Comments received on poems by Neville
The Last Hurt
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Great write Neville although I always find the pain we have (When we have it) it the worst pain in the world don\'t you?
I guess there is always someone worse off than us?
March 2nd, 2019 05:04
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Great write Neville although I always find the pain we have (When we have it) it the worst pain in the world don\'t you?
I guess there is always someone worse off than us?
March 2nd, 2019 05:04
The Last Hurt
sylviasearcher said:
Ouch?
This is what I say to myself every morning lol.
Not sure I got it though?
As if it is about being hurt I should not make light of it.
Sorry,
I always struggle with vengeance and retribution though. I would never want another to feel misery I would always try and absolve that as much as I could. Even if that person causes me abject misery.
Of course then there is another way I could read this too.
I think I have a hangover, sorry.
March 2nd, 2019 05:00
sylviasearcher said:
Ouch?
This is what I say to myself every morning lol.
Not sure I got it though?
As if it is about being hurt I should not make light of it.
Sorry,
I always struggle with vengeance and retribution though. I would never want another to feel misery I would always try and absolve that as much as I could. Even if that person causes me abject misery.
Of course then there is another way I could read this too.
I think I have a hangover, sorry.
March 2nd, 2019 05:00
E.U.
dusk arising said:
A place where i can...... move the world just one step on.
Fun to read and think about, loved the balcony quip.
March 1st, 2019 10:27
dusk arising said:
A place where i can...... move the world just one step on.
Fun to read and think about, loved the balcony quip.
March 1st, 2019 10:27
E.U.
Michael Edwards said:
There is a place where you can vitamin B.
Love the write
and especialy so the invite.. great read.
March 1st, 2019 09:08
Michael Edwards said:
There is a place where you can vitamin B.
Love the write
and especialy so the invite.. great read.
March 1st, 2019 09:08
E.U.
orchidee said:
This poem anything to do with sheep - ewe?! (groans at corny joke). I gotta laugh at me own jokes, in case no one else does. heehee! Oh, delusions of grandeur - there ya go!
March 1st, 2019 06:59
orchidee said:
This poem anything to do with sheep - ewe?! (groans at corny joke). I gotta laugh at me own jokes, in case no one else does. heehee! Oh, delusions of grandeur - there ya go!
March 1st, 2019 06:59
E.U.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Watch Vladimir ride a horse topless?
NO
Just me then!
ORKWaaard!
March 1st, 2019 06:08
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Watch Vladimir ride a horse topless?
NO
Just me then!
ORKWaaard!
March 1st, 2019 06:08
E.U.
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - - \"indulge a bit\" is what I may add......... hope you get the gist.
March 1st, 2019 03:41
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - - \"indulge a bit\" is what I may add......... hope you get the gist.
March 1st, 2019 03:41
E.U.
orchidee said:
I\'ll be in Cuckoo Land with all that Rakia and stuff! No change there then?! lol.
March 1st, 2019 03:07
orchidee said:
I\'ll be in Cuckoo Land with all that Rakia and stuff! No change there then?! lol.
March 1st, 2019 03:07
Unfinished
Michael Edwards said:
Great write.
Make my next moment
A moment on Monet’s palette.
Magical lines.
February 28th, 2019 10:32
Michael Edwards said:
Great write.
Make my next moment
A moment on Monet’s palette.
Magical lines.
February 28th, 2019 10:32
Unfinished
sylviasearcher said:
I found this quite an intrigue,
Do not mention love, but lay as lover might?
It sounds like it was something you did not want to end. Unfinished?
February 28th, 2019 08:41
sylviasearcher said:
I found this quite an intrigue,
Do not mention love, but lay as lover might?
It sounds like it was something you did not want to end. Unfinished?
February 28th, 2019 08:41
Unfinished
Fay Slimm. said:
To be whole and in the moment comes through clearly in this plea for friendship that need not be love - a piece to read over again - good this thought is and true that close friendship should never be finished. A compelling read Nev. .
