Comments received on poems by Neville
That Secret Place
PoeticBiscuit said:
I’m glad I decided to take a look into your writing because now I don’t think I can ever stop! Your skill only seems to grow.
August 8th, 2019 12:45
PoeticBiscuit said:
I’m glad I decided to take a look into your writing because now I don’t think I can ever stop! Your skill only seems to grow.
August 8th, 2019 12:45
That Secret Place
Michael Edwards said:
I\'m with Christina (not literally) - your writing goes from strength to strength.
August 8th, 2019 10:49
Michael Edwards said:
I\'m with Christina (not literally) - your writing goes from strength to strength.
August 8th, 2019 10:49
That Secret Place
Christina8 said:
So well written, Neville. Love the repeating last 2 lines! I think your writing continues to get better....is that possible??...Christina
August 8th, 2019 10:44
Christina8 said:
So well written, Neville. Love the repeating last 2 lines! I think your writing continues to get better....is that possible??...Christina
August 8th, 2019 10:44
That Secret Place
Suresh said:
....you will only be complete, when your efforts make your lover sigh in estacy...
August 8th, 2019 10:05
Suresh said:
....you will only be complete, when your efforts make your lover sigh in estacy...
August 8th, 2019 10:05
That Secret Place
Fay Slimm. said:
A medley of clever double-entendres cascade effortlessly down these interpretive lines
- -Your aptness for setting alight imagination is second to none mon ami - - a real gasp of a read...........
August 8th, 2019 04:24
Fay Slimm. said:
A medley of clever double-entendres cascade effortlessly down these interpretive lines
- -Your aptness for setting alight imagination is second to none mon ami - - a real gasp of a read...........
August 8th, 2019 04:24
That Secret Place
Goldfinch60 said:
My secret place is where My River meets My Spirit. Good write Neville.
August 8th, 2019 02:49
Goldfinch60 said:
My secret place is where My River meets My Spirit. Good write Neville.
August 8th, 2019 02:49
That Secret Place
sylviasearcher said:
Well mine is a forest with a river and a waterfall but it is hidden under a rainbow so you probably would never find it ...
August 8th, 2019 02:39
sylviasearcher said:
Well mine is a forest with a river and a waterfall but it is hidden under a rainbow so you probably would never find it ...
August 8th, 2019 02:39
That Secret Place
orchidee said:
A good write N. I can\'t find ya. Oh, you\'re in a secret place, that\'s why!
Or as I say; \'Take me to a secret place, my love\' / \'Anywhere away from Orchi\'s singing\'. heehee.
August 8th, 2019 01:49
orchidee said:
A good write N. I can\'t find ya. Oh, you\'re in a secret place, that\'s why!
Or as I say; \'Take me to a secret place, my love\' / \'Anywhere away from Orchi\'s singing\'. heehee.
August 8th, 2019 01:49
Blood Red Rim
Goldfinch60 said:
And dance again you will with wonderful words like these.
August 8th, 2019 01:04
Goldfinch60 said:
And dance again you will with wonderful words like these.
August 8th, 2019 01:04
Blood Red Rim
Suresh said:
I feel that your recent posts are invoking a love deeply held, now bubbling to surface. Sown together they form laurels to love in all fields of sight, sound, touch, aroma and above all heart.
August 7th, 2019 11:09
Suresh said:
I feel that your recent posts are invoking a love deeply held, now bubbling to surface. Sown together they form laurels to love in all fields of sight, sound, touch, aroma and above all heart.
August 7th, 2019 11:09
Blood Red Rim
orchidee said:
Oh woe, I\'ve not found any ardour as yet. I\'ll put Fido in the dog-house, an then I\'ll find out all about it!
August 7th, 2019 11:05
orchidee said:
Oh woe, I\'ve not found any ardour as yet. I\'ll put Fido in the dog-house, an then I\'ll find out all about it!
August 7th, 2019 11:05
Blood Red Rim
Christina8 said:
This was really quite a stunning read, from beginning to end. Another I feel, worthy of the classics!
August 7th, 2019 10:11
Christina8 said:
This was really quite a stunning read, from beginning to end. Another I feel, worthy of the classics!
August 7th, 2019 10:11
Blood Red Rim
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Reading this exceptional write is uplifting my day!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
August 7th, 2019 08:57
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Reading this exceptional write is uplifting my day!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
August 7th, 2019 08:57
Blood Red Rim
Michael Edwards said:
Another lexiconic delight - a true work of the poetic art.
August 7th, 2019 08:07
Michael Edwards said:
Another lexiconic delight - a true work of the poetic art.
August 7th, 2019 08:07
Blood Red Rim
dusk arising said:
And who could knowingly disagree that the future may find your lost ones arms embracing your dancing soul.
A classical feel woven into a mysterious tapestry of lament today.
