Comments received on poems by Neville
Waiting
dusk arising said:
Took me straight to the woods where we used to trek and play when i was a child. Just the sound of trees, insects and birds. But in my mind were the voices of Billy, Johnny, Rod And myself. Carefree and young..... discovering, inventing, playing.
Lovely emotive poetry from you that took me there.
February 13th, 2020 17:51
dusk arising said:
Took me straight to the woods where we used to trek and play when i was a child. Just the sound of trees, insects and birds. But in my mind were the voices of Billy, Johnny, Rod And myself. Carefree and young..... discovering, inventing, playing.
Lovely emotive poetry from you that took me there.
February 13th, 2020 17:51
Waiting
Fay Slimm. said:
A lyrically emotive piece of writing here Nev. The lilt of long-gone adventures remembered when visiting old places again shines through the flow of your lines and wistfully touches the heart. Trees with low branches in spinneys and hollows must be filled with the spirit of children wanting to be heroes by climbing higher than wise......... yes indeed now
\" tinged with sadness\" but golden were those growing-days my friend. ................x Fay
February 13th, 2020 16:54
Fay Slimm. said:
A lyrically emotive piece of writing here Nev. The lilt of long-gone adventures remembered when visiting old places again shines through the flow of your lines and wistfully touches the heart. Trees with low branches in spinneys and hollows must be filled with the spirit of children wanting to be heroes by climbing higher than wise......... yes indeed now
\" tinged with sadness\" but golden were those growing-days my friend. ................x Fay
February 13th, 2020 16:54
Until Spring
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful images of my favourite season of the year, the colour are so wonderful and profound in Autumn.
Andy
February 13th, 2020 01:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful images of my favourite season of the year, the colour are so wonderful and profound in Autumn.
Andy
February 13th, 2020 01:54
Until Spring
MendedFences27 said:
I think that leaves are the reason they call it \"Fall\".and maybe why we \"fall\" in love. I loved this description of dancing leaves brought to life in their annual \"leap.\" Those colorful :clouds\" that we tenderly rake into bags or barrels. Some may be followers and others die gloriously in the name of love. Very human-like. A great read/poem. - Phil A.
February 12th, 2020 23:32
MendedFences27 said:
I think that leaves are the reason they call it \"Fall\".and maybe why we \"fall\" in love. I loved this description of dancing leaves brought to life in their annual \"leap.\" Those colorful :clouds\" that we tenderly rake into bags or barrels. Some may be followers and others die gloriously in the name of love. Very human-like. A great read/poem. - Phil A.
February 12th, 2020 23:32
Until Spring
Fay Slimm. said:
The fall of leaves could never be given more appeal with better imagery than in this your tribute to their gentle departure - clouds of fluttering bring colour to ground and I was so intrigued by your final personified lines Nev - - so aptly describing
\"Those that take a dive
And those who
For love do leap\".......... great read.
February 12th, 2020 10:21
Fay Slimm. said:
The fall of leaves could never be given more appeal with better imagery than in this your tribute to their gentle departure - clouds of fluttering bring colour to ground and I was so intrigued by your final personified lines Nev - - so aptly describing
\"Those that take a dive
And those who
For love do leap\".......... great read.
February 12th, 2020 10:21
Until Spring
dusk arising said:
Your words today make me mindful of the current state of our trees. In my garden i planted a tulip tree 16 years ago. It hasn\'t shown a blossom yet which is a disappointment but its a lovely thing. Sad to see it\'s skeletal form as it survives winter. Hard to believe this same beauty is so full of life in spring through summer and has an outstanding display each autumn.
I\'m somewhat of an individual soul and like to think that as life\'s wind blows me around and gradually wrecks my once fine foliage, I do occasionally do a leap for the sake of love. A love of this life.
February 12th, 2020 06:05
dusk arising said:
Your words today make me mindful of the current state of our trees. In my garden i planted a tulip tree 16 years ago. It hasn\'t shown a blossom yet which is a disappointment but its a lovely thing. Sad to see it\'s skeletal form as it survives winter. Hard to believe this same beauty is so full of life in spring through summer and has an outstanding display each autumn.
