Comments received on poems by Neville
More Truth
Goldfinch60 said:
No it cannot go with you and it can be left behind but that\'s just money, the best thing that you must be remembered for though is your love for friends and family - that will always be treasured.
Andy
April 5th, 2020 01:35
Goldfinch60 said:
No it cannot go with you and it can be left behind but that\'s just money, the best thing that you must be remembered for though is your love for friends and family - that will always be treasured.
Andy
April 5th, 2020 01:35
More Truth
Fay Slimm. said:
The kind of wealth beyond anything fiscal never depends on public revenue for retaining the richness of spirit meant - so who can say Nay to your reasonable question dear Nev. ? - -- such treasure is permanent and goes where its owner goes. - - well that\'s what methinks after pondering your welcome posting my friend.
April 4th, 2020 16:47
Fay Slimm. said:
The kind of wealth beyond anything fiscal never depends on public revenue for retaining the richness of spirit meant - so who can say Nay to your reasonable question dear Nev. ? - -- such treasure is permanent and goes where its owner goes. - - well that\'s what methinks after pondering your welcome posting my friend.
April 4th, 2020 16:47
Insidious
MendedFences27 said:
Life is a series of changes. All things are in motion, uncontrollably. Love can grow or fade depending on how life and people change. The pain is a product of Love\'s depth. All love is not the same, some feel it more deeply than others. Your poem stages the \"suffering\" felt by one who loved intensely. No one went wrong. It\'s just one of life\'s changes, but it still hurts. _ Phil A.
March 30th, 2020 19:35
MendedFences27 said:
Life is a series of changes. All things are in motion, uncontrollably. Love can grow or fade depending on how life and people change. The pain is a product of Love\'s depth. All love is not the same, some feel it more deeply than others. Your poem stages the \"suffering\" felt by one who loved intensely. No one went wrong. It\'s just one of life\'s changes, but it still hurts. _ Phil A.
March 30th, 2020 19:35
My Fathers Son & Other Important Questions
Goldfinch60 said:
My Father died in 1995 but he is still with me and always will be as yours will be with you. Our lives were moulded by our father\'s influence and you would not be the good person you are without that influence.
You are still your father\'s son.
Andy
March 27th, 2020 01:06
Goldfinch60 said:
My Father died in 1995 but he is still with me and always will be as yours will be with you. Our lives were moulded by our father\'s influence and you would not be the good person you are without that influence.
You are still your father\'s son.
Andy
March 27th, 2020 01:06
My Fathers Son & Other Important Questions
Christina8 said:
I think we all struggle with these questions.....except I wonder just the opposite, now that my mother is gone.....if only someone could provide us with the answers....
March 26th, 2020 19:53
Christina8 said:
I think we all struggle with these questions.....except I wonder just the opposite, now that my mother is gone.....if only someone could provide us with the answers....
March 26th, 2020 19:53
My Fathers Son & Other Important Questions
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
You fit exactly where you want to fit...
in your children’s heart and soul!
~Laura~🌻
March 26th, 2020 18:42
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
You fit exactly where you want to fit...
in your children’s heart and soul!
~Laura~🌻
March 26th, 2020 18:42
My Fathers Son & Other Important Questions
PoeticBiscuit said:
Simple yet impactful write that encourages thoughts among your readers. Very clever yet such a good question with many answers.
March 26th, 2020 15:07
PoeticBiscuit said:
Simple yet impactful write that encourages thoughts among your readers. Very clever yet such a good question with many answers.
March 26th, 2020 15:07
My Fathers Son & Other Important Questions
Michael Edwards said:
Questions I still ponder - clever write.
March 26th, 2020 14:13
Michael Edwards said:
Questions I still ponder - clever write.