February 28th, 2019 06:06
Fay Slimm. said:
To be whole and in the moment comes through clearly in this plea for friendship that need not be love - a piece to read over again - good this thought is and true that close friendship should never be finished. A compelling read Nev. .
February 28th, 2019 06:06
Unfinished
orchidee said:
Should I try some of this?! How come you finished this poem, if it\'s called Unfinished? heehee.
February 28th, 2019 05:41
orchidee said:
Should I try some of this?! How come you finished this poem, if it\'s called Unfinished? heehee.
February 28th, 2019 05:41
Unfinished
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Well it\'s an option...
Love the hopeful title
Great write again Neville
February 28th, 2019 04:48
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Well it\'s an option...
Love the hopeful title
Great write again Neville
February 28th, 2019 04:48
Incrementally Speaking
Goldfinch60 said:
Each moment id special, treasure them.
February 28th, 2019 01:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Each moment id special, treasure them.
February 28th, 2019 01:40
Incrementally Speaking
dusk arising said:
My life of never never
one of carefree deposits
and repossession
Inspired to respond to yours today. Yours though is brill.
I rarely suggest an edit to anyone\'s work but..... your first two lines on their own are so very strong.
February 27th, 2019 14:54
dusk arising said:
My life of never never
one of carefree deposits
and repossession
Inspired to respond to yours today. Yours though is brill.
I rarely suggest an edit to anyone\'s work but..... your first two lines on their own are so very strong.
February 27th, 2019 14:54
Bring Along a Lantern
SerenWise said:
Very nicely written, beautiful imagery
February 27th, 2019 14:10
SerenWise said:
Very nicely written, beautiful imagery
February 27th, 2019 14:10
Incrementally Speaking
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes my friend, life adds more to those moments than time - if we are able to discern the numbers of people needing love and try to deliver it by using learnt skills minutes increase in success and achievement - - at least that\'s what these three short lines mean to me - - incrementally speaking that is.
February 27th, 2019 11:16
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes my friend, life adds more to those moments than time - if we are able to discern the numbers of people needing love and try to deliver it by using learnt skills minutes increase in success and achievement - - at least that\'s what these three short lines mean to me - - incrementally speaking that is.
February 27th, 2019 11:16
Incrementally Speaking
sylviasearcher said:
What number are you on now? Lol
February 27th, 2019 11:06
sylviasearcher said:
What number are you on now? Lol
February 27th, 2019 11:06
Incrementally Speaking
Michael Edwards said:
Spot on Neville - among the great shorties - indeed life is just series of happenings which sounds the key to another write - errr sometime..!
February 27th, 2019 10:06
Michael Edwards said:
Spot on Neville - among the great shorties - indeed life is just series of happenings which sounds the key to another write - errr sometime..!
February 27th, 2019 10:06
Reconfigure it out
orchidee said:
I\'ve blown a fuse trying to reconfigure!
February 26th, 2019 12:52
orchidee said:
I\'ve blown a fuse trying to reconfigure!
February 26th, 2019 12:52
Reconfigure it out
Michael Edwards said:
Great fun but I\'ll skip the maths
February 26th, 2019 11:49
Michael Edwards said:
Great fun but I\'ll skip the maths
February 26th, 2019 11:49
Reconfigure it out
sylviasearcher said:
It looks like an arrow, have you been hunting again Neville?
February 26th, 2019 05:31
sylviasearcher said:
It looks like an arrow, have you been hunting again Neville?
February 26th, 2019 05:31
Reconfigure it out
Fay Slimm. said:
Clever piece of double-tongued inscription to digest my friend - - l prefer the left side of that finalé - it kinda rounds up the former and sticks in the mind - - whether or not a special form of read Neville. Full marks again for your skill to surprise and delight reviewers like me
February 26th, 2019 05:12
Fay Slimm. said:
Clever piece of double-tongued inscription to digest my friend - - l prefer the left side of that finalé - it kinda rounds up the former and sticks in the mind - - whether or not a special form of read Neville. Full marks again for your skill to surprise and delight reviewers like me
February 26th, 2019 05:12
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