Comments received on poems by Neville
Hark thee Lover
Fay Slimm. said:
These words of love\'s changing face are charged with such imagery that readers will not only \"harken\" but have hearts tugged with its appeal. So good to have you back posting again Neville and a very warm welcome.
February 9th, 2020 02:22
Fay Slimm. said:
These words of love\'s changing face are charged with such imagery that readers will not only \"harken\" but have hearts tugged with its appeal. So good to have you back posting again Neville and a very warm welcome.
February 9th, 2020 02:22
Hark thee Lover
dusk arising said:
This is quite quite beautiful Neville. Sight of such wonderful things as the starling mumuration brings to mind how easily we take for granted the gift of sight, our most dominant of senses.
I wish you well in this trying time.
It is good to see your words here again..... particularly when so excellent as this piece.
Into my favourites.
February 8th, 2020 19:53
dusk arising said:
This is quite quite beautiful Neville. Sight of such wonderful things as the starling mumuration brings to mind how easily we take for granted the gift of sight, our most dominant of senses.
I wish you well in this trying time.
It is good to see your words here again..... particularly when so excellent as this piece.
Into my favourites.
February 8th, 2020 19:53
War is Not for Lovers
Seek said:
Love is anathema to pain, sadness and grief, if I read your poem well. Even if my take is a little off, it was a sumptuous read.
January 8th, 2020 22:52
Seek said:
Love is anathema to pain, sadness and grief, if I read your poem well. Even if my take is a little off, it was a sumptuous read.
January 8th, 2020 22:52
Truism
Suresh said:
like your words, life is WIP - very few reach absolute contentment, wouldn\'t that be blissful!
Not to steer away from your poem
November 19th, 2019 22:58
Suresh said:
like your words, life is WIP - very few reach absolute contentment, wouldn\'t that be blissful!
Not to steer away from your poem
November 19th, 2019 22:58
Truism
Fay Slimm. said:
Your pen Nev identifies results so well in these few lines with this telling account of the power Sameness can yield in a shaky relationship .
November 19th, 2019 03:51
Fay Slimm. said:
Your pen Nev identifies results so well in these few lines with this telling account of the power Sameness can yield in a shaky relationship .
November 19th, 2019 03:51
Truism
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes very true Neville, all the time we have that \'work in progress\' we know we are alive and worth something.
November 19th, 2019 02:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes very true Neville, all the time we have that \'work in progress\' we know we are alive and worth something.
November 19th, 2019 02:05
Two Harbours
Goldfinch60 said:
Those times of past so eloquently portrayed in your words Neville.
November 19th, 2019 01:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Those times of past so eloquently portrayed in your words Neville.
November 19th, 2019 01:35
Two Harbours
Michael Edwards said:
Lovely island, lovely city and a great poem to do it justice.
November 18th, 2019 13:25
Michael Edwards said:
Lovely island, lovely city and a great poem to do it justice.
November 18th, 2019 13:25
Two Harbours
orchidee said:
A fine write Nev. Is this about Maltesers - a box of chocs?! heehee.
November 18th, 2019 12:20
orchidee said:
A fine write Nev. Is this about Maltesers - a box of chocs?! heehee.
November 18th, 2019 12:20
Two Harbours
Suresh said:
Very invoking of times past, eternal beauty and now broken promises.
November 18th, 2019 11:38
Suresh said:
Very invoking of times past, eternal beauty and now broken promises.
November 18th, 2019 11:38
Two Harbours
Christina8 said:
This is a beautiful poem, and may I say well written!
November 18th, 2019 11:22
Christina8 said:
This is a beautiful poem, and may I say well written!
November 18th, 2019 11:22
Two Harbours
Fay Slimm. said:
Two harbours could never be more achingly remembered than in this romantically tender ode - - the tale of promises made then broken wrings with regret in that final line Nev........ a heart-wrench of a read.
November 18th, 2019 09:37
Fay Slimm. said:
Two harbours could never be more achingly remembered than in this romantically tender ode - - the tale of promises made then broken wrings with regret in that final line Nev........ a heart-wrench of a read.
November 18th, 2019 09:37
War is Not for Lovers
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write Neville, those that died were all loved by somebody.
November 10th, 2019 00:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write Neville, those that died were all loved by somebody.
November 10th, 2019 00:53
War is Not for Lovers
dusk arising said:
Brilliant evocative writing. Hard hitting reality. Each of the thousands who died was a loving soul of hopes, wishes, and desires..... destined to become a number history records.
Very moving.
November 9th, 2019 15:45
dusk arising said:
Brilliant evocative writing. Hard hitting reality. Each of the thousands who died was a loving soul of hopes, wishes, and desires..... destined to become a number history records.
Very moving.
November 9th, 2019 15:45
War is Not for Lovers
Suresh said:
War is for lovers, otherwise how else would one pen such poetry
November 9th, 2019 12:08
Suresh said:
War is for lovers, otherwise how else would one pen such poetry
November 9th, 2019 12:08
War is Not for Lovers
Poetic Dan said:
War is not for lovers, although lovers do fight best
As the fire that burns within our chest, would only take arms to defend the nest
I\'ve never forgotten the first time I heard the lines, the first casualty of war, is the truth!
