Comments received on poems by Neville
Paper Cuts
Suresh said:
I had one yesterday, but not as painful as those you penned
Intense
May 7th, 2019 10:31
Suresh said:
I had one yesterday, but not as painful as those you penned
Intense
May 7th, 2019 10:31
Ghosts & Shells
Suresh said:
Words of the Poets mature with age, like all fine things in life.
Once penned, the world to read for eternity.
Ghosts and Shells - in the caldron of numbers, but not you.
May 7th, 2019 10:15
Suresh said:
Words of the Poets mature with age, like all fine things in life.
Once penned, the world to read for eternity.
Ghosts and Shells - in the caldron of numbers, but not you.
May 7th, 2019 10:15
Ghosts & Shells
moordykspot2 said:
Poetry is a wonderful avenue of expression as you my friend superbly illustrate thank you
May 7th, 2019 09:36
moordykspot2 said:
Poetry is a wonderful avenue of expression as you my friend superbly illustrate thank you
May 7th, 2019 09:36
Ghosts & Shells
orchidee said:
Real poets need no admiration (Fay just said that), so.... this is a load of rubbish! lol.
I must be in a mood. I forgot me Horlicks last night!
Woof! Fido said I\'ve not quite got the hang of comments. heehee.
You can descend on my poems like a ton of bricks. I got me umbrella for when the bricks fall on me.
May 7th, 2019 08:08
orchidee said:
Real poets need no admiration (Fay just said that), so.... this is a load of rubbish! lol.
I must be in a mood. I forgot me Horlicks last night!
Woof! Fido said I\'ve not quite got the hang of comments. heehee.
You can descend on my poems like a ton of bricks. I got me umbrella for when the bricks fall on me.
May 7th, 2019 08:08
Ghosts & Shells
Poetic Dan said:
Fantastic last lines my friend, brilliantly done but what else would we expect ;)
May 7th, 2019 04:08
Poetic Dan said:
Fantastic last lines my friend, brilliantly done but what else would we expect ;)
May 7th, 2019 04:08
Ghosts & Shells
Fay Slimm. said:
Real poets need no admiration but feed on word-mindfulness which is a gift........... former selves fade when the Muse takes central stage. Such a good first read of my day - - thanks Nev............ x
May 7th, 2019 03:58
Fay Slimm. said:
Real poets need no admiration but feed on word-mindfulness which is a gift........... former selves fade when the Muse takes central stage. Such a good first read of my day - - thanks Nev............ x
May 7th, 2019 03:58
Dear Capricorn
SerenWise said:
Beautifully written, I particularly love the first verse and the metaphor used there.
May 7th, 2019 01:30
SerenWise said:
Beautifully written, I particularly love the first verse and the metaphor used there.
May 7th, 2019 01:30
A Handful of Nightingales
Fay Slimm. said:
How did I miss this one ? - - ha - I love double dares and I like the idea of nightingales in my garden....... a good read to contemplate - - - ooooh - is that my phone ringing ? ......... x
May 6th, 2019 16:44
Fay Slimm. said:
How did I miss this one ? - - ha - I love double dares and I like the idea of nightingales in my garden....... a good read to contemplate - - - ooooh - is that my phone ringing ? ......... x
May 6th, 2019 16:44
Dear Capricorn
moordykspot2 said:
Heartfelt It strikes at emotive feeling my friend Another string to your talented bow. Thankyou
May 6th, 2019 15:43
moordykspot2 said:
Heartfelt It strikes at emotive feeling my friend Another string to your talented bow. Thankyou
May 6th, 2019 15:43
Dear Capricorn
Suresh said:
A snippet of mine, best describes my feeling on your well composed words here
Those physical scars, for world to see,
Those etched in mind, are only for me
May 6th, 2019 11:43
Suresh said:
A snippet of mine, best describes my feeling on your well composed words here
Those physical scars, for world to see,
Those etched in mind, are only for me
May 6th, 2019 11:43
Dear Capricorn
Michael Edwards said:
I interpreted this in the same way as Fay before I read her comment - a poignant write - cheers Neville.
May 6th, 2019 07:59
Michael Edwards said:
I interpreted this in the same way as Fay before I read her comment - a poignant write - cheers Neville.
May 6th, 2019 07:59
A Peck Above the Brow
moordykspot2 said:
some great thinking to be done in expectation after reading thissuper write. thank you
May 6th, 2019 06:35
moordykspot2 said:
some great thinking to be done in expectation after reading thissuper write. thank you
May 6th, 2019 06:35
Dear Capricorn
Fay Slimm. said:
A tender and understanding verse on the effect an abused childhood leaves behind - -- - though a loving finalé to end this poignant reminder . Thank you for sharing it Nev.
