Comments received on poems by Neville
What Makes Us Broken
Doggerel Dave said:
Feels like a spectator sport to me.... are you diversifying just a teensy bit, Neville? 😉
May 4th, 2024 19:58
Doggerel Dave said:
Feels like a spectator sport to me.... are you diversifying just a teensy bit, Neville? 😉
May 4th, 2024 19:58
What Makes Us Broken
Cassie58 said:
A poem here to not allow others to interfere in relationships. Some people just like to pick holes and spread negativity. This is a reminder to stay strong and positive and to concentrate on self. What is whole should stay whole regardless. The cracks come and the breaks only if you take notice of others and allow their negativity to wear you down. Seems like sage advice to me and is written tenderly. A lovely poem. There are other ways of looking at this poem too. Happy Saturday Neville.
May 4th, 2024 09:55
Cassie58 said:
A poem here to not allow others to interfere in relationships. Some people just like to pick holes and spread negativity. This is a reminder to stay strong and positive and to concentrate on self. What is whole should stay whole regardless. The cracks come and the breaks only if you take notice of others and allow their negativity to wear you down. Seems like sage advice to me and is written tenderly. A lovely poem. There are other ways of looking at this poem too. Happy Saturday Neville.
May 4th, 2024 09:55
Hush Now Little Wren
Teddy.15 said:
Awe, resident children\'s poet? Sounds like, the creators of Winnie the pooh have come to visit, such calming imagery, reminds me of home. 🌹 ❤️
May 4th, 2024 02:30
Teddy.15 said:
Awe, resident children\'s poet? Sounds like, the creators of Winnie the pooh have come to visit, such calming imagery, reminds me of home. 🌹 ❤️
May 4th, 2024 02:30
What Makes Us Broken
orchidee said:
If I admit to KP that I\'m broken, she will only say \'Well, patch it up with botox, dear!\' lol.
May 4th, 2024 01:58
orchidee said:
If I admit to KP that I\'m broken, she will only say \'Well, patch it up with botox, dear!\' lol.
May 4th, 2024 01:58
Hush Now Little Wren
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Neville for a special little girl.
Andy
May 4th, 2024 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Neville for a special little girl.
Andy
May 4th, 2024 01:13
Hush Now Little Wren
Cassie58 said:
Beautiful poem for a little girl who sounds like she needs more sleep. Visual and cute, it is Neville.
May 3rd, 2024 12:33
Cassie58 said:
Beautiful poem for a little girl who sounds like she needs more sleep. Visual and cute, it is Neville.
May 3rd, 2024 12:33
Hush Now Little Wren
Doggerel Dave said:
So gentle, so kind - such an excellent way to hint that it is time to depart (we\'ve had our fun now bugger off until tomorrow.....)🤣
May 3rd, 2024 06:14
Doggerel Dave said:
So gentle, so kind - such an excellent way to hint that it is time to depart (we\'ve had our fun now bugger off until tomorrow.....)🤣
May 3rd, 2024 06:14
Hush Now Little Wren
orchidee said:
But - great write N.
I was distracted by that comment of the day being short!
May 3rd, 2024 04:48
orchidee said:
But - great write N.
I was distracted by that comment of the day being short!
May 3rd, 2024 04:48
Hush Now Little Wren
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
I thought the days were longer just now - not short? Hours of daylight anyway!
May 3rd, 2024 02:39
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
I thought the days were longer just now - not short? Hours of daylight anyway!
May 3rd, 2024 02:39
Retribution
Doggerel Dave said:
Terribly tempting, sometimes... Do I submit to temptation sometimes?.......?.......... Oh Yes!.....!
May 3rd, 2024 00:32
Doggerel Dave said:
Terribly tempting, sometimes... Do I submit to temptation sometimes?.......?.......... Oh Yes!.....!
May 3rd, 2024 00:32
Retribution
Teddy.15 said:
lol 🤣 seems to me someone will be scratching old records on an L.P player 🌹
May 3rd, 2024 00:26
Teddy.15 said:
lol 🤣 seems to me someone will be scratching old records on an L.P player 🌹
May 3rd, 2024 00:26
Retribution
Accidental Poet said:
ha-ha, you fell for it. That was the plan all along. 😁👍
May 2nd, 2024 15:45
Accidental Poet said:
ha-ha, you fell for it. That was the plan all along. 😁👍
May 2nd, 2024 15:45
Smiling Depressives
Alan R said:
Indeed something off with the like button
Such na accurate piece, such a see through!
