Comments received on poems by Neville
I Found Myself Thinking of You
Goldfinch60 said:
MY father and I were so close, he died in 1995 and I still think of him every day. A wonderful person who is still with me as I am sure your father is with you Neville.
June 30th, 2019 00:20
Goldfinch60 said:
MY father and I were so close, he died in 1995 and I still think of him every day. A wonderful person who is still with me as I am sure your father is with you Neville.
June 30th, 2019 00:20
I Found Myself Thinking of You
orchidee said:
A poignant and sensitive write Neville.
My insensitive version is - What ya doing thinking of me? Ya must have remembered my singing, and gone mad! heehee.
June 29th, 2019 11:20
orchidee said:
A poignant and sensitive write Neville.
My insensitive version is - What ya doing thinking of me? Ya must have remembered my singing, and gone mad! heehee.
June 29th, 2019 11:20
I Found Myself Thinking of You
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Oh yes...
I most definitely can relate!
It has been eight years, nine months, and seven days. It seems like just a few hours ago! Will always remember!
Thank you for sharing your most personal moments!
~Laura~
June 29th, 2019 05:03
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Oh yes...
I most definitely can relate!
It has been eight years, nine months, and seven days. It seems like just a few hours ago! Will always remember!
Thank you for sharing your most personal moments!
~Laura~
June 29th, 2019 05:03
I Found Myself Thinking of You
Fay Slimm. said:
We who care deeply do really die in fragments when those we love have to say goodbye - I can relate to these tender words so well my friend.
June 29th, 2019 03:44
Fay Slimm. said:
We who care deeply do really die in fragments when those we love have to say goodbye - I can relate to these tender words so well my friend.
June 29th, 2019 03:44
Poppy Seeds
Goldfinch60 said:
Going up passed the clouds can bring some wonderful memories of love and joy.
June 29th, 2019 00:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Going up passed the clouds can bring some wonderful memories of love and joy.
June 29th, 2019 00:48
Poppy Seeds
Suresh said:
This darn gravity keep me grounded, or else I\'ll in those clouds and among those poppy seeds in a blink of an eye, no directions necessary
Very enjoyable
June 28th, 2019 11:38
Suresh said:
This darn gravity keep me grounded, or else I\'ll in those clouds and among those poppy seeds in a blink of an eye, no directions necessary
Very enjoyable
June 28th, 2019 11:38
Poppy Seeds
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Neville, are you Peter?
Very interesting
June 28th, 2019 08:26
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Neville, are you Peter?
Very interesting
June 28th, 2019 08:26
Poppy Seeds
Poetic Dan said:
Stop going left! Message well received my friend. Great write
June 28th, 2019 02:43
Poetic Dan said:
Stop going left! Message well received my friend. Great write
June 28th, 2019 02:43
Poppy Seeds
Fay Slimm. said:
A dream of a meeting with love lost and remembered - - - such a thing can happen when we walk amid poppy fields but no-one puts it better than thee...........
June 28th, 2019 02:35
Fay Slimm. said:
A dream of a meeting with love lost and remembered - - - such a thing can happen when we walk amid poppy fields but no-one puts it better than thee...........
June 28th, 2019 02:35
Poppy Seeds
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville. Yep, someone wanted to know the way to Mars. I said \'Take the No.11 bus; get off at the third cloud on your right; the bus destination indicator will say \'Cuckoo Land\'. lol.
June 28th, 2019 02:29
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville. Yep, someone wanted to know the way to Mars. I said \'Take the No.11 bus; get off at the third cloud on your right; the bus destination indicator will say \'Cuckoo Land\'. lol.
June 28th, 2019 02:29
A Sound for Sore Eyes
Goldfinch60 said:
Superb write Neville, words and music can always be interspersed to bring beauty into our lives.
June 28th, 2019 00:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Superb write Neville, words and music can always be interspersed to bring beauty into our lives.
June 28th, 2019 00:48
A Sound for Sore Eyes
kevin browne said:
Class act here going on in your work. Brilliant and don\'t stop growing with you pen.
June 27th, 2019 16:04
kevin browne said:
Class act here going on in your work. Brilliant and don\'t stop growing with you pen.
June 27th, 2019 16:04
A Sound for Sore Eyes
Suresh said:
My words will fall far short in praising your words
June 27th, 2019 11:46
Suresh said:
My words will fall far short in praising your words
June 27th, 2019 11:46
A Sound for Sore Eyes
orchidee said:
An eloquent write Neville. So he heard me singing in the feral choir? He would have dashed out straightway in torment! heehee.
June 27th, 2019 03:13
orchidee said:
An eloquent write Neville. So he heard me singing in the feral choir? He would have dashed out straightway in torment! heehee.
June 27th, 2019 03:13
A Sound for Sore Eyes
Fay Slimm. said:
This read leaves me breathless with admiration for linguistic word-craft from its title to the revealing last line. First class writing again Neville.
June 27th, 2019 03:07
Fay Slimm. said:
This read leaves me breathless with admiration for linguistic word-craft from its title to the revealing last line. First class writing again Neville.
June 27th, 2019 03:07
Dance
Suresh said:
I envision an abandoned place where shadows dance hauntingly, with a stagnant pool of still and dark waters.
Very enjoyable piece.
June 26th, 2019 11:26
Suresh said:
I envision an abandoned place where shadows dance hauntingly, with a stagnant pool of still and dark waters.
Very enjoyable piece.
June 26th, 2019 11:26
Dance
orchidee said:
What you up to in that forest?! Don\'t fall on me like a ton of bricks, but that happened on a similar comment I made to a poet. That\'ll teach me to be too familiar! lol.
