Comments received on poems by Neville
Ballerina
orchidee said:
Reminds me of \'Dance of the sugar plum fairy\' by someone or another. I\'m not \'into\' classical stuff as an expert, as you see! lol. Some Chai-coughski bloke it is.
April 6th, 2019 07:07
orchidee said:
Reminds me of \'Dance of the sugar plum fairy\' by someone or another. I\'m not \'into\' classical stuff as an expert, as you see! lol. Some Chai-coughski bloke it is.
April 6th, 2019 07:07
Ballerina
Fay Slimm. said:
A love affair to remember when ending with such a tender confession - -- an evocative weekend read my friend.
April 6th, 2019 04:28
Fay Slimm. said:
A love affair to remember when ending with such a tender confession - -- an evocative weekend read my friend.
April 6th, 2019 04:28
Our Lady of the Harbour
Goldfinch60 said:
Brilliant write and take if histiric value.
April 5th, 2019 14:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Brilliant write and take if histiric value.
April 5th, 2019 14:52
Our Lady of the Harbour
Suresh said:
Much has been written, but you captured it well.
April 5th, 2019 11:08
Suresh said:
Much has been written, but you captured it well.
April 5th, 2019 11:08
Our Lady of the Harbour
Michael Edwards said:
Today\'s the day for original poems - love this one - top score Neville.
April 5th, 2019 10:26
Michael Edwards said:
Today\'s the day for original poems - love this one - top score Neville.
April 5th, 2019 10:26
Our Lady of the Harbour
SerenWise said:
Beautifully written! Very evocative and enjoyable read.
April 5th, 2019 10:23
SerenWise said:
Beautifully written! Very evocative and enjoyable read.
April 5th, 2019 10:23
Our Lady of the Harbour
dusk arising said:
A scorcher of a pile for the maid of Orleans.
What horrible times those must have been for all humanity.
April 5th, 2019 09:14
dusk arising said:
A scorcher of a pile for the maid of Orleans.
What horrible times those must have been for all humanity.
April 5th, 2019 09:14
Our Lady of the Harbour
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville. Ahh, I can\'t meet her then? Did you meet her in person?! Such a short life. I\'ve not brushed up on her history.
April 5th, 2019 03:59
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville. Ahh, I can\'t meet her then? Did you meet her in person?! Such a short life. I\'ve not brushed up on her history.
April 5th, 2019 03:59
Our Lady of the Harbour
Fay Slimm. said:
Never before have I read a more interesting tale of brave Joan who rode brazenly draped in Saint George - her fate was a scorcher but lest we forget this verse raises issues we may never have known.An engaging write Nev.
April 5th, 2019 03:59
Fay Slimm. said:
Never before have I read a more interesting tale of brave Joan who rode brazenly draped in Saint George - her fate was a scorcher but lest we forget this verse raises issues we may never have known.An engaging write Nev.
April 5th, 2019 03:59
A Thirst Well Quenched
SerenWise said:
I really enjoyed this, simplicity in perfection.
April 4th, 2019 12:41
SerenWise said:
I really enjoyed this, simplicity in perfection.
April 4th, 2019 12:41
Read Yourself
Poetic Dan said:
This has just blown me away!
It\'s What I feel every time I come and share with you and all of these other magnificent souls on this site but with this one, I would suit you sir!
Hats off!
Much appreciated
With love and respect
April 4th, 2019 08:36
Poetic Dan said:
This has just blown me away!
It\'s What I feel every time I come and share with you and all of these other magnificent souls on this site but with this one, I would suit you sir!
Hats off!
Much appreciated
With love and respect
April 4th, 2019 08:36
Read Yourself
dusk arising said:
Love this expression of a lifetimes commitment to a lovers memory. For once she has read this and you enter her heart, then forever these words will bring her to that tender place within you where emotional attachments cement and never depart.
Into my favourites. Really enjoyed this.
April 4th, 2019 06:21
dusk arising said:
Love this expression of a lifetimes commitment to a lovers memory. For once she has read this and you enter her heart, then forever these words will bring her to that tender place within you where emotional attachments cement and never depart.
Into my favourites. Really enjoyed this.
April 4th, 2019 06:21
Read Yourself
Fay Slimm. said:
Hearts will be aflutter after viewing this sensitive verse that I for one am doubly reading - -- love it\'s honesty and into my faves this one goes......
