Comments received on poems by Neville
Sans Sustenance
dusk arising said:
Superb \'less is more\' lesson for those who drag on and on and on in their MPS offerings.
So many questions the thinking reader will contemplate here.
February 14th, 2019 09:01
dusk arising said:
Superb \'less is more\' lesson for those who drag on and on and on in their MPS offerings.
So many questions the thinking reader will contemplate here.
February 14th, 2019 09:01
Cusp
dusk arising said:
The beach with crashing waves, relentless, powerful beauty. Always refreshes me, reminds me of humanity\'s insignificance in the universe and today i read of the sand i overlook whilst enjoying my mind trips.
More wonder yet then upon my next visit to the shore - i shall recall your piece and include the sand underfoot/bum in my freshly enhanced insignificance.
February 13th, 2019 13:49
dusk arising said:
The beach with crashing waves, relentless, powerful beauty. Always refreshes me, reminds me of humanity\'s insignificance in the universe and today i read of the sand i overlook whilst enjoying my mind trips.
More wonder yet then upon my next visit to the shore - i shall recall your piece and include the sand underfoot/bum in my freshly enhanced insignificance.
February 13th, 2019 13:49
Cusp
Fay Slimm. said:
A classic if ever I read one Neville this piece of lilting description is rich with poetic prose and imagery -- An excellent read I whisper as into my faves it goes.
February 13th, 2019 09:30
Fay Slimm. said:
A classic if ever I read one Neville this piece of lilting description is rich with poetic prose and imagery -- An excellent read I whisper as into my faves it goes.
February 13th, 2019 09:30
Cusp
Neville said:
thank you orchidee.. everything should be just fine, cheers .... N
February 13th, 2019 05:32
Neville said:
thank you orchidee.. everything should be just fine, cheers .... N
February 13th, 2019 05:32
Cusp
orchidee said:
A fine write N. But what\'s going on, on that beach? Will Fido bark at it?! He always noses around everywhere.
February 13th, 2019 05:20
orchidee said:
A fine write N. But what\'s going on, on that beach? Will Fido bark at it?! He always noses around everywhere.
February 13th, 2019 05:20
Self Harm
Goldfinch60 said:
It is such a hard thing to come to terms with, I came across it with a couple of Cadets when I was Chaplain to the Sea Cadets, all I could do was listen and hope that they would be able to see how to come to terms with it in their own way.
February 13th, 2019 01:04
Goldfinch60 said:
It is such a hard thing to come to terms with, I came across it with a couple of Cadets when I was Chaplain to the Sea Cadets, all I could do was listen and hope that they would be able to see how to come to terms with it in their own way.
February 13th, 2019 01:04
Self Harm
JaydeVictoria said:
I really like this. As someone who has gone through these issues...the fact you mention they are worn with pride...not many people understand why, or even how someone can do this. Thank you for highlighting it.
February 12th, 2019 16:32
JaydeVictoria said:
I really like this. As someone who has gone through these issues...the fact you mention they are worn with pride...not many people understand why, or even how someone can do this. Thank you for highlighting it.
February 12th, 2019 16:32
Self Harm
FineB said:
Hi Neville,
Another day at the office ....
I know how you feel.
Thank you for that poignant and superb poem on a very relevant sad fact of modern life!
Keep writing
FineB
February 12th, 2019 09:58
FineB said:
Hi Neville,
Another day at the office ....
I know how you feel.
Thank you for that poignant and superb poem on a very relevant sad fact of modern life!
Keep writing
FineB
February 12th, 2019 09:58
Self Harm
dusk arising said:
Shocker. You\'ve brought to me a new appreciation of some aspects of self harming here. I had not been aware that the scars were worn with pride.
Disturbing, revealing, educational.
What a gripping piece from you today.
February 12th, 2019 08:45
dusk arising said:
Shocker. You\'ve brought to me a new appreciation of some aspects of self harming here. I had not been aware that the scars were worn with pride.
Disturbing, revealing, educational.
What a gripping piece from you today.
February 12th, 2019 08:45
Self Harm
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Having worked with poeple with substance missuse issues I have seen the affects of self harm Neville and I admire your bravery to bring such subjects to the fore.
Well expressed you captured the feeling harmers have for their condition well.
Bravp again!
February 12th, 2019 07:33
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Having worked with poeple with substance missuse issues I have seen the affects of self harm Neville and I admire your bravery to bring such subjects to the fore.
Well expressed you captured the feeling harmers have for their condition well.
Bravp again!
February 12th, 2019 07:33
Self Harm
Michael Edwards said:
For those who have never experienced it either personally or within the family it\'s hard to understand but I do appreciate the trauma for those who do and this sad yet engaging write clearly brings it home. It\'s so easy to say \'get a grip\' but that isn\'t the answer for those so sadly affected.
