Comments received on poems by Neville
Our Lady of the Harbour
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville. Ahh, I can\'t meet her then? Did you meet her in person?! Such a short life. I\'ve not brushed up on her history.
April 5th, 2019 03:59
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville. Ahh, I can\'t meet her then? Did you meet her in person?! Such a short life. I\'ve not brushed up on her history.
April 5th, 2019 03:59
Our Lady of the Harbour
Fay Slimm. said:
Never before have I read a more interesting tale of brave Joan who rode brazenly draped in Saint George - her fate was a scorcher but lest we forget this verse raises issues we may never have known.An engaging write Nev.
April 5th, 2019 03:59
Fay Slimm. said:
Never before have I read a more interesting tale of brave Joan who rode brazenly draped in Saint George - her fate was a scorcher but lest we forget this verse raises issues we may never have known.An engaging write Nev.
April 5th, 2019 03:59
A Thirst Well Quenched
SerenWise said:
I really enjoyed this, simplicity in perfection.
April 4th, 2019 12:41
SerenWise said:
I really enjoyed this, simplicity in perfection.
April 4th, 2019 12:41
Read Yourself
Poetic Dan said:
This has just blown me away!
It\'s What I feel every time I come and share with you and all of these other magnificent souls on this site but with this one, I would suit you sir!
Hats off!
Much appreciated
With love and respect
April 4th, 2019 08:36
Poetic Dan said:
This has just blown me away!
It\'s What I feel every time I come and share with you and all of these other magnificent souls on this site but with this one, I would suit you sir!
Hats off!
Much appreciated
With love and respect
April 4th, 2019 08:36
Read Yourself
dusk arising said:
Love this expression of a lifetimes commitment to a lovers memory. For once she has read this and you enter her heart, then forever these words will bring her to that tender place within you where emotional attachments cement and never depart.
Into my favourites. Really enjoyed this.
April 4th, 2019 06:21
dusk arising said:
Love this expression of a lifetimes commitment to a lovers memory. For once she has read this and you enter her heart, then forever these words will bring her to that tender place within you where emotional attachments cement and never depart.
Into my favourites. Really enjoyed this.
April 4th, 2019 06:21
Read Yourself
Fay Slimm. said:
Hearts will be aflutter after viewing this sensitive verse that I for one am doubly reading - -- love it\'s honesty and into my faves this one goes......
April 4th, 2019 04:24
Fay Slimm. said:
Hearts will be aflutter after viewing this sensitive verse that I for one am doubly reading - -- love it\'s honesty and into my faves this one goes......
April 4th, 2019 04:24
Read Yourself
orchidee said:
Yes, my love. Swoon! heehee. Woof! No excitement for me, says Fido.
April 4th, 2019 03:55
orchidee said:
Yes, my love. Swoon! heehee. Woof! No excitement for me, says Fido.
April 4th, 2019 03:55
Read Yourself
sylviasearcher said:
There’s a lot of love poems on here lately, they’re nice but make me feel like I should be able to write something soft and lovely...
But maybe this is about a love of poetry or of the word?
April 4th, 2019 03:25
sylviasearcher said:
There’s a lot of love poems on here lately, they’re nice but make me feel like I should be able to write something soft and lovely...
But maybe this is about a love of poetry or of the word?
April 4th, 2019 03:25
Big Empty Space
Goldfinch60 said:
Such an emotive write Neville, may that space soon be filled with joy and love.
April 4th, 2019 00:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Such an emotive write Neville, may that space soon be filled with joy and love.
April 4th, 2019 00:08
Big Empty Space
orchidee said:
You covered more of that garden? I wish I would go back to sleep, and stop nagging. lol.
April 3rd, 2019 13:16
orchidee said:
You covered more of that garden? I wish I would go back to sleep, and stop nagging. lol.
April 3rd, 2019 13:16
Big Empty Space
Poetic Dan said:
Wow, had to take a deep breath after that one my friend.
Very grateful
Much peace and love
April 3rd, 2019 08:53
Poetic Dan said:
Wow, had to take a deep breath after that one my friend.
Very grateful
Much peace and love
April 3rd, 2019 08:53
Big Empty Space
orchidee said:
Yes, extra space Neville, but sometimes made by sadnesses. Then again, space made by some we may say good riddance to!
Much space in your garden?
April 3rd, 2019 04:12
orchidee said:
Yes, extra space Neville, but sometimes made by sadnesses. Then again, space made by some we may say good riddance to!
Much space in your garden?
April 3rd, 2019 04:12
Big Empty Space
Fay Slimm. said:
Solemn yet coping with feel of abuse these words span extra space with the reasons why wounds can take time to heal. Sad but such a meaningful write Nev.
April 3rd, 2019 03:30
Fay Slimm. said:
Solemn yet coping with feel of abuse these words span extra space with the reasons why wounds can take time to heal. Sad but such a meaningful write Nev.
April 3rd, 2019 03:30
Hungry Corner
Goldfinch60 said:
May those hungry corners soon be filled with nourishment for all.
