Comments received on poems by Neville



War is Not for Lovers
Goldfinch60 said:

Yes it does still hurt to think about it.

\"War is not for lovers\"

December 21st, 2018 02:18

A Blue Toothbrush
Goldfinch60 said:

https://youtu.be/oI7-U75tvQs

December 21st, 2018 01:14

A Blue Toothbrush
Michael Edwards said:

Never happened to me when I was at work - but then my working day was totally controlled by my secretary who was in charge of my diary - no chance of mid-morning nooky. Nuff said - I enjoyed the read 18+ or not.

December 20th, 2018 11:00

A Blue Toothbrush
Neville said:

are saying you think these words do not warrant the 18+ label I gave them at the time of posting?

December 20th, 2018 09:04

A Blue Toothbrush
orchidee said:

Oh no, woof! Fido, me 18+ watchdog started barking? Should this be marked 18+?! heehee.

December 20th, 2018 08:46

The Drowning Game
sylviasearcher said:

Oh I think you may have taken the vision from my eyes, the words from my lips and the \'bray\' from my heart.

Who needs Kate Chopin 🤗

December 19th, 2018 02:52

The Drowning Game
Michael Edwards said:

A great first read of the day.

December 19th, 2018 02:39

The Drowning Game
orchidee said:

Bit swoony this, Neville! heehee.

December 19th, 2018 02:33

The Drowning Game
Goldfinch60 said:

Those sprites can be so magnetic and uts impossible not to be attracted to them.
Another very good write Neville.

December 19th, 2018 01:43

Whale Whispering
Goldfinch60 said:

I have never seen a whale but seen poipoises and dolphins, they are wondrous, as are your words.

December 18th, 2018 15:19

Whale Whispering
Michael Edwards said:

So well described in great verse.

December 18th, 2018 09:18

Whale Whispering
orchidee said:

A fine write N.

December 18th, 2018 08:05

Whale Whispering
Laura🌻 said:

Neville,

This is indeed an excellent write! I concur with Sylvia’s and Fay’s brilliant comments!
I enjoyed the read!

~Laura~

December 18th, 2018 08:04

Whale Whispering
Fay Slimm. said:

So explicit the description of dancing leviathans I was there with you watching them canter and play - a beautiful read Neville. which goes into my favourites

December 18th, 2018 07:34

Whale Whispering
sylviasearcher said:

I am glad you are more than happy.

You are welcome.

December 18th, 2018 06:15

Whale Whispering
sylviasearcher said:

Captures the almighty beauty and power of things we cannot grasp nor understand.

December 18th, 2018 05:59

Versal Law
Goldfinch60 said:

Super verse (or should that be versal)

December 18th, 2018 01:28

Versal Law
Michael Edwards said:

You can read it either way - complete law or a law starting with the flourish of manuscript but it doesn\'t matter - love stretching and pulling the language beyond the usual comfort zones - as Uncle Fred said - \'Go with the flow\'.

December 17th, 2018 07:18

Versal Law
Neville said:

no rush, take your time & thanks for visiting.. Neville

December 17th, 2018 05:34

Versal Law
orchidee said:

Swoon! I thought ya was writing some \'laws of poetry\' or summat. Now I gotta have a lie down to recover. lol.

December 17th, 2018 05:28

The Birth of Opals
Goldfinch60 said:

Super write Neviile - thank you.

December 17th, 2018 01:36

Upon A Midnight Calling
whisperingquill said:

Intricate weaving
fantastic word choices

December 16th, 2018 12:33

The Birth of Opals
orchidee said:

A fine write N.

December 16th, 2018 08:28

The Birth of Opals
Michael Edwards said:

Greensleeves is playing as I read this - the two go so well together - a super read.

December 16th, 2018 06:09

The Birth of Opals
LIGHT WARRIOR said:

Beautifully written..

December 16th, 2018 05:39

Upon A Midnight Calling
Goldfinch60 said:

Those marks must always be left to show that you have been there.

December 15th, 2018 11:33

Upon A Midnight Calling
orchidee said:

Swoon! He been cutting the grass at midnight?! I have to guess what\'s going on there, in me sheltered life. heehee.

December 15th, 2018 03:08

On Waking
Fay Slimm. said:

Early morning coupling is good for those born as larks but not for owls - a read which revives memories for me - thanks for journey back to lovely times Neville.

December 14th, 2018 05:02

On Waking
orchidee said:

It all started with those swoony palms! lol. I must \'get out more\' as they say.

December 14th, 2018 03:08

On Waking
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful write Neville, it leads me in one way only and the answer was yes.

December 14th, 2018 02:05



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