Comments received on poems by Neville
No Cage for Thee
dusk arising said:
Beautiful separation of possessive romantic love from unconditional love.
If you love the Tiger, then let it be where it can be the tiger you love for within a cage it will not \'Tiger\'.
On several re-reads i really do like this and its a definite for my favourites.
May 30th, 2019 09:52
dusk arising said:
Beautiful separation of possessive romantic love from unconditional love.
If you love the Tiger, then let it be where it can be the tiger you love for within a cage it will not \'Tiger\'.
On several re-reads i really do like this and its a definite for my favourites.
May 30th, 2019 09:52
No Cage for Thee
SerenWise said:
Beautiful write, you can never lose what is truly yours, it will always return somehow
May 30th, 2019 08:34
SerenWise said:
Beautiful write, you can never lose what is truly yours, it will always return somehow
May 30th, 2019 08:34
No Cage for Thee
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a tender release would melt the need to fly free methinks - this gem of good reasons to stay in love\'s chains has love that shines from each line. This one is a fave. to read again. ........ Fay
May 30th, 2019 04:21
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a tender release would melt the need to fly free methinks - this gem of good reasons to stay in love\'s chains has love that shines from each line. This one is a fave. to read again. ........ Fay
May 30th, 2019 04:21
No Cage for Thee
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Excellent Neville
Such emotion in this \"I cannot have you if I own you\" wonderful poetry
Bravo!
May 30th, 2019 03:43
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Excellent Neville
Such emotion in this \"I cannot have you if I own you\" wonderful poetry
Bravo!
May 30th, 2019 03:43
The NHS Alarm Call
Goldfinch60 said:
Over the years I and my wife have had superb treatment by the NHS but as has been said sometimes it goes wrong. In the case of your father if nobody came there is no excuse.
It appears that \'some people\' not in the medical business want the NHS to fail, this we MUST stop as the NHS is such a worthy cause to save.
May 30th, 2019 00:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Over the years I and my wife have had superb treatment by the NHS but as has been said sometimes it goes wrong. In the case of your father if nobody came there is no excuse.
It appears that \'some people\' not in the medical business want the NHS to fail, this we MUST stop as the NHS is such a worthy cause to save.
May 30th, 2019 00:19
The NHS Alarm Call
Michael Edwards said:
I get really uptight when I hear about criticism of the NHS having spent many years defending it from unmeritorious claims. But sometimes things do go wrong or it doesn\'t get it right as seems the case here. Sorry to hear about your Father but it is uplifting to think that he was not alone and had so much love.
May 29th, 2019 14:06
Michael Edwards said:
I get really uptight when I hear about criticism of the NHS having spent many years defending it from unmeritorious claims. But sometimes things do go wrong or it doesn\'t get it right as seems the case here. Sorry to hear about your Father but it is uplifting to think that he was not alone and had so much love.
May 29th, 2019 14:06
The NHS Alarm Call
orchidee said:
Yes, mostly excellent - there was I (there am I at present too) watching super treatments from Ambulance staff on telly.
May 29th, 2019 11:13
orchidee said:
Yes, mostly excellent - there was I (there am I at present too) watching super treatments from Ambulance staff on telly.
May 29th, 2019 11:13
The NHS Alarm Call
Suresh said:
Though this was in UK, the experience is the same all over the world, and it truly doesn\'t improve with more elite or expensive locations.
If one could get the correct treatment, home is a more conducive place.
Thnx for sharing
May 29th, 2019 10:12
Suresh said:
Though this was in UK, the experience is the same all over the world, and it truly doesn\'t improve with more elite or expensive locations.
If one could get the correct treatment, home is a more conducive place.
Thnx for sharing
May 29th, 2019 10:12
The NHS Alarm Call
dusk arising said:
A bit of a lottery is NHS nursing care today. Whilst mostly excellent, when its fails, the failure is felt like a hammer blow.
May 29th, 2019 05:47
dusk arising said:
A bit of a lottery is NHS nursing care today. Whilst mostly excellent, when its fails, the failure is felt like a hammer blow.
May 29th, 2019 05:47
The NHS Alarm Call
Fay Slimm. said:
The disgraceful facts given right airing in this telling verse Neville. Hoping your father got better treatment as needed and thanks for sharing what has become a real problem --- Fay
May 29th, 2019 05:10
Fay Slimm. said:
The disgraceful facts given right airing in this telling verse Neville. Hoping your father got better treatment as needed and thanks for sharing what has become a real problem --- Fay
May 29th, 2019 05:10
Havana Skies
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful sights to behold come from your words straight to my mind.
May 28th, 2019 16:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful sights to behold come from your words straight to my mind.
May 28th, 2019 16:27
Havana Skies
Suresh said:
There are certain moments, the one you so poetically recalled, that are etched in memory forever, to be revisited fine and time again.
May 28th, 2019 10:35
Suresh said:
There are certain moments, the one you so poetically recalled, that are etched in memory forever, to be revisited fine and time again.
May 28th, 2019 10:35
Havana Skies
kevin browne said:
Nicely expressed, Neville, and the birds up in the sky where I live display their stunts for hunting prey with such majestic flight mobility it\'s actually amazing watching different types of birds swoop down and glide back up with the wind blowing hard it\'s difficult to land underneath your Havana skies. A super tribute to the dynamic skills both of the swallows and the swift must surely be. A beautiful, intrinsic look into bird life.
