Comments received on poems by Neville
Fear of Haiku
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening NEVILLE ~ Its not the HAIKU or SENRYU or TANKAS (5 7 5 7 7) Im scared of ~ in fact they can be good fun and long Poems are not appreciated on MSN ! What scares ME is that even on a freewheelin* - easy goin* - come-day go-day SITE like MPS there are Purists ~ WHO if you lable a POEM a HAIKU (5 7 5 & about Nature & Seasons etc ?) or a SENRYU (5 7 5 about People & emotions etc ?) they will inform you that its either wrong Syllable countwise or Subjectwise etc etc. This can put budding Poets off and they leave MPS and give up Poetry. I notice that much Published Poetry in Languages other than English dont follow the 5 7 5 syllabus rule so it seems like a *Free for All* out there ~ thanks for sharin* & carin*
Peace & Joy to You & Yours
Yours BR IAN & ANGELA !
April 5th, 2020 11:55
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening NEVILLE ~ Its not the HAIKU or SENRYU or TANKAS (5 7 5 7 7) Im scared of ~ in fact they can be good fun and long Poems are not appreciated on MSN ! What scares ME is that even on a freewheelin* - easy goin* - come-day go-day SITE like MPS there are Purists ~ WHO if you lable a POEM a HAIKU (5 7 5 & about Nature & Seasons etc ?) or a SENRYU (5 7 5 about People & emotions etc ?) they will inform you that its either wrong Syllable countwise or Subjectwise etc etc. This can put budding Poets off and they leave MPS and give up Poetry. I notice that much Published Poetry in Languages other than English dont follow the 5 7 5 syllabus rule so it seems like a *Free for All* out there ~ thanks for sharin* & carin*
Peace & Joy to You & Yours
Yours BR IAN & ANGELA !
April 5th, 2020 11:55
Fear of Haiku
orchidee said:
Who are Haiku and Senryu? You can see I\'m not a cultured poet! lol.
April 5th, 2020 10:21
orchidee said:
Who are Haiku and Senryu? You can see I\'m not a cultured poet! lol.
April 5th, 2020 10:21
Fear of Haiku
dusk arising said:
I loves having me a go at poetry see.... but i cants do the math for they haiku and that .. innit?
April 5th, 2020 08:39
dusk arising said:
I loves having me a go at poetry see.... but i cants do the math for they haiku and that .. innit?
April 5th, 2020 08:39
Fear of Haiku
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - this hits the nail on the head - -
- that\'s the way it is with short things monsieur - --- but then poetry can often make friends out of strangers methinks...............
April 5th, 2020 08:36
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - this hits the nail on the head - -
- that\'s the way it is with short things monsieur - --- but then poetry can often make friends out of strangers methinks...............
April 5th, 2020 08:36
More Truth
Poetic Dan said:
Like an arrow good sir! You took all my possessions but the memories are ours...
Great stuff
Keep safe
April 5th, 2020 04:08
Poetic Dan said:
Like an arrow good sir! You took all my possessions but the memories are ours...
Great stuff
Keep safe
April 5th, 2020 04:08
More Truth
Goldfinch60 said:
No it cannot go with you and it can be left behind but that\'s just money, the best thing that you must be remembered for though is your love for friends and family - that will always be treasured.
Andy
April 5th, 2020 01:35
Goldfinch60 said:
No it cannot go with you and it can be left behind but that\'s just money, the best thing that you must be remembered for though is your love for friends and family - that will always be treasured.
Andy
April 5th, 2020 01:35
More Truth
Fay Slimm. said:
The kind of wealth beyond anything fiscal never depends on public revenue for retaining the richness of spirit meant - so who can say Nay to your reasonable question dear Nev. ? - -- such treasure is permanent and goes where its owner goes. - - well that\'s what methinks after pondering your welcome posting my friend.
April 4th, 2020 16:47
Fay Slimm. said:
The kind of wealth beyond anything fiscal never depends on public revenue for retaining the richness of spirit meant - so who can say Nay to your reasonable question dear Nev. ? - -- such treasure is permanent and goes where its owner goes. - - well that\'s what methinks after pondering your welcome posting my friend.
