Comments received on poems by Neville
Disinterested
dusk arising said:
OOOpppss you could well be the silhouette in my piece today.
Your first verse is such an entertainment, but i never wanted to actually shoot anyone who broke my heart/emptied my bank account (yet, but the day is young).
Verse two is deffo her attention grabber.
September 13th, 2019 00:57
dusk arising said:
OOOpppss you could well be the silhouette in my piece today.
Your first verse is such an entertainment, but i never wanted to actually shoot anyone who broke my heart/emptied my bank account (yet, but the day is young).
Verse two is deffo her attention grabber.
September 13th, 2019 00:57
Correction
Suresh said:
At first I read the last word as \"erect\", and you can imagine where my mind went......
I stand corrected...
September 12th, 2019 10:01
Suresh said:
At first I read the last word as \"erect\", and you can imagine where my mind went......
I stand corrected...
September 12th, 2019 10:01
Correction
Christina8 said:
This is a fun little ditty though well written I may add! :)
September 12th, 2019 06:16
Christina8 said:
This is a fun little ditty though well written I may add! :)
September 12th, 2019 06:16
Correction
dusk arising said:
Lots to be read into this little ditty. Creative poetic minds will run wild with this today. My own thoughts are of course disgraceful but hey-ho.
Love the sun burnt knees touch.
September 12th, 2019 04:05
dusk arising said:
Lots to be read into this little ditty. Creative poetic minds will run wild with this today. My own thoughts are of course disgraceful but hey-ho.
Love the sun burnt knees touch.
September 12th, 2019 04:05
Correction
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
The phrased damned if you do etc etc comes to mind
Tongue in check of a write Neville BRAVO!
September 12th, 2019 02:35
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
The phrased damned if you do etc etc comes to mind
Tongue in check of a write Neville BRAVO!
September 12th, 2019 02:35
Correction
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - - your talent for making me smile with your play on words is always so right my and never fails to please - - -
September 12th, 2019 01:59
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - - your talent for making me smile with your play on words is always so right my and never fails to please - - -
September 12th, 2019 01:59
Correction
Michael Edwards said:
Correct me if I\'m wrong but this is very right
September 12th, 2019 01:37
Michael Edwards said:
Correct me if I\'m wrong but this is very right
September 12th, 2019 01:37
Correction
Goldfinch60 said:
If you are wrong take 100 lines and write:
\"In my life I am more often right than wrong so do not need any correction!\"
September 12th, 2019 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
If you are wrong take 100 lines and write:
\"In my life I am more often right than wrong so do not need any correction!\"
September 12th, 2019 01:23
Never Not Once
Christina8 said:
This is a really great write, Neville! Sad write but so well done!
September 11th, 2019 06:20
Christina8 said:
This is a really great write, Neville! Sad write but so well done!
September 11th, 2019 06:20
Never Not Once
dusk arising said:
That\'s why the lady is a ......
So it looks like we met some of the same girls along the way..... The last one of this ilk taught me to feel insignificant.
Great piece telling of male stupidity in falling for unattainable self appointed madonnas. Long live madonnas.
September 11th, 2019 05:25
dusk arising said:
That\'s why the lady is a ......
So it looks like we met some of the same girls along the way..... The last one of this ilk taught me to feel insignificant.
Great piece telling of male stupidity in falling for unattainable self appointed madonnas. Long live madonnas.
September 11th, 2019 05:25
Never Not Once
Fay Slimm. said:
Good morn to you Nev. The sadness in these lines shows how self-pity can destroy the reality love brings to a close relationship -- you have nailed it again and true my friend.......................
September 11th, 2019 02:31
Fay Slimm. said:
Good morn to you Nev. The sadness in these lines shows how self-pity can destroy the reality love brings to a close relationship -- you have nailed it again and true my friend.......................
September 11th, 2019 02:31
Never Not Once
Goldfinch60 said:
Such an emotive write Neville. Sometimes we just cannot see into the real soul of people, some do not even try.
Andy.
September 11th, 2019 02:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Such an emotive write Neville. Sometimes we just cannot see into the real soul of people, some do not even try.
Andy.
September 11th, 2019 02:15
Never Not Once
sylviasearcher said:
Did he taste salty or bitter?
It’s funny isn’t it that idea if what we sense from another?
Do we ever really really see another person and understand and know them?
I wonder if it is even possible?
What we see or hear or taste or touch ... our perception will always have a bias ... no matter how hard we try to deny it?
September 11th, 2019 02:12
sylviasearcher said:
Did he taste salty or bitter?
It’s funny isn’t it that idea if what we sense from another?
Do we ever really really see another person and understand and know them?
I wonder if it is even possible?
What we see or hear or taste or touch ... our perception will always have a bias ... no matter how hard we try to deny it?
September 11th, 2019 02:12
Never Not Once
orchidee said:
He wasn\'t called a blue-eyed boy for nothing, ya know! (as the saying goes). Now sadly she has lost it all. A fine write N.
