Comments received on poems by Neville
Climax
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - - what a striking description of reaching the climax before lighting up.......smilin\' big here ..........x
June 8th, 2020 16:01
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - - what a striking description of reaching the climax before lighting up.......smilin\' big here ..........x
June 8th, 2020 16:01
Climax
Neville said:
I am more than honoured by your late evening visit sir... thank you for stopping by...... 🍷. cheers
Neville
June 8th, 2020 15:28
Neville said:
I am more than honoured by your late evening visit sir... thank you for stopping by...... 🍷. cheers
Neville
June 8th, 2020 15:28
Climax
dusk arising said:
A wonderful description of striking a match on a well worn matchbox\'s sandpaper strip.
It takes such insight to see the poetry such a mundane task, now another fragment of the past. Similar to my sex life really.
June 8th, 2020 15:19
dusk arising said:
A wonderful description of striking a match on a well worn matchbox\'s sandpaper strip.
It takes such insight to see the poetry such a mundane task, now another fragment of the past. Similar to my sex life really.
June 8th, 2020 15:19
Kanreki
orchidee said:
I not seen many Kanrekis about. I dunno what I\'m talking about today. No change there then?!
June 7th, 2020 05:55
orchidee said:
I not seen many Kanrekis about. I dunno what I\'m talking about today. No change there then?!
June 7th, 2020 05:55
Kanreki
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Neville, when I hit sixty I did start over again in a newer life where my work was arranged so that I only worked two days per week, so yes sixty is a special age, (64 was better when I retired completely!)
May you brother live his new life to the full.
Andy
June 7th, 2020 04:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Neville, when I hit sixty I did start over again in a newer life where my work was arranged so that I only worked two days per week, so yes sixty is a special age, (64 was better when I retired completely!)
May you brother live his new life to the full.
Andy
June 7th, 2020 04:19
Kanreki
dusk arising said:
ohayou gozaimasu
And the crowd wandered off looking for McDonalds.
June 7th, 2020 03:54
dusk arising said:
ohayou gozaimasu
And the crowd wandered off looking for McDonalds.
June 7th, 2020 03:54
Kanreki
Fay Slimm. said:
Amid happy feasting and celebration your write provided yet one further learning curve for this humble reader -- Japanese custom when reaching 60 means lots of ritual before yummy rice cake so I believe - - words learnt add to the intrigue penned into the rest of the interesting verse - - DOMO ARIGATOU to you mi amigo...... x
June 7th, 2020 03:31
Fay Slimm. said:
Amid happy feasting and celebration your write provided yet one further learning curve for this humble reader -- Japanese custom when reaching 60 means lots of ritual before yummy rice cake so I believe - - words learnt add to the intrigue penned into the rest of the interesting verse - - DOMO ARIGATOU to you mi amigo...... x
June 7th, 2020 03:31
Falling for Icarus
Goldfinch60 said:
May you fly together in love and happiness Neville.
Andy
June 7th, 2020 00:40
Goldfinch60 said:
May you fly together in love and happiness Neville.
Andy
June 7th, 2020 00:40
Upon the Morrow
MendedFences27 said:
Though subtle, I find this sad, but with a sense of hope. If that hope is for an afterlife reunion. \"Bunting \" makes me think of a wartime loss . Perhaps they will be together in some spiritual way.
I enjoyed this poem and the way you\'ve subtly described the passing and the sorrow felt by those left behind. Very descriptive and yet not ponderous. I liked it.- Phil A.
June 6th, 2020 17:21
MendedFences27 said:
Though subtle, I find this sad, but with a sense of hope. If that hope is for an afterlife reunion. \"Bunting \" makes me think of a wartime loss . Perhaps they will be together in some spiritual way.
I enjoyed this poem and the way you\'ve subtly described the passing and the sorrow felt by those left behind. Very descriptive and yet not ponderous. I liked it.- Phil A.
