Comments received on poems by Neville
Four Letter Words
orchidee said:
Fido was ready to bark at the four letter word, but he will settle for the nine letter one!
October 30th, 2019 11:34
orchidee said:
Fido was ready to bark at the four letter word, but he will settle for the nine letter one!
October 30th, 2019 11:34
Good and Proper
FineB said:
Hello Neville,
An interesting and good write.
LOVE - a wonderful emotion but complex at times.
.
Keep writing FineB
October 30th, 2019 11:07
FineB said:
Hello Neville,
An interesting and good write.
LOVE - a wonderful emotion but complex at times.
.
Keep writing FineB
October 30th, 2019 11:07
Four Letter Words
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - Fecundity - yes tis an appropriate eight-letter word that could out-date the offensive four..... to fecundate is to fertilize hence it could be less risky to ask if fecundation might take place instead of the usual cum-to-bed dictatorial - - ha - if that is what was meant by this intriguing appeal for more genteel ways toward giving lust a nicer expression. - great little write Nev........................ Fay.
October 30th, 2019 05:38
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - Fecundity - yes tis an appropriate eight-letter word that could out-date the offensive four..... to fecundate is to fertilize hence it could be less risky to ask if fecundation might take place instead of the usual cum-to-bed dictatorial - - ha - if that is what was meant by this intriguing appeal for more genteel ways toward giving lust a nicer expression. - great little write Nev........................ Fay.
October 30th, 2019 05:38
Good and Proper
Goldfinch60 said:
Yet another intriguing write Neville, so much to think about.
October 29th, 2019 01:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Yet another intriguing write Neville, so much to think about.
October 29th, 2019 01:22
Good and Proper
Poetic Dan said:
Talk the talk and walk the walk, let no shore be under your foot but don\'t before time runs away from you!
Loved this!
Good & proper guv!
October 28th, 2019 14:10
Poetic Dan said:
Talk the talk and walk the walk, let no shore be under your foot but don\'t before time runs away from you!
Loved this!
Good & proper guv!
October 28th, 2019 14:10
Good and Proper
Christina8 said:
This is an excellent write dear Nev., absolutely wonderful! How could a lady resist?
October 28th, 2019 12:37
Christina8 said:
This is an excellent write dear Nev., absolutely wonderful! How could a lady resist?
October 28th, 2019 12:37
Good and Proper
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh with that kind of want and need how could a lady refuse - hope she loved him good and yes proper for a happy-ever-after end to this alluring tale of real desire............. another intriguing read my friend.
October 28th, 2019 10:31
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh with that kind of want and need how could a lady refuse - hope she loved him good and yes proper for a happy-ever-after end to this alluring tale of real desire............. another intriguing read my friend.
October 28th, 2019 10:31
Good and Proper
dusk arising said:
Hmmm maybe she loved him more than he knew..... and saved him from another heartbreak.
I love the way you create such open verse for your reader to lose themself in. I lost myself into a creative problem solving daydream here. Poetry can be so many things to marvel at.
October 28th, 2019 10:18
dusk arising said:
Hmmm maybe she loved him more than he knew..... and saved him from another heartbreak.
I love the way you create such open verse for your reader to lose themself in. I lost myself into a creative problem solving daydream here. Poetry can be so many things to marvel at.
October 28th, 2019 10:18
When I Find You
FineB said:
Wow Neville,
That is a good write.
Very passionate.
Keep writing FineB
October 27th, 2019 14:18
FineB said:
Wow Neville,
That is a good write.
Very passionate.
Keep writing FineB
October 27th, 2019 14:18
When I Find You
Suresh said:
No matter how I say it, there\'s no way to avoid eroticism - AAAHHHH!!!
what a wetdream, sorry, I meant daydream.
October 27th, 2019 09:59
Suresh said:
No matter how I say it, there\'s no way to avoid eroticism - AAAHHHH!!!
what a wetdream, sorry, I meant daydream.
October 27th, 2019 09:59
When I Find You
orchidee said:
Coooee, look no futher. I\'m here! Then again, I always am here - like a bad......smell, no, bad penny! lol.