I\'m somewhat of an individual soul and like to think that as life\'s wind blows me around and gradually wrecks my once fine foliage, I do occasionally do a leap for the sake of love. A love of this life.
February 12th, 2020 06:05
Remarkably Unfinished
dusk arising said:
Yep, you gotta let \'em go otherwise you\'re cage-ing them. \"If you love someone, set them free\" as Sting sung.
Great flow to this piece today and delightful surprise finale.
February 12th, 2020 03:26
dusk arising said:
Yep, you gotta let \'em go otherwise you\'re cage-ing them. \"If you love someone, set them free\" as Sting sung.
Great flow to this piece today and delightful surprise finale.
February 12th, 2020 03:26
Remarkably Unfinished
Clara said:
Oh I like this... Although the ending... Being unfinished... After fingertips and eyes and lips. Almost cruel. Great subtle erotica. Enjoyed this one.
February 11th, 2020 16:21
Clara said:
Oh I like this... Although the ending... Being unfinished... After fingertips and eyes and lips. Almost cruel. Great subtle erotica. Enjoyed this one.
February 11th, 2020 16:21
Remarkably Unfinished
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful thoughts come to mind from your words Neville.
Andy
February 11th, 2020 15:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful thoughts come to mind from your words Neville.
Andy
February 11th, 2020 15:25
Remarkably Unfinished
Poetic Dan said:
Lost for words... Its a nice feeling, thanks for giving some Poetic healing!
Always appreciated
Lol
February 11th, 2020 09:40
Poetic Dan said:
Lost for words... Its a nice feeling, thanks for giving some Poetic healing!
Always appreciated
Lol
February 11th, 2020 09:40
Remarkably Unfinished
orchidee said:
Should we (or I) meet her?! I might not be the same again, if I did - I may never recover from it.
February 11th, 2020 07:20
orchidee said:
Should we (or I) meet her?! I might not be the same again, if I did - I may never recover from it.
February 11th, 2020 07:20
Remarkably Unfinished
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow - what normal female would want release after that intimate but unfinished discovery - yet another subtle example of gentle erotica Nev and which I, for one, most thoroughly enjoyed ...............
February 11th, 2020 06:30
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow - what normal female would want release after that intimate but unfinished discovery - yet another subtle example of gentle erotica Nev and which I, for one, most thoroughly enjoyed ...............
February 11th, 2020 06:30
noitcelfeR
Goldfinch60 said:
That reflection does not show the real you that others see, and the one we see writes these clever words.
Andy
February 11th, 2020 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
That reflection does not show the real you that others see, and the one we see writes these clever words.
Andy
February 11th, 2020 01:44
noitcelfeR
Daydream Believer said:
Such a lot said in so few words. I don’t think I have quite left that shelf yet. Need to though
Thank you for this thought provoking clever short. Sometimes our very selves are staring right into our faces.
I liked this, thank you
February 10th, 2020 13:16
Daydream Believer said:
Such a lot said in so few words. I don’t think I have quite left that shelf yet. Need to though
Thank you for this thought provoking clever short. Sometimes our very selves are staring right into our faces.
I liked this, thank you
February 10th, 2020 13:16
noitcelfeR
orchidee said:
A fine write N. I saw myself coming back from town one day, before I had even got there. Same sort of thing, or am I spouting rubbish?! heehee.
February 10th, 2020 12:05
orchidee said:
A fine write N. I saw myself coming back from town one day, before I had even got there. Same sort of thing, or am I spouting rubbish?! heehee.
February 10th, 2020 12:05
noitcelfeR
dusk arising said:
Pathos! I thought i\'d found myself long ago but only recently it dawned on me that at last i really have.
Your piece today is very clever, thought provoking and downright funny all at the same time. Top marks mate. Into my fav\'s.
February 10th, 2020 10:28
dusk arising said:
Pathos! I thought i\'d found myself long ago but only recently it dawned on me that at last i really have.
Your piece today is very clever, thought provoking and downright funny all at the same time. Top marks mate. Into my fav\'s.
February 10th, 2020 10:28
noitcelfeR
Mil57Man said:
Short, sweet and a powerful message. From ocean to ocean, from sea to sea. I found, there\'s only one me.
