Comments received on poems by Neville
From a Certain Distance
Christina8 said:
She sounds classy..wonder how beautiful she was up close....this is beautifully written as always Nev!
August 19th, 2019 10:25
Christina8 said:
She sounds classy..wonder how beautiful she was up close....this is beautifully written as always Nev!
August 19th, 2019 10:25
From a Certain Distance
dusk arising said:
Ho ho ho, \"more tea vicar?\"
Sometimes it\'s best to appreciate the beauty from a safe distance as in Tigeress. Alluring beauty but oh those claws.
You are a fine artist of the word with this cleverly woven double meaning.
August 19th, 2019 06:37
dusk arising said:
Ho ho ho, \"more tea vicar?\"
Sometimes it\'s best to appreciate the beauty from a safe distance as in Tigeress. Alluring beauty but oh those claws.
You are a fine artist of the word with this cleverly woven double meaning.
August 19th, 2019 06:37
From a Certain Distance
kevin browne said:
Great idea is this one, Nevile. Something fishy going on though I beleive....
August 19th, 2019 05:30
kevin browne said:
Great idea is this one, Nevile. Something fishy going on though I beleive....
August 19th, 2019 05:30
From a Certain Distance
sylviasearcher said:
You 18 plussed it?
I thought it was about the sun?
August 19th, 2019 02:51
sylviasearcher said:
You 18 plussed it?
I thought it was about the sun?
August 19th, 2019 02:51
From a Certain Distance
orchidee said:
A fine write N. You heard my singing from a distance? Preferably 11,000 miles away, or however far away Australia is?! heehee.
August 19th, 2019 01:22
orchidee said:
A fine write N. You heard my singing from a distance? Preferably 11,000 miles away, or however far away Australia is?! heehee.
August 19th, 2019 01:22
From a Certain Distance
Fay Slimm. said:
Short, pithy and a sure masterclass in telling so much with such paucity of words - - - she of the widely available beauty should read this and wisely digest its meaning........ great read Nev.
August 19th, 2019 01:13
Fay Slimm. said:
Short, pithy and a sure masterclass in telling so much with such paucity of words - - - she of the widely available beauty should read this and wisely digest its meaning........ great read Nev.
August 19th, 2019 01:13
From a Certain Distance
Goldfinch60 said:
Beauty from a distnace can be so magnificent and from a distance IS available to all.
August 19th, 2019 01:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Beauty from a distnace can be so magnificent and from a distance IS available to all.
August 19th, 2019 01:05
Tanka - Tanka
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a strong write, such a sad subject, such a wonderful thing you have done to volunteer to help those in abject need.
August 19th, 2019 00:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a strong write, such a sad subject, such a wonderful thing you have done to volunteer to help those in abject need.
August 19th, 2019 00:40
Tanka - Tanka
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
A touching write...sad, but necessary!
Thank you for sharing your ‘personal diary’!
~Laura~
August 18th, 2019 23:33
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
A touching write...sad, but necessary!
Thank you for sharing your ‘personal diary’!
~Laura~
August 18th, 2019 23:33
A Travelling Man
Fay Slimm. said:
Returned for a second helping of this gentle story of opposites needing at times the very same thing........ love the final lines...................... x
August 18th, 2019 11:24
Fay Slimm. said:
Returned for a second helping of this gentle story of opposites needing at times the very same thing........ love the final lines...................... x
August 18th, 2019 11:24
Tanka - Tanka
Christina8 said:
What a scary write....scary cause its true! what a great but unfortunate write, dear friend..
August 18th, 2019 11:09
Christina8 said:
What a scary write....scary cause its true! what a great but unfortunate write, dear friend..
August 18th, 2019 11:09
Tanka - Tanka
dusk arising said:
Semi civilised people being judged by western standards?
Does making such gross acts illegal change their moral standards?
Where lies the answer?
Very thought provoking write today.
August 18th, 2019 09:04
dusk arising said:
Semi civilised people being judged by western standards?
Does making such gross acts illegal change their moral standards?
Where lies the answer?
Very thought provoking write today.
August 18th, 2019 09:04
Dirty Margarita
FineB said:
Hi Neville,
I loved your Dirty Margarita!
Im a Pina Colada girl myself.
Keep writing FineB
August 18th, 2019 08:41
FineB said:
Hi Neville,
I loved your Dirty Margarita!
Im a Pina Colada girl myself.
Keep writing FineB
August 18th, 2019 08:41
Tanka - Tanka
orchidee said:
We don\'t know what goes on behind some doors.
Meanwhile - behind my door is only singing - and that\'s bad enough! (oohh).
August 18th, 2019 07:56
orchidee said:
We don\'t know what goes on behind some doors.
Meanwhile - behind my door is only singing - and that\'s bad enough! (oohh).