May 6th, 2019 04:37
Fay Slimm. said:
A tender and understanding verse on the effect an abused childhood leaves behind - -- - though a loving finalé to end this poignant reminder . Thank you for sharing it Nev.
May 6th, 2019 04:37
A Peck Above the Brow
Goldfinch60 said:
The tenderness flows through you words in wonder.
May 6th, 2019 00:48
Goldfinch60 said:
The tenderness flows through you words in wonder.
May 6th, 2019 00:48
War is Not for Lovers
Suresh said:
My god, the entwining of the two wars so eloquently expressed.
One day I\'ll catch up
May 5th, 2019 10:59
Suresh said:
My god, the entwining of the two wars so eloquently expressed.
One day I\'ll catch up
May 5th, 2019 10:59
A Peck Above the Brow
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - just the place a romantic lip-shaped peck should aim for........ liking the mint-fresh idea too and love the concept of this tender write..... ...
May 5th, 2019 03:48
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - just the place a romantic lip-shaped peck should aim for........ liking the mint-fresh idea too and love the concept of this tender write..... ...
May 5th, 2019 03:48
A Peck Above the Brow
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Sensitive tender write N
Well done
May 5th, 2019 03:28
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Sensitive tender write N
Well done
May 5th, 2019 03:28
I Am What I Am
Poetic Dan said:
I don\'t believe much
But I believe you
A man I admire
I feel the truth
As a mountain you stand
Perfectly imperfect
I\'m honestly honoured
To know your spirit
May 5th, 2019 03:04
Poetic Dan said:
I don\'t believe much
But I believe you
A man I admire
I feel the truth
As a mountain you stand
Perfectly imperfect
I\'m honestly honoured
To know your spirit
May 5th, 2019 03:04
I Am What I Am
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good and very true write.
I too am me and agree with all your nots.
May 5th, 2019 00:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good and very true write.
I too am me and agree with all your nots.
May 5th, 2019 00:33
Versal Law
Fay Slimm. said:
You create gentle erotica so easily Nev. - -- and after an extra busy day I shall read this again and take the feel of that Versal Law with me to bed..... and so to dream.......... x
May 4th, 2019 16:08
Fay Slimm. said:
You create gentle erotica so easily Nev. - -- and after an extra busy day I shall read this again and take the feel of that Versal Law with me to bed..... and so to dream.......... x
May 4th, 2019 16:08
I Am What I Am
MendedFences27 said:
\"I am Me,\" and you are you, no two the same. Billions of people in the world and none exactly alike. There may be similarities, but also glaring differences. So what is it that brings two together forever. What intangible thing we call love holds the two in bondage? It seems there will never be an answer to that question.
Your poem is a statement, factual, and truthful. It asks someone for many things to avoid. Finding such a person is Man\'s eternal quest. Your statement though brings thoughts to one\'s mind and causes a self search for answers. Very insightful and illuminating piece. Loved it - Phil A.
May 4th, 2019 13:21
MendedFences27 said:
\"I am Me,\" and you are you, no two the same. Billions of people in the world and none exactly alike. There may be similarities, but also glaring differences. So what is it that brings two together forever. What intangible thing we call love holds the two in bondage? It seems there will never be an answer to that question.
Your poem is a statement, factual, and truthful. It asks someone for many things to avoid. Finding such a person is Man\'s eternal quest. Your statement though brings thoughts to one\'s mind and causes a self search for answers. Very insightful and illuminating piece. Loved it - Phil A.
May 4th, 2019 13:21
I Am What I Am
Brycycle said:
We are who we are and we should all be proud of that
- lovely write
May 4th, 2019 12:48
Brycycle said:
We are who we are and we should all be proud of that
- lovely write
May 4th, 2019 12:48
I Am What I Am
SerenWise said:
This is fantastic, I love how the structure presents different ways of reading and interpreting, nice work!
May 4th, 2019 11:53
SerenWise said:
This is fantastic, I love how the structure presents different ways of reading and interpreting, nice work!
May 4th, 2019 11:53
I Am What I Am
Michael Edwards said:
A super and inspired construct - so what is me?
May 4th, 2019 10:42
Michael Edwards said:
A super and inspired construct - so what is me?
May 4th, 2019 10:42
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