Comments received on poems by Neville
Recollections
sylviasearcher said:
An intriguing write, I wondered if it was very clever, I wasn’t sure if I should feel sorry.
To withhold the pain
You so much crave
There was a kind of ache to it and I couldn’t work out whose.
March 22nd, 2019 04:19
sylviasearcher said:
An intriguing write, I wondered if it was very clever, I wasn’t sure if I should feel sorry.
To withhold the pain
You so much crave
There was a kind of ache to it and I couldn’t work out whose.
March 22nd, 2019 04:19
Recollections
orchidee said:
Why did I have to come along and muck it all up?! Hint: Bonjour! (bit of French there). heehee.
March 22nd, 2019 04:04
orchidee said:
Why did I have to come along and muck it all up?! Hint: Bonjour! (bit of French there). heehee.
March 22nd, 2019 04:04
Recollections
Fay Slimm. said:
Strong recollections of unpleasant happenings and hopefully not from experience Nev. -- a compelling read that pulls at heartstrings.
March 22nd, 2019 03:45
Fay Slimm. said:
Strong recollections of unpleasant happenings and hopefully not from experience Nev. -- a compelling read that pulls at heartstrings.
March 22nd, 2019 03:45
Skylight
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville. You see the moon too? Was it made of cheese?!
March 22nd, 2019 03:17
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville. You see the moon too? Was it made of cheese?!
March 22nd, 2019 03:17
Skylight
sylviasearcher said:
The first time I read it, I read it like a metaphor, the skylight, the window to...
The unfathomable, beautiful, dark, exciting, everything and nothing.
Like taking a journey through consciousness.
And I do love the starlit sky.
So after reading the comments I read it and wondered of the window being the thing that shapes perception and makes it all the things it could become. In an endless kind of way.
And then I wondered of that feeling you get when you look up on a clear night. It is just an indescribable feeling. No mirrors or windows. Just straight to the soul.
It was gentle and reached out to me.
March 22nd, 2019 02:47
sylviasearcher said:
The first time I read it, I read it like a metaphor, the skylight, the window to...
The unfathomable, beautiful, dark, exciting, everything and nothing.
Like taking a journey through consciousness.
And I do love the starlit sky.
So after reading the comments I read it and wondered of the window being the thing that shapes perception and makes it all the things it could become. In an endless kind of way.
And then I wondered of that feeling you get when you look up on a clear night. It is just an indescribable feeling. No mirrors or windows. Just straight to the soul.
It was gentle and reached out to me.
March 22nd, 2019 02:47
Skylight
Goldfinch60 said:
The further we look into the night the more profound our dreams become. Good one Neville.
March 22nd, 2019 01:15
Goldfinch60 said:
The further we look into the night the more profound our dreams become. Good one Neville.
March 22nd, 2019 01:15
Skylight
Fay Slimm. said:
Just popping back to view again those wondrous untangled webs in your beguiling tribute to the lure of star-mapped skies -- a perceptive write Nev. - -
March 21st, 2019 17:46
Fay Slimm. said:
Just popping back to view again those wondrous untangled webs in your beguiling tribute to the lure of star-mapped skies -- a perceptive write Nev. - -
March 21st, 2019 17:46
Skylight
Poetic Dan said:
Gentle read, needed greatly before I try to sleep. Thank you kindly
March 21st, 2019 17:41
Poetic Dan said:
Gentle read, needed greatly before I try to sleep. Thank you kindly
March 21st, 2019 17:41
Skylight
Nicholas Browning said:
The first stanza grabs you, and pulls you along the rest of the pleasant ride.
I enjoyed the read, Nev.
March 21st, 2019 16:35
Nicholas Browning said:
The first stanza grabs you, and pulls you along the rest of the pleasant ride.
I enjoyed the read, Nev.
March 21st, 2019 16:35
Skylight
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah a quiet view of night\'s allure.Sky mapped with stars gives pen all it needs and your lines add the mystery of dreams behind windows - - good read Nev - - poets have incurably curious minds and closed doors or curtained windows do the same for me.
March 21st, 2019 14:04
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah a quiet view of night\'s allure.Sky mapped with stars gives pen all it needs and your lines add the mystery of dreams behind windows - - good read Nev - - poets have incurably curious minds and closed doors or curtained windows do the same for me.
