Comments received on poems by Neville
The Object and Outcome of Dreaming Alone
orchidee said:
KP says to me each night \'Happy botox dreams\'. lol.
August 12th, 2024 07:05
orchidee said:
KP says to me each night \'Happy botox dreams\'. lol.
August 12th, 2024 07:05
Comparing Uncertain Potentialities
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, Neville. Something really profound there.
August 12th, 2024 06:31
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, Neville. Something really profound there.
August 12th, 2024 06:31
The Object and Outcome of Dreaming Alone
sorenbarrett said:
Ah the differences in males and females. So nicely expressed in short poetic lines. The difficulty of expressing these differences in a condensed form you have distilled ina few lines. Lovely!!
August 12th, 2024 04:37
sorenbarrett said:
Ah the differences in males and females. So nicely expressed in short poetic lines. The difficulty of expressing these differences in a condensed form you have distilled ina few lines. Lovely!!
August 12th, 2024 04:37
Comparing Uncertain Potentialities
MendedFences27 said:
Some deep thinking put into poetic form. Your theory offers \"divine immortality\" for \"love\" and why not?
Love is the one thing that we share universally. Scientists know that love exists but can\'t explain it. It also is the one emotion of mankind that is not totally self-centered.
Your little poem on love is actually a greatly powerful idea with much to defend it. It may cause a cosmic shift in our beliefs. I found it to be very stimulating. - Phil A.
August 11th, 2024 15:03
MendedFences27 said:
Some deep thinking put into poetic form. Your theory offers \"divine immortality\" for \"love\" and why not?
Love is the one thing that we share universally. Scientists know that love exists but can\'t explain it. It also is the one emotion of mankind that is not totally self-centered.
Your little poem on love is actually a greatly powerful idea with much to defend it. It may cause a cosmic shift in our beliefs. I found it to be very stimulating. - Phil A.
August 11th, 2024 15:03
Comparing Uncertain Potentialities
sorenbarrett said:
A profound thought deeply rooted in faith and belief but so well stated here it seems logic. The wording was superb and it reads so smoothly.
August 11th, 2024 06:53
sorenbarrett said:
A profound thought deeply rooted in faith and belief but so well stated here it seems logic. The wording was superb and it reads so smoothly.
August 11th, 2024 06:53
Comparing Uncertain Potentialities
Cassie58 said:
Divine immortality for love. What a very beautiful thought for a glorious Sunday morning. Brevity with much to ponder on. Lovely thoughts Neville.
August 11th, 2024 03:02
Cassie58 said:
Divine immortality for love. What a very beautiful thought for a glorious Sunday morning. Brevity with much to ponder on. Lovely thoughts Neville.
August 11th, 2024 03:02
Rituals
Cassie58 said:
Morning rituals. I always touch the sterling silver chain with its delicate pendant that hangs round my neck and which my mum wore till her dying day. I listen for the birdsong from the garden, and watch the movement of the silver birch outside my window. I’ve never focused before on these. I enjoyed reading about your rituals and I do agree that nothing can beat a full English. I like your thinking here Neville. Have a super sunny Sunday.
August 11th, 2024 02:58
Cassie58 said:
Morning rituals. I always touch the sterling silver chain with its delicate pendant that hangs round my neck and which my mum wore till her dying day. I listen for the birdsong from the garden, and watch the movement of the silver birch outside my window. I’ve never focused before on these. I enjoyed reading about your rituals and I do agree that nothing can beat a full English. I like your thinking here Neville. Have a super sunny Sunday.
