Comments received on poems by Neville
There Are Those
kevin browne said:
Definitely well put together Mr.Nev...your carfting is growing and just keeps on growing. Loved reading this....
September 19th, 2019 15:24
kevin browne said:
Definitely well put together Mr.Nev...your carfting is growing and just keeps on growing. Loved reading this....
September 19th, 2019 15:24
There Are Those
dusk arising said:
Nice one Neville! Perfectly formed and with a superb closure.
September 19th, 2019 13:09
dusk arising said:
Nice one Neville! Perfectly formed and with a superb closure.
September 19th, 2019 13:09
There Are Those
sylviasearcher said:
There are those who...
Fuck?
You were inviting us to complete the last line weren’t you
September 19th, 2019 10:24
sylviasearcher said:
There are those who...
Fuck?
You were inviting us to complete the last line weren’t you
September 19th, 2019 10:24
There Are Those
Poetic Dan said:
Those that want..... You can\'t stop!
O it\'s for those to carry it on
Because there are those that absorb everything!
Fantastic read! really enjoyed
Ta very much
September 19th, 2019 10:13
Poetic Dan said:
Those that want..... You can\'t stop!
O it\'s for those to carry it on
Because there are those that absorb everything!
Fantastic read! really enjoyed
Ta very much
September 19th, 2019 10:13
There Are Those
orchidee said:
And who are the \"they\" who are always saying things?!
September 19th, 2019 07:14
orchidee said:
And who are the \"they\" who are always saying things?!
September 19th, 2019 07:14
There Are Those
Christina8 said:
Wonderful list of \"those\"....beautiful write for today Neville!!
September 19th, 2019 06:19
Christina8 said:
Wonderful list of \"those\"....beautiful write for today Neville!!
September 19th, 2019 06:19
There Are Those
Fay Slimm. said:
Whew - - - tis a grand list of rhyming description between those and those Nev. - - a beut of a write and no doubt some more of \"those\" will be coming to mind from your readers........ Fay
September 19th, 2019 05:02
Fay Slimm. said:
Whew - - - tis a grand list of rhyming description between those and those Nev. - - a beut of a write and no doubt some more of \"those\" will be coming to mind from your readers........ Fay
September 19th, 2019 05:02
Good Time Girl
SerenWise said:
Nicely written, but rather sad. Really conjures up a lasting impression
September 18th, 2019 22:06
SerenWise said:
Nicely written, but rather sad. Really conjures up a lasting impression
September 18th, 2019 22:06
Good Time Girl
Goldfinch60 said:
Sometimes we do not real people inside, it is unfortunate that she had to go down that path but sometimes it is the only way to live.
My son works in Social Services in the prisons and he says how great some of the inmates are in ordinary ways, they just went wrong in one particular way.
Great write Neville.
September 18th, 2019 04:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Sometimes we do not real people inside, it is unfortunate that she had to go down that path but sometimes it is the only way to live.
My son works in Social Services in the prisons and he says how great some of the inmates are in ordinary ways, they just went wrong in one particular way.
Great write Neville.
September 18th, 2019 04:43
Good Time Girl
orchidee said:
I understand - some folk fall on bad times, their lives go downhill for whatever reason.
Meanwhile - Oh, I dunno, I will go mad and meet her, for a bit of a \'good time\'! lol. Fido says can he come along too?! Has the \'girl\' got a lady dog he could meet?! Ooh!
September 18th, 2019 03:30
orchidee said:
I understand - some folk fall on bad times, their lives go downhill for whatever reason.
Meanwhile - Oh, I dunno, I will go mad and meet her, for a bit of a \'good time\'! lol. Fido says can he come along too?! Has the \'girl\' got a lady dog he could meet?! Ooh!
September 18th, 2019 03:30
Good Time Girl
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a pitiable yet in some ways quite memorable time to be in is the picture you pen of a once-pretty girl - - giving many relief and receiving far more than lucre has a very strong warning for those beginning the game.
September 18th, 2019 02:47
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a pitiable yet in some ways quite memorable time to be in is the picture you pen of a once-pretty girl - - giving many relief and receiving far more than lucre has a very strong warning for those beginning the game.
September 18th, 2019 02:47
Good Time Girl
dusk arising said:
Those Lib Dems have a lot to answer for!
Truly sad portrait of an ageing hooker probably wondering if the path which led to \'now\' was ever worth it\'s cost upon her.
