Comments received on poems by Neville
Infinity
dusk arising said:
Outstanding tribute to the fallen and the futility of warfare.
I have never been to such a place as you describe but even photos of them resound with a spiritual reverence which also pours from your words today.
Finely crafted piece which im honoured to place amongst my favourites.
September 6th, 2019 01:51
dusk arising said:
Outstanding tribute to the fallen and the futility of warfare.
I have never been to such a place as you describe but even photos of them resound with a spiritual reverence which also pours from your words today.
Finely crafted piece which im honoured to place amongst my favourites.
September 6th, 2019 01:51
Infinity
Clara said:
Wow. A fine write Neville.
Even reading this, everything was still for me. Almost as if your words commanded respect and attention. Beautiful worded yet haunting as Fay mentioned above.
CLARA X
September 6th, 2019 00:37
Clara said:
Wow. A fine write Neville.
Even reading this, everything was still for me. Almost as if your words commanded respect and attention. Beautiful worded yet haunting as Fay mentioned above.
CLARA X
September 6th, 2019 00:37
Infinity
Fay Slimm. said:
Perfectly poemed these sacred places of fallen heroes - - time stands to attention where blood has been spilled and you capture that silence in this haunt of a read. One of your best again Nev.
September 6th, 2019 00:17
Fay Slimm. said:
Perfectly poemed these sacred places of fallen heroes - - time stands to attention where blood has been spilled and you capture that silence in this haunt of a read. One of your best again Nev.
September 6th, 2019 00:17
Somewhere Behind These Eyes
Seek said:
Poignancy coming to life as inspired words fall on deaf ears answered with silence. A fine write, Neville!
September 5th, 2019 08:42
Seek said:
Poignancy coming to life as inspired words fall on deaf ears answered with silence. A fine write, Neville!
September 5th, 2019 08:42
Somewhere Behind These Eyes
Christina8 said:
Wonderful write dear Nev! A read much enjoyed.
September 5th, 2019 06:25
Christina8 said:
Wonderful write dear Nev! A read much enjoyed.
September 5th, 2019 06:25
Somewhere Behind These Eyes
FineB said:
Hello Neville,
A wonderful and poignant write.
Keep writing FineB
September 5th, 2019 04:09
FineB said:
Hello Neville,
A wonderful and poignant write.
Keep writing FineB
September 5th, 2019 04:09
Somewhere Behind These Eyes
Michael Edwards said:
Broken words that fall on arid lands
will no more grow again
nor will the words you sow on unreceptive minds.
Just had a little poetic moment inspired by your fine write N.
September 5th, 2019 03:08
Michael Edwards said:
Broken words that fall on arid lands
will no more grow again
nor will the words you sow on unreceptive minds.
Just had a little poetic moment inspired by your fine write N.
September 5th, 2019 03:08
Somewhere Behind These Eyes
dusk arising said:
Reads like wishful thinking. The desire to forget that which haunts ones mind.
Last verse is a nice twist.
September 5th, 2019 02:18
dusk arising said:
Reads like wishful thinking. The desire to forget that which haunts ones mind.
Last verse is a nice twist.
September 5th, 2019 02:18
Somewhere Behind These Eyes
Fay Slimm. said:
Words that break needed silence are but as this strong poem relates - a sin of sorts........... behind the eyes is where memory stores hurts....... An engaging read again Nev.
September 5th, 2019 02:15
Fay Slimm. said:
Words that break needed silence are but as this strong poem relates - a sin of sorts........... behind the eyes is where memory stores hurts....... An engaging read again Nev.
September 5th, 2019 02:15
Somewhere Behind These Eyes
orchidee said:
A fine write N. I won\'t punish ya with silence - rather with sound - of me singing! heehee.
I\'m cruel - I must punish everyone then! lol.
September 5th, 2019 01:29
orchidee said:
A fine write N. I won\'t punish ya with silence - rather with sound - of me singing! heehee.
I\'m cruel - I must punish everyone then! lol.
September 5th, 2019 01:29
Somewhere Behind These Eyes
Goldfinch60 said:
Those words will forever be within you and within others as we read them on the page.
September 5th, 2019 00:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Those words will forever be within you and within others as we read them on the page.
September 5th, 2019 00:48
A Ladies Man
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliant ! I still am and many came close but in the end I think I died as ever day I do feel reborn.
Never stop sailing, being who you are!
