Comments received on poems by Neville
Fading
dusk arising said:
I know the feelings you have so well expressed here Neville. It certainly touched places and took me places as good poetry always should.
Your sparsity of detail with just enough guidance hits home, as it has done many times for me. A credit to your writing skills.
May 12th, 2020 06:46
dusk arising said:
I know the feelings you have so well expressed here Neville. It certainly touched places and took me places as good poetry always should.
Your sparsity of detail with just enough guidance hits home, as it has done many times for me. A credit to your writing skills.
May 12th, 2020 06:46
Fading
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville. Ya wishing my singing would fade away permanently?!
May 12th, 2020 05:46
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville. Ya wishing my singing would fade away permanently?!
May 12th, 2020 05:46
Tree Song
Goldfinch60 said:
Trees can bring us all types of wonder to our lives as do your words Neville.
Andy
May 12th, 2020 00:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Trees can bring us all types of wonder to our lives as do your words Neville.
Andy
May 12th, 2020 00:00
Tree Song
dusk arising said:
I was listening to the wallpaper in my hallway slowly coming unstuck and turning yellow this morning and then i read your lovely words.
I should get out more i think.
May 11th, 2020 11:09
dusk arising said:
I was listening to the wallpaper in my hallway slowly coming unstuck and turning yellow this morning and then i read your lovely words.
I should get out more i think.
May 11th, 2020 11:09
Tree Song
sylviasearcher said:
Well I am very fond of trees, second only to the birds.. and far before the humans.
A worthy subject.
May 11th, 2020 06:36
sylviasearcher said:
Well I am very fond of trees, second only to the birds.. and far before the humans.
A worthy subject.
May 11th, 2020 06:36
Tree Song
Fay Slimm. said:
You caught a tree\'s magnificence essence in these few lines - - so meaningfully poemed my friend.
May 11th, 2020 06:13
Fay Slimm. said:
You caught a tree\'s magnificence essence in these few lines - - so meaningfully poemed my friend.
May 11th, 2020 06:13
The Millers Daughter
dusk arising said:
Am I here for the wholemeal or just the crumpet?
The baker\'s daughter will of course be a regular visitor to the flour mill where a regular grinding can be guaranteed. Much creaking and vibrations as the wind catches the sails surely conceals many ecstacies.
May 7th, 2020 18:07
dusk arising said:
Am I here for the wholemeal or just the crumpet?
The baker\'s daughter will of course be a regular visitor to the flour mill where a regular grinding can be guaranteed. Much creaking and vibrations as the wind catches the sails surely conceals many ecstacies.
May 7th, 2020 18:07
The Millers Daughter
Fay Slimm. said:
Methinks some millers\' daughters no doubt love their oats in floury corners with the taste of laughter scenting more turning and tilting hopes of lifted skirts...... Ha and maybe you met one of those my friend. Great little piece of fun.
May 7th, 2020 15:49
Fay Slimm. said:
Methinks some millers\' daughters no doubt love their oats in floury corners with the taste of laughter scenting more turning and tilting hopes of lifted skirts...... Ha and maybe you met one of those my friend. Great little piece of fun.
May 7th, 2020 15:49
The Millers Daughter
Neville said:
Obviously short cuts and short crust are both out of the question ... bless you for taking a peek at this little offering...
Neville
May 7th, 2020 09:31
Neville said:
Obviously short cuts and short crust are both out of the question ... bless you for taking a peek at this little offering...
Neville
May 7th, 2020 09:31
No Pot of Gold
Goldfinch60 said:
That pot of gold may not be there but the journey towards the end of that rainbow will be filled with wonder in our lives.
Andy
April 28th, 2020 00:20
Goldfinch60 said:
That pot of gold may not be there but the journey towards the end of that rainbow will be filled with wonder in our lives.
Andy
April 28th, 2020 00:20
No Pot of Gold
MendedFences27 said:
He who seeks gold at the end of a rainbow treks a very long journey.
When it comes to he said / she said, whatever she said wins.
Talk about you lost causes, he must learn the value of silence.
A very colorful poem that exemplifies the lack of understanding men have about women and vice versa. also a good chuckle is included. - Phil A.
April 27th, 2020 19:46
MendedFences27 said:
He who seeks gold at the end of a rainbow treks a very long journey.
When it comes to he said / she said, whatever she said wins.
Talk about you lost causes, he must learn the value of silence.
A very colorful poem that exemplifies the lack of understanding men have about women and vice versa. also a good chuckle is included. - Phil A.
April 27th, 2020 19:46
No Pot of Gold
Neville said:
ah’ is that you my old friend.... thank you for a most welcome visit...
April 27th, 2020 15:15
Neville said:
ah’ is that you my old friend.... thank you for a most welcome visit...
April 27th, 2020 15:15
No Pot of Gold
SureshG said:
There’s a pot of gold at the end of each rainbow, just not the one I can take to the bank.
Jestful, your words indeed today
April 27th, 2020 15:12
SureshG said:
There’s a pot of gold at the end of each rainbow, just not the one I can take to the bank.