May 28th, 2019 04:10
kevin browne said:
Nicely expressed, Neville, and the birds up in the sky where I live display their stunts for hunting prey with such majestic flight mobility it\'s actually amazing watching different types of birds swoop down and glide back up with the wind blowing hard it\'s difficult to land underneath your Havana skies. A super tribute to the dynamic skills both of the swallows and the swift must surely be. A beautiful, intrinsic look into bird life.
May 28th, 2019 04:10
Havana Skies
Fay Slimm. said:
Am packing my bags as I write to experience that flight into fancy under Havana skies. Great read Neville.
May 28th, 2019 03:54
Fay Slimm. said:
Am packing my bags as I write to experience that flight into fancy under Havana skies. Great read Neville.
May 28th, 2019 03:54
Havana Skies
dusk arising said:
I slipped on my Havanna Skiis, lowered my goggles and was off down the...what... wait... this isn\'t piste, i\'m pissed.
Frig-it bird, wake up!
Methinks there are missing (politely withheld in the interest of decency) verses here Neville for there are more birds to espy than those you mention when relaxing beside a cooling pool.
However, i get the relaxing picture you create.
May 28th, 2019 03:53
dusk arising said:
I slipped on my Havanna Skiis, lowered my goggles and was off down the...what... wait... this isn\'t piste, i\'m pissed.
Frig-it bird, wake up!
Methinks there are missing (politely withheld in the interest of decency) verses here Neville for there are more birds to espy than those you mention when relaxing beside a cooling pool.
However, i get the relaxing picture you create.
May 28th, 2019 03:53
Havana Skies
orchidee said:
An eloquent write N. I\'m on me way to Havana. At least you won\'t hear me sing then. Or you in Havana already?!
May 28th, 2019 03:36
orchidee said:
An eloquent write N. I\'m on me way to Havana. At least you won\'t hear me sing then. Or you in Havana already?!
May 28th, 2019 03:36
Freedom
Goldfinch60 said:
That takes me back to the times that I used to have the occasional Disque Bleu.
May 28th, 2019 01:00
Goldfinch60 said:
That takes me back to the times that I used to have the occasional Disque Bleu.
May 28th, 2019 01:00
Freedom
Michael Edwards said:
Just words - that\'s all that poetry is - but it\'s the way that you assemble them that makes a real poet - super little piece.l
May 27th, 2019 13:02
Michael Edwards said:
Just words - that\'s all that poetry is - but it\'s the way that you assemble them that makes a real poet - super little piece.l
May 27th, 2019 13:02
Freedom
Suresh said:
Was it worth it - I mean having to share your last cigarette?
May 27th, 2019 11:29
Suresh said:
Was it worth it - I mean having to share your last cigarette?
May 27th, 2019 11:29
Freedom
Poetic Dan said:
Had one or two of those moments, now a face with no name.
May 27th, 2019 08:43
Poetic Dan said:
Had one or two of those moments, now a face with no name.
May 27th, 2019 08:43
Freedom
dusk arising said:
Sacre disc blue mon sewer! These street beggars will cadge a fag and a coffee anywhere. She must\'a had you made as a mark alright.
May 27th, 2019 06:08
dusk arising said:
Sacre disc blue mon sewer! These street beggars will cadge a fag and a coffee anywhere. She must\'a had you made as a mark alright.
May 27th, 2019 06:08
Freedom
Fay Slimm. said:
Ouch - - hope that scene with that lady whatsit never happened in reality my friend. Surely nameless is not in love\'s game.
May 27th, 2019 04:26
Fay Slimm. said:
Ouch - - hope that scene with that lady whatsit never happened in reality my friend. Surely nameless is not in love\'s game.
May 27th, 2019 04:26
A Very Special Day
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - - am pleased I peeped into this little tribute to December 10th - your special day Nev...... looked up the traits of a Sagittariun and looks to me that you fit the bill in more than a few - Here goes - Likable - Generous - Optimistic - Creative - Idealistic - Passionate and Bold...... Wow - - Don\'t know a lot about Horoscopes and not sure if I believe it all but here\'s wishin\' ya very belated congrats........... Fay x
May 26th, 2019 16:48
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - - am pleased I peeped into this little tribute to December 10th - your special day Nev...... looked up the traits of a Sagittariun and looks to me that you fit the bill in more than a few - Here goes - Likable - Generous - Optimistic - Creative - Idealistic - Passionate and Bold...... Wow - - Don\'t know a lot about Horoscopes and not sure if I believe it all but here\'s wishin\' ya very belated congrats........... Fay x
May 26th, 2019 16:48
A Cautious Distance
Suresh said:
It\'s always been a cautious distance -
All the poems recited in mind alone
My intentions were never sent out, so, no postcard expected
May 26th, 2019 15:53
Suresh said:
It\'s always been a cautious distance -
All the poems recited in mind alone
My intentions were never sent out, so, no postcard expected
May 26th, 2019 15:53
A Cautious Distance
Goldfinch60 said:
Those questions remain unanswered until that cautious distance becomes closer.
May 26th, 2019 15:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Those questions remain unanswered until that cautious distance becomes closer.
May 26th, 2019 15:18
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