Comments received on poems by Neville
Unfinished
orchidee said:
Should I try some of this?! How come you finished this poem, if it\'s called Unfinished? heehee.
February 28th, 2019 05:41
orchidee said:
Should I try some of this?! How come you finished this poem, if it\'s called Unfinished? heehee.
February 28th, 2019 05:41
Unfinished
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Well it\'s an option...
Love the hopeful title
Great write again Neville
February 28th, 2019 04:48
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Well it\'s an option...
Love the hopeful title
Great write again Neville
February 28th, 2019 04:48
Incrementally Speaking
Goldfinch60 said:
Each moment id special, treasure them.
February 28th, 2019 01:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Each moment id special, treasure them.
February 28th, 2019 01:40
Incrementally Speaking
dusk arising said:
My life of never never
one of carefree deposits
and repossession
Inspired to respond to yours today. Yours though is brill.
I rarely suggest an edit to anyone\'s work but..... your first two lines on their own are so very strong.
February 27th, 2019 14:54
dusk arising said:
My life of never never
one of carefree deposits
and repossession
Inspired to respond to yours today. Yours though is brill.
I rarely suggest an edit to anyone\'s work but..... your first two lines on their own are so very strong.
February 27th, 2019 14:54
Bring Along a Lantern
SerenWise said:
Very nicely written, beautiful imagery
February 27th, 2019 14:10
SerenWise said:
Very nicely written, beautiful imagery
February 27th, 2019 14:10
Incrementally Speaking
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes my friend, life adds more to those moments than time - if we are able to discern the numbers of people needing love and try to deliver it by using learnt skills minutes increase in success and achievement - - at least that\'s what these three short lines mean to me - - incrementally speaking that is.
February 27th, 2019 11:16
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes my friend, life adds more to those moments than time - if we are able to discern the numbers of people needing love and try to deliver it by using learnt skills minutes increase in success and achievement - - at least that\'s what these three short lines mean to me - - incrementally speaking that is.
February 27th, 2019 11:16
Incrementally Speaking
sylviasearcher said:
What number are you on now? Lol
February 27th, 2019 11:06
sylviasearcher said:
What number are you on now? Lol
February 27th, 2019 11:06
Incrementally Speaking
Michael Edwards said:
Spot on Neville - among the great shorties - indeed life is just series of happenings which sounds the key to another write - errr sometime..!
February 27th, 2019 10:06
Michael Edwards said:
Spot on Neville - among the great shorties - indeed life is just series of happenings which sounds the key to another write - errr sometime..!
February 27th, 2019 10:06
Reconfigure it out
orchidee said:
I\'ve blown a fuse trying to reconfigure!
February 26th, 2019 12:52
orchidee said:
I\'ve blown a fuse trying to reconfigure!
February 26th, 2019 12:52
Reconfigure it out
Michael Edwards said:
Great fun but I\'ll skip the maths
February 26th, 2019 11:49
Michael Edwards said:
Great fun but I\'ll skip the maths
February 26th, 2019 11:49
Reconfigure it out
sylviasearcher said:
It looks like an arrow, have you been hunting again Neville?
February 26th, 2019 05:31
sylviasearcher said:
It looks like an arrow, have you been hunting again Neville?
February 26th, 2019 05:31
Reconfigure it out
Fay Slimm. said:
Clever piece of double-tongued inscription to digest my friend - - l prefer the left side of that finalé - it kinda rounds up the former and sticks in the mind - - whether or not a special form of read Neville. Full marks again for your skill to surprise and delight reviewers like me
February 26th, 2019 05:12
Fay Slimm. said:
Clever piece of double-tongued inscription to digest my friend - - l prefer the left side of that finalé - it kinda rounds up the former and sticks in the mind - - whether or not a special form of read Neville. Full marks again for your skill to surprise and delight reviewers like me
February 26th, 2019 05:12
Reconfigure it out
dusk arising said:
Maths yuk... i dont believe arithmetic and poetry should mix except when:-
There was a young man from bengal
who had a hexagonal ball
it\'s volume, times weight
divided by eight
was twice the square root of fk all.
February 26th, 2019 05:11
dusk arising said:
Maths yuk... i dont believe arithmetic and poetry should mix except when:-
There was a young man from bengal
who had a hexagonal ball
it\'s volume, times weight
divided by eight
was twice the square root of fk all.