August 11th, 2024 02:58
Rituals
Goldfinch60 said:
Full English without Black Pudding is not a Full English Neville. LOL
Andy
August 11th, 2024 01:32
Goldfinch60 said:
Full English without Black Pudding is not a Full English Neville. LOL
Andy
August 11th, 2024 01:32
Rituals
Bobby O said:
It’s a saunter thru a here and there possibilities that command a certain order
August 10th, 2024 16:05
Bobby O said:
It’s a saunter thru a here and there possibilities that command a certain order
August 10th, 2024 16:05
Rituals
orchidee said:
A chap in church did so much ritual and crossing-of-self, bowing, etc, that I thought \'You\'ll be worn out before the service even starts!\'
August 10th, 2024 12:16
orchidee said:
A chap in church did so much ritual and crossing-of-self, bowing, etc, that I thought \'You\'ll be worn out before the service even starts!\'
August 10th, 2024 12:16
Rituals
MendedFences27 said:
Somebody mentioned \"a full English\" and I got hungry and started thinking of food, which brought me to this irrelevant question, \"If you are blindfolded and do not know what country you are in but are told you are in a restaurant, would you order Bread. Sausages, Bacon, or Chocolate?
I think we all have such \"Rituals.\" They are all very personal habits built over the decades of life. Your poem reaches to the inner self of the reader. Thoroughly enjoyed by me. - Phil A.
August 10th, 2024 10:41
MendedFences27 said:
Somebody mentioned \"a full English\" and I got hungry and started thinking of food, which brought me to this irrelevant question, \"If you are blindfolded and do not know what country you are in but are told you are in a restaurant, would you order Bread. Sausages, Bacon, or Chocolate?
I think we all have such \"Rituals.\" They are all very personal habits built over the decades of life. Your poem reaches to the inner self of the reader. Thoroughly enjoyed by me. - Phil A.
August 10th, 2024 10:41
Rituals
Bella Shepard said:
Rituals are very powerful things, just try to change one and perhaps your whole day is off kilter. Love the poem, and I can thoroughly relate to rituals.
August 10th, 2024 10:23
Bella Shepard said:
Rituals are very powerful things, just try to change one and perhaps your whole day is off kilter. Love the poem, and I can thoroughly relate to rituals.
August 10th, 2024 10:23
Rituals
Accidental Poet said:
I\'ll try that full English breakfast with eggs, bacon and home fries, smells so good. 😊
August 10th, 2024 08:38
Accidental Poet said:
I\'ll try that full English breakfast with eggs, bacon and home fries, smells so good. 😊
August 10th, 2024 08:38
Rituals
sorenbarrett said:
Some rituals are enjoyable such as that breakfast that you have made me hungry for. Nevill the poem itself reads in a hypnotic manner as if a mantra or ritual very nice.
August 10th, 2024 06:48
sorenbarrett said:
Some rituals are enjoyable such as that breakfast that you have made me hungry for. Nevill the poem itself reads in a hypnotic manner as if a mantra or ritual very nice.
August 10th, 2024 06:48
Maybe To Be Continued
Dan Williams said:
Amen. There are a few people I can send this to. Nice.
August 9th, 2024 23:48
Dan Williams said:
Amen. There are a few people I can send this to. Nice.
August 9th, 2024 23:48
Maybe To Be Continued
MendedFences27 said:
Death is its own gate-keeper. I\'ve seen healthy people leave at 37 and 47, and also the very sick cling to life until they were 98. Every day is one more experience. To be enjoyed to the fullest.
Live long and prosper.
Enjoyed your poem. - Phil A
August 9th, 2024 10:39
MendedFences27 said:
Death is its own gate-keeper. I\'ve seen healthy people leave at 37 and 47, and also the very sick cling to life until they were 98. Every day is one more experience. To be enjoyed to the fullest.
Live long and prosper.
Enjoyed your poem. - Phil A
August 9th, 2024 10:39
Maybe To Be Continued
sorenbarrett said:
Hope this is not a personal message. It carries with it a sense of tense anticipation of loss. Nicely worded though. Hope there are many more days ahead.
August 9th, 2024 05:27
sorenbarrett said:
Hope this is not a personal message. It carries with it a sense of tense anticipation of loss. Nicely worded though. Hope there are many more days ahead.