Jestful, your words indeed today
April 27th, 2020 15:12
No Pot of Gold
dusk arising said:
Isn\'t it a devil neville when you can see the rainbow, crock of gold and even a wheelbarrow to carry it home in..... but you\'re not allowed out.
April 27th, 2020 14:22
dusk arising said:
Isn\'t it a devil neville when you can see the rainbow, crock of gold and even a wheelbarrow to carry it home in..... but you\'re not allowed out.
April 27th, 2020 14:22
No Pot of Gold
orchidee said:
Well, we seen plenty of rainbows about these days - no pot of gold at the end of one of them?!
April 27th, 2020 10:18
orchidee said:
Well, we seen plenty of rainbows about these days - no pot of gold at the end of one of them?!
April 27th, 2020 10:18
No Pot of Gold
Fay Slimm. said:
Gold at the end of the rainbow is where the eyes see it and my friend it is able to be viewed by only the young at heart........... ha ....... I love your he saids and she saids - must try that myself one of these fine days.................x
April 27th, 2020 06:38
Fay Slimm. said:
Gold at the end of the rainbow is where the eyes see it and my friend it is able to be viewed by only the young at heart........... ha ....... I love your he saids and she saids - must try that myself one of these fine days.................x
April 27th, 2020 06:38
Calm v Chaos
Goldfinch60 said:
Calm can be found in many guises including chaos.
Andy
April 27th, 2020 00:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Calm can be found in many guises including chaos.
Andy
April 27th, 2020 00:40
Calm v Chaos
Fay Slimm. said:
Too true that madness can turn chaos to calm with a flick of the mind where all that exists inside is a willed place of peace.......short but filled with points to ponder............... x
April 26th, 2020 12:22
Fay Slimm. said:
Too true that madness can turn chaos to calm with a flick of the mind where all that exists inside is a willed place of peace.......short but filled with points to ponder............... x
April 26th, 2020 12:22
Calm v Chaos
orchidee said:
Yes - and look towards me singing too? One cause of madness?! heehee.
A certain story of Trump and bleach is circulating. That\'s in madness category too.
April 26th, 2020 06:36
orchidee said:
Yes - and look towards me singing too? One cause of madness?! heehee.
A certain story of Trump and bleach is circulating. That\'s in madness category too.
April 26th, 2020 06:36
Calm v Chaos
dusk arising said:
Been there, done that, in fact i like this T-shirt quite a lot.
I love those short and punchy poems/posts.
April 26th, 2020 05:18
dusk arising said:
Been there, done that, in fact i like this T-shirt quite a lot.
I love those short and punchy poems/posts.
April 26th, 2020 05:18
Home Maid
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville. Should I meet her? She don\'t seem so swoony as some of the lases in poems on here. lol.
April 26th, 2020 02:30
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville. Should I meet her? She don\'t seem so swoony as some of the lases in poems on here. lol.
April 26th, 2020 02:30
Home Maid
Goldfinch60 said:
The glory of being together is cooking in your fine words Neville.
Andy
April 26th, 2020 00:23
Goldfinch60 said:
The glory of being together is cooking in your fine words Neville.
Andy
April 26th, 2020 00:23
Home Maid
Fay Slimm. said:
A perfect helping of contented home- made (maid) and its double meaning Nev. - - - thanking you muchly for such yummy romantics which not only gave me a smile but lightened this rather cloudy-dull weekend..............Fay
April 25th, 2020 16:38
Fay Slimm. said:
A perfect helping of contented home- made (maid) and its double meaning Nev. - - - thanking you muchly for such yummy romantics which not only gave me a smile but lightened this rather cloudy-dull weekend..............Fay
April 25th, 2020 16:38
Home Maid
dusk arising said:
Well if that don\'t take the biscuit? May she long provide the yeast which makes your bread rise. The cherry on your cake, the sherry which makes your trifle and of course the stuffing of a sunday bird.
April 25th, 2020 13:13
dusk arising said:
Well if that don\'t take the biscuit? May she long provide the yeast which makes your bread rise. The cherry on your cake, the sherry which makes your trifle and of course the stuffing of a sunday bird.
April 25th, 2020 13:13
Sea of Obituary
FredPeyer said:
Sad, but true, Neville. These are tough times, but as always, we will overcome.
April 18th, 2020 11:07
FredPeyer said:
Sad, but true, Neville. These are tough times, but as always, we will overcome.
April 18th, 2020 11:07
Sea of Obituary
Fay Slimm. said:
Any description of manifold deaths has to be powerful and this force comes from your lines like a dirge of reality - - we are faced with viewing the unviewable and you took up the reigns today my friend. May we keep taking care and bearing the brunt of planet-abuse results - - at least that is the way my humble mind see it............... x
April 18th, 2020 06:24
Fay Slimm. said:
Any description of manifold deaths has to be powerful and this force comes from your lines like a dirge of reality - - we are faced with viewing the unviewable and you took up the reigns today my friend. May we keep taking care and bearing the brunt of planet-abuse results - - at least that is the way my humble mind see it............... x
April 18th, 2020 06:24
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