Comments received on poems by Neville



Why When Where and How
dusk arising said:

A bit one sided when all she wanted was a coffee.

I like it. Alluringly different approach and style.

August 9th, 2019 08:26

Why When Where and How
sylviasearcher said:

Nicely formatted! 😊

August 9th, 2019 04:28

Why When Where and How
orchidee said:

That\'s a lot of questions. I would be worn out before I finished answering them all, innit! Aww, you use up all the \'W\'s now. Just one left over for me there.

August 9th, 2019 03:19

Why When Where and How
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

and for a bonus round?

August 9th, 2019 03:08

Why When Where and How
Fay Slimm. said:

Two hearts in union and I say what could be better !!! .......... I love the exciting style and formation of this vivid pen-picture my romantic friend.

August 9th, 2019 02:40

Why When Where and How
Goldfinch60 said:

May those answers be forever wonderful for you.

August 9th, 2019 02:30

That Secret Place
dusk arising said:

Neville at his poetic sensual best again.

Gosh how many more discrete encounters will fall from those creative fingers to net our curiosity and imagination.

Great stuff... i do feel titillated!

August 8th, 2019 13:25

That Secret Place
PoeticBiscuit said:

I’m glad I decided to take a look into your writing because now I don’t think I can ever stop! Your skill only seems to grow.

August 8th, 2019 12:45

That Secret Place
Michael Edwards said:

I\'m with Christina (not literally) - your writing goes from strength to strength.

August 8th, 2019 10:49

That Secret Place
Christina8 said:

So well written, Neville. Love the repeating last 2 lines! I think your writing continues to get better....is that possible??...Christina

August 8th, 2019 10:44

That Secret Place
Suresh said:

....you will only be complete, when your efforts make your lover sigh in estacy...

August 8th, 2019 10:05

That Secret Place
Fay Slimm. said:

A medley of clever double-entendres cascade effortlessly down these interpretive lines
- -Your aptness for setting alight imagination is second to none mon ami - - a real gasp of a read...........

August 8th, 2019 04:24

That Secret Place
Goldfinch60 said:

My secret place is where My River meets My Spirit. Good write Neville.

August 8th, 2019 02:49

That Secret Place
sylviasearcher said:

Well mine is a forest with a river and a waterfall but it is hidden under a rainbow so you probably would never find it ...





August 8th, 2019 02:39

That Secret Place
orchidee said:

A good write N. I can\'t find ya. Oh, you\'re in a secret place, that\'s why!
Or as I say; \'Take me to a secret place, my love\' / \'Anywhere away from Orchi\'s singing\'. heehee.

August 8th, 2019 01:49

Blood Red Rim
Goldfinch60 said:

And dance again you will with wonderful words like these.

August 8th, 2019 01:04

Blood Red Rim
Suresh said:

I feel that your recent posts are invoking a love deeply held, now bubbling to surface. Sown together they form laurels to love in all fields of sight, sound, touch, aroma and above all heart.

August 7th, 2019 11:09

Blood Red Rim
orchidee said:

Oh woe, I\'ve not found any ardour as yet. I\'ll put Fido in the dog-house, an then I\'ll find out all about it!

August 7th, 2019 11:05

Blood Red Rim
Christina8 said:

This was really quite a stunning read, from beginning to end. Another I feel, worthy of the classics!

August 7th, 2019 10:11

Blood Red Rim
Laura🌻 said:

Neville,

Reading this exceptional write is uplifting my day!

Thank you for sharing!

~Laura~

August 7th, 2019 08:57

Blood Red Rim
Michael Edwards said:

Another lexiconic delight - a true work of the poetic art.

August 7th, 2019 08:07

Blood Red Rim
dusk arising said:

And who could knowingly disagree that the future may find your lost ones arms embracing your dancing soul.

A classical feel woven into a mysterious tapestry of lament today.

August 7th, 2019 05:17

Blood Red Rim
Fay Slimm. said:

A spiritual feel to this verse of tribute to lost beauty Nev. - -- atmospheric and intriguing this write which allured me from title to final line................ Fay

August 7th, 2019 03:34

Blood Red Rim
orchidee said:

Someone having fun there?! If so, glad someone is. Fido won\'t let me have anything of \'ardour\'! lol.

August 7th, 2019 02:42

On finding Truth
sylviasearcher said:

Exactly that

August 7th, 2019 01:33

Thinking Backwards
SerenWise said:

Lovely evocative words

August 6th, 2019 20:47

Why Do I Love Thee
Christina8 said:

Now this is a love poem worthy of the classics......right from the heart! Thanks for sharing this intimate ode....

August 6th, 2019 17:09

Beautiful Bruises
Christina8 said:

Beautiful and memorable write. Felt as if I were there....

August 6th, 2019 17:07

Appetite for Words
Christina8 said:

I like this! My best friend calls me a \'walking talking encyclopedia\' and this reminds me of that!

August 6th, 2019 17:04

Thinking Backwards
Goldfinch60 said:

Those times of loving in the past are so wonderfully appreciated.

August 6th, 2019 15:27



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