April 4th, 2020 16:47
Insidious
MendedFences27 said:
Life is a series of changes. All things are in motion, uncontrollably. Love can grow or fade depending on how life and people change. The pain is a product of Love\'s depth. All love is not the same, some feel it more deeply than others. Your poem stages the \"suffering\" felt by one who loved intensely. No one went wrong. It\'s just one of life\'s changes, but it still hurts. _ Phil A.
March 30th, 2020 19:35
MendedFences27 said:
Life is a series of changes. All things are in motion, uncontrollably. Love can grow or fade depending on how life and people change. The pain is a product of Love\'s depth. All love is not the same, some feel it more deeply than others. Your poem stages the \"suffering\" felt by one who loved intensely. No one went wrong. It\'s just one of life\'s changes, but it still hurts. _ Phil A.
March 30th, 2020 19:35
My Fathers Son & Other Important Questions
Goldfinch60 said:
My Father died in 1995 but he is still with me and always will be as yours will be with you. Our lives were moulded by our father\'s influence and you would not be the good person you are without that influence.
You are still your father\'s son.
Andy
March 27th, 2020 01:06
Goldfinch60 said:
My Father died in 1995 but he is still with me and always will be as yours will be with you. Our lives were moulded by our father\'s influence and you would not be the good person you are without that influence.
You are still your father\'s son.
Andy
March 27th, 2020 01:06
My Fathers Son & Other Important Questions
Christina8 said:
I think we all struggle with these questions.....except I wonder just the opposite, now that my mother is gone.....if only someone could provide us with the answers....
March 26th, 2020 19:53
Christina8 said:
I think we all struggle with these questions.....except I wonder just the opposite, now that my mother is gone.....if only someone could provide us with the answers....
March 26th, 2020 19:53
My Fathers Son & Other Important Questions
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
You fit exactly where you want to fit...
in your children’s heart and soul!
~Laura~🌻
March 26th, 2020 18:42
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
You fit exactly where you want to fit...
in your children’s heart and soul!
~Laura~🌻
March 26th, 2020 18:42
My Fathers Son & Other Important Questions
PoeticBiscuit said:
Simple yet impactful write that encourages thoughts among your readers. Very clever yet such a good question with many answers.
March 26th, 2020 15:07
PoeticBiscuit said:
Simple yet impactful write that encourages thoughts among your readers. Very clever yet such a good question with many answers.
March 26th, 2020 15:07
My Fathers Son & Other Important Questions
Michael Edwards said:
Questions I still ponder - clever write.
March 26th, 2020 14:13
Michael Edwards said:
Questions I still ponder - clever write.
March 26th, 2020 14:13
My Fathers Son & Other Important Questions
Fay Slimm. said:
A familiar enquiry at a very sad time whether from sons or from daughters and pathos colours the core of this question with palest sad....... a most moving read Nev............. x
March 26th, 2020 11:19
Fay Slimm. said:
A familiar enquiry at a very sad time whether from sons or from daughters and pathos colours the core of this question with palest sad....... a most moving read Nev............. x
March 26th, 2020 11:19
My Fathers Son & Other Important Questions
orchidee said:
Erm, well you still are your fathers son, I would say. We (male) may also be a father ourselves; brother, uncle, grandad; nephew; etc.
I never knew we could be so may things!
March 26th, 2020 04:30
orchidee said:
Erm, well you still are your fathers son, I would say. We (male) may also be a father ourselves; brother, uncle, grandad; nephew; etc.
I never knew we could be so may things!
March 26th, 2020 04:30
My Fathers Son & Other Important Questions
dusk arising said:
A young man\'s question is asked here i believe. For a matured man is already fitting into places, hearts and minds where he is irreplaceable.
I think you penned this to tease us into a wonderful train of though about life and living. Full marks sir!
March 26th, 2020 04:23
dusk arising said:
A young man\'s question is asked here i believe. For a matured man is already fitting into places, hearts and minds where he is irreplaceable.
