Comments received on poems by Neville
Just Another Take On Life
Cassie58 said:
A poem which is open to much thought. Life and death. It doesn’t matter where we come from or what our journey is like, or whether we are rich or poor, we are all going to die. And as we age, inevitable thoughts of death, become more indelible. No escape for any of us. While I read these lines, my mind also travelled to your recent Crumbs poem. You always create much thought with your writing Neville. You stimulate the mind.
September 16th, 2024 06:43
Cassie58 said:
A poem which is open to much thought. Life and death. It doesn’t matter where we come from or what our journey is like, or whether we are rich or poor, we are all going to die. And as we age, inevitable thoughts of death, become more indelible. No escape for any of us. While I read these lines, my mind also travelled to your recent Crumbs poem. You always create much thought with your writing Neville. You stimulate the mind.
September 16th, 2024 06:43
They Lied About the Five Minute Warning
Tom Dylan said:
This really gave me chills, Neville.
September 16th, 2024 05:24
Tom Dylan said:
This really gave me chills, Neville.
September 16th, 2024 05:24
They Lied About the Five Minute Warning
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Neville, we may never know until it happens.
Andy
September 16th, 2024 01:12
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Neville, we may never know until it happens.
Andy
September 16th, 2024 01:12
They Lied About the Five Minute Warning
Dan Williams said:
One thing is very sure; there will never be two more world wars.
September 16th, 2024 00:51
Dan Williams said:
One thing is very sure; there will never be two more world wars.
September 16th, 2024 00:51
They Lied About the Five Minute Warning
Cassie58 said:
Now there!s cheerful for ya, but yes it plays on the mind. I think the five minute warning would be horrifying. Best not know. I just hope I’m not left behind. The sun is still shining here Neville, making the most of it.
September 15th, 2024 10:23
Cassie58 said:
Now there!s cheerful for ya, but yes it plays on the mind. I think the five minute warning would be horrifying. Best not know. I just hope I’m not left behind. The sun is still shining here Neville, making the most of it.
September 15th, 2024 10:23
They Lied About the Five Minute Warning
Doggerel Dave said:
... And never will be, plus even if there were, where to go, what difference would it make?
Precisely, Neville.
September 15th, 2024 05:57
Doggerel Dave said:
... And never will be, plus even if there were, where to go, what difference would it make?
Precisely, Neville.
September 15th, 2024 05:57
They Lied About the Five Minute Warning
orchidee said:
In dafter personal times I would say - nor was there any 5 year warning before I married KP! lol.
September 15th, 2024 05:50
orchidee said:
In dafter personal times I would say - nor was there any 5 year warning before I married KP! lol.
September 15th, 2024 05:50
Pretty in Purple and Pink
Goldfinch60 said:
Some people just do not realise how much joy they can give to others Neville.
Andy
September 15th, 2024 01:39
Goldfinch60 said:
Some people just do not realise how much joy they can give to others Neville.
Andy
September 15th, 2024 01:39
For All Those Occasions When Sometimes is More Than Enough
Cassie58 said:
A very meaningful piece of brevity. It doesn’t happen often, but when it does, it makes up for the rest. Nice.
September 14th, 2024 13:06
Cassie58 said:
A very meaningful piece of brevity. It doesn’t happen often, but when it does, it makes up for the rest. Nice.
September 14th, 2024 13:06
Pretty in Purple and Pink
Cassie58 said:
This isn’t about sea food at all is it? Even though I know you like sea food. This is something else entirely. Well that’s my take this Saturday early evening. Very sensual writing Neville.
September 14th, 2024 12:12
Cassie58 said:
This isn’t about sea food at all is it? Even though I know you like sea food. This is something else entirely. Well that’s my take this Saturday early evening. Very sensual writing Neville.
September 14th, 2024 12:12
Pretty in Purple and Pink
orchidee said:
Good write N. How you get back in?
My humour is suspended a bit - see my poem for today.
September 14th, 2024 09:28
orchidee said:
Good write N. How you get back in?
My humour is suspended a bit - see my poem for today.
September 14th, 2024 09:28
Pretty in Purple and Pink
MendedFences27 said:
The release of inhibitions can be hard to overcome. She seemed extreme in a lot of her ways. Her beauty and charms were worth the challenge though.
A sensual poem that builds to a release of its own, (your last line). It speaks well of her. and let\'s hope she finally did \"let go.\" - Phil A.
September 14th, 2024 09:12
MendedFences27 said:
The release of inhibitions can be hard to overcome. She seemed extreme in a lot of her ways. Her beauty and charms were worth the challenge though.
A sensual poem that builds to a release of its own, (your last line). It speaks well of her. and let\'s hope she finally did \"let go.\" - Phil A.
September 14th, 2024 09:12
Pretty in Purple and Pink
Doggerel Dave said:
Answers on a postcard?
A species of hermit crab?