September 11th, 2019 01:54
orchidee said:
He wasn\'t called a blue-eyed boy for nothing, ya know! (as the saying goes). Now sadly she has lost it all. A fine write N.
September 11th, 2019 01:54
Best Friends
Goldfinch60 said:
A best friend is someone who is always there for you in both the goo and bad times, they are worth there weight in Saffron. (saffron is more valuable than gold).
September 10th, 2019 14:52
Goldfinch60 said:
A best friend is someone who is always there for you in both the goo and bad times, they are worth there weight in Saffron. (saffron is more valuable than gold).
September 10th, 2019 14:52
Best Friends
dusk arising said:
I\'m such a recluse these days i hardly know what friendship is any more. Oh yes i remember, they\'re the ones who showed their true colours. Not to be sneezed at when in need.
Bless your little bird.
September 10th, 2019 11:30
dusk arising said:
I\'m such a recluse these days i hardly know what friendship is any more. Oh yes i remember, they\'re the ones who showed their true colours. Not to be sneezed at when in need.
Bless your little bird.
September 10th, 2019 11:30
Best Friends
Fay Slimm. said:
Best friends to the bitter end said the crows in Jungledbook and I took that as my mantra - so if you\'re ever in a jam - here I am........ ha - - - yet another ol\' \'quote....... but I really believe in the message between your lines mi amigo.
September 10th, 2019 10:20
Fay Slimm. said:
Best friends to the bitter end said the crows in Jungledbook and I took that as my mantra - so if you\'re ever in a jam - here I am........ ha - - - yet another ol\' \'quote....... but I really believe in the message between your lines mi amigo.
September 10th, 2019 10:20
Best Friends
Christina8 said:
I thoroughly enjoyed your poem!....intrigued by some of your replies to it though I may say!
September 10th, 2019 10:19
Christina8 said:
I thoroughly enjoyed your poem!....intrigued by some of your replies to it though I may say!
September 10th, 2019 10:19
Best Friends
orchidee said:
Was the time you lost me related to me running out of purple pills? Just askin\'. lol.
September 10th, 2019 08:04
orchidee said:
Was the time you lost me related to me running out of purple pills? Just askin\'. lol.
September 10th, 2019 08:04
Best Friends
orchidee said:
A fine write N. Would you say \'fore\'er\' and \'eva\'? I would say the former, cos I lost the \'v\' on me laptop. What rubbish will I talk next?! lol.
September 10th, 2019 07:53
orchidee said:
A fine write N. Would you say \'fore\'er\' and \'eva\'? I would say the former, cos I lost the \'v\' on me laptop. What rubbish will I talk next?! lol.
September 10th, 2019 07:53
Best Friends
sylviasearcher said:
I always like the Plath quote about friendship, you know the one about vomiting?
I guess a best friend is a safe place to lie your head when you have a cold, or a wobble, or a catastrophe?
It’s safe because they still see you and love you and they don’t just see the cold or the wobble or the catastrophe.
I gave my protagonist a best friend because I so wanted one myself... and then...
September 10th, 2019 07:50
sylviasearcher said:
I always like the Plath quote about friendship, you know the one about vomiting?
I guess a best friend is a safe place to lie your head when you have a cold, or a wobble, or a catastrophe?
It’s safe because they still see you and love you and they don’t just see the cold or the wobble or the catastrophe.
I gave my protagonist a best friend because I so wanted one myself... and then...
September 10th, 2019 07:50
Best Friends
Neville said:
Thank you Kevin.. that is very odd... I will send another and look into that...
September 10th, 2019 07:35
Neville said:
Thank you Kevin.. that is very odd... I will send another and look into that...
September 10th, 2019 07:35
Best Friends
kevin browne said:
Bless your little poem about friendship adn friendship on means that we can message each other which brings me to thinking why I haven\'t I receieved your PM to me and why you haven\'t replied to the 3 Private messages I\'ve sent you. Can you try againg so I know what your innital messge id about. Thank you...Mr Neville...
September 10th, 2019 07:29
kevin browne said:
Bless your little poem about friendship adn friendship on means that we can message each other which brings me to thinking why I haven\'t I receieved your PM to me and why you haven\'t replied to the 3 Private messages I\'ve sent you. Can you try againg so I know what your innital messge id about. Thank you...Mr Neville...
September 10th, 2019 07:29
Don\'t You Dare Stop Now
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful sensual write in a great understated way.
September 10th, 2019 00:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful sensual write in a great understated way.
September 10th, 2019 00:16
Love and Warm Toast
Alta H Mabin said:
Absolutely beautiful. Big hugs and may you find great comfort in all the things, beautiful things about mum that will stay with you forever. Embracing you with love and care, my lovely friend.
September 9th, 2019 13:31
Alta H Mabin said:
Absolutely beautiful. Big hugs and may you find great comfort in all the things, beautiful things about mum that will stay with you forever. Embracing you with love and care, my lovely friend.
September 9th, 2019 13:31
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