Comments received on poems by Neville
Heart
Fay Slimm. said:
This perceptive write sees through the hardest of outer shells that abuse builds around unhappy females - such is life with many today - and a final stanza that could not be bettered brings tears to the eyes dear friend.
March 28th, 2019 04:58
Fay Slimm. said:
This perceptive write sees through the hardest of outer shells that abuse builds around unhappy females - such is life with many today - and a final stanza that could not be bettered brings tears to the eyes dear friend.
March 28th, 2019 04:58
Back Streets of Banjul
Goldfinch60 said:
Thank you for showing us these words Neville. My admiration for your volunteering work is profound.
In this world there is so much abundance but those that have it are much too greedy to share it with others.
March 28th, 2019 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Thank you for showing us these words Neville. My admiration for your volunteering work is profound.
In this world there is so much abundance but those that have it are much too greedy to share it with others.
March 28th, 2019 01:44
Back Streets of Banjul
Suresh said:
Humanity has lost all integrity. We need to find that valley, in Ann Rand\'s novel - Atlas Shrugged
March 27th, 2019 11:40
Suresh said:
Humanity has lost all integrity. We need to find that valley, in Ann Rand\'s novel - Atlas Shrugged
March 27th, 2019 11:40
Back Streets of Banjul
Michael Edwards said:
I help a lot with a charity which supports a school in Ghana which provides opportunties for under privileged children who can\'t afford the cost of a uniform to go state schools. The living conditions and mortality rates are hard to take on board. Fine work Neville.
March 27th, 2019 10:00
Michael Edwards said:
I help a lot with a charity which supports a school in Ghana which provides opportunties for under privileged children who can\'t afford the cost of a uniform to go state schools. The living conditions and mortality rates are hard to take on board. Fine work Neville.
March 27th, 2019 10:00
Back Streets of Banjul
Fay Slimm. said:
Conditions for asking abound in such places - - - the term \"good price\" shows how needy the populace - bless you for that \"stint\" of voluntary work among the underprivileged there dear Nev.and thanks for sharing the feel of their plight.
March 27th, 2019 04:54
Fay Slimm. said:
Conditions for asking abound in such places - - - the term \"good price\" shows how needy the populace - bless you for that \"stint\" of voluntary work among the underprivileged there dear Nev.and thanks for sharing the feel of their plight.
March 27th, 2019 04:54
Back Streets of Banjul
dusk arising said:
Did it all change with decimalisation into tenpea?
I\'ve never been to Africa nor the places where westerners are surrounded by beggars. The sight of such things on screen have put me off. Your words here are a stern reminder.
March 27th, 2019 04:50
dusk arising said:
Did it all change with decimalisation into tenpea?
I\'ve never been to Africa nor the places where westerners are surrounded by beggars. The sight of such things on screen have put me off. Your words here are a stern reminder.
March 27th, 2019 04:50
Stuck
MendedFences27 said:
They say alcohol is good for unsticking things, but I\'ve tried it and it doesn\'t work as well as one would think, I got stuck with the tab.
You give us three views from the other side of commonality. Each one raises a question in the mind of the reader. Never can we look at Medals, Museums, or Metamorphosis in the same way. Great write.- Phil A.
March 26th, 2019 14:49
MendedFences27 said:
They say alcohol is good for unsticking things, but I\'ve tried it and it doesn\'t work as well as one would think, I got stuck with the tab.
You give us three views from the other side of commonality. Each one raises a question in the mind of the reader. Never can we look at Medals, Museums, or Metamorphosis in the same way. Great write.- Phil A.
March 26th, 2019 14:49
Stuck
dusk arising said:
I was glued to this from start to finish.
Your last stanza could be the concise version of the second half of my biography.
March 26th, 2019 13:30
dusk arising said:
I was glued to this from start to finish.
Your last stanza could be the concise version of the second half of my biography.
March 26th, 2019 13:30
Stuck
Goldfinch60 said:
Good one Neville, we can always find an adhesive remover so that lives can move forward into the good times again.
March 26th, 2019 10:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Good one Neville, we can always find an adhesive remover so that lives can move forward into the good times again.