September 4th, 2019 16:36
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliant ! I still am and many came close but in the end I think I died as ever day I do feel reborn.
Never stop sailing, being who you are!
September 4th, 2019 16:36
A Ladies Man
Suresh said:
......ain\'t it so that in the end there\'s always the one for whom we will even choose death.....
September 4th, 2019 09:49
Suresh said:
......ain\'t it so that in the end there\'s always the one for whom we will even choose death.....
September 4th, 2019 09:49
A Ladies Man
Christina8 said:
Great cadence to this...and who wants to be single?? This is a superb write!!
September 4th, 2019 09:46
Christina8 said:
Great cadence to this...and who wants to be single?? This is a superb write!!
September 4th, 2019 09:46
A Ladies Man
Clara said:
N,
There\'s such a rhythm to these words that I enjoy! Thank you for sharing!
CLARA X
September 4th, 2019 08:33
Clara said:
N,
There\'s such a rhythm to these words that I enjoy! Thank you for sharing!
CLARA X
September 4th, 2019 08:33
A Ladies Man
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Wow...
An extraordinary write which I enjoyed reading!
~Laura~
September 4th, 2019 04:16
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Wow...
An extraordinary write which I enjoyed reading!
~Laura~
September 4th, 2019 04:16
A Ladies Man
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Neville. Once you have found the right person the \' Ladies man\' need not exist anymore.
September 4th, 2019 01:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Neville. Once you have found the right person the \' Ladies man\' need not exist anymore.
September 4th, 2019 01:43
A Ladies Man
dusk arising said:
Singleton lifestyle is freedom to do exactly as u like..... and retain that roaming eye (convinced of course one still has those ladykiller looks).
On the other hand, a good cook and bottlewasher?
September 4th, 2019 01:37
dusk arising said:
Singleton lifestyle is freedom to do exactly as u like..... and retain that roaming eye (convinced of course one still has those ladykiller looks).
On the other hand, a good cook and bottlewasher?
September 4th, 2019 01:37
A Ladies Man
orchidee said:
Some of these poems on this site will be the death of me - or the swoon of me! lol.
September 4th, 2019 01:35
orchidee said:
Some of these poems on this site will be the death of me - or the swoon of me! lol.
September 4th, 2019 01:35
For The Sake of Poetry
Goldfinch60 said:
The thoughts of the past are ever intriguing.
September 4th, 2019 01:07
Goldfinch60 said:
The thoughts of the past are ever intriguing.
September 4th, 2019 01:07
For The Sake of Poetry
FineB said:
Hello Neville,
A good write
Good.
Keep writing FineB
September 3rd, 2019 10:12
FineB said:
Hello Neville,
A good write
Good.
Keep writing FineB
September 3rd, 2019 10:12
For The Sake of Poetry
Poetic Dan said:
What a great ending!
Much appreciated
September 3rd, 2019 09:47
Poetic Dan said:
What a great ending!
Much appreciated
September 3rd, 2019 09:47
For The Sake of Poetry
Christina8 said:
Great write, Nev..wonderful dangling ending I must say...
September 3rd, 2019 07:07
Christina8 said:
Great write, Nev..wonderful dangling ending I must say...
September 3rd, 2019 07:07
For The Sake of Poetry
Michael Edwards said:
Great write and I love the dangling ending.
September 3rd, 2019 03:26
Michael Edwards said:
Great write and I love the dangling ending.
September 3rd, 2019 03:26
For The Sake of Poetry
Fay Slimm. said:
A smile for this beguiling end again Nev --- you are a master at leaving mystery in your tale-endings.
September 3rd, 2019 03:12
Fay Slimm. said:
A smile for this beguiling end again Nev --- you are a master at leaving mystery in your tale-endings.
September 3rd, 2019 03:12
For The Sake of Poetry
orchidee said:
A fine write Nev. I was gonna write a poem: \'Oh, for the sake of...\' or \'Oh for the love of...\'
Aww, why did they suggest \'For the love of God, or for the love of me ear-drums, no more singing from me\'?! heehee.
Where\'s the purple tablets?
September 3rd, 2019 01:52
orchidee said:
A fine write Nev. I was gonna write a poem: \'Oh, for the sake of...\' or \'Oh for the love of...\'
Aww, why did they suggest \'For the love of God, or for the love of me ear-drums, no more singing from me\'?! heehee.
Where\'s the purple tablets?
September 3rd, 2019 01:52
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