February 10th, 2020 10:07
Mil57Man said:
Short, sweet and a powerful message. From ocean to ocean, from sea to sea. I found, there\'s only one me.
February 10th, 2020 10:07
noitcelfeR
Poetic Dan said:
Hahaha fantastic, I didn\'t see that one coming. Always appreciated!
February 10th, 2020 08:42
Poetic Dan said:
Hahaha fantastic, I didn\'t see that one coming. Always appreciated!
February 10th, 2020 08:42
noitcelfeR
Fay Slimm. said:
Clever my friend this turnabout word which had me working out what it meant before I read your verse. Finding oneself seems to need facing forward and inward after that jump off the shelf eh .......... will try that today......... x
February 10th, 2020 08:22
Fay Slimm. said:
Clever my friend this turnabout word which had me working out what it meant before I read your verse. Finding oneself seems to need facing forward and inward after that jump off the shelf eh .......... will try that today......... x
February 10th, 2020 08:22
Hark thee Lover
Daydream Believer said:
Wonderful piece, things can disappear so quickly and only once gone do we notice. There is beauty in your words, coupled with a heavy heart it feels. Saving this one because it reminds me to slow down, that life is important, those small wonders
Thank you
February 9th, 2020 04:24
Daydream Believer said:
Wonderful piece, things can disappear so quickly and only once gone do we notice. There is beauty in your words, coupled with a heavy heart it feels. Saving this one because it reminds me to slow down, that life is important, those small wonders
Thank you
February 9th, 2020 04:24
Hark thee Lover
orchidee said:
I hearkened to this fine write N.
I\'m about to read of \'seeing, but not seeing\', as in not seeing or perceiving with our minds. It can apply to spiritual and to natural things.
Hope all is well.
February 9th, 2020 03:01
orchidee said:
I hearkened to this fine write N.
I\'m about to read of \'seeing, but not seeing\', as in not seeing or perceiving with our minds. It can apply to spiritual and to natural things.
Hope all is well.
February 9th, 2020 03:01
Hark thee Lover
Fay Slimm. said:
These words of love\'s changing face are charged with such imagery that readers will not only \"harken\" but have hearts tugged with its appeal. So good to have you back posting again Neville and a very warm welcome.
February 9th, 2020 02:22
Fay Slimm. said:
These words of love\'s changing face are charged with such imagery that readers will not only \"harken\" but have hearts tugged with its appeal. So good to have you back posting again Neville and a very warm welcome.
February 9th, 2020 02:22
Hark thee Lover
dusk arising said:
This is quite quite beautiful Neville. Sight of such wonderful things as the starling mumuration brings to mind how easily we take for granted the gift of sight, our most dominant of senses.
I wish you well in this trying time.
It is good to see your words here again..... particularly when so excellent as this piece.
Into my favourites.
February 8th, 2020 19:53
dusk arising said:
This is quite quite beautiful Neville. Sight of such wonderful things as the starling mumuration brings to mind how easily we take for granted the gift of sight, our most dominant of senses.
I wish you well in this trying time.
It is good to see your words here again..... particularly when so excellent as this piece.
Into my favourites.
February 8th, 2020 19:53
War is Not for Lovers
Seek said:
Love is anathema to pain, sadness and grief, if I read your poem well. Even if my take is a little off, it was a sumptuous read.
January 8th, 2020 22:52
Seek said:
Love is anathema to pain, sadness and grief, if I read your poem well. Even if my take is a little off, it was a sumptuous read.
January 8th, 2020 22:52
Truism
Suresh said:
like your words, life is WIP - very few reach absolute contentment, wouldn\'t that be blissful!
Not to steer away from your poem
November 19th, 2019 22:58
Suresh said:
like your words, life is WIP - very few reach absolute contentment, wouldn\'t that be blissful!
Not to steer away from your poem
November 19th, 2019 22:58
Truism
Fay Slimm. said:
Your pen Nev identifies results so well in these few lines with this telling account of the power Sameness can yield in a shaky relationship .
November 19th, 2019 03:51
Fay Slimm. said:
Your pen Nev identifies results so well in these few lines with this telling account of the power Sameness can yield in a shaky relationship .
November 19th, 2019 03:51
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