August 9th, 2024 05:27
As Sure As God Made Little Green Apples
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, Neville. A real thouht-provoking piece.
August 9th, 2024 03:35
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, Neville. A real thouht-provoking piece.
August 9th, 2024 03:35
Maybe To Be Continued
Accidental Poet said:
Your welcome is never-ending Sir N Long may your quill be wet from inkwell depth. 🖋️👍
August 9th, 2024 02:38
Accidental Poet said:
Your welcome is never-ending Sir N Long may your quill be wet from inkwell depth. 🖋️👍
August 9th, 2024 02:38
Maybe To Be Continued
orchidee said:
I thought you was gonna write half a poem, and continue it sometime! heehee,
August 9th, 2024 02:18
orchidee said:
I thought you was gonna write half a poem, and continue it sometime! heehee,
August 9th, 2024 02:18
As Sure As God Made Little Green Apples
Accidental Poet said:
I\'m reminded of the last few years of my dad\'s life, where he knew he didn\'t have long to live. My mother had gone in 2008, all his friends were gone, and there he is knowing his time is coming. He was ready to go, but still God would not take him yet. I didn\'t want to lose him, but at the same time I had wished that I could grant him that one wish. Well penned N. 🌹
August 9th, 2024 01:59
Accidental Poet said:
I\'m reminded of the last few years of my dad\'s life, where he knew he didn\'t have long to live. My mother had gone in 2008, all his friends were gone, and there he is knowing his time is coming. He was ready to go, but still God would not take him yet. I didn\'t want to lose him, but at the same time I had wished that I could grant him that one wish. Well penned N. 🌹
August 9th, 2024 01:59
Maybe To Be Continued
Cassie58 said:
Another poem from The Making of a Broken Man which is still my current reading. An intriguing little write. How do you cure yourself of someone I ask? Maybe like a light switch, turning them off, obliterating all memory. Why would you do that unless there is a great deal of pain. Happy Friday dear Neville. Weekend’s nearly arrived.
August 9th, 2024 01:53
Cassie58 said:
Another poem from The Making of a Broken Man which is still my current reading. An intriguing little write. How do you cure yourself of someone I ask? Maybe like a light switch, turning them off, obliterating all memory. Why would you do that unless there is a great deal of pain. Happy Friday dear Neville. Weekend’s nearly arrived.
August 9th, 2024 01:53
Maybe To Be Continued
Doggerel Dave said:
This is becoming a habit, Neville.
This is me showing concern:
Are you on a \'Six months left\' schedule?
If not, then carry on remorseless.
August 9th, 2024 01:26
Doggerel Dave said:
This is becoming a habit, Neville.
This is me showing concern:
Are you on a \'Six months left\' schedule?
If not, then carry on remorseless.
August 9th, 2024 01:26
As Sure As God Made Little Green Apples
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work. Powerful.
August 8th, 2024 19:35
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work. Powerful.
August 8th, 2024 19:35
As Sure As God Made Little Green Apples
MendedFences27 said:
At 80 I look forward to an unlimited number of years ahead, and why not,
I don\'t get to choose when, so why not look forward to forever.
Your poem highlights the different perspectives of the aged. It\'s purely a numbers game. You will live until you die. Make the most of it. - Phil A
August 8th, 2024 12:51
MendedFences27 said:
At 80 I look forward to an unlimited number of years ahead, and why not,
I don\'t get to choose when, so why not look forward to forever.
Your poem highlights the different perspectives of the aged. It\'s purely a numbers game. You will live until you die. Make the most of it. - Phil A
August 8th, 2024 12:51
As Sure As God Made Little Green Apples
orchidee said:
I ate a green cooking apple - urrghh - sour! Why did you not COOK it first, asks Fido? lol.
August 8th, 2024 12:03
orchidee said:
I ate a green cooking apple - urrghh - sour! Why did you not COOK it first, asks Fido? lol.
August 8th, 2024 12:03
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