Comments received on poems by Neville
Havana Skies
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful sights to behold come from your words straight to my mind.
May 28th, 2019 16:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful sights to behold come from your words straight to my mind.
May 28th, 2019 16:27
Havana Skies
Suresh said:
There are certain moments, the one you so poetically recalled, that are etched in memory forever, to be revisited fine and time again.
May 28th, 2019 10:35
Suresh said:
There are certain moments, the one you so poetically recalled, that are etched in memory forever, to be revisited fine and time again.
May 28th, 2019 10:35
Havana Skies
kevin browne said:
Nicely expressed, Neville, and the birds up in the sky where I live display their stunts for hunting prey with such majestic flight mobility it\'s actually amazing watching different types of birds swoop down and glide back up with the wind blowing hard it\'s difficult to land underneath your Havana skies. A super tribute to the dynamic skills both of the swallows and the swift must surely be. A beautiful, intrinsic look into bird life.
May 28th, 2019 04:10
kevin browne said:
Nicely expressed, Neville, and the birds up in the sky where I live display their stunts for hunting prey with such majestic flight mobility it\'s actually amazing watching different types of birds swoop down and glide back up with the wind blowing hard it\'s difficult to land underneath your Havana skies. A super tribute to the dynamic skills both of the swallows and the swift must surely be. A beautiful, intrinsic look into bird life.
May 28th, 2019 04:10
Havana Skies
Fay Slimm. said:
Am packing my bags as I write to experience that flight into fancy under Havana skies. Great read Neville.
May 28th, 2019 03:54
Fay Slimm. said:
Am packing my bags as I write to experience that flight into fancy under Havana skies. Great read Neville.
May 28th, 2019 03:54
Havana Skies
dusk arising said:
I slipped on my Havanna Skiis, lowered my goggles and was off down the...what... wait... this isn\'t piste, i\'m pissed.
Frig-it bird, wake up!
Methinks there are missing (politely withheld in the interest of decency) verses here Neville for there are more birds to espy than those you mention when relaxing beside a cooling pool.
However, i get the relaxing picture you create.
May 28th, 2019 03:53
dusk arising said:
I slipped on my Havanna Skiis, lowered my goggles and was off down the...what... wait... this isn\'t piste, i\'m pissed.
Frig-it bird, wake up!
Methinks there are missing (politely withheld in the interest of decency) verses here Neville for there are more birds to espy than those you mention when relaxing beside a cooling pool.
However, i get the relaxing picture you create.
May 28th, 2019 03:53
Havana Skies
orchidee said:
An eloquent write N. I\'m on me way to Havana. At least you won\'t hear me sing then. Or you in Havana already?!
May 28th, 2019 03:36
orchidee said:
An eloquent write N. I\'m on me way to Havana. At least you won\'t hear me sing then. Or you in Havana already?!
May 28th, 2019 03:36
Freedom
Goldfinch60 said:
That takes me back to the times that I used to have the occasional Disque Bleu.
May 28th, 2019 01:00
Goldfinch60 said:
That takes me back to the times that I used to have the occasional Disque Bleu.
May 28th, 2019 01:00
Freedom
Michael Edwards said:
Just words - that\'s all that poetry is - but it\'s the way that you assemble them that makes a real poet - super little piece.l
May 27th, 2019 13:02
Michael Edwards said:
Just words - that\'s all that poetry is - but it\'s the way that you assemble them that makes a real poet - super little piece.l
May 27th, 2019 13:02
Freedom
Suresh said:
Was it worth it - I mean having to share your last cigarette?
May 27th, 2019 11:29
Suresh said:
Was it worth it - I mean having to share your last cigarette?
May 27th, 2019 11:29
Freedom
Poetic Dan said:
Had one or two of those moments, now a face with no name.
May 27th, 2019 08:43
Poetic Dan said:
Had one or two of those moments, now a face with no name.
May 27th, 2019 08:43
Freedom
dusk arising said:
Sacre disc blue mon sewer! These street beggars will cadge a fag and a coffee anywhere. She must\'a had you made as a mark alright.
May 27th, 2019 06:08
dusk arising said:
Sacre disc blue mon sewer! These street beggars will cadge a fag and a coffee anywhere. She must\'a had you made as a mark alright.
May 27th, 2019 06:08
Freedom
Fay Slimm. said:
Ouch - - hope that scene with that lady whatsit never happened in reality my friend. Surely nameless is not in love\'s game.
May 27th, 2019 04:26
Fay Slimm. said:
Ouch - - hope that scene with that lady whatsit never happened in reality my friend. Surely nameless is not in love\'s game.