April 2nd, 2019 15:28
Goldfinch60 said:
May those hungry corners soon be filled with nourishment for all.
April 2nd, 2019 15:28
Hungry Corner
Suresh said:
We see, we hear, we momentarily convulse
But only momentarily
For the tragedy is playing out tooooo often
We have chosen to become oblivion to its causes
April 2nd, 2019 14:21
Suresh said:
We see, we hear, we momentarily convulse
But only momentarily
For the tragedy is playing out tooooo often
We have chosen to become oblivion to its causes
April 2nd, 2019 14:21
Hungry Corner
dusk arising said:
There is hungry corner and hungry corner. Several completely differing places. For one exists where real hunger kills people and beasts. Another exists in the mind of the needy. Well fed and cosseted can still be needy and hungry for something missing. Finally there is need in the desperate, a need never satisfied and as you write, everything will turn out wrong.
I try to get into the mental pictures given to me when i read poetry like this. Life has some sad jumbles beyond comprehension and i think hungry corner leads your reader into them if they are prepared to look.
April 2nd, 2019 13:03
dusk arising said:
There is hungry corner and hungry corner. Several completely differing places. For one exists where real hunger kills people and beasts. Another exists in the mind of the needy. Well fed and cosseted can still be needy and hungry for something missing. Finally there is need in the desperate, a need never satisfied and as you write, everything will turn out wrong.
I try to get into the mental pictures given to me when i read poetry like this. Life has some sad jumbles beyond comprehension and i think hungry corner leads your reader into them if they are prepared to look.
April 2nd, 2019 13:03
Hungry Corner
Fay Slimm. said:
A strange and sad place rises from your poignant description today Nev - - named and shamed these conditions where yesterday means more than tomorrow and no energy to sway away from a perceived culture. The read leaves food for much thought on how to force change.......... x
April 2nd, 2019 04:16
Fay Slimm. said:
A strange and sad place rises from your poignant description today Nev - - named and shamed these conditions where yesterday means more than tomorrow and no energy to sway away from a perceived culture. The read leaves food for much thought on how to force change.......... x
April 2nd, 2019 04:16
Hungry Corner
orchidee said:
A thoughtful write Neville.
Meanwhile - what\'s going on? You was thirsty, now you is hungry?! heehee.
April 2nd, 2019 04:10
orchidee said:
A thoughtful write Neville.
Meanwhile - what\'s going on? You was thirsty, now you is hungry?! heehee.
April 2nd, 2019 04:10
A Thirst Well Quenched
orchidee said:
I\'m a pest, keep nagging - you done that garden yet?! lol.
April 2nd, 2019 01:51
orchidee said:
I\'m a pest, keep nagging - you done that garden yet?! lol.
April 2nd, 2019 01:51
A Thirst Well Quenched
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write. Those silences can be so profound and meaningful in our lives.
April 2nd, 2019 00:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write. Those silences can be so profound and meaningful in our lives.
April 2nd, 2019 00:23
A Thirst Well Quenched
Fay Slimm. said:
Had me a second read of this telling love- write Nev and found it this time even deeper in its unique use of perception. The second stanza is methinks a masterpiece - - - - Saved now and in my faves.
April 1st, 2019 16:13
Fay Slimm. said:
Had me a second read of this telling love- write Nev and found it this time even deeper in its unique use of perception. The second stanza is methinks a masterpiece - - - - Saved now and in my faves.
April 1st, 2019 16:13
A Thirst Well Quenched
dusk arising said:
A bird in hand is worth keeping out of your pocket.
\"You say it loudest when you say nothing at all\".
Funny how, after you have a drink or several, your head ends up swimming.
April 1st, 2019 06:16
dusk arising said:
A bird in hand is worth keeping out of your pocket.
\"You say it loudest when you say nothing at all\".
Funny how, after you have a drink or several, your head ends up swimming.
April 1st, 2019 06:16
A Thirst Well Quenched
Fay Slimm. said:
A successful use of the thesaurus in these telling lines Neville - -- a charmingly sensitive write.
April 1st, 2019 03:19
Fay Slimm. said:
A successful use of the thesaurus in these telling lines Neville - -- a charmingly sensitive write.
April 1st, 2019 03:19
A Thirst Well Quenched
orchidee said:
A jolly good write Neville. Yes, and also - \'When at first you don\'t succeed, give up!\' Subtitled \'Ain\'t no sense keep banging ya head against a brick wall!\' lol.
A pessimistic start to the week from me!
April 1st, 2019 03:13
orchidee said:
A jolly good write Neville. Yes, and also - \'When at first you don\'t succeed, give up!\' Subtitled \'Ain\'t no sense keep banging ya head against a brick wall!\' lol.
A pessimistic start to the week from me!
April 1st, 2019 03:13
To Whom It May Concern
Goldfinch60 said:
Familiar strangers can be so meaningful that they can soon become dear friends or even more. Good words Neville.
April 1st, 2019 00:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Familiar strangers can be so meaningful that they can soon become dear friends or even more. Good words Neville.
April 1st, 2019 00:59
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