June 26th, 2019 04:16
orchidee said:
What you up to in that forest?! Don\'t fall on me like a ton of bricks, but that happened on a similar comment I made to a poet. That\'ll teach me to be too familiar! lol.
June 26th, 2019 04:16
Dance
Fay Slimm. said:
So clear your amorous tale I feel I am on that mill-pool bank and dancing in between deep shadows - a lovely first read of my day dear Neville.
June 26th, 2019 03:45
Fay Slimm. said:
So clear your amorous tale I feel I am on that mill-pool bank and dancing in between deep shadows - a lovely first read of my day dear Neville.
June 26th, 2019 03:45
Dance
Neville said:
I am delighted.. what a smashing thing to say.. cheers Dan...... Neville
June 26th, 2019 03:12
Neville said:
I am delighted.. what a smashing thing to say.. cheers Dan...... Neville
June 26th, 2019 03:12
Dance
Poetic Dan said:
Fantastic! I\'ve had a song call dance monkey in my head all morning, now I\'m going to have to play it!
Really enjoyed what felt like in and out of the dark and light, the dance of life!
June 26th, 2019 03:08
Poetic Dan said:
Fantastic! I\'ve had a song call dance monkey in my head all morning, now I\'m going to have to play it!
Really enjoyed what felt like in and out of the dark and light, the dance of life!
June 26th, 2019 03:08
Zen Hunting
Fay Slimm. said:
Growing accustomed to pleasure of bliss sounds like the monk though dis-robed had found his Nirvana - -and I agree the wait for enlightenment can be better endured with an aesthetic mate - - your poetry Nev describes life so clearly with all its surprises - yet throws in a slice of intrigue which I like. Good last read of my day so Bon nuit mon ami and sleep well ...........x from Fay
June 25th, 2019 17:22
Fay Slimm. said:
Growing accustomed to pleasure of bliss sounds like the monk though dis-robed had found his Nirvana - -and I agree the wait for enlightenment can be better endured with an aesthetic mate - - your poetry Nev describes life so clearly with all its surprises - yet throws in a slice of intrigue which I like. Good last read of my day so Bon nuit mon ami and sleep well ...........x from Fay
June 25th, 2019 17:22
Whale Whispering
Suresh said:
The docile behemoths, yet graceful and a delight to watch. Yes, their abrupt leap from the oceanic depth, and the thunderous flop on its surface, all gracefully done. Their whispers traveling thousands of miles - to fetch another of their kind.
June 25th, 2019 16:56
Suresh said:
The docile behemoths, yet graceful and a delight to watch. Yes, their abrupt leap from the oceanic depth, and the thunderous flop on its surface, all gracefully done. Their whispers traveling thousands of miles - to fetch another of their kind.
June 25th, 2019 16:56
Best Before See Date
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Love has no best before Nville it grows sweeter like a fine wine...
Your poetry gets better and better all the time this is sublime
June 25th, 2019 15:39
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Love has no best before Nville it grows sweeter like a fine wine...
Your poetry gets better and better all the time this is sublime
June 25th, 2019 15:39
Best Before See Date
Goldfinch60 said:
As our age increases our reaction slow and become stationery but the mind climbs on to the joys of the passed which gives us succour within our aging minds.
June 25th, 2019 15:13
Goldfinch60 said:
As our age increases our reaction slow and become stationery but the mind climbs on to the joys of the passed which gives us succour within our aging minds.
June 25th, 2019 15:13
Best Before See Date
Suresh said:
Age has a way of putting us in a catatonic state, and leaves us a cauldron of memories
June 25th, 2019 12:52
Suresh said:
Age has a way of putting us in a catatonic state, and leaves us a cauldron of memories
June 25th, 2019 12:52
Best Before See Date
Fay Slimm. said:
The pathos in these tender lines Nev. tells of past yesteryear-embraces with such haunting words - - a beguiling write which touches this reader\'s heart.
June 25th, 2019 07:06
Fay Slimm. said:
The pathos in these tender lines Nev. tells of past yesteryear-embraces with such haunting words - - a beguiling write which touches this reader\'s heart.
June 25th, 2019 07:06
Best Before See Date
orchidee said:
Aww, why they call you out of date? Or you mean me?! heehee.
June 25th, 2019 06:29
orchidee said:
Aww, why they call you out of date? Or you mean me?! heehee.
June 25th, 2019 06:29
Best Before See Date
Neville said:
your take on these words is so much appreciated my friend.. I just love the way words can be variously interpreted... and no... not a hundred miles off mark.. not by a long chalk..... Neville
June 25th, 2019 04:02
Neville said:
your take on these words is so much appreciated my friend.. I just love the way words can be variously interpreted... and no... not a hundred miles off mark.. not by a long chalk..... Neville
June 25th, 2019 04:02
Best Before See Date
dusk arising said:
Thats the stuff dreams are dreamed in. A somehow distant \'cotton wooley\' recollection of what happened in REM sleep..... eludes us for we dream in delta and theta waves (i think).
If i am 100 miles off the mark - apologies. I felt the whole of your piece today was alike attempting, on waking, to return to a lovely dream.
June 25th, 2019 03:46
dusk arising said:
Thats the stuff dreams are dreamed in. A somehow distant \'cotton wooley\' recollection of what happened in REM sleep..... eludes us for we dream in delta and theta waves (i think).
If i am 100 miles off the mark - apologies. I felt the whole of your piece today was alike attempting, on waking, to return to a lovely dream.
June 25th, 2019 03:46
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