October 27th, 2019 02:21
orchidee said:
Coooee, look no futher. I\'m here! Then again, I always am here - like a bad......smell, no, bad penny! lol.
October 27th, 2019 02:21
When I Find You
Goldfinch60 said:
I can see so many meanings in this write Neville - clever write.
October 27th, 2019 01:55
Goldfinch60 said:
I can see so many meanings in this write Neville - clever write.
October 27th, 2019 01:55
When I Find You
kevin browne said:
Is this an innuendo or are you just flirting with your pen...???
October 27th, 2019 00:47
kevin browne said:
Is this an innuendo or are you just flirting with your pen...???
October 27th, 2019 00:47
Indecently Yours
Christina8 said:
Oh my! Glad you ticked the box, lol! A clever write, so agree with Fay on this one. An absolutely wonderful job, Nev!
October 26th, 2019 14:13
Christina8 said:
Oh my! Glad you ticked the box, lol! A clever write, so agree with Fay on this one. An absolutely wonderful job, Nev!
October 26th, 2019 14:13
Indecently Yours
Suresh said:
Poet choose words to express minds ensemble of intrigue- leaving readers salavating
October 26th, 2019 14:08
Suresh said:
Poet choose words to express minds ensemble of intrigue- leaving readers salavating
October 26th, 2019 14:08
Indecently Yours
Neville said:
Thank you Fay.... always appreciated no end... N
October 23rd, 2019 04:42
Neville said:
Thank you Fay.... always appreciated no end... N
October 23rd, 2019 04:42
Indecently Yours
Fay Slimm. said:
Have to agree my dear Nev. that bound and tethered together these poetic lines reveal no way out for those indecently glued.....fantastic the turning of chosen words into creation of different ideas in this clever write.
October 23rd, 2019 03:44
Fay Slimm. said:
Have to agree my dear Nev. that bound and tethered together these poetic lines reveal no way out for those indecently glued.....fantastic the turning of chosen words into creation of different ideas in this clever write.
October 23rd, 2019 03:44
Always Yours
Suresh said:
doubt not a single word or line,
for this love stood the test of time
October 23rd, 2019 02:27
Suresh said:
doubt not a single word or line,
for this love stood the test of time
October 23rd, 2019 02:27
Always Yours
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow a very superbly expressed poem and it\'s awesome how you convey the unfettered nature of your love. It\'s a fine artsy free verse in superb meter. Kudos.
Nice to read from your fab inking again,
Pls pleez do comment/ write your thoughts under my newest poem too.
October 22nd, 2019 07:41
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow a very superbly expressed poem and it\'s awesome how you convey the unfettered nature of your love. It\'s a fine artsy free verse in superb meter. Kudos.
Nice to read from your fab inking again,
Pls pleez do comment/ write your thoughts under my newest poem too.
October 22nd, 2019 07:41
Always Yours
FineB said:
Hello Neville,
A wonderful lovely write about the joys of love.
Keep writing FineB
October 21st, 2019 14:58
FineB said:
Hello Neville,
A wonderful lovely write about the joys of love.
Keep writing FineB
October 21st, 2019 14:58
Always Yours
Goldfinch60 said:
A very fortunate person in your life Neville.
October 20th, 2019 10:26
Goldfinch60 said:
A very fortunate person in your life Neville.
October 20th, 2019 10:26
Always Yours
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh is a letter for a fortunate lady to keep forever -- unconditional love is rare and must be infinitely treasured when given - you describe it so well in this telling verse Nev.
October 20th, 2019 06:45
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh is a letter for a fortunate lady to keep forever -- unconditional love is rare and must be infinitely treasured when given - you describe it so well in this telling verse Nev.
October 20th, 2019 06:45
Time Past
Suresh said:
-never lost, only forgotten, but then if everything is recalled, maybe we all go mad!
October 20th, 2019 00:34
Suresh said:
-never lost, only forgotten, but then if everything is recalled, maybe we all go mad!
October 20th, 2019 00:34
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