Comments received on poems by Neville
When I Was Dead
dusk arising said:
Metaphor for drowning in a relationship? only to find oneself washed limp into the harbour - a place where people begin and end their relationships with the ocean. A fine place to begin to live again.
March 13th, 2019 04:21
dusk arising said:
Metaphor for drowning in a relationship? only to find oneself washed limp into the harbour - a place where people begin and end their relationships with the ocean. A fine place to begin to live again.
March 13th, 2019 04:21
Mourning Song
dusk arising said:
Mountains of passion fade to calm once the crashing waves finally stop.
Would be appropriate to mourn such passing.
Short, sweet with amazing depth in today\'s write from you N.
March 13th, 2019 04:07
dusk arising said:
Mountains of passion fade to calm once the crashing waves finally stop.
Would be appropriate to mourn such passing.
Short, sweet with amazing depth in today\'s write from you N.
March 13th, 2019 04:07
Mourning Song
Michael Edwards said:
A real lovely write - enjoy your trip Neville.
March 13th, 2019 03:33
Michael Edwards said:
A real lovely write - enjoy your trip Neville.
March 13th, 2019 03:33
Mourning Song
sylviasearcher said:
But who can choose between ocean and mountain?
I was just reviewing a chapter in my book and it was kind of having both. Mountain and ocean...
Maybe I’ll share it...
March 13th, 2019 03:17
sylviasearcher said:
But who can choose between ocean and mountain?
I was just reviewing a chapter in my book and it was kind of having both. Mountain and ocean...
Maybe I’ll share it...
March 13th, 2019 03:17
When I Was Dead
Goldfinch60 said:
Good metaphorical write, those white horses can bring hope.
March 13th, 2019 01:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Good metaphorical write, those white horses can bring hope.
March 13th, 2019 01:55
When I Was Dead
Nicholas Browning said:
For some reason I thought of the Four Horsemen when I read this. Getting dragged by them beneath the waves would be a frightening thing indeed.
March 12th, 2019 16:56
Nicholas Browning said:
For some reason I thought of the Four Horsemen when I read this. Getting dragged by them beneath the waves would be a frightening thing indeed.
March 12th, 2019 16:56
When I Was Dead
Michael Edwards said:
Well I\'m a realist so I read it as it is written - a life lost at sea and washed ashore. The only hesitation I have is the word \'exhausted\' in the penultimate stanza. A fine write Neville.
March 12th, 2019 14:46
Michael Edwards said:
Well I\'m a realist so I read it as it is written - a life lost at sea and washed ashore. The only hesitation I have is the word \'exhausted\' in the penultimate stanza. A fine write Neville.
March 12th, 2019 14:46
When I Was Dead
orchidee said:
A fine write N. And who is Joe Bloggs, for that matter?.....!
March 12th, 2019 07:17
orchidee said:
A fine write N. And who is Joe Bloggs, for that matter?.....!
March 12th, 2019 07:17
When I Was Dead
sylviasearcher said:
It reminded me a little of the notion of acceptance and commitment therapy, I quite liked the idea of accepting the wild horses escorting me, seemed a little humbling maybe.
Maybe maya needs some white horses!
March 12th, 2019 06:01
sylviasearcher said:
It reminded me a little of the notion of acceptance and commitment therapy, I quite liked the idea of accepting the wild horses escorting me, seemed a little humbling maybe.
Maybe maya needs some white horses!
March 12th, 2019 06:01
When I Was Dead
Fay Slimm. said:
A scare of a read yet phrased with great metaphor - - deadness which calls for a lively escort of salty white horses draws me back to the times I have, watching, wondered what lies right below........a bleak but compelling read Nev.
March 12th, 2019 05:59
Fay Slimm. said:
A scare of a read yet phrased with great metaphor - - deadness which calls for a lively escort of salty white horses draws me back to the times I have, watching, wondered what lies right below........a bleak but compelling read Nev.
March 12th, 2019 05:59
Je Riviens by Worth
Goldfinch60 said:
Smells are the most significant senses to bring back memories. May that smell remind you of heaven.
March 12th, 2019 01:37
Goldfinch60 said:
Smells are the most significant senses to bring back memories. May that smell remind you of heaven.
March 12th, 2019 01:37
Je Riviens by Worth
dusk arising said:
It is indeed odd how a scent on one lady can differ from the same scent on another, intoxication though both may be.
Methinks this olfactory sensation stimulates parts other scents cannot reach..... and there is an untold madonna present.
March 11th, 2019 14:34
dusk arising said:
It is indeed odd how a scent on one lady can differ from the same scent on another, intoxication though both may be.
Methinks this olfactory sensation stimulates parts other scents cannot reach..... and there is an untold madonna present.
March 11th, 2019 14:34
Je Riviens by Worth
orchidee said:
Sounds a bit like \'Je ne regrette rien\', yes? Or maybe not? And what am I not regretting?! I\'m waffling now. Any excuse for a song!
March 11th, 2019 07:23
orchidee said:
Sounds a bit like \'Je ne regrette rien\', yes? Or maybe not? And what am I not regretting?! I\'m waffling now. Any excuse for a song!
