Comments received on poems by Neville
Perfect Imperfections
dusk arising said:
Such imperfection as beauty finds lodged into our hearts..... unique beauty knows no better.
October 3rd, 2019 10:49
dusk arising said:
Such imperfection as beauty finds lodged into our hearts..... unique beauty knows no better.
October 3rd, 2019 10:49
Perfect Imperfections
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes the title you give tells how perfect imperfections can enhance the beholder.Each fold and crease has their own beauty to those whose eyes look inside as well as out as your verse implies Nev............. the simian line is said to be the hand\'s heart and mind line which when joined give close harmony between emotions and mental powers - - such an interesting read with an appealing last line for us to remember when thinking of folds and creases.....
October 3rd, 2019 09:21
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes the title you give tells how perfect imperfections can enhance the beholder.Each fold and crease has their own beauty to those whose eyes look inside as well as out as your verse implies Nev............. the simian line is said to be the hand\'s heart and mind line which when joined give close harmony between emotions and mental powers - - such an interesting read with an appealing last line for us to remember when thinking of folds and creases.....
October 3rd, 2019 09:21
Perfect Imperfections
Clara said:
Truth, I had to Google the terms on the first and second line! So pretty much most of your poem ha! It is stated that the first is considered an abnormality elsewhere around the world... And the second, has negative connotations... And such, the final line... That despite those things and preconceived ideas and beliefs, she is a picture to behold! You see the beauty where others may not... Thats my interpretation anyway haha!
Oh I had to work for this one. But yes, I like it N...
And I have just read the title.... Mmmm kinda says it all. Oh well. Isn\'t this part of the joy of poetry!
October 3rd, 2019 09:15
Clara said:
Truth, I had to Google the terms on the first and second line! So pretty much most of your poem ha! It is stated that the first is considered an abnormality elsewhere around the world... And the second, has negative connotations... And such, the final line... That despite those things and preconceived ideas and beliefs, she is a picture to behold! You see the beauty where others may not... Thats my interpretation anyway haha!
Oh I had to work for this one. But yes, I like it N...
And I have just read the title.... Mmmm kinda says it all. Oh well. Isn\'t this part of the joy of poetry!
October 3rd, 2019 09:15
Indecent Propositions
Goldfinch60 said:
But I only have fifty pence!
Great fun write Neville.
October 3rd, 2019 01:22
Goldfinch60 said:
But I only have fifty pence!
Great fun write Neville.
October 3rd, 2019 01:22
Indecent Propositions
kevin browne said:
Fuck the King and fuck the Queen with an AK47 give her cocain and anal sex and she\'ll give you head all the way to Heaven...You have turned Indecent Propositions into a non harming fun...Good work...
October 2nd, 2019 19:01
kevin browne said:
Fuck the King and fuck the Queen with an AK47 give her cocain and anal sex and she\'ll give you head all the way to Heaven...You have turned Indecent Propositions into a non harming fun...Good work...
October 2nd, 2019 19:01
Indecent Propositions
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
You have a knack with words...
that’s for sure! Ten pounds for a shampoo? Not expensive at all!
~Laura~
October 2nd, 2019 12:18
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
You have a knack with words...
that’s for sure! Ten pounds for a shampoo? Not expensive at all!
~Laura~
October 2nd, 2019 12:18
Indecent Propositions
orchidee said:
Aww, but I wanted to meet her really - did I? It\'s Fido - he won\'t let me go out the door of the house to see her. lol.
October 2nd, 2019 07:47
orchidee said:
Aww, but I wanted to meet her really - did I? It\'s Fido - he won\'t let me go out the door of the house to see her. lol.
October 2nd, 2019 07:47
Indecent Propositions
Christina8 said:
Fun little poem indeed! Great writing style as always. I take it these are pretty cheap prices??lol
October 2nd, 2019 07:05
Christina8 said:
Fun little poem indeed! Great writing style as always. I take it these are pretty cheap prices??lol
October 2nd, 2019 07:05
Indecent Propositions
dusk arising said:
UTTER FILTH!! More please.
Reminded me of the hooker who was pissed off cos pensioner only had a fiver and she wanted a tenner, \"but when he got it out i had to lend him the other fiver\"
October 2nd, 2019 06:12
dusk arising said:
UTTER FILTH!! More please.
Reminded me of the hooker who was pissed off cos pensioner only had a fiver and she wanted a tenner, \"but when he got it out i had to lend him the other fiver\"
October 2nd, 2019 06:12
Indecent Propositions
Fay Slimm. said:
Cant make up my mind whether it refers to a waitress selling food, a hairdresser selling styles or the other kind -- selling self !! .......... whatever the intrigue which is your trademark my friend is still decidedly there........... good stuff.
October 2nd, 2019 03:57
Fay Slimm. said:
Cant make up my mind whether it refers to a waitress selling food, a hairdresser selling styles or the other kind -- selling self !! .......... whatever the intrigue which is your trademark my friend is still decidedly there........... good stuff.
October 2nd, 2019 03:57
Indecent Propositions
Clara said:
Reasonable prices I\'d say haha! Fun little poem. Sometimes we can\'t take life too seriously!
October 2nd, 2019 03:51
Clara said:
Reasonable prices I\'d say haha! Fun little poem. Sometimes we can\'t take life too seriously!
October 2nd, 2019 03:51
Assessing the Blues
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write Neville, there is so much we can do with words.
