Comments received on poems by Neville
Three Poppies
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Well, I chose an Easter tune for this month, July! I\'m sure it\'s Easter next week, yes?
Ahh, 3 - the same figure as the number of my brain cells! lol.
July 18th, 2024 01:41
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Well, I chose an Easter tune for this month, July! I\'m sure it\'s Easter next week, yes?
Ahh, 3 - the same figure as the number of my brain cells! lol.
July 18th, 2024 01:41
Welcome to Miami
MendedFences27 said:
A subtly portrayed interlude. The scene is amplified through small and human, interactions and conversation. The small details lend an air of humanity to the affair. Much enjoyed by me. - Phil A.
July 17th, 2024 12:40
MendedFences27 said:
A subtly portrayed interlude. The scene is amplified through small and human, interactions and conversation. The small details lend an air of humanity to the affair. Much enjoyed by me. - Phil A.
July 17th, 2024 12:40
Welcome to Miami
sorenbarrett said:
Mistakes sometimes work out. A great story that leads to this ending. Nicely done Neville
July 17th, 2024 10:48
sorenbarrett said:
Mistakes sometimes work out. A great story that leads to this ending. Nicely done Neville
July 17th, 2024 10:48
Welcome to Miami
Doggerel Dave said:
A close comfortable encounter of the country kind continued with no catastrophic consequences until at least coffee……
July 17th, 2024 08:00
Doggerel Dave said:
A close comfortable encounter of the country kind continued with no catastrophic consequences until at least coffee……
July 17th, 2024 08:00
Trebrimar
Tom Dylan said:
A lovely piece, mate, and a lovely part of the world by the sounds of it. Thanks for sharing.
July 17th, 2024 07:07
Tom Dylan said:
A lovely piece, mate, and a lovely part of the world by the sounds of it. Thanks for sharing.
July 17th, 2024 07:07
Welcome to Miami
Accidental Poet said:
I trust you enjoyed your stay in Miami. 😉
July 17th, 2024 02:43
Accidental Poet said:
I trust you enjoyed your stay in Miami. 😉
July 17th, 2024 02:43
Trebrimar
Accidental Poet said:
aah yes, a bench to turn back the pages of time. May it serve you well Sir N. 😊👍
July 17th, 2024 02:34
Accidental Poet said:
aah yes, a bench to turn back the pages of time. May it serve you well Sir N. 😊👍
July 17th, 2024 02:34
Welcome to Miami
orchidee said:
That could be a swoony hummingbird. Don\'t tell me where it was placed! heehee.
July 17th, 2024 01:44
orchidee said:
That could be a swoony hummingbird. Don\'t tell me where it was placed! heehee.
July 17th, 2024 01:44
Trebrimar
orchidee said:
If ya hadn\'t have told me, I would have thought it was in Timbuktu or somewhere! lol.
July 16th, 2024 14:48
orchidee said:
If ya hadn\'t have told me, I would have thought it was in Timbuktu or somewhere! lol.
July 16th, 2024 14:48
Trebrimar
Cassie58 said:
Such a wonderful way to remember your parents in a spot which meant so much to them and to you too. To sit on that bench and look out to sea is both peaceful and calming. I have a similar place to remember my parents in Torquay. It brings them closer.
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July 16th, 2024 14:36
Cassie58 said:
Such a wonderful way to remember your parents in a spot which meant so much to them and to you too. To sit on that bench and look out to sea is both peaceful and calming. I have a similar place to remember my parents in Torquay. It brings them closer.
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July 16th, 2024 14:36
Trebrimar
Bella Shepard said:
How we do cherish the places that hold strong and wonderful memories of our loved ones This poem is such a sweet and beautiful remembrance of that bygone past, that lives on in your heart.
July 16th, 2024 13:46
Bella Shepard said:
How we do cherish the places that hold strong and wonderful memories of our loved ones This poem is such a sweet and beautiful remembrance of that bygone past, that lives on in your heart.
July 16th, 2024 13:46
Trebrimar
MendedFences27 said:
Sounds like a beautiful spot. In Cornwall overlooking the sea. Very considerate of him to install a bench. Perhaps they still visit, in an unseen way.
It\'s sweltering here, and your poem made me travel to Cornwall, and it felt cooler, Thanks for that. - Phil A.