May 27th, 2019 04:26
A Very Special Day
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - - am pleased I peeped into this little tribute to December 10th - your special day Nev...... looked up the traits of a Sagittariun and looks to me that you fit the bill in more than a few - Here goes - Likable - Generous - Optimistic - Creative - Idealistic - Passionate and Bold...... Wow - - Don\'t know a lot about Horoscopes and not sure if I believe it all but here\'s wishin\' ya very belated congrats........... Fay x
May 26th, 2019 16:48
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - - am pleased I peeped into this little tribute to December 10th - your special day Nev...... looked up the traits of a Sagittariun and looks to me that you fit the bill in more than a few - Here goes - Likable - Generous - Optimistic - Creative - Idealistic - Passionate and Bold...... Wow - - Don\'t know a lot about Horoscopes and not sure if I believe it all but here\'s wishin\' ya very belated congrats........... Fay x
May 26th, 2019 16:48
A Cautious Distance
Suresh said:
It\'s always been a cautious distance -
All the poems recited in mind alone
My intentions were never sent out, so, no postcard expected
May 26th, 2019 15:53
Suresh said:
It\'s always been a cautious distance -
All the poems recited in mind alone
My intentions were never sent out, so, no postcard expected
May 26th, 2019 15:53
A Cautious Distance
Goldfinch60 said:
Those questions remain unanswered until that cautious distance becomes closer.
May 26th, 2019 15:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Those questions remain unanswered until that cautious distance becomes closer.
May 26th, 2019 15:18
A Cautious Distance
MendedFences27 said:
They say that normal personal space is four feet. I want to know where? Have they not flown economy? Today\'s youth want to know, \"What the hell is a postcard?\" Oh yeah, and they don\'t call, they text. So yeah, these days one must resist nature and remain aloof. Apparently the danger outweighs the reward. Never speak to a stranger, they may be a serial killer, terrorist, pervert, religious fanatic, or even a politician, Probably better to just stay home and not go to cafes unless you are looking for trouble.
Now your poem calls into question a lot of social norms concerning space, intimacy, technology, and the postal system. Frankly, it\'s just too much bother going anywhere these days. At least, you do not have to consider if you should bring your gun. Anyone for ice cream? - Phil A.
May 26th, 2019 14:15
MendedFences27 said:
They say that normal personal space is four feet. I want to know where? Have they not flown economy? Today\'s youth want to know, \"What the hell is a postcard?\" Oh yeah, and they don\'t call, they text. So yeah, these days one must resist nature and remain aloof. Apparently the danger outweighs the reward. Never speak to a stranger, they may be a serial killer, terrorist, pervert, religious fanatic, or even a politician, Probably better to just stay home and not go to cafes unless you are looking for trouble.
Now your poem calls into question a lot of social norms concerning space, intimacy, technology, and the postal system. Frankly, it\'s just too much bother going anywhere these days. At least, you do not have to consider if you should bring your gun. Anyone for ice cream? - Phil A.
May 26th, 2019 14:15
A Cautious Distance
Fay Slimm. said:
A weekend tale of entanglement which threatens order and told with panache........... answer ( but sans the postcard) - - - when in doubt think seriously about that cautious distance and handfuls of promise.
May 26th, 2019 04:51
Fay Slimm. said:
A weekend tale of entanglement which threatens order and told with panache........... answer ( but sans the postcard) - - - when in doubt think seriously about that cautious distance and handfuls of promise.
May 26th, 2019 04:51
A Cautious Distance
dusk arising said:
..postcard text...
Dear poet, saw you in the cafe drooling over a really timid looking lady. I thought to myself.... why doesn\'t he send her a love note with a small gift ...\"Roses are red, violets are blue, the ice cream heres lovely, this ones for you\"
Would you, should you, could you?
May 26th, 2019 04:43
dusk arising said:
..postcard text...
Dear poet, saw you in the cafe drooling over a really timid looking lady. I thought to myself.... why doesn\'t he send her a love note with a small gift ...\"Roses are red, violets are blue, the ice cream heres lovely, this ones for you\"
Would you, should you, could you?
May 26th, 2019 04:43
A Single Breath
Goldfinch60 said:
Those fleeting moments can be so special in both love and despair.
May 26th, 2019 00:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Those fleeting moments can be so special in both love and despair.
May 26th, 2019 00:18
A Single Breath
seeker123 said:
wow a beautiful message so fleeting yet it seems to last forever...
May 25th, 2019 23:00
seeker123 said:
wow a beautiful message so fleeting yet it seems to last forever...
May 25th, 2019 23:00
A Single Breath
Suresh said:
In imagination, there is another world
What is aloof here, is abundant there
Thnx for the gasps and sighs
May 25th, 2019 11:48
Suresh said:
In imagination, there is another world
What is aloof here, is abundant there
Thnx for the gasps and sighs
May 25th, 2019 11:48
A Single Breath
dusk arising said:
Something mesmerising about a single breast, ... the i realised you had written \'single breath\'.
Most definitely theres this other world and its full of the ones that got away...... pretty people but rotters every one of \'em.
May 25th, 2019 10:06
dusk arising said:
Something mesmerising about a single breast, ... the i realised you had written \'single breath\'.
Most definitely theres this other world and its full of the ones that got away...... pretty people but rotters every one of \'em.
May 25th, 2019 10:06
A Single Breath
Fay Slimm. said:
The way to an amicable ending is found in this expressively tender verse - - fondness never begrudges the sight and experience of another world....... good read, nicely put and thank you Nev.
May 25th, 2019 05:24
Fay Slimm. said:
The way to an amicable ending is found in this expressively tender verse - - fondness never begrudges the sight and experience of another world....... good read, nicely put and thank you Nev.
May 25th, 2019 05:24
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