February 12th, 2019 07:08
Michael Edwards said:
For those who have never experienced it either personally or within the family it\'s hard to understand but I do appreciate the trauma for those who do and this sad yet engaging write clearly brings it home. It\'s so easy to say \'get a grip\' but that isn\'t the answer for those so sadly affected.
February 12th, 2019 07:08
Self Harm
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh Neville - - that telling last stanza goes right to the core of most issues of this tragic subject -- a read to set the heart breaking for such ones who resort to self-harm . A sad but true happening within
families and expressed with compassion in your posting today.
February 12th, 2019 05:41
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh Neville - - that telling last stanza goes right to the core of most issues of this tragic subject -- a read to set the heart breaking for such ones who resort to self-harm . A sad but true happening within
families and expressed with compassion in your posting today.
February 12th, 2019 05:41
Self Harm
orchidee said:
Oohh the subject makes me shudder - and not out of swooniness (is that a word?). I came across some in a counselling group. I can understand why they do it though.
February 12th, 2019 03:41
orchidee said:
Oohh the subject makes me shudder - and not out of swooniness (is that a word?). I came across some in a counselling group. I can understand why they do it though.
February 12th, 2019 03:41
Mirrors Cracked
dusk arising said:
Bits of this and that remain, glances at mirrors recall a lurking \'why?\'. A piece of crockery, a salt cellar, happy days in St Ives... a hope worn out,... yesterdays tomorrows denied.
For me they are all there in your writing today.
February 11th, 2019 08:51
dusk arising said:
Bits of this and that remain, glances at mirrors recall a lurking \'why?\'. A piece of crockery, a salt cellar, happy days in St Ives... a hope worn out,... yesterdays tomorrows denied.
For me they are all there in your writing today.
February 11th, 2019 08:51
Mirrors Cracked
orchidee said:
A fine write N. I\'m not saying I\'m ugly, but I\'ve had a million years bad luck it seems. Well, I will keep looking in the mirror. Each time it cracks and it adds 7 years bad luck. Doh!
I might be handsome?! heehee.
February 11th, 2019 05:50
orchidee said:
A fine write N. I\'m not saying I\'m ugly, but I\'ve had a million years bad luck it seems. Well, I will keep looking in the mirror. Each time it cracks and it adds 7 years bad luck. Doh!
I might be handsome?! heehee.
February 11th, 2019 05:50
Mirrors Cracked
Fay Slimm. said:
Oooh break-ups are made of these reflections - well written and to the point - - of no return - - Great read Neville.
February 11th, 2019 05:28
Fay Slimm. said:
Oooh break-ups are made of these reflections - well written and to the point - - of no return - - Great read Neville.
February 11th, 2019 05:28
Last Words
Goldfinch60 said:
May these last words fill our souls with the light that comes from them.
February 11th, 2019 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
May these last words fill our souls with the light that comes from them.
February 11th, 2019 01:44
Last Words
orchidee said:
You sorted out that propitiation? I got enough to do with all this \'vagalume\' that keeps appearing elsewhere. Who is he, or what is it?! lol.
February 10th, 2019 14:42
orchidee said:
You sorted out that propitiation? I got enough to do with all this \'vagalume\' that keeps appearing elsewhere. Who is he, or what is it?! lol.
February 10th, 2019 14:42
Last Words
orchidee said:
A fine write N. Where ya gone? When will ya be back? Hop on the No.7 bus or summat - should bring ya home!
February 10th, 2019 08:53
orchidee said:
A fine write N. Where ya gone? When will ya be back? Hop on the No.7 bus or summat - should bring ya home!
February 10th, 2019 08:53
Last Words
Poetic Dan said:
Bless to of read your last sentiment
Forever you\'ll last in many forms
February 10th, 2019 05:29
Poetic Dan said:
Bless to of read your last sentiment
Forever you\'ll last in many forms
February 10th, 2019 05:29
Last Words
dusk arising said:
A truly poetic farewell. Yes some goodbyes linger for they are a lost battle of the heart and wounds take their time to heal.
I particularly like the way your pulse will dance on into high and wonderful places. Life goes on and has wonders yet to come.
February 10th, 2019 04:50
dusk arising said:
A truly poetic farewell. Yes some goodbyes linger for they are a lost battle of the heart and wounds take their time to heal.
I particularly like the way your pulse will dance on into high and wonderful places. Life goes on and has wonders yet to come.
February 10th, 2019 04:50
Bethune Re-visited
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write showing us two paths within our mind.
February 10th, 2019 01:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write showing us two paths within our mind.
February 10th, 2019 01:38
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