I think you penned this to tease us into a wonderful train of though about life and living. Full marks sir!
March 26th, 2020 04:23
Job Lot of Biro’s
Goldfinch60 said:
We all do that and in my case I need bottles of ink for my quill.
Andy
March 25th, 2020 03:07
Goldfinch60 said:
We all do that and in my case I need bottles of ink for my quill.
Andy
March 25th, 2020 03:07
Job Lot of Biro’s
PoeticBiscuit said:
A very touching write Neville. Time takes all except for the memories that we hold close.
March 24th, 2020 14:19
PoeticBiscuit said:
A very touching write Neville. Time takes all except for the memories that we hold close.
March 24th, 2020 14:19
Job Lot of Biro’s
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes hearin\'ya loud and clear mon ami and am keeping to schedule on what where and when and with whom --- yes this is a serious health hazard my friend and same back at-ya - you betta tek care and stay well too....... x
March 24th, 2020 14:04
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes hearin\'ya loud and clear mon ami and am keeping to schedule on what where and when and with whom --- yes this is a serious health hazard my friend and same back at-ya - you betta tek care and stay well too....... x
March 24th, 2020 14:04
Job Lot of Biro’s
Fay Slimm. said:
Love is so hard to shelve when time was it glittered with golden dreams --- another tear-jerking read Nev and so clearly revealed that need to note down every nuance to keep and read over again - - it surely takes lots of biros does the sight of a one-time love ........... x
March 24th, 2020 13:23
Fay Slimm. said:
Love is so hard to shelve when time was it glittered with golden dreams --- another tear-jerking read Nev and so clearly revealed that need to note down every nuance to keep and read over again - - it surely takes lots of biros does the sight of a one-time love ........... x
March 24th, 2020 13:23
Job Lot of Biro’s
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Love the title and the message of your poem.
The first time I saw the word ‘Biro’ was in high school in a required reading assignment.
Very interesting.
Stay safe.
~Laura~🌻
March 24th, 2020 13:23
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Love the title and the message of your poem.
The first time I saw the word ‘Biro’ was in high school in a required reading assignment.
Very interesting.
Stay safe.
~Laura~🌻
March 24th, 2020 13:23
Job Lot of Biro’s
dusk arising said:
Well penned (groan)... Well constable Neville, it\'s all done on video tape/memory chip in the interview room now.
Why does modern technology rob life of romance.... or is it just me?
March 24th, 2020 13:17
dusk arising said:
Well penned (groan)... Well constable Neville, it\'s all done on video tape/memory chip in the interview room now.
Why does modern technology rob life of romance.... or is it just me?
March 24th, 2020 13:17
Job Lot of Biro’s
Neville said:
I hope so too, but I am quite sure there will be many more casualties and that this monster should not be underestimated.... Neville :)
March 24th, 2020 13:14
Neville said:
I hope so too, but I am quite sure there will be many more casualties and that this monster should not be underestimated.... Neville :)
March 24th, 2020 13:14
Job Lot of Biro’s
orchidee said:
Ooohh you\'ve not offended me. Are ya still writing to me?! heehee. It need not be goodbye, just au revoir - bit of Spanish there. I\'m good at languages, don\'t ya know!
March 24th, 2020 11:02
orchidee said:
Ooohh you\'ve not offended me. Are ya still writing to me?! heehee. It need not be goodbye, just au revoir - bit of Spanish there. I\'m good at languages, don\'t ya know!
March 24th, 2020 11:02
Insidious
Fay Slimm. said:
Impressive imagery used in the doleful unfinishment of this reflective poem - - love has a habit of ending this way my friend.................
March 22nd, 2020 06:58
Fay Slimm. said:
Impressive imagery used in the doleful unfinishment of this reflective poem - - love has a habit of ending this way my friend.................
March 22nd, 2020 06:58
Insidious
Goldfinch60 said:
The fragility of love can be so unreal and so misunderstood Neville.
Andy
March 22nd, 2020 02:19
Goldfinch60 said:
The fragility of love can be so unreal and so misunderstood Neville.
Andy
March 22nd, 2020 02:19
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