August 18th, 2019 07:56
Tanka - Tanka
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI NEVILLE - ANGELA HERE - Thanks for sharing & caring ! Its wonderful to have the opportunity to work in the medical field in another Culture. I have been on a Work Exchange in New Zealand for over 12 months and it has taught me alot about the Moari Culture and the Can-do Culture of the KIWIS. Theey dont let injuries phase them and the expect to be back on the *Field* the next day - doing the HAKA ! I liked the Structure of your Poem - nice balanced Free Verse Stanzas - easy to read & recite - excellent. The Subject was all too familiar in African Life - Disease and a *Kill or Cure* Philosophy. The attitude of the Siblings was also familiar *THIS IS AFRICA* Love Poems based on actual experience always mega !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
August 18th, 2019 07:25
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI NEVILLE - ANGELA HERE - Thanks for sharing & caring ! Its wonderful to have the opportunity to work in the medical field in another Culture. I have been on a Work Exchange in New Zealand for over 12 months and it has taught me alot about the Moari Culture and the Can-do Culture of the KIWIS. Theey dont let injuries phase them and the expect to be back on the *Field* the next day - doing the HAKA ! I liked the Structure of your Poem - nice balanced Free Verse Stanzas - easy to read & recite - excellent. The Subject was all too familiar in African Life - Disease and a *Kill or Cure* Philosophy. The attitude of the Siblings was also familiar *THIS IS AFRICA* Love Poems based on actual experience always mega !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
August 18th, 2019 07:25
Tanka - Tanka
Fay Slimm. said:
We have no idea of conditions in places where customs allow this inhumane treatment by scheming offspring until we experience the indifference by living among such communities- a story to touch the heart of each caring reader my friend.
August 18th, 2019 03:15
Fay Slimm. said:
We have no idea of conditions in places where customs allow this inhumane treatment by scheming offspring until we experience the indifference by living among such communities- a story to touch the heart of each caring reader my friend.
August 18th, 2019 03:15
Tanka - Tanka
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
The things we do in the name of humanity never ceases to scare me
Tough write Neville thanks for sharing and letting it out I\'ve vented similar feelings as you know about things I would wish to UNSEE
August 18th, 2019 03:10
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
The things we do in the name of humanity never ceases to scare me
Tough write Neville thanks for sharing and letting it out I\'ve vented similar feelings as you know about things I would wish to UNSEE
August 18th, 2019 03:10
Dirty Margarita
Goldfinch60 said:
May the third Margarita go down slowly so that enjoyment is everlasting.
August 18th, 2019 00:46
Goldfinch60 said:
May the third Margarita go down slowly so that enjoyment is everlasting.
August 18th, 2019 00:46
Dirty Margarita
dusk arising said:
For she is a beguiling seducer adorned in her finery. No visible promise of later for the easily ensnared.
I Enjoy the drama in your writing Neville.
August 17th, 2019 12:33
dusk arising said:
For she is a beguiling seducer adorned in her finery. No visible promise of later for the easily ensnared.
I Enjoy the drama in your writing Neville.
August 17th, 2019 12:33
Dirty Margarita
orchidee said:
I won\'t \'go there\' in my sheltered life. Just to say - you met her? Margarita?! heehee. No, no, Fido, no barking. It\'s a poem about drinking, I suspect!
August 17th, 2019 05:21
orchidee said:
I won\'t \'go there\' in my sheltered life. Just to say - you met her? Margarita?! heehee. No, no, Fido, no barking. It\'s a poem about drinking, I suspect!
August 17th, 2019 05:21
Dirty Margarita
Nicholas Browning said:
I like this quite a bit. As always, your work beguiles.
August 17th, 2019 03:58
Nicholas Browning said:
I like this quite a bit. As always, your work beguiles.
August 17th, 2019 03:58
Dirty Margarita
Fay Slimm. said:
Your tales always speak for the reader to judge and forge their opinion on subject or scene - this drinking too fast and hard I presume had to stop at the news that faked were those green-olive Margarita concoctions. Make mine a port wine every time.........Fay
August 17th, 2019 03:40
Fay Slimm. said:
Your tales always speak for the reader to judge and forge their opinion on subject or scene - this drinking too fast and hard I presume had to stop at the news that faked were those green-olive Margarita concoctions. Make mine a port wine every time.........Fay
August 17th, 2019 03:40
Dirty Margarita
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Your words are speaking very well for themselves! I’ll savor my very dry three olives martini while you down your ‘second Dirty Margarita’...
slowly is my suggestion!🍸
~Laura~🍸
August 17th, 2019 03:22
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Your words are speaking very well for themselves! I’ll savor my very dry three olives martini while you down your ‘second Dirty Margarita’...
slowly is my suggestion!🍸
~Laura~🍸
August 17th, 2019 03:22
Through a Tangle of Shadows
PoeticBiscuit said:
Hmm, so many ways to interpret this one. Well done N, this one is a zinger.
August 16th, 2019 20:05
PoeticBiscuit said:
Hmm, so many ways to interpret this one. Well done N, this one is a zinger.
August 16th, 2019 20:05
Through a Tangle of Shadows
Christina8 said:
So many things come to mind upon reading this. Another brilliant write, neville!
August 16th, 2019 17:14
Christina8 said:
So many things come to mind upon reading this. Another brilliant write, neville!
August 16th, 2019 17:14
Through a Tangle of Shadows
Suresh said:
A tangled web your words have woven
Try as much, understand the mystery of words chosen
Not ashamed to admit, yellow tinge has me confused
As far as the verse itself, has me totally amused
August 16th, 2019 15:38
Suresh said:
A tangled web your words have woven
Try as much, understand the mystery of words chosen
Not ashamed to admit, yellow tinge has me confused
As far as the verse itself, has me totally amused
August 16th, 2019 15:38
Through a Tangle of Shadows
dusk arising said:
So today i learn a new put-down...
\"kiss my bruise punk\"
August 16th, 2019 12:38
dusk arising said:
So today i learn a new put-down...
\"kiss my bruise punk\"
August 16th, 2019 12:38
War a Senryu
dusk arising said:
Both of which are not dollar earners for the power crazed.
Sadly how true are your words when we look at the history of mankind.
August 16th, 2019 12:17
dusk arising said:
Both of which are not dollar earners for the power crazed.
Sadly how true are your words when we look at the history of mankind.
August 16th, 2019 12:17
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