Comments received on poems by Neville



Orchid
orchidee said:

What you doing, writing about me?! heehee. Me singing is not beautiful, so it\'s a true write, to be sure!
I was an orchid in a storm today too. Not much rain, so it seemed like a sand storm, blowing dust, blossom, etc. Could hardly see a thing! Horrid.

April 27th, 2019 09:59

A Travelling Man
Fay Slimm. said:

This I can relate to as I watch seagulls too -- ha -- and have baked a decent loaf or two -- looking for miracles though and hoping they yet happen - or am I a lost cause.... glad to read your very first offering on this friendly site my romantic friend.

April 27th, 2019 05:51

Orchid
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Thanks for sharing NEV and a reminder that BEAUTY is transient. Im only 31 so I maintain much of my Inner & Outer BEAUTY. But BRIAN & I have found TRUE LOVE and the Beauty of True Love never diminishes : AMEN
Yours ANGELA 🧡

April 27th, 2019 04:41

Orchid
Fay Slimm. said:

Beauty they say is in the eye of the beholder so lets hope that storm-torn orchid will stand taller when love calls again - - - interesting read Nev.

April 27th, 2019 03:35

Orchid
dusk arising said:

Ouch!
A beauty beheld can indeed lose its magnificence when the storm of argument taints the appeal.

April 27th, 2019 03:24

In a Moment Gone
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true, each moment is so precious.

April 27th, 2019 00:18

In a Moment Gone
orchidee said:

A fine write N.

April 26th, 2019 10:48

In a Moment Gone
Suresh said:

MOMENT gives you hope
ETERNALLY never happens

Thnx Nev

P.S. Goes well with my response to your comment on my poem \'Let\'s take a Walk\'

April 26th, 2019 10:33

In a Moment Gone
dusk arising said:

Thats just what the mother-in-law said to me in bed last nite

(she was only bringing me a nice cup of cocoa to help me sleep).

April 26th, 2019 10:27

In a Moment Gone
Fay Slimm. said:

Oh how true and so poetically put .....good to have you back posting again Nev.

April 26th, 2019 10:23

In a Moment Gone
SerenWise said:

Simple, nice sentiment

April 26th, 2019 10:14

Ten Dead Chickens
Suresh said:

You can take such subject and so poetically write about it, that\'s a gift.

And yes, the Dust Devil/Dust Storm/ Dust Spout probably is the culprit.

April 25th, 2019 12:01

The Pyramid of Longing
Fay Slimm. said:

A triangle of romantic angles built on tender reflections of the journey love takes to all hidden places.....I am real glad I caught up with this sizzling read........... x

April 25th, 2019 06:45

Ten Dead Chickens
Poetic Dan said:

Brilliantly done from lifes mysterious mysteries.


April 25th, 2019 04:20

Ten Dead Chickens
Frederick Samson said:

Strange

April 24th, 2019 09:06

Ten Dead Chickens
dusk arising said:

There\'s more goes on than that which we can perceive.

April 24th, 2019 08:52

Head Rest
dusk arising said:

Oh dear, that last verse doth tell of lifes experiences.
However planting of seeds - wilderness or scented garden - tells of a life of a sower.
(Odd that to sow seeds should be spelled sew, therefore i should have referred to the \'life of a sewer\' which seemed a tad unkind).

April 24th, 2019 08:10

Ten Dead Chickens
Goldfinch60 said:

Maybe that Shaman was right, some deaths can be inexplicable in other ways. Enjoyed the tale.

April 24th, 2019 03:15

Ten Dead Chickens
orchidee said:

Spookiness,N! Fido would be a guard-dog to them.

April 24th, 2019 02:08

Ten Dead Chickens
Fay Slimm. said:

Ah - just read your comment at the top - so had to adjust my own in -put a bit........ Wow- - what a sad mystery and told with your flair it had my attention from the first line Nev..........spirits or no those chicks will stay with me all day - - poor things.......... Fay x

April 24th, 2019 02:06

Head Rest
Goldfinch60 said:

It does happen until the right one comes along.

April 24th, 2019 00:12

Autumn
Fay Slimm. said:

A summary of passing life-seasons and written with deep reflection on stages we all have to face - - love the metaphor of
Mourning summer

Contemplating winter

Anticipating spring - -
yet stuck in the autumn years --

I for one take you just as you are my luverly friend.

Glad I caught up with this read today.............. x

April 23rd, 2019 13:39

Head Rest
Fay Slimm. said:

A well and truly smitten confession of undying love resting its case... a most tender read my friend.

April 23rd, 2019 03:46

Head Rest
Poetic Dan said:

You be a man chocolate bar then, unwrapped enjoyed and then discarded!

Sounds a good way to go to me!
Nice one

April 23rd, 2019 03:16

Head Rest
orchidee said:

I\'m gonna plant some flower seeds - or I might swoon! Or Fido won\'t let me have \'excitement\'. lol.

April 23rd, 2019 02:19

When Duty Calls
Goldfinch60 said:

Very true Neville, very true.

April 22nd, 2019 13:55

The Company of Angels
Fay Slimm. said:

First time of viewing this piece of work Nev. Scene set at attempts to deny the Reaper his quota of souls by salacine burning and prayers etc.- - futile maybe but how bent those knees of love pleading for the one with broken wings. Your friend must have cherished this spiritual tribute.

April 22nd, 2019 13:50

When Duty Calls
SerenWise said:

A beautiful sentiment wrapped in a lovely rhyme

April 22nd, 2019 12:37

When Duty Calls
Suresh said:

OK!!!!!!

April 22nd, 2019 11:03

When Duty Calls
Michael Edwards said:

A special message which you have captured with such elegance.

April 22nd, 2019 10:25



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