions
Laura🌻 said:

Neville,

As I said in another comment, I DO enjoy your writings...and this is no exception!
No declarations on your part, I know!
I must be honest and say some are relatable; but as you stated, “Regardless of those...”
All’s well on the home front!😉

~Laura~


January 30th, 2019 12:25

Countless Indiscretions
Neville said:

intriguing is good enough for me.. many thanks my friend.... Neville

January 30th, 2019 11:20

Might She by Chance be a Witch
Fay Slimm. said:

Another shared moment of question and answer with sensuous phrasing to catch a witch-lady perhaps - - hope her spell lasts forever with happiest endings

January 28th, 2019 17:32

Might She by Chance be a Witch
orchidee said:

Ooh what\'s she up in this fine write N? I got no eye of newt or wing of bat for ya, if she is a witch!

January 28th, 2019 07:05