July 16th, 2024 12:10
MendedFences27 said:
Sounds like a beautiful spot. In Cornwall overlooking the sea. Very considerate of him to install a bench. Perhaps they still visit, in an unseen way.
It\'s sweltering here, and your poem made me travel to Cornwall, and it felt cooler, Thanks for that. - Phil A.
July 16th, 2024 12:10
Trebrimar
Doggerel Dave said:
Google ducked out when it came to Trebrimar. Little matter...I\'ve encountered some interesting benches in odd places ....a bench way away in the Blue Mountains dedicated to someone I had some dealings with as an inpatient.... a long time ago...
July 16th, 2024 07:36
Doggerel Dave said:
Google ducked out when it came to Trebrimar. Little matter...I\'ve encountered some interesting benches in odd places ....a bench way away in the Blue Mountains dedicated to someone I had some dealings with as an inpatient.... a long time ago...
July 16th, 2024 07:36
What Else is A Metaphor
Doggerel Dave said:
Line one: I do, often.
Line Two: Now when I worked at Bletchley Park…. Sssh…
Line Three: Truth substitute.
Chuck a few more in and we could construct a cross(very)word, Neville.
July 15th, 2024 17:45
Doggerel Dave said:
Line one: I do, often.
Line Two: Now when I worked at Bletchley Park…. Sssh…
Line Three: Truth substitute.
Chuck a few more in and we could construct a cross(very)word, Neville.
July 15th, 2024 17:45
What Else is A Metaphor
MendedFences27 said:
It\'s for Mark Zuckerberg to get even richer. (Corny joke).
Three lines that say a lot, and one question without an answer. Good one. - Phil A.
July 15th, 2024 16:06
MendedFences27 said:
It\'s for Mark Zuckerberg to get even richer. (Corny joke).
Three lines that say a lot, and one question without an answer. Good one. - Phil A.
July 15th, 2024 16:06
What Else is A Metaphor
Tom Dylan said:
Very cryptic, mate, but has your usual style running through it. Nicely done, Neville.
July 15th, 2024 06:11
Tom Dylan said:
Very cryptic, mate, but has your usual style running through it. Nicely done, Neville.
July 15th, 2024 06:11
What Else is A Metaphor
orchidee said:
The vole is funny? Or that corny metaphor joke?!
July 15th, 2024 05:09
orchidee said:
The vole is funny? Or that corny metaphor joke?!
July 15th, 2024 05:09
What Else is A Metaphor
orchidee said:
I\'m a vole today - anagram of love. Another in those small critters category.
July 15th, 2024 03:31
orchidee said:
I\'m a vole today - anagram of love. Another in those small critters category.
July 15th, 2024 03:31
What Else is A Metaphor
orchidee said:
They ask me - Why did you meet-her- for - metaphor! (KP, that is). Not another corny joke from me. lol.
July 15th, 2024 03:30
orchidee said:
They ask me - Why did you meet-her- for - metaphor! (KP, that is). Not another corny joke from me. lol.
July 15th, 2024 03:30
Over Easy
Christina8 said:
An absolutely wonderful write, Neville.
I love that you asked the question as you were probably hungry for her either way....
July 14th, 2024 16:27
Christina8 said:
An absolutely wonderful write, Neville.
I love that you asked the question as you were probably hungry for her either way....
July 14th, 2024 16:27
Over Easy
Bella Shepard said:
Ooooo, You gave me a smile and then a chuckle. Such a witty double entendre, my complements to the chef.
July 14th, 2024 09:52
Bella Shepard said:
Ooooo, You gave me a smile and then a chuckle. Such a witty double entendre, my complements to the chef.
July 14th, 2024 09:52
The Way of Us
Cassie58 said:
In time we are a mote of dust, a pin prick in an ocean sky.
While we are here we are memory builders. If we are lucky some of those may remain after we have left this plane. A short poem which is brimful of wisdom and meaning.
July 14th, 2024 07:55
Cassie58 said:
In time we are a mote of dust, a pin prick in an ocean sky.
While we are here we are memory builders. If we are lucky some of those may remain after we have left this plane. A short poem which is brimful of wisdom and meaning.
July 14th, 2024 07:55
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