Comments received on poems by Neville
The Freedom of Slaves
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Neville, those eagles show the freedom and peacefulness that could be everybody\'s.
April 8th, 2019 00:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Neville, those eagles show the freedom and peacefulness that could be everybody\'s.
April 8th, 2019 00:33
The Freedom of Slaves
dusk arising said:
Slaves are human beings and like you and me and our loved ones have human awareness, desisres, needs and hopes.
Your writing today is so powerful a reminder of injustices in our world. Love the way you have started with such an innocent mind picture drawing your reader in and finally zapping with a cruel reality.
April 8th, 2019 00:21
dusk arising said:
Slaves are human beings and like you and me and our loved ones have human awareness, desisres, needs and hopes.
Your writing today is so powerful a reminder of injustices in our world. Love the way you have started with such an innocent mind picture drawing your reader in and finally zapping with a cruel reality.
April 8th, 2019 00:21
The Freedom of Slaves
Fay Slimm. said:
The wonder of flying to freedom never ceases to draw eyes of the captured I imagine - - a great tribute to the majesty of birds like the eagle who shows the way to the stars will always be there. x
April 7th, 2019 16:37
Fay Slimm. said:
The wonder of flying to freedom never ceases to draw eyes of the captured I imagine - - a great tribute to the majesty of birds like the eagle who shows the way to the stars will always be there. x
April 7th, 2019 16:37
The Freedom of Slaves
Poetic Dan said:
What a brilliant way to end my day
Thinking of that feeling will be mine, one day.
Thank you very much
April 7th, 2019 16:15
Poetic Dan said:
What a brilliant way to end my day
Thinking of that feeling will be mine, one day.
Thank you very much
April 7th, 2019 16:15
The Freedom of Slaves
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Your wonderful poem reminds me of the great song, BORN FREE...
“Born free and life is worth living
But only worth living
‘Cause you’re born”
~Laura~🌻
April 7th, 2019 13:38
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Your wonderful poem reminds me of the great song, BORN FREE...
“Born free and life is worth living
But only worth living
‘Cause you’re born”
~Laura~🌻
April 7th, 2019 13:38
The Freedom of Slaves
Suresh said:
For a moment I thought you were going somewhere else (eagles circling usually means death) till I got to the last line.
To be eternally free is everyone\'s BIRTH RIGHT.
Individuals labor is for sale, but not the individual itself.
April 7th, 2019 11:53
Suresh said:
For a moment I thought you were going somewhere else (eagles circling usually means death) till I got to the last line.
To be eternally free is everyone\'s BIRTH RIGHT.
Individuals labor is for sale, but not the individual itself.
April 7th, 2019 11:53
Ballerina
orchidee said:
Reminds me of \'Dance of the sugar plum fairy\' by someone or another. I\'m not \'into\' classical stuff as an expert, as you see! lol. Some Chai-coughski bloke it is.
April 6th, 2019 07:07
orchidee said:
Reminds me of \'Dance of the sugar plum fairy\' by someone or another. I\'m not \'into\' classical stuff as an expert, as you see! lol. Some Chai-coughski bloke it is.
April 6th, 2019 07:07
Ballerina
Fay Slimm. said:
A love affair to remember when ending with such a tender confession - -- an evocative weekend read my friend.
April 6th, 2019 04:28
Fay Slimm. said:
A love affair to remember when ending with such a tender confession - -- an evocative weekend read my friend.
April 6th, 2019 04:28
Our Lady of the Harbour
Goldfinch60 said:
Brilliant write and take if histiric value.
April 5th, 2019 14:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Brilliant write and take if histiric value.
April 5th, 2019 14:52
Our Lady of the Harbour
Suresh said:
Much has been written, but you captured it well.
April 5th, 2019 11:08
Suresh said:
Much has been written, but you captured it well.
April 5th, 2019 11:08
Our Lady of the Harbour
Michael Edwards said:
Today\'s the day for original poems - love this one - top score Neville.
April 5th, 2019 10:26
Michael Edwards said:
Today\'s the day for original poems - love this one - top score Neville.
