Comments received on poems by Neville



Turquoise
sylviasearcher said:

Oh this is a beautiful piece.
I had a discussion the other day about how green was turquoise.

I had to accept in the end it was blue.

January 17th, 2019 05:35

The Weavers Knot
dusk arising said:

Ah, the enigmatic female dances through your words, enchanting, enticing, amazing creatures.
Long live their mystery.

January 16th, 2019 14:45

The Weavers Knot
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good erotic write.

January 16th, 2019 13:36

The Weavers Knot
Neville said:

no... are you a guinea pig

January 16th, 2019 13:20

The Weavers Knot
orchidee said:

A swoony write N.

January 16th, 2019 13:05

The Weavers Knot
Fay Slimm. said:

So evocative with its gentle reminders of erotic alertness when bewitched by love. Great flow to this bit of heated adornment to my first poetic read of the morning.

January 16th, 2019 09:35

The Weavers Knot
Michael Edwards said:

My type of poetry - it just flows - a great read.

January 16th, 2019 09:14

The Weavers Knot
Neville said:

I\'m darn sure he is a witch... thank you for helping to load my brush

January 16th, 2019 08:37

The Weavers Knot
sylviasearcher said:

Oh I think this is a favourite of your erotic pieces

You paint your subject with a mystical magical sensual shade

January 16th, 2019 08:34

Borrowed Characters
Fay Slimm. said:

Borrowed indeed are the characters of people who like to ferment both hatred and judgement - - this verse hits the nail on its head Neville. in that we are all waiting on this beautiful planet for shadows as stated to disappear.

January 15th, 2019 10:43

Borrowed Characters
sylviasearcher said:

Oh I struggle because I want to have hope for the wretched and the damned too.

I want to believe that perhaps evil is man made and can be erased?

But people tell me I\'m naive and foolish and I know it\'s true. It\'s just my way...

January 15th, 2019 08:18

Borrowed Characters
dusk arising said:

Yep, sylviasearcher is right with her corinthians point...... all you/they need is love.
Except the last verse. This god is supposed to be full of love... but look at all the awful stuff that he, in his omnipotent glory, reigns down upon us. Worth our adoration? I think not.

January 15th, 2019 07:07

Borrowed Characters
orchidee said:

Me singing is a waste of space (lol), let alone some people being like a dark shadow, as a waste of space seemingly.

January 15th, 2019 06:48

Borrowed Characters
sylviasearcher said:

I actually really love this one.

It played like a 70s song in my head.

Feel like I need to quote Corinthians 13:1 for the second time today.

Now dis that surprise you?

January 15th, 2019 04:18

Street Art
psychofemale said:

I love to see street art :)

January 14th, 2019 22:07

Street Art
dusk arising said:

Though provoking and confusing .... but... i came out of it thinking about crowds of people gathering around a patch of pubic hair..... those little circles.... curly wirly pubes...
Now that would be street art... till the breeze picks up

January 14th, 2019 18:33

Street Art
orchidee said:

Doh! I\'m keen. I said it twice, I said \'I said it...…\' Wish I would shut up. lol

January 14th, 2019 13:27

Street Art
orchidee said:

You using that dystonia as an excuse, or maybe as a way to stop me swooning?! heehee.
I appreciate it\'s a real unpleasant condition to experience though.

January 14th, 2019 10:55

Street Art
Michael Edwards said:

Well I read into it but it doesn\'t matter does it? Great write which ever way you take it.

January 14th, 2019 04:28

Street Art
sylviasearcher said:

This instilled different notions in my head.

Very different.

Then I thought I didn\'t understand it at all.

But isn\'t that what is great about art. You think you see it, then you don\'t

Happy Monday 🙃

January 14th, 2019 03:39

Street Art
orchidee said:

Something about backs arching? Whoops! I would not know about this, of course. lol.

January 14th, 2019 03:09

Street Art
orchidee said:

Anything swoony in this if I read between the lines?! heehee.

January 14th, 2019 03:00

Street Art
Goldfinch60 said:

I have seen some wonderful street art in my time, \'tis a pity it gets cleaned away.

January 14th, 2019 02:33

Keep These Broken Shards
Gary Edward Geraci said:

An interesting and mystical write plunging the reader into the realm of supernatural possibilities.

January 13th, 2019 18:23

Keep These Broken Shards
Goldfinch60 said:

Superb write and thinking Neveille.

January 13th, 2019 15:15

Keep These Broken Shards
dusk arising said:

I did exactly a bid. So far it is keeping all sorts of lovers from my bedroom. Should i break more crocs?

January 13th, 2019 14:00

Keep These Broken Shards
sylviasearcher said:

This reminds me of something I remember hearing once. And now it is buzzing in my head.

Broken shards like \'collisions\' help us grow

January 13th, 2019 12:41

Keep These Broken Shards
orchidee said:

I didn\'t get the hang of this. I sat on a shard instead, then sang high! doh!

January 13th, 2019 10:41

Keep These Broken Shards
Michael Edwards said:

Love the simplicity of this delightful write - so original and a sure fave - first for several months.

January 13th, 2019 04:02

Leave the Buttons on Your Blouse Undone
orchidee said:

Well, some peoples are still having fun on \'ere. I\'m glad to hear it! lol.
Ohh I dunno, I must do something else. Get a veggie sausage roll from Greggs or summat.

January 12th, 2019 05:46



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