March 26th, 2020 14:13
My Fathers Son & Other Important Questions
Fay Slimm. said:
A familiar enquiry at a very sad time whether from sons or from daughters and pathos colours the core of this question with palest sad....... a most moving read Nev............. x
March 26th, 2020 11:19
Fay Slimm. said:
A familiar enquiry at a very sad time whether from sons or from daughters and pathos colours the core of this question with palest sad....... a most moving read Nev............. x
March 26th, 2020 11:19
My Fathers Son & Other Important Questions
orchidee said:
Erm, well you still are your fathers son, I would say. We (male) may also be a father ourselves; brother, uncle, grandad; nephew; etc.
I never knew we could be so may things!
March 26th, 2020 04:30
orchidee said:
Erm, well you still are your fathers son, I would say. We (male) may also be a father ourselves; brother, uncle, grandad; nephew; etc.
I never knew we could be so may things!
March 26th, 2020 04:30
My Fathers Son & Other Important Questions
dusk arising said:
A young man\'s question is asked here i believe. For a matured man is already fitting into places, hearts and minds where he is irreplaceable.
I think you penned this to tease us into a wonderful train of though about life and living. Full marks sir!
March 26th, 2020 04:23
dusk arising said:
A young man\'s question is asked here i believe. For a matured man is already fitting into places, hearts and minds where he is irreplaceable.
I think you penned this to tease us into a wonderful train of though about life and living. Full marks sir!
March 26th, 2020 04:23
Job Lot of Biro’s
Goldfinch60 said:
We all do that and in my case I need bottles of ink for my quill.
Andy
March 25th, 2020 03:07
Goldfinch60 said:
We all do that and in my case I need bottles of ink for my quill.
Andy
March 25th, 2020 03:07
Job Lot of Biro’s
PoeticBiscuit said:
A very touching write Neville. Time takes all except for the memories that we hold close.
March 24th, 2020 14:19
PoeticBiscuit said:
A very touching write Neville. Time takes all except for the memories that we hold close.
March 24th, 2020 14:19
Job Lot of Biro’s
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes hearin\'ya loud and clear mon ami and am keeping to schedule on what where and when and with whom --- yes this is a serious health hazard my friend and same back at-ya - you betta tek care and stay well too....... x
March 24th, 2020 14:04
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes hearin\'ya loud and clear mon ami and am keeping to schedule on what where and when and with whom --- yes this is a serious health hazard my friend and same back at-ya - you betta tek care and stay well too....... x
March 24th, 2020 14:04
Job Lot of Biro’s
Fay Slimm. said:
Love is so hard to shelve when time was it glittered with golden dreams --- another tear-jerking read Nev and so clearly revealed that need to note down every nuance to keep and read over again - - it surely takes lots of biros does the sight of a one-time love ........... x
March 24th, 2020 13:23
Fay Slimm. said:
Love is so hard to shelve when time was it glittered with golden dreams --- another tear-jerking read Nev and so clearly revealed that need to note down every nuance to keep and read over again - - it surely takes lots of biros does the sight of a one-time love ........... x
March 24th, 2020 13:23
Job Lot of Biro’s
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Love the title and the message of your poem.
The first time I saw the word ‘Biro’ was in high school in a required reading assignment.
Very interesting.
Stay safe.
~Laura~🌻
March 24th, 2020 13:23
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Love the title and the message of your poem.
The first time I saw the word ‘Biro’ was in high school in a required reading assignment.
Very interesting.
Stay safe.
~Laura~🌻
March 24th, 2020 13:23
Job Lot of Biro’s
dusk arising said:
Well penned (groan)... Well constable Neville, it\'s all done on video tape/memory chip in the interview room now.
Why does modern technology rob life of romance.... or is it just me?
March 24th, 2020 13:17
dusk arising said:
Well penned (groan)... Well constable Neville, it\'s all done on video tape/memory chip in the interview room now.
Why does modern technology rob life of romance.... or is it just me?