February 26th, 2019 05:11
Bring Along a Lantern
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. It may be dark but the light is always there for us all - go towards it.
February 26th, 2019 01:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. It may be dark but the light is always there for us all - go towards it.
February 26th, 2019 01:36
Bring Along a Lantern
Dovestoneboy said:
Very sparse and moody , nicely drawn.
February 25th, 2019 16:36
Dovestoneboy said:
Very sparse and moody , nicely drawn.
February 25th, 2019 16:36
Bring Along a Lantern
Suresh said:
Bring along a lantern, conjures up images of many a stories written about the Middle Ages.
Thnx, Neville
February 25th, 2019 12:14
Suresh said:
Bring along a lantern, conjures up images of many a stories written about the Middle Ages.
Thnx, Neville
February 25th, 2019 12:14
Bring Along a Lantern
dusk arising said:
Who\'s gonna despise you lit up against the backdrop like that and listening to the snowmen chattering
What did the snowman say to the other snowman? Answer....\"Can you smell carrots?\".
February 25th, 2019 11:32
dusk arising said:
Who\'s gonna despise you lit up against the backdrop like that and listening to the snowmen chattering
What did the snowman say to the other snowman? Answer....\"Can you smell carrots?\".
February 25th, 2019 11:32
Bring Along a Lantern
Fay Slimm. said:
A feel of the true medieval in this atmospheric write - - loved those final two lines especially Nev.... you create mystery which is firstly read and leaves me thirsty for seconds.
February 25th, 2019 10:14
Fay Slimm. said:
A feel of the true medieval in this atmospheric write - - loved those final two lines especially Nev.... you create mystery which is firstly read and leaves me thirsty for seconds.
February 25th, 2019 10:14
Bring Along a Lantern
Michael Edwards said:
Another intriguing write from the writer of enigmatic poetry.
February 25th, 2019 08:26
Michael Edwards said:
Another intriguing write from the writer of enigmatic poetry.
February 25th, 2019 08:26
Bring Along a Lantern
sylviasearcher said:
I like how you intertwined the darkness with a sense of hope.
For me it took me to a nighttime forest with a lantern to light my path
But then again I’m always in the forest!
February 25th, 2019 08:03
sylviasearcher said:
I like how you intertwined the darkness with a sense of hope.
For me it took me to a nighttime forest with a lantern to light my path
But then again I’m always in the forest!
February 25th, 2019 08:03
Bring Along a Lantern
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Nicely penned Neville full of intrigue
February 25th, 2019 06:53
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Nicely penned Neville full of intrigue
February 25th, 2019 06:53
Bring Along a Lantern
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville. We going for a night-walk? I went once, but the battery in me torch ran out. Doh! Well, you told us to bring a lantern, but I thought a troch would do....
February 25th, 2019 05:05
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville. We going for a night-walk? I went once, but the battery in me torch ran out. Doh! Well, you told us to bring a lantern, but I thought a troch would do....
February 25th, 2019 05:05
Little White Lies
dusk arising said:
We all tell a few porky pies don\'t we. But i never do in these comments.
Nonsense on the other hand is something i\'m all too good at publishing on MPS.
Would you rather be remembered for your porkies or a few items of nonsense?
February 24th, 2019 12:28
dusk arising said:
We all tell a few porky pies don\'t we. But i never do in these comments.
Nonsense on the other hand is something i\'m all too good at publishing on MPS.
Would you rather be remembered for your porkies or a few items of nonsense?
February 24th, 2019 12:28
Little White Lies
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Oh I can relate to that
It\'s not a lie if you tell the truth straight away afterwards
That\'s nonesense
Great write Neville good sunday to you
February 24th, 2019 05:16
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Oh I can relate to that
It\'s not a lie if you tell the truth straight away afterwards
That\'s nonesense
Great write Neville good sunday to you
February 24th, 2019 05:16
Little White Lies
Michael Edwards said:
Enjoyed the read but why are white which stands for purity shouldn\'t they be little black lies - come to that how come they have any colour at all - unless they are written of course and then if they really are white you would need black paper - can you get it anywhere? I am so confused.
February 24th, 2019 04:50
Michael Edwards said:
Enjoyed the read but why are white which stands for purity shouldn\'t they be little black lies - come to that how come they have any colour at all - unless they are written of course and then if they really are white you would need black paper - can you get it anywhere? I am so confused.
February 24th, 2019 04:50
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