April 5th, 2019 10:26
Our Lady of the Harbour
SerenWise said:
Beautifully written! Very evocative and enjoyable read.
April 5th, 2019 10:23
SerenWise said:
Beautifully written! Very evocative and enjoyable read.
April 5th, 2019 10:23
Our Lady of the Harbour
dusk arising said:
A scorcher of a pile for the maid of Orleans.
What horrible times those must have been for all humanity.
April 5th, 2019 09:14
dusk arising said:
A scorcher of a pile for the maid of Orleans.
What horrible times those must have been for all humanity.
April 5th, 2019 09:14
Our Lady of the Harbour
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville. Ahh, I can\'t meet her then? Did you meet her in person?! Such a short life. I\'ve not brushed up on her history.
April 5th, 2019 03:59
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville. Ahh, I can\'t meet her then? Did you meet her in person?! Such a short life. I\'ve not brushed up on her history.
April 5th, 2019 03:59
Our Lady of the Harbour
Fay Slimm. said:
Never before have I read a more interesting tale of brave Joan who rode brazenly draped in Saint George - her fate was a scorcher but lest we forget this verse raises issues we may never have known.An engaging write Nev.
April 5th, 2019 03:59
Fay Slimm. said:
Never before have I read a more interesting tale of brave Joan who rode brazenly draped in Saint George - her fate was a scorcher but lest we forget this verse raises issues we may never have known.An engaging write Nev.
April 5th, 2019 03:59
A Thirst Well Quenched
SerenWise said:
I really enjoyed this, simplicity in perfection.
April 4th, 2019 12:41
SerenWise said:
I really enjoyed this, simplicity in perfection.
April 4th, 2019 12:41
Read Yourself
Poetic Dan said:
This has just blown me away!
It\'s What I feel every time I come and share with you and all of these other magnificent souls on this site but with this one, I would suit you sir!
Hats off!
Much appreciated
With love and respect
April 4th, 2019 08:36
Poetic Dan said:
This has just blown me away!
It\'s What I feel every time I come and share with you and all of these other magnificent souls on this site but with this one, I would suit you sir!
Hats off!
Much appreciated
With love and respect
April 4th, 2019 08:36
Read Yourself
dusk arising said:
Love this expression of a lifetimes commitment to a lovers memory. For once she has read this and you enter her heart, then forever these words will bring her to that tender place within you where emotional attachments cement and never depart.
Into my favourites. Really enjoyed this.
April 4th, 2019 06:21
dusk arising said:
Love this expression of a lifetimes commitment to a lovers memory. For once she has read this and you enter her heart, then forever these words will bring her to that tender place within you where emotional attachments cement and never depart.
Into my favourites. Really enjoyed this.
April 4th, 2019 06:21
Read Yourself
Fay Slimm. said:
Hearts will be aflutter after viewing this sensitive verse that I for one am doubly reading - -- love it\'s honesty and into my faves this one goes......
April 4th, 2019 04:24
Fay Slimm. said:
Hearts will be aflutter after viewing this sensitive verse that I for one am doubly reading - -- love it\'s honesty and into my faves this one goes......
April 4th, 2019 04:24
Read Yourself
orchidee said:
Yes, my love. Swoon! heehee. Woof! No excitement for me, says Fido.
April 4th, 2019 03:55
orchidee said:
Yes, my love. Swoon! heehee. Woof! No excitement for me, says Fido.
April 4th, 2019 03:55
Read Yourself
sylviasearcher said:
There’s a lot of love poems on here lately, they’re nice but make me feel like I should be able to write something soft and lovely...
But maybe this is about a love of poetry or of the word?
April 4th, 2019 03:25
sylviasearcher said:
There’s a lot of love poems on here lately, they’re nice but make me feel like I should be able to write something soft and lovely...
But maybe this is about a love of poetry or of the word?
April 4th, 2019 03:25
Big Empty Space
Goldfinch60 said:
Such an emotive write Neville, may that space soon be filled with joy and love.
April 4th, 2019 00:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Such an emotive write Neville, may that space soon be filled with joy and love.
April 4th, 2019 00:08
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