Comments received on poems by Neville
Forsaken
Bella Shepard said:
The one that got away, forever regreted, but ever present, bruised heart that aches with remembrance. This hauntingly beautiful poem is exquisite.
April 30th, 2024 13:26
Bella Shepard said:
The one that got away, forever regreted, but ever present, bruised heart that aches with remembrance. This hauntingly beautiful poem is exquisite.
April 30th, 2024 13:26
Thirteen Times the Cuckoo Called
Teddy.15 said:
enjoying your free time a new job just being free perhaps! Cuckoo is one of my favourite birds hard to see but very easy on the ear. Enjoy it all my dear Nev. 🌹
April 30th, 2024 11:13
Teddy.15 said:
enjoying your free time a new job just being free perhaps! Cuckoo is one of my favourite birds hard to see but very easy on the ear. Enjoy it all my dear Nev. 🌹
April 30th, 2024 11:13
Thirteen Times the Cuckoo Called
Tom Dylan said:
Love this, Neville. It feels ancient yet really modern all at the same time. A cracking poem.
April 30th, 2024 02:22
Tom Dylan said:
Love this, Neville. It feels ancient yet really modern all at the same time. A cracking poem.
April 30th, 2024 02:22
Thirteen Times the Cuckoo Called
orchidee said:
Ahh, must be Cuckoo Land! lol.
April 30th, 2024 02:15
orchidee said:
Ahh, must be Cuckoo Land! lol.
April 30th, 2024 02:15
Thirteen Times the Cuckoo Called
2781 said:
We run to a different calendar.
He\'s probably correct.
April 30th, 2024 01:41
2781 said:
We run to a different calendar.
He\'s probably correct.
April 30th, 2024 01:41
Thirteen Times the Cuckoo Called
Goldfinch60 said:
That cuckoo is heralding the start of spring Neville with a baker\'s dozen of calls .
Andy
April 30th, 2024 01:19
Goldfinch60 said:
That cuckoo is heralding the start of spring Neville with a baker\'s dozen of calls .
Andy
April 30th, 2024 01:19
Forsaken
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Neville, keep breathing and all will be well.
Andy
April 30th, 2024 01:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Neville, keep breathing and all will be well.
Andy
April 30th, 2024 01:09
Thirteen Times the Cuckoo Called
Cassie58 said:
You are still here. Let that be a lesson to ya. Superstition can plague a person to death. A most elusive bird. I’ve never seen one, only heard its call. I’m still here too., I think!
April 30th, 2024 00:55
Cassie58 said:
You are still here. Let that be a lesson to ya. Superstition can plague a person to death. A most elusive bird. I’ve never seen one, only heard its call. I’m still here too., I think!
April 30th, 2024 00:55
Forsaken
orchidee said:
But I am half human, half guinea pig. Thats\'s them in my pic. They\'re not giant hamsters or rats, as some say, or else we need to be afraid, be very afraid, of the mutations. lol.
April 29th, 2024 07:53
orchidee said:
But I am half human, half guinea pig. Thats\'s them in my pic. They\'re not giant hamsters or rats, as some say, or else we need to be afraid, be very afraid, of the mutations. lol.
April 29th, 2024 07:53
Forsaken
Doggerel Dave said:
The other pussy is a little mysterious, is she not?
April 29th, 2024 07:42
Doggerel Dave said:
The other pussy is a little mysterious, is she not?
April 29th, 2024 07:42
Forsaken
Teddy.15 said:
Ah stunning and so relatable today dear Nev. Beautiful. 🌹
April 29th, 2024 04:59
Teddy.15 said:
Ah stunning and so relatable today dear Nev. Beautiful. 🌹
April 29th, 2024 04:59
Forsaken
Cassie58 said:
This poem truly does draw breath from this reader. So intense is the feeling of need and longing. Both memorable and remarkable poetry Neville. It’s a peach. Have a lovely day .
April 29th, 2024 04:05
Cassie58 said:
This poem truly does draw breath from this reader. So intense is the feeling of need and longing. Both memorable and remarkable poetry Neville. It’s a peach. Have a lovely day .
April 29th, 2024 04:05
The Cruelest of All Bed Partners
mirrorball said:
truth and time stole the beliefs....woah. i love how you\'ve put this
April 29th, 2024 04:03
mirrorball said:
truth and time stole the beliefs....woah. i love how you\'ve put this
April 29th, 2024 04:03
Forsaken
orchidee said:
I moved like a guinea pig. Is that the same?! (first line of your poem). lol.
April 29th, 2024 02:58
orchidee said:
I moved like a guinea pig. Is that the same?! (first line of your poem). lol.
April 29th, 2024 02:58
The Cruelest of All Bed Partners
Goldfinch60 said:
Time does change many things in our life Neville but if we are strong enough the best things in our lives can be kept in it.
