Comments received on poems by Neville
These Words
marijoy said:
I’m getting acquainted with your poetry way. Modern and discernible.
September 25th, 2019 21:03
marijoy said:
I’m getting acquainted with your poetry way. Modern and discernible.
September 25th, 2019 21:03
Deciduous
marijoy said:
My friend poet Neville, I apologize for my ignorance but I did not understand your poem even though I love your words very much. Maybe because I’m not from England? Sending love ❤️
September 25th, 2019 20:49
marijoy said:
My friend poet Neville, I apologize for my ignorance but I did not understand your poem even though I love your words very much. Maybe because I’m not from England? Sending love ❤️
September 25th, 2019 20:49
Deciduous
dusk arising said:
Nice word play - good fun read. Root and branch stuff for the fine wordsmith that u are sir!
September 25th, 2019 10:44
dusk arising said:
Nice word play - good fun read. Root and branch stuff for the fine wordsmith that u are sir!
September 25th, 2019 10:44
Deciduous
Michael Edwards said:
Great write which gave me a smile. Feeling a bit de-leaved myself at the moment.
September 25th, 2019 04:05
Michael Edwards said:
Great write which gave me a smile. Feeling a bit de-leaved myself at the moment.
September 25th, 2019 04:05
Deciduous
Fay Slimm. said:
The difference between ever and naked deciduous makes needing that Veronica\'s warm love so vital methinks.... . I smiled at your word-play with that term - - - \"re-leaved\" .............intriguing nature- read Nev.
September 25th, 2019 04:02
Fay Slimm. said:
The difference between ever and naked deciduous makes needing that Veronica\'s warm love so vital methinks.... . I smiled at your word-play with that term - - - \"re-leaved\" .............intriguing nature- read Nev.
September 25th, 2019 04:02
These Words
Goldfinch60 said:
Words should be exposed to the world as yours are on this site.
September 25th, 2019 02:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Words should be exposed to the world as yours are on this site.
September 25th, 2019 02:43
These Words
Christina8 said:
A great write as it shows your skill as a poet in the beginning......
September 24th, 2019 14:50
Christina8 said:
A great write as it shows your skill as a poet in the beginning......
September 24th, 2019 14:50
These Words
dusk arising said:
I like it, the contrasting elite and whores at my level.
Reminds me i need a new quilt.
September 24th, 2019 12:31
dusk arising said:
I like it, the contrasting elite and whores at my level.
Reminds me i need a new quilt.
September 24th, 2019 12:31
These Words
Fay Slimm. said:
A great early write for it shows your potential to a fine degree Nev............... am delighted to read some of your very first words..
September 24th, 2019 04:02
Fay Slimm. said:
A great early write for it shows your potential to a fine degree Nev............... am delighted to read some of your very first words..
September 24th, 2019 04:02
Stashed
Goldfinch60 said:
May your memories
Forever be there for you,
To eternity.
Andy
September 24th, 2019 00:38
Goldfinch60 said:
May your memories
Forever be there for you,
To eternity.
Andy
September 24th, 2019 00:38
Stashed
dusk arising said:
Sadly our memory can let us down though Neville. As I have said before, a lot of those memories which bring me great joy i have committed to paper as a kind of insurance. I wonder when the day will come that i read my pieces and say \'did that really happen to me?\'
Thankfully the majority are still quite vivvid i\'m pleased to add.
September 23rd, 2019 12:31
dusk arising said:
Sadly our memory can let us down though Neville. As I have said before, a lot of those memories which bring me great joy i have committed to paper as a kind of insurance. I wonder when the day will come that i read my pieces and say \'did that really happen to me?\'
Thankfully the majority are still quite vivvid i\'m pleased to add.
September 23rd, 2019 12:31
A Perfectly Reasonable Question
Suresh said:
The space you temporarily occupied will continue to be occupied, thus, be comforted, for it shall be always tended.
Since one only exists as memorialized by others, be comforted, for the memory of you shall such continue.
Therefore, the space n time that is you, is n will forever thus remain.
September 23rd, 2019 11:21
Suresh said:
The space you temporarily occupied will continue to be occupied, thus, be comforted, for it shall be always tended.
Since one only exists as memorialized by others, be comforted, for the memory of you shall such continue.
Therefore, the space n time that is you, is n will forever thus remain.
September 23rd, 2019 11:21
Stashed
orchidee said:
I was gonna write a poem: \'And some things are easier (or best) forgotten!\' lol.
September 23rd, 2019 10:48
orchidee said:
I was gonna write a poem: \'And some things are easier (or best) forgotten!\' lol.
