Comments received on poems by Neville
Outsiders
MendedFences27 said:
Eastern promises are mostly hot air, but (I believe the number is 15) blasts worldwide and we no longer have a planet that can sustain life. So, whoever is guarding the big red button should shoot anyone who tries to push it. - Phil A.
July 27th, 2024 10:48
MendedFences27 said:
Eastern promises are mostly hot air, but (I believe the number is 15) blasts worldwide and we no longer have a planet that can sustain life. So, whoever is guarding the big red button should shoot anyone who tries to push it. - Phil A.
July 27th, 2024 10:48
Outsiders
Bobby O said:
When I read it a second time , I imagined that NOWHERE was a place close enough to travel to but was too far to travel back
July 27th, 2024 10:32
Bobby O said:
When I read it a second time , I imagined that NOWHERE was a place close enough to travel to but was too far to travel back
July 27th, 2024 10:32
Outsiders
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes - both metaphor and reality inextricably locked together Neville.
To call it chilling is almost too corny and obvious... but it is.
Short, I like here, Cold and hard.
July 27th, 2024 08:06
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes - both metaphor and reality inextricably locked together Neville.
To call it chilling is almost too corny and obvious... but it is.
Short, I like here, Cold and hard.
July 27th, 2024 08:06
Outsiders
sorenbarrett said:
Neville this metaphoric poem resonates out of my past into my present. Remembering walking the vast open expanses at times lost and now with age those expanse become something else but the same. Great write
July 27th, 2024 06:17
sorenbarrett said:
Neville this metaphoric poem resonates out of my past into my present. Remembering walking the vast open expanses at times lost and now with age those expanse become something else but the same. Great write
July 27th, 2024 06:17
By Invitation Only
Goldfinch60 said:
The scenic route will show you even more delight Neville, as I am sure that you now know.
Andy
July 27th, 2024 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
The scenic route will show you even more delight Neville, as I am sure that you now know.
Andy
July 27th, 2024 01:23
By Invitation Only
MendedFences27 said:
Ah, the hills and valleys of exploring unmapped frontiers. I think I\'ll get my coonskin cap and search for a gap among the Cumberlands.
A great use of metaphor. Saying one thing and meaning another, or was this just a road trip through paradise? Loved this one. - Phil A.
July 26th, 2024 19:14
MendedFences27 said:
Ah, the hills and valleys of exploring unmapped frontiers. I think I\'ll get my coonskin cap and search for a gap among the Cumberlands.
A great use of metaphor. Saying one thing and meaning another, or was this just a road trip through paradise? Loved this one. - Phil A.
July 26th, 2024 19:14
By Invitation Only
sorenbarrett said:
Anthropomorphism at its best. A most picturesque ride through a scenic landscape. Sign me up for the next tour.
July 26th, 2024 05:08
sorenbarrett said:
Anthropomorphism at its best. A most picturesque ride through a scenic landscape. Sign me up for the next tour.
July 26th, 2024 05:08
Thanks for Coming But ..
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotive words Neville.
Andy
July 26th, 2024 01:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotive words Neville.
Andy
July 26th, 2024 01:11
Thanks for Coming But ..
MendedFences27 said:
Friend or lover, it matters naught. A relationship falls apart and the leaving or going begins. Sometimes the love has turned to hatred, and you can\'t wait to be rid of them, and sometimes it remains, which makes the parting more painful. Once in a while, it\'s a bit of both. Then, the emotions become tangled. One way or the other, it is probably best to have parted. It certainly makes for better poetry. - Phil A,
July 25th, 2024 15:12
MendedFences27 said:
Friend or lover, it matters naught. A relationship falls apart and the leaving or going begins. Sometimes the love has turned to hatred, and you can\'t wait to be rid of them, and sometimes it remains, which makes the parting more painful. Once in a while, it\'s a bit of both. Then, the emotions become tangled. One way or the other, it is probably best to have parted. It certainly makes for better poetry. - Phil A,
July 25th, 2024 15:12
Thanks for Coming But ..
Tom Dylan said:
That one packed a punch, mate. A fine write.
July 25th, 2024 09:15
Tom Dylan said:
That one packed a punch, mate. A fine write.