October 2nd, 2019 00:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write Neville, there is so much we can do with words.
October 2nd, 2019 00:52
Assessing the Blues
Michael Edwards said:
Purples, mauves etc but true blue is the rarest colour in flowers - another rare write N.
October 1st, 2019 13:01
Michael Edwards said:
Purples, mauves etc but true blue is the rarest colour in flowers - another rare write N.
October 1st, 2019 13:01
Assessing the Blues
dusk arising said:
HaHa great play with words and brings a big grin to my face.
Not just a simple play though is it. There\'s a meaningful \"I\'ve got your game weighed up\" message loud and clear here telling \"you ain\'t fooling me hun\".
Clever and shrewd.
October 1st, 2019 10:02
dusk arising said:
HaHa great play with words and brings a big grin to my face.
Not just a simple play though is it. There\'s a meaningful \"I\'ve got your game weighed up\" message loud and clear here telling \"you ain\'t fooling me hun\".
Clever and shrewd.
October 1st, 2019 10:02
Assessing the Blues
Clara said:
Such skill... I look forward to reading your poems each day N. Great play on words.
October 1st, 2019 06:49
Clara said:
Such skill... I look forward to reading your poems each day N. Great play on words.
October 1st, 2019 06:49
Assessing the Blues
Christina8 said:
This is a great play on words....a very intelligent read for the first one of the morning...Thanks for that! :)
October 1st, 2019 06:14
Christina8 said:
This is a great play on words....a very intelligent read for the first one of the morning...Thanks for that! :)
October 1st, 2019 06:14
Assessing the Blues
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Words in context...
Nice play on words!
I don’t consider myself blue most of the time...nor red/read all of the time!
I enjoyed reading this play on words!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
October 1st, 2019 06:07
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Words in context...
Nice play on words!
I don’t consider myself blue most of the time...nor red/read all of the time!
I enjoyed reading this play on words!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
October 1st, 2019 06:07
Assessing the Blues
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
A newspaper is read and thatch blank and white,,, I am confused are you.
Great inquisitive piece Neville
October 1st, 2019 05:07
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
A newspaper is read and thatch blank and white,,, I am confused are you.
Great inquisitive piece Neville
October 1st, 2019 05:07
Assessing the Blues
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - - a round of applause after reading this poetic play on words my clever friend. If I ever get blue I will read this one again .......... thanking you muchly for my big smile.
October 1st, 2019 05:00
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - - a round of applause after reading this poetic play on words my clever friend. If I ever get blue I will read this one again .......... thanking you muchly for my big smile.
October 1st, 2019 05:00
Wishes
Goldfinch60 said:
Wish we had.... , so many things that we could have done but at least some of those wishes happened otherwise you would not be wishing for more. Wonderful emotive write Neville.
Andy
October 1st, 2019 00:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Wish we had.... , so many things that we could have done but at least some of those wishes happened otherwise you would not be wishing for more. Wonderful emotive write Neville.
Andy
October 1st, 2019 00:46
Wishes
Bragee said:
Enjoy life because time is the only thing we can never get back.
September 30th, 2019 15:39
Bragee said:
Enjoy life because time is the only thing we can never get back.
September 30th, 2019 15:39
Wishes
dusk arising said:
My old ma used to say quite often \"If wishes were horses, then beggars would ride\".
Born in 1909 what a different world she lived thru her 98 years.
Your piece gave me great reflection. Wishes eh?
September 30th, 2019 14:09
dusk arising said:
My old ma used to say quite often \"If wishes were horses, then beggars would ride\".
Born in 1909 what a different world she lived thru her 98 years.
Your piece gave me great reflection. Wishes eh?
September 30th, 2019 14:09
Wishes
Clara said:
Oh this is truly a reminder to not be trapped in the building of a life but to actually live it and enjoy it with the ones you love. Lovely wishful poem N. Made me smile yet feel sad at the same time.
September 30th, 2019 11:44
Clara said:
Oh this is truly a reminder to not be trapped in the building of a life but to actually live it and enjoy it with the ones you love. Lovely wishful poem N. Made me smile yet feel sad at the same time.
September 30th, 2019 11:44
Wishes
orchidee said:
Pop round then - there\'s a pond with ducks not too far from us! We\'ll go and feed them. Good write N.
September 30th, 2019 10:53
orchidee said:
Pop round then - there\'s a pond with ducks not too far from us! We\'ll go and feed them. Good write N.
September 30th, 2019 10:53
Wishes
Michael Edwards said:
That goes for all of us - so busy building a career and so little time to spend - if only....!
September 30th, 2019 08:53
Michael Edwards said:
That goes for all of us - so busy building a career and so little time to spend - if only....!
September 30th, 2019 08:53
Wishes
Christina8 said:
A very touching write! I think we all share a few of these poignant wishes....time passes all too soon.
September 30th, 2019 06:32
Christina8 said:
A very touching write! I think we all share a few of these poignant wishes....time passes all too soon.
September 30th, 2019 06:32
Wishes
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh those wishes when time has had its results -- a poem touching the hearts of all who wished the same things my friend.............. such a poignancy should be shared and thank you for posting these words.............. Fay
September 30th, 2019 04:54
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh those wishes when time has had its results -- a poem touching the hearts of all who wished the same things my friend.............. such a poignancy should be shared and thank you for posting these words.............. Fay
September 30th, 2019 04:54
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