March 26th, 2019 10:11
Stuck
Fay Slimm. said:
An aptitude for taking three little words and using them for mysterious back-up to poetic attraction comes from a talented mind and my friend you have that for sure. - - -
March 26th, 2019 05:27
Fay Slimm. said:
An aptitude for taking three little words and using them for mysterious back-up to poetic attraction comes from a talented mind and my friend you have that for sure. - - -
March 26th, 2019 05:27
Hey Lazarus
Goldfinch60 said:
Some people just cannot hack it themselves and steal others work.
Good strong write Neville.
March 25th, 2019 13:39
Goldfinch60 said:
Some people just cannot hack it themselves and steal others work.
Good strong write Neville.
March 25th, 2019 13:39
Hey Lazarus
Suresh said:
--------- is the best form of flattery
I find this whole piece comical
It\'s what we all want to SHOUT OUT
March 25th, 2019 10:41
Suresh said:
--------- is the best form of flattery
I find this whole piece comical
It\'s what we all want to SHOUT OUT
March 25th, 2019 10:41
Hey Lazarus
sylviasearcher said:
I had not read this as about plagerism until I read your note and comment. I had read it about the Lazarus in my head a little, plagerising life. Or perhaps even a take on the same notions and ideas recurring through time and literature.
So when I read all the comments I got more confused!
March 25th, 2019 07:58
sylviasearcher said:
I had not read this as about plagerism until I read your note and comment. I had read it about the Lazarus in my head a little, plagerising life. Or perhaps even a take on the same notions and ideas recurring through time and literature.
So when I read all the comments I got more confused!
March 25th, 2019 07:58
Hey Lazarus
Michael Edwards said:
Intrigued to know who it is but with you all way in condemnation. Message well put.
March 25th, 2019 07:00
Michael Edwards said:
Intrigued to know who it is but with you all way in condemnation. Message well put.
March 25th, 2019 07:00
Hey Lazarus
Nicholas Browning said:
I must admit that I\'m a tad bit confused. Does this have anything to do with Osiris?
March 25th, 2019 05:05
Nicholas Browning said:
I must admit that I\'m a tad bit confused. Does this have anything to do with Osiris?
March 25th, 2019 05:05
Hey Lazarus
Fay Slimm. said:
Today\'s need for recognition smears itself over unscrupulous word-thieves who feel the world owes them - - this compelling outcry puts plagiarists where they belong - well said Nev. and I for one second this artistic exposure.
March 25th, 2019 04:56
Fay Slimm. said:
Today\'s need for recognition smears itself over unscrupulous word-thieves who feel the world owes them - - this compelling outcry puts plagiarists where they belong - well said Nev. and I for one second this artistic exposure.
March 25th, 2019 04:56
Hey Lazarus
orchidee said:
Nothing seems to incur the wrath of poets quite as much as plagiarizing. There was a blatant poet, nicked other\'s works, palmed them off on another site, complete with his photo. The cad, the bounder, the..... Woof! Fido stopped me saying unspeakable things!
March 25th, 2019 04:48
orchidee said:
Nothing seems to incur the wrath of poets quite as much as plagiarizing. There was a blatant poet, nicked other\'s works, palmed them off on another site, complete with his photo. The cad, the bounder, the..... Woof! Fido stopped me saying unspeakable things!
March 25th, 2019 04:48
Birds on the Wire
sylviasearcher said:
Like they had never been there at all
Perfect.
March 25th, 2019 02:56
sylviasearcher said:
Like they had never been there at all
Perfect.
March 25th, 2019 02:56
Birds on the Wire
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write, watching birds (feathered) is something I have been doing all my life.
March 25th, 2019 02:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write, watching birds (feathered) is something I have been doing all my life.
March 25th, 2019 02:15
Birds on the Wire
Michael Edwards said:
A real uplifting write in more ways than one - somehow put me in mind of that super song All God\'s Creatures. Now I can\'t get it out of my head. And I still don\'t know the Pink Floyd song. lol
March 24th, 2019 16:13
Michael Edwards said:
A real uplifting write in more ways than one - somehow put me in mind of that super song All God\'s Creatures. Now I can\'t get it out of my head. And I still don\'t know the Pink Floyd song. lol
March 24th, 2019 16:13
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