Comments received on poems by Neville
Looking Just to See
Fay Slimm. said:
This verse leads us into a memory with the expertise of a true wordsmith dear Nev.. Bluest of eyes encounter an experience that etches itself indelibly in the heart\'s eyesight as a moment of poetry which your pen now shares with compelling intrigue - applause for a true masterclass in writing my friend...................... x Fay
July 3rd, 2019 01:15
Fay Slimm. said:
This verse leads us into a memory with the expertise of a true wordsmith dear Nev.. Bluest of eyes encounter an experience that etches itself indelibly in the heart\'s eyesight as a moment of poetry which your pen now shares with compelling intrigue - applause for a true masterclass in writing my friend...................... x Fay
July 3rd, 2019 01:15
Looking Just to See
Suresh said:
To recall with the minds eye, that which has been filed away as memories, that is so well recorded by words that form this poetry
July 3rd, 2019 01:14
Suresh said:
To recall with the minds eye, that which has been filed away as memories, that is so well recorded by words that form this poetry
July 3rd, 2019 01:14
Looking Just to See
Goldfinch60 said:
Those poetic moments are so special in our lives.
July 3rd, 2019 00:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Those poetic moments are so special in our lives.
July 3rd, 2019 00:58
Tomorrow Lost
Michael Edwards said:
Some lovely lines. I do like The shade of absent bruise and moments shed like reptile skins.
July 2nd, 2019 09:34
Michael Edwards said:
Some lovely lines. I do like The shade of absent bruise and moments shed like reptile skins.
July 2nd, 2019 09:34
Tomorrow Lost
Goldfinch60 said:
Good one Neville, those tomorrows lost make room for the new days found.
July 2nd, 2019 09:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Good one Neville, those tomorrows lost make room for the new days found.
July 2nd, 2019 09:15
Tomorrow Lost
orchidee said:
Good write N. Yes, tomorrow is always lost for me. When it gets here, it\'s \'today\'. Doh!
July 2nd, 2019 08:19
orchidee said:
Good write N. Yes, tomorrow is always lost for me. When it gets here, it\'s \'today\'. Doh!
July 2nd, 2019 08:19
Tomorrow Lost
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
A wonderful write that evokes many memories...whether lost or perhaps just dormant! ‘Tis our choice to hang on to them or to let them go and move on!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
July 2nd, 2019 06:32
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
A wonderful write that evokes many memories...whether lost or perhaps just dormant! ‘Tis our choice to hang on to them or to let them go and move on!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
July 2nd, 2019 06:32
Tomorrow Lost
Suresh said:
What a memorable recitation.
I cannot seem to come out of a dream state, or maybe I just love being there, letting all the tomorrows be lost
July 2nd, 2019 04:03
Suresh said:
What a memorable recitation.
I cannot seem to come out of a dream state, or maybe I just love being there, letting all the tomorrows be lost
July 2nd, 2019 04:03
Tomorrow Lost
Fay Slimm. said:
very poetic way to describe moving on my friend - - tomorrows are not for re-living regrets of the past - encouraging thoughts and thank you muchly for sharing them............... Fay
July 2nd, 2019 03:30
Fay Slimm. said:
very poetic way to describe moving on my friend - - tomorrows are not for re-living regrets of the past - encouraging thoughts and thank you muchly for sharing them............... Fay
July 2nd, 2019 03:30
Chaos Theory
orchidee said:
How are you N? I\'m feeling decidedly queasy, but that\'s cos I just tuned into \'Lorraine\' on telly. Call the men in white coats if I watch it the whole week. I shall be insane with boredom!
Don\'t torture yourself - don\'t tune in to it! You\'ll end up a jibbering wreck, as I might do. lol.
July 2nd, 2019 03:04
orchidee said:
How are you N? I\'m feeling decidedly queasy, but that\'s cos I just tuned into \'Lorraine\' on telly. Call the men in white coats if I watch it the whole week. I shall be insane with boredom!
Don\'t torture yourself - don\'t tune in to it! You\'ll end up a jibbering wreck, as I might do. lol.
