Comments received on poems by Neville
Ten Dead Chickens
Suresh said:
You can take such subject and so poetically write about it, that\'s a gift.
And yes, the Dust Devil/Dust Storm/ Dust Spout probably is the culprit.
April 25th, 2019 12:01
Suresh said:
You can take such subject and so poetically write about it, that\'s a gift.
And yes, the Dust Devil/Dust Storm/ Dust Spout probably is the culprit.
April 25th, 2019 12:01
The Pyramid of Longing
Fay Slimm. said:
A triangle of romantic angles built on tender reflections of the journey love takes to all hidden places.....I am real glad I caught up with this sizzling read........... x
April 25th, 2019 06:45
Fay Slimm. said:
A triangle of romantic angles built on tender reflections of the journey love takes to all hidden places.....I am real glad I caught up with this sizzling read........... x
April 25th, 2019 06:45
Ten Dead Chickens
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliantly done from lifes mysterious mysteries.
April 25th, 2019 04:20
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliantly done from lifes mysterious mysteries.
April 25th, 2019 04:20
Ten Dead Chickens
dusk arising said:
There\'s more goes on than that which we can perceive.
April 24th, 2019 08:52
dusk arising said:
There\'s more goes on than that which we can perceive.
April 24th, 2019 08:52
Head Rest
dusk arising said:
Oh dear, that last verse doth tell of lifes experiences.
However planting of seeds - wilderness or scented garden - tells of a life of a sower.
(Odd that to sow seeds should be spelled sew, therefore i should have referred to the \'life of a sewer\' which seemed a tad unkind).
April 24th, 2019 08:10
dusk arising said:
Oh dear, that last verse doth tell of lifes experiences.
However planting of seeds - wilderness or scented garden - tells of a life of a sower.
(Odd that to sow seeds should be spelled sew, therefore i should have referred to the \'life of a sewer\' which seemed a tad unkind).
April 24th, 2019 08:10
Ten Dead Chickens
Goldfinch60 said:
Maybe that Shaman was right, some deaths can be inexplicable in other ways. Enjoyed the tale.
April 24th, 2019 03:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Maybe that Shaman was right, some deaths can be inexplicable in other ways. Enjoyed the tale.
April 24th, 2019 03:15
Ten Dead Chickens
orchidee said:
Spookiness,N! Fido would be a guard-dog to them.
April 24th, 2019 02:08
orchidee said:
Spookiness,N! Fido would be a guard-dog to them.
April 24th, 2019 02:08
Ten Dead Chickens
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - just read your comment at the top - so had to adjust my own in -put a bit........ Wow- - what a sad mystery and told with your flair it had my attention from the first line Nev..........spirits or no those chicks will stay with me all day - - poor things.......... Fay x
April 24th, 2019 02:06
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - just read your comment at the top - so had to adjust my own in -put a bit........ Wow- - what a sad mystery and told with your flair it had my attention from the first line Nev..........spirits or no those chicks will stay with me all day - - poor things.......... Fay x
April 24th, 2019 02:06
Autumn
Fay Slimm. said:
A summary of passing life-seasons and written with deep reflection on stages we all have to face - - love the metaphor of
Mourning summer
Contemplating winter
Anticipating spring - -
yet stuck in the autumn years --
I for one take you just as you are my luverly friend.
Glad I caught up with this read today.............. x
April 23rd, 2019 13:39
Fay Slimm. said:
A summary of passing life-seasons and written with deep reflection on stages we all have to face - - love the metaphor of
Mourning summer
Contemplating winter
Anticipating spring - -
yet stuck in the autumn years --
I for one take you just as you are my luverly friend.
Glad I caught up with this read today.............. x
April 23rd, 2019 13:39
Head Rest
Fay Slimm. said:
A well and truly smitten confession of undying love resting its case... a most tender read my friend.
April 23rd, 2019 03:46
Fay Slimm. said:
A well and truly smitten confession of undying love resting its case... a most tender read my friend.
April 23rd, 2019 03:46
Head Rest
Poetic Dan said:
You be a man chocolate bar then, unwrapped enjoyed and then discarded!
Sounds a good way to go to me!
Nice one
April 23rd, 2019 03:16
Poetic Dan said:
You be a man chocolate bar then, unwrapped enjoyed and then discarded!
Sounds a good way to go to me!
Nice one
April 23rd, 2019 03:16
Head Rest
orchidee said:
I\'m gonna plant some flower seeds - or I might swoon! Or Fido won\'t let me have \'excitement\'. lol.
April 23rd, 2019 02:19
orchidee said:
I\'m gonna plant some flower seeds - or I might swoon! Or Fido won\'t let me have \'excitement\'. lol.
April 23rd, 2019 02:19
The Company of Angels
Fay Slimm. said:
First time of viewing this piece of work Nev. Scene set at attempts to deny the Reaper his quota of souls by salacine burning and prayers etc.- - futile maybe but how bent those knees of love pleading for the one with broken wings. Your friend must have cherished this spiritual tribute.