April 4th, 2019 04:24
Fay Slimm. said:
Hearts will be aflutter after viewing this sensitive verse that I for one am doubly reading - -- love it\'s honesty and into my faves this one goes......
April 4th, 2019 04:24
Read Yourself
orchidee said:
Yes, my love. Swoon! heehee. Woof! No excitement for me, says Fido.
April 4th, 2019 03:55
orchidee said:
Yes, my love. Swoon! heehee. Woof! No excitement for me, says Fido.
April 4th, 2019 03:55
Read Yourself
sylviasearcher said:
There’s a lot of love poems on here lately, they’re nice but make me feel like I should be able to write something soft and lovely...
But maybe this is about a love of poetry or of the word?
April 4th, 2019 03:25
sylviasearcher said:
There’s a lot of love poems on here lately, they’re nice but make me feel like I should be able to write something soft and lovely...
But maybe this is about a love of poetry or of the word?
April 4th, 2019 03:25
Big Empty Space
Goldfinch60 said:
Such an emotive write Neville, may that space soon be filled with joy and love.
April 4th, 2019 00:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Such an emotive write Neville, may that space soon be filled with joy and love.
April 4th, 2019 00:08
Big Empty Space
orchidee said:
You covered more of that garden? I wish I would go back to sleep, and stop nagging. lol.
April 3rd, 2019 13:16
orchidee said:
You covered more of that garden? I wish I would go back to sleep, and stop nagging. lol.
April 3rd, 2019 13:16
Big Empty Space
Poetic Dan said:
Wow, had to take a deep breath after that one my friend.
Very grateful
Much peace and love
April 3rd, 2019 08:53
Poetic Dan said:
Wow, had to take a deep breath after that one my friend.
Very grateful
Much peace and love
April 3rd, 2019 08:53
Big Empty Space
orchidee said:
Yes, extra space Neville, but sometimes made by sadnesses. Then again, space made by some we may say good riddance to!
Much space in your garden?
April 3rd, 2019 04:12
orchidee said:
Yes, extra space Neville, but sometimes made by sadnesses. Then again, space made by some we may say good riddance to!
Much space in your garden?
April 3rd, 2019 04:12
Big Empty Space
Fay Slimm. said:
Solemn yet coping with feel of abuse these words span extra space with the reasons why wounds can take time to heal. Sad but such a meaningful write Nev.
April 3rd, 2019 03:30
Fay Slimm. said:
Solemn yet coping with feel of abuse these words span extra space with the reasons why wounds can take time to heal. Sad but such a meaningful write Nev.
April 3rd, 2019 03:30
Hungry Corner
Goldfinch60 said:
May those hungry corners soon be filled with nourishment for all.
April 2nd, 2019 15:28
Goldfinch60 said:
May those hungry corners soon be filled with nourishment for all.
April 2nd, 2019 15:28
Hungry Corner
Suresh said:
We see, we hear, we momentarily convulse
But only momentarily
For the tragedy is playing out tooooo often
We have chosen to become oblivion to its causes
April 2nd, 2019 14:21
Suresh said:
We see, we hear, we momentarily convulse
But only momentarily
For the tragedy is playing out tooooo often
We have chosen to become oblivion to its causes
April 2nd, 2019 14:21
Hungry Corner
dusk arising said:
There is hungry corner and hungry corner. Several completely differing places. For one exists where real hunger kills people and beasts. Another exists in the mind of the needy. Well fed and cosseted can still be needy and hungry for something missing. Finally there is need in the desperate, a need never satisfied and as you write, everything will turn out wrong.
I try to get into the mental pictures given to me when i read poetry like this. Life has some sad jumbles beyond comprehension and i think hungry corner leads your reader into them if they are prepared to look.
April 2nd, 2019 13:03
dusk arising said:
There is hungry corner and hungry corner. Several completely differing places. For one exists where real hunger kills people and beasts. Another exists in the mind of the needy. Well fed and cosseted can still be needy and hungry for something missing. Finally there is need in the desperate, a need never satisfied and as you write, everything will turn out wrong.
I try to get into the mental pictures given to me when i read poetry like this. Life has some sad jumbles beyond comprehension and i think hungry corner leads your reader into them if they are prepared to look.
April 2nd, 2019 13:03
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