July 2nd, 2019 03:04
Captivating Games
sylviasearcher said:
This was playful. I liked it but I am trying to work out the function of the change of format in the middle...
I liked want having a line of his or her own
July 2nd, 2019 02:35
sylviasearcher said:
This was playful. I liked it but I am trying to work out the function of the change of format in the middle...
I liked want having a line of his or her own
July 2nd, 2019 02:35
What We Got
Suresh said:
I am me, you are what I want to be
Have often thought on these lines, that you have expressed so well
July 1st, 2019 22:53
Suresh said:
I am me, you are what I want to be
Have often thought on these lines, that you have expressed so well
July 1st, 2019 22:53
Chaos Theory
Suresh said:
The RIPPLE EFFECT.
We know the consequences, yet, we choose to remain, ignorant and illiterate
.
We surrender our responsibilities to others, like politicians, and the defenders become the aggressors - ironic!
CHAOS, once enacted,natives its toll.
Engaging subject, thnx
July 1st, 2019 10:45
Suresh said:
The RIPPLE EFFECT.
We know the consequences, yet, we choose to remain, ignorant and illiterate
.
We surrender our responsibilities to others, like politicians, and the defenders become the aggressors - ironic!
CHAOS, once enacted,natives its toll.
Engaging subject, thnx
July 1st, 2019 10:45
Chaos Theory
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks NEVILLE for your CHAOTIC ODE ! Since the MOON LANDING ~ 50 years ago ~ we have seen the Earth (from Space) as Small Global Village ~ with the G2O leaders as Village Elders and all of us increasingly reponsible for the Future consevation of the quality of Village Life ! A sombre & mind daunting message indeed ! Thanks for caring & sharing !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please check our HOT AIR BALLOONS Thanks A & B 🧡🧡🧡
July 1st, 2019 08:28
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks NEVILLE for your CHAOTIC ODE ! Since the MOON LANDING ~ 50 years ago ~ we have seen the Earth (from Space) as Small Global Village ~ with the G2O leaders as Village Elders and all of us increasingly reponsible for the Future consevation of the quality of Village Life ! A sombre & mind daunting message indeed ! Thanks for caring & sharing !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please check our HOT AIR BALLOONS Thanks A & B 🧡🧡🧡
July 1st, 2019 08:28
Chaos Theory
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks NEVILLE for your CHAOTIC ODE ! Since the MOON LANDING ~ 50 years ago ~ we have seen the Earth (from Space) as Small Global Village ~ with the G2O leaders as Village Elders and all of us increasingly reponsible for the Future consevation of the quality of Village Life ! A sombre & mind daunting message indeed ! Thanks for caring & sharing !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please check our HOT AIR BALLOONS Thanks A & B 🧡🧡🧡
July 1st, 2019 08:28
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks NEVILLE for your CHAOTIC ODE ! Since the MOON LANDING ~ 50 years ago ~ we have seen the Earth (from Space) as Small Global Village ~ with the G2O leaders as Village Elders and all of us increasingly reponsible for the Future consevation of the quality of Village Life ! A sombre & mind daunting message indeed ! Thanks for caring & sharing !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please check our HOT AIR BALLOONS Thanks A & B 🧡🧡🧡
July 1st, 2019 08:28
Chaos Theory
Michael Edwards said:
A compelling way to describe man\'s total disrespect for the planet - and a fine write it is.
July 1st, 2019 07:55
Michael Edwards said:
A compelling way to describe man\'s total disrespect for the planet - and a fine write it is.
July 1st, 2019 07:55
Chaos Theory
Fay Slimm. said:
A powerful way to describe time\'s indifferent effects as it ticks away - a compelling outcry against human blindness to planet-abuse and thank you for wording the need so poetically Nev. - - - a meaningful write..................... Fay
July 1st, 2019 04:21
Fay Slimm. said:
A powerful way to describe time\'s indifferent effects as it ticks away - a compelling outcry against human blindness to planet-abuse and thank you for wording the need so poetically Nev. - - - a meaningful write..................... Fay
July 1st, 2019 04:21
Captivating Games
Goldfinch60 said:
Great write Neville, I have already been captured and been that wonderful way for 38 years.
