Comments received on poems by Neville
Hungry Corner
Fay Slimm. said:
A strange and sad place rises from your poignant description today Nev - - named and shamed these conditions where yesterday means more than tomorrow and no energy to sway away from a perceived culture. The read leaves food for much thought on how to force change.......... x
April 2nd, 2019 04:16
Fay Slimm. said:
A strange and sad place rises from your poignant description today Nev - - named and shamed these conditions where yesterday means more than tomorrow and no energy to sway away from a perceived culture. The read leaves food for much thought on how to force change.......... x
April 2nd, 2019 04:16
Hungry Corner
orchidee said:
A thoughtful write Neville.
Meanwhile - what\'s going on? You was thirsty, now you is hungry?! heehee.
April 2nd, 2019 04:10
orchidee said:
A thoughtful write Neville.
Meanwhile - what\'s going on? You was thirsty, now you is hungry?! heehee.
April 2nd, 2019 04:10
A Thirst Well Quenched
orchidee said:
I\'m a pest, keep nagging - you done that garden yet?! lol.
April 2nd, 2019 01:51
orchidee said:
I\'m a pest, keep nagging - you done that garden yet?! lol.
April 2nd, 2019 01:51
A Thirst Well Quenched
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write. Those silences can be so profound and meaningful in our lives.
April 2nd, 2019 00:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write. Those silences can be so profound and meaningful in our lives.
April 2nd, 2019 00:23
A Thirst Well Quenched
Fay Slimm. said:
Had me a second read of this telling love- write Nev and found it this time even deeper in its unique use of perception. The second stanza is methinks a masterpiece - - - - Saved now and in my faves.
April 1st, 2019 16:13
Fay Slimm. said:
Had me a second read of this telling love- write Nev and found it this time even deeper in its unique use of perception. The second stanza is methinks a masterpiece - - - - Saved now and in my faves.
April 1st, 2019 16:13
A Thirst Well Quenched
dusk arising said:
A bird in hand is worth keeping out of your pocket.
\"You say it loudest when you say nothing at all\".
Funny how, after you have a drink or several, your head ends up swimming.
April 1st, 2019 06:16
dusk arising said:
A bird in hand is worth keeping out of your pocket.
\"You say it loudest when you say nothing at all\".
Funny how, after you have a drink or several, your head ends up swimming.
April 1st, 2019 06:16
A Thirst Well Quenched
Fay Slimm. said:
A successful use of the thesaurus in these telling lines Neville - -- a charmingly sensitive write.
April 1st, 2019 03:19
Fay Slimm. said:
A successful use of the thesaurus in these telling lines Neville - -- a charmingly sensitive write.
April 1st, 2019 03:19
A Thirst Well Quenched
orchidee said:
A jolly good write Neville. Yes, and also - \'When at first you don\'t succeed, give up!\' Subtitled \'Ain\'t no sense keep banging ya head against a brick wall!\' lol.
A pessimistic start to the week from me!
April 1st, 2019 03:13
orchidee said:
A jolly good write Neville. Yes, and also - \'When at first you don\'t succeed, give up!\' Subtitled \'Ain\'t no sense keep banging ya head against a brick wall!\' lol.
A pessimistic start to the week from me!
April 1st, 2019 03:13
To Whom It May Concern
Goldfinch60 said:
Familiar strangers can be so meaningful that they can soon become dear friends or even more. Good words Neville.
April 1st, 2019 00:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Familiar strangers can be so meaningful that they can soon become dear friends or even more. Good words Neville.
April 1st, 2019 00:59
To Whom It May Concern
dusk arising said:
Was it you who wrote prince Phillips proposal to Elizabeth.
So formal. A tad stand offish. The sort of thing a very timid upper class twit might phrase in desperation in an attempt to gain marriage before his 40th birthday perhaps.
Verily i begst of thee, wilt thou lay with me this morrow lest we part yet unfamiliar of pleasures betwixt bed linen.
Familiar strangers with benefits perhaps?
March 31st, 2019 05:29
dusk arising said:
Was it you who wrote prince Phillips proposal to Elizabeth.
So formal. A tad stand offish. The sort of thing a very timid upper class twit might phrase in desperation in an attempt to gain marriage before his 40th birthday perhaps.
Verily i begst of thee, wilt thou lay with me this morrow lest we part yet unfamiliar of pleasures betwixt bed linen.
Familiar strangers with benefits perhaps?
March 31st, 2019 05:29
To Whom It May Concern
Neville said:
Thank you ever so much and kindly too my dear friend.... for the very life of me.. this post seemed to write itself... That\'s what seems to happen.. Sometimes my imagination gets the better of me and then the pen takes over..... N
March 31st, 2019 05:24
Neville said:
Thank you ever so much and kindly too my dear friend.... for the very life of me.. this post seemed to write itself... That\'s what seems to happen.. Sometimes my imagination gets the better of me and then the pen takes over..... N
March 31st, 2019 05:24
To Whom It May Concern
Fay Slimm. said:
Some uniquely meaningful words in this respectful but solemn request my friend - -hope whoever the piece refers to allows that special place in your memory Nev. Familiar strangers need not always remain so.