Andy
April 29th, 2024 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Time does change many things in our life Neville but if we are strong enough the best things in our lives can be kept in it.
Andy
April 29th, 2024 01:24
The Cruelest of All Bed Partners
Bella Shepard said:
To be clear eyed in love seems an oxymoron, when the headiness of romance clouds ones vision. And when the cracks begin to appear there comes the hurt of disillutionment. You wrap it all beautifully in this poem my friend. The last line perfect!
April 28th, 2024 12:07
Bella Shepard said:
To be clear eyed in love seems an oxymoron, when the headiness of romance clouds ones vision. And when the cracks begin to appear there comes the hurt of disillutionment. You wrap it all beautifully in this poem my friend. The last line perfect!
April 28th, 2024 12:07
The Cruelest of All Bed Partners
Cassie58 said:
Time certainly is a thief, but age can have its blessings too. So maybe your title is painting it black. I like what one of your other callers said. Fine wine ages well.
April 28th, 2024 11:49
Cassie58 said:
Time certainly is a thief, but age can have its blessings too. So maybe your title is painting it black. I like what one of your other callers said. Fine wine ages well.
April 28th, 2024 11:49
The Cruelest of All Bed Partners
Accidental Poet said:
Well N, age, depending on how you look at it can either be your friend or your enemy. But it\'s always at your side. 🙄
April 28th, 2024 09:26
Accidental Poet said:
Well N, age, depending on how you look at it can either be your friend or your enemy. But it\'s always at your side. 🙄
April 28th, 2024 09:26
The Cruelest of All Bed Partners
Doggerel Dave said:
Rich and complex with progress and change conveyed by strong structure...Yes - got this one Neville.
April 28th, 2024 06:52
Doggerel Dave said:
Rich and complex with progress and change conveyed by strong structure...Yes - got this one Neville.
April 28th, 2024 06:52
The Cruelest of All Bed Partners
Teddy.15 said:
Truth and time oh so very beautiful dear Nev, we certainly cannot hide from that. 🌹
April 28th, 2024 03:38
Teddy.15 said:
Truth and time oh so very beautiful dear Nev, we certainly cannot hide from that. 🌹
April 28th, 2024 03:38
The Cruelest of All Bed Partners
orchidee said:
Good write N.
It\'s surprising what some poets on here know about KP.
Ahh, so you know that her botox cracks?! lol. Last line of verse 2.
April 28th, 2024 02:47
orchidee said:
Good write N.
It\'s surprising what some poets on here know about KP.
Ahh, so you know that her botox cracks?! lol. Last line of verse 2.
April 28th, 2024 02:47
Time to Call Time
Goldfinch60 said:
Waking up from dreams can leave you in a wonderful place Neville.
Andy
April 28th, 2024 02:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Waking up from dreams can leave you in a wonderful place Neville.
Andy
April 28th, 2024 02:21
Time to Call Time
Doggerel Dave said:
Patchouli over there is, given the distances involved, no substitute for a poem lost, which could have, perhaps, transcended time and space, thus reaching here in all its innate perfection...and so on.... got any spare commas anyone? 😊
April 27th, 2024 19:10
Doggerel Dave said:
Patchouli over there is, given the distances involved, no substitute for a poem lost, which could have, perhaps, transcended time and space, thus reaching here in all its innate perfection...and so on.... got any spare commas anyone? 😊
April 27th, 2024 19:10
Time to Call Time
Teddy.15 said:
That certainly happened to me, but sometimes we have to let them go, most annoying but just a fact of musing with the tired mind. Wonderful 🌹
April 27th, 2024 15:03
Teddy.15 said:
That certainly happened to me, but sometimes we have to let them go, most annoying but just a fact of musing with the tired mind. Wonderful 🌹
April 27th, 2024 15:03
Time to Call Time
Bella Shepard said:
As they say \"Dreams are the windows of our souls\", and they can be can be very powerful. Sometimes it seems we don\'t write the poems at all, we simply take dictation. Sleep well my friend and cherish that wonderful stage of sleep, for it leads to your wonderful words.
April 27th, 2024 13:37
Bella Shepard said:
As they say \"Dreams are the windows of our souls\", and they can be can be very powerful. Sometimes it seems we don\'t write the poems at all, we simply take dictation. Sleep well my friend and cherish that wonderful stage of sleep, for it leads to your wonderful words.
April 27th, 2024 13:37
Time to Call Time
orchidee said:
How was it when ya felt a piggy paw of mine across your tightly closed eyes?! lol.
April 27th, 2024 09:45
orchidee said:
How was it when ya felt a piggy paw of mine across your tightly closed eyes?! lol.
April 27th, 2024 09:45
Time to Call Time
Accidental Poet said:
Time in or time out, Its well penned N. 👍
April 27th, 2024 07:18
Accidental Poet said:
Time in or time out, Its well penned N. 👍
April 27th, 2024 07:18
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