June 6th, 2020 17:21
Falling for Icarus
orchidee said:
I told him to stay about 93 million miles away from that sun (distance Earth to Sun) but he never listened! lol.
June 6th, 2020 07:07
orchidee said:
I told him to stay about 93 million miles away from that sun (distance Earth to Sun) but he never listened! lol.
June 6th, 2020 07:07
Falling for Icarus
Fay Slimm. said:
Flying too near the sun whatever the reason results in melt-down where love drowns -- a comforting last line shows someone has reached out with understanding. This write touches the heart Nev.
June 6th, 2020 05:15
Fay Slimm. said:
Flying too near the sun whatever the reason results in melt-down where love drowns -- a comforting last line shows someone has reached out with understanding. This write touches the heart Nev.
June 6th, 2020 05:15
Falling for Icarus
dusk arising said:
Like the racing driver who swerved to avoid a child and fell out of bed i sense someone flying too close to a son here.
June 6th, 2020 04:09
dusk arising said:
Like the racing driver who swerved to avoid a child and fell out of bed i sense someone flying too close to a son here.
June 6th, 2020 04:09
Free Fall
Goldfinch60 said:
Reaching for the stars is the way to go Neville, friends and family are there ready to reach down for us.
Andy
June 6th, 2020 00:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Reaching for the stars is the way to go Neville, friends and family are there ready to reach down for us.
Andy
June 6th, 2020 00:50
Free Fall
Saxon Crow said:
Because the stars are really hot. So not only am i going to crush my body to death when i land i will also have a burnt hand!
June 5th, 2020 09:53
Saxon Crow said:
Because the stars are really hot. So not only am i going to crush my body to death when i land i will also have a burnt hand!
June 5th, 2020 09:53
Free Fall
Fay Slimm. said:
Why not indeed - - reaching for light can divert the fall. Good advice in these lined my friend.
June 5th, 2020 04:32
Fay Slimm. said:
Why not indeed - - reaching for light can divert the fall. Good advice in these lined my friend.
June 5th, 2020 04:32
Free Fall
orchidee said:
Oohh, I know, I clutched at a tree branch. It was rotten. It did not break my faaaaalllllll! Good acting there, innit?! lol.
June 5th, 2020 03:59
orchidee said:
Oohh, I know, I clutched at a tree branch. It was rotten. It did not break my faaaaalllllll! Good acting there, innit?! lol.
June 5th, 2020 03:59
The Sorriest of Words
Goldfinch60 said:
It can be such a sad word when more should be said and done.
Andy
June 5th, 2020 01:03
Goldfinch60 said:
It can be such a sad word when more should be said and done.
Andy
June 5th, 2020 01:03
The Sorriest of Words
MendedFences27 said:
\"Sorry\" is just another word, but so are \"sincere\" and \"disingenuous.\" Sometimes your \"sorriest of words\" falls off lips like a lead balloon, and less frequently it delivers at least some solace. It\'s when nothing is said that causes the greatest concern.
A self-written poem with the weight of empathy clinging to its intent. Perhaps your words will cause many to pause and consider.
Well done, Neville - Phil A.
June 4th, 2020 18:58
MendedFences27 said:
\"Sorry\" is just another word, but so are \"sincere\" and \"disingenuous.\" Sometimes your \"sorriest of words\" falls off lips like a lead balloon, and less frequently it delivers at least some solace. It\'s when nothing is said that causes the greatest concern.
A self-written poem with the weight of empathy clinging to its intent. Perhaps your words will cause many to pause and consider.
Well done, Neville - Phil A.
June 4th, 2020 18:58
The Sorriest of Words
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville.
\'E\'ermore\' is another sorry word - well, a \'sad\' word in the sense of boring! lol.
June 4th, 2020 09:02
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville.
\'E\'ermore\' is another sorry word - well, a \'sad\' word in the sense of boring! lol.
June 4th, 2020 09:02
The Sorriest of Words
Poetic Dan said:
Bam and ain\'t that the truth when we forget that action speak louder that words! Our Internet feels like a burden of a curse, when they can\'t cope force remains the first...