Beautifully written of the wars that we are still yet to learn from.
Much peace and respect
November 9th, 2019 11:40
Poetic Dan said:
War is not for lovers, although lovers do fight best
As the fire that burns within our chest, would only take arms to defend the nest
I\'ve never forgotten the first time I heard the lines, the first casualty of war, is the truth!
Beautifully written of the wars that we are still yet to learn from.
Much peace and respect
November 9th, 2019 11:40
War is Not for Lovers
Fay Slimm. said:
The appropriate picture your emotive pen paints wrings tears from my eyes - - war most certainly is not for lovers my friend........... Fay
November 9th, 2019 11:01
Fay Slimm. said:
The appropriate picture your emotive pen paints wrings tears from my eyes - - war most certainly is not for lovers my friend........... Fay
November 9th, 2019 11:01
Take Me Somewhere
Goldfinch60 said:
She obviously wants you all the time and anywhere. (It is uncomfortable on the stairs though).
November 6th, 2019 02:00
Goldfinch60 said:
She obviously wants you all the time and anywhere. (It is uncomfortable on the stairs though).
November 6th, 2019 02:00
Take Me Somewhere
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
She sounds a bit needy Nev tell her to take the bus
November 5th, 2019 16:26
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
She sounds a bit needy Nev tell her to take the bus
November 5th, 2019 16:26
Take Me Somewhere
Christina8 said:
Fantastic write Neville...so playfully written! Well done!
November 5th, 2019 16:21
Christina8 said:
Fantastic write Neville...so playfully written! Well done!
November 5th, 2019 16:21
Take Me Somewhere
PoeticBiscuit said:
Sounds like someone’s enjoying themselves,
Great write!
November 5th, 2019 15:06
PoeticBiscuit said:
Sounds like someone’s enjoying themselves,
Great write!
November 5th, 2019 15:06
Take Me Somewhere
Aislinn Wilson said:
How delightfully playful. Great write.
November 5th, 2019 14:11
Aislinn Wilson said:
How delightfully playful. Great write.
November 5th, 2019 14:11
Take Me Somewhere
orchidee said:
She\'s a saucy lass - or mare! heehee. I\'m gonna dash to meet her! lol.
November 5th, 2019 12:34
orchidee said:
She\'s a saucy lass - or mare! heehee. I\'m gonna dash to meet her! lol.
November 5th, 2019 12:34
Take Me Somewhere
Fay Slimm. said:
A request by a smitten She which put so plainly cannot, in any event, be denied by a He ....... surely a lesson not to miss is to make oneself clear in all matters of hanky-panky methinks !
November 5th, 2019 11:03
Fay Slimm. said:
A request by a smitten She which put so plainly cannot, in any event, be denied by a He ....... surely a lesson not to miss is to make oneself clear in all matters of hanky-panky methinks !
November 5th, 2019 11:03
Yellow River
Suresh said:
It\'s so sad that something pure can be used for impure causes, like female abandonment - the most vile reason of all, that your words have so significantly highlighted
November 1st, 2019 23:15
Suresh said:
It\'s so sad that something pure can be used for impure causes, like female abandonment - the most vile reason of all, that your words have so significantly highlighted
November 1st, 2019 23:15
Four Letter Words
Goldfinch60 said:
So many words are used in this day and age that are totally meaningless in many situations. That fecundity should be spread to all so that the correct meaningful words are used in the right situation.
October 31st, 2019 01:42
Goldfinch60 said:
So many words are used in this day and age that are totally meaningless in many situations. That fecundity should be spread to all so that the correct meaningful words are used in the right situation.
October 31st, 2019 01:42
Four Letter Words
kevin browne said:
I always thought love and hate are oppsed to each other. However, you have given me a new perspective outlook on four lettered words. There are enough and sit well deep within us all wheter its either both or either of each one in a sentence. An intriuging speculation to be gazed upon more clearly within our language and mouths..
October 30th, 2019 18:28
kevin browne said:
I always thought love and hate are oppsed to each other. However, you have given me a new perspective outlook on four lettered words. There are enough and sit well deep within us all wheter its either both or either of each one in a sentence. An intriuging speculation to be gazed upon more clearly within our language and mouths..
October 30th, 2019 18:28
Four Letter Words
dusk arising said:
Having proved my fecundity i no longer have much use for the word unless it is hoping my grandkids are fecund when the time comes.
Hate is a word i rarely use but love on the other hand i use freely and often. There are many kinds of love. Generally we learn of romantic love firstly probably because of it\'s strength. But as we age we become aware of many other forms of love.
Maybe i use the word too often, but i\'m content to continue doing as I do.
Amusing, disturbing and for me controversial.
October 30th, 2019 16:09
dusk arising said:
Having proved my fecundity i no longer have much use for the word unless it is hoping my grandkids are fecund when the time comes.
Hate is a word i rarely use but love on the other hand i use freely and often. There are many kinds of love. Generally we learn of romantic love firstly probably because of it\'s strength. But as we age we become aware of many other forms of love.
Maybe i use the word too often, but i\'m content to continue doing as I do.
Amusing, disturbing and for me controversial.
October 30th, 2019 16:09
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