September 18th, 2019 02:41
dusk arising said:
Those Lib Dems have a lot to answer for!
Truly sad portrait of an ageing hooker probably wondering if the path which led to \'now\' was ever worth it\'s cost upon her.
September 18th, 2019 02:41
Good Time Girl
orchidee said:
Oohh, I best not meet her then! Woof, No says Fido.
September 18th, 2019 02:37
orchidee said:
Oohh, I best not meet her then! Woof, No says Fido.
September 18th, 2019 02:37
Fondly and Truly
Michael Edwards said:
Now if I was a woman - fine write N
September 17th, 2019 15:26
Michael Edwards said:
Now if I was a woman - fine write N
September 17th, 2019 15:26
Fondly and Truly
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Neville, those thoughts of love from the past are always there.
September 17th, 2019 13:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Neville, those thoughts of love from the past are always there.
September 17th, 2019 13:19
Fondly and Truly
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
“Fondly and Truly” indeed!
An enjoyable read that resonates...
Wonderful memories never to be forgotten if we’re lucky enough to have experienced them!
~Laura~🌻
September 17th, 2019 12:09
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
“Fondly and Truly” indeed!
An enjoyable read that resonates...
Wonderful memories never to be forgotten if we’re lucky enough to have experienced them!
~Laura~🌻
September 17th, 2019 12:09
Fondly and Truly
sylviasearcher said:
I am not sure I have or will ever fondly and truly
September 17th, 2019 08:12
sylviasearcher said:
I am not sure I have or will ever fondly and truly
September 17th, 2019 08:12
Fondly and Truly
dusk arising said:
Beautifully phrased the unspoken desire with us all to be remembered affectionately by past \'nearly right\' lovers.
I know i look back with positive thoughts, as can be seen in my poetry.
Memories my life would be all the sadder without.
September 17th, 2019 07:46
dusk arising said:
Beautifully phrased the unspoken desire with us all to be remembered affectionately by past \'nearly right\' lovers.
I know i look back with positive thoughts, as can be seen in my poetry.
Memories my life would be all the sadder without.
September 17th, 2019 07:46
Fondly and Truly
Christina8 said:
Oh wow this is truly beautiful Nev....Fay is correct when she says it will set female hearts asighing!!
September 17th, 2019 06:24
Christina8 said:
Oh wow this is truly beautiful Nev....Fay is correct when she says it will set female hearts asighing!!
September 17th, 2019 06:24
Fondly and Truly
Fay Slimm. said:
An appeal to set female hearts asighing - you win again Nev with your gently expressed fondly and truly romantic reminders. Great stuff.
September 17th, 2019 04:58
Fay Slimm. said:
An appeal to set female hearts asighing - you win again Nev with your gently expressed fondly and truly romantic reminders. Great stuff.
September 17th, 2019 04:58
Client
Goldfinch60 said:
Captivating write Neville, it needs several reads as so much can be seen in it. Thank you for waking my brain this morning.
September 17th, 2019 00:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Captivating write Neville, it needs several reads as so much can be seen in it. Thank you for waking my brain this morning.
September 17th, 2019 00:27
Client
kevin browne said:
The captivating saying of judge and jury, but there\'s no mention of the executionist in this well crafted crafty, watch out below the Judges seat before she\'d be paid for some under the desk work. As for as the executionare well he landed a pretty blow on his rent arrears...
September 16th, 2019 16:45
kevin browne said:
The captivating saying of judge and jury, but there\'s no mention of the executionist in this well crafted crafty, watch out below the Judges seat before she\'d be paid for some under the desk work. As for as the executionare well he landed a pretty blow on his rent arrears...
September 16th, 2019 16:45
Client
Michael Edwards said:
Well I\'m still pondericating but I guess dusk sums it up best. an intriguing write.
September 16th, 2019 12:27
Michael Edwards said:
Well I\'m still pondericating but I guess dusk sums it up best. an intriguing write.
September 16th, 2019 12:27
Client
orchidee said:
I of course didn\'t see the hidden single universal truth! lol.
September 16th, 2019 09:32
orchidee said:
I of course didn\'t see the hidden single universal truth! lol.
September 16th, 2019 09:32
Client
Christina8 said:
Interesting twist on words on these clever lines....alot can be read into them
September 16th, 2019 06:57
Christina8 said:
Interesting twist on words on these clever lines....alot can be read into them
September 16th, 2019 06:57
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