September 14th, 2024 08:34
Doggerel Dave said:
Answers on a postcard?
A species of hermit crab?
September 14th, 2024 08:34
Crumbs
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, Neville. Emotion, sentiment, all just perfectly captured. Cheers, Tom
September 13th, 2024 05:32
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, Neville. Emotion, sentiment, all just perfectly captured. Cheers, Tom
September 13th, 2024 05:32
Crumbs
sorenbarrett said:
A master class on how the mundane can be made seductive and sensual, Not just sexual but to the mind pulling it in closer and arrousing interest and a desire for closure. Lovely Neville
September 12th, 2024 05:21
sorenbarrett said:
A master class on how the mundane can be made seductive and sensual, Not just sexual but to the mind pulling it in closer and arrousing interest and a desire for closure. Lovely Neville
September 12th, 2024 05:21
Crumbs
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotive words Neville, it reminded me of the times after my wife died when I was sitting at the dining table eating alone.
Andy
September 12th, 2024 01:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotive words Neville, it reminded me of the times after my wife died when I was sitting at the dining table eating alone.
Andy
September 12th, 2024 01:41
Crumbs
MendedFences27 said:
Wow! This profoundly sad scene was filled with longing. Trying to remember someone, but not able to reconstruct the entire image, but recalling only a small fragment, enough to bring back the sense of her \"vulnerability.\" Even the \"crumbs of \" your \"croissant\" would not cooperate. A tender and poignant moment laid out in free verse and capturing the poetic moment. - Phil A.
September 11th, 2024 21:14
MendedFences27 said:
Wow! This profoundly sad scene was filled with longing. Trying to remember someone, but not able to reconstruct the entire image, but recalling only a small fragment, enough to bring back the sense of her \"vulnerability.\" Even the \"crumbs of \" your \"croissant\" would not cooperate. A tender and poignant moment laid out in free verse and capturing the poetic moment. - Phil A.
September 11th, 2024 21:14
Crumbs
Cassie58 said:
Moments when the heart and mind are drifting in a sea of what has gone before. Someone is painfully missed. Only the crumbs remain. Beautifully penned Neville. Hope you had a fantastic holiday. Good to find you back.
September 11th, 2024 14:44
Cassie58 said:
Moments when the heart and mind are drifting in a sea of what has gone before. Someone is painfully missed. Only the crumbs remain. Beautifully penned Neville. Hope you had a fantastic holiday. Good to find you back.
September 11th, 2024 14:44
Crumbs
Cheeky Missy said:
Poetry gathers up the crumbs and tenders the same as the delicacy they truly are on the silver platter. The heartbreaking poignancy of this piece resonates and is rather exquisite. Excellently detailed and beautifully rendered. Thank you for sharing.
September 11th, 2024 14:23
Cheeky Missy said:
Poetry gathers up the crumbs and tenders the same as the delicacy they truly are on the silver platter. The heartbreaking poignancy of this piece resonates and is rather exquisite. Excellently detailed and beautifully rendered. Thank you for sharing.
September 11th, 2024 14:23
For All Those Occasions When Sometimes is More Than Enough
Cheeky Missy said:
Precisely. Thus is too true and excellently rendered in sweet brevity. Thank you.
September 11th, 2024 13:22
Cheeky Missy said:
Precisely. Thus is too true and excellently rendered in sweet brevity. Thank you.
September 11th, 2024 13:22
For All Those Occasions When Sometimes is More Than Enough
sorenbarrett said:
Neville I had to think about this one for a while and couldn\'t quite decide where it was because of the depth of your write or if my mind was out of alignment. Have missed your writtings
September 11th, 2024 06:09
sorenbarrett said:
Neville I had to think about this one for a while and couldn\'t quite decide where it was because of the depth of your write or if my mind was out of alignment. Have missed your writtings
September 11th, 2024 06:09
For All Those Occasions When Sometimes is More Than Enough
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Neville, everything must be in line for perfection.
Andy
September 11th, 2024 01:54
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Neville, everything must be in line for perfection.
Andy
September 11th, 2024 01:54
For All Those Occasions When Sometimes is More Than Enough
Doggerel Dave said:
Feels sometimes that it\'s Zen......Neville.... I\'m feeling displaced and disoriented.....
September 10th, 2024 18:45
Doggerel Dave said:
Feels sometimes that it\'s Zen......Neville.... I\'m feeling displaced and disoriented.....
September 10th, 2024 18:45
For All Those Occasions When Sometimes is More Than Enough
Tony36 said:
Great write
September 10th, 2024 14:37
Tony36 said:
Great write
September 10th, 2024 14:37
For My Granddaughter on Her First Birthday & Before He Got Broken
Neilton said:
Two poems!! I\'m impressed! Amazing work here Neville!
August 30th, 2024 16:16
Neilton said:
Two poems!! I\'m impressed! Amazing work here Neville!
August 30th, 2024 16:16
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