August 7th, 2019 05:17
dusk arising said:
And who could knowingly disagree that the future may find your lost ones arms embracing your dancing soul.
A classical feel woven into a mysterious tapestry of lament today.
August 7th, 2019 05:17
Blood Red Rim
Fay Slimm. said:
A spiritual feel to this verse of tribute to lost beauty Nev. - -- atmospheric and intriguing this write which allured me from title to final line................ Fay
August 7th, 2019 03:34
Fay Slimm. said:
A spiritual feel to this verse of tribute to lost beauty Nev. - -- atmospheric and intriguing this write which allured me from title to final line................ Fay
August 7th, 2019 03:34
Blood Red Rim
orchidee said:
Someone having fun there?! If so, glad someone is. Fido won\'t let me have anything of \'ardour\'! lol.
August 7th, 2019 02:42
orchidee said:
Someone having fun there?! If so, glad someone is. Fido won\'t let me have anything of \'ardour\'! lol.
August 7th, 2019 02:42
Why Do I Love Thee
Christina8 said:
Now this is a love poem worthy of the classics......right from the heart! Thanks for sharing this intimate ode....
August 6th, 2019 17:09
Christina8 said:
Now this is a love poem worthy of the classics......right from the heart! Thanks for sharing this intimate ode....
August 6th, 2019 17:09
Beautiful Bruises
Christina8 said:
Beautiful and memorable write. Felt as if I were there....
August 6th, 2019 17:07
Christina8 said:
Beautiful and memorable write. Felt as if I were there....
August 6th, 2019 17:07
Appetite for Words
Christina8 said:
I like this! My best friend calls me a \'walking talking encyclopedia\' and this reminds me of that!
August 6th, 2019 17:04
Christina8 said:
I like this! My best friend calls me a \'walking talking encyclopedia\' and this reminds me of that!
August 6th, 2019 17:04
Thinking Backwards
Goldfinch60 said:
Those times of loving in the past are so wonderfully appreciated.
August 6th, 2019 15:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Those times of loving in the past are so wonderfully appreciated.
August 6th, 2019 15:27
Thinking Backwards
PoeticBiscuit said:
I can’t explain it but your poems always put me in a trance! And I enjoy every bit of it.
August 6th, 2019 13:57
PoeticBiscuit said:
I can’t explain it but your poems always put me in a trance! And I enjoy every bit of it.
August 6th, 2019 13:57
Thinking Backwards
Christina8 said:
A wonderful reflective poem...though it seems sad in the last part when wondering where the laughter went....Really great one!
August 6th, 2019 10:07
Christina8 said:
A wonderful reflective poem...though it seems sad in the last part when wondering where the laughter went....Really great one!
August 6th, 2019 10:07
Thinking Backwards
dusk arising said:
Blimey, how you brought to mind love in the woodlands over Elan valley and a shower of naked rainfall.
Golden moments recalled and forgotten pieces of the jigsaw that is life.... pieces lost forever in places we can no longer go.
A beautiful, joyous poem of recollection and reflective sadness.
August 6th, 2019 05:33
dusk arising said:
Blimey, how you brought to mind love in the woodlands over Elan valley and a shower of naked rainfall.
Golden moments recalled and forgotten pieces of the jigsaw that is life.... pieces lost forever in places we can no longer go.
A beautiful, joyous poem of recollection and reflective sadness.
August 6th, 2019 05:33
Thinking Backwards
Fay Slimm. said:
Thank you a load...........\'tis good feeling treasured kind sir.
August 6th, 2019 05:03
Fay Slimm. said:
Thank you a load...........\'tis good feeling treasured kind sir.
August 6th, 2019 05:03
Thinking Backwards
Fay Slimm. said:
You expertly set the scene of past love in wonderful happenings that are never forgotten. I could feel that shower of sun-warmed forest rain -- - - another sigh of a write and delightful read.
August 6th, 2019 03:22
Fay Slimm. said:
You expertly set the scene of past love in wonderful happenings that are never forgotten. I could feel that shower of sun-warmed forest rain -- - - another sigh of a write and delightful read.
August 6th, 2019 03:22
Thinking Backwards
kevin browne said:
I like to spash a bit of green about the place, espcially if it\'s in the forest and isn\'t it where those echoes found you wrapped around those rigns of smoke dancing under the caopy of life, love and the remembering how to forge ahead searching and recapturing yourseld in those smoke ring. God bless, brother...!!!
August 6th, 2019 02:26
kevin browne said:
I like to spash a bit of green about the place, espcially if it\'s in the forest and isn\'t it where those echoes found you wrapped around those rigns of smoke dancing under the caopy of life, love and the remembering how to forge ahead searching and recapturing yourseld in those smoke ring. God bless, brother...!!!
August 6th, 2019 02:26
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