May 1st, 2024 11:38
Alan R said:
Indeed something off with the like button
Such na accurate piece, such a see through!
May 1st, 2024 11:38
Smiling Depressives
Cassie58 said:
Good morning Neville. So much to think about with this write. The eyes are a give away. You can tell by someone’s eyes whether the smile on their face is genuine or not. You can’t hide that and they are unlikely to tell you what’s causing their blackness. The eyes are the windows of the soul. I have observed many an old man in my local drinking his pain. I have also written about it. Have a glorious sunny Wednesday. (I tried to like you, but computer says no)
May 1st, 2024 06:43
Cassie58 said:
Good morning Neville. So much to think about with this write. The eyes are a give away. You can tell by someone’s eyes whether the smile on their face is genuine or not. You can’t hide that and they are unlikely to tell you what’s causing their blackness. The eyes are the windows of the soul. I have observed many an old man in my local drinking his pain. I have also written about it. Have a glorious sunny Wednesday. (I tried to like you, but computer says no)
May 1st, 2024 06:43
Smiling Depressives
Teddy.15 said:
Reminds me of Robin Williams. Beautiful sad yet very loud because it\'s the norm now a days for so many, at least it\'s spoken about now thanks to some pretty cool people such as you dear Nev. 🌹
May 1st, 2024 05:26
Teddy.15 said:
Reminds me of Robin Williams. Beautiful sad yet very loud because it\'s the norm now a days for so many, at least it\'s spoken about now thanks to some pretty cool people such as you dear Nev. 🌹
May 1st, 2024 05:26
Smiling Depressives
orchidee said:
I \'like\' this but it won\'t let me \'like\' it. a blip on the like button?
May 1st, 2024 02:44
orchidee said:
I \'like\' this but it won\'t let me \'like\' it. a blip on the like button?
May 1st, 2024 02:44
Smiling Depressives
orchidee said:
Talking to ourselves is not really a sign of madness, as some say!
We can talk positively to ourselves.
But no use me talking to KP. it\'s like talking to a trout botox mask! lol.
May 1st, 2024 02:43
orchidee said:
Talking to ourselves is not really a sign of madness, as some say!
We can talk positively to ourselves.
But no use me talking to KP. it\'s like talking to a trout botox mask! lol.
May 1st, 2024 02:43
Smiling Depressives
Tom Dylan said:
A thought provoking piece, Neville. And when asked, they say I\'m fine.
May 1st, 2024 02:07
Tom Dylan said:
A thought provoking piece, Neville. And when asked, they say I\'m fine.
May 1st, 2024 02:07
Thirteen Times the Cuckoo Called
Doggerel Dave said:
(send him over here - I\'d settle for a cuckoo which only called thirteen or fourteen times.....)
I\'m totally insensitive to nuance sometimes...............
May 1st, 2024 01:06
Doggerel Dave said:
(send him over here - I\'d settle for a cuckoo which only called thirteen or fourteen times.....)
I\'m totally insensitive to nuance sometimes...............
May 1st, 2024 01:06
Smiling Depressives
Doggerel Dave said:
Thanks for the thought, Neville...I\'ll look out for it.
The smile that really gets to me, though is the big one from day one, coupled withe overbearing niceness. I spy a sociopath..
May 1st, 2024 00:54
Doggerel Dave said:
Thanks for the thought, Neville...I\'ll look out for it.
The smile that really gets to me, though is the big one from day one, coupled withe overbearing niceness. I spy a sociopath..
May 1st, 2024 00:54
Smiling Depressives
Bobby O said:
I hold out hope that I can keep all type of shriveling to a minimum.
I’m back on the block so we can rock with some poems, so rhythm, jazz, and hip-hop
May 1st, 2024 00:49
Bobby O said:
I hold out hope that I can keep all type of shriveling to a minimum.
I’m back on the block so we can rock with some poems, so rhythm, jazz, and hip-hop
May 1st, 2024 00:49
Smiling Depressives
2781 said:
Reminds me of that saying (not sure why?)-we are only as sick as our secrets.
May 1st, 2024 00:48
2781 said:
Reminds me of that saying (not sure why?)-we are only as sick as our secrets.
May 1st, 2024 00:48
Thirteen Times the Cuckoo Called
Bella Shepard said:
Perhaps \'twas the only time he could be heard, he got your attention and you counted. It doth mean something, to another cuckoo. Good write!
April 30th, 2024 14:18
Bella Shepard said:
Perhaps \'twas the only time he could be heard, he got your attention and you counted. It doth mean something, to another cuckoo. Good write!
April 30th, 2024 14:18
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