March 31st, 2019 05:08
Fay Slimm. said:
Some uniquely meaningful words in this respectful but solemn request my friend - -hope whoever the piece refers to allows that special place in your memory Nev. Familiar strangers need not always remain so.
March 31st, 2019 05:08
Before Breakfast
orchidee said:
Done much before brekkie today? No time for it, having lost an hour?!
March 31st, 2019 04:26
orchidee said:
Done much before brekkie today? No time for it, having lost an hour?!
March 31st, 2019 04:26
Before Breakfast
dusk arising said:
Oh yes, a wicked reminder upon beard and fingers. Such a pleasurable reminisce in an empty bed.
Though it did bring to mind the first time i ate a sizeable portion of strong dope cake and went to bed stoned only to wake equally stoned the next morning. A truly glorious feeling.
March 31st, 2019 00:06
dusk arising said:
Oh yes, a wicked reminder upon beard and fingers. Such a pleasurable reminisce in an empty bed.
Though it did bring to mind the first time i ate a sizeable portion of strong dope cake and went to bed stoned only to wake equally stoned the next morning. A truly glorious feeling.
March 31st, 2019 00:06
Before Breakfast
Michael Edwards said:
I must be the only one who shudders at the idea of tasting ones facial growth where lurks all that bacteria - thankfully I\'m clean shaven. Great write nonetheless.
March 30th, 2019 14:08
Michael Edwards said:
I must be the only one who shudders at the idea of tasting ones facial growth where lurks all that bacteria - thankfully I\'m clean shaven. Great write nonetheless.
March 30th, 2019 14:08
Before Breakfast
orchidee said:
All this before brekkie? There\'s all day to go yet!
March 30th, 2019 08:45
orchidee said:
All this before brekkie? There\'s all day to go yet!
March 30th, 2019 08:45
Before Breakfast
Fay Slimm. said:
Romance could not be better reduced to a few lines of poetic appeal than we have here - - you always amaze by your way with words my friend .....
March 30th, 2019 07:07
Fay Slimm. said:
Romance could not be better reduced to a few lines of poetic appeal than we have here - - you always amaze by your way with words my friend .....
March 30th, 2019 07:07
Cutlery Talking
Michael Edwards said:
A spoonful of fun - and it\'s a yes from me too.
March 29th, 2019 16:31
Michael Edwards said:
A spoonful of fun - and it\'s a yes from me too.
March 29th, 2019 16:31
Cutlery Talking
orchidee said:
I\'m too busy looking up \'runcible\' to be doing any \'cutlery\' stuff! lol.
March 29th, 2019 10:32
orchidee said:
I\'m too busy looking up \'runcible\' to be doing any \'cutlery\' stuff! lol.
March 29th, 2019 10:32
Cutlery Talking
dusk arising said:
A good fork is a guarantee of many an ongoing good insertion. Juices flow freely as you push it in deeper. Lips relish the glistening tool\'s approach loaded with sating promise.
Only to be outclassed by the runcible spooning of course.
A delightful mischeivous romp around her cutlery drawers from you today sir!
March 29th, 2019 07:15
dusk arising said:
A good fork is a guarantee of many an ongoing good insertion. Juices flow freely as you push it in deeper. Lips relish the glistening tool\'s approach loaded with sating promise.
Only to be outclassed by the runcible spooning of course.
A delightful mischeivous romp around her cutlery drawers from you today sir!
March 29th, 2019 07:15
Cutlery Talking
Fay Slimm. said:
Love this cutlery talk Nev.- your mind works on levels so diverse and this little beauty speaks volumes as expected - - -Oh and yes to your own comment above. ......... Fay
March 29th, 2019 06:36
Fay Slimm. said:
Love this cutlery talk Nev.- your mind works on levels so diverse and this little beauty speaks volumes as expected - - -Oh and yes to your own comment above. ......... Fay
March 29th, 2019 06:36
Heart
Fay Slimm. said:
This perceptive write sees through the hardest of outer shells that abuse builds around unhappy females - such is life with many today - and a final stanza that could not be bettered brings tears to the eyes dear friend.
March 28th, 2019 04:58
Fay Slimm. said:
This perceptive write sees through the hardest of outer shells that abuse builds around unhappy females - such is life with many today - and a final stanza that could not be bettered brings tears to the eyes dear friend.
March 28th, 2019 04:58
Back Streets of Banjul
Goldfinch60 said:
Thank you for showing us these words Neville. My admiration for your volunteering work is profound.
In this world there is so much abundance but those that have it are much too greedy to share it with others.
March 28th, 2019 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Thank you for showing us these words Neville. My admiration for your volunteering work is profound.
In this world there is so much abundance but those that have it are much too greedy to share it with others.
March 28th, 2019 01:44
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