March 11th, 2019 07:23
Je Riviens by Worth
Neville said:
Thank you Michael, always appreciated sir....Neville
March 11th, 2019 06:07
Neville said:
Thank you Michael, always appreciated sir....Neville
March 11th, 2019 06:07
Je Riviens by Worth
Michael Edwards said:
I think I\'ll go and buy a bottle - err not for me of course. Another original and engaging write.
March 11th, 2019 05:55
Michael Edwards said:
I think I\'ll go and buy a bottle - err not for me of course. Another original and engaging write.
March 11th, 2019 05:55
Je Riviens by Worth
Fay Slimm. said:
A sense of smell can take us back in an instant - - memory of scent calls as nothing else can. Ah - past love wrapped in perfume and beautifully written on your canvas today Nev. x
March 11th, 2019 04:18
Fay Slimm. said:
A sense of smell can take us back in an instant - - memory of scent calls as nothing else can. Ah - past love wrapped in perfume and beautifully written on your canvas today Nev. x
March 11th, 2019 04:18
Je Riviens by Worth
orchidee said:
A fine write N. It\'s some cheap scent from the Pound Shop for me. As in a comedy prog - \'This smells like ferret pee\' Ooh lol. Woof - started Fido off now! yet we do associate smells (and pongs?) with certain people and/or places.
March 11th, 2019 04:09
orchidee said:
A fine write N. It\'s some cheap scent from the Pound Shop for me. As in a comedy prog - \'This smells like ferret pee\' Ooh lol. Woof - started Fido off now! yet we do associate smells (and pongs?) with certain people and/or places.
March 11th, 2019 04:09
Misrepresentation
sylviasearcher said:
Third eyes huh?
Best closed.
Funny how sometimes we are acutely aware of how amidst the social constructs of our being we feel mis-represented. Somehow people see this other version of us. Not the version we ever intended at all?
Not sure even a third eye would help?
Or maybe it would? Maybe I have my third eye closed?
My brain hurts that’s for sure!
No wonder a forest with no people is so appealing!
Poignant write on the disappointment of interactive perception
March 11th, 2019 02:52
sylviasearcher said:
Third eyes huh?
Best closed.
Funny how sometimes we are acutely aware of how amidst the social constructs of our being we feel mis-represented. Somehow people see this other version of us. Not the version we ever intended at all?
Not sure even a third eye would help?
Or maybe it would? Maybe I have my third eye closed?
My brain hurts that’s for sure!
No wonder a forest with no people is so appealing!
Poignant write on the disappointment of interactive perception
March 11th, 2019 02:52
Misrepresentation
Goldfinch60 said:
Confusion often reigns and can lead to awful times but when the confusion is cleared all can be well.
March 11th, 2019 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Confusion often reigns and can lead to awful times but when the confusion is cleared all can be well.
March 11th, 2019 01:25
Misrepresentation
FineB said:
Hello Neville,
A poignant and good poem.
Empathy with others especially different from ourselves is indeed a quality we all need to work on
Keep writing FineB!
March 10th, 2019 12:15
FineB said:
Hello Neville,
A poignant and good poem.
Empathy with others especially different from ourselves is indeed a quality we all need to work on
Keep writing FineB!
March 10th, 2019 12:15
Misrepresentation
Michael Edwards said:
Very poignant read and then I came to the last line - I just loved it.
March 10th, 2019 08:37
Michael Edwards said:
Very poignant read and then I came to the last line - I just loved it.
March 10th, 2019 08:37
Misrepresentation
Neville said:
Never mind, maybe it’ll come to you when you least expect it... thanks for checking in...
March 10th, 2019 08:30
Neville said:
Never mind, maybe it’ll come to you when you least expect it... thanks for checking in...
March 10th, 2019 08:30
Misrepresentation
Poetic Dan said:
Hum I\'m confused I must say, even after a few trys. Must be missing my third eye ;)
March 10th, 2019 08:25
Poetic Dan said:
Hum I\'m confused I must say, even after a few trys. Must be missing my third eye ;)
March 10th, 2019 08:25
Misrepresentation
Fay Slimm. said:
A case of misunderstanding may be behind many an upset - - I love the poignancy and added mystery in the phrase you use in the final stanza Nev. \"He forgot he wore a wheelchair\" - -- how heart-tuggingly poetic is that. - Fay x
March 10th, 2019 06:43
Fay Slimm. said:
A case of misunderstanding may be behind many an upset - - I love the poignancy and added mystery in the phrase you use in the final stanza Nev. \"He forgot he wore a wheelchair\" - -- how heart-tuggingly poetic is that. - Fay x
March 10th, 2019 06:43
Misrepresentation
Neville said:
Gotta laugh though don\'t cha.. thank you sir...
March 10th, 2019 06:42
Neville said:
Gotta laugh though don\'t cha.. thank you sir...
March 10th, 2019 06:42
Misrepresentation
orchidee said:
A fine write N. Yes, some misrepresented me when they told others I could sing! lol.
March 10th, 2019 06:27
orchidee said:
A fine write N. Yes, some misrepresented me when they told others I could sing! lol.
March 10th, 2019 06:27
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