March 21st, 2019 14:04
Prolet
Neville said:
Thank you my friend, just a fleeting visit while internet is working, will be back in a couple of days.. hope you are well x
March 19th, 2019 05:43
Neville said:
Thank you my friend, just a fleeting visit while internet is working, will be back in a couple of days.. hope you are well x
March 19th, 2019 05:43
Prolet
Fay Slimm. said:
A tribute to Prolet re-read and enjoyed quite as much as first rime around -- good to see your name back in circulation today and hope all goes well with your Bulgarina break Nev. - - x Fay
March 19th, 2019 05:23
Fay Slimm. said:
A tribute to Prolet re-read and enjoyed quite as much as first rime around -- good to see your name back in circulation today and hope all goes well with your Bulgarina break Nev. - - x Fay
March 19th, 2019 05:23
Mourning Song
Fay Slimm. said:
Thursday mid-day - - you keep coming back like a song on my screen ..... and then disappearing - can see you trying and hope all is well in that mountain retreat. -- - Fay x
March 14th, 2019 07:19
Fay Slimm. said:
Thursday mid-day - - you keep coming back like a song on my screen ..... and then disappearing - can see you trying and hope all is well in that mountain retreat. -- - Fay x
March 14th, 2019 07:19
Mourning Song
Fay Slimm. said:
Can hear murmurs of mourning in your well-worded song. The pull of these words allay time spent apart - - enjoy your break away Nev and come back safe........ x
March 13th, 2019 04:36
Fay Slimm. said:
Can hear murmurs of mourning in your well-worded song. The pull of these words allay time spent apart - - enjoy your break away Nev and come back safe........ x
March 13th, 2019 04:36
Mourning Song
Nicholas Browning said:
The good ole\' dusty trail and the song of passing that comes with it. May you enjoy your time away sir. Hopefully it\'s for a benevolent purpose.
March 13th, 2019 04:24
Nicholas Browning said:
The good ole\' dusty trail and the song of passing that comes with it. May you enjoy your time away sir. Hopefully it\'s for a benevolent purpose.
March 13th, 2019 04:24
When I Was Dead
dusk arising said:
Metaphor for drowning in a relationship? only to find oneself washed limp into the harbour - a place where people begin and end their relationships with the ocean. A fine place to begin to live again.
March 13th, 2019 04:21
dusk arising said:
Metaphor for drowning in a relationship? only to find oneself washed limp into the harbour - a place where people begin and end their relationships with the ocean. A fine place to begin to live again.
March 13th, 2019 04:21
Mourning Song
dusk arising said:
Mountains of passion fade to calm once the crashing waves finally stop.
Would be appropriate to mourn such passing.
Short, sweet with amazing depth in today\'s write from you N.
March 13th, 2019 04:07
dusk arising said:
Mountains of passion fade to calm once the crashing waves finally stop.
Would be appropriate to mourn such passing.
Short, sweet with amazing depth in today\'s write from you N.
March 13th, 2019 04:07
Mourning Song
Michael Edwards said:
A real lovely write - enjoy your trip Neville.
March 13th, 2019 03:33
Michael Edwards said:
A real lovely write - enjoy your trip Neville.
March 13th, 2019 03:33
Mourning Song
sylviasearcher said:
But who can choose between ocean and mountain?
I was just reviewing a chapter in my book and it was kind of having both. Mountain and ocean...
Maybe I’ll share it...
March 13th, 2019 03:17
sylviasearcher said:
But who can choose between ocean and mountain?
I was just reviewing a chapter in my book and it was kind of having both. Mountain and ocean...
Maybe I’ll share it...
March 13th, 2019 03:17
When I Was Dead
Goldfinch60 said:
Good metaphorical write, those white horses can bring hope.
March 13th, 2019 01:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Good metaphorical write, those white horses can bring hope.
March 13th, 2019 01:55
When I Was Dead
Nicholas Browning said:
For some reason I thought of the Four Horsemen when I read this. Getting dragged by them beneath the waves would be a frightening thing indeed.
March 12th, 2019 16:56
Nicholas Browning said:
For some reason I thought of the Four Horsemen when I read this. Getting dragged by them beneath the waves would be a frightening thing indeed.
March 12th, 2019 16:56
When I Was Dead
Michael Edwards said:
Well I\'m a realist so I read it as it is written - a life lost at sea and washed ashore. The only hesitation I have is the word \'exhausted\' in the penultimate stanza. A fine write Neville.
March 12th, 2019 14:46
Michael Edwards said:
Well I\'m a realist so I read it as it is written - a life lost at sea and washed ashore. The only hesitation I have is the word \'exhausted\' in the penultimate stanza. A fine write Neville.
March 12th, 2019 14:46
When I Was Dead
orchidee said:
A fine write N. And who is Joe Bloggs, for that matter?.....!
March 12th, 2019 07:17
orchidee said:
A fine write N. And who is Joe Bloggs, for that matter?.....!
March 12th, 2019 07:17
When I Was Dead
sylviasearcher said:
It reminded me a little of the notion of acceptance and commitment therapy, I quite liked the idea of accepting the wild horses escorting me, seemed a little humbling maybe.
Maybe maya needs some white horses!
March 12th, 2019 06:01
sylviasearcher said:
It reminded me a little of the notion of acceptance and commitment therapy, I quite liked the idea of accepting the wild horses escorting me, seemed a little humbling maybe.
Maybe maya needs some white horses!
March 12th, 2019 06:01
When I Was Dead
Fay Slimm. said:
A scare of a read yet phrased with great metaphor - - deadness which calls for a lively escort of salty white horses draws me back to the times I have, watching, wondered what lies right below........a bleak but compelling read Nev.
March 12th, 2019 05:59
Fay Slimm. said:
A scare of a read yet phrased with great metaphor - - deadness which calls for a lively escort of salty white horses draws me back to the times I have, watching, wondered what lies right below........a bleak but compelling read Nev.
March 12th, 2019 05:59
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