July 25th, 2024 09:15
Thanks for Coming But ..
sorenbarrett said:
Well written and it pretty much says it all. \"Parting is such sweet sorrow.\" Here I hear irritation covered with a thin blanket of civility. Lovely
July 25th, 2024 05:44
sorenbarrett said:
Well written and it pretty much says it all. \"Parting is such sweet sorrow.\" Here I hear irritation covered with a thin blanket of civility. Lovely
July 25th, 2024 05:44
Thanks for Coming But ..
orchidee said:
They say this to be then add..... \'but you\'ve overstayed your welcome\'. The intention is for me to \'get my coat\' but I don\'t get the hint, and I stay around like a bad smell/apple/penny/ bad whatever! lol.
July 25th, 2024 05:23
orchidee said:
They say this to be then add..... \'but you\'ve overstayed your welcome\'. The intention is for me to \'get my coat\' but I don\'t get the hint, and I stay around like a bad smell/apple/penny/ bad whatever! lol.
July 25th, 2024 05:23
Light Bites
Accidental Poet said:
And so ends the fly\'s day. But good for the spider. 🪰🕷️
July 24th, 2024 23:06
Accidental Poet said:
And so ends the fly\'s day. But good for the spider. 🪰🕷️
July 24th, 2024 23:06
Light Bites
MendedFences27 said:
Spiders win in my book. Flies are a nuisance. Clever that you gave them the power of speech (and drooling?).
- Phil A.
July 24th, 2024 15:14
MendedFences27 said:
Spiders win in my book. Flies are a nuisance. Clever that you gave them the power of speech (and drooling?).
- Phil A.
July 24th, 2024 15:14
Light Bites
Bella Shepard said:
Quite a write, I shall never look at a spider web in the same way again. Poor fly!
July 24th, 2024 13:35
Bella Shepard said:
Quite a write, I shall never look at a spider web in the same way again. Poor fly!
July 24th, 2024 13:35
False Promises and Little White Lies
Bobby O said:
Let’s talk about it. I felt chagrin in your pen as you offered your view on the current
View. I want to jump in and carry w you an unspoken regret. No time frame or words directly aimed , just a melancholy him that surely says and do wants to gather that other Also ? With you? All we nodding together that the way was better and sometimes even tickled honor.
July 24th, 2024 08:50
Bobby O said:
Let’s talk about it. I felt chagrin in your pen as you offered your view on the current
View. I want to jump in and carry w you an unspoken regret. No time frame or words directly aimed , just a melancholy him that surely says and do wants to gather that other Also ? With you? All we nodding together that the way was better and sometimes even tickled honor.
July 24th, 2024 08:50
Light Bites
Doggerel Dave said:
So this spider, in conformity with modern taste, has dispensed with the parlour and all that palaver and went straight.....even avoided the chase...?
July 24th, 2024 08:49
Doggerel Dave said:
So this spider, in conformity with modern taste, has dispensed with the parlour and all that palaver and went straight.....even avoided the chase...?
July 24th, 2024 08:49
Light Bites
sorenbarrett said:
Oh what a tangled web we weave....
Reminded me of my grandfather that used to sing to the kids \"Baby bye there\'s a fly let us watch him you and I.....\" Oh yes I know it has much deeper meaning as well.
July 24th, 2024 06:30
sorenbarrett said:
Oh what a tangled web we weave....
Reminded me of my grandfather that used to sing to the kids \"Baby bye there\'s a fly let us watch him you and I.....\" Oh yes I know it has much deeper meaning as well.
July 24th, 2024 06:30
False Promises and Little White Lies
Goldfinch60 said:
So true in many ways Neville.
Andy
July 24th, 2024 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
So true in many ways Neville.
Andy
July 24th, 2024 01:49
False Promises and Little White Lies
Dan Williams said:
People all too often make promises they are unable to keep, unrealistic or just insincere. All to casually used. Good work.
July 24th, 2024 00:41
Dan Williams said:
People all too often make promises they are unable to keep, unrealistic or just insincere. All to casually used. Good work.
July 24th, 2024 00:41
False Promises and Little White Lies
Bella Shepard said:
Promises are made these days to achieve a desired end. And when that end is attained, somehow the promise never existed, it is an alternate reality we live in. Will we ever be able to trust the word of another again? Quite a chilling write my friend, but a much needed one.
July 23rd, 2024 13:36
Bella Shepard said:
Promises are made these days to achieve a desired end. And when that end is attained, somehow the promise never existed, it is an alternate reality we live in. Will we ever be able to trust the word of another again? Quite a chilling write my friend, but a much needed one.
July 23rd, 2024 13:36
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