Great work my friend!
Much peace and respect
June 4th, 2020 08:11
Poetic Dan said:
Bam and ain\'t that the truth when we forget that action speak louder that words! Our Internet feels like a burden of a curse, when they can\'t cope force remains the first...
Great work my friend!
Much peace and respect
June 4th, 2020 08:11
The Sorriest of Words
Fay Slimm. said:
Times like you so aptly describe are etched in the heart and mind where sorry seems so inadequate. A haunt of a read...............x
June 4th, 2020 08:07
Fay Slimm. said:
Times like you so aptly describe are etched in the heart and mind where sorry seems so inadequate. A haunt of a read...............x
June 4th, 2020 08:07
Remote
Goldfinch60 said:
Let it be indeed, that chapter in your life is over and the new one will be wonderful.
Good Senryu.
Andy
June 4th, 2020 00:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Let it be indeed, that chapter in your life is over and the new one will be wonderful.
Good Senryu.
Andy
June 4th, 2020 00:23
Remote
dusk arising said:
Life is so awkward and those television controls so distant and clumsy when you lose the remote.
I agree with the light hearted attitude though. For both ebay and amazon offer a calmer tomorrow.
June 3rd, 2020 13:44
dusk arising said:
Life is so awkward and those television controls so distant and clumsy when you lose the remote.
I agree with the light hearted attitude though. For both ebay and amazon offer a calmer tomorrow.
June 3rd, 2020 13:44
Remote
Fay Slimm. said:
A sensible way to end a fading affair - - letting it be and enjoying the memories is the better conclusion - a well honed three liner mi amigo.
June 3rd, 2020 07:05
Fay Slimm. said:
A sensible way to end a fading affair - - letting it be and enjoying the memories is the better conclusion - a well honed three liner mi amigo.
June 3rd, 2020 07:05
Just Another Murmeration
Goldfinch60 said:
Those murmerations can be so swift that sometimes you have to wonder if your flying in your love but they suddenly disappear as you fall to the ground - spent for the day.
Andy
June 3rd, 2020 00:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Those murmerations can be so swift that sometimes you have to wonder if your flying in your love but they suddenly disappear as you fall to the ground - spent for the day.
Andy
June 3rd, 2020 00:35
Just Another Murmeration
dusk arising said:
I wasn\'t sure what to make of your piece today so i decided i would regard it as an overtly sexual romance with the english ...erm languish.
Those feet never touching the ground, the flurry of ups and downs ... i\'m beginning to feel a little feint now as i reminisce .... ha! no smiles.... it\'s definitely marriage ooopss i mean love...
Fantasy takes to the wing and a wonderful pattern emerges and is GONE!
June 2nd, 2020 06:26
dusk arising said:
I wasn\'t sure what to make of your piece today so i decided i would regard it as an overtly sexual romance with the english ...erm languish.
Those feet never touching the ground, the flurry of ups and downs ... i\'m beginning to feel a little feint now as i reminisce .... ha! no smiles.... it\'s definitely marriage ooopss i mean love...
Fantasy takes to the wing and a wonderful pattern emerges and is GONE!
June 2nd, 2020 06:26
Just Another Murmeration
Fay Slimm. said:
Flying high and surrounded with feelings of love must be a kind of murmeration and couched in your words is very inviting my dear friend.
June 2nd, 2020 06:07
Fay Slimm. said:
Flying high and surrounded with feelings of love must be a kind of murmeration and couched in your words is very inviting my dear friend.
June 2nd, 2020 06:07
Just Another Murmeration
orchidee said:
It\'s all right for some folk, having murmerations! I\'m looking for the Lesser-Spotted E\'ermore. I wish I would shut up! lol.
June 2nd, 2020 05:40
orchidee said:
It\'s all right for some folk, having murmerations! I\'m looking for the Lesser-Spotted E\'ermore. I wish I would shut up! lol.
June 2nd, 2020 05:40
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