March 24th, 2020 13:17
Job Lot of Biro’s
Neville said:
I hope so too, but I am quite sure there will be many more casualties and that this monster should not be underestimated.... Neville :)
March 24th, 2020 13:14
Neville said:
I hope so too, but I am quite sure there will be many more casualties and that this monster should not be underestimated.... Neville :)
March 24th, 2020 13:14
Job Lot of Biro’s
orchidee said:
Ooohh you\'ve not offended me. Are ya still writing to me?! heehee. It need not be goodbye, just au revoir - bit of Spanish there. I\'m good at languages, don\'t ya know!
March 24th, 2020 11:02
orchidee said:
Ooohh you\'ve not offended me. Are ya still writing to me?! heehee. It need not be goodbye, just au revoir - bit of Spanish there. I\'m good at languages, don\'t ya know!
March 24th, 2020 11:02
Insidious
Fay Slimm. said:
Impressive imagery used in the doleful unfinishment of this reflective poem - - love has a habit of ending this way my friend.................
March 22nd, 2020 06:58
Fay Slimm. said:
Impressive imagery used in the doleful unfinishment of this reflective poem - - love has a habit of ending this way my friend.................
March 22nd, 2020 06:58
Insidious
Goldfinch60 said:
The fragility of love can be so unreal and so misunderstood Neville.
Andy
March 22nd, 2020 02:19
Goldfinch60 said:
The fragility of love can be so unreal and so misunderstood Neville.
Andy
March 22nd, 2020 02:19
Insidious
orchidee said:
A good write N. Based on fiction or non-fiction?
If fiction - should I meet her?! lol.
March 21st, 2020 14:44
orchidee said:
A good write N. Based on fiction or non-fiction?
If fiction - should I meet her?! lol.
March 21st, 2020 14:44
Insidious
Neville said:
Hello DA my fine literary friend.. Many thanks for visiting these words.. I kind off like the fact you felt suspended, I just hope you were not left feeling too frustrated by them, in the absence of a definitive answer, or conclusion.... I like enigmas......Take care and stay well..... Neville
March 21st, 2020 14:37
Neville said:
Hello DA my fine literary friend.. Many thanks for visiting these words.. I kind off like the fact you felt suspended, I just hope you were not left feeling too frustrated by them, in the absence of a definitive answer, or conclusion.... I like enigmas......Take care and stay well..... Neville
March 21st, 2020 14:37
Insidious
dusk arising said:
I doubt she will answer you with honesty. They like to come across as enigmatic... so be prepared to hear that she doesn\'t like your after-shave any longer.
Interesting read to play with ones mind. I felt left suspended in mid air.... will we see a resolving piece from you?
You\'re being enigmatic now though.
March 21st, 2020 13:50
dusk arising said:
I doubt she will answer you with honesty. They like to come across as enigmatic... so be prepared to hear that she doesn\'t like your after-shave any longer.
Interesting read to play with ones mind. I felt left suspended in mid air.... will we see a resolving piece from you?
You\'re being enigmatic now though.
March 21st, 2020 13:50
Hesitation
Poetic Dan said:
I followed the jumped, realised those buggers never actually went! They say it\'s never to late but sometimes I wish that maybe I\'d wait!
Who am I kidding I do not like to hesitate!
Fantastic stuff my friend!
Much peace and respect
March 11th, 2020 08:59
Poetic Dan said:
I followed the jumped, realised those buggers never actually went! They say it\'s never to late but sometimes I wish that maybe I\'d wait!
Who am I kidding I do not like to hesitate!
Fantastic stuff my friend!
Much peace and respect
March 11th, 2020 08:59
Hesitation
orchidee said:
You hesitated yourself N? \'He/she who hesitates is lost?!\' True always?
You hesitated listening to me sing? Well, millions do! heehee.
March 9th, 2020 03:44
orchidee said:
You hesitated yourself N? \'He/she who hesitates is lost?!\' True always?
You hesitated listening to me sing? Well, millions do! heehee.
March 9th, 2020 03:44
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