July 1st, 2019 00:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Great write Neville, I have already been captured and been that wonderful way for 38 years.
July 1st, 2019 00:52
Captivating Games
SerenWise said:
Beautifully written, love the use of rhyme, especially the second stanza
June 30th, 2019 20:31
SerenWise said:
Beautifully written, love the use of rhyme, especially the second stanza
June 30th, 2019 20:31
Captivating Games
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FOR SHARING NEVILLE : ANGELA here : Its 10:30 am (MON) in NZ first Clinic is 1 pm just catching up on MPS ! Love yout quintet of triplets each one a Captivating Love Match ! BRIAN and I are 11,500 miles apart so we often play Cyber Captivating Games !
1. Im the KITE @ the end of an 11,500 mile string !
2. Our LOGO is two doves kissing on the wing !
3. CYBER LOVE is like a Nameless colour
4. When BRIAN comesfor me (OCTOBER) we wont play Silly Games !
5. When we*re together again our shackles will be LOVE !
Loved your very elegant POEM
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡
June 30th, 2019 16:47
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FOR SHARING NEVILLE : ANGELA here : Its 10:30 am (MON) in NZ first Clinic is 1 pm just catching up on MPS ! Love yout quintet of triplets each one a Captivating Love Match ! BRIAN and I are 11,500 miles apart so we often play Cyber Captivating Games !
1. Im the KITE @ the end of an 11,500 mile string !
2. Our LOGO is two doves kissing on the wing !
3. CYBER LOVE is like a Nameless colour
4. When BRIAN comesfor me (OCTOBER) we wont play Silly Games !
5. When we*re together again our shackles will be LOVE !
Loved your very elegant POEM
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡
June 30th, 2019 16:47
I Found Myself Thinking of You
Suresh said:
One thinks of those that one loves, when another loved one is leaving us.
Heartfelt
June 30th, 2019 14:00
Suresh said:
One thinks of those that one loves, when another loved one is leaving us.
Heartfelt
June 30th, 2019 14:00
Captivating Games
Suresh said:
I visualize five spells separating two loves, and with each verse a spell dissipates.... And no, it\'s not too much to ask.
I am still figuring out the spells ....
June 30th, 2019 12:41
Suresh said:
I visualize five spells separating two loves, and with each verse a spell dissipates.... And no, it\'s not too much to ask.
I am still figuring out the spells ....
June 30th, 2019 12:41
Captivating Games
Michael Edwards said:
There\'s lots of things I\'d like to be but actually I aint disappointed with what I am - a smug git lol
Niceione Neville
June 30th, 2019 09:06
Michael Edwards said:
There\'s lots of things I\'d like to be but actually I aint disappointed with what I am - a smug git lol
Niceione Neville
June 30th, 2019 09:06
Captivating Games
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville, though I might swoon with shackles! lol.
June 30th, 2019 07:25
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville, though I might swoon with shackles! lol.
June 30th, 2019 07:25
Captivating Games
Fay Slimm. said:
Ask for shackles and you will be caught in the love-game with verses like this one my tender friend - - an alluring read and I want to say how much I enjoyed the way you you want to play games that captivate this reader - - - - another thoroughly engaging write. ..................... Fay
June 30th, 2019 03:38
Fay Slimm. said:
Ask for shackles and you will be caught in the love-game with verses like this one my tender friend - - an alluring read and I want to say how much I enjoyed the way you you want to play games that captivate this reader - - - - another thoroughly engaging write. ..................... Fay
June 30th, 2019 03:38
I Found Myself Thinking of You
SerenWise said:
Sad but very meaningful, I think we can all relate on some level
June 30th, 2019 02:14
SerenWise said:
Sad but very meaningful, I think we can all relate on some level
June 30th, 2019 02:14
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