April 22nd, 2019 13:50
Fay Slimm. said:
First time of viewing this piece of work Nev. Scene set at attempts to deny the Reaper his quota of souls by salacine burning and prayers etc.- - futile maybe but how bent those knees of love pleading for the one with broken wings. Your friend must have cherished this spiritual tribute.
April 22nd, 2019 13:50
When Duty Calls
SerenWise said:
A beautiful sentiment wrapped in a lovely rhyme
April 22nd, 2019 12:37
SerenWise said:
A beautiful sentiment wrapped in a lovely rhyme
April 22nd, 2019 12:37
When Duty Calls
Michael Edwards said:
A special message which you have captured with such elegance.
April 22nd, 2019 10:25
Michael Edwards said:
A special message which you have captured with such elegance.
April 22nd, 2019 10:25
When Duty Calls
dusk arising said:
I really like this, especially the last line which in fact validates the whole.
Not only am i going to save this as a favourite but i shall also print it, frame it and hang it in my hallway.
For the wisdom it contains.
April 22nd, 2019 06:22
dusk arising said:
I really like this, especially the last line which in fact validates the whole.
Not only am i going to save this as a favourite but i shall also print it, frame it and hang it in my hallway.
For the wisdom it contains.
April 22nd, 2019 06:22
When Duty Calls
Fay Slimm. said:
A pleasure to read this tempting invitation my friend.
April 22nd, 2019 05:38
Fay Slimm. said:
A pleasure to read this tempting invitation my friend.
April 22nd, 2019 05:38
Feral Girls
Michael Edwards said:
Got to get some of that margarine - is it easily available. Enjoyed!
April 21st, 2019 09:55
Michael Edwards said:
Got to get some of that margarine - is it easily available. Enjoyed!
April 21st, 2019 09:55
Feral Girls
orchidee said:
Did they know the \'Carry on\' town of Fircombe? Woof! Enough, Fido says. lol.
April 21st, 2019 07:42
orchidee said:
Did they know the \'Carry on\' town of Fircombe? Woof! Enough, Fido says. lol.
April 21st, 2019 07:42
Feral Girls
dusk arising said:
My wide grin at foo-kin-ya soon faded for the plight of so many unfortunates whom our \'civilisation\' has preyed upon.
Confused by your strange finale, I was enticed to re-read the whole several times.
Still scratching my head... come on... you\'ve gotta explain \'a mercury and a margarine fix\' ??
April 21st, 2019 04:12
dusk arising said:
My wide grin at foo-kin-ya soon faded for the plight of so many unfortunates whom our \'civilisation\' has preyed upon.
Confused by your strange finale, I was enticed to re-read the whole several times.
Still scratching my head... come on... you\'ve gotta explain \'a mercury and a margarine fix\' ??
April 21st, 2019 04:12
Feral Girls
Fay Slimm. said:
A woeful tale of female downfall - feral girls who often through no fault of their own lose all hope of dreams - Expertly told this tragedy of Foo Kin Ya..... saved in my favourites and thanks Nev for the sad but needed reminder.
April 21st, 2019 03:55
Fay Slimm. said:
A woeful tale of female downfall - feral girls who often through no fault of their own lose all hope of dreams - Expertly told this tragedy of Foo Kin Ya..... saved in my favourites and thanks Nev for the sad but needed reminder.
April 21st, 2019 03:55
Feral Girls
Poetic Dan said:
That sounds like they have one hell of a kick!
Really Enjoyed a bit strange read
April 21st, 2019 03:41
Poetic Dan said:
That sounds like they have one hell of a kick!
Really Enjoyed a bit strange read
April 21st, 2019 03:41
Fine Young Disciples
Suresh said:
There are some social norms that humans have placed on themselves, either knowing or should have known are doomed to fail. One of these is coupling of two people for life.
Similarly, expecting two people to love each other for life.
Your ending lines, EACH AND EVERY ONE OF US FINE YOUNG DECIPLES has thrown me off for it implies multiple people.
Maybe I\'m just reading it wrong,
Relationships are hard.
April 20th, 2019 11:01
Suresh said:
There are some social norms that humans have placed on themselves, either knowing or should have known are doomed to fail. One of these is coupling of two people for life.
Similarly, expecting two people to love each other for life.
Your ending lines, EACH AND EVERY ONE OF US FINE YOUNG DECIPLES has thrown me off for it implies multiple people.
Maybe I\'m just reading it wrong,
Relationships are hard.
April 20th, 2019 11:01
Fine Young Disciples
Fay Slimm. said:
A sound and caring piece of advice Nev. -- life is no fairytale and as disciples we learn about love as we discover its faces in risks taken. A deep and engaging read.
April 20th, 2019 10:33
Fay Slimm. said:
A sound and caring piece of advice Nev. -- life is no fairytale and as disciples we learn about love as we discover its faces in risks taken. A deep and engaging read.
April 20th, 2019 10:33
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