September 23rd, 2019 10:48
Stashed
Fay Slimm. said:
Memory indeed holds everything stashed very safe where none can break into, try to alter or even destroy. Thanks Nev. for the idea on where to hide views we find precious .......... Fay
September 23rd, 2019 07:11
Fay Slimm. said:
Memory indeed holds everything stashed very safe where none can break into, try to alter or even destroy. Thanks Nev. for the idea on where to hide views we find precious .......... Fay
September 23rd, 2019 07:11
Stashed
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
“Stashed”...
...indeed!
Some things are worthwhile committing to memory!
~Laura~
September 23rd, 2019 06:53
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
“Stashed”...
...indeed!
Some things are worthwhile committing to memory!
~Laura~
September 23rd, 2019 06:53
Splitting Hairs
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
I like this one!
As Andy said, “May that moon be ours forever.”
~Laura~
September 22nd, 2019 14:03
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
I like this one!
As Andy said, “May that moon be ours forever.”
~Laura~
September 22nd, 2019 14:03
Splitting Hairs
Christina8 said:
Love the great write...an absolute pleasure to read....a delight with the last line....just beautiful!!
September 21st, 2019 18:45
Christina8 said:
Love the great write...an absolute pleasure to read....a delight with the last line....just beautiful!!
September 21st, 2019 18:45
Splitting Hairs
Fay Slimm. said:
Naught could be more romantic than this -- - -- a sigh of a write and a delight to read Nev................ Fay
September 21st, 2019 13:31
Fay Slimm. said:
Naught could be more romantic than this -- - -- a sigh of a write and a delight to read Nev................ Fay
September 21st, 2019 13:31
Splitting Hairs
dusk arising said:
Here we go... Nev once again leads me into a pleasureable mystery tale.... such a romance .... not splitting hairs but was there parting of hairs one wonders?
Great possibilities arise each time i re-read this piece. Now that\'s great entertainment value for the readers creative mind.
Excellent mind capture Neville.
September 21st, 2019 12:52
dusk arising said:
Here we go... Nev once again leads me into a pleasureable mystery tale.... such a romance .... not splitting hairs but was there parting of hairs one wonders?
Great possibilities arise each time i re-read this piece. Now that\'s great entertainment value for the readers creative mind.
Excellent mind capture Neville.
September 21st, 2019 12:52
Splitting Hairs
orchidee said:
I got no green candles? Does the Co-op sell them?!
September 21st, 2019 12:52
orchidee said:
I got no green candles? Does the Co-op sell them?!
September 21st, 2019 12:52
A Perfectly Reasonable Question
Goldfinch60 said:
That space will be filled with your Spirit for the rest of us to honour and remember in awe.
September 21st, 2019 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
That space will be filled with your Spirit for the rest of us to honour and remember in awe.
September 21st, 2019 01:13
A Perfectly Reasonable Question
SerenWise said:
Plenty for sure. But a valid question nonetheless
September 20th, 2019 21:16
SerenWise said:
Plenty for sure. But a valid question nonetheless
September 20th, 2019 21:16
A Perfectly Reasonable Question
Michael Edwards said:
When I am dead and gone
the space I occupy
will with me be withdrawn.
Great shorty Neville.
September 20th, 2019 08:32
Michael Edwards said:
When I am dead and gone
the space I occupy
will with me be withdrawn.
Great shorty Neville.
September 20th, 2019 08:32
A Perfectly Reasonable Question
dusk arising said:
Question Neville \"Will it need tending?\" Mine won\'t that\'s for sure. Mourning? well i should think that depends upon who\'s the mournful type.
Great compact piece throwing out questions which each \'type\' of reader will receieve and respond to
in their own \'typical\' manner. Be interesting to see how that pans out here.
Good one.
September 20th, 2019 06:48
dusk arising said:
Question Neville \"Will it need tending?\" Mine won\'t that\'s for sure. Mourning? well i should think that depends upon who\'s the mournful type.
Great compact piece throwing out questions which each \'type\' of reader will receieve and respond to
in their own \'typical\' manner. Be interesting to see how that pans out here.
Good one.
September 20th, 2019 06:48
A Perfectly Reasonable Question
Fay Slimm. said:
All those will who knew the effect another\'s life had upon their own welfare..... hope this answers that solemn question a little bit - - thanks for posing it on behalf of us all Nev.
September 20th, 2019 05:43
Fay Slimm. said:
All those will who knew the effect another\'s life had upon their own welfare..... hope this answers that solemn question a little bit - - thanks for posing